Ek Anokhee Love Story

[shan123]

Your writing is excellent and amazing. This story can be extremely hot and erotic and also a blockbuster one if the heroine is a conservative,majabi, pakiza and strictly faithful wife who is being seduced slowly and steadily by a man of opposite majab who is a number one badmash,randibaj,magibaj and a sexual pervert.

[Lalu Mastan]

Your writing is excellent and amazing. This story can be extremely hot and erotic and also a blockbuster one if the heroine is a conservative,majabi, pakiza and strictly faithful wife who is being seduced slowly and steadily by a man of opposite majab who is a number one badmash,randibaj,magibaj and a sexual pervert.

Agree with you

[sexypreeti]

No need to rush . Deliver when you are satisfied . I usually have five ten earlier episode ready in word doc. that give me idea where i want to take story then I keep on working on latest one till i am satisfied with my work . Try to deliver one or two episode in a week . writing takes a toll on your time .

I totally agree with you and I too follow the same. My stories are missing pics/GIFs too presently but I will catch up on it as I go as I am still learning the ropes...

-Preeti 

[val.coutinho]

Update 04:
 
Monday ki subah thi, Anu ki jab neend khulti hai toh woh, Kushal ko kaam par jaane ke liye ready hote hue dekhti hai, angdaai leti hui Anu bistar par se uthkar peeche se Kushal se lipat jaati hai aur us ke gaal par kiss karke “Good morning” bolti hai.
 
Anu: Tum ready ho jao, main jaldi se naashta lagati hu.
 
Kushal: Arre nahi Anu rehne do, mujhe late ho jayega, waise bhi aaj office mein 9 baje meeting hai, main canteen mein hi kuch khaa lunga.
 
Anu: Yeh kya baat hui, khaali pet ghar se nikloge ?
 
Kushal: (Uski taraf muskurakar) Theek hai madam, ek cup chai hi banado jaldi se.
 
Anu: Ok ji (Smile karte hue)
 
Anu apni nighty par gown chadhakar kitchen mein jaakar chai banane lagti hai, tabhi Kaushal aur Kanchan use kitchen mein dekh kar unke liye bhi chai banane ki vinti karte hain.
 
Anu sab ke liye chai banati hai aur cups mein daal kar un dono ko chai dekar, ek cup lekar apne kamare ki or badh jaati hai. Kushal ready hokar apne office ke bag mein apni files aur papers ko check kar raha hota hai, Anu use chai ka cup deti hai aur uske bagal mein baith jaati hai, Kushal use dekh kar smile karte hue poochta hai.
 
Kushal: Kal raat ko tumhe maza aaya ki nahi.
 
Anu: (Apne adhure chhutne ke lamhe ko yaad karte hue banavati smile deti hui) Haan maza aaya na. Tumhe nahi aaya kya ?
 
Kushal: Arre bahut maza aaya, tumhari jaisi biwi jiske saath ho use maza kaise nahi aayega.
 
Kushal: (Apni chai khatam karke, Anu ko cup dete hue) Accha ab main chalta hu, dopahar mein agar mauka milega toh lunch par aunga.
 
Anu: Lunch mein koi khaas farmayish hai kya ?
 
Kushal: Haan meri pyaari biwi ko khaana hai lunch mein.
 
Aur muskurakar Anu ko dekhta hai jo sharma jaati hai aur apni nazrein  aur chehra jhuka leti hai, Kushal uske chehre ko uppar karte hue uski aankhon mein dekhte hue jhuk kar apne honth uske honth par rakh kar kiss karta hai aur main chalta hu kehkar kamre se bahar chala jaata hai. Anu apne haath mein cup liye kitchen mein jaakar use rakhti hai aur darwaze ke bahar tak Kushal ko chhodne jaati hai. Kushal apne bike ko start karke wahan se chala jaata hai, jab Anu ghar mein jaane ke liye mudti hai toh uski nazar Sandy se milti hai jo apni bike ko saaf kar raha hota hai, dono ki nazrein milti hai aur kuch der tak dono ek dusre ko dekh hi rahe hote hain, fir Sandy dono ki chuppi ko todte hue.
 
