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Ek Anokhee Love Story
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Aaahhh aaahhhh jaaanuuuu…. hhhmmmm…. aaaahhhh… aur jor se….  aese awazien aa rahi thi ek chawl ke room se…..


Doston main ek story likhne jaa raha hu, kuch kisse sach (real life) hai kuch kalpanik (fictional)…. Names have been changed for secrecy….. pehli koshish hain dekhte hain kaisi lagti hai aap sab readers ko, please comment on the story and updates, also please let me know if I should continue this story or no.

 

Main characters :

 

Sandy: Ek oil field worker, single, staying with his mother

 

Anupriya : Newly wedded wife to Kushal.

 

Kushal: Anupriya’s husband and childhood friend of Sandy.

 

Additional characters:

 

Namrata: Sandy’s mother.

 

Kanchan: Kushal’s sister.

 

Kaushal: Kushal’s father.

 

 

Update 01:

 

Doston yeh kahani hai Mumbai ke ek hisse ki, jo middle class family se bhari padi hai, middle class hone ki wajah se sab aas paas padosi apne apne kaam mein mast rehte hai, sirf chhutee ke din kuch dost milte hai aur ghap shap ladate hain.

 

Ab chalte hai kahani ki or

 

Sandy, umra 26 saal, ek jimmedar ladka, apni aur apni maa ka khyaal rakhne wala, oil field mein kaam karta hai, jo ek mahine samundar mein kaam par rehta hai, aur ek mahina ghar par apni maa ke sath. Kushal aur Sandy dono bachpan ke dost hain dono ke umar same hai, kyu ki dono ka janam ek hi saal mein hua tha. Dono dost bachpan se ek saath rahe, ek saath khele, ek hi college mein padhe, bas fark itna hai ki Sandy ke pita ki maut tab hui jab Sandy chota tha, toh uske maa ne kaise taise use college complete karaya, ghar ki halath kuch khaas nahi thi, toh Sandy part time job ke saath apni correspondence studies karta raha. Graduation ke baad us ne kuch companies mein kam salary mein kaam kar raha, tab use ek accha break mila oil field join karne ka jisse use salary almost 10 juna jyada salary milne ka mauka dikha aur usne woh le li.

 

Dono dost apne apne life mein busy rahe, jab Sandy ghar par holidays par hota toh dono dost milte ghappe ladate, kabhi kabar ghumne jaate, Sandy ki life acchi chal rahi thi, ab use koi chinta nahi thi, na hi paise ki na hi koi tension thi.

 

Dekhte dekhte do saal nikal gaye, Sandy ne apne ghar ko achhe se renovate kar ke le liya apne bal boote par, ek din jab Sandy rig par se apni maa se satellite phone se baat kar raha tha, tab use apne dost Kushal ki shaadi tay hone ki baat pata chali.

 

Namrata: Beta Sandy, kaisa hai tu ?

 

Sandy: Main theek hu maa, aap kaisi ho ?

 

Namrata: Beta, apne Kushal ki shaadi tay ho gayi hai.

 

Sandy: Kya???, Us gadhe ne mujhe ghar par tha tab kuch bataya nahi.

 

Namrata: Ab use gadha kyu bol raha hai.. Tujhe pata hai na Kaushal bhai sahab kaise hai, jald baaji mein uska rishta tay kar diya

 

Sandy: Accha, mujhe ghar aane do uski class leta hu… mazak mein…. hehehehe

Accha maa, ab phone rakhna padega, dusre bhi wait kar rahe hain apne apne ghar par baat karne.

 

Namrata: Apna khyaal rakhna

 

Sandy: Haan maa aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna, bas 10 din aur bache hain. Bye maa

 

Namrata: Bye beta.

 

10 din baad jab Sandy ghar pahucha toh Namrata use dekh kar bahut khush hui, who ghar par aa kar fresh hua aur bahar tehelne nikla, uski yeh aadat ban gayi thi, ghar se nikalte hi kuch dur use Kushal kaam se aate hue saamne se dikh jaata hai.

 

Sandy: Kushal, yaar tumne engagement kar li aur apne is bachpan ke dost ko bataya bhi nahi….

 

Kushal: Arre yaar Sandy….. kya batau, pitaji ne bas baat ched di aur teesre din sagai karvadi, mujhe toh ladki dekhne sagai ke din mili,

Yeh bata tu kaisa hai ?

 

Sandy: Kaisa dikh raha hu tujhe ???

 

Kushal: Ek dum mast har baar ki tarah.

 

Sandy: Chal aa jaa jaake ek ek beer mar ke aate hain.

 

Kushal: Nahi yaar abhi abhi kaam se lauta hu, aaj bahut kaam tha office mein thak gaya hu, fir kabhi chalte hain.

 

Sandy: (Koi jor jabardasti nahi karte hue) Accha theek hai jaise teri marji, Waise teri shaadi kab fix hui hai ??

 

Kushal: Bas yaar agle mahine ke 20 taarik ko. Tu hai na mere shaadi mein ?

 

Sandy: Ab kya batau yaar, 18 ko meri joining hai… shaayad nahi attend kar paunga teri shaadi.

 

Kushal: Kya yaar 2 din ki toh baat hai chhutee extend kar le na..

 

Sandy: Dekhta hu agar kuch jugaad hota hai toh. Chal ab main chalta hu bahut pyaas lagi hai…. Hahahaha.

 

Kushal: Haan tu jaa…. nahi toh pyaasa reh jayega meri wajah se…. Hehehehe

 

Dono dost viprit disha mein nikal padte hai.

 

Sandy ki chhutee khatam hone to aati hai toh woh Kushal ke ghar jaa kar usse milta hai, aur dono dost mein baat cheet hote hote Kushal Sandy se kehta hai

 

Kushal: Sandy main tujhe apni shaadi mein miss karunga. (Bheech mein Kushal ki behen Kanchan bhi bolti hai)

 

Kanchan: Sandy rukk jao na, tum dono bachpan ke dost, mere bhi dost, hamara 2 ghar 1 family jaisa rishta hai, toh us ke khaatir ruk jao na.

 

Sandy: Kanchan, Kushal, kya main nahi jaanta tum sab mere parivaar ho, lekin maine koshish ki office se baat ki, mere reliever se baat ki, lekin koi sunne ko ready nahi hai, who keh rahe hai, ya toh naukri chhodo ya fir apne ghar ka function. Ab tum log hi batao main kya karu ??

 

Sandy sab ki bidai lekar uth kar jaane lagta hai toh Kushal use bahar tak chhodne jaata hai tab, Sandy use ek envelope pakda deta hai, kehta hai yeh tere shaadi ke liye hai, Kushal mana kar deta hai lekin Sandy use jor jabardasti pakda deta hai aur kehta hai, jarurat ke waqt kaam ayega aur yeh bhi kehta hai ki aur kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hoga toh maa se bol dena, maine maa ko already bol rakha hai, yeh sunkar aur envelope ke andar dekh kar Kushal ke aankhein num ho jaati hai.

 

Kushal: Bhai yeh toh 1 lakh hai….

 

Sandy: Haan toh kya hua rakh le.

 

Dono dost gale milte hain aur Sandy waha se apne ghar nikal jaata hai, agli subah Sandy apne kaam ke liye nikal padta hai, 5 din baad who apni maa ko rig se phone karta hai

 

Sandy: Maa kaisi ho aap ?

 

Namrata: Main theek hu, tu kaisa hai mera raja beta ?

 

Sandy: Main bhi theek hu, Kushal ki shaadi kaisi rahi ?

 

Namrata: Sab kuch acche se hua, sab ne reception enjoy kiya, bas tum hi nahi the.

 

Sandy: Ab kya karta maa…. Kaam par rehta nahi toh ghar par berozgar baithna padta.

Kuch yahan wahan ki baatein karne ke baad Sandy ne phone bye bol kar cut kar diya.

