07-02-2026, 04:49 PM
wah! Amazing update! bahut maza agaya yaar
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Adultery अनीता सिंह -- किरदार निभाना (Role Play)
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07-02-2026, 04:49 PM
wah! Amazing update! bahut maza agaya yaar
07-02-2026, 04:55 PM
ekdum dhamaka update! bahut h zabardast aur lajawab writings!
07-02-2026, 05:06 PM
Awesome update! Absolutely top class story writings!
07-02-2026, 05:17 PM
lajawab,mast,chamatkar aur zabardast kahaani!
07-02-2026, 06:27 PM
Outstanding,marvelous and stunning update!
07-02-2026, 06:42 PM
ekdom gajab update! mast aur faddu kahaani
07-02-2026, 06:50 PM
Superb! Lajawab aur zabardast update! bahut bahut mast writings!
07-02-2026, 06:58 PM
Ekdum gajab kahaani hai yah, bahut khoob
07-02-2026, 07:15 PM
bahut bahut shandar,bahut bahut mast,bahut bahut garam aur bahut bahut kamuk kahaani, bahut acha likha,bahut khoob!
07-02-2026, 07:22 PM
wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar,
behad hi shandaar, zabardast aur sexy story! bahut bahut maza agaya padhke!
07-02-2026, 07:41 PM
Absolutely wonderful and fantastic story!
07-02-2026, 08:12 PM
What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar
07-02-2026, 09:41 PM
mast,faadu aur lajawab update
08-02-2026, 01:13 AM
Ye Karim ki language kaisi hai? Match nhi hoti usper urdu bolna chahiye usko to
08-02-2026, 06:09 AM
(06-02-2026, 04:09 PM)Purvisharma Wrote: bahut hi shandaar update! (06-02-2026, 04:13 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: super sexiting (06-02-2026, 04:26 PM)Bonita Wrote: bahut khoob hi yaar!yah kahaani bahut hi mast tareeke se chal rahi hai. (06-02-2026, 05:58 PM)Lalu Mastan Wrote: Superb and blockbuster update (06-02-2026, 06:18 PM)Jhalla Wrote: Outstanding and extraordinary storytelling. (06-02-2026, 08:24 PM)Bhosdike. Wrote: Just awesome and superb update! Really excellent and wonderful writings! (06-02-2026, 08:49 PM)Felix Wrote: Lovely story with wonderful and excellent writing skills. (06-02-2026, 09:06 PM)Kala Nag Wrote: Very much interesting and exciting writings! (06-02-2026, 09:20 PM)Ruksana Parveen Wrote: bahut bahut mast aur awesome writings! (06-02-2026, 09:51 PM)Sabitri Roy Wrote: zabardast,lajawab,mast aur lovely writings! (07-02-2026, 12:16 AM)exbiixossip2 Wrote: jaan leva update (07-02-2026, 01:08 AM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: 30 mints name hona chahy story ka zabardast (07-02-2026, 01:27 AM)jroy1984 Wrote: Erotic.. (07-02-2026, 08:31 AM)Phallus Wrote: Just awesome and marvelous writing. (07-02-2026, 04:49 PM)Rohit Wrote: wah! Amazing update! bahut maza agaya yaar (07-02-2026, 04:55 PM)SweetSonali Wrote: ekdum dhamaka update! bahut h zabardast aur lajawab writings! (07-02-2026, 05:06 PM)Bimal Wrote: Awesome update! Absolutely top class story writings! (07-02-2026, 05:17 PM)Kartik69 Wrote: lajawab,mast,chamatkar aur zabardast kahaani! (07-02-2026, 06:27 PM)Raghu Wrote: Outstanding,marvelous and stunning update! (07-02-2026, 06:42 PM)बेटीचोद Wrote: ekdom gajab update! mast aur faddu kahaani (07-02-2026, 06:50 PM)Sajiya Noor Wrote: Superb! Lajawab aur zabardast update! bahut bahut mast writings! (07-02-2026, 06:58 PM)गांव की बहू Wrote: Ekdum gajab kahaani hai yah, bahut khoob (07-02-2026, 07:15 PM)Kupa Shamshu Wrote: bahut bahut shandar,bahut bahut mast,bahut bahut garam aur bahut bahut kamuk kahaani, bahut acha likha,bahut khoob! (07-02-2026, 07:22 PM)Divya Shetty Wrote: wah! ekdom lajawab,awesome aur kamaal ka kahaani, bahut h hot aur kamuk tharika se likha is kahaani ko aapne yaar, (07-02-2026, 07:41 PM)The Destroyer Wrote: Absolutely wonderful and fantastic story! (07-02-2026, 08:12 PM)Sameena. Wrote: What a fantastic update, bahut khoob! Bahut accha likha aapne yaar (07-02-2026, 09:41 PM)Jasmin. Wrote: mast,faadu aur lajawab update You Guys made my day. The next update will be in two to three days. Please review my other story in the meantime, i just posted latest update today in that story. Link is in the signature.
Deepak Kapoor
Author on amazon
https://xossipy.com/thread-71793.html -- अनीता सिंह --किरदार निभाना
08-02-2026, 12:32 PM
Absolutely mind blowing update! Very sexy and exciting writings!
08-02-2026, 04:29 PM
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(08-02-2026, 01:13 AM)Shahid Khan Wrote: Ye Karim ki language kaisi hai? Match nhi hoti usper urdu bolna chahiye usko to Good point noted .I think in start i was using some Urdu dialect , but since Urdu is not strong language for me , I switched to normal servant tone . I am presenting this story more as rich/poor scenario . Beautiful girl/dark servant . I do not like to play communal card . I do not know why i choose kareem name . it just happened . In my other story servant name is Sher Singh, who has come for Revenge to Sartaj House . I could start using Urdu language now but that would have associated kareem more as "Mus___" , i want to avoid that . I want to act more responsibly here in charged atmosphere . In my stories i will not let any character degrade/lust anybody on basis of religion. Hope you understand my logic .
Deepak Kapoor
Author on amazon
https://xossipy.com/thread-71793.html -- अनीता सिंह --किरदार निभाना
08-02-2026, 04:40 PM
Just awesome and absolutely thrilling story with brilliant writing skills. Hats off.
08-02-2026, 08:32 PM
extremely hot aur kamuk kahaani,
08-02-2026, 08:37 PM
bahut h mast aur lajawab update dhiya aapne yaar! behad hi kamuk aur garam writings!
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