Sandy: Good morning
 
Anu: Good morning Sandy.
 
Sandy: Kaisi rahi raat ?
 
Anu: (Apni nazrein sharmse jhukate hue) Theek hi thi. Tumhari night kaisi rahi ?
 
Sandy: Meri bhi theek hi rahi, der raat tak neend nahi aayi.
 
Anu: Kyu ?? Party mein jyada paise kharch kar diye kya ?
 
Sandy: Arre nahi party ko lekar nahi…. Party ke baad ko…. (Itna hi kehkar Sandy chup ho jaata hai)
 
Anu Sandy ke mooh se yeh baat sunkar jhemp jaati hai aur apna sar neeche jhuka leti hai, woh sharma kar ghar ke darwaze ki taraf jaane ke liye mudti hai tabhi Kaushal aur Kanchan ghar ke bahar aakar apne apne kaam ke liye jaa rahe hote hain tabhi dono ki nazar Sandy par padti hai, dono ko Sandy “Good Morning” bolta hai aur dono bhi use “Good morning” bolte hai, itne mein Kanchan Sandy ko chhedte hue kehti hai.
 
Kanchan: Kya baat hai Sandy aaj bike poch rahe ho, kisi girl friend ko milne jaa raha hai ?
 
Sandy: Girlfriend aur meri… .Hahahaha….. Tumne toh mujhe bachpan se jaana hai, agar hoti toh tumhe pata nahi lagta kya ?
 
Kaushal: Kanchan se kehta hai, kyu subah subah bechare ko tang kar rahi ho…
 
Kanchan: Main kahan….. (Itne mein Sandy beech mein bol deta hai)
 
Sandy: Arre uncle aaj office walo ne bulaya hai, kuch baat karni hai shaayad unhe mujhse.
 
Kaushal: Oh… Ok…. All the best.
 
Sandy: Thank you Kaushal uncle.
 
Kanchan: Kaisi baat karni hai unhe tumse ?
 
Sandy: Pata nahi, hoga kuch kaam ko lekar aur yeh bhi pata chala hai ki shaayad hamara satellite phone bhi bandh hone wala hai…. Shaayad ho sakta hai uske baare mein kuch bolna ho.
 
Kanchan: Oh ok all the best.
 
Sandy: Thank you Kanchan.
 
Kaushal aur Kanchan apne apne raaste nikal jaate hai aur wahan reh jaate hai, Sandy aur Anu, (jo abhi bhi bahar khadi thi) ek dusre ko kuch der tak dekh rahe hote hain toh Sandy use aankon ke ishare se poochta hai kya hua ? Anu apna sar naa mein hilake, Sandy ko 2-3 seconds aur dekh kar ghar ke andar daakhil ho jaati hai.
Sandy kuch time baad ready hokar apne office ke liye nikal jaata hai.
 
Dopahar ka time tha, Sandy apne office se wapis aakar bike ko apne jagah par laga kar apne ghar ke taraf jaa raha hota hai, jab woh Kushal ke ghar ke saamne se gujar raha hota hai use kuch awazein aati hai, usse raha nahi gaya aur woh khidki ke paas pahucha jo halki si khuli hui thi aur wahan se jhankne laga, jo scene usne andar dekha uski aankein badi ho gayi aur uski nazar us scene se hat hi nahi paa rahi thi.

[sexypreeti]

Val Very good story so far 

Maybe you should proof read your stories a few times before posting so you can check for spelling and grammar errors...like extra long sentences separated by commas...sometimes confuse you as to whether you are meaning to end that line or was it leading to something more...small small spelling mistakes likes who instead of woh...etc...

Overall a good start so far...restrict your updates to maybe one or two a week so you get time to draft the next few parts where you begin to weave the story and characters together...This will also give you a chance and time to think thru and add references to future happenings and past references and how to seamlessly bring it all together...Just my opinion...

