[Hydro123]

Excellent writing nivi, while i am reading i can feel this is happening real , it chills. 
Excited for ur next update...

[Hydro123]

Waiting for ur upcoming update dear writer .

[Dogxpool]

waiting

[xfirefox]

update?

[prash001]

update?

[Dogxpool]

update

[xfirefox]

story?

[tting4tting4]

Hope this wonderful story continues, it was a great build up and hate to see another good writer leave the story hanging in middle

[xfirefox]

writer missing, or kartik is on leave with his mom and already left for his maternal grandmother's house.

[kama priya 1]

What happened to the writer. I don't know why many writers in xossip start with a big greatest story and leave this at half way and once in blue moon comes and write a few lines and fade away. I know it's hard and no profit from this platform and has works and personal things to do. What i recommend is write a full length story in your laptop and paste chapter by chapter. It's a curse to xossip to leave good stories in half way. And many bad boring unworthy story has part 123 and write has many threads. And some start random shitty storys just few pages and post and wants appreciation and some even write write few lines also. A good author need a big applause and follow up

[xfirefox]

WANTED

writer of this story is missing, if anyone has knowledge of his\her whereabouts please do share.

he he

[xfirefox]

update

[xfirefox]

waiting

[Rahul2105]

Beautiful story ..just the right mix of intensity, realism, emotional, romantic and sensuality...this is left at a cliff hanger.

Hope the writer comes back ..but also understand the writer has own personal life and demands. But dil to maange more!

[kama priya 1]

One of the best written stories but author left in middle . Sad

[Vidhya20071984]

Someone has to take up and write the remaining portion

[nivithenaughty]

Sorry for the delays some personal issues so had to focus there. I'm trying to write more I don't wanna write with half mind. I will write some chapters and post it here. I will definitely finish this story. Thankyou for all your support

[kama priya 1]

Please write ASAP ??? one of the Best stories in forum

[prash001]

update bro

[Yashthevar]

update bro