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Romance BESHARAM by entertainerjatt - ( Completed)
Quote:Originally Posted by ashiq119
Bro u r taking too much time now to give a single small update if u cant update daily give us a big update once in a week tell us the time too abt when u will give the update

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Bro acha idea hai...ek boht bada nahi par do update de diya karunga...ek week mein do update agra man kiya toh teen nahi toh do...pehla update kal ko ayega...dusra baad mein bata dunga...thanks for supporting guys...humein ral mil ke yeh story complete karni hogi...main bhi thoda compress karne ki kosish karunga...
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Update 45


Sam: han jao yaar…nahi toh tumhara kaam nahi ho payega…

Divya: I love you Sam…main tumhe miss karungi…

Sam: I love you too…Main bhi miss karunga tumhe…

Fir divya ne sam ko hug kiya aur bye bol kar wahan se chali gayi…Aur Sam bhi apne ghar chala gaya…


Ab age…

Sam wahan se apne ghar chala gaya…wo boht khus tha…uske dil ko ek ajeeb sa sukoon mila tha…use samaj nahi a raha tha k yeh sab itna jaldi kaise ho gaya…

Sam(apne man mein): yeh sab itna jaldi kaise ho gaya…achanak yeh divya ka is tarah kiss karna aur propose karna…aur maine bhi itni jaldi han keh di…yaar yeh accident ke baad se mere sath ho kya raha hai…kahin main aur divya pehle se hi toh pyar nahi karte…par kisi ne itni badi baat mujhe batayi kion nahi…mom se puchunga toh wo pareshan hongi…kya karun…

Sam bas in sab sochon mein duba huya tha…use nahi pata tha k sab kya ho raha hai kion ho raha hai…par itna jarur pata tha k acha ho raha hai…

Udhar office mein Divya bilkul tension free thi aur khus thi…use pata tha k Sam Ko is waqt kus chijein yaad nahi hain…par yeh pata tha k wo bilkul hosh mein hai...isliye aj jo kus bhi huya aisa nahi tha k Sam use bhul jayega…is liye Divya boht khus thi....

Usne aj akhirkar apne pyar ka izhar kar hi diya…par jis andaz mein kiya use soch kar ab use khud se hi sharam a rahi thi…

Par han use ek baat ki fikar jarur thi k wo shakas kon hai jise dekh kar Sam itna upset ho gaya tha…aur wo Ashu ke sath kya kar raha tha…

Khair main ap logon ko bata dun k Ashu aur Neha ab Divya ki company mein job nahi karte the…balki Neha ke bhai ki company mein uski help karte the…kionk Neha ne apni family se Ashu ko milwa diya tha…aur sab ne use pasand bhi kar liya tha…

Chalo main bhi kahan ki baat ko kahan le gaya…toh yeh din Sam aur divya ka udhed bun mein hi nikal gaya…dono ko raat ko bhi dhang se neend nahi a rahi thi…

Divya(apne ap se): kya karun Sam ko phone karun yah na karun…agar wo so gaya hoga…1:00 baj raha hai…ek baar call karti hun agar utha liya toh thik hai nahi toh rehne dungi…

Yeh soch kar divya ne sam ko call kiya…aur Sam ne bina koi deri kiye…jhat se call pick kiya…

Divya: toh janab ap bhi meri hi call ka wait kar rahe the…

Sam: yaar wo main kab se tumhe phone karne ki soch raha tha par socha tum so gayi hogi toh nahi ki…itne mein tumne khud hi phone kar liya…

Divya: kamaal ki baat hai na main bhi yahi soch rahi thi…par socha karke dekh Lun…toh fir tumhe bhi neend nahi a rahi…

Sam(sad si tone mein): nahi a rahi yaar…

Divya(pyar se): acha kion nahi a rahi neend…kus huya hai kya…

Sam: han pyar ho gaya hai…

Divya: kisse…

Sam: hai koi pari…

Divya: praion se pyar nahi karte…ud jati hain…

Sam: main udne dunga tab na…

Sam ki baat par Divya hans padi aur sath mein sam bhi hans pada…aise hi kus der baatein karne ke baad dono so gaye….

