[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[abcturbine]

Excellent writings bro.....keep rocking ...don't stop....story has lot of potential and sensuality....

[abhishek.kumar]

What a story and how meticulously written... This deserves a movie... It should be translated in to a movie... Awesome... No words..

Right selection of dialogues... Perfect...

[Jeshwanth]

What a story, what a writing, I have started reading this last week, unable to control myself to complete it, wow so good, felt so fresh, original and real.

Perfect, the best.

Thank you for this @Sriya ji.

[qazmlp]

It's surprising that you managed to read this story start to finish in a week's time. As pointed out by the author sometime back, it's roughly the length of 2-3 novels by now.
So you must have quite the reading habit. That said, it's a tribute of sorts to how engaging this story is.
Looking forward to the final few updates Sriya, and then the story offshoots you are planning as well in due course of time.

[Vikrant pelu]

Waiting

[Sriya2]

Update 109

Us hi subah, Kriti us officer ke diye hue pate par bas pahuchi hi thi, ek uchi si building mein ek flat tha. Use yahan koi jyada umeed nahi thi, par jaise hi woh darwaze ke paas pahuchi use kisi ladki ki khanakti hui aawaz aane lagi, aisa laga jaise andar Supriya hi ho. Ek pal ke liye Kriti ke mann mein ek umeed si jag gayi ki shayad Supriya ki khoj yahin khatam hone wali thi.

Usne jaldi se ghar ki bell bajayi, aur use aisa laga jaise andar se koi dekh raha ho ki kaun aaya hai. Kriti behad besabr ho rahi thi aur usne fir se doorbell bajayi.

Kuch der baad darwaza khula aur saamne ek ladki thi, jise shayad Kriti ne pehle kahin toh dekha tha, par use yaad nahi aa raha tha kahan.

Disha - Yes... aap kaun?

Kriti - Ummm... main yahan Atul se milne aayi hoon... woh yahin rehte hai na?

Disha - Aapko kya kaam hai unse...

Kriti - Ummm... aap unhe bula dengi kya? Unki wife - Supriya... uske related mein kuch.

Disha ne fir se uski taraf gaur se dekha, aur woh shayad Kriti ko pehle nahi pehchaan paayi thi, par ab pehchaan gayi thi - Tum Kriti ho na... tum kyun aayi ho Supriya ko poochte hue?

Kriti andar ki taraf jhaank rahi thi, aur usse ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha tha. Woh Disha ko paar karti hui ghar mein ghus gayi. Disha ne uska haath pakad kar rokne ki koshish kari par tab tak Kriti andar aa chuki thi.

Andar living room mein jaate hi use wahan Atul sofa par baithe dikhayi diya aur saath hi ek aur young couple, jinhe woh jaanti nahi thi. Woh ladka aur ladki kafi nervous se lag rahe they.

Atul Kriti ko dekhte hi khada ho gaya - Tum!?

Disha bhi darwaza band karke peeche peeche aa gayi thi, usne ladke ki taraf dekhte hue kaha - Dhruv... tum dono andar jaayo... hum log sort out kar lenge is matter ko.

Un dono ke andar jaate hi Disha Kriti se boli - Agar tumhe Vikram ne bheja hai toh...

Kriti - Nahi... main yahan khud aayi hoon...

Kriti ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh kaise explain kare ki woh yahan kyu aayi thi.

Kriti ne baat ko gol mol na karte hue seedha Atul se poocha - Supriya kahan hai?

Atul chaunkte hue bola - Kya?

Kriti ke dimaag mein bohot hi ajeeb se khayal aa rahe they - Tum dono saath mein... ye Vikram ke liye kaam karti hai. Tum dono ke beech kab se ye sab???

Atul aur Disha ne ek doosre ko dekha, Disha ne uska jawab dete hue kaha - Aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho. Main ab Vikram ke liye kaam nahi karti hoon.

Kriti - Toh fir?

Disha - Humara uske gayab hone se koi lena dena nahi hai...

Kriti ne Atul ki taraf dekha - Tum uske husband ho kar use dhoond bhi nahi rahe ho...

Atul - Main use kyun dhoondu? Uske baare mein jitna main pichhle kuch mahino mein jaana hai... utni hi hairaani hoti hai...

Kriti - Matlab?

Atul ne Kriti ko ghoora aur uski aawaz thodi tez hui - Matlab ki... usne mujhe cheat kiya... jhooth bola... tum toh acche se jaanti hogi ye sab! Tumhara bhai Vikram...

Kriti ne aakhen jhuka li.

Atul - Aur fir... bhaag gayi yahan se. Mujhe yahan chhod gayi sab kuch sehne ke liye.

Disha ne baat ko sambhalte hue kaha - Dekho Kriti... hum nahi jaante ki tum use kyun dhoond rahi ho... par hume uske baare mein kuch nahi pata. Hum to uske baare mein ab sochna bhi nahi chahte. 



Kriti ne hataash hote hue apna sar pakad liya - Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi ko kuch nahi pata...

Disha kuch pal baad khadi hote hue boli - Sorry hum tumhari aur help nahi kar sakte. I think tumhe abhi yahan se jaana chahiye... hum filhaal kisi aur personal problem se deal kar rahe hain...

Kriti ne uski taraf dekha jaise expect kar rahi ho woh aur koi detail batayegi.

Disha ne clarify karte hue kaha - Us cheez ka Supriya se koi lena dena nahi hai... hum log koshish kar rahe hai Supriya ko bhulane ki...

Kriti ne darwaze ki taraf ek-do kadam liye hi they ki usne un logo ko mud dekha - Bas ek aur baat... report mein shayad kisi aadmi ka ziqr tha jiske saath Supriya bhaagi thi... aap jaante hai uske baare mein kuch? Kya woh bhi Vikram ka aadmi tha?

Disha ke chehre par nakhushi saaf dikh rahi thi - Hame nahi pata... bas itna pata hai jahan ye log rehte they, woh us building ka watchman tha. Bas ab aur sawaal nahi...

Atul peeche se bhadak kar bola - Iqbal... haan Iqbal naam tha uska... aur haan meri biwi ek watchman ke saath bhaag gayi... aur kuch janna hai tumhe?

Disha Kriti ko bahar ka ishaara karte hue Atul ko shaant karne uske paas gayi. Kriti ek aur jagah se maayus ho kar bahar nikal aayi thi. Ab bas ek aakhri jagah bachi thi, jahan woh kab se jaane se katra rahi thi.

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Finally Kriti apni aakhri manzil par bhi pahuch hi gayi. Use hamesha se yahan is office mein aana bohot hi kharaab lagta tha. Bohot hi gande se vibes aate they yahan. Aur aaj toh kuch jyada hi ajeeb lag raha tha yahan aana. Thaane ke chakkaro aur ajnabi logo se milne se kahin jyada.

