Incest The Game of Sasur Bahu
(05-02-2026, 10:58 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: You're Welcome Maitri.....

Yes sure i will be viewing and commenting till the very end of this story.... its a good thing you re-started this story. 

This story somehow felt incomplete or rather was not ended properly.

All the best for your story and updates ahead just keep rocking the show.

Thank you, friend.


First of all, this story is not in English; so it's not a re-write, it's a fresh story for english readers.

Secondly, this story is incomplete on this platform; someone abandoned it, and it's in Hinglish, I think, I'm not sure.

I have also written this same story in Hindi font, and it's available on this forum. However, due to a lack of readers, I stopped writing it further.

Thank you again, and I hope you will continue to read the story and provide your honest feedback.


जी शुक्रिया दोस्त,


सब से पहले यह कहानी इंग्लिश में नहीं है मतलब यह री-स्टार्टेड नहीं है फ्रेश है।

दूसरा यह कहानी इस पल्त्फोर्म पर अधूरी ही है जिसे किसी ने छोड़ दिया है और वह हिंगलिश में है शायद, मुझे नहीं पता।

इसी कहानी को मैंने हिंदी फॉण्ट में भी लिखा है और यह इसी फोरम में उपलब्द्ध है। लेकिन पाठक नहीं होने के कारण मैंने उसे आगे लिखना बंद कर दिया है।

फिर से आपको शुक्रिया कहती हूँ और आगे कहानी का टेस्ट करते रहेंगे और अपनी प्रमाणिक व्युस देते रहेंगे।
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(05-02-2026, 11:14 AM)Akhilaa Wrote: Really good story.... Awasome but this story is not new... I read it before somewhere.... So you are the writer of the same story??

thanks 

Thanks for an appreciation

In English platform this story is new. Good if you read it. So by this you must have some refreshment.

When you don't know the writer till then consider me as an English writer of this story and enjoy.

I think people are more interested of content of the story than writer.

Thanks and stay tuned.
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(05-02-2026, 01:33 PM)maitripatel Wrote: Thank you, friend.


First of all, this story is not in English; so it's not a re-write, it's a fresh story for english readers.

Secondly, this story is incomplete on this platform; someone abandoned it, and it's in Hinglish, I think, I'm not sure.

I have also written this same story in Hindi font, and it's available on this forum. However, due to a lack of readers, I stopped writing it further.

Thank you again, and I hope you will continue to read the story and provide your honest feedback.


जी शुक्रिया दोस्त,


सब से पहले यह कहानी इंग्लिश में नहीं है मतलब यह री-स्टार्टेड नहीं है फ्रेश है।

दूसरा यह कहानी इस पल्त्फोर्म पर अधूरी ही है जिसे किसी ने छोड़ दिया है और वह हिंगलिश में है शायद, मुझे नहीं पता।

इसी कहानी को मैंने हिंदी फॉण्ट में भी लिखा है और यह इसी फोरम में उपलब्द्ध है। लेकिन पाठक नहीं होने के कारण मैंने उसे आगे लिखना बंद कर दिया है।

फिर से आपको शुक्रिया कहती हूँ और आगे कहानी का टेस्ट करते रहेंगे और अपनी प्रमाणिक व्युस देते रहेंगे।

You're welcome Maitri....
I'm sorry that you got me all wrong.... if you read my comment i have mentioned re-started not re-written.....
Yes the story was written in Hinglish... and maybe according to the writer it must be complete.... but it did feel like an incomplete end..... and good that you re-started the story again....
Generally people prefer to read in english or hinglish.... very few readers go ahead to read in hindi fonts..... I being brought up in Mumbai.... went to an english college where hindi was a subject.... so I'm weak at reading and writing hindi and its time consuming for me.... not that i cannot read and write hindi at all....
Please do not take the trouble of writing/commenting in hindi and english fonts just for me... hinglish or english any one is enough...
I will provide my honest opinion and comments till the end of the story its a promise..... keep up the good work.... all the best.
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(07-02-2026, 03:34 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: You're welcome Maitri....
I'm sorry that you got me all wrong.... if you read my comment i have mentioned re-started not re-written.....
Yes the story was written in Hinglish... and maybe according to the writer it must be complete.... but it did feel like an incomplete end..... and good that you re-started the story again....
Generally people prefer to read in english or hinglish.... very few readers go ahead to read in hindi fonts..... I being brought up in Mumbai.... went to an english college where hindi was a subject.... so I'm weak at reading and writing hindi and its time consuming for me.... not that i cannot read and write hindi at all....
Please do not take the trouble of writing/commenting in hindi and english fonts just for me... hinglish or english any one is enough...
I will provide my honest opinion and comments till the end of the story its a promise..... keep up the good work.... all the best.