Agli subaj jab Sam ki neend khuli toh wo kafi better feel kar raha tha…use aisa lag raha tha jaise aj ka din kus khas hone wala hai…khair sam washroom mein gaya aur brush bghera karke bahar aya…uski najar phone par padi toh Divya ka morning wish ka msg tha… use dekhte hi Sam ke chehre par muskan fail gayi…

Sam ne jhat se Divya ko call lagayi…Par dusri taraf Divya ki mom Divya se apni galatfehmi ko suljhane mein lagi thi…

Seema(serious hokar): beta tum janti ho na main tumse boht pyar karti hun…par pichle kus waqt se humare beech kus bhi normal nahi hai…Beta kya tum is bare mein mere sath thoda time baat kar sakti ho…

Divya(pyar se): mom apko meri kisi permission ki kabhi jarurat nahi hai…apko jo baat karni hai khul kar kariye…

Seema(Divya ka hath apne hath mein pakad kar): beta sabse pehle toh sorry…maine tumhare sath kitna bura behaviour kiya…

Divya(apni ke hath ko press karke): mom koi baat nahi…ap pareshan thi…aur vaise bhi galti toh meri hi thi na…

Seema: thanks beta…aur main…

Itne mein Divya ka phone baj utha…kionk unke piya ne unko yaad jo kiya tha…aur ekdum se Divya ke khile huye chehre ka rang ud gaya…use samaj nahi aya k kya kare…

Seema(Divya ko aise tension mein dekh kar): beta kya baat hai pareshan lag rahi ho…kiska phone hai utha kion nahi rahi…

Divya(haklate huye): mom wo kisi ka nahi hai…bas aise hi hoga koi…ap apni baat puri kijiye…

Divya ki baat sun kar aur uski shakal dekh kar Seema ki hansi nikal gayi…Divya confusion ke sath apni mom ki taraf dekhti rahi…itne mein seema kus aisa bol kar chali gayi jisse Divya ki khusi aur hairani ka koi thikana hi na raha…

Seema(hanste huye Divya ke gaal par hath rakh kar): beta phone utha Lo JAMAI RAJA naraz ho jayenge…

Yeh bol kar Seema uth kar bahar jane lagi aur Divya hairani se munh fade uski taraf dekhti rahi…Seema door tak jake ruki…

Seema: beta main naraz thi… par tum dono se pyar boht karti hun…mujhe tumhare aur Sam ke milne aur whatever jo tum log karte ho…koi gussa nahi hai…ulta main boht khus hun ab main jati hun ache se baat karna…

Yeh bol kar Seema ne door band kiya aur chali gayi…kus pal ke liye toh use kus samajh hi nahi aya…fir wo ekdum se uthi aur khusi ke mare nachne lagi…

Phone toh kab ka cut ho gaya tha aur Sam ka munh bhi utar chuka tha…par Divya ko ab na toh phone ki fikar thi aur nahi jarurat…use mom se license jo mil gaya tha…

Usne phone uthaya aur car ki keys uthayi…aur seedha Sam ke ghar ki taraf chal padi…Wo jaldi hi uske ghar pahunchi aur parking mein car khadi karke…pagalon ki tarah khusi se nachte huye Sam ke kamre mein ja ghusi…

Wo toh acha huya kisi ne use dekha nahi tha…kionk madam itni jyada khus thi k wo raat ko pehne huye dheele se top aur ek lower mein hi daudi chali ayi…

Sam udas sa chhat ki taraf munh karke apne bed par ankhein band karke leta huya tha…Divya seedha bed par gayi aur Sam ke upar ulti let gayi…

Sam ne jhat se ankhein kholi toh dekha k uske samne Divya ka chehra tha aur wo uske upar leti huyi thi…Sam ko laga wo koi sapna dekh raha hai…toh usne socha k wo apne chimti kaat kar dekhe…par iski jarurat hi nahi padi…

Kionk agle hi pal Divya ne apne gulabi aur naram honth Sam ke honthon par rakh diye…aur uske upar wale honth ko apni grifat mein le liya…

Sam ke hath khud wa khud Divya ki peeth par kaste chale gaya…Sam ne puri tarah se Divya ko apni bahon mein bhar liya aur kiss mein uska sath dene laga…

Dhire dhire dono ki kiss ne passionate roop le liye aur Divya ne apni jeebh Sam ke munh mein dakhil karwa di…ab Sam Divya ki jeebh se apni jeebh ke sath khelne laga…

Jab dono ko saans lena muskil ho gaya toh dono alag huye aur Sam ne Divya ko apne sath leta liya…Divya bhi uski taraf munh karke uske sath chipak kar let gayi…