Kriti Vikram ke cabin ke bahar uski secretary tak pahuchi. Use toh pata bhi nahi thi Vikram andar tha ya nahi.

Kriti ne secretary ki taraf dekha, koi aur ladki thi, Disha nahi - Vikram... andar hain?

Secretary use nahi jaanti thi - Aap? Aapke paas appointment hai unse milne ka?

Kriti - Nahi... par aap unhe kahengi ki Kriti aayi hai toh shayad mujhse mil le...

Secretary - Sir ne mana kiya hai kisi ko bhi bina appointment ke andar bhejne se... 

Kriti - Aap unko boliye toh sahi... 

Secretary - I am sorry ma'am... Sir is very busy... main aapki appointment note kar leti hoon kisi aur din ke liye.

Kriti ne darwaze ki taraf dekha, woh aur time waste nahi kar sakti, shayad dubara woh yahan aana bhi na chahe. Kriti jaldi se darwaze ki taraf badi aur handle ko neeche dabate hue darwaza khol diya. Andar Vikram ek phone call par tha.

Secretary ekdam bhaagi bhaagi aayi - Madam aapko mana kiya hai na. Sir... I am sorry...

Vikram ne phone rakhte hue Secretary ko jaane ka ishaara kiya - It's ok... tum jayo...

Kriti ne andar aate hue darwaza band kiya. Us raat jab Supriya aur uski ladayi hui thi, uske baad se Kriti aur Vikram ki baat bhi nahi hui thi. Ek baar bhi nahi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha woh kahan se baat shuru kare.

Vikram khade hote hue muskurate hue bola - Kriti... mujhe chachu se pata chala tha ki tum winter break par aayi hue ho India... how is everything there...

Kriti ka chehra expressionless tha, woh ek-do second rukte hue boli - Is that the best opening line you could say to me?

Vikram - Sorry... kya?

Kriti idhar udhar chalte hue boli - Kuch nahi... main holidays par nahi aayi hoon... I am back... forever...

Vikram - Oh... achha... kya hua?

Kriti ne kandhe uchka diye - Just... some unfinished business here...

Vikram - Hmmm.... look... main abhi thoda busy hoon... main ghar aata hoon... fir baith kar baat karte hai...

Kriti haste hue - You see me for the first time after so long... aur aap busy ho... not curious at all to know what happened in the US... how I have been... how many men I have fucked...

Vikram ka chehra thoda sakht ho gaya - Kriti... ye kaisi language...

Kriti - Kyun? Aap aur aapke dost doosro ki biwiyon ko fuck kar sakte hain... aur main kisi ko fuck nahi kar sakti...

Vikram - I need you to leave Kriti...

Kriti - I will leave... just tell me Supriya kahan hai... kya kiya uske saath?

Vikram - We are not discussing that... please leave...

Kriti - Then what should we discuss? Do you know... maine pichhle do hafton mein jisse bhi baat ki hai... woh sab aapke baare mein kya kehte hai?

Vikram - I am not interested in knowing that.

Kriti - You should be... Har koi yehi kehta hai... you are a bloody womanizer... asshole... gunda... ganda aadmi...

Kriti kaanp rahi thi aur kisi tarah apne aap ko Vikram ke saamne hindi mein gaali dene se rok rahi thi. Vikram ne koi jawaab nahi diya.

Kriti tez sanseein lete hue - You never even bothered to call me after everything that happened... you know how I must have felt.

Vikram - I think you must have felt great... kafi acchi deal kar li thi tumne. Buyer's remorse?

Vikram ne jaise Kriti ki dukhti rag par haath rakh diya ho. Kriti ne apne kaapte hue haath ko uthate hue Vikram ki taraf point kiya - Don't you dare! Aap aur aapki woh biwi... bloody bitch...



Vikram - That's between you and her. What do you want from me?

Kriti ki aankh fir se flood karne lagi thi - Just tell me where she is... 

Vikram ne ek gehri saans li - Agar mujhe pata bhi hota na, toh tumhe nahi batata...

Kriti gusse mein cabin se bahar nikal gayi.

Vikram wahin akela khada bahar ki taraf dekh raha tha. Uske dimaag mein bas ek hi cheez chal rahi thi, kaash use pata hota ki Supriya is waqt kahan hai. Woh bas chahta tha ki ye sab khatam ho jaaye, par Kriti ke aane se cheeze aur ulajhti jaa rahi thi.
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Kriti gusse se office se nikal kar apni car tak hi pahuchi thi ki uske phone par ek message aaya. Kriti ne apni aankhen saaf karte hue message khola.

Ek unknown number se message that - Jai Yadav se baat karo. Ye shayad tumhari madad kar paaye. 

Saath mein ek number tha. Kriti gehri saansein lete hue screen ki taraf dekh rahi thi. Ye message kisne bheja tha? Aur ab ye Jai Yadav kaun tha?

[Sriya2]

Update 110

Us din raat ko sabke saamne sach aaye 2-3 hafte beet chuke they. Sab log abhi bhi wahin they, par sab kuch badal sa gaya tha.

Abbas ab ghar mein jyada waqt nahi bitata tha. Subah nikal jaata aur raat ko der se aata. Rubina chup chap ghar ka kaam karti rehti, kisi se jyada baat nahi karti thi. Ammi bhi khamosh rehti thi, jaise sab kuch samajh gayi ho ki kya hone wala tha par kisi se kuch keh nahi sakti thi. 

Supriya ki tabiyat ab kaafi hadd tak theek ho gayi thi par ab woh neeche Hina ke saath hi soti thi. Na toh use aur na Hina ko samajh aa raha tha ki ab unka rishta kya tha. Na toh Hina uski beti ki umar ki thi aur na hi ab rishte mein woh Hina ki chachi reh gayi thi. Par shayad abhi bhi uska use Chachi bulana hi sabse theek tha.

Iqbal aur Supriya ki baat bhi kaafi kam si ho gayi thi, aur ab dono ki nazrein milti toh ajeeb sa lagta. Jaise woh ajnabi ho ya fir koi gehre dost jinki ladai ho gayi ho. Supriya ka mann baar baar Iqbal aur Rubina ke rishte ke baare mein sochta rehta, par na toh Rubina ne usse is baare mein koi baat ki thi, aur na usne us baat ko chhedne ki himmat ki thi.

Iqbal aur Abbas ki baat toh bilkul band thi. Par ek din achanak se ghar mein pata chala ki Abbas ne Khan saab se baat karke bol diya tha ki Hina ki shaadi Junaid se nahi hogi. Kisi ko samajh nahi aaya ki Abbas ka mann kaise badla - na Iqbal ko, na Rubina ko. Abbas ne khud bhi kuch nahi bataya.

