[Rajeshawari Singha]

wah! ekdom kamaal ka kahaani hain yah! bahut bahut achi writings! bahut acha laga padhke.

[thesubhunk]

I think the story is dead

[abcturbine]

Great going.....expecting some kinkiness as well.....

[Raisa]

bahut hi mast aur behad hi shandaar writings! Please keep writings!

[Gadrayi Maa]

bahut hi mast aur behad hi shandaar writings

[Jeshwanth]

Loved it, felt soo real, loved the characters.

[Davit]

Update koi

[गांडवाली]

bahut badhiya ek mast,mazdara aur kamuk kahaani

[Milfloverravii(Sid kidoo)]

UPDATE. 27


Sehenaz - Maim Kya Hua.. Aur Ye Awajj.

Asma - (Ye Ye Kya Kar Rahe Hai.. Main Sehenaz Se Baat Kar Rahi Thi Aur Yee) (Unke Pairon Pe Hathon Se Marte Hue) Guuu. Guuu. Guuuu.

Sourabh - Bas Thodi Der Aur Jaan. Hone Hi Wala Haii.

Sehenaz - Maimm. Ye Apke Sath Andar Kon Haii.

Asma - Guuu. Guuu. Guuuu

Sehenaz (Tezise Gate Knock Karte Hue) - Maimm Are You Okayy. Andar Kon Haii. Dekho Maim Ko Chood De Warna Main Shor Macha Dungi, Sabko Bula Lungi.. I Will Shout.

Sourabh - Is Randi Ki Tohh. (Cabin Ka Gate Kholte Hue) Abb Chilaa. Bula Jisko Bulana Haii.



AB AGEY.



Sourabh - Is Rand Ki Toh. (Cabin Ka Gate Kholte Hue)

Asma (Lund Muh Se Nikalke Jhatke Se Gate Lock Karte Hue) - Ye Aap Kya Kar Rahe Hai.

Sourabh - Sali Tabse Gate Knock Kiye Ja Rahi Hai.

Asma - Uski Wajahse Ap Mujhe Badnam Karenge.

Sourabh (Mujhe Uthake Gale Lagate Hue) - Sorry Yar Wo Gusse Me.

Asma - Apko Apne Gusse Pe Thoda Control Karna Chahiye.

Sourabh (Lund Ko Saree Ke Uparse Hi Meri Chut Pe Dabate Hue) - Gusse Ko Toh Control Kar Bhi Lun. Lekin Ishe

Asma (Saree Thik Karte Hue) - Ushe Bhii

Sourabh (Jeans Pehenke Gate Kholte Hue)
Asma - Rukiye.

Sourabh - Ab Kya Hua.

Asma - Mujhe Baal Toh Thik Karne Dijiye. Dekhiye Apne Kya Halat Bana Di. Jaise Koi Janwar Ho.

Sourabh - Kya Karun Jaan. Tere Husn Ko Dekhke Mere Andar Ka Janwar Apne Ap Hi Bahar Aa Jata Hai.

Asma - Chiii. Kuch Bhi Bolte Ho Na Aap.

Sourabh - Main Kuch Bhi Nahi. Sach Bolte Hun.

Sehenaz - Abhi Tak Gate Nahi Khola.. Last Warning Main Chilaa.

Sourabh - Is Randi Ki Tohh. (Cabin Ka Gate Kholte Hue) Abb Chilaa. Bula Jisko Bulana Haii.

Asma - Sourabh Control.

Sourabh - Maim Ishe Jara Sabar Nahi Hui. Iski Wajahse Mera Topic Chuut Gaya.

Asma (Sanson Ko Control Karte Hue) - Sehenaz Ye Kya. This Is College Not You're Playground. What Is This Behavior.

Sehenaz - Sorry Maim.

Asma - Sourabh Hum Ye Topic Badme Cover Karlenge. Mere Lecture Ka Time Ho Gaya Hai. Tum Dono Bhi Jao.

Sourabh, Sehenaz - Okk Maim.

Sehenaz (Cabin Ke Andar Entar Karte Hue) - Ye Ajib Si Badbu Kaisi Hai. Aur Maim Bhi Aj Kuch Ajib Hi Lag Rahi Thi. Tez Sans Le Rahi Thi. Aur Unke Baal Bhi. Bhikre Hue The.

(Evening 5 O'Clock)
(Sourabh's View)

Aman - Aj Toh Aa Raha Hai Na.

Sourabh - Nahi Yarr.

Aman - Tu Aaj Kal Kaha Busy Rehta Hai.. Dosto Ke Liye Bhi Time Nahi Hai.

Sourabh - Aisa Nahi Hai. Tujhe Toh Sab Pata Hai. Phir Bhi.

Aman - Dekh Aaj Bahana Nahi. Chahe Jaldi Chala Jana.

Sourabh - Nahi Manega Na Tu.

Aman - Nahii. Agar Aaj Tune Mana Kiya Toh Ghasitke Le Jaunga.