Divya(Sam ke gaal par kiss karke): good morning babu…

Sam: isse achi morning kabhi nahi ho sakti…

Divya: jaan ab toh hamari subah roj aise hi hogi…ek dusre ki bahon mein…par shadi tak ka wait karna padega…

Sam: acha fir age ka kya irada hai…

Divya: boht hi nek irade hain…tumhe shadi karke puri umar ke liye kaid karne ke…

Sam(Divya ko aur apne se chipka kar): aj kya huya…itni jyada excited kion ho gayi ho…

Divya: kus nahi bas samjh lo k meri life mein aj se jyada khusi kabhi nahi ayi…Jaan kya aj tum mere liye time nikal sakte ho…

Divya ne yeh baat Sam ko bade pyar se kahi…uski ankhon mein sirf pyar tha sirf beinteha pyar…

Sam(divya ke honthon par halki si kiss karke): yaar tum kya puch rahi ho…meri puri life tumhari hai toh ek din ki kya khas baat hai…aj ka pura din tum jo kahogi wahi karenge…

Divya khus ho kar Sam ko fir se kiss karne Lagi…Usne blanket dono ke upar khincha aur khud Sam Ke upar sawar ho gayi…ab ander kya ho raha tha yeh toh main nahi keh sakta…par limit mein hi ho raha tha…

Yaar jyada dimag mat lagao sirf kiss yah kahe toh passionate kiss ho rahi thi…par itne mein Sam ke room ka door khula aur Simran ander ayi…

Usne bed ki taraf dekha toh use laga Sam so raha hai…kionk ander dono is tarah ek dusre mein ghuse pade the…k bahar se lag raha tha…koi do char pillow ko hug karke so raha hai…aur upar se koi movement bhi nahi ho rahi thi…

Simran ne apne mathe par hath mara aur blanket ekdum se utha di…blanket uthte hi teeno ke hosh bhi ud gaye…jab simran ne blanket uthayi toh Divya sam ke upar thi aur Sam niche se use hug karke leta huya tha…wo dono kiss kar rahe the…wo bhi kafi ap samaj hi gaye honge khair scene par ate hain…

Simran ko pehle toh embarrassment feel huyi…par kionk Sam aur Divya ki family open hai khas kar Sam aur Divya ke case mein…Toh wo gayi nahi…

Divya uth kar bed par hi khadi thi…aur Sam abhi bhi lete Huye hi idhar udhar dekh raha Tha…

Simran(Divya ke kapde dekh kar): Divya beta tum yahan raat mein kisi ko bina bataye?

Divya ki toh buri halat ho gayi thi…wo yeh bhi nahi bol payi k main abhi subah hi ayi hun…par uske bachaw ke liye uske piya ji jo the…

Sam(dari dabi si awaj mein): mom wo main…

Simran(halke gusse se): tum toh chup hi raho…mujhe tum dono se baat karni hai…par pehle jao tum dono washroom se munh dho kar ao…main yahin baithi hun…

Simran ki baat sunte hi Divya toh chali gayi par Sam wahin khada raha…Simran ne Sam ki taraf gusse se dekha toh sam bhi ander chala gaya…

Ander dono ek dusre se ankhein nahi mila pa rahe the…aur jab mirror mein dono ne khud ka chehra dekha toh unhein samajh a gaya k Simran ne unhein munh dhone ko kion kaha…kionk dono ne itni kisses barsa di k unke faces par har jagah thuk lag chuki thi…aur khud ko aise dekh kar dono ko aur jyada sharam ane lagi…

Khair dono ne munh dhoya aur bahar akar kisi murjim ki tarah Simran ke samne a kar khade Ho gaye…

Simran(un dono ki taraf dekh kar): toh Divya tum yahan sari raat iske sath thi…kisi ko pata tak nahi…yeh baat Seema ko pata hai…

Divya(ghabra kar): nahi aunty…

Simran(divya ki puri baat sune bina): beta aise nahi karte…hum logon ne kabhi tum dono ko roka nahi hai…par aisa bhi nahi hai k tum dono apni hi marji karte raho…seema ko agar pata chala toh use kitna bura lagega…

Simran ki baat se Sam ko laga k jarur uska aur Divya ka relation pehle se hai…par situation ko dekh kar usne abhi is baat par jyada gaur nahi kiya…

