Adultery Mirna – Vikram's Innocent Hotwife [COMPLETED]

[Mukul@99]

Such a fantastic read. A story with heat, heart, and substance. It owned me from beginning to end. This was an emotional rollercoaster. It was hard to put this down once I started it.
I think this was a great story that will have your heart palpitating often. When I wasn't reading I was thinking about the characters and couldn't wait to find out what was going to happen next.
This was packed with anger, doubt, passion, and anguish, and a burgeoning love. Beautiful descriptive writing that doesn’t hold back.
The use of sensory details made the setting feel vivid. The story gives a rare look into the delicate and powerful balance between domination and submission. Passionately demonstrated joy, sorrow, solidarity, love, sex, and a whole range of human emotions. The characters are very detailed, the scenes hot and steamy, and the circumstances that lead to those scenes and others, quite intricate. Very crafty, not a single gorgeous word is wasted. A work that invades your body and mind. This story is so tightly written, highly entertaining, definitely immersive, and all-around delightful.

[Muralimm]

This is one of my favorite story i have written. I was surprised when i saw how the character Mirnaa shaped up. 

The initial idea when started writing was like , how an innocent and naive wife, who is loyal had been tricked by own wife into adultery for the husbands revenge. The aftermath, he realize she is emotionally navigating and attaching towards her lover. So husband uses trick again and get back her with a punishment that she will scare to go behind her lover again. But in the process, their love they had for each other stood solid. Making the unthinkable happen, the extend they go, still they get back through love. But the awakening of sexual desires stayed unshaken. Husband realizes it and At the end, they embraces open marriage and the love just keep increasing. 

This was the plot i started working 
I have setup ready, the fast-forward - flashback setup ready

But as i started writing the flashback,  i was surprised to see i unintentionally created a so strong connection between two souls, from then i myself faced too many conflicts and adjustment towards the story.  i tried my level best not dilute it make it in a decent tray. 

Giving her the much needed sexual awakening - I made it through Goa Episodes. 
Giving an idea of she still has strong desire - Used as a hidden layer when she stay with Bharath after all truth explored 

I have avoided a lot of elements i originally planned
almost 15 chapters i have deleted, introduced new.. as i wanted to see the couple have atleast good ending.




I tried my level best to give a good pay off for each character.


Let me know your thought, What you all have expected does it come little closer to it?

Hi

For the first time I really feel wone a character not for lust with respect love

I really appreciate your narration special this one because it changed my thought of this site

It contains only sex and lust stories

This one truly change my opinion especially on you really super love story not a lust story

Really this is love story

I decided I read this kind of stories write now on not lust or sex with out meaning less

I have a huge respect on this story 

Now I am coming out of my lifestyle
I respect love true love can change

Thank for the wonderful story

I hope like this in future

Thank for your narration special the ending

Write now I follow your this kind of stories no lust only love

[Muralimm]

I personally masage you take time and

I am expecting your reply on 'PM'

[heygiwriter]

Such a fantastic read. A story with heat, heart, and substance. It owned me from beginning to end. This was an emotional rollercoaster. It was hard to put this down once I started it.
I think this was a great story that will have your heart palpitating often. When I wasn't reading I was thinking about the characters and couldn't wait to find out what was going to happen next.
This was packed with anger, doubt, passion, and anguish, and a burgeoning love. Beautiful descriptive writing that doesn’t hold back.
The use of sensory details made the setting feel vivid. The story gives a rare look into the delicate and powerful balance between domination and submission. Passionately demonstrated joy, sorrow, solidarity, love, sex, and a whole range of human emotions. The characters are very detailed, the scenes hot and steamy, and the circumstances that lead to those scenes and others, quite intricate. Very crafty, not a single gorgeous word is wasted. A work that invades your body and mind. This story is so tightly written, highly entertaining, definitely immersive, and all-around delightful.

Thanks a lot :)   glad to hear

[heygiwriter]

Hi

For the first time I really feel wone a character not for lust with respect love

I really appreciate your narration special this one because it changed my thought of this site

It contains only sex and lust stories

This one truly change my opinion especially on you really super love story not a lust story

Really this is love story

I decided I read this kind of stories write now on not lust or sex with out meaning less

I have a huge respect on this story 

Now I am coming out of my lifestyle
I respect love true love can change

Thank for the wonderful story

I hope like this in future

Thank for your narration special the ending

Write now I follow your this kind of stories no lust only love

Thanks a lot murali you are one of few people who believed on this story from the start, i thought people would lost interest in such a long story..

