09-03-2026, 09:10 AM
The plot getting hotter.
| Poll: Q. Further buildup of Ravi and Bhola's Role in the story. You do not have permission to vote in this poll. |
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| 1. Ravi is not informed by Preeti or Simran and Bhola continues to milk Simran and thereafter proceed to tge next level. | 15 | 37.50% | |
| 2. Ravi is convinced by Preeti and thereafter Simran separately to allow Bhola to milk her and also impregnate them both at a later stage. | 10 | 25.00% | |
| 3. Ravi notices one day Simran getting milked but doesn't intervene and then makes way for Bhola to even impregnate Simran in future. | 15 | 37.50% | |
| 4. Something else entirely sent on DM. | 0 | 0% | |
| Total | 40 vote(s) | 100% | |
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09-03-2026, 02:21 PM
Guys and gurls a new poll has been put up. Please vote and let me understand what the readers want.
09-03-2026, 02:29 PM
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09-03-2026, 02:35 PM
09-03-2026, 04:27 PM
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What a long and fantastic update
09-03-2026, 05:06 PM
Reading Indian erotica for 20+ years ...some of the stories were great and I still recollect those....this would rank among the best if not the best
09-03-2026, 05:20 PM
(09-03-2026, 05:06 PM)artemis1757 Wrote: Reading Indian erotica for 20+ years ...some of the stories were great and I still recollect those....this would rank among the best if not the best You give me too much honour. Its just a story. I actually thought I wrote something opposite to what you wanted.
09-03-2026, 08:43 PM
Very crafty, not a single gorgeous word is wasted. A work that invades your body and mind. This story is so tightly written, highly entertaining, definitely immersive, and delightful.
09-03-2026, 09:31 PM
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(09-03-2026, 05:20 PM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote: You give me too much honour. Its just a story. I actually thought I wrote something opposite to what you wanted. I actually mean it...I have been a silent reader but I registered only so that I could appreciate the story....it takes a lot of effort and imagination to turn such work around.....story telling is like cooking a meal ....ingredients needs right mix or it spoils the dish...until now its been the perfect mix. I would eagerly await the eventual conclusion. Oh and on the opposite bit ..i meant to say fantastic ...was a typo :)
09-03-2026, 10:43 PM
Kya likhte ho bhai aap! This is story is rapidly approaching the GOAT status
09-03-2026, 11:53 PM
Picture bhi dalna plz,,aur next update mein kuch DHAMAKA LANA PLZ,,boring ja raha din aajkaal
10-03-2026, 02:46 AM
Just voted, but I would love you to surprise us with something of your own as you have been doing so far. You are the creative expert, don't give us an opportunity to make a mess ;) ...
10-03-2026, 05:38 AM
Next update
10-03-2026, 11:00 AM
Next update ...? When ..?
10-03-2026, 11:51 AM
(08-03-2026, 11:27 PM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote: Guys I will be traveling and cannot publish next update before 21-22 Mar.
10-03-2026, 03:57 PM
(09-03-2026, 01:21 AM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote: I purposely made it like this to let the story buildup. Else it will finish sooner. Don't worry. Next update will have good stuff. Its extremely hot story: Few suggestions: 1) simran should be made to remove all her cloths expect panty. When she orgrasm due to sucking and licking by bhola. BHOLA should see her panty getting wet and ask innocently bhabhi why are you leaking below. 2) simran should ask bhola why his snake ? is standing and when bhola tells due to sucking and licking and drinking of milk his body without his knowledge getting hot and his tool is standing. Then simran should help him by giving hand job or blow job in return for bhola help she is receiving 3) in bhola room and bed simram should be fucked hard when her husband is sleeping in home 4) simran should be totally taken by bhola and going forward every night she should spend with him in presence and knowledge of her husband. 5) bhola should take simran to their village and his father, elder brother and bhola all 3 should fuck her day and night and make her complete slut All these suggestions is provided not based on fantasy. But the true incident i have undergone and seen in my home. Between my mom and my senior and dad younger brother If you like to write my real story. Please contact me on telegram @Kingpgrt I will share all the details
10-03-2026, 06:39 PM
10-03-2026, 06:42 PM
(10-03-2026, 03:57 PM)Rocky_Gowda Wrote: Its extremely hot story: This will completely ruin the unpredictable nature of this story |
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