[val.coutinho]

Your writing is excellent and amazing. This story can be extremely hot and erotic and also a blockbuster one if the heroine is a conservative,majabi, pakiza and strictly faithful wife who is being seduced slowly and steadily by a man of opposite majab who is a number one badmash,randibaj,magibaj and a sexual pervert.

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.

[val.coutinho]

Val Very good story so far 

Maybe you should proof read your stories a few times before posting so you can check for spelling and grammar errors...like extra long sentences separated by commas...sometimes confuse you as to whether you are meaning to end that line or was it leading to something more...small small spelling mistakes likes who instead of woh...etc...

Overall a good start so far...restrict your updates to maybe one or two a week so you get time to draft the next few parts where you begin to weave the story and characters together...This will also give you a chance and time to think thru and add references to future happenings and past references and how to seamlessly bring it all together...Just my opinion...

Thank you Preeti, all noted....
In the private message i have explained...

[Bhosdike.]

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.

Yes, we want you to write such a story in future.

[Phallus]

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.

Yes,it will be a fantastic story if you write it in future.

[Felix]

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.

Right. We will wait.

[Yash121]

Nice update...bass thoda bade update karo

[Sabitri Roy]

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.

Yes, please write this kind of story.

[val.coutinho]

Nice update...bass thoda bade update karo

Yes Yash i try to remove time and write and then read it again for corrections before posting it online....
I'm a little busy with the paperwork for redevelopment of my locality......
Plus I will be joining my work soon.... i think by Sunday.... lets see if i can post one more update before going to work.... if I'm not able to then it will be 30 days of no update on this story....

[Yash121]

Waiting for next

[val.coutinho]

Update 05:

Sandy ne jab Kushal ke ghar ke andar khidki se jhaanka tab usne dekha ki Anu sofe par leti hui hai aur Kushal uske uppar let kar uske honthon ko chum raha hai aur Anu bhi uska madhosh hoke saath de rahi hai. Aaahhh..... Hmmmm.... Chhmmmm.... Hmmm.... Uhhhmmm..... Sandy un dono ko aese dekh kar wahan khidki ke paas jaise chipak hi jaata hai andar ka kaamuk scene dekh kar uske haath pair thande padh jaate hain.

Kushal ke peeth khidki ki taraf thi aur Anu uske neeche sofe par lete hue uska saath de rahi hai Kushal ka baanya haath Anu ke kamar par chala raha hota hai aur daanya haath Anu ke gaand par chal raha hain aur Anu ka haath Kushal ke peeth ko uske shirt ke uppar se sehla rahe hote hain Anu ne apni pair utha kar Kushal ke kamar par halke taur se baandhe hue rakhe hain aur dono pati patni kaamuk kriya mein gunthe pade hai. Kushal ab Anu ke honthon ko chhod kar uske baen gaal ko chumte hue halke se kaat leta hai toh Anu madhoshi mein halke aankhein kholkar aahhhh kehti hain

Jab Anu ki aankhein halki si khulti hai tab use khidki ke paas koi parchhayi jaisi dikhti hai par madhoshi ke aalam mein woh is baat par dhyaan nahi deti aur apne maze mein doobi rehti hai. Kushal apna baanya haath Anu ke kamar se uppar ki or le jaakar Anu ki daanyi chunchi ko jor se daba deta hai aur usi waqt uske gaal ko kaat leta hai, is dohre waar se Anu ki aankhein poori tarah se khul jaati hai aur uski nazar khidki par khade shaksh par padti hain waise un dono ki nazar milti hai to Anu ke mooh se ek kaamuk siskaari ssiiiii.... Aaahhhh..... nikal jaati hain.

