[Mukul@99]

If I may suggest : You should continue with the second installment to this story. You know, you can just go with the flow. Rather than writing a new one, finishing it and coming back to write & revive it.
Just an honest opinion.

[heygiwriter]

If I may suggest : You should continue with the second installment to this story. You know, you can just go with the flow. Rather than writing a new one, finishing it and coming back to write & revive it.
Just an honest opinion.

I had a plot line and i have discussed here, i still feel this story, many had not read yet. not sure many might be still interested. Unlike my previous story this one doesn't have such big audience. May be because of its nature as it take long time to come a point that xossipy readers will be interested. as a reason this had  very less audience. so really thinking off, if i should continue or start a new one. i have also had a n idea to haave short stories plans

[Mukul@99]

I think because of the sophisticated nature of the story & writing. We are not used to read stories with such refinement. Henceforth maybe the reach is not as you have expected it to be. But the story has a rare outlook with whole range of emotions. End of the day it's your call. Just wanted to put my opinion forward with all due respect. One thing is for sure that what you write, will be reading that for sure as one of your biggest admirer. Eagerly waiting for your next.

[heygiwriter]

I think because of the sophisticated nature of the story & writing. We are not used to read stories with such refinement. Henceforth maybe the reach is not as you have expected it to be. But the story has a rare outlook with whole range of emotions. End of the day it's your call. Just wanted to put my opinion forward with all due respect. One thing is for sure that what you write, will be reading that for sure as one of your biggest admirer. Eagerly waiting for your next.

Sure..and thanks

[jiivawonderland]

are you continuing this story with part 2 or writing new one

[aravindkkumar08]

As per my view better to start a new story rather than touching the old story. All the plot got ended good touching again not good idea

[Mukul@99]

Author’s on a well deserved break.
As of me is too curious, to see what's next.
Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known.

[heygiwriter]

are you continuing this story with part 2 or writing new one

Decided not to :)

Many request came in PM. and i myself felt not to after some thoughts.

So new story but i have not decided anything on it yet, though i had some ideas

[heygiwriter]

Author’s on a well deserved break.
As of me is too curious, to see what's next.
Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known.

Even im curious but nothing concrete idea formed yet, still in Vikram - Mirna's Hangover

[heygiwriter]

As per my view better to start a new story rather than touching the old story. All the plot got ended good touching again not good idea

Agreed brother. Wont be doing a second part, instead will focus on new one still working on ideas and also a bit break before commencing new

[robertnow]

Dear Author,

I have read a lot of erotic stories online and have been a regular visitor to Literotica and earlier to the Xossip website now xossipy. I was never tempted to sign up and become part of the community before. But your story made me do that. I signed up just to reach you and appreciate your work.

Previously I would read a story, jerk off, and move on. Most of them did not really have a story at all. They were usually plain, mostly without emotions and without aftermaths. It was just sex, cheap thrills, and nothing more. But what you have written has a soul in it. There is a story and a kind of pure love between the couple, their journey, and then you take them to unimaginable situations.

I will not be ashamed to admit that I liked the sexual sequences between the lead and the intruder, but you handled everything in a dignified manner and with the same emotional depth. I used to feel angry whenever the character Vikram seemed to lose. While this may look like criticism, I would actually consider it a compliment because it is your writing that made me feel so close to the character. I felt for them. I wanted him to win. I always felt Vikram should prove himself before Bharath and show that he was superior.

But toward the climax chapters you made me realize that it was not necessary at all. Sex seemed secondary for them. At the end of the day Bharath realizes that even if he might think he won her physically, he could never win against Vikram.

The moment when he said, "She is lying. This bugger loves you and misses you every second," felt like a humiliating way of him admitting he had lost. It was also beautiful when he reminded her that she needed to come back before dropping her at the hospital when Vikram was admitted, though his inner voice knew she would not come back and that smile. Vikram and his love gracefully defeated him. Sex is nothing before that.
Yes, it may look like Bharath had the best use of her body, but it was quite the opposite. Her mind and soul were always with Vikram. So what is more important, mind and soul or body? Vikram has it all while Bharath only had the body.