Sourabh - Chal Thik Haii. Lekin Main 9 se Pehle Hi Aa Jaunga.

Aman - Haa Aa Jana.

Jaise Hi Main Aur Aman College Se Nikalne Ko Hue Ki Mujhe Asmika College Me Entar Hote Hue Dikhi.

Sourabh - (Ye Yaha Kyu Ayie Hai.)

Asmika - Sourabh.

Sourabh - (Jaisa Socha Tha. Kahin Ishe Us Din Kuch Shaq Toh Nahi Ho Gaya.) Aman Tu Chal Main Ata Hun.

Aman - Okk. Time Pe Pohoch Jana.

Sourabh - Kya Hua Asmi.

Asmika - Sidhe Sidhe Puchungi. Tum 18 ki Raatko Kaha The.

Sourabh - (Ye Toh Ushi Raat Ki Baat Hai Jab Main Iske Gharpe Isko Ammi Ko Chod Raha Tha. Pakka Ishe Kuch Toh Doubt Hua Hai.) Raatko Kaha Hounga. Obviously Gharpe Tha. Soo Raha Tha.

Asmika - Pakka Gharpe Hi The Na.

Sourabh - Aur Kaha Hounga. Accha Tum Kaha Thi. Soo Rahi Thi Na. Waise Hi Main Bhi.

Asmika - (Jaisa Socha Tha. Sidhe Baat Nahi Banegi.) okk. Byee.

Sourabh - Byee.

(Raat 8 baje)
(******* Bar)

Aman - Kya Hua. Jabse Aya Hai Tabse Chup Hai. Kya Soch Raha Hai.

Sourabh - Kuch Nahi Yarr.

Tring. Tring. Tring.

Sourabh - Hello.

Zain - Kaha Hai. Bohot Awaj Aa Rahi Hai.

Sourabh - Bar Me Tha. Tu Bol. Hello.

Zain - Helloo. Hellooo.

Sourabh - Hello Zainn.

(Whatsapp)

Sourabh - Kya Hua. Bata.

Zain -  (invitation Sent.)

Sourabh - Ye Isne Kya Bheja Hai. (Shocked) ye Kya Hai..

Zain - Time Pe Aa Jana.

Tring. Tring. Tring.

(Asma's View)

Sourabh - Hello

Asma - Haa Boliye.

Sourabh - Kal Tera Birthday Hai Aur Tune Mujhe Kuch Bataya Tak Nahi.

Asma - Aisa Nahi Hai. Kal College Me Apko Invite Karne Wali Thi.

Sourabh - Accha Lekin Pata Mujhe Mere Bete Se Chala.

Asma (Confused) - Apka Beta.

Sourabh - Haa Zain. Mere Bete Se.

Unki Ye Baat Sunke Mera Dil Andarse Kamp Gaya. Ek Ajibsi Feeling.

Asma - Zain Apka Beta.

Sourabh - Kyu Nahi Hai Kya. Ruk Main Tere Ghar Hi Aa Raha Hun.

Asma - Kyaa. Nahi Abhi Sabb Hai.

Sourabh - Honede. Tu Bas Bahar Ajana.

Asma - Lekin Main. (Call Disconnected) Hello Suniyeee Hello.

(After 20 min.)

Tring. Tring. Tring.

Sourabh - Bahar Aa.

Asma - Hmm

Asma (Gate Kholke Ass Pass Dekhke Check Karte Hue.)

Sourabh - Tera Mujhe Batane Ka Irada Nahi Tha. Kyu.

Asma - Maine Kaha Toh Kal College Me Apko Bata Deti.

Sourabh - Toh Kya Program Hai.

Asma - Koi Program Nahi Hai. Wo Toh Bacche Nahi Mane Isliye Bas Chotisi Party Hai. Bas.

Sourabh - Chotisi Kyu. Party Acchese Hogi. Sabse Pehle Tu ***** Hotel Me Ek Hall Book Kar Aur Ek Private Room Bhi Book Karna. Aur Ha Room Ka Kisiko Mat Batana.

Asma - Apke Dimag Me Kuch Bada Chal Raha Hai.

Sourabh - Kal Party Me Tujhe Sab Pata Chal Jayega. Ye Le Tera Gift. Advanve Me.

Asma - Ye Abhi Kyu. Birthday Toh Kal Hai.

Sourabh - Kal Toh Main Tujhse Gift Lunga.

Ye Kehte Hue Unhone Mujhe Unki Bahoo Me Bharliya. Aur Dono Hathon Ko Picche Lejake Meri Gand Ki Dono Phankhon Ko Saree Ke Uparse Hi Dabane Lage.



Sourabh - Wo Toh Sukra Hai Mere Bete Ne Time Pe Sab Bata Diya.

Asma - Apka Beta.

Sourabh (Mere Left Gaal Ko Muh Me Bharke Katte Hue) - Kyu Nahi Hai Kya.

Asma - Ahhhhhh.  Aiisaa Aisa Maine Kab Kaha.