Thank you, friend.

The unfortunate truth for the BHARAT and for us is that we haven't yet freed ourselves from mental slavery (Bondage). (By "The BHARAT," means I include myself.) So please don't take this personally.

In the BHARAT, outside of North BHARAT and to some extent West BHARAT, I do believe that many people don't understand or can't read and write Hindi.

The English language is ruling over us. The shameful thing is that even Parliament and the courts (major Govt. Agencies) are accepted its servility; you and I are far away.

Well we need to overcome from English slavery.

Thank you again, friend.

As for the story, it could be enjoyable if it unfolds in its own way. It's available in the language of your preferred one.


Thanks again and stay tuned........
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father-in-law and daughter-in-law game part 8

The father-in-law and daughter-in-law started fucking and Jabbar arrived
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Continuing from the previous part...
 
To understand the full story, read parts 1 to 7 of this story...
 
Now moving ahead...
 
Terms of words
 
Choot= Pussy, vagina
 
Lund= Cock,dick
 
PART 8
 
As soon as they were naked, they embraced and began kissing. Raja Saheb fondled and fondled his daughter-in-law's ample buttocks. Then, leaving his lips, Menaka kissed his chest, moving down to his Lund, and then, kneeling, began sucking it. Pressing his testicles in her soft hands, she sucked his Lund vigorously, leaving Raja Saheb moaning. Presented by Maitri.
 
He lifted her into his lap and went into the drawing room. There, he laid Menaka down on the sofa and began kissing her stomach. He began rubbing her clit with his finger.
 
"Oooh!" Menaka's sensual moans filled the deserted farmhouse. Raja Saheb's face leaned over her Choot, and he began licking her clitoris with his tongue. Menaka began to buck wildly and climaxed. Raja Saheb drank all the fluid that had come out of her Choot.
 
Then Raja Saheb stood up and stood behind her head. Menaka saw his Lund before her eyes, reached behind her hand and grabbed his buttocks. Tilting her head back, she took his Lund into her mouth once again and began sucking it. Raja Saheb moved his hand down and began squeezing her boobs and rubbing her nipples.
 
Just then, Raja Saheb had an idea. He removed his Lund from Menaka's mouth and ran towards the kitchen. Menaka was surprised, but by the time she got up, Raja Saheb had returned. He had a bowl in his hand. Raja Saheb sat down next to her and began spooning the contents of the bowl onto her boobs.
 
"Oooh!" Menaka moaned as she felt a cool wetness on her chest. She saw Raja Saheb covering her boobs with ice cream. Raja Saheb put his bowl aside and pounced on his daughter-in-law's ice cream-soaked boobs. Menaka went crazy. Raja Saheb licked her chest clean, then filled her navel with ice cream and then cleaned it with his tongue. written by Maitri.
 
Now it was her Choot's turn. Raja Saheb applied ice cream there too and then licked it clean. Menaka orgasmed twice with her father-in-law's ice cream-licking tongue. Now it was her turn. She got up, grabbed her father-in-law, and sat him down on the sofa. She scooped ice cream from her bowl and applied it to his Lund and testicles. Then she started licking them with her tongue. Sitting on the sofa with her legs dangling, Raja Saheb was in awe. As soon as Menaka licked the last drop of ice cream, he picked her up and, sitting on the sofa, placed her on his lap, on his Lund.
 
The two were now staring into each other's eyes. Menaka's Choot was locked with Raja Saheb's Lund, and she held his face in her hands, which she was kissing. Raja Saheb, too, held her body tightly in his arms, playing with her back and ass.
 
Menaka began kissing her father-in-law and moving her waist to fuck him. Raja Saheb's Lund was hitting her womb, and her Choot was flooded with fluids that were about to erupt.

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She held her father-in-law's head and bent it over her boobs. Raja Saheb also began sucking her boobs. Her boobs were now completely covered with the marks of his lips. Raja Saheb's testicles were also beginning to feel a mild ache. He grabbed his daughter-in-law's ass and, while sucking her nipples, released his cum with such force that Menaka orgasmed once again.

 
After they ejaculated, they both sat there kissing each other. "Is this farmhouse yours?" Maitri's creation.
 
"No, it's ours." He gestured towards himself and Menaka. Menaka looked down and saw his Lund, despite shrinking after ejaculation, still lying in her Choot as if it were still erect. She began to gently rub her Choot.
 
"This is one of those properties whose papers are in the study."
 
"You're going to donate it all, aren't you?"
 
"Yes, of course. But let's think about taking this farmhouse in our name and making it the home of our love. What do you say?"
 
In response, Menaka smiled and kissed his lips. The movements of her Choot made Raja Saheb's Lund hot again. He stood with his Lund still inside her Choot and moved towards the farmhouse bedroom. Written by Maitri.
 