Divya: aunty main subah hi ayi thi…main toh abhi abhi ayi thi…but jo bhi apne dekha uske liye sorry…humein khud ko control karna chahiye tha…

Yeh bol kar Divya ki ankhon mein ansoo a gaye…simran se yeh kaise bardast hota usne Divya ko apne paas bithaya aur Sam ko bahar jane ke liye Ishara kiya…jise sam jaldi hi samjh gaya…

Simran(Divya ke ansoo ponch kar): beta sorry feel karne ki jarurat nahi hai…wo hamesha se tera hai aur tera ho rahega…par beta main sirf itna kehna chahti hun k…

Divya bhi ab rona chhod kar simran ke taraf dhyan se dekhne lagi…aur use bhi laga k Aunty ki advise leni chahiye…

Divya(apne ansoo poch kar): aunty ap jo kahengi main wo karungi…

Simran(ek lambi sans chhod kar): main bas itna kehna chahti hun k yeh sab door lock karke karna chahiye aur ek dusre ka face kam ganda karna chahiye…

Simran yeh bol kar jor jor se hasne lagi aur Divya bhi apna sir niche karke sharmate huye hasne lagi…

Simran: ok sorry beta…but koi baat nahi mujhe tum dono par pura trust hai...ab chalein nasta kar lete hain…

Divya(simran ke gale lag kar): ji aunty…and thanks…

Fir dono bahar chali gayin…ab Divya pehle se better feel kar rahi thi…aur wo dono breakfast ke liye Sam ko awaj dene lagi…par Sam wahan nahi tha…pure ghar mein dhundha par kahin nahi mila…Rajeev ne bhi use bahar dhundha garden backyard garage gym sab jagah par wo kahin nahi mila…

Ab yeh kahan gaya yeh toh baad mein hi pata chalega…

To be continued
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Update 46


Divya(simran ke gale lag kar): ji aunty…and thanks…

Fir dono bahar chali gayin…ab Divya pehle se better feel kar rahi thi…aur wo dono breakfast ke liye Sam ko awaj dene lagi…par Sam wahan nahi tha…pure ghar mein dhundha par kahin nahi mila…Rajeev ne bhi use bahar dhundha garden backyard garage gym sab jagah par wo kahin nahi mila…


Ab age…

In logon ko toh nahi pata par main bata deta hun k akhir huya kya aur Sam kahan chala gaya…

Simran ke bahar bhejne par jab Sam bahar aya toh wo hall mein sofe par baith gaya aur newspaper padhne laga…Lekin tabhi uski najar Front page par hi ek badhi photo aur Headline par padhi…

Headline: MP Balbir Chaudry ke bete Rajesh Chaudry ne behan ke Mangetar Mr. Ashish Sharma ko apna bussiness partner banaya…unhone Apni company ke 50% shares Apni Behan Neha aur uske hone wale pati ke naam kar diye…

Yeh khabar padh kar Sam ko jhatka laga…use Rajesh ka naam sun kar kus yaad ane laga…par jaise hi usne Ashu aur Rajesh(saand college wala update 6) ki ek sath tasweer dekhi toh waqt ka chakkar badi teji ke sath ghuma…

Sam ki ankhon ke samne us din ka pura scene dobara ghumne laga jab uska accident huya tha…uske dimag ki nasein fatne ko hone lagin...uske bhule huye past ka har ek panna ek ek karke khulne laga…

Sam jaise hi thoda sambhla toh Uska chehra gusse aur dard se laal ho chuka tha…wo teji se bina kisi ko bataye wahan se car lekar nikal pada Ashu ke ghar ki taraf…

Toh jara hum bhi jaan lein k akhir us din huya kya tha…

Us din jab Sam Divya se jhagda karke use car ki keys dekar…paidal chala ja raha tha toh kus age jane ke baad…ek gadi teji se badhti huyi uske piche se ayi aur ek dum se footpath par chal rahe Sam ke beech takra gayi…

Sam us gadi ke kareeb ane par palat ke us taraf dekha tha toh usmein Ashu driver seat par tha aur Wo mota saand Rajesh uske sath wali seat par baitha tha…Un dono ke chehre par ek kamini muskaan thi…

Toh aj bas Sam usi baat ka jawab lene Ashu ke ghar ja raha tha…Ashu ke ghar pahunchte hi wo car se nikla aur door bell bajane laga…