Sandy aur Anu ki nazrein ek dusre se milti hain aur dono bina palke jhapkaaye ek dusre ko bas dekhte hi rehte hai ki utne mein Kushal Anu ki chunchi ko ek baar aur jor re daba deta hai jis karan se Anu aur bhi kamuk tareeke se sisak padti hai... Siií.... Uuummm.... Aaahhhh.... Sssiiiii.... Kushaaallll..... Kehti hai, Kushal Anu ke gaal se neeche ki or sarak kar uski garden ko chumne aur choosne lagta hai chhhmmmm... Chhmm.... Uummm... Hhmmmm..... Neeche sarak ne ke karan Anu ki kurti thodi si uski chuchi se sarak jaati hai aur uski laal color ki bra ka strap sahit bra ke cup ka kuch hissa Sandy ko dikhne lagti hai. Sandy Anu ki chunchi ki or aankhon se ishara karta hai Anu apni aankhein jhuka kar apni bra mein kaid chunchi kurti ko bahar jhaankti hui paati hai aur apni aankhein bandh karke Kushal ke haath par apna haath rakh kar apni chunchi ko daba deti hai.

Anu ke mooh se fir se ek madak aur lambi siskari nikalti hai.... Ssssiiiiii.... Aaaahhhhh...... Anu apni aankhein moond kar us pal ko yaad karti hai jahan uski wahi daayni chunchi ko kal raat Sandy ke haath ne dabayi thi aur utna hi nahi usne khud Sandy ke haath ko pakad kar apni chunchi par rakhi taaki Sandy use fir se daba sake, yehi sab soch kar use apni choot mein geelapan mehsoos hota hai. Wahi Sandy ki bhi haalath kharab hone lagti hai, andar ka kaamuk scene dekh kar uska apna haath uske pant ke uppar se apne lund ko sehlane lagta hai.

Sandy lund sehlate hue Anu ke laal bra ke cup mein kaid us gori chunchi ki ubhar ko dekh raha hota hai ki tabhi Anu apni aankhein kholke Sandy ko dekhti hai use samajhne mein der nahi lagti ki Sandy ka haath uppar neeche kyu ho raha hai. Anu Sandy ko chidhane aur garam karne ke hetu se apna haath apne chunchi par se hata deti hai aur ek madak ada se apne daayni kurti ko kandhe se thoda aur sarka deti hai taaki Sandy uske laal bra ke cup mein kaid chunchi ki gori ubhar aur uski golai ko Kushal ke haath mein dabta hua dekh sake aur khud kuch pal Sandy ka lund kaisa hoga aur kaise woh pant ke uppar se use sehla raha hoga soch kar Anu ko apni choot mein aur geelapan mehsoos hota hai. Sandy aur Anu ki aankhein fir se milti hai toh Sandy apna lund sehlana bandh kar deta hai aur Anu ko taakte rehta hai, is baar takreeban 20 se 30 second dono ek dusre ko dekhte hi rehte hain.

Anu fir Kushal ke sar ke baalon mein apna daanyi haath ki ungliyon ferti hai aur uske baalon ko mutthi mein bharkar Kushal ke chehre ko apne chehre ke kareeb lakar Sandy ke aankhon mein dekhte hue Kushal ke honthon ko chumne aur choosne lagti hai, Kushal bhi chumban mein saath dene lagta hai is dauran bhi Anu ki nazrein 15 se 20 second Sandy se mili hui rehti hain. Anu chumban ka maza lete hue apni aankhon ko bandh kar leti hai aur apni geeli ho rahi choot ko kapdon ke uppar se Kushal ke pant mein khade ho rahe lund ko ragadne lagti hai.

Dono pati patni ki saansein garam aur tez chal rahi hoti hai aur dono bhi is kaamuk kriya mein vyast ho rahe hote hai ki tabhi Kushal ka phone bajne lagta hai. Phone ki awaz sunkar Kushal aur Anu ki honth juda ho jaate hain aur Anu ki nazar khidki par khade Sandy ki nazar se milti hai dono ek dusre ko 10 second tak dekhte hai tab tak Kushal Anu ke uppar uthkar apni gaand ko apne pindliyon par rakh kar baith jaata jis ke karan Anu ki laal bra ke cup mein kaid daayni chunchi ke ubhar aadhi se jyaada kurti ke bahar jhaankte hue Sandy ko dikh jaati hai, kyuki Anu ne apni kurti ko kandhe se thoda neeche ko sarkadiya tha, Kushal ki peeth abhi bhi khidki ki taraf hai aur woh apna phone baen jeb se nikalne lagta hai ki tabhi uski nazar Anu par padti hai jo use na dekh kar khidki ki taraf dekh rahi hai.