Ye khabar sunte hi Hina fir se thoda chehak uthi thi. Use uske Abbu mil gaye they aur ab use ye nikaah bhi nahi karna pad raha tha. Uske liye toh sab kuch theek hi ho gaya tha, bas ab fir se college jaane ki baat chhedni thi. 

Ghar mein bhale hi sab chup chap they, par Hina ke chehre par muskaan dekhkar sab logo ko thodi tassali hui thi. Isliye jab usne ek dopahar Naaz se milne ki zidd ki, toh Rubina ne mana nahi kiya. 

Hina aur Naaz dopahar mein gaon ke bahar wale ped ke paas pahunchi. Sardi ab dheere dheere kam hone lagi thi, aur achhi dhoop nikli hui thi. Ped par chhoti chhoti beriyaan lag gayi thi. Dono ladkiyan patthar phenk phenk kar beriyaan toda rahi thi, haste chillate.

Achanak Naaz ki hasi ruk gayi. Hina ke peeche ki taraf dekhte hue uski chehre ki tyoriyan chadh gayi thi.

Hina - Kya hua?

Par Naaz ke jawab dene se pehle hi kisi ne peeche se uske pet par haath rakhte hue use apni taraf khainch liya. Hina ne jhatka diya par wo haath uske pet par aur kas gaya tha.

Hina ne jhatpatate hue peeche dekha toh Junaid ne use pakda hua tha.

Junaid - Kahan bhaag rahi hai tu... sochti hai itni aasani se chhoot jayegi?

Hina ne uska haath hatane ki behad koshish kari - Chhod mujhe... tu... ye kya kar raha hai...



Junaid ne use aur kareeb khincha, peeche se bilkul chipat-te hue - Tere Abbu ne mana kar diya toh kya... maine soch liya hai... tu toh meri ho kar rahegi...

Hina ne apne naakhun uske haathon par gadaye jisse Junaid ki pakad thodi dheeli ho gayi, par Junaid ne uski kalai kas ke pakad li.

Naaz wahin thoda door khadi jam se gayi thi, aur kaanp rahi thi - Ju... Junaid bhai... Hina ko chhod do...

Junaid ne uski taraf teekhi nazar se dekha ki Naaz dar gayi - Tu yahaan se bhaag ja... abhi... varna tujhe bhi nahi chhodunga. Apni Ammi se pooch liyo ki teri phuphu ke saath kya hua tha...

Naaz ki saans ruk gayi. Woh ek pal Hina ko dekh kar khadi rahi, phir peeche hatti aur bhaag gayi.

Hina use bhaagte dekh zor se chillayi - Naaz! Naaaaz! Naaz!

Junaid haste hue bola - Chilla le jitna chillana hai... woh wapis nahi aane wali... koi nahi aane wala...

Junaid ne Hina ko apni aur ghumaya aur apne honth uske honth par rakhne ki koshish kari. Hina apna muh idhar udhar karke usse bachne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par Junaid ne aakhir uske honthon ko apne honthon ke beech kaid kar liya.



Junaid Hina ke honthon par toot-te hue unhe zor se khoosne aur kaatne laga.

Hina - Uhhh.... mmm... chhod mujhe....

Hina abhi bhi use peeche dhakelne ki koshish kar rahi thi par Junaid use kas ke pakde hue tha.

Junaid ne Hina ko apne kandhe par uthate hue use pakad liya aur paas hi rakhe ek ghaas aur chaare ke dher par use patak diya.



Hina gehri saansein lete hue use dekh rahi thi. Junaid uske theek upar hi khada tha.

Junaid - Bol... mujhse shaadi karegi na...

Hina chillayi - Nahi! Kabhi nahi! Tujhse toh kabhi shaadi nahi karungi...

Junaid - Behen ki lodi! Mere majaak diya hai tune poore gaanv mein... ab toh shaadi ho ya na ho... tu toh meri ho kar rahegi...

Junaid ne apni pant aur underwear neeche sarkaye aur apna lund bahar nikaal liya. Hina uski ye himmat dekh kar hairaan reh gayi thi aur woh hilna bhi bhool gayi thi. Junaid ne turant neeche jhukte hue Hina ki chhati par baith gaya aur apna lund uske muh ke theek aage kar diya.

Hina - Junaaaiddd.. kya kar rahe hai... hatt mere upar se... dekh ye galat hai...

Junaid - Choosa hai kabhi kisi ka lund tune...

Hina ki aankhon mein aansu nikalne shuru ho gaye they - Nahiii... aur na mujhe choosna... please... chhod de na...

Junaid - Wahhh bhai... aaj toh tujhe ache se chuswayunga... tere ghar mein saare namard baithe hai na... nahi toh ab tak apne Abbu ya chacha ka lund choos hi leti...

Junaid ne aage sarakte hue apna lund Hina ke honthon par ragadna shuru kar diya. Hina buri tarah hilne ki koshish kar rahi thi taaki woh Junaid ke lund se door ho jaye, par nahi ho paa rahi thi. Usne ekdam se apne haath se lund ko pakadte hue use buri tarah daba diya jisse Junaid dard mein cheek utha.

Junaid - Uhhhhh..... Saali... kutiya... ab toh tu gayi... tere poore khandaan ko chodunga... teri Ammi... teri woh gori gori Chachi... sab saali...

Junaid ne Hina ki taangon par baithe hue zor se ek-do chaante Hina ke mammo par lagaye.

Hina - Ahhhh..... ufff.... hatt jaa... mere upar se....

Junaid aage jhuk kar uske mamme apne haathon se dabane laga - Maza toh bohot aa raha hoga tujhe... bas na na kar rahi hai... ek baar sab ho gaya fir dekhta hoon tujhse shaadi kaun karta hai...

Hina - Tujhse toh kabhi shaadi nahi karungi... aahhh....

Junaid ne Hina ke pyjame ka naada dheela karte hue uski pyjami ko neeche kheechne laga - Dekhe toh sahi neeche teri choot mein baal bhi aaye hain ya nahi.

Hina ne darr ke maare apni aankhein band kar li. Junaid ne Hina ki pyjami aur chaddhi ko neeche kheecha hi tha achanak Junaid ko kisi ne peeche se uske baalon se pakda aur ek jhatke mein upar kheench liya. Junaid piche khichta hua zameen par gir gaya.

Hina ne aankhein kholi toh dekha Iqbal saamne gusse mein khada tha, uski saansein tez chal rahi thi aur aankhein poori tarah laal thi.

Junaid uthne ki koshish kar raha tha - Tu... tu kahan se aa gaya...

Par bolne se pehle hi Iqbal ne use ek zor ka mukka maara. Junaid ka hoth phat gaya. Iqbal ne uska collar pakad kar use uthaya aur phir se maara. Aur phir se. Aur phir se. Junaid ke muh se buri tarah khoon nikalne laga tha.

