[Shahara]

wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar,
behad hi shandaar, zabardast aur sexy story! bahut bahut maza agaya padhke!

[Papakaladli]

What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar

[PakeezaAmmi]

Very very hot and exciting update! Just awesome,amazing,sexy and extremely erotic writings!

[Pakhandi Baba]

chamatkar update! bahut h mast,bahut h jabardast aur bahut h shandaar writings!

[Deepak.kapoor]

Deepak
I hope you are feeling much better now.... It was a super duper update..... Maza aa gaya.... Thanks for the update.

Absolutely wonderful and extremely erotic writings

Superb update bhai

Another blockbuster update

Toooo hot n sexy update

Outstanding and fascinating writing ✍️

Bahut bahut mast update

Awesome and exciting writing update

ashadaran aur chamatkar update!

Ekdom mast, zabardast aur kamaal  ka writings!

Very much hot and too much exciting story writings!

Exciting and superb update! bahut bahut achi writings!

Exciting, erotic and enticing update!

Amazing ? seductive sexual update
Waiting for the next bigg update
Is Anita become slave of Karim

Extremely hot and absolutely seductive writings!

Hot n sexy update brother

lajawab aur danshu update

bahut badhiya, bahut khub aur bahut bahut mast update!

you are best writer... you give me slow poison of lust.

but upload more pics and gifs.. only one it is not fair...

next update come fast...

lajawab,mast,chamatkar aur zabardast kahaani!

Erotic, exciting and absolutely seductive writing.

Ashadaran update! behad h shandar aur lajawab writings!

bahut bahut sweet aur jabardast update!

Absolutely wonderful! Glad to know you're doing better, Deepak

Superb! Lajawab aur zabardast update

Absolutely sensational and mind blowing update!

Outstanding,marvelous and stunning update!

bahut bahut shandar,bahut bahut mast,bahut bahut garam aur bahut bahut kamuk kahaani, bahut acha likha,bahut khoob!

wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar,
behad hi shandaar, zabardast aur sexy story! bahut bahut maza agaya padhke!

What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar

Very very hot and exciting update! Just awesome,amazing,sexy and extremely erotic writings!

chamatkar update! bahut h mast,bahut h jabardast aur bahut h shandaar writings!

Thanks For Comments , Like & posts . I am working on Next update . Meanwhile i just updated my other story. Link is in signature. Happy Weekend

[sa9891]

Update soon

[वफादार माँ]

बिल्कुल शानदार कहानी!

[The Gladiator]

very very intense, exciting and erotic story!

[Deepak.kapoor]

Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.

[তিন কন্যা]

superb aur ekdom zabardast update! Bahut khoob! Hats off yaar! eisa hi likhte raho.

[Suma Dutt]

सच में बहुत बढ़िया और शानदार अपडेट! आपकी लिखाई बहुत हॉट और इरोटिक है। प्लीज़ ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए।

[Voyonkor Bishu]

Really awesome and thrilling update! Your writings are full of excitement and eroticism.

[Rajeshawari Singha]

सच में बहुत बढ़िया और रोमांचक अपडेट! आपकी लिखाई उत्तेजना और कामुकता से भरी है।

[Heenaparveen]

Super duper hit story with brilliant writing.

[val.coutinho]

Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.

Deepak
Bro just let the story go along with the flow as it is going.... As Anita is getting hot day by day with his games let Anita surrender herself to the servant after 2 updates or maybe after 1 more update and she makes sure he does not play any more games but they lead to a hidden and cheating affair when the husband is not around

[pujaa69]

Hi, I developed something, but I am not liking it yet. I am in a mental block about which direction I should take this story. Please give me your ideas.

Ok but first you tell us what are that ways you thing the story goes on
Then we gave the response according to it.

[kuldeep0043]

Anita ko ab tadapne do 30 min wala game bhi band karo.. ab use karim di*k flash kro like.. anita bedroom se tumko dekhe garden me paani dete hue to tum usse karim ka auzaar dikhao. Anita ko ab body touch se nahi garam karo use ab humiliate karo use nicha dikhao..

Kisi character ke jariye karim ki past life Anita batao kese wo aurto ko use karta tha gaov ki aurte kese uski diwani thi bade gahr ki aurte bhi use malik manti thi. Phir anita ka dress control karna start kro or usse bhik mange do jism ki aag bhujane ke liye

[Deepak.kapoor]

Anita ko ab tadapne do 30 min wala game bhi band karo.. ab use karim di*k flash kro like.. anita bedroom se tumko dekhe garden me paani dete hue to tum usse karim ka auzaar dikhao. Anita ko ab body touch se nahi garam karo use ab humiliate karo use nicha dikhao..

Kisi character ke jariye karim ki past life Anita batao kese wo aurto ko use karta tha gaov ki aurte kese uski diwani thi bade gahr ki aurte bhi use malik manti thi. Phir anita ka dress control karna start kro or usse bhik mange do jism ki aag bhujane ke liye

Thanks for your suggestions, but I am thinking something else.

[val.coutinho]

Deepak bro
When are you planning to post the next update ?

[Deepak.kapoor]

Deepak bro
When are you planning to post the next update ?

Hi Val ,
In day or two . Finally got it . Doing final edits . Meantime Read Update which i posted in my other story . Link is in signature . After reading let me know how you are liking that one too .