Kushal ko apni or dekh Anu thodi si seham jaati hai lekin fir ek halki si muskaan dekar Kushal ke shirt ke uppar se haath ferti hui uski chhati ko sehlane lagti hai (taaki Kushal khidki ki taraf na dekhe) aur poochti hai.

Anu: Kiska phone hai ?

Kushal: (Phone ke screen ko dekhte hue) Office se sir ka phone hai.

Anu: Toh itna soch kyu rahe ho phone utha lo na.

Itna keh kar Anu fir se khidki ki taraf dekhti hai toh use waha Sandy nazar nahi aata aur woh rahat ki saans leti hai. Jab Anu Kushal ki or fir se dekhti hai toh Kushal haan mein sir ko hila kar phone par call attend karta hai aur peeche ki taraf khidki ki or dekhta hai toh use wahan koi nazar nahi aata. Anu uthkar Kushal ki aankhon mein dekhti hui apni baahein uske gale mein daal kar uske nazdeek khisak kar uske gale lag jaati hai.

Kushal phone par baat karte hue apna ek haath se phone padke hue dusre haath se Anu ki peeth ko sehlane lagta hai, baat khatam hote hi Kushal Anu ke honthon ko halke se chum kar kehta hai ki use ab office ke liye wapis jaana hoga. Anu bhi muskurate hue Kushal ke honthon ko chum kar theek hai kehti hai aur uske gale se bahon ko nikal kar apni kurti ko theek kar ke uth kar khadi ho jaati hai. Kushal bhi khade hokar apne kapde theek karke apni bag lekar darwaze ki taraf jaane lagta hai.

Darwaza khol kar Kushal jab bahar aata hai toh use Sandy apni bike ko cover karta hua nazar aata hai toh Kushal Sandy ko dekh kar muskurate hue usse poochta hai.

Kushal: Kahan se aa rahe ho bhai Sandy ?

Sandy: (Sandy bhi muskurate hue) Arre Kushal office mein bulaya tha yaar wahi se aa raha hu.

Kushal: Koi khaas khabar hai kya aaj kal bahut bula rahe hain office Wale tumhe.

Sandy: Haan yaar dekh na abhi chhutti bhi poori nahi hui hai aur mujhe parso join karne bol rahe hain.

Kushal: Itni jaldi tere toh 20 din bhi nahi hue abhi tak.

Sandy: Haan na tu hi dekh. Waise tu Aaj Ghar kaise ?

Kushal: Lunch karne aaya tha abhi wapis Jaa Raha hu kaam par.

Sandy: Accha.

Kushal se baatcheet ke dauran reh reh kar uski nazar Anu pe jaa rahi thi jo darwaze par khadi ho kar unhe dekh rahi thi. Kushal yeh baat notice nahi karta aur apni bike par baith kar office ke liye chala jaata hai. Sandy apni bike ko cover karte hue bhi apni nazar Anu par hi rakhta hai aur Anu bhi ek tak Sandy ko dekhte rehti hai. Jab Sandy bike ko cover karke Anu ki or aata hai toh Anu usse kehti hai.

Anu: Tum bahut bure ho.

Sandy: Kyu ? Maine aesa kya kar diya jo main bura ban gaya ?

Anu: Tumhe pata nahi tumne kya Kiya ?
Aese koi kisi ke ghar mein jhaankta hai kya ?

Sandy: Mujhe kya malum tha ki....

Anu: (Sandy ko beech mein tokte hue) Bas bas rehne do tum toh..... Aage se aesi koi harkat mat karna.... Agar Kushal tumhe dekh leta toh ?

