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No words for the excellence of the story
Truly amazing script writer and the proceedings of every update was excellent
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please don't stop with one session. we need more.
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What's more in waiting? are the fantasy gonna escalate to more darkest unexplored so far in any of the threads.
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Chapter 73 – Threads Pulling Tight
Prem’s phone buzzed on the hotel nightstand — sharp, insistent.
Vikram.
He snatched it up before the second ring.
“Prem.”
“Vikram. Tell me.”
“I’ve initiated the cyber probe. Deep. Servers are bleeding data already. Within hours — maybe less — I’ll have full logs of Rohan’s under-the-table dealings. Financial trails, encrypted chats, the works. Once I have it, he’s ours to control. Or destroy.”
Prem exhaled slow. The room felt smaller, the pale gold sunrise now harsh.
“Thank you. What do you need from me?”
“Go back to Chennai. Lay low. Act normal. The moment I pull something concrete — proof that ties him to the manipulation, the affairs, the business siphoning — I’ll send it straight to you. Then we decide the next move.”
Prem nodded to the empty room.
“Done. I’m heading out soon.”
Vikram’s voice dropped — almost gentle.
“Stay calm, Prem. We’re close.”
Call ended.
Prem sat on the edge of the bed. Laptop still open, files glowing like accusations. He felt something shift inside — not relief yet, but momentum. Dangerous momentum.
He dialed Nitin.
Two rings.
“Hello, Prem. How are you?”
“I’m better. Much better.”
Nitin paused. “What’s that sound in your voice? All good? Seems like you cracked something.”
“Yes. It’s far more dangerous than we thought.”
“Dangerous?”
Prem leaned forward, elbows on knees.
“Let me cut short, Nitin. I told you I suspected Rohan was eyeing Nivi. Suspected an affair. Right?”
“Yes.”
“I thought Rohan had some bigger motive. I got the answer.”
Nitin’s breath caught. “What’s the answer, man?”
“Listen carefully. Rohan and Aadhil — college mates. Back then, they did a DP with a girl named Kanmani. She approached them to punish her lover who was eyeing other women. But the guys got the kick. Tried several women after — nothing stuck. Only one could bang them at a time. Then Aadhil — Rohan’s partner now — used his ex-lover to fulfill their DP fantasy. She blocked them, got into an accident. Her husband — Vikram — divorced her. And now Vikram is helping us take revenge on them.”
for 15 minutes he explained in detail about Madhavan, Vikram. Vikram's intentions behind helps them.
Silence on the line.
Prem continued.
“Our wives are roaming with dangerous people — business partners on paper. We need to alert them. But I fear… if something has already happened?”
Nitin’s voice came back low, careful.
“Don’t panic. I don’t think anything like that has happened. With the info we have now, let’s alert them carefully.”
“No.” Prem’s tone hardened. “If we do that directly, they’ll mistrust us. We need stunts. Something that makes them realize themselves what monsters these men are. Also — the cyber attack will shake their stability. Worst case, they cut links from our wives’ businesses and stick to their other ventures.”
Nitin exhaled.
“It sounds good.”
“Just track what Nivi and Vani are doing. Don’t alert them. Just watch. Quietly.”
“Sure thing.”
Phone cut.
Nitin’s hand shook as he lowered it.
Ever since the alarm bells in his head started ringing, he couldn’t sit still.
He needed to see Vani. Now.
He drove home fast — heart hammering.
Door opened.
Vani in the living room — feeding aara her favorite Dosa. . Laughter soft looking at song played in TV.
She looked up. Smiled.
Nitin forced calm.
“Where’s Nivi?”
Vani frowned slightly. “Business meet. I’m not sure about location.”
“And Rohan? Aadhil?”
“Rohan is in Chennai, I think. Aadhil went to Mumbai.”
Nitin nodded once. Said nothing more.
Left the room.
Vani stared after him — unease creeping in.
She called Nivi. Straight to silent, her mobile in silent.
Texted Rohan instead.
“Where are you? Everything okay?”