 

Aese hi din beet gaye aur Sandy ka ghar aane ka waqt aa gaya, Sandy rig se utar kar apne ghar ki taraf jaa raha tha, jaate waqt use Kushal ke ghar ke saamne se gujarna padta tha, jaise hi woh Kushal ke ghar ke saamne aaya, usse ek ladki Kushal ke ghar se haste hue nikli aur Sandy se takra gayi, un dono ki takkar aesi thi ki who ladki us ke uppar aur Sandy uske neeche, jab dono gire to us ladki ki choochiyaan Sandy ki chhaatee mein gad gayi aur us ladki ke hoth Sandy ke hoth se takra gaye aur Sandy ke haath us ladki ki kamar mein chale gaye, dono kuch der aese hi rahe, Kushal ki hasi aur awaz dono ke kaan mein padte hi dono ko hosh aaya, dono uthne lage tab Kushal wahan pahunch gaya, Sandy uthe ke baad us ladki ki madmast jawani, dil hila deni wali khoobsoorti, mast badi badi choochiyaan jo ki us waqt pehne kurti mein tang thi, patli kamar jise usne mehsoos kiya tha kuch der pehle, Kushal ke taraf dekha, toh Kushal ne use kaha, aate aate hi apni bhabhi ke gale lag gaya hahahahaha aur jor jor se hasne laga.

 

Sandy ne bhi haste hua kaha, arre bhai gale toh lag hi gaya hu toh ab pehchan bhi toh karva de, aur khud bhi khilkhila ne laga, woh ladki un dono ko dekh kar jaise sharma gayi aur Kushal ki taraf jaate hue usse poochne lagi yeh kaun hai, Kushal ne use bataya ki yeh mera bachpan ka dost Sandy hai aur fir Sandy se kaha, Sandy yeh Anupriya hai, tumhari bhabhi aur meri patni. Sandy ne Anupriya ko fir se dekha aur sar ko thoda sa jhuka kar hello jannat ki pari kaha, Anupriya ki aankhein bad ho gayi aur us ke taraf hairat se dekhne lagi. Kushal ne Anupriya se kaha yeh aesa hi hai majakiya, us ki majakiya baaton par aitraaz mat karna, woh sab ke saath aese hi rehta hai.

 

Kuch din aese hi beet gaye itne dino mein Sandy aur Anupriya mein sirf hi hello ya fir sirf smile ki len den hi chalti rahi, fir kuch din aur beetne ke baad un dono mein kuch baatein chali, jaise ki khaana khaaya, kya khaaya, etc etc. Kuch din aur beetne ke baad, Sandy apni nayi Royal Enfield lekar ghar ke paas aaya, bike ki awaz sunkar, Kushal aur uske saare ghar wale bahar aate hain, aur Sandy ki maa bhi bahar aa jati hai, bike ko dekh kar Kaushal uncle Sandy ko badhaee dete hai, uske baad Kanchan, fir Kushal aur sab se aakhri mein Anupriya apna haath badha kar Sandy se haath mila kar use badhaee deti hai, Sandy Anu ka haath pakad ke ek anjana current sa apne badan mein mehssos karta, aur kuch der haath mein haaath rakhne ke baad Sandy uska haath chhod deta hai, Anu Sandy se nayi bike ki khakee colour us par khoob jam rahi hai kehti hai aur party ki demand karti hai. Namrata (Sandy ki maa bhi use badhaee deti hai

 

Sandy: Jaroor kab chahiye party batao de dunga.

 

Anu: Abhi chahiye party.

 

Sandy: Theek hai chalo fir sab, kisi restaurant mein chalte hai.

 

Kaushal: Arre main kahan tum sab log ho aao, yeh party restaurant mere bas ki baat nahi.

 

Sab ki aagrah karne par bhi Kaushal uncle saaf mana karte hain, Sandy sab log se aur apni maa se kehta hai tayyar hone ke liye lekin uski maa bhi jaane se mana kar deti hai, kehti hai tum log jao, tum jawan log enjoy karke aao,

 

Namrata, ghar ke andar jaa kar wapis aati hai aur bike ki aur Sandy ki nazar utarti hai.

Kuch hi minton mein 4 log (Sandy, Kushal, Kanchan aur Anupriya) waha se chal padte hai restaurant ke or, Kushal aur Anupriya, Kushal ke bike par, Sandy aur Kanchan Sandy ke bike par. Sabhi log restaurant pahuch kar apni apni pasand ki cheezen order karte hain aur hasi mazak mein khaate rehte hain, is beech mein Sandy aur Anu ki nain ek dusre se kayi baar takrate hain, dono ek dusre ko dekh kar muskurate hain, yeh sab Kushal aur Kachan ki nazron se chori chupe ho rahi thi, dono ek dusre chori chupe taakathein rehte hain, kuch der baad Sandy ishare is Anu ko ghar jaate waqt apni bike par baitne ka ishara karti hai, toh Anu use apni palkein bandh kar ke sahmati ki ishara karti hai. Dinner ke baad Sandy jaa kar counter par bill pay karta hai, aur sabhi apni apni bike ke paas pahuchte hain, tab Anu Kushal se kehti hai, kya main Sandy ke saath uske bike par baith kar ghar tak aa jaun ? Kushal use smile dekar kehta hai theek hai aur apni behen se kehta hai tu mere saath aaja, teri bhabhi ko Sandy ke saath baithne, use bhi nayi bike ki feel lene de.

 

Kanchan Kushal ki or jaati hai aur Anu Sandy ki or aati hai, jaise ki dono ladkiyan bike par baithi hain, Sandy Kushal se kehta hai, ghar jaane se pehle kyu na kuch der biking ho jaaye, thoda ghum fir kar ghar jaate hai, Kushal Anupriya aur Kanchan ki taraf dekhta hai, dono koi aitraaj nahi dikhati, dono bike par nikal padte hai, kuch der ke baad Sandy thodi bike tezi se bhagate hue Kushal se aage pahuch jaata hai to Anu Sandy se poochti hai.

 

Anu: Mujhe restaurant mein kyu ghoor rahe the tum ?

 

Sandy: Main kya akele hi tumhe ghoor raha tha ? Tum bhi toh mujhe ghoor rahi thi.

 

Anu: Main nahi ghoor rahi thi, main bas dekh rahi thi tumhe.

 

Sandy: Main bhi toh tumhe dekh hi raha tha

 

Anu: Agar aese dekhte waqt dono bhai behen ne hum dono ko dekh liya hota toh kya sochte dono ?

 

Sandy: Dekha toh nahi na, kyu fikar karti ho tum befuzool

 

Anu: Aur mujhe apni bike par baithne ke liye kyu ishaare kar rahe the restaurant mein ?

 

Sandy: Toh kya hua ? Tumhe nayi bike par baith kar feel nahi lena tha kya ? Aur madam tumne hi apni palke jhuka ke sehmati di na, di ki nahi ?

 

Anu: Haan di kyu ki mujhe tumhari bike par baithna tha, is nayi bike ki feel leni thi.

 

Itne baat cheet ke dauran ek speed breakar aata hai to Sandy break maar deta hai, jis wajah se bike ek jhatke slow hojati hai, aur Anu apne aap ko bachane ke liye Sandy ke kandhon par haath rakhti hai lekin fir bhi apni chuchiyon ko Sandy ki peeth par takrane se nahi rok paati, jab Anu ki chuchiyaan Sandy ki peeth se lagti hai toh woh aaahhhh ki awaz karta hai, toh Anu usse poochti hai.

 

Anu: Sandy kya hua ?

 

Sandy: Tumhare ang ka sabse naram hissa meri peeth mein chubh gaya… aaahhhh

 

Anu: (Banavati gusse se Sandy ke khande par chapat lagate hue) bahut badatameej ho tum.