Mirnaa’s way of irritating Bharath, her lack of cooperation toward the end, and then cooperating only to get his permission, and Bharath responding by saying "Do you see me as inhuman?" all of these felt like emotional slaps. Even they had some sense of morality and it kept surfacing.

I really do not know where to start and where to end. I was spellbound after reading the last few chapters until the epilogue. I am just recalling the last few episodes and the way Vikram and Mirnaa’s love kept increasing day by day. The moment she risked her life to save Vikram and the moment he catches her hand felt like I was reading a full novel and the scenes were happening right before my eyes.

You will not believe it. I actually moved my chair a step forward, sat at the edge, and kept reading.

Bravo brother.

I have never read a story like this before. Devoid of cheap thrills and artificial elements, the story felt like you had recorded someone’s real life as if you had watched them very closely with your own eyes. The transitions from flashback to present and then again to flashback and present were wonderful.

You should seriously try something in the movie industry. I do not know why but it felt like I watched a movie. A long movie full of heart and heat.

Looking forward to your next story

[robertnow]

Just my humble request, please don’t start Part 2. This already feels like the perfect closure for the story. Even the epilogue felt a bit unnecessary to me. But I trust you’ll write even more great stories here

[readersp]

Can you kindly provide a PDF of the whole story if possible

[Mukul@99]

So true. The hangover of the characters is surreal. But maybe it's wise to leave it at ahigh. Eagerly counting down on your next story.

[Muralimm]

Dear Author,

I have read a lot of erotic stories online and have been a regular visitor to Literotica and earlier to the Xossip website now xossipy. I was never tempted to sign up and become part of the community before. But your story made me do that. I signed up just to reach you and appreciate your work.

Previously I would read a story, jerk off, and move on. Most of them did not really have a story at all. They were usually plain, mostly without emotions and without aftermaths. It was just sex, cheap thrills, and nothing more. But what you have written has a soul in it. There is a story and a kind of pure love between the couple, their journey, and then you take them to unimaginable situations.

I will not be ashamed to admit that I liked the sexual sequences between the lead and the intruder, but you handled everything in a dignified manner and with the same emotional depth. I used to feel angry whenever the character Vikram seemed to lose. While this may look like criticism, I would actually consider it a compliment because it is your writing that made me feel so close to the character. I felt for them. I wanted him to win. I always felt Vikram should prove himself before Bharath and show that he was superior.

But toward the climax chapters you made me realize that it was not necessary at all. Sex seemed secondary for them. At the end of the day Bharath realizes that even if he might think he won her physically, he could never win against Vikram.

The moment when he said, "She is lying. This bugger loves you and misses you every second," felt like a humiliating way of him admitting he had lost. It was also beautiful when he reminded her that she needed to come back before dropping her at the hospital when Vikram was admitted, though his inner voice knew she would not come back and that smile. Vikram and his love gracefully defeated him. Sex is nothing before that.
Yes, it may look like Bharath had the best use of her body, but it was quite the opposite. Her mind and soul were always with Vikram. So what is more important, mind and soul or body? Vikram has it all while Bharath only had the body.

Mirnaa’s way of irritating Bharath, her lack of cooperation toward the end, and then cooperating only to get his permission, and Bharath responding by saying "Do you see me as inhuman?" all of these felt like emotional slaps. Even they had some sense of morality and it kept surfacing.

I really do not know where to start and where to end. I was spellbound after reading the last few chapters until the epilogue. I am just recalling the last few episodes and the way Vikram and Mirnaa’s love kept increasing day by day. The moment she risked her life to save Vikram and the moment he catches her hand felt like I was reading a full novel and the scenes were happening right before my eyes.

You will not believe it. I actually moved my chair a step forward, sat at the edge, and kept reading.

Bravo brother.

I have never read a story like this before. Devoid of cheap thrills and artificial elements, the story felt like you had recorded someone’s real life as if you had watched them very closely with your own eyes. The transitions from flashback to present and then again to flashback and present were wonderful.