Entering the bedroom, Menaka was shocked. The entire room seemed decorated for the wedding night. The room was filled with flowers, and the large bed in the center was strewn with red rose petals.
 
She looked at Raja Saheb questioningly. "I told the care tacker that someone I knew would be coming here with his new bride and staying overnight, so he did all this decorating for them. I also gave him leave on the pretext that the couple didn't want anyone to disturb them."
 
Raja Saheb laid down on the bed with Menaka in his arms and began to fuck her again. Menaka lay beneath him for a while, then, holding him; she turned him over, placed him under her, and began to fuck him from above, moving her waist. Her heavy boobs rubbed against her father-in-law's hairy chest, and her lips pressed against his lips.
 
 
They continued to fuck like this for a while, and then Raja Saheb turned her over, mounted on her, and began to fuck her. Their tossing and turning was crushing the rose petals and spreading a heady fragrance throughout the room. Menaka was flying high again. She tightened her legs around her father-in-law's waist and began thrusting from below. Raja Saheb pulled his Lund out completely, then inserted it all the way to the base in one stroke.
 
"Oooo... oooooo...!" Menaka screamed. Raja Saheb repeated the same action, fucking her harder. Menaka was completely out of control. She dug her nails into her father-in-law's ass, and her Choot began to squirt. The sting of her nails intensified Raja Saheb's waist movements, and he once again began to release his semen inside his daughter-in-law's Choot. Brought to you by Maitri.
 
****
 
When Raja Saheb woke up in the morning, he realized he was alone in bed. Menaka was probably in the bathroom. He got up and went to the kitchen, put on his underwear, pulled out his pants, took out his mobile phone, and started talking to Dr. Purandare in Bangalore.


That's it for the day.

See you soon with another update. until then from Maitri JAY BHARAT.
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Readers,

Please find above updates for your entertainment


I am awaiting your valued feedback here.
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(08-02-2026, 01:15 PM)maitripatel Wrote: Thank you, friend.

The unfortunate truth for the BHARAT and for us is that we haven't yet freed ourselves from mental slavery (Bondage). (By "The BHARAT," means I include myself.) So please don't take this personally.

In the BHARAT, outside of North BHARAT and to some extent West BHARAT, I do believe that many people don't understand or can't read and write Hindi.

The English language is ruling over us. The shameful thing is that even Parliament and the courts (major Govt. Agencies) are accepted its servility; you and I are far away.

Well we need to overcome from English slavery.

Thank you again, friend.

As for the story, it could be enjoyable if it unfolds in its own way. It's available in the language of your preferred one.


Thanks again and stay tuned........
Jai Bharat Maitri...
Thank you for the reply and wonderful update..... Please don't get angry and take the below para personal.....

English version is much more better.....
Hinglish would have been excellent I think....
Even words like choot should be replaced with pussy/cunt/vagina  and lund with cock/penis/dick.....

What's your opinion Maitri ??.....
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(09-02-2026, 01:20 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Jai Bharat Maitri...
Thank you for the reply and wonderful update..... Please don't get angry and take the below para personal.....

English version is much more better.....
Hinglish would have been excellent I think....
Even words like choot should be replaced with pussy/cunt/vagina  and lund with cock/penis/dick.....

What's your opinion Maitri ??.....

Thanks dost

Nothing personal here, Everyone has his own choice.

I do use those words in my stories......
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(09-02-2026, 02:41 PM)maitripatel Wrote: Thanks dost

Nothing personal here, Everyone has his own choice.

I do use those words in my stories......

Yes very true here what you said..... 

It sounds really erotic hearing such words like lund and choot......

When is the next update going to be posted ??
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(10-02-2026, 01:55 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Yes very true here what you said..... 

It sounds really erotic hearing such words like lund and choot......

When is the next update going to be posted ??

शुक्रिया दोस्त

आज शायद एक अपडेट दे दूंगी

बने रहिये कहानी के साथ
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Let's moving forward in this story...............

Hope this episode may attract you ro post some feedback.
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When Raja Saheb woke up in the morning, he realized he was alone in bed. Menaka was probably in the bathroom. He got up and went to the kitchen, put on his underwear, pulled out his pants, took out his mobile phone, and started talking to Dr. Purandare in Bangalore.

Moving forward from here............



The news was good; Vishwa was trying his best to quit his addiction. Raja Saheb was delighted, but then the thought of Menaka brought the smile to his face. He knew he would have to stop all this if Vishwa came, but he had fallen in love with Menaka's beauty and love. That's why he had planned this farmhouse trip. He wanted to enjoy the pleasures of love with Menaka to the fullest before his son's arrival.
 