 

Sandy: (Muskurate hue) Badatameej hota toh yeh karta (kehkar apna baya haath peeche le jaakar, Anu ki dayi chuchi ko daba deta hai)

 

Anu: Aaahhhh, kya kar rahe ho tum

Kehkar Sandy ka haath pakad leti hai lekin apni chuchi se hathati nahi hai, Sandy mauke ki nazakat ko samajh kar fir se apni mutthee bandh kar ke Anu ki chuchi ko fir se daba deta, Anu ki mooh se fir se ek siskari nikalti hai, aur Sandy apna haath Anu ki chuchi se nikal kar handle par rakhta hai, Anu uske kandhe par fir se maar kar kehti hai

 

Anu: Tum bahut hi shaatir ho, mujhpar chance marne keliye tumne mujhe bike par baithne ka ishara kiya… Hain na ?

 

Sandy: Nahi toh maine tum par chance lene ke liye tumhe nahi apni bike par bithaya.

 

Anu: Toh fir tumne yeh kyu kiya ?

 

Sandy: (anjaan bante hue) Maine kya kiya ?

 

Anu: Wahi jo abhi abhi tumne kiya

 

Sandy: Maine toh speed breaker aaya toh break maari

 

Anu: Uske baad jo tumne kiya

 

Sandy: Anu khul kar bolo, mujhe samaj nahi aa raha tum kiske baare mein baat kar rahi ho

 

Anu: Wahi joh tumne mere saath kiya tumhe badatameej bolne ke baad

 

Sandy: Acha woh….. Woh toh demo tha ki agar main badatameej hota toh kya kar sakta tha.

 

Anu: (Nakhre wala gussa dikha ke) Pata hai kitna dukh raha hai… (ab Anu garam bhi hone lagi thi)

 

Sandy: (Jaanbhujkar anjaan bane hue) Kya dukh raha hai ?

 

Anu: Ab itne bhi anjaan mat bano ?

 

Sandy: Ab mujhe kaise pata chalega ki tumhara kya dukh raha hai ?

 

Anu: (kuch sochte hue) Apna baya haath do mujhe.

 

Sandy apna baya haath peeche Anu ki taraf karte hue, mann hi mann muskurata hai, Anu uska haath pakad kar apni dayi chuchi par rakh deti hai, aur Sandy ke kaan ke paas apna mooh lakar kehti hai.

 

Anu: Ab samajh mein aaya kya dukh raha hai aur khud muskura deti hai.

 

Sandy: (Mauka dekh kar fir se chuchi ko daba deta hai lekin is baar thoda pyaar se aur apne haath se Anu ki chuchi ko sehlane lagta hai) Ab samajh mein aaya meri raani sahiba. Ab toh nahi dukh raha hai na ?

Anu: (Garam hote hue apne honth Sandy ke kaan ke paas laate hue) Ab nahi dukh raha.

 

Sandy ke mann mein jaise laddoo phoot rahe the, woh kabhi uski chuchi ko halke se dabata ya fir halke sehlata, dono ki siskiya nikal rahi thi, Anu jo apni chuchi dabwane se ho rahi thi aur Sandy uski chuchi dabane se garam ho raha tha, uska lund pant ke kaid se aazaad hona chah raha tha, Kuch meter ka faasla tay karne ke baad unhe Kushal ki bike ki horn ki awaz aayi toh dono hosh mein aate hain, Sandy apna haath Anu ki chuchi se hata kar handle pakad leta hai aur tabhi Kushal apni bike Sandy ke bike ke bagal mein laate hue kehta hai.

 

Kushal: Bhai kitna tezz bhagata hai tu bike. Kahan teri nayi bike, kahan meri yeh juni purani bike

 

Sandy: Kahan itna tezz bhagaya, aur isi ne kaha mujhe tezz bhagane ko (Anu ki taraf ishara karte hue)

 

Anu: Maine kaha toh kya mere patidev ko peeche chhod doge.

 

Sandy: Haan  biklul ( kehke bike ko fir se bhagane lagta hai)

 

Anu: (Sandy ke khande par fir se chapat maarte hue) Bahut shararati ho tum Sandy.

 
Dono bike bhagate hue, hasi mazak karte hue ghar pahuch jaate hai, Anu Sandy ki bike se utar kar use pyaar bhare nazar se dekhti hai, aur udhar Kachan bhi apne bhai ke bike se utarti hai, dono dost apni apni bike ko park karte hai aur fir se Anu aur Sandy ki nazrein milti hain, Sabhi log Sandy ko treat ke liye thank you bolte hain lekin is baar Anu fir se apna haath aage badha ke Sandy se milate hue congratulations bolti hai, Sandy uska matlab samajh jaata hai aur thank you bolta hai. Sandy apne ghar ki taraf badhta hai aur Kushal, Kanchan aur Anupriya apne ghar ki taraf, lekin Sandy ke mann mein kuch shaq paida hota hai ki Anu use peeche se dekh rahi hai, woh ghar ke andar daakhil hone se pehle Kushal ke ghar ke taraf dekhta hai toh uska shaq yakeen mein badal jaata hai, Anu use hi jaate hue dekh rahi thi, dono ki nazrein milti hai aur dono ek dusre ko smile karte hain aur apne apne ghar mein daakhil ho jaate hain.
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Update 02:
 
Sandy apne ghar ke andar chala jaata hai, woh apni maa ko good night bol kar apne kamare mein chala jaata hai aur kapde badal kar bed par leta rehta, uski aankon mein neend ka namon nishan nahi tha, tabhi woh apne bayi haath ko upar utha kar dekhta rehta hai, uske dimag mein ab sirf, Anu ki mast kasi hui chuchi hi ghoom rahi hoti hai, uski feel ko woh jaise bhool hi nahi paa raha tha, woh apni mutthi ko bandh karke aese jatata hai jaise woh fir se Anu ki kasi hui chuchi daba raha ho, fir woh apna wahi haath apne chehre ke paas laata hai aur use gaur se dekhne lagta hai.
 
Dusri taraf, Kanchan ghar mein jaa kar apne pita ko good night bol kar apne kamre mein chali jaati hai, wahi Kushal aur Anu dono pita ko good night apne kamre jaate hai, Kushal kamre mein jaate hi fresh hone chala jaata hai, Anu kamre ko theek karke Kushal ka bahar aane ka wait karti hai, Kushal bahar aate hi Anu ko pakad leta hai aur use apne se chipka leta hai, dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kuch der dekhte hai aur fir Kushal apne honth Anu ke par rakh deta hai aur Anu ke honth ko halke se chusne lagta hai, Anu bhi Kushal ke honth ko kuch der chusne ke baad use door dhakel kar muskurate hue kehti hai,
Anu: tum fresh hokar aa gaye ab mujhe fresh hone do.
 
Kushal: Arre kuch der toh  ruko na.
 
Anu: Nahi mujhe fresh hona hai.
 
Kushal use peeche se apni baahon mien bhar leta hai aur fir se vinti bhare swar mein kehta hai, please kuch der ke liye ruko na.
 
Anu: Nahi bilkul nahi, mujhe fresh hone do us ke baad jo karna hai kar lena,
itna hi kehkar Anu sharma jaati hai aur uske baahon mein se nikal kar washroom mein bhaag jaati hai, andar jaakar, woh apne aap ko aaine mein dekhti hai, use sharam bhi aa rahi thi aur Sandy ki yaad bhi aa rahi thi, use apni kurti mein se jhaankti hui chuchi aaine mein dikayaii deti hai, na chahte hue bhi uske apna baya haath apni dayi chuchi par chala jaata hai aur us chuchi ko pehle mehsoos karke, sehlati hai aur fir use halka sa daba deti hai, jaise hi chuchi ko dabati hai uske mooh se ek halki si siskaari nikal jaati hai…. Siiiiiii, uhmmm, uski nazar aaine mein apne daen chuchi par rakhe hue baen haath par hi rehta, woh fir kuch soch kar baen haath se apni daen chuchi ko thoda jor se daba deti hai jiske karan uske mooh se aur thodi tez siskari nikalti hai…. Siiiii… aaahhhh…. Sandyyyy….
 