You should seriously try something in the movie industry. I do not know why but it felt like I watched a movie. A long movie full of heart and heat.

Looking forward to your next story

Sorry bro I am taking lead for your coments and thanks for understanding the story like me 


Hi
Dear writer this is the impact of what you wrote

Now a days emotions are missing in human life peace
That's why we are nead to release some things in our mind
So we choose different types

But I realise in my opinion a story can change thought of human temporarily or something permanently

So please try to get write a best novel in other forms or in this again

Unknowingly you write a classic that to different from other

[heygiwriter]

Can you kindly provide a PDF of the whole story if possible

I dont have in pdf version all typed here

[heygiwriter]

So true. The hangover of the characters is surreal. But maybe it's wise to leave it at ahigh. Eagerly counting down on your next story.

Thanks :)

[heygiwriter]

Sorry bro I am taking lead for your coments and thanks for understanding the story like me 


Hi
Dear writer this is the impact of what you wrote

Now a days emotions are missing in human life peace
That's why we are nead to release some things in our mind
So we choose different types

But I realise in my opinion a story can change thought of human temporarily or something permanently

So please try to get write a best novel in other forms or in this again

Unknowingly you write a classic that to different from other

I will try bro

[heygiwriter]

Dear Author,

I have read a lot of erotic stories online and have been a regular visitor to Literotica and earlier to the Xossip website now xossipy. I was never tempted to sign up and become part of the community before. But your story made me do that. I signed up just to reach you and appreciate your work.

Previously I would read a story, jerk off, and move on. Most of them did not really have a story at all. They were usually plain, mostly without emotions and without aftermaths. It was just sex, cheap thrills, and nothing more. But what you have written has a soul in it. There is a story and a kind of pure love between the couple, their journey, and then you take them to unimaginable situations.

I will not be ashamed to admit that I liked the sexual sequences between the lead and the intruder, but you handled everything in a dignified manner and with the same emotional depth. I used to feel angry whenever the character Vikram seemed to lose. While this may look like criticism, I would actually consider it a compliment because it is your writing that made me feel so close to the character. I felt for them. I wanted him to win. I always felt Vikram should prove himself before Bharath and show that he was superior.

But toward the climax chapters you made me realize that it was not necessary at all. Sex seemed secondary for them. At the end of the day Bharath realizes that even if he might think he won her physically, he could never win against Vikram.

The moment when he said, "She is lying. This bugger loves you and misses you every second," felt like a humiliating way of him admitting he had lost. It was also beautiful when he reminded her that she needed to come back before dropping her at the hospital when Vikram was admitted, though his inner voice knew she would not come back and that smile. Vikram and his love gracefully defeated him. Sex is nothing before that.
Yes, it may look like Bharath had the best use of her body, but it was quite the opposite. Her mind and soul were always with Vikram. So what is more important, mind and soul or body? Vikram has it all while Bharath only had the body.

Mirnaa’s way of irritating Bharath, her lack of cooperation toward the end, and then cooperating only to get his permission, and Bharath responding by saying "Do you see me as inhuman?" all of these felt like emotional slaps. Even they had some sense of morality and it kept surfacing.

I really do not know where to start and where to end. I was spellbound after reading the last few chapters until the epilogue. I am just recalling the last few episodes and the way Vikram and Mirnaa’s love kept increasing day by day. The moment she risked her life to save Vikram and the moment he catches her hand felt like I was reading a full novel and the scenes were happening right before my eyes.

You will not believe it. I actually moved my chair a step forward, sat at the edge, and kept reading.

Bravo brother.

I have never read a story like this before. Devoid of cheap thrills and artificial elements, the story felt like you had recorded someone’s real life as if you had watched them very closely with your own eyes. The transitions from flashback to present and then again to flashback and present were wonderful.

You should seriously try something in the movie industry. I do not know why but it felt like I watched a movie. A long movie full of heart and heat.

Looking forward to your next story

Big words brother thanks a lot

[robertnow]

Big words brother thanks a lot

You deserve it Brother.