She eloborated how Nitin questioned her and her life about Rohan at Chennai office.
Reply came quick.
“Already in Chennai. Just came out of airport.. Don’t panic.”
Vani stared at the screen.
A big schema was moving behind the scenes.
Did Prem know something already? Rohan mind screamed.
He reached his Chennai office. Slid into the chair. Screens lit up.
Minutes later — text from Nitin to Prem.
“Vani at home with Aara. Rohan at office. Nivi gone for business meet — location unknown. Aadhil in Mumbai. All cross-checked.”
Rohan read it twice.
Prem — back in his hotel room — received Nitin’s update.
He took a long breath.
“Thank goodness. She is safe.”
He said it to himself — quiet, like a prayer.
Then dialed Vikram again.
“Vikram. I checked locations. Rohan is in Chennai.”
Vikram’s voice came low — surprised.
“What? In Chennai? I heard he was in Cochin.”
A pause.
“Did someone alter something?”
Vikram exhaled.
“We stop pulling threads against him for a moment. Let me verify. If he’s really there… we might have a leak. Or he’s playing ahead.”
Prem’s grip tightened on the phone.
“Keep me posted.”
Call ended.
Prem stared at the wall.
The threads were pulling tighter.
But now — someone else was pulling too.
And no one knew whose hand was on the other end.
The unraveling had spread.
Quiet.
Steady.
Unstoppable.
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Chapter 74 – The Call & The Bitter Mirror
Rohan sat alone in his Chennai office — lights dimmed, screens glowing blue across his face. The probe had been shallow, clumsy. He’d caught it early. Patches applied. Logs scrubbed. Firewalls reinforced. Every leak sealed before it could bleed out.
He leaned back in the chair. Exhaled slow.
Then dialed Vikram.
Ring once. Twice.
“Hello. Vikram here.”
“Vikram. It’s Rohan.”
A pause — thick with old hate.
“Let me be straight,” Rohan said. Voice calm, flat. “What happened in the past is past. We never touched another woman after Aashika. Fearing exactly what happened to her. It was trauma for us too. We stopped.”
Vikram’s breath hissed through the line.
“Then what the hell are you doing with Prem and Nitin’s wives?”
Rohan stared at the dark window — city lights smearing below.
“It’s personal. And unlike Aashika… both Nivi and Vani liked it.
The DP. We did it already. With consent. Full. Enthusiastic.
We tried the same with Aashika — she didn’t agree. We left. She ran. Accident happened. Nothing to do with us.”
Vikram’s voice cracked — low, furious.
“You think that absolves you?”
“No. But stop digging. Or I revert. Full counter. You know what I can pull.”
Silence stretched.
Rohan continued — colder now.
“It’s up to you whether to alert Prem and Nitin about what’s already happened. Especially the DP. We planned to use them for some months. Enjoy. Then leave them to their marriage life as it is. No permanent break.
If you attempt to tell them now… their revival chances drop to minimal. Marriages on hold. Maybe forever. That’s on you.”
Another beat.
Vikram’s reply came slow, venomous.
“You can’t escape like this forever. What you loved now… will happen back to you. Someone will give you the same medicine.”
Rohan’s mind flashed — unbidden.
Nivi on the bed that morning. Legs wide. Body yielding. Aadhil buried deep, claiming her with brutal strokes. Her silent surrender. The tiny secret smile after. The way she hadn’t looked at him once through the glass.
It already happened.
The medicine was already swallowed.
Rohan’s voice stayed even.
“Thanks for the advice. I’ll be careful. As I said — we’ll leave them if you don’t interfere.”
Vikram laughed — bitter, short.
“I hate speaking with you. Think about your own wife.”
“Take care of her if you’re that interested.”
“It’s meaningless to speak with you. Goodbye.
Just one last advice — do what you said.
Leave them to their families.
Don’t try to break them.”
“I already left Nivi. Soon we’ll leave Vani. Hope all goes good for all of us.
And again… I’m sorry for Aashika.”
Vikram’s voice dropped — almost tired.