Woh pehle hi bike par Sandy ke haathon garam ho gayi thi, fir Kushal ne use chum kar aur apni baahon mein bhar kar aur garam kar diya tha, washroom mein aakar khud ke chuchi ke saath khelkar, uski aag aur bhadak gayi thi, woh aur time nahi waste karna nahi chahti thi isliye jaldi se fresh hokar apne saath towel ke neeche chupa ke laayi hui sexy nighty ko dekhti hai, aur jaldi se apni kurti aur pajama utar kar sirf bra aur panty mein khadi reh kar apne aap ko aaine mein niharti hai, fir kuch soch kar, apni bra ko utar deti hai, woh apni kasi hui chuchiyon ko dekh muskurati hai, use apne kasi hui, gori, aur gulabi nipple se tarashi hui dono chuchiyon ko dekh kar garv hota hai, Anu fir se apne dono haath apne pet par se ferte hue apne chuchiyon ki taraf le jaati hai, aur daen haath se dayi chuchi aur baen haath se bayi chuchi ko pakad kar daba deti hai, ease karte hi woh, fir se sisak padti hai, aaaahhh…. ssiiiii… uuhhhmm, uski badan mein lagi aag ab bhadak kar shola ban chuki thi.
 
Kushal bahar se betaab hote hue awaz laga kar Kehta hai
Kushal: Anu kitni der aur lagaogi ?
 
Anu jo washroom mein apne mein magan thi, awaz sunkar
Anu: bas 5 minute
 
Anu jo ab andar se aag mein jhulas rahi thi, fresh bhi nahi hui thi, woh jaldi se anpe saath laayi hui towel ka aadha hissa geela karti hai aur apna cheha aur badan ponch deti hai aur apni panty utar kar, apni choot jo thodi si geeli ho chuki hoti hai use bhi ponch deti hai fir aadhe towel jo sookha hua tha usse apna badan sukha deti hai aur jaldi se apni sexy wali nighty pehen leti hai. Woh nighty pehen ne ke baad apne aap ko niharti hai, aur mann hi mann kehti hai Kushal aaj toh tumhari khair nahi, uske chehre par ek muskaan si aa jaati hai. Anu ki nighty bahut hi sexy thi, kandhe par patle patle do straps, aage ka gala chuchiyon ke ubhar se lekar dono chuchiyon ki ghati tak gol aakar mein tha, uska cleavage puri tarah dikh raha tha, dono chuchiyon ki pink nipples ki chhap nighty mein se halke halke dikh rahe the, chuchiyon ke neeche se nighty semi transparent thi jo uske sapat pet ko puri tarah darsha rahi thi, pet se neeche uski nighty uski ubhri hui gaand ke poore shape ko dikha rahi thi aur uski night mid thigh par jaakar khatam hoti hai.
 
Anu apne baalon ka bun banake apne sar ke peeche bandh deti hai aur ek latt apne chehre ke right side par chhod deti hai, koi use us waqt dekhe toh koi swarg ki apsara, ya sakhshaat Menaka dharti par utar aayi hai aese legti hai, woh apne aap ko aakhri baar apne aap ko aaine mei dekh kar washroom ke darwaze ko khol kar bahar aati hai, Kushal usko dekh kar mantra mugdha reh jaata hai, uska mooh khula ka khula hi reh jaata hai, ab tak leta hua Kushal uth kar bed par baith jaata hai, Anu usko dekh kar muskurate hue uske kareeb aati hai aur uske chin ko padak kar uska mooh bandh karke kehti hai.
 
Anu: Kya hua ? Mooh kyu khula ka khula reh gaya ?
 
Kushal: Sakshaat Menaka swarg lok se padhari hai mere paas is bedroom mein toh mooh khulega nahi kya ?
 
Anu: (Muskurate hue) Accha ?
 
Kushal: Aur nahi toh kya…
 
Itna ke kar woh Anu ko apne uppar kheench leta hai, Anu ke mooh se ouch nikalti hai aur dono ke chehre ek dusre ke saamne hote hain.
 
Anu: Aese kya dekh rahe ho ?
 
Kushal: Kitni sundar apsara mili hai mujhe.
 
Kehkar Kushal apne honth aage badha kar Anu ke honth par rakh deta hai aur dono ek dusre ko pyaar se chumne lagte hai, Kushal ke haath ab Anu ke peeth par fir rahe the, aur Anu ke haath Kushal ke chehre ko pakde hue uske honthon ko choom rahi thi, dono ka chumban ap aur gehra hota chala jaata hai, dono ek dusre ke honthon ko chusne mein lag jaate hai, kabhi Kushal Anu ke honth ko choosta toh kabhi Anu Kushal he honth ko choosti, dono honthon ko chooste hue jeebh se jeebh bhi ladane lagte hai, dono mooh khol kar chumne lagte hai, utne mein, Kushal Anu ki jeebh ko apne mooh mein lekar chusne lagta hai, yeh mehsoos karke, Anu apni jeebh aur uske mooh mein ghusane lagti hai, Kushal Anu ki jeebh chooste hue uske uppar aa jaata hai, toh Anu apni jeebh uske mooh se wapis apne mooh mein lene lagti hai, Kushal apni jeebh Anu ke jeebh se ladate hue uske mooh mein daakhil karta hai, Anu jise mehsoos karke Kushal ki jeebh ko acche se chusne lagti hai, dono chumne aur chusne mein lage hue the, dono ki saansein garam aur tez chal rahi thi.
 
Kushal Anu ko isi tarah chumte hue apna baen haath uski kamar par rakh kar sehlane lagta hai, dono abhi bhi chumne mein lage the, Kushal apna baen haath ko kamar se uppar ki taraf lakar Anu ki daen chuchi par rakh deta hai aur use halkse daba deta hai, Anu Kushal ko chumte hue uske mooh mein siskar uthathi hai…. siiii…. uhhhmmmm…. Kushal uski daen chuchi koi aur thoda jor se daba deta hai, is baar Anu chumban todkar…. aaaahhhhh Kuuusshhhaalll kehkar usse aur lipat jati hai, Kushal ab Anu ki gardan par chumne lagta hai, Anu bhi apni gardan ko adjust karke uske baalon pyaar se ferti rehti hai, Anu ki choot ab geeli ho rahi thi, wahi Kushal ka lund uske shorts mein tann raha tha, Kushal garden ko chumte chumte Anu ke kandhe ko chumne lagta hai, chumte chumte woh wahan halke halke chusne bhi lagta hai, woh uske nighty ke baen strap ko kandhe se sarkane lagta hai aur sath sath apne baen hath se Anu ki daen chuchi ko dabate rehta hai, Kushal Anu ke kandhe se straps sarkate hue uske gale ko chumne lagta hai aur chumte hue Anu ke chuchiyon ke ubhar tak pahunch jaata hai, woh uske baen chuchi ke ubhar ko chumte hue, uski nighty ko chuchi se hata deta hai aur Anu ki gori, kasi aur pink nipple ko dekh kar us par toot padta hai, Kushal Anu ki nipple ko jeebh ke nok se chedne lagta hai, Anu apne nipple par Kushal ki jeebh ko mehsoos karke sisak uthati hai…. Siiiiiii….. Aaahhh… Kushallllll, Kushal Anu ki nipple ko jeebh se chhedte hue use apne mooh mein lekar jeebh se chhedte hue chusne lagta hai, Kushal Anu ke baen strap ko baah ke taraf karta hai toh Anu apni baah nighty ke strap se nikalne mein madad karti hai, Kushal apne honth ko bandh karke nipple ko jor se chusne lagta hai, Anu ke mooh se ek lambi si aaaaahhhhh….. Kushaaalll…… nikal jaata hai, Anu Kushal ke t-shirt ke andar haath ghusae uske peeth ko sehlane lagti hai aur t-shirt ko uppar ki or karne lagti hai.
 