Is beech ghabrayi hui Hina ne apni chaddi aur pyjami upar kar li. Thodi door se bhaagi hui Rubina aur Supriya bhi wahan pahuch gaye they. Woh dono jaldi se Hina ke paas pahuchi aur use gale laga liya.

Iqbal use mukke maarte hue gaaliyan de raha tha - Kutte... haraamkhor... gaandu... bhosdike...

Junaid latkhara kar zameen par gir gaya tha par Iqbal use maare jaa raha tha. Uski pant abhi bhi neeche ho rakhi thi aur Iqbal ne ek do ghoose uske pet aur uske thoda neeche bhi laga diye. Junaid ki cheekhen goonj rahi thi.

Thodi door se Supriya ki aawaz aayi - Iqbal ji... ruk jaiye.. bas ho gaya...

Iqbal ne gusse se jawab diya - Is haramzaade ko maar hi dena chahiye...

Junaid kaanp raha tha, khoon aur aansu chehre par the aur usne Iqbal ke aage haath jod liye they.

Supriya ek-do kadam uthte hue Iqbal ke paas aayi - Iqbal ji hame Hina ko ghar lekar jaana hai... ise chhodiye...

Rubina ne Hina ko pakadte hue utha liya tha.

Hina subakte hue boli - Par Ammi... isne meere saath... mere honthon par apna woh... neeche wala...

Iqbal ko ye sun kar aur gussa aa gaya aur usne Junaid ke ek-do aur ghoose maare neeche. Supriya ne pareshaan hote hue Rubina ki taraf dekha, jaise keh rahi ho ki woh Iqbal ko rukne ke liye bole. Par Rubina khadi hui kuch nahi keh rahi thi.

Aakhir mein Supriya ne hi jakar Iqbal ka haath rok liya - Iqbal ji... bas... woh marr jayega... aur mat maaro ise...

Iqbal ki aankhen abhi bhi gusse mein ubal rahi thi, aakhir uski beti ko chhua tha Junaid ne. Usne ek-do gehri saansi li.

Peeche se aakhir Rubina boli - Iqbal... bas... chalo ab... poora bawal hone wala hai yahan.

Iqbal ne Junaid ko ek aakhri baar dekha, phir Hina ki taraf muda. Usne use pakadte hue sahara diya, aur fir apni godi mein utha liya. Iqbal Hina ko lekar, aur Supriya aur Rubina ke saath tezi se ghar ke liye nikal pade.

Ghar pahunchte hi Hina seedhi andar apne kamre mein ghus gayi. Rubina uske peeche gayi. Supriya bahar khadi thi, haath kaanp rahe the.

Iqbal bahar hi ruk gaya tha, haathon par abhi bhi Junaid ka khoon laga hua tha.

Rubina bahar aayi - Iqbal... tumhare bhai jaan ko bulana padega... yeh baat jyada der nahi chhipegi...

Iqbal ne neeche dekhte hue haan mein sar hilaya. Rubina andar gayi aur kuch hi der mein Abbas ghar pahuncha. Uske chehre par sawaal the par gussa bhi.

Abbas ne Iqbal aur Rubina ki aur baari baari dekha - Ab kya ho gaya?

Rubina - Junaid... usne Hina ke saath zabardasti ki koshish ki...

Abbas ka chehra sakht ho gaya aur woh zor se bola- Kya!!!?

Iqbal - Maine use bahut maara hai... behosh pada tha bahar gaanv ke doosri aur...

Abbas ne aankhein band kar li - Tu... tu pagal hai kya? Khan saab ka beta hai woh... ab yeh baat pichhli baar se bhi jyada bigad jayegi... Khan saab waise hi panchayat mein ye maamla utha chuke hain.

Rubina - Ab? Thane chale?

Abbas - Tumhe lagta hai woh tumhari sunenge... isko hi andar kar denge aur fir uske baad...

Abbas ne Supriya ki aur dekha aur chhup ho gaya.

Abbas ne Iqbal ka collar pakda - Tu yahan se bhaagna chahta tha na... toh ab nikal jaa... abhi isi waqt...

Iqbal - Bhai jaan...

Abbas - Chup! Agar yahan raha toh thane wale pakad legi... ya usse bhi bura... Khan saab kuch bhi kar sakte hain... jaa... aur apne saath apni biwi ko bhi le jaa...

Rubina dheere se boli - Aur Hina ko bhi...

Abbas ruk gaya. Usne Rubina ki taraf dekha.

Rubina - Agar Hina yahan rahi... toh Khan saab use bhi nahi chhodenge.... aap jaante toh hain?

Abbas ne Iqbal ki taraf dekha - Hina ko bhi le jaa... abhi...

Iqbal - Par...

Abbas zor se chillaya - Koi par nahi! Jaa... teeno ko le kar... door kahin... hum logo ki fiqr mat kar...

Iqbal baat ko samajhte hue jaldi se upar ki aur bhaaga, taaki woh samaan ikhatta kar sake. Rubina andar ki aur Hina ke kapde baandhne.

Supriya bhi Rubina ke saath andar aa gayi. Rubina ki aankhon se aansu beh rahe they, aakhir uski paali hui bacchi jaa rahi thi.

Rubina ne kapde baandhte hue Supriya ki aur dekha - Dekh... mujhe pata hai woh teri bachhi nahi hai... par Iqbal use akele na samajh payega na sambhal payega... tu in dono ka saath mat chhodiyo.

Supriya ne dheere se sar hilaya, uske muh se kisi tarah nikla - Main... main koshish karungi...

Rubina ne Supriya ka haath pakda - Koshish nahi... jo karna pakka karna. Jo tu kamzor bani rehti hai na... woh chhod de... khud bhi jawan hai... aur ek jawan ladki ko sambhalegi... tujhe mazboot toh banna hi hoga!  

Supriya ki aankhen bhar aayi aur use haan mein sar hila diya. Rubina ne jaldi se documents aur kapde aur uski Ammi ka samaan ek thaile mein baandh kar Supriya ko de diya. Kamre ke doosre kone mein Hina bas subak subak kar ro rahi thi.

Bahar se Abbas ki awaaz aayi - Jaldi Karo!

Rubina ne Hina ko gale laga liya - Ja... aur wapas mat aana jab tak sab theek na ho jaye... samjhi?

Hina buri tarah ro padi - Ammi...

Rubina ne uske aansu poche - Bas... ab jaa... tera Abbu intezaar kar raha hai...

Iqbal neeche aaya, ek thaila kandhe par. Usne Hina aur Supriya ko dekha - Chalo...

Abbas - Tu... ye le... motorcycle le jaa... abhi is time bus ka ata pata nahi hai... shehar mein kahin chhod diyo aur main aa jayunga lene... par wahan shehar mein bhi jyada na rukiyo... wahan se bus pakad kar jaldi se nikal jaiyo... aur ye le... ye paise bhi rakh le...

