Misc. Erotica Shital - Ke Naye Samarpan

[Lunatic_prince]

Can anyone suggest story kahan se start karu bunty bhai ki writing se story continue karu yaa fir lust4you bhai ki writing se shuru karu jese audience kahegi wese karunga, to please suggest ke story kahan se continue ki jaay

[Praveen84]

Bunty bhai wala ....baki tumhari choice h .....we have no problem

[Lunatic_prince]

Bunty bhai wala ....baki tumhari choice h .....we have no problem

Aur thode logon ke opinion milega fir decide karta hu lekin kya aap bata sakte hai ke kyun bunty bhai wala kyun ye lust4you bhai wala nahi, taaki mujhe pata chale ke kya chahiye aur kya nahi chaiye

[Lunatic_prince]

Bunty bhai wala ....baki tumhari choice h .....we have no problem

Praveen bhai aap bata sakte he ke kyun bunty bhai wali story se continue karne ka keh rahe hai aur dono hi writers ki story me aapka kya opinion he agar aap details me batayenge to jyada deep me samajh aayega ke kese story leke jaana hai and aap mujhe personal me  bhi bata sakte hai

[Praveen84]

Bhai tumhare private message band h tume message send nhi ho rha...... private me telegram id send kar do yaar to

[Lunatic_prince]

Bhai tumhare private message band h tume message send nhi ho rha...... private me telegram id send kar do yaar to

Check karo bhai private message on kar diya hai and id bhi bej di he

[Lunatic_prince]

Hello dosto sorry job ki wajah se is story ko start karne ka time nahi mil raha tha lekin ab me is story ko dono writers ki story milake usko modified karke usko aage badhana chahta hu aur me ye pehle hi bata deta hu ke mein koi vanilla writer nahi hu to story extreme se extreme hoti jaayegi aur mene story ke liye ek basic plot socha hai to wo aapke saath share kar raha hu to aapke suggestions yaa advice mein lena chaunga story shuru karne se pehle


To story accident wale part se modify hogi to ab accident hoga lekin kisi bhi character ki death nahi hogi, wasim ko thodi chot lagegi aur maqsood aur tahir ko bhi sirf choti moti chote lagegi lekin sonabai ko kuch nahi hota hai kyunki kismat se wo accident me pehle hi bahar fik jaati hai, par jese hi hotel ka receptionist ye accident ki shital aur sanjana ko deta hai wese hi wo dono hospital jaate hai jahan par in sabko admit kiya gaya tha aur tabhi in sabka ye haal dekh kar ye dono rome lagti hai lekin tabhi ek aadmi aata hai aur wo pura situation sambhal leta hai aur fir jab ye dono wasim milti hai tab pata chalta hai ke jis aadmi ne ye situation ko sambhala wo wasim ka beta Aadil hai aur inka introduction hota hai lekin hospital waalon ne in sabko ek week tak hospital me hi rukne ko kaha hota hai to sab hospital me hi hote hai ke tabhi

Tabhi shital ko saas ka call aata hai aur fir vikas ka affair bahar aata hai aur shital ka divorce ye second writer ke jese hi rahega but vikas almost 20-25 saal ki jail hoti hai or ye divorce aur jail ki khabar shital le ghar par uske maa baap ko pata chalti he aur sunke se uske baap ko heart attack aa jata hai aur ye sadma shital ki maa bhi bardaasht nahi kar pati hai aur wo bhi chal basti hai, fir dono behne apne maa baap ka antim sanskaar karke waapas laut the hai, ab wo dono besahara ho chuki thi kyunki ab shital ka pati ka 20-25 saalon ke liye jail chala gaya tha to wo to ab milne se raha aur wese bhi shital use divorce de chuki hai aur maa baap ab rahe nahi nahi to ab in dono ka ek hi rishta bacha tha aur wo tha wasim isliye wo wasim ke paas jaane ke liye hospital nikalti hai tab shital phone karti he ke agar kuch ghar chaiye ho to wo leke aa sakti hai hospital me par tabhi wasim bolta hai ke discharge mil chuka hai aur wo abhi ghar par he to ye dono ghar par direct jaane lagti hai , jese hi ye dono pahoch ti hai to wasim aur uska beta aadil dono milte hai wasim ab jyada nahi par thoda thik lag raha tha, fir shital wasim ko sab batati hai aur wasim bhi apne past ke baare me aur bete ke baare me batata hai lekin wasim bahot chaalak wo in dono ka ye haalat dekh ke andaro andar khush tha aur inka emotional dekh ke wo inko bolta hai ke " Ab meri bhi umar ho chuki hai aur me nahi chahta ke tum besahara raho to jese tum meri rakhel ho wese ab aaj se tum mere bete ki bhi rakhel ho aur wo bhi tumhara maalik hai " Ye dono to maan hi jaati hai of course but wasim ka beta usse bhi jyada harami tha wo inko sirf randi nahi balki apni paltu kutiya banake rakhna chahta tha isliye wo in dono ka extreme loyalty test bhi lega jisse wo sure ho sake ke wo dono zindagi bhar uski paltu kutiya banke rahe


AB STORY KA PLOT ITNA MAINE SOCHA HAI AUR ISME KISI KO KOI ADVICE DENI HAI KUCH U
AUR MODIFY KARWANA HO, IDEAS HO TO WO MUJHE BATA SAKTA HAI,

AUR EK BAAT LAST ME JO MAINE BAAT KAHI KE LOYALTY TEST TO USKO LEKE KISIKE PAAS KOI ADVICE, SUGGESTIONS HO TO JARUR DENA KYUN KI MUJE KYA LOYALTY TEST LENA CHAIYE JO EXTREMELY HUMILIATING HO ISKE JYADA IDEAS CHAHIYE AUR AAPKA IDEA PASAND AAGA TO JARUR ADD HOGA,

TO JISKO PLOT KESA LAGA JARUR BATANA AUR YE SIRF JHALAK HAI STORY ISSE HAZAR GUNA JYADA EXTREME JAAYEGI


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