Kushal Anu ko apni t-shirt utarne mein madad karta hai aur jhuk kar fir se Anu ki chuchi ko chusne lagta hai, woh apna daen haath ko un dono ke beech sarkate hue Anu ki choot par rakh deta hai aur choot ko sehlane lagta hai, Anu aur pagal ho jaati hai aaahhhh…. Kushaalllll……  aaahhhhh…. Ufffff….. aur Kushal ko apni chuchi se hata kar uske honthon ko pagalon ki tarah chusne lagti hai, cchhhmmm…. cchhhmmm… Ccchhhmmmm…. Uuummmm……. Kushal chumte hue hi Anu ki choot ko daen haath se aur daen chuhci ko apne baen haath se masalta rehta hai, Anu bhi apna haath Kushal ke shorts ke uppar rakh kar uske lund ko sehlane lagti hai, kuch der sehlane ke baad woh apna haath, uske shorts ke andar daal kar, Kushal ke nange lund ko mutthi mein bhar kar hilane lagti hai, Anu Kushal ko chumte hue apne dusre haath se uski shorts ko neeche sarka deti hai, Kushal bhi Anu ki nighty ko uske pet par jama kar deta hai, Anu Kushal ke lund ko sehlate hue uski aankon mein dekhti hai, Kushal bhi Anu ki aankhon mein dekhta hai, Anu Kushal ke lund ko apni choot par ragadne lagti hai.
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Hi Val,

Congrats on starting the first story. I read your update 1.

The plot is nice; you asked for my suggestion on how to make it better. I think you need to include the physical details of your Main characters. Like how Sandy and Anupriya look. Some GIFs might help you. Find a good one.

Make the scene more emotional and erotic. Like he's giving a packet of one lakh for the marriage. ( emotional) First encounter with Anupriya ( erotic): what both felt, what happened in their minds. Your first post is much better than my first work. Please do not take my perceptions negatively. I want you to succeed and enjoy writing. You can always edit your work here. Develop a profile of your character, like Sandy: is he a Playboy? Helpful? etc., the story ultimately revolves around those inbuilt emotions. If Sandy is a friend of the keeper, he should be torn internally about how he feels for Anupriya. -- just a few suggestions. Read my other story in my signature to see how I developed the main characters like Sartaj, Meera, and Sher.
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Thank you Deepak for the comment, I do not take any suggestions negatively, it rather helps me improve on things in personal and professional life. This is just my 1st story and start I'm going to build up the story and eroctic encounters slowly in the future updates, I might have to work hard on building up the characters.

I have read your Sartaj,Meera and Sher story, awaiting ipdates on this story and Anita's story.

Thank you for your valuable time and comment
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Mind-blowing story
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(31-01-2026, 06:20 PM)Yash121 Wrote: Mind-blowing story

Thank you for the appreciation
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Waiting for next update
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Working on it yash.... need a day or two
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Superb..... eagerly waiting for next....
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(31-01-2026, 11:49 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Working on it yash.... need a day or two

No need to rush . Deliver when you are satisfied . I usually have five ten earlier episode ready in word doc. that give me idea where i want to take story then I keep on working on latest one till i am satisfied with my work . Try to deliver one or two episode in a week . writing takes a toll on your time .
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(01-02-2026, 05:31 AM)Deepak.kapoor Wrote: No need to rush . Deliver when you are satisfied . I usually have five ten earlier episode ready in word doc. that give me idea where i want to take story then I keep on working on latest one till i am satisfied with my work . Try to deliver one or two episode in a week . writing takes a toll on your time .

I use word doc too to write, i have to proof read it but some silly mistakes are left out, past 2 days busy running about redevelopment paper work for my locality, maybe a short update by tomorrow evening or a big normal like the previous 2 updates on Tuesday.

I hope you people understand and please bear with me
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(01-02-2026, 02:55 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: I use word doc too to write, i have to proof read it but some silly mistakes are left out, past 2 days busy running about redevelopment paper work for my locality, maybe a short update by tomorrow evening or a big normal like the previous 2 updates on Tuesday.

I hope you people understand and please bear with me

I totally understand it . You need to do all the work all alone .
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Val, awesome start, my friend. Early looking forward to this promising story
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Update 03:
 
Kushal ke lund ki ragad apni choot par mehsoos karke Anu ki saansein aur tez ho jaati hain, woh apne komal haath se Kushal he lund ko hilate hue apni choot par ragadte hue Kushal se kehti hai.
 
Anu: Kushal…. Aur bardasht nahi hota, ise andar karo na jaldi.
 
Kushal: (Tez saansein lete hue) Haan meri jaan ab toh mujhse bhi bardasht nahi hota.
 
Anu: (Kushal ke lund ka supada apni choot par lagate hue) Toh karo na ise jaldi se andar.
 
Aur Kushal ke lund ko mutthi mein bhare hue hi ahista ahista hilane lagti hai, Kushal bhi abpni kamar ko neeche ki taraf karta hai aur agle hi pal uska lund ka topa (supada) Anu ki choot ke andar daakhil ho jaata hai, Kushal ka lund 5 inch lamba aur 1.5 inch mota hai, Kushal dheere dheera apna lund thoda thoda karke Anu ki choot ke andar poora 5 inch daal deta hai, jise Anu apne andar mehsoos karti hai, wahi Kushal bhi Anu ki tight choot ko apne lund ko jakadte hue mehsoos karta hai, dono ke mooh se ek meethi si aaaah nikal jaati hai, dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhte hai aur Kushal Anu se lipatkar ahista ahista dhakke laga ne lagta hai, dono ke mooh se abhi bhi aaaa…. aaahhh…. uhhmmm…. ooohhhh…. uufffff… aesi awazeing nikalne lagti hai, Kushal Anu se lipat kar uske kandhe ko chumte hue dhakke lagana jaari rakhta hai, Anu bhi use apni baahon mein bharte hue sisakti hai…. Siiiii….. aaahhhh, Kusshhaaalll….. aahhhh hhmmm aur Kushal ke peeth par apni haathon se sehlane lagti hai, aur apni pairon ko uske kamar par baandh deti hai, Kushal bhi uske kandhe se chumte hue gardan par chumte hue apne daen haath se Anu ki baen chuchi pakad kar masalne lagta hai aur baen haath se Anu ki gaand ko dabane lagta hai aur apni dhakkon ki raftar ko thoda tez kar deta hai.
 
Aaahh…. uuuuffffff…. aaahhhhh….. hhmmmm….. Siiiii….. aaahhhhh, dono hi aahein poore kamre mein goonj rahi hoti hai, tabhi Kushal Anu ki nipple ko apne daen haath ke angoothe se ragad deta hai, Anu ke mooh se ek tez aaaahhhh nikalti hai, jise Kushal apne honth rakh kar daba deta hai aur dhakke marte hue Anu ke honthon ko choosne lagta hai, Anu bhi puri tarah uska saath deti hai, Anu Kushal aur apne baahon mein kasne lagti hai, dono abhi chhhuuumm…… chhhhmmm….. hmmmm….. uuuuffff…. chhhmmm…. chhhhmmm… hmmm….. Anu buri tarah Kushal se lipat ka apne charam ki or jaane lagti hai, Kuhsla ke dhakke tez hone lagte hai, ab kamre mein  chhmmm… chmmm…. hmmm…. ki awazon ke saath saath thap.. thap.. thap… thap… ki halki awaz bhi aane lagti hai, Anu bas ab jhadne wali hi hoti hai ki Kushal ka badan akadne lagta hai, aur woh ek lambi aaaaahhhh….. ke saath jhadne lagta hai….. who apna kaam ras Anu ki choot mein chhodne lagta hai, wahi Anu jo ab tak jhadi nahi thi apni kamar neeche se hilate hue apne aap ko jhadne ki koshish karti hai ki tabhi Kushal uske uppar se ludhak kar Anu ki bagal mein let jaata hai aur use dekhte hue pyaar uske hothon ko chumte hue poochta hai.
 
Kushal:  Kaisa laga tumhe Anu ?
 