[heygiwriter]

An another thought came, an spark for second installment 

Now Vikram and Mirnaa understand things even more deeply, while Krish and Swathi get into relationship trouble. Bharath struggles to cope with Manya. Vikram supports Swathi, and Mirna steps in to support Bharath as they try to fix their lives.

Once again, they find themselves in a closed setting. How do they navigate it this time? Unexpected intimacy arises, and Vikram and Mirna end up witnessing each other’s affairs. This brings out their doubts, jealousy, possessiveness, and the need for reassurance. Both know that temptations cannot be avoided, yet they still take on the responsibility of helping the other couples mend their relationships.

I could not achieve the open marriage concept in the story, so an alternate idea . came..  Let me hear all of your thoughts. .

If something concrete develops from it, I will start working on it after the short stories I have planned.

[Rkering0506]

An another thought came, an spark for second installment 

Now Vikram and Mirnaa understand things even more deeply, while Krish and Swathi get into relationship trouble. Bharath struggles to cope with Manya. Vikram supports Swathi, and Mirna steps in to support Bharath as they try to fix their lives.

Once again, they find themselves in a closed setting. How do they navigate it this time? Unexpected intimacy arises, and Vikram and Mirna end up witnessing each other’s affairs. This brings out their doubts, jealousy, possessiveness, and the need for reassurance. Both know that temptations cannot be avoided, yet they still take on the responsibility of helping the other couples mend their relationships.

I could not achieve the open marriage concept in the story, so an alternate idea . came..  Let me hear all of your thoughts. .

If something concrete develops from it, I will start working on it after the short stories I have planned.

That would be an awesome plotline for part2.

[heygiwriter]

That would be an awesome plotline for part2.

Yes guess. this would be apt one

[aravindkkumar08]

Simple thanks not enough to you bro. Atleast you complete the work. Now a days lot of authors start a story and stop the story inbetween in intersting stage and simply vanish.

[Mukul@99]

It is not just the story or the genre. It's the way you write and narrate makes it compelling & riveting.
You are a master story-weaver.

[jiivawonderland]

No words 

What a journey it is

The pain of Vikram, Their innocent Love, Magical bonding 

Their raising from now where like rags to riches

Then situations made them slip vikram himself gave mirna to bharath in controlled way but he scored

Sex between Mirnaa and Bharath is so hot. and Vikram and Mirna sex is even more emotional painful

second time when mirnaa leave him i thought mirnaa wont join vikram forever, have condition like swetha filling the house.

but you made them re unite.. more beautifully the climax when he catch her hand and stop her falling 

Cinematic at its  best


This is not just erotic story its a love story.

PLEASE dont stop this story.. continue.. the characters are so close to heart 

WONDERFULl and THANKS

[heygiwriter]

Simple thanks not enough to you bro. Atleast you complete the work. Now a days lot of authors start a story and stop the story inbetween in intersting stage and simply vanish.

Thanks Brother Keep Supporting !

[heygiwriter]

It is not just the story or the genre. It's the way you write and narrate makes it compelling & riveting.
You are a master story-weaver.

Thanks a Lot

[heygiwriter]

No words 

What a journey it is

The pain of Vikram, Their innocent Love, Magical bonding 

Their raising from now where like rags to riches

Then situations made them slip vikram himself gave mirna to bharath in controlled way but he scored

Sex between Mirnaa and Bharath is so hot. and Vikram and Mirna sex is even more emotional painful

second time when mirnaa leave him i thought mirnaa wont join vikram forever, have condition like swetha filling the house.

but you made them re unite.. more beautifully the climax when he catch her hand and stop her falling 

Cinematic at its  best


This is not just erotic story its a love story.

PLEASE dont stop this story.. continue.. the characters are so close to heart 

WONDERFULl and THANKS

Thanks a lot . Thanks for detailed writeup. Means a lot 

Depends on users feedback im planned to do one second part , but lets see

[Green6520]

one of the best story.I think instead of staying with this, we should bring in some new stories. With new storylines and new characters.

[Munda007]

Congratulations

[Erotica erotica]

story was awesome

[heygiwriter]

one of the best story.I think instead of staying with this, we should bring in some new stories. With new storylines and new characters.

Sure noted and Thanks

[heygiwriter]

one of the best story.I think instead of staying with this, we should bring in some new stories. With new storylines and new characters.

Thanks a lot :)

[heygiwriter]

story was awesome

Thanks :)