Iqbal ne paise lene se mana kiya - Nahi bhai jaan... aapke paas...


Abbas ne zabardasti Iqbal ki jeb mein paise daal diye - Chup... le le... baad mein wapas kar diyo...

Iqbal ki aankhen bhar aayi - Bhai jaan...

Abbas ne door se hi Hina ki aur dekha - Bas... ab jaa... theek ho jayega sab... fikar mat kar...

Iqbal ne bike start ki. Supriya peeche baithi, Hina beech mein. Bike jaise hi chali, Supriya ne peeche palat kar dekha toh Rubina darwaze par aa gayi thi. Woh uki aur dekhte hue haath hila rahi thi, ro rahi thi.

Hina ne peeche mudkar dekha, uska ghar... uski Ammi... sab peeche chhoot raha tha.

Iqbal ne jaldi se bike ko kachhe raaste se nikaalte hue gaanv se bahar nikaal di. Use door siren ki aawaz aa rahi thi, par woh aawaz shayad unse door jaa rahi thi.

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Iqbal ne bike to pehli baar shehar ke train station par roka. Teeno ko wahan pahunch kar thodi rahat mili thi. Par jald hi naye sawal bhi. Gaon se door toh aa gaye the, par ab kya karna hai yeh samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Iqbal ne Supriya ki aur dekha - Ab... ab kahan jayein... aap bataiye Madamji?

Supriya uski aur dekhne lagi - Iqbal usse kyu pooch raha tha!!

Supriya ka dimaag toh buri tarah ghoom raha tha. Use aisa lag raha tha jaise woh fir se kisi purane din ko jee rahi ho. Aisa sa hi toh din that woh jab woh Iqbal ke saath Lucknow se bhaagi thi. Fir se kisi musibat se bachne ke liye. Us din, Iqbal use sabse pehle bus station hi laaya tha. Tab use pata nahi tha ki aage kya hone wala tha. Par jo hua, uski toh umeed bilkul nahi thi.

Aur ab? Ab bhi kuch samajh tha ki aage un logo ko kahan jaana tha.

Supriya - Main kya batayu? Aap hi tay kar lo na...

Iqbal ne fusfusa ke Supriya ko kaha - Madamji... main soch raha tha... aapko... aapko aapke ghar chhod dun... aapke maa baap ke paas...

Supriya ne chaunkte hue uski taraf dekha - Ghar?

Iqbal - Haan... aap kab tak mere saath bhaagti rahengi... aur aapki tabiyat bhi... aapke liye wapas apne ghar jaana hi behtar hoga...

Supriya ko pata tha woh sahi keh raha tha. Par uska mann nahi maan raha tha - Itni jaldi kyun tay karna? Abhi toh kahin bhi chalte hai na...

Iqbal - Aapne bataya tha aapka ghar Jhansi mein hai na... bus na lete hue train station chalte hai aur wahan se seedha Jhansi ki train kar lete hain...

Supriya - Aur woh log... jo peecha kar rahe they hamara... woh wahan hue toh?

Iqbal - Dekh lenge... wahan jaa kar dekh lenge sab... mujhe lagta hai ab ho sakta hai woh log aapko na dhoond rahe ho...

Supriya chup ho gayi. 

Supriya ne dheere se haan mein sar hilaya. Iqbal turant ticket lene chala gaya aur Supriya Hina ke saath bench par baith gayi. Uska muh utar sa gaya tha.

Hina bench par apna sar ghutno par tek laga kar baithi thi. Woh kuch nahi bol rahi thi. Uske liye toh ye din samajhna shayad aur bhi mushkil tha. Ek aisa din jahan sab kuch achha chal raha tha, par achanak se us gandi aadmi ne uske saath kya karne ki koshish ki thi. Uski wajah se woh apne gaanv se nikal gayi thi, jin logo ko itne saalon se Abbu aur Ammi kehti thi woh peeche chhoot gaye they. Aur saath mein they ye do log they, jinhe woh jaanti toh thi par shayad pehchaanti nahi.

Kareeb 1-2 ghanto ke intezaar ke baad woh sab log train ke general dabbe mein baith gaye. Thodi bheed thi par bohot jyada nahi. Hina khidki si side baithi thi, Supriya uske theek saamne aur Iqbal Supriya ke barabar mein. Unki berth par 2 aur log baithe they par woh bahri seat ki taraf they aur aapas mein baat kar rahe they.

Shaam ho gayi aur dheere dheere suraj dhal raha tha. Dheere dheere train chalne lagi, Hina ne khidki se bahar dekha. Sab kuch peeche chhoot raha tha - uska gaon, uska ghar, uski Ammi.

Supriya ne uska haath pakda - Sab theek ho jayega...



Hina ne koi jawab nahi diya, bas bahar ki aur hi dekhti rahi. Kuch der woh teeno chup chaap baithe rahe, kafi thake hue se, shayad kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aage kya hoga. Supriya ke mann mein ek ajeeb si bechaini ho rahi thi, jaise woh apne ghar nahi ek anjaan jagah jaa rahi ho.

Train chalne ke thodi der baad Supriya ne himmat karke Iqbal se poocha - Aap log... mujhe Jhansi chhod kar... fir kahan jayenge?

Iqbal - Madamji... soch raha hoon ki Alahabad nikal jayu... wahan main kisi ko jaanta hoon... wahin kaam dhoond lunga.

Supriya - Aapka matlab Prayagraj?

Iqbal - Jee... wohi... ek hi baat hai...

Supriya ko laga jaise uske seene mein kuch chubbh sa raha tha. Yeh log use Jhansi chhod kar ek nayi jindagi jeene chale jayenge. Aur woh reh jayegi Jhansi mein! Pata nahi kyun par soch kar hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha.

Supriya - Par Rubina Bhabhi ko maine kaha tha ki...

Iqbal - Aap uske baare mein mat socho. Aree haan... mujhe yaad aaya... samaan rakhte hue aapka woh bag bhi maine rakh liya hai... jo aap Lucknow se lekar chali thi, itne mahino mere paas hi rakha raha woh. Mujhe aap yaad dila dena ki aapko woh bag dena hai.

Supriya ko us bag ke baare mein na toh yaad tha aur na hi koi dilchaspi thi.

Hina khidki se apna sar unki unki aur modti hui boli - Aur Chachi? Aap bhi toh chal rahe ho na hamare saath?

Shayad dheere bolne ke bawajood usne sab kuch sun liya tha.

Supriya kuch jyada bol nahi paayi. Uska muh khula raha par shabd nahi nikle. - Main....

Iqbal ne hi uski baat poori kar di - Nahi beta... woh nahi jayengi hamare saath... hum pehle unhe unke ghar chhodenge...

Hina hairaan hote hue boli - Par kyun?! Kyun nahi aa sakti Chachi hamare saath?