Anu: (Jo ab tak jhadi nahi thi… Apne chehre par muskan lakar) Bahut accha tha.
 
Kushal: (Muskurate hue Anu ke chehre ko sehlate hue) Thank you Anu, tum bhi bahut kamaal ki ho.
 
Anu: (Kushal ke chehre ko sehlate hue) Jao washroom jaake ke fresh ho ke aao fir main jaati hu.
 
Kushal: (Bed se utthte hue) Theek hai.
 
Kushal ke washroom mein jaate hi Anu apne aap se mann hi mann kehti hai, kaash Kushal tumne kuch der aur saath diya hota toh main bhi santhust hoti, fir woh sochti hai koi baat nahi agli baar shaayad main santhust ho jaun. Kushal washroom se bahar aata hai aur wahi Anu bed se uthkar washroom mein jaati hai, aur aaine mein apne aap ko fir se ek baar dekhti hai, fir apni kamar bap jami hui nighty ko utar kar poori tarah nangi ho jaati hai, apne aap ko aaine mein niharte hue uski nazar apni pyaari se choot par jaati hai, who dekhti hai ki uski choot se Kushal ki mani behkar bahar uski jaanghon se hote hue neeche ki taraf aa rahai hai, woh waise hi apni taangon ko thoda a failakar apni choot ki honthon ko apni index aur middle finger se failati hai, Anu ki choot ki lips pink color ki thi jo chudai ke baad bhi porri ki poori qayamat dhaa rahi thi, woh apne ungaliyon se apni choot ko aur thoda failati hai, ab use apni choot ka chhed dikhayi deta hai jo thoda sa hi khula hua tha aur us mein se abhi bhi Kushal ka kaam ras bahar tapak raha tha, woh khud ko aakhri baar apne aap ko aaine mein dekhti hai aur hand wash lekar apni choot ko paani se dhone lagti hai, aur fir apni jaanghon ko aur pair ko bhi dho kar saaf karti hai aur wahi latke apne towel se ponch kar apni nighty pehen kar washroom se bahar aati hai.
 
Bahar aakar woh dekhti hai ki Kushal so chuka hai uar halke halke kharrate le raha hai, woh fir muskurakar apne sar ko hila ke, bed par apni side par chhad jaati hai aur Kushal ko dekhte hue let jaati hai, Kushal ko dekhte dekhte use kab neend aa jaati use pata hi nahi chalta.
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Sorry guys,

Could not provide a long update as held up in paper work for locality re-development. Since i made a comment of posting an update on Tuesday, I have made it point to post something rather than giving an excuse of not posting anything.

Next update will be posted as soon as it is ready.
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Nice story
Keep updating
And add pics and gifs in your story that will boost your story and it makes more interesting
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(28-01-2026, 02:50 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Aaahhh aaahhhh jaaanuuuu…. hhhmmmm…. aaaahhhh… aur jor se….  aese awazien aa rahi thi ek chawl ke room se…..


Doston main ek story likhne jaa raha hu, kuch kisse sach (real life) hai kuch kalpanik (fictional)…. Names have been changed for secrecy….. pehli koshish hain dekhte hain kaisi lagti hai aap sab readers ko, please comment on the story and updates, also please let me know if I should continue this story or no.

 

Main characters :

 

Sandy: Ek oil field worker, single, staying with his mother

 

Anupriya : Newly wedded wife to Kushal.

 

Kushal: Anupriya’s husband and childhood friend of Sandy.

 

Additional characters:

 

Namrata: Sandy’s mother.

 

Kanchan: Kushal’s sister.

 

Kaushal: Kushal’s father.

 

 

Update 01:

 

Doston yeh kahani hai Mumbai ke ek hisse ki, jo middle class family se bhari padi hai, middle class hone ki wajah se sab aas paas padosi apne apne kaam mein mast rehte hai, sirf chhutee ke din kuch dost milte hai aur ghap shap ladate hain.

 

Ab chalte hai kahani ki or

 

Sandy, umra 26 saal, ek jimmedar ladka, apni aur apni maa ka khyaal rakhne wala, oil field mein kaam karta hai, jo ek mahine samundar mein kaam par rehta hai, aur ek mahina ghar par apni maa ke sath. Kushal aur Sandy dono bachpan ke dost hain dono ke umar same hai, kyu ki dono ka janam ek hi saal mein hua tha. Dono dost bachpan se ek saath rahe, ek saath khele, ek hi college mein padhe, bas fark itna hai ki Sandy ke pita ki maut tab hui jab Sandy chota tha, toh uske maa ne kaise taise use college complete karaya, ghar ki halath kuch khaas nahi thi, toh Sandy part time job ke saath apni correspondence studies karta raha. Graduation ke baad us ne kuch companies mein kam salary mein kaam kar raha, tab use ek accha break mila oil field join karne ka jisse use salary almost 10 juna jyada salary milne ka mauka dikha aur usne woh le li.

 

Dono dost apne apne life mein busy rahe, jab Sandy ghar par holidays par hota toh dono dost milte ghappe ladate, kabhi kabar ghumne jaate, Sandy ki life acchi chal rahi thi, ab use koi chinta nahi thi, na hi paise ki na hi koi tension thi.

 

Dekhte dekhte do saal nikal gaye, Sandy ne apne ghar ko achhe se renovate kar ke le liya apne bal boote par, ek din jab Sandy rig par se apni maa se satellite phone se baat kar raha tha, tab use apne dost Kushal ki shaadi tay hone ki baat pata chali.

 

Namrata: Beta Sandy, kaisa hai tu ?

 

Sandy: Main theek hu maa, aap kaisi ho ?

 

Namrata: Beta, apne Kushal ki shaadi tay ho gayi hai.

 

Sandy: Kya???, Us gadhe ne mujhe ghar par tha tab kuch bataya nahi.

 

Namrata: Ab use gadha kyu bol raha hai.. Tujhe pata hai na Kaushal bhai sahab kaise hai, jald baaji mein uska rishta tay kar diya

 

Sandy: Accha, mujhe ghar aane do uski class leta hu… mazak mein…. hehehehe

Accha maa, ab phone rakhna padega, dusre bhi wait kar rahe hain apne apne ghar par baat karne.

 

Namrata: Apna khyaal rakhna

 

Sandy: Haan maa aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna, bas 10 din aur bache hain. Bye maa

 

Namrata: Bye beta.

 

10 din baad jab Sandy ghar pahucha toh Namrata use dekh kar bahut khush hui, who ghar par aa kar fresh hua aur bahar tehelne nikla, uski yeh aadat ban gayi thi, ghar se nikalte hi kuch dur use Kushal kaam se aate hue saamne se dikh jaata hai.

 

Sandy: Kushal, yaar tumne engagement kar li aur apne is bachpan ke dost ko bataya bhi nahi….

 

Kushal: Arre yaar Sandy….. kya batau, pitaji ne bas baat ched di aur teesre din sagai karvadi, mujhe toh ladki dekhne sagai ke din mili,

Yeh bata tu kaisa hai ?

 

Sandy: Kaisa dikh raha hu tujhe ???

 

Kushal: Ek dum mast har baar ki tarah.

 

Sandy: Chal aa jaa jaake ek ek beer mar ke aate hain.

 

Kushal: Nahi yaar abhi abhi kaam se lauta hu, aaj bahut kaam tha office mein thak gaya hu, fir kabhi chalte hain.

 

Sandy: (Koi jor jabardasti nahi karte hue) Accha theek hai jaise teri marji, Waise teri shaadi kab fix hui hai ??

 

Kushal: Bas yaar agle mahine ke 20 taarik ko. Tu hai na mere shaadi mein ?

 

Sandy: Ab kya batau yaar, 18 ko meri joining hai… shaayad nahi attend kar paunga teri shaadi.

 

Kushal: Kya yaar 2 din ki toh baat hai chhutee extend kar le na..

 

Sandy: Dekhta hu agar kuch jugaad hota hai toh. Chal ab main chalta hu bahut pyaas lagi hai…. Hahahaha.