“I dont know on what audacity you speak about Aashikaa...Forget it. Let’s just never see each other again. Bye.”
Call cut.
Rohan set the phone down.
Screen went dark.
He stared at his reflection in the black glass — hollow eyes, tight jaw.
The mirror had cracked long ago.
And the shards were already cutting.
He rubbed his temples once.
Then opened the next file.
Business as usual.
For now.
The unraveling had paused — only for a breath.
But it never really stopped.
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Please nivi ko rohan ko adil ko aise hi mat chodna destroy all of them
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Chapter 78 – The Wives’ Pact & The Husbands’ Confession
Prem and Nitin’s car pulled into the driveway together — late evening, headlights cutting through the dusk.
Nivi and Vani stood at the entrance — side by side. Tension thick, but faces calm.
The moment the men stepped out, Nivi spoke first — low, urgent, to Vani only.
“Let’s forget what happened. We need to speak. For real. We both got used. Played. Emotionally pulled away from our husbands. From our marital life. We need to give it back to them. Let’s just disperse now.”
Vani exhaled — sharp nod.
“Okay.”
Nivi stepped forward — quick hug. Arms tight for a second.
“Sorry I pulled you in. Because of my selfishness.”
Vani hugged back — voice small.
“I’m equally responsible. I allowed it.”
They broke apart just as Prem and Nitin reached the door.
The wives turned — warm smiles, warmer than they’d given in months. Welcoming arms. Soft “welcome home”s.
Prem paused. Looked at Nivi — the genuine light in her eyes.
Nitin froze too — Vani’s hand on his arm, gentle squeeze.
Both husbands glanced at each other
Prem looking at how Vani welcomed Nitin..
He thought there must be some love left.. There is a scope for reversal
Similarly Nitin looking at Nivi welcoming wth warm he thought the same..
Oh no she is lovely to Prem.. may be she is just sexually active with Aadhli and no real feelings.
May be she will be reversed when she know the truth.
No. We shouldn’t reveal now.
Both said to themself..
Lets watch closer and Warn the offenders when time comes.
Inside — normal dinner.
But the undercurrent stayed.
Next day — Nivi and Vani drove to office together.
Midway — Nivi broke the silence.
“Let’s avoid Rohan and Aadhil completely. Let’s tell we are tiered and give sometime”
Vani glanced over.
“Okay. What’s next?”
Nivi’s voice dropped — steady.
“Sex with them. One last time. Two days later.”
Vani’s eyes widened.
“What?”
Nivi kept eyes on the road.
“Yes. Let’s give a break. Then have sex.
They achieved everything through sex. We should achieve everything using the same.”
She continued — calm, calculated.
“You said Rohan agreed to give you share in the company, right? Two days later — during sex — tell him you spoke to me about the shares. That I agreed. So he should speak with me.”
Vani frowned.
“What’s the use?”
Nivi’s grip tightened on the wheel.
“Imagine we break their relationship now. They’ll corner us in business. Either we leave empty-handed or succumb to their needs. We should not do both. I worked my ass off for the company. I can’t go empty-handed. And the hurt you got — because of me giving that share to you — will be the apt revenge.”
Vani stared ahead.
Nivi added — quieter.
“But the major reason… I’ll grab as much info from Aadhil as possible. While you get from Rohan.
Crucial for our next set of plans.”
Vani exhaled slow.
“Agreed.”
Back at Prem’s company — coffee break.
Nitin leaned against the counter — voice low.
“The details from Vikram and Madhavan… I guess we need to alert our wives.”
Prem’s mind reeled — flash of Vani under Rohan in the penthouse.
He couldn’t say it.
Nitin saw Prem’s face — realized straight mention of Nivi would ignite him.
Let’s hide the affair. Just take a step to eliminate Rohan and Aadhil.
Nitin spoke carefully.
“I followed Nivi. She’s clean.”
Prem swallowed.
Relief — false, but real in the moment.
“I followed Vani too. She’s clean.”
Both husbands exhaled — individually happy. Their wives pure. Untouched.
Prem spoke.