Sandy: Hhmmm... Maaf kar dena aage se aese nahi hoga.

Anu: (Smile karte hue) Theek hai, waise office se tumhe kyu jaldi bula rahe hai kaam par ?

Sandy: Woh kisi ke ghar par emergency ho gayi hai aur use apne ghar jaana hai.

Anu: Ohhh.... Toh tum parso chale jaoge ?

Sandy: Haan ab bola hai jaane toh jaana padega na. Waise mujhe tumse ek help chahiye thi kar paogi ?

Anu: Kaisi help ?

Sandy: Humare rig ka satellite phone bandh hone wala hai aur hume agar ghar par baat karni hogi toh WhatsApp par baat karni hogi kya mujhe tumhara number mil sakta hai ?
Main chahiye toh Kushal se permission le leta hu tumhare number ke liye.

Anu: (Sandy ko chhedte hue) Seedhe seedhe bolo na Mera number chahiye.

Sandy: Arre nahi nahi.... Main parso jaa Raha hu aur maa ko smart phone chalane nahi aata aur na hi mere paas itna time hai ki main maa ko sikha saku. Agli baar aaunga toh maa ko naya phone dila kar sikha kar jaunga.

Anu: (Smike karte hue) Theek hai le lo number.

Sandy: Haan bolo (Apna phone pocket se nikalte hue)

Anu: 8*******4

Sandy: Thank you, main Kushal se permission le lunga tumhare phone par call karke maa se baat karne ki.

Anu: Koi jarurat nahi, main manage kar lungi, waise bhi poore din toh Ghar par akele rehti hu, isi bahane se maaji se milna hoga.

Sandy: (Smile karte hue) Theek hai lekin tum manage kar logi na ?? Kahin Kushal ya uske ghar walo ko bahar se baat pata chalegi toh tumhe takleef sehni padegi aur mujhe bura lagega ki meri wajah....

Anu: (Apne daen haat ki ungliyon ko Sandy ke hothon par rakh kar use chup karate hue) Maine kaha na main manage kar lungi aur rahi baat Kushal ki toh mujhe jo use batana hain woh main bata dungi.

Pata nahi kyu par achanak se Anu ka yun apna haath ki ungliyon ko Sandy ke honthon par rakhna aur use chup karane mein uske badan mein ek current sa daud jaata hain, wahi Sandy bhi hakka bakka reh kar Anu ki aankhon mein dekhte rehta hai, Anu jaise hosh mein aate hue apne aap ko sharm mein doobte hue mehsoos karti hai aur apna haath Sandy ke honthon se hata kar use pyaar bhari nazron se dekhti rehti hai aur kuch seconds baad use jaane ko kehti hai.

Anu: Tum jao ab apne ghar.

Sandy: (Apne sir ko haan mein hilate hue) Thank you number ke liye.

Sandy apne Ghar ke or chal padta hai uske dimag mein Anu ke haath ka sparsh apne honthon par abhi bhi feel ho raha tha. Kisi mantra mughda insaan ki tarah apne ghar ki or chala Jaa raha tha. Wahi Anu apne Ghar ka darwaza bandh karke apne daen haath ko bas dekhti hai aur us haath ko apne chehre ke kareeb lakar aur bhi dhyaan se dekhte hue sochti hai ki usne aese kaise apna haath uske honthon par rakh diya.

[val.coutinho]

good start val. its not easy to go from reader to writer. hoping that you will find this transition enjoyable and we too

Thank you bro.... 
The encouragement is all that's needed.... I have started it hopefully the future updates will be more hot but I want to write it like a full life story and not only just sex sex sex all the time..... 
Let's see how the outcome of it is... Hopefully readers will like it

[maitripatel]

अच्छी जा रही है कहानी

[val.coutinho]

अच्छी जा रही है कहानी

Thank you Maitri

[Yash121]

Zabardast

[val.coutinho]

Zabardast

Thank you Yash