Ashu ki mom ne door khola…

Ashu's mom(ek smile ke sath): beta Sam tum itne dino baad…aur tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai…

Sam(gusse ko control karke): aunty thik hun…Ashu kahan hai…

Itne mein bahar se awajein sun kar ashu bhi apne kamre se nikal aya…

Ashu: are bhai tu yahan…mujhe bata diya hota…tune khamkha takleef li…

Sam(ek muskan ke sath): bhai takleef toh huyi hai…par tujhse milna bhi toh jaruri tha…

Ashu(Sam ke kareeb a kar): bhai koi kaam tha kya…

Sam: yaar tune itne ache se dosti nibhayi hai toh main tumhare liye ek gift laya tha...

Sam ki baat Ashu ke sir ke upar se bouncer ki tarah gayi…aur Ashu ki mom bhi Sam ki taraf gaur se dekh rahi thi…

Agle hi pal Sam ne ek jordar thapad Ashu ke gaal par de mara…thapad itna jordar tha k uski awaj pure ghar mein gunj uthi Aur Ashu aur uski mom munh fade hairani ke sath Sam ki taraf dekhne lage…Sam ki ankhon mein gusse ke sath ansoo bhi the…

Sam(Ashu ke collar pakad kar): sale kya kami reh gayi thi meri dosti mein…tune apne hi dost ko jaan se marne ki kosish ki…kion kiya tune aisa…

Ashu(niche garden karke): kus nahi kiya maine…tujhe koi galatfehmi huyi hai…

Sam: sale itna bhi bhola nahi hun…aur ek baar meri ankhon mein dekh kar bol k sach kya hai aur jhuth kya hai…

Ashu ne kus nahi bola bas niche ki taraf mundi karke khada raha…Sam ka gussa aur badh gaya…wo gusse se lal hota ja raha tha…

Sam(Ashu ki mom se): aunty ise boliye k sab bata de nahi toh main dosti ka lihaj bhul kar ise security officer ke hawale kar dunga…

Ashu'mom: Ashu bol tune kya kiya hai…

Ashu(rondi awaj mein hath jod kar): bhai maaf karde maine kus nahi kiya hai…main lalach mein a gaya tha…usne mujhe bola k wo Neha se meri shadi karwa dega…

Sam(halka sa hans kar): wah bhai kya dosti nibhayi hai…kamal kar diya tune toh…do din ke pyar ke liye apne bachpan ke yaar ko bhul gaya…wo yaar jisne har sukh dukh mein tumhara sath diya…aur tujhe kya laga k wo saand tujhe aur Neha ko mere hote alag kar sakta hai…

Sam ki baat sun kar Ashu apni garden sharam ke mare niche jhuka kar khada tha…aur uski maa ki ankhon mein apne bete ke kiye ki sharmindgi aur ansoo the…

Sam(apne hath uske collar se hata kar uske kandhe par rakh kar): bhai tu fikar mat kar bas uske khilaf gawahi de dena baki sab main sambhal lunga…

Ashu ne halki si himmat ki aur apni garden uper uthayi…usne dekha k Sam uski taraf dekh raha tha jaise uske hi jwaab ka wait kar raha ho…

Ashu ne ek lambi saans ki aur bolna shuru kiya…

Ashu: bhai main pagal ho gaya tha main sirf apne bare mein soch raha tha…usne mujhe jab yeh offer diya toh apne pyar ke liye main apni bachpan ki dosti daaw par laga baitha…par bhai tune meri ankhein khol di hain…ab main wahi karunga jo mujhe karna chahiye tha…main tere sath ja kar us pagal saand ke against gawahi dunga…par bhai yeh sab Neha ko mat batana wo tujhe boht pyar karti hai aur teri sachi dost hai…agar use sab pata chal gaya toh wo mujhe kabhi nahi apnayegi…

Sam: Ashu usse kus mat chipana…wo tujhe maaf kar degi…agar na mani toh main usse baat karunga…par agar use kahin aur se pata chala toh boht dukh hoga…aur agar humne Rajesh ko arrest karwa diya toh wo Neha ko toh jarur bata dega…

Ashu: thik hai bhai jaisa tu sahi samjhe…

Sam: toh fir chal mere sath security officer station…

Fir Ashu Sam ke sath security officer station chala gaya…aur Rajesh ke khilaf complaint likhwa di aur Ashu ka byan bhi le liya…

security officer Rajesh ko Arrest karne ke liye chali gayi…usne boht hath pair mare par use pakad hi liya…upar se Sam ne apne dad ko puri baat bata kar CM ko phone karwa diya…aur usi party ka MP Rajesh ka baap Balweer Chaudry tha…toh uske baap ki bhi puri power khatam ho gayi…