“But what you said is right. Travelling with them is risk. Especially for our wives. Even after we know all details. Maybe we should speak to our own wives first. Let them share it with each other.”
Nitin nodded.
“Safest way. Let women handle this.”
Both felt it — their wives could talk sense into the other.
They decided to tell that in the night.
Prem cautiously said lets just share info about them to our wife and ask them to be careful.. We don't need to tell them they will start affair iwth out wive they will get offended
Nitin nodded yes.. I will be say as you said.
For them both never revealed the affair. They are just gonna share info about Rohan and Aaadhil previous issues which will bring anyone in affair back they trusted.
At office — Aadhil and Rohan felt the shift.
Nivi and Vani ignored pleas. No glances. No texts. Cold distance.
Disappointment settled.
Night arrived.
Prem opened to Nivi in their bedroom — lights low.
He sat on the bed edge.
He said just hear it open dont get panic,..
Nivi said i m all ears please go ahead…
“Nivi… Rohan and Aadhil. They’re monsters. Dangerous. Past with women. DP. Accidents. Business manipulation. We need to cut ties. .”
Nivi was shocked she never knew they had a history and been repeated offenders.. Whom did we share our body with? She trembled for a moment….
She was also shocked how Prem knew all these infos.. How long he knows the truth.. How will he see her if he gets to know she already did double penetration with them…
She panicked.. She went speechless. But quickly composed.. She could not relate them to monster level.. As she faintly remembers Rohan telling her that he did DP before and never later.. Maybe aaadhil was the other guy??
Nivi listened — face calm. Eyes steady.
She nodded slow.
“I understand.”
Nivi raised an important question.. But our business are closely tied.. He had invested in your company as well..
Prem said mmm but I did an alter method.. He showed papers from the auditor that all principles from Rohan are converted into shares.. So principle untouched and even if he raised a complaint i could settle back his principles as share.
The only worrisome is your company which he is partner..
Nivi said dont worry she is already planning to transfer shares to Vani.. she deserves for the work. And Rohan had respect on me he will do it.. We can get back all in control without making noise. Taking these issues up will dilute and push us into unwanted enmity..
Prem saw her with eyes and said you are too sharp i don't know how you are sharper …
Nivi said this is your problem.. You always think me dumb.. You never give me the space i want
This is what is making me distant from you.. Someone out there trusts me and I listen to them.. Lets forget all Trust me once.. I will come clean .. I mean with the company's papers.. without trouble..
Nivi stressed.. Prem i have my own space... there are things which i like which i want... Nivi mind goes to Aadhils harsh handling... she liked it really... but she came back to present said.. none can take me for granted..
i know what i'm doing..and im doing what i want
A tear came how she was used by two men with lies and lies..
These things just made her more bolder than ever...
Downstairs bedroom — Nitin to Vani.
Same words. Same warnings.
Vani sat beside him — hand on his knee.
“I hear you. We’ll be careful.”
She was literally shaking to know all the information. She was shocked she wanted to speak with Nivi .. She immediately texted.
Nivi said i know much earlier not to panic.. Let me tell you what to do..
Both husbands felt lighter — confessions out. Wives listening.
But the wives — in their minds — already plotting.
The unraveling had flipped.
Now the women held the threads.
And they were pulling.
Quiet.
Steady.
Calculated.
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Truly amazing script writing man
The story plot has been coming to end with every character has their own gain and lost
Superb classic narration excellent
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Great going dear writer.
Yesterday we saw Abhishek Sharma's fastest 50
At this pace you outdid him in providing updates
Keep posting...
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So basically, Nivi/Vani were 1000% ok to cheat on their husbands for the pleasure.
However, when they came to know they were cheated for sex - that betrayal overrode all the numerous pleasure they experienced in last few days and now both even plotting to take revenge?
These 2 now have become just crazy (with space increasing between the legs & decreasing between the ears) ..Will they succeed with their plot?
Hope so they don't. Characters taking revenge must have some good background, these 2 are just morally loose characters.
Anyway, some good ending for someone for sure.
Nice.
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