Lost in these thoughts, he called Dushyant Verma, "How are you, friend?" Maitri's creation.
 
"Everything is fine, tell me your latest."
 
"I'm fine, did you find out anything about the man in the photo?"
 
"No, friend, it seems he's a bit of a scam. We haven't found any trace of him. He doesn't seem to be connected to Jabbar either. Jabbar is out of town these days, after all. I don't know where he is."
 
"Friend, Jabbar isn't bothering us here. That's why we fear he's either plotting a big conspiracy or has already begun one. I don't know why my gut tells me he's responsible for Vishwa's drug addiction!"
 
"Don't worry so much now, friend. Everything will be fine. My disciple, Manish, will get to the bottom of this matter and solve all your problems."
 
"I have complete faith in you, friend."
 
After that, the two friends exchanged some random words and hung up. Everything will be fine. It will be, but what about the relationship between Menaka and me? What is the destination of this relationship? Raja Saheb's mind was abuzz with questions when Menaka arrived. Brought to you by Maitri.
 
She was wearing a bathrobe that reached just up to her buttocks. "I need clothes!"
 
"You're already wearing them." Raja Saheb's heart felt light and he was in a playful mood upon seeing her.
 
"Please, Yash, give me some clothes." Menaka fidgeted like a child.
 
"Okay." Raja Saheb, still wearing only black underwear, went out to the car and brought a packet and handed it to her.
 
"This! whether I wear it or not is the same." Menaka was holding a red two-piece string bikini.
 
"Hey, just try it and show me."
 
"I'll put it on, and you'll take it off in two minutes. You've been making me miserable all night. I don't have the strength to do it today. Please give me some decent clothes."
 
"Hey, darling! Just try it on and show me." Raja Saheb insisted.
 
"I'll wear it on one condition."
 
"What?"
 
"After I wear it, you won't touch me at all."
 
"What kind of strange condition is that? You'll enjoy making love even more after wearing it. Please, forget about this condition and show me how you look like."
 
"Un-hyung, I'll wear it if you agree to my condition."


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"Okay, I agree to the condition, but I also have one condition: you'll take off your clothes yourself, and then I'll make love to you for as long as I want."

 
"Okay, just wait, I am sure, I won't take off my clothes myself."
 
Menaka unzipped her bathrobe and slid it off her body. Now she was completely naked, only the chain hanging from her neck, caressing her boobs. Menaka picked up her bikini panties, pulled them up her legs, covered her Choot, and began tying the strings around her waist. Her eyes were fixed on her father-in-law's face, and a mischievous smile played on her lips.
 
Rajasaheb's lips were dry. He stared at his daughter-in-law with hungry eyes. Menaka picked up her bikini bra, put it around her neck, and reached behind her hands to tie the strings. Then, turning around, she presented her velvety back to her father-in-law, "Tie it, please! And yes, don't touch." Written by Maitri.
 
Rajasaheb was faced with his daughter-in-law's nearly bare back, and her ass barely contained in her swimsuit panties. He reached out and tied the strings. Menaka took out the food, signaled her father-in-law to sit, and began serving him breakfast, bending down, her boobs dangling in front of his mouth. Rajasaheb's hunger was nothing compared to his lust. As long as they continued talking, his eyes kept staring at his daughter-in-law's cleavage peeking out from under her bikini top.
 
Menaka was thoroughly enjoying teasing her father-in-law. She got up, turned around, and walked out of the kitchen. Raja Saheb followed her.
 
Menaka knew that her father-in-law was drawn to her by her beauty, and that his hands were tied due to the condition. She decided to tease him further and began walking with her buttocks swaying a little more. Raja Saheb's Lund was eager to tear through his underwear and come out.
 
Menaka came to the pool behind the farmhouse, "Wow! What a beautiful pool!" She dived into it and started swimming. Raja Saheb sat there and started watching the mermaid. As Menaka swam and moved up and down in the water, her boobs seemed to be eager to come out of her bra.
 
Just then, Menaka came and stood in front of her father-in-law in that part of the pool where there was only 4 feet of water. The drops of water on her fair body were shining like diamonds.
 
 
"What happened, Yash? Do all well?" She said, stretching her arms above her head. This made her breasts even more visible through the neck of her bra. Raja Saheb was in great pain, but what could he do? He had agreed to the bet. Maitri Patel's creation.
 
Menaka swam around the pool twice and then stood there, teasing her father-in-law with her antics. But this time Raja Saheb had already thought of a way to tease her. He stood up and took off his underwear. Raja Saheb's Lund emerged, throbbing. Raja Saheb took it in his hand and began stroking it.

That's it for the day........

See you soon with another update.

Until then from Maitri JAY BHARAT.
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