Balveer ko khud bhi Rajesh ke kaam pasand nahi the wo acha admi tha…Rajeev ki bhi wo kafi izat karta tha…toh kul mila kar Rajesh ka jail mein jana final tha…

Neha ko jab puri baat pata chali toh wo Ashu se naraj ho gayi aur apne bhai se toh wo nafrat karne lagi…

Par Sam ne use samjhaya k Ashu usse boht pyar karta hai…is tarah wo bhi maan gayi…

Yeh bhi sabko pata chal gaya k Sam ke sath bachelors party ko jo huya wo sab Rajesh ka hi kiya huya tha par yeh baat Ashu ko nahi pata thi…

Khair ant mein sab thik ho hi gaya…sabki problems solve ho gayi…hamare besharam ko uski manjil mil hi gayi…galatfemion ke badal hat gaye…

Divya aur Sam ke sache pyar ko Vishwas ki ek nayi takat mil gayi…


                          ***************THE END*****************

Toh dosto jyada batein nahi karunga…ek shandar safar ka ant itni jaldi aur aise majburi mein karna padega kabhi socha nahi tha…par kus problems ke karan jo gap pada uske baad story se mera connection tut sa gaya… rhythm break ho gaya…par jo socha tha wahi likha han thoda jaldi likha…par umeed karta hun ek nayi shuruwat ke sath hi fir se milenge…tab tak ke liye Sat shri akal…take care dosto…aur is khubsurat safar mein mera hausla badhane ke liye shukriya…

SIDHU SAAB
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Bhai last both updates are good
Per apne itni jaldi story ka end ker diya bahut maja aa raha tha story me hum log kuch wakt or intzaar ker lete updates ke liye
Abhi story me bahut sare emotions ese the jinhe brief me describe kiya jata to maja aata reaction of neha after knowing truth , reaction of divya after knowing truth or bhi bahut kuch hona tha
Per koi nahi bhai apne story ka end ker diya vaise end aacha hua fast forward me hi kyo na hua ho
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Bhai man toh mera bhi nahi tha...par mujhe acha nahi lag raha tha wait karwana...par jald hi lautunga...
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Kabhi Hasati Hain Toh Kabhi Rulati Hain...
Ye Zindagi Bhi Na Jaane Kitne Rang Dekhati Hain...

Haste Hai Toh Bhi Ankhon Me Nami Aa Jaati Hai...
Na Jane Ye Kesi Yaade Hai Jo Dil Mein Bas Jaati Hain....

Karte Hain Dua Ess Naye Saal Ke Avsar Par….

Meri Chah Hain Naya Saal Ho Kuch Aisa,
Na Ho Jisme Koi Kisi Ka Dil Dukhane Wala...

Duniya Mein Nahi Hain Jinka Koyi,
Naya Saal Me Ho Unko Koi Gale Lagane Wala...

Ujadi Huyi Aankhe Jinki Zindagi Me Hai Andhera,
Naya Saal Ho Unhe Dubara Sapne Dikhane Wala...

Tanha Aur Udaas Logo K Aashiyano Mein,
Naya Saal Ho Khushiyo Ki barish Karne Wala...

Dukh, Dard, Dusmani Sab Ko Mitakar,
Naya Saal Ho Sabse Dosti Karane Wala...

Aur Bhi Hamari Ek Dua Hain Ess Naye Saal Ke Avsar Par….

Mere Doston Ke Labon Per Sada Muskaan Rahe...
Kyuki Unki Har Muskurahat Hame Khushi De Jati Hain...

Sada Dur Raho Gham Ki Parchaiyon Se...
Samna Na Ho Kabhi Tanhayion Se...
Har Arman Har Khwab Pura Ho Aap Sab ke...
Yahi Hamari Dua Hai Dil Ki Gehraiyon Se...
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This story is wonderfully crafted, and one can relate to the happenings in the sequence. Also, I somehow feel that towards the ending, it could have been drafted in a much better way rather to finish the whole ending in haste, another chapter or two could have been added.

But, this is awesome romantic story... Thanks mate
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Awesome story h
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