Sourabh (Waise Hi Mere Right Gal Ko Katte Hue) - Tune Tere Muh Se Bhi Toh Nahi Bola. (Meri Garden Pe Katte Hue) Bol Zain Kiska Beta Hai.

Asma - Ahaaa Apppp.

Sourabh (Blouse Ke Uparse Hi Mere Right Nipple Ko Katte Hue) - Haaa Bol Kon Uska Asli Baap Hai.

Asma - Ahhhhh Appp Hooo.

Sourabh (Navel Ke Andar Jib Dalke Chatte Hue) - Pura Bol Uska Asli Baap Kon Haii.



Asma - Ahhhh App Hoo. Ahh Zain Ke Asli Abbu App Hii Hooo Ahhhh Alllaaaahhhh.

Sourabh - Wahhh Tune Dil Khush Kardiya Meri Jaan. Bas Mera Lund Aur Chusde.

Asma (Shocked) - Kyaa. Yaha. Enterance Pe. Nahi Pleasee. Abhi Sirf 8:30 hue Haii. Koi Bhi Aa Sakta Hai.

Sourabh - Toh Khada Lund Leke Jaun.

Asma - Apka Toh Jab Dekho Khada Hi Rehta Hai.

Sourabh - Kya Karun Meri Jaan. Tera Husn. Tera Jism Itna Meetha Hai Ki Cha Ke Bhi Khudpe Control Nahi Rakh Pata.

Ye Kehte Hi Unhone Unke Hontho Ko Mere Hontho Se Milake Mere Hontho Ko Chusne Lage.



Asma (Kiss Todte Hue) - Pleaseeee.

Sourabh - Chal Aaj Teri Baat Sahi. Lekin Kal With Tax Wasul Lunga.

Ye Kehte Hue Wo Chale Gaye. Main Bhi Ghar Ke Andar Ake. Jaise Hi Kitchen Me Pohocho.

Tring. Tring.

Asma - Ab Kya Hua.

Sourabh - Gift Ka Toh Bhul Hi Gaya. Koi Dekh Na Le.

Asma - Aisa Kya Diya Hai.

Sourabh - Wo Toh Tu Dekhke Khud Samaj Jayegi.(Call Disconnected)

(Raat 10 baje)

Asma (Bathroom Me Entar Hote Hue) - Dekhun Toh Wo Kya Laye Hai Mere Liye (Shocked) Ye Ye Kya. (Double Shocked). Ya ,.' Ye Kya Haiii.

(Next Day At College 2 O'Clock)

Zain - Main Tujhe Call Kar Raha Tha. Tune Uthaya Nahi

Sourabh - Lecture Tha Na. Kyu Kya Hua.

Zain - Arre Aaj Ka Venue Change Ho Gaya. Wahi Batana Tha.

Sourabh - Venue.

Zain - Haa. Ammi Ki Birthday Party Ab ***** Hotel Me Hai.

Sourabh - End Moke Pe Venue Change.

Zain - Haa Yar Mujhe Bhi Kuch Samajme Nahi Aya. Waise Toh Ammi Kabhi Celebrate Nahi Karti. Lekin Is Baar 5 star Hotel. I Don't Know Howw.

Sourabh - (Tujhe Kabhi Pata Bhi Nahi Chalega.) Waise Timing Kya Hai.

Zain - 8 Se.

Sourabh - Okk Toh Raatko Milte Hai.

(Raat 8:30 baje)
(****** Hote , Alumin Hall)

Asma - (Jin Jinko Invite Kiya Tha Wo Sab Guests Aa Gaye. Sirf Yahi Reh Gaye)

Tring. Tring. Tring.

Asma - Hello 9 bajne Ko Ho Gaye. Kaha Ho App.

Sourabh - Pohoch Hi Gaya. Aur Sab Taiyari Ho Gayi Na.

Asma - Samajrahi Hun Ap Kis Taiyari Ki Baat Kar Rahe Hai.

Sourabh - Samajgayi Toh Sidhi Bata De.

Asma - Haa Ho Gayi. Aur Ap Khud Akke Dekh Lo.

Sourabh - Wo Toh Main Bohot Acchese Dekhunga.



To Be Continued..

[Milfloverravii(Sid kidoo)]

Sorry guy's. I know this update is late. And again sorry for that.  stuck at work.. you're patience is appreciable..  thankssss❤️❤️

[Bimal]

Awesome update

[Cuntsucker]

Ekdum chamatkar,lajawab aur exciting update

[Ekra.]

Very very interesting and sensual writings! bahut maza aya padhke!

[Introvert]

Excellent and extremely erotic writings!

[KGB]

Ekdum mast kahaani

[SweetSonali]

Lajawab aur lusty writing

[Veer]

Lovely and beautiful writings!

[Ileana.]

chamatkar aur bahut badhiya update!

[Rumana]

Superb, mast,mazadar aur ekdom umda writings! Bahut khoob!

[Rahul007]

Awesome and marvelous update!