 

Kushal: Haan tu jaa…. nahi toh pyaasa reh jayega meri wajah se…. Hehehehe

 

Dono dost viprit disha mein nikal padte hai.

 

Sandy ki chhutee khatam hone to aati hai toh woh Kushal ke ghar jaa kar usse milta hai, aur dono dost mein baat cheet hote hote Kushal Sandy se kehta hai

 

Kushal: Sandy main tujhe apni shaadi mein miss karunga. (Bheech mein Kushal ki behen Kanchan bhi bolti hai)

 

Kanchan: Sandy rukk jao na, tum dono bachpan ke dost, mere bhi dost, hamara 2 ghar 1 family jaisa rishta hai, toh us ke khaatir ruk jao na.

 

Sandy: Kanchan, Kushal, kya main nahi jaanta tum sab mere parivaar ho, lekin maine koshish ki office se baat ki, mere reliever se baat ki, lekin koi sunne ko ready nahi hai, who keh rahe hai, ya toh naukri chhodo ya fir apne ghar ka function. Ab tum log hi batao main kya karu ??

 

Sandy sab ki bidai lekar uth kar jaane lagta hai toh Kushal use bahar tak chhodne jaata hai tab, Sandy use ek envelope pakda deta hai, kehta hai yeh tere shaadi ke liye hai, Kushal mana kar deta hai lekin Sandy use jor jabardasti pakda deta hai aur kehta hai, jarurat ke waqt kaam ayega aur yeh bhi kehta hai ki aur kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hoga toh maa se bol dena, maine maa ko already bol rakha hai, yeh sunkar aur envelope ke andar dekh kar Kushal ke aankhein num ho jaati hai.

 

Kushal: Bhai yeh toh 1 lakh hai….

 

Sandy: Haan toh kya hua rakh le.

 

Dono dost gale milte hain aur Sandy waha se apne ghar nikal jaata hai, agli subah Sandy apne kaam ke liye nikal padta hai, 5 din baad who apni maa ko rig se phone karta hai

 

Sandy: Maa kaisi ho aap ?

 

Namrata: Main theek hu, tu kaisa hai mera raja beta ?

 

Sandy: Main bhi theek hu, Kushal ki shaadi kaisi rahi ?

 

Namrata: Sab kuch acche se hua, sab ne reception enjoy kiya, bas tum hi nahi the.

 

Sandy: Ab kya karta maa…. Kaam par rehta nahi toh ghar par berozgar baithna padta.

Kuch yahan wahan ki baatein karne ke baad Sandy ne phone bye bol kar cut kar diya.

 

Aese hi din beet gaye aur Sandy ka ghar aane ka waqt aa gaya, Sandy rig se utar kar apne ghar ki taraf jaa raha tha, jaate waqt use Kushal ke ghar ke saamne se gujarna padta tha, jaise hi woh Kushal ke ghar ke saamne aaya, usse ek ladki Kushal ke ghar se haste hue nikli aur Sandy se takra gayi, un dono ki takkar aesi thi ki who ladki us ke uppar aur Sandy uske neeche, jab dono gire to us ladki ki choochiyaan Sandy ki chhaatee mein gad gayi aur us ladki ke hoth Sandy ke hoth se takra gaye aur Sandy ke haath us ladki ki kamar mein chale gaye, dono kuch der aese hi rahe, Kushal ki hasi aur awaz dono ke kaan mein padte hi dono ko hosh aaya, dono uthne lage tab Kushal wahan pahunch gaya, Sandy uthe ke baad us ladki ki madmast jawani, dil hila deni wali khoobsoorti, mast badi badi choochiyaan jo ki us waqt pehne kurti mein tang thi, patli kamar jise usne mehsoos kiya tha kuch der pehle, Kushal ke taraf dekha, toh Kushal ne use kaha, aate aate hi apni bhabhi ke gale lag gaya hahahahaha aur jor jor se hasne laga.

 

Sandy ne bhi haste hua kaha, arre bhai gale toh lag hi gaya hu toh ab pehchan bhi toh karva de, aur khud bhi khilkhila ne laga, woh ladki un dono ko dekh kar jaise sharma gayi aur Kushal ki taraf jaate hue usse poochne lagi yeh kaun hai, Kushal ne use bataya ki yeh mera bachpan ka dost Sandy hai aur fir Sandy se kaha, Sandy yeh Anupriya hai, tumhari bhabhi aur meri patni. Sandy ne Anupriya ko fir se dekha aur sar ko thoda sa jhuka kar hello jannat ki pari kaha, Anupriya ki aankhein bad ho gayi aur us ke taraf hairat se dekhne lagi. Kushal ne Anupriya se kaha yeh aesa hi hai majakiya, us ki majakiya baaton par aitraaz mat karna, woh sab ke saath aese hi rehta hai.

 

Kuch din aese hi beet gaye itne dino mein Sandy aur Anupriya mein sirf hi hello ya fir sirf smile ki len den hi chalti rahi, fir kuch din aur beetne ke baad un dono mein kuch baatein chali, jaise ki khaana khaaya, kya khaaya, etc etc. Kuch din aur beetne ke baad, Sandy apni nayi Royal Enfield lekar ghar ke paas aaya, bike ki awaz sunkar, Kushal aur uske saare ghar wale bahar aate hain, aur Sandy ki maa bhi bahar aa jati hai, bike ko dekh kar Kaushal uncle Sandy ko badhaee dete hai, uske baad Kanchan, fir Kushal aur sab se aakhri mein Anupriya apna haath badha kar Sandy se haath mila kar use badhaee deti hai, Sandy Anu ka haath pakad ke ek anjana current sa apne badan mein mehssos karta, aur kuch der haath mein haaath rakhne ke baad Sandy uska haath chhod deta hai, Anu Sandy se nayi bike ki khakee colour us par khoob jam rahi hai kehti hai aur party ki demand karti hai. Namrata (Sandy ki maa bhi use badhaee deti hai

 

Sandy: Jaroor kab chahiye party batao de dunga.

 

Anu: Abhi chahiye party.

 

Sandy: Theek hai chalo fir sab, kisi restaurant mein chalte hai.

 

Kaushal: Arre main kahan tum sab log ho aao, yeh party restaurant mere bas ki baat nahi.

 

Sab ki aagrah karne par bhi Kaushal uncle saaf mana karte hain, Sandy sab log se aur apni maa se kehta hai tayyar hone ke liye lekin uski maa bhi jaane se mana kar deti hai, kehti hai tum log jao, tum jawan log enjoy karke aao,

 

Namrata, ghar ke andar jaa kar wapis aati hai aur bike ki aur Sandy ki nazar utarti hai.

Kuch hi minton mein 4 log (Sandy, Kushal, Kanchan aur Anupriya) waha se chal padte hai restaurant ke or, Kushal aur Anupriya, Kushal ke bike par, Sandy aur Kanchan Sandy ke bike par. Sabhi log restaurant pahuch kar apni apni pasand ki cheezen order karte hain aur hasi mazak mein khaate rehte hain, is beech mein Sandy aur Anu ki nain ek dusre se kayi baar takrate hain, dono ek dusre ko dekh kar muskurate hain, yeh sab Kushal aur Kachan ki nazron se chori chupe ho rahi thi, dono ek dusre chori chupe taakathein rehte hain, kuch der baad Sandy ishare is Anu ko ghar jaate waqt apni bike par baitne ka ishara karti hai, toh Anu use apni palkein bandh kar ke sahmati ki ishara karti hai. Dinner ke baad Sandy jaa kar counter par bill pay karta hai, aur sabhi apni apni bike ke paas pahuchte hain, tab Anu Kushal se kehti hai, kya main Sandy ke saath uske bike par baith kar ghar tak aa jaun ? Kushal use smile dekar kehta hai theek hai aur apni behen se kehta hai tu mere saath aaja, teri bhabhi ko Sandy ke saath baithne, use bhi nayi bike ki feel lene de.

