[sexypreeti]

Very nice and quick update and awesome twist to the story 

[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[Rohan0064]

I apologise, but not happy with your decision.

[Sriya2]

Salma, Rohan - I will think about it again, but, I am not saying its the end of the story but pausing it at an open ended point to take a bit of break from it and open possibilities for people to imagine. I have thought about what happens next and would eventually like to write it. But I think taking a break for a bit would be helpful for me. I have already noted the reasons for those in the last 3 posts (non updates) so will not repeat.

Meanwhile will look to write other things.

I would also be open to someone else continuing this story and I can share the broad plot points I had in mind. But please don’t turn it in another sex fest where the main character is having sex with everyone.

[pujaa69]

Salma, Rohan - I will think about it again, but, I am not saying its the end of the story but pausing it at an open ended point to take a bit of break from it and open possibilities for people to imagine. I have thought about what happens next and would eventually like to write it. But I think taking a break for a bit would be helpful for me. I have already noted the reasons for those in the last 3 posts (non updates) so will not repeat.

Meanwhile will look to write other things.

I would also be open to someone else continuing this story and I can share the broad plot points I had in mind. But please don’t turn it in another sex fest where the main character is having sex with everyone.

Hello Sriya2 you can tell me the future of the story I would love to continue it from it when u gave last update.... 
I'm waiting for your dm
Or don't worry I go through the story actually goes the way u want

[Rohan0064]

Thanks! Sriya, I agree with you. The main character can't have sex with everyone, but the supporting characters can have sex with more than one person to attract the readers, like Kriti, Aarti, Megha, Isha, Hina.

[Rohan0064]

You can use supporting characters for sex encounter for enjoyment and attract more readers and nothing wrong to that. You have hot supporting characters like that, Kriti, Aarti, Isha, Megha, and also the new session Hina too.

[Shahid Khan]

Supriya kyun gaali de rahi hai uske gaali dene me maza nahi aaya wo bas gaali sune and Iqbal ka pura sath de tabhi maza aayega. Waiting for Supriya and Iqbal more sex, even dirty sex too.

[Rohan0064]

At the story, Kirti and Akash are slowly getting closer to each other and they will even enjoy sex.

[Rohan0064]

Why not you enter Aarti again? She is a also very hot character.

[Salma Khan]

Curious about Hina and Supriya so much. What will be happening next?

[babeemily641925]

Suggestion-
U can include few more updates as below:
Supriya come home from hospital. In morning, after the men leave for work. Rubina & hina can help her bath. Supriya shy but naked. Rubina asks hina also to bath as she use to when child. Hina naked. Hina asks rubina also. Rubina can make fun of love marks on supriya body. Hina can appreciate the beauty.
Later night, hona can asks for inside details of love making from Supriya as they sleep in same room in minimum clothes.

Second day, rubina and hina goto market for shopping. Now iqbal can help supriya in bath. Both naked in bathroom. Iqbal cares for her and they both around naked in house.

When supriya recovers, hina iqbal supriya can go to nearby pond/waterfall for picnic. They bath. Iqbal get opportunity with Supriya in the open pond/waterfall.

Just suggestions, its ur choice. Keep going.

[babeemily641925]

Some soft style update on how atul was helped by her friend in recovering, staying in small house and slowly attracted to each other and love making.

[Sriya2]

Update 108

Iqbal, Supriya aur Hina ko lekar hospital se bas nikla hi tha. Use pehle Supriya ki dawaiya leni thi, aur saath hi uska mann keh raha tha ki use ghar jaane se pehle hi Supriya ko Hina ke baare mein bata dena chahiye.

Iqbal ne hospital ke paas hi ek chemist ki dukaan dekhte hue motorcycle wahan rok li.

Supriya ne use motorcycle rokte dekh poocha - Kya hua? Yahan kyu ruke hai?

Iqbal - Aapki dawai leni hai na...

Usne motorcycle ka stand lagaya aur neeche utra. Supriya aur Hina motorcycle ke paas hi khade they. Shaam andhere mein badal rahi thi, aur raat ki thand bhi badh rahi thi. Hina ne kas kar Supriya ka haath pakda hua tha, jaise woh use sambhal rahi ho, ya khud ko.

Dawai lete hue bhi Iqbal peeche Supriya ki aur dekh raha tha, sochte hue ki woh kya kahegi jab woh ye use batayega. Aur bhi toh kuch tha, jo chhipa hua tha.

Jaise hi Iqbal dawai lekar unke paas lauta, Supriya ne poocha - Dawaiya kafi mehngi hogi?

Iqbal - Tum uski fiqr na karo...

Supriya sahi se khadi bhi nahi ho paa rahi thi. Woh intezaar kar rahi thi Iqbal kab chalega. Iqbal ka haath motorcycle ke handle ko kas ke pakde hua tha. Par woh baith nahi raha tha.

Iqbal - Chalne se pehle... mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai...