Iqbal - Beta... unke maa baap unka intezaar kar rahe hai na... woh wahin rahengi...

Hina ne Supriya ka haath kas ke pakad liya - Toh hum bhi unke saath unke ghar kyun nahi reh sakte? Main Chachi ke saath hi rahungi...

Supriya ne gehri saans li par kuch keh nahi paayi.

Iqbal dheere se bola - Beta... woh log... woh unka ghar hai... woh kyu rakhenge hame...

Hina ki awaaz kaanpne lagi - Par Chachi... aapne kaha tha... aapne kaha tha aap hamare saath rahogi... Ammi ko bhi waada kiya tha...

Supriya ki aankhen bhar aayi. Woh waada jo usne Rubina ko subah hi tha shaam tak use todna pad raha tha.

Hina - Aapne jhooth bola tha Ammi se? Aap nahi aana chahti hamare saath?

Supriya - Nahi Hina... aisa nahi hai... bas... main tumhe kaise samjhayu...

Hina ne sar ghuma liya aur wapas khidki ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhon se aansu beh rahe the par usne awaaz nahi nikali. Supriya ne uska haath pakadne ki koshish ki par Hina ne haath peeche khinch liya.

Iqbal ne use aawaz di - Aise gusaa mat karo. Chalo raat hone ko aayi hai... ab so jayo...

Iqbal khada ho kar bola - Madamji main... main thoda ghoom kar aata hoon...

Woh wahan se chala gaya. Uske jaate hi Supriya dheere se Hina ke bagal mein aa kar baith gayi. Thodi der tak khamoshi rahi. Sirf train ki awaaz thi.

Supriya ne himmat karke Hina ka haath pakda. Is baar Hina ne haath nahi khincha.

Supriya ka dil abhi bhi kafi pareshaan tha - Hina... mujhe maaf kar de na...

Hina khidki se bahar hi dekhti rahi - Aap kya sach mein nahi aana chahti hamare saath? Aap to Abbu ki biwi ho... kya isme meri koi galti hai?

Supriya ko apna dil toot-ta hua sa mehsoos hua - Nahi beta! Tumhari koi galti nahi hai! Bilkul nahi!

Woh Hina se sirf kuch 6-7 saal hi toh badi thi, par aisa lag raha tha jaise achanak usne Hina ko apni beti maan liya ho.

Supriya - Sab kuch kafi mushkil hai samjhaana... kisi din koshish karungi...

Hina - Par kyun? Mujhe lagta hai aap dono toh ek doosre se itna pyaar karte hain... aap logo ki pyaar ki aawazein toh neeche tak...

Supriya ne jaldi se apne honth par ungli rakhte hue use chup hone ka ishaara kiya. Uska chehra sharam se laal ho gaya. Aakhir raat ho gayi thi aur Hina ki baat koi sun leta toh.

Hina - Acha... ek aakhri sawaal... Abbu aapko madamji kyun bulate hain?

Supriya soch rahi thi ki woh Hina ko kaise samjhaye ki Iqbal uski building mein watchman tha, aur woh wahan rehti thi, aur isliye woh use madamji kehta tha. Par shayad uska masoom dil ye sab nahi samajh paayega - Woh bhi kafi mushkil hai samjhana... aap apne Abbu se hi pooch lena na kisi din...

Hina ne Supriya se lipat kar dheere dheere rona shuru kar diya - Mujhe aapko khona nahi hai... bachpan mein hi Ammi ko kho diya... aur aaj apni doosri Ammi ko bhi... aur fir ab aap bhi...

Supriya ki aankhen bhi bhar aayi - Main bohot door nahi hongi... jab chahe aa jana mujhse milne...

Par uski apni awaaz mein vishwas nahi tha. Dono der tak aise hi baithe rahe. Thodi der baad Hina thodi shaant hui. Hina ne apna sar Supriya ki godi mein rakh diya aur woh din bhar ki bhaag daud se thaki, train ki dheeme jhonko se kuch hi palon mein so gayi.

Kuch der baad Iqbal wapas aaya. Usne dono ko dekha - Hina Supriya ki godi mein so rahi thi, Supriya ki aankhen laal thi. Woh chup chap apni seat par baith gaya. 

Raat bhar train chalti rahi. Supriya aadhi jaagi aadhi soyi rahi. Ek baar raat ko jab Supriya ne aankhen kholi toh dekha Iqbal bhi jaga hua tha, khidki se bahar dekh raha tha. Dono ki nazar kafi lambe waqt ke liye ek doosre se mili. Jaise dono ko pata ho ye shayad aakhri raat ho unki saath mein. Par fir Iqbal ne nazar hata li.

Subah jaldi train Jhansi pahunch gayi, lagbhag 6 baje they. Iqbal ne utarte hi pehle aage ki train ki ticket khareed li. Uski train din mein 11 baje ki thi. Woh teeno station se bahar nikle aur Supriya ke ghar ke liye auto kar liya. 

Teeno baith gaye. Hina Supriya se chipki hui thi aur Iqbal thoda sa faasla kiye baitha tha. Auto chalte hi Supriya ki dhadkan tez hone lagi. Use Lucknow se bhaage hue 8-9 mahine ho chuke they, pata nahi uske ghar wale kaise react karne wale they.

Kuch der baad pehchani si sadkein dikhayi dene lagi. Jaise jaise woh ghar ke paas pahuch rahi thi dil ki dhadkan aur tez hoti jaa rahi thi. Uske ghar pahuchte pahuchte sadak gali ban chuki thi, aur raasta kafi patla sa ho gaya tha.

Supriya ne auto wale ko ek ghar ke aage rokne ka ishaara kiya. Abhi bhi kaafi subah thi aur na saamne dukane khuli thi aur na hi jyada log bahar they. Iqbal ne auto se hi idhar udhar dekha jaise kisi khatre ko dhoond raha ho.

Supriya aur Hina auto se utre aur Iqbal ne auto wale ke paise de diye. Saamne hi Supriya ke ghar ka darwaza tha par uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi use khatkhatane ki. Iqbal aur Hina usse ek-do kadam peeche khade they. Supriya ne peeche palat kar unki aur dekha aur Iqbal ne darwaze ki taraf ishaara kiya.

Supriya ne ek gehri saans li and aage badh kar ghar doorbell bajayi. Abhi 7 bhi nahi baje they. Andar se kisi ki aawaz aayi - Kaun aaya hai is waqt!

Ek aur aurat ki aawaz aayi, jo shayad uski bhabhi thi - Doodh wala hoga... Jaldi aa gaya thoda aaj. Aate hain!

Darwaza khula toh Bhabhi khadi thi, ek dolchi haath mein liya. Ek pal ke liye woh kuch samajh hi nahi paayi. Uski nazar Supriya par gayi... fir Hina par... fi Iqbal par aur fir wapas Supriya par.

Bhabhi ke haath se dolchi chhoot kar zameen par gir gayi aur unke muh se zor se nikla - SUPRIYAAA!!!

Supriya ki aankhen bhar aayi aur woh aage bad kar bhabhi ke gale lag gayi - Bhabhi... main... main aa gayi...

Bhabhi ko vishwas nahi ho raha tha. Woh peeche mud kar chillaayi - Mummy ji! Mummy ji Jaldi Aao! SUPRIYA AAYI HAI!

Ghar mein ekdam hulchul si mach gayi. Tez pairo ki aawaz aane lagi.

Supriya ki mummy bhi ek kamre mein se nikalti hui boli - Ab kya hua! Kaun aaya hai use poochne....

Par Supriya ko dekhte hi unke kadam ruk gaye aur unhone apne muh par haath rakh liya.

Supriya Bhabhi ko chhod kar Mummy ki taraf bhaagi - Mummy...

Mummy ne use kas kar gale laga liya - Beta... tu... tu kahan thi... itne mahine... koi khabar nahi... hum pagal ho gaye they tere liye...

Mummy ki aawaz bhi nahi nikal paa rahi thi. Woh bas use kas ke pakde rahi ki kahin woh fir se na bhaag jaye.

Itne mein Bhabhi ne Iqbal aur Hina ko ghar ke andar karte hue darwaza band kar diya tha taaki bahar koi ye sab na dekh paaye.

Tabhi Papa aur Sudhir bhaiya bhi chhat se neeche aa gaye they. Supriya ko dekhte hi Papa ka chehre toh buri tarah sakht ho gaya tha. Aur Sudhir bhi kuch door khada raha.

Sudhir - Supriya! Tu... tu kahan thi! Tujhe kitna nahi dhoonda humne... tujhe pata bhi hai ki hum logo par kya beeti hai...

Supriya rote hue Sudhir ki taraf badi - Bhaiya... mujhe maaf kar do...

Par Sudhir ne ek-do kadam peeche le liye. Sudhir ki nazar Iqbal aur Hina par tiki, jo hichkichate hue se wahan khade they.

Sudhir ne unki aur dekhte hue poocha - Ye... ye kaun hain?

Supriya ne aansu poche - Yeh... yeh mere saath the... unhone meri madad ki...

Papa ki sakht aawaz aayi - Naam kya hai aap logo ka?

Supriya dheere se boli - Yeh... Iqbal ji hain... aur yeh unki beti Hina...

Papa ki aawaz tez ho gayi - Iqbal! Matlab woh tumhari building ka watchman!

Hina ko unki ye teekhi aawaz aur nazar achhi nahi lag rahi thi. Supriya ne bhi sar jhuka liya. Ek ajeeb si khamoshi chhha gayi ghar mein.

Mummy ne dheere se kaha - Pehle andar toh aane do use... itne mahino baad lauti hai woh wapas ghar...

Par Mummy ke bolne par bhi koi jaldi se nahi hila. Papa ki nazar abhi bhi Iqbal par tiki hui thi. Sudhir bhi chup khada tha, samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare.

Aakhir Bhabhi ne hi aage badh kar kaha - Chaliye... andar chalte hain... aith kar baat karte hain...

Mummy ne Supriya ka haath pakda aur use andar le gayi. Hina aur Iqbal dheere dheere unke peeche aane lage. Unhe bahar khule baramde mein hi do kursi par bitha diya gaya tha. Aur Mummy Supriya ko kheechte hue andar kamre mein le gayi thi, aur Bhabhi aur Papa bhi unke peeche aa gaye they. Bas bahar Sudhir khada tha un logo ke paas.

Mummy abhi bhi Supriya ke gale lag rahi thi.

Papa ne aakhir kaha - Poochogi bhi isse kuch! Isne jo hamari naak katayi thi. Aakhir hua kya tha? Kis cheez ki kami pad gayi thi?

Supriya se fir se apna sar jhuka liya.

Papa ki awaaz tez hui - Hamne toh soch liya tha ki tu marr gayi hai. Ab kyun wapas aayi hai?

Mummy ne Supriya ko pakadte hue kaha - Aise kyun bol rahe ho aaj! Itni mushkil se toh aaj wapas mili hai hume...

Papa - Bahar baitha woh aadmi... usi ke saath bhaag gayi thi na tu...  socha kabhi ki hamare saath kya hua... Atul ke saath kya kiya tune!

Supriya ki aankhon se paani behta jaa raha tha aur papa bas bolte jaa rahe they. Bahar tak aawaz aa rahi thi, aur Hina se raha nahi gaya aur woh andar ki aur aa gayi.

Papa - Ek phone toh kar sakti thi na hum logo ko! Ab kya chahti hai humse!

Hina ne kamre mein ghuste hi kaha - Aap... aap meri Chachi ko kyun daat rahe hain!

Sab log hairaan ho kar Hina ki aur dekhne lage, aur dheere dheere "Chachi" shabd budbudane lage.

Mummy - Kiski Chachi!? Ise Chachi kyu bula rahi ho?

Hina chup ho gayi. Usne Supriya ki taraf dekha.

Supriya ne aansu poche - Woh... woh bas... gaon mein sab aise hi bulane lage the...

Papa ka gussa aur bad gaya - Gaon mein? Matlab tu wahan unke saath rahi? Unke ghar mein? Aye ladki... agar ye teri chachi hai toh tere chacha kaun they?

Hina ne ghabrate hue bahar baithe Iqbal ki aur ishaara kiya - Woh... woh mere chacha aur Abbu dono hain... aur ye meri Chachi...

Papa ne gusse mein deewar par zor se haath maara - Bas... yehi toh kami reh gayi thi... isse achha hota ki ye yahan aati hi nahi... toh ye pata hi nahi chalta... Tumhari Supriya kisi ki begum jaan ban gayi...

Mummy ne Supriya ka haath pakda - Beta... sach batao... kya tune... tune us aadmi ke saath....

Supriya ne sar jhuka liya. Kya bolti woh? Haan? Nahi? Kuch beech ka?

Mummy - Bol! Kuch hua tha us aadmi aur tere beech?

Supriya ke muh se nikla - Mummy.... unhone... mujhe sahara diya tha... maine jaan boojh kar kuch nahi...

Mummy ki pakad Supriya par dheeli ho gayi aur Bhabhi unhe pakad kar sambhalne lagi. Unka aur Supriya ka rona hi band nahi ho raha tha.

Papa gusse mein bole - Main ab yeh tamasha aur nahi dekh sakta... isko bol do ki yahan se chali jaye... Kuch hi der mein bahar ise dhoond rahe gunde bhi wapas aa jayenge ghar ke bahar! Ise kya andaza ki tum dono ko kya kya nahi sunna pada hai pichle ek saal se.

Sudhir bhi wahan aa gaya tha - Ise kya pata hoga, ye toh kisi ki randi bani hui thi na...

Bhabhi ne ghoor kar apne pati Sudhir ko dekha, woh bhi kafi gusse mein dikh raha tha.

Mummy - Tu aisa kyu bol raha hai... jo hua so hua... ab toh aa gayi hai na...

Iqbal bhi khada hote hue wahan aaya - Mere khayal se hame chalna chahiye, hum bas inhe yahan chhodne aaye they...

Sudhir - Haan... kyun nahi... chod chaad ke chhod jaye ise yahan... zaroor mann bhar gaya tumhara bhi isse...

Supriya apne bhai ke muh se ye sab sunkar kafi hairaan thi, uske aansu ruk nahi rahe they. Par uske dekhte dekhte, Iqbal ne Hina ka haath pakda aur bahar ki aur nikalne laga. Hina roti hui Supriya ki aur dekh rahi thi, apna haath uski aur bada rahi thi, jaise woh Supriya ko wahan chhod kar jaana na chahti ho.

Par woh log chale gaye they, aur Supriya akele apne ghar mein reh gayi thi. Siwaye bhabhi ke sab log kuch na kuch bole hi jaa rahe they. Supriya ke kaan bhi band padne lag gaye they. Mann mein bas ek yahi khayal chal raha tha ki shayad usne yahan aakar galti kar di thi.

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Kuch ghanto baad bhi Supriya ne kuch nahi khaya peeya tha. Papa aur Bhai ghar se nikal gaye they. Bhabhi ne bahar jhaank kar dekha toh unhone ek tassali bhari saans li.

Supriya apne purane kamre mein akeli baithi subak rahi thi. Usne ghadi ki aur dekha, 10.00 baje they, abhi aaye hue 2 - 3 ghante hi hue they, par aisa lag raha tha ki woh kayi dino se kisi anjaan ghar mein baithi ho. Us gaanv wale ghar se bohot anjaan. 



Bahar Mummy bhabhi se bol rahi thi - Chalo bhai Atul ne toh apni doosri zindagi basa hi li, aur woh toh ise wapas nahi lega... par kahin na kahin iski bhi shaadi kar hi denge dubara...

Bhabhi - Mummy aap dheere boliye... abhi toh aayi hai aur abhi se aap aise...

Mummy - Toh kaunsa koi collector ban kar aayi hai... muh kaala karke hi toh aayi hai... 

Bhabhi - Mummy aap...

Mummy - Usko dekha hai! Uske kapde, uska pehnawa, uske baal... sab kuch badal gaya hai... kisi ko pata chalega ki woh kahan thi, toh kaun apnayega use? Shareef gharo ki ladkiyaan toh aisa nahi karti... pata nahi kya aag lagi thi is ladki ko.

Bhabhi ne andar ki taraf dekha ki kahin Supriya toh peeche nahi khadi thi. Andar se kisi cheez ke girne ki aawaz aayi. Bhabhi jaldi se andar aayi toh Supriya ek kapde ke bag mein apna kuch purana samaan thoos rahi thi.

Bhabhi ne uska gussa bhara chehra dekha - Kya hua? Kya kar rahi hai? Aaram kar le...

Supriya - Aaram kaun karne dega mujhe yahan... aap log jab tak mujhe is ghar se fir se nikaal nahi doge tab tak aapko chain nahi aayega... isse achha hai main khud hi chali jayu...

Bhabhi ne uske gaalon ko pakadte hue kaha - Pagal hai kya! Itni mushkil se toh wapas hame mili hai... aisa kyun soch rahi hai. Bas sab thoda shock mein hain... tu nahi jaanti kya kya hua tha itne mahino mein...



Supriya ki aankhon se aansu behne lage - Mujhe janna bhi nahi hai... aur na hi aap logo ko janna hai mere baare mein... main yahan nahi reh sakti...

Supriya unke haath ko jhatakte hue fir se bag ko bharne lagi.

Bhabhi - Ruk Supriya... main tere bhaiya ko abhi phone karti hoon... woh tujhe samjhayenge...

Supriya gusse mein boli - Jaise subah samjhaya tha! Main jaa rahi hoon... mujhe ab dhoondne ki koshish mat karna... aur na main kabhi wapas aayungi... bistar ke neeche rakhe paanch sau rupay liye hai bas maine... chor toh aap logo ne mujhe pehle hi maan liya hai...

Supriya tezi se bag uthate hue kamre se bahar nikal gayi. Bhabhi uske peeche bhaagi par Supriya jaldi se ghar ke aangan ko paar karti hui ghar se nikal gayi. Mummy ko itne mein samajh bhi nahi aaya hua kya tha.

Supriya ne peeche nahi dekha, woh tezi se nikal gayi aur ek auto mein baithte hue Railway station ki taraf chal padi. Bhabhi ghar ke darwaze par hi ruk gayi thi aur kuch nahi keh paa rahi thi. Supriya ne auto mein baithe hue apni ghadi mein time dekha, pata nahi woh time par station pahuch payegi ya nahi. Ye sochte hi uske chehre par pareshaani bad gayi.

[Sriya2]

Ok, the emotional updates and story reset has been completed with the story now open for lots of different outcomes. I will look to write further but may take a bit of break.

[sexypreeti]

Brilliant!!! Superb!!!

Hats off to your creative mind to perfectly weave together so many characters and create such an awesome story... 

[Ayush01111]

This is not perfect end i think still writer had not shorted Atul pain the person which suffered most without any fault

[Rajendra karka]

Wow that's called stiry

[abhishek.kumar]

Behtareen... Bahut achhe..

[Amit sharma72]

Sriya ji amezing update
writing skills very good
Hume aapki nai story ka intazar rahega

[qazmlp]

Wow...What a Climax !!! Thodi filmy but very realistic too, with a small dose of misplaced family shame and very succinctly showing how families fail to understand their children at a deeper level.
So ealistically you have portrayed how society will falsely call the perpetrator of an attempt bang as the victim and implicate the real victim and her family members instead.
But my favorite moment in this update and a total offbeat entertainment plus shock value moment was when Hina barged into the room to support Supriya and called her Chachi. Such ingenuity to craft such a moment in the midst of all that serious emotional scene going on.

[Salma Khan]

Amazing emotional updates, really feel so attachment with Supriya. Now want to feel good for Supriya in next new updates.

[Salma Khan]

Okay #Sriya, take some rest, then come back with more energy and new ideas, we will wait for you.

[Rohan0064]

Really really super fantastic too good updates.

[Rohan0064]

Will Kriti, can reveal the secret? Sriya, you create that mystery so well. So now curiosity level is so high.

[Rohanx40]

Acjectly so good writing perfect picture selection both updates are excellent.