 

Kanchan Kushal ki or jaati hai aur Anu Sandy ki or aati hai, jaise ki dono ladkiyan bike par baithi hain, Sandy Kushal se kehta hai, ghar jaane se pehle kyu na kuch der biking ho jaaye, thoda ghum fir kar ghar jaate hai, Kushal Anupriya aur Kanchan ki taraf dekhta hai, dono koi aitraaj nahi dikhati, dono bike par nikal padte hai, kuch der ke baad Sandy thodi bike tezi se bhagate hue Kushal se aage pahuch jaata hai to Anu Sandy se poochti hai.

 

Anu: Mujhe restaurant mein kyu ghoor rahe the tum ?

 

Sandy: Main kya akele hi tumhe ghoor raha tha ? Tum bhi toh mujhe ghoor rahi thi.

 

Anu: Main nahi ghoor rahi thi, main bas dekh rahi thi tumhe.

 

Sandy: Main bhi toh tumhe dekh hi raha tha

 

Anu: Agar aese dekhte waqt dono bhai behen ne hum dono ko dekh liya hota toh kya sochte dono ?

 

Sandy: Dekha toh nahi na, kyu fikar karti ho tum befuzool

 

Anu: Aur mujhe apni bike par baithne ke liye kyu ishaare kar rahe the restaurant mein ?

 

Sandy: Toh kya hua ? Tumhe nayi bike par baith kar feel nahi lena tha kya ? Aur madam tumne hi apni palke jhuka ke sehmati di na, di ki nahi ?

 

Anu: Haan di kyu ki mujhe tumhari bike par baithna tha, is nayi bike ki feel leni thi.

 

Itne baat cheet ke dauran ek speed breakar aata hai to Sandy break maar deta hai, jis wajah se bike ek jhatke slow hojati hai, aur Anu apne aap ko bachane ke liye Sandy ke kandhon par haath rakhti hai lekin fir bhi apni chuchiyon ko Sandy ki peeth par takrane se nahi rok paati, jab Anu ki chuchiyaan Sandy ki peeth se lagti hai toh woh aaahhhh ki awaz karta hai, toh Anu usse poochti hai.

 

Anu: Sandy kya hua ?

 

Sandy: Tumhare ang ka sabse naram hissa meri peeth mein chubh gaya… aaahhhh

 

Anu: (Banavati gusse se Sandy ke khande par chapat lagate hue) bahut badatameej ho tum.

 

Sandy: (Muskurate hue) Badatameej hota toh yeh karta (kehkar apna baya haath peeche le jaakar, Anu ki dayi chuchi ko daba deta hai)

 

Anu: Aaahhhh, kya kar rahe ho tum

Kehkar Sandy ka haath pakad leti hai lekin apni chuchi se hathati nahi hai, Sandy mauke ki nazakat ko samajh kar fir se apni mutthee bandh kar ke Anu ki chuchi ko fir se daba deta, Anu ki mooh se fir se ek siskari nikalti hai, aur Sandy apna haath Anu ki chuchi se nikal kar handle par rakhta hai, Anu uske kandhe par fir se maar kar kehti hai

 

Anu: Tum bahut hi shaatir ho, mujhpar chance marne keliye tumne mujhe bike par baithne ka ishara kiya… Hain na ?

 

Sandy: Nahi toh maine tum par chance lene ke liye tumhe nahi apni bike par bithaya.

 

Anu: Toh fir tumne yeh kyu kiya ?

 

Sandy: (anjaan bante hue) Maine kya kiya ?

 

Anu: Wahi jo abhi abhi tumne kiya

 

Sandy: Maine toh speed breaker aaya toh break maari

 

Anu: Uske baad jo tumne kiya

 

Sandy: Anu khul kar bolo, mujhe samaj nahi aa raha tum kiske baare mein baat kar rahi ho

 

Anu: Wahi joh tumne mere saath kiya tumhe badatameej bolne ke baad

 

Sandy: Acha woh….. Woh toh demo tha ki agar main badatameej hota toh kya kar sakta tha.

 

Anu: (Nakhre wala gussa dikha ke) Pata hai kitna dukh raha hai… (ab Anu garam bhi hone lagi thi)

 

Sandy: (Jaanbhujkar anjaan bane hue) Kya dukh raha hai ?

 

Anu: Ab itne bhi anjaan mat bano ?

 

Sandy: Ab mujhe kaise pata chalega ki tumhara kya dukh raha hai ?

 

Anu: (kuch sochte hue) Apna baya haath do mujhe.

 

Sandy apna baya haath peeche Anu ki taraf karte hue, mann hi mann muskurata hai, Anu uska haath pakad kar apni dayi chuchi par rakh deti hai, aur Sandy ke kaan ke paas apna mooh lakar kehti hai.

 

Anu: Ab samajh mein aaya kya dukh raha hai aur khud muskura deti hai.

 

Sandy: (Mauka dekh kar fir se chuchi ko daba deta hai lekin is baar thoda pyaar se aur apne haath se Anu ki chuchi ko sehlane lagta hai) Ab samajh mein aaya meri raani sahiba. Ab toh nahi dukh raha hai na ?

Anu: (Garam hote hue apne honth Sandy ke kaan ke paas laate hue) Ab nahi dukh raha.

 

Sandy ke mann mein jaise laddoo phoot rahe the, woh kabhi uski chuchi ko halke se dabata ya fir halke sehlata, dono ki siskiya nikal rahi thi, Anu jo apni chuchi dabwane se ho rahi thi aur Sandy uski chuchi dabane se garam ho raha tha, uska lund pant ke kaid se aazaad hona chah raha tha, Kuch meter ka faasla tay karne ke baad unhe Kushal ki bike ki horn ki awaz aayi toh dono hosh mein aate hain, Sandy apna haath Anu ki chuchi se hata kar handle pakad leta hai aur tabhi Kushal apni bike Sandy ke bike ke bagal mein laate hue kehta hai.

 

Kushal: Bhai kitna tezz bhagata hai tu bike. Kahan teri nayi bike, kahan meri yeh juni purani bike

 

Sandy: Kahan itna tezz bhagaya, aur isi ne kaha mujhe tezz bhagane ko (Anu ki taraf ishara karte hue)

 

Anu: Maine kaha toh kya mere patidev ko peeche chhod doge.

 

Sandy: Haan  biklul ( kehke bike ko fir se bhagane lagta hai)

 

Anu: (Sandy ke khande par fir se chapat maarte hue) Bahut shararati ho tum Sandy.

 
Dono bike bhagate hue, hasi mazak karte hue ghar pahuch jaate hai, Anu Sandy ki bike se utar kar use pyaar bhare nazar se dekhti hai, aur udhar Kachan bhi apne bhai ke bike se utarti hai, dono dost apni apni bike ko park karte hai aur fir se Anu aur Sandy ki nazrein milti hain, Sabhi log Sandy ko treat ke liye thank you bolte hain lekin is baar Anu fir se apna haath aage badha ke Sandy se milate hue congratulations bolti hai, Sandy uska matlab samajh jaata hai aur thank you bolta hai. Sandy apne ghar ki taraf badhta hai aur Kushal, Kanchan aur Anupriya apne ghar ki taraf, lekin Sandy ke mann mein kuch shaq paida hota hai ki Anu use peeche se dekh rahi hai, woh ghar ke andar daakhil hone se pehle Kushal ke ghar ke taraf dekhta hai toh uska shaq yakeen mein badal jaata hai, Anu use hi jaate hue dekh rahi thi, dono ki nazrein milti hai aur dono ek dusre ko smile karte hain aur apne apne ghar mein daakhil ho jaate hain.

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(Yesterday, 07:54 AM)pujaa69 Wrote: Nice story
Keep updating
And add pics and gifs in your story that will boost your story and it makes more interesting

Thanks Puja,

Suggestion noted.... but i dont get enough time to write the story... searching gif and pics will be another task.... i will try my level best
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