Iqbal ne Hina ki aur dekha, jaise uski izazat bhi maang raha ho sab kuch batane ke liye. Hina ne halke se haan mein sar hilaya. Supriya un dono ki aankhon hi aankhon mein ho rahi baat ko samajh nahi paa rahi thi.

Supriya ne besabri se kaha - Ghar chalkar bhi toh baat kar sakte hain?

Iqbal - Nahi... ghar jaane se pehle hi baat karna sahi hoga... aaj pata nahi kya hoga wahan...

Supriya uski taraf dekhne lagi, Iqbal ke chehre par usne aisi asmanjas pehle nahi dekhi thi.


Iqbal aakhir ek jhatke mein bol pada - Hina... Hina meri beti hai...

Supriya kuch pal tak bas uski taraf dekhti rahi. Jaise shabd samajh nahi aa rahe ho - Aapki beti... matlab?

Iqbal - Hina... Seema aur meri beti hai... 

Supriya - Aapki aur Seema ki beti! Par… 

Iqbal - Haan... kaafi lambi kahani hai... main tumhe sab bata dunga... par filhaal main chahta tha ki ghar jaane se pehle tumhe bhi ye pata ho...

Supriya ko aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kuch jaanti hi nahi thi Iqbal ke baare mein - Main itne mahino se aapke saath yahan hu... aur aapne kabhi...

Iqbal - Mujhe laga tha... tum... yahan... bas kuch dino ke liye ho... 

Supriya - Aur ab kya lagta hai?

Iqbal ne aankhein jhuka li.

Supriya ne Hina ki aur dekha - Aur tum... tum jaanti thi is baare mein?

Hina ki aankhon mein aansu they, usne halke se sar haan mein hilaya - Mujhe hamesha se lagta tha... par aaj hi Abbu ne bataya. Aap naaraz ho kya hum se? 

Hina Supriya ke gale lag gayi aur rone lagi. Supriya kuch nahi boli. Naaraz? Usko khud nahi pata tha woh kya mehsoos kar rahi thi. Hospital mein Hina ka woh Abbu kehna aur use gale laga kar foot foot kar rona bhi ab ekdam se samajh aane laga tha.


Hina - Main jaanti hu aap meri Ammi nahi ho... par aap mere liye bohot khaas ho, kyunki aap hi mere Abbu ko wapis mere paas lekar aayi ho.

Supriya ke haath apne aap hi dheere dheere Hina ke baal sehlane lage. Sab kuch itna achanak se ho gaya tha ki Supriya ko bhi lag raha tha jaise koi sapna ho. Din mein hospital mein thi, behoshi ki si halat mein aur ab yahan sadak par ye... ye sab pata lagna.

Supriya ne Hina ki aur dekha. Is sab mein is chhoti si ladki ki kya galti thi? Theek uski tarah shayad woh bhi apne halat ka shikaar hui thi. Usne apne andar himmat laate hue uske aansu pochte hue kaha - Main naaraz nahi hoon. Tumse toh bilkul nahi. Tumne koi galti nahi ki. Samjhi?

Hina ne halke se haan mein sar hilaya. Supriya ne Iqbal ki aur dekha. Bohot kuch poochna tha, par shabd nahi mil rahe they. Ya shayad ye poochne ka sahi waqt bhi nahi tha. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha woh Iqbal par gussa bhi kare toh kyun or is haq se.

Iqbal ne chhupi todte hue kaha - Ghar jaakar main... bhai jaan se baat karunga... Hina ki shaadi uski marzi ke begair nahi hogi... shayad woh khush nahi honge is sab se... par main sab sambhaal lunga.

Supriya ne halke se haan mein sar hilaya. Kuch der baad woh teeno motorcycle par baithte hue wapis ghar ki aur chal diye.

Raaste bhar Supriya apne mann mein yahan bitaye saare pal apne dimaag mein yaad karne lagi. Aisa lag raha tha ki saare rahasya ekdam se sulajh gaye ho. Hina ki shakal aakhir kyun Rubina par nahi balki photo ki us ladki, Seema, se milti thi. Kyun Rubina Hina ko itna bacha kar chalti thi, jaise woh uske liye kisi ki amanat ho. Aur kaise Iqbal Hina se na baat karte hue bhi uski aur dekhta rehta tha. 

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Ghar ke bahar motorcycle se utarte hue Iqbal ne Hina ki aur dekha - Hina... tum apni chachi ko lekar andar chali jaana... aur apne kamre ka darwaza band kar lena.

Hina ne halke se haan mein sar hilaya aur usne darwaza khatkhataya. Rubina ne jhat se darwaza khola jaise woh besabri se unka intezaar kar rahi ho. Hina andar ghuste hi Rubina ke gale lag gayi aur rone lagi. Rubina use pakde hue Iqbal ki aur dekh rahi thi.

Iqbal uski aur dekhte hue dheere se bola - Use sab pata hai...

Rubina ka kaleja jaise baith sa gaya, itne saalon se band raaz bahar aa chuka tha.

Abbas andar hi baitha tha, aur unhe dekhