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wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar,
behad hi shandaar, zabardast aur sexy story! bahut bahut maza agaya padhke!
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What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar
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Very very hot and exciting update! Just awesome,amazing,sexy and extremely erotic writings!
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chamatkar update! bahut h mast,bahut h jabardast aur bahut h shandaar writings!
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(18-02-2026, 05:10 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Deepak
I hope you are feeling much better now.... It was a super duper update..... Maza aa gaya.... Thanks for the update.
(18-02-2026, 05:56 AM)Lalu Mastan Wrote: Absolutely wonderful and extremely erotic writings
(18-02-2026, 06:10 AM)Debesh1107 Wrote: Superb update bhai
(18-02-2026, 06:58 AM)KGB Wrote: Another blockbuster update
(18-02-2026, 07:13 AM)Loveakb18 Wrote: Toooo hot n sexy update
(18-02-2026, 08:10 AM)Kerry Watson Wrote: Outstanding and fascinating writing ✍️
(18-02-2026, 08:14 AM)Wanton Wrote: Bahut bahut mast update
(18-02-2026, 09:46 AM)Vampire Wrote: Awesome and exciting writing update
(18-02-2026, 11:55 AM)Rundi Wrote: ashadaran aur chamatkar update!
(18-02-2026, 01:17 PM)Zareen Wrote: Ekdom mast, zabardast aur kamaal ka writings!
(18-02-2026, 01:25 PM)Vik88 Wrote: Very much hot and too much exciting story writings!
(18-02-2026, 01:33 PM)SweetSonali Wrote: Exciting and superb update! bahut bahut achi writings!
(18-02-2026, 01:39 PM)Rohit Wrote: Exciting, erotic and enticing update!
(18-02-2026, 01:54 PM)pujaa69 Wrote: Amazing ? seductive sexual update
Waiting for the next bigg update
Is Anita become slave of Karim
(18-02-2026, 03:53 PM)Barbarian Viking Wrote: Extremely hot and absolutely seductive writings!
(18-02-2026, 09:26 PM)Loveakb18 Wrote: Hot n sexy update brother
(18-02-2026, 10:49 PM)Afsana Mimi Wrote: lajawab aur danshu update
(18-02-2026, 10:56 PM)Regina Wrote: bahut badhiya, bahut khub aur bahut bahut mast update!
(19-02-2026, 03:24 AM)exbiixossip2 Wrote: you are best writer... you give me slow poison of lust.
but upload more pics and gifs.. only one it is not fair...
next update come fast...
(19-02-2026, 11:51 AM)Black Daimond Wrote: lajawab,mast,chamatkar aur zabardast kahaani!
(19-02-2026, 03:02 PM)Tadpole Wrote: Erotic, exciting and absolutely seductive writing.
(19-02-2026, 06:02 PM)Phallus Wrote: Ashadaran update! behad h shandar aur lajawab writings!
(19-02-2026, 06:22 PM)Bhakhtu Wrote: bahut bahut sweet aur jabardast update!
(19-02-2026, 06:34 PM)srider69 Wrote: Absolutely wonderful! Glad to know you're doing better, Deepak
(19-02-2026, 06:49 PM)Ekra. Wrote: Superb! Lajawab aur zabardast update
(19-02-2026, 06:54 PM)Madman007 Wrote: Absolutely sensational and mind blowing update!
(20-02-2026, 10:20 AM)Kasif Wrote: Outstanding,marvelous and stunning update!
(20-02-2026, 10:28 AM)Gadrayi Maa Wrote: bahut bahut shandar,bahut bahut mast,bahut bahut garam aur bahut bahut kamuk kahaani, bahut acha likha,bahut khoob!
(20-02-2026, 10:37 AM)Shahara Wrote: wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar,
behad hi shandaar, zabardast aur sexy story! bahut bahut maza agaya padhke!
(20-02-2026, 10:52 AM)Papakaladli Wrote: What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar
(20-02-2026, 06:21 PM)PakeezaAmmi Wrote: Very very hot and exciting update! Just awesome,amazing,sexy and extremely erotic writings!
(20-02-2026, 10:00 PM)Pakhandi Baba Wrote: chamatkar update! bahut h mast,bahut h jabardast aur bahut h shandaar writings!
Thanks For Comments , Like & posts . I am working on Next update . Meanwhile i just updated my other story. Link is in signature. Happy Weekend
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very very intense, exciting and erotic story!
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Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.
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superb aur ekdom zabardast update! Bahut khoob! Hats off yaar! eisa hi likhte raho.
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सच में बहुत बढ़िया और शानदार अपडेट! आपकी लिखाई बहुत हॉट और इरोटिक है। प्लीज़ ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए।
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Really awesome and thrilling update! Your writings are full of excitement and eroticism.
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सच में बहुत बढ़िया और रोमांचक अपडेट! आपकी लिखाई उत्तेजना और कामुकता से भरी है।
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Super duper hit story with brilliant writing.
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25-02-2026, 02:32 AM
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(24-02-2026, 09:36 AM)Deepak.kapoor Wrote: Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.
Deepak
Bro just let the story go along with the flow as it is going.... As Anita is getting hot day by day with his games let Anita surrender herself to the servant after 2 updates or maybe after 1 more update and she makes sure he does not play any more games but they lead to a hidden and cheating affair when the husband is not around
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(24-02-2026, 09:36 AM)Deepak.kapoor Wrote: Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.
Ok but first you tell us what are that ways you thing the story goes on
Then we gave the response according to it.
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Anita ko ab tadapne do 30 min wala game bhi band karo.. ab use karim di*k flash kro like.. anita bedroom se tumko dekhe garden me paani dete hue to tum usse karim ka auzaar dikhao. Anita ko ab body touch se nahi garam karo use ab humiliate karo use nicha dikhao..
Kisi character ke jariye karim ki past life Anita batao kese wo aurto ko use karta tha gaov ki aurte kese uski diwani thi bade gahr ki aurte bhi use malik manti thi. Phir anita ka dress control karna start kro or usse bhik mange do jism ki aag bhujane ke liye
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(26-02-2026, 04:19 PM)kuldeep0043 Wrote: Anita ko ab tadapne do 30 min wala game bhi band karo.. ab use karim di*k flash kro like.. anita bedroom se tumko dekhe garden me paani dete hue to tum usse karim ka auzaar dikhao. Anita ko ab body touch se nahi garam karo use ab humiliate karo use nicha dikhao..
Kisi character ke jariye karim ki past life Anita batao kese wo aurto ko use karta tha gaov ki aurte kese uski diwani thi bade gahr ki aurte bhi use malik manti thi. Phir anita ka dress control karna start kro or usse bhik mange do jism ki aag bhujane ke liye
Thanks for your suggestions, but I am thinking something else.
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Deepak bro
When are you planning to post the next update ?
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(Yesterday, 03:05 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Deepak bro
When are you planning to post the next update ?
Hi Val ,
In day or two . Finally got it . Doing final edits . Meantime Read Update which i posted in my other story . Link is in signature . After reading let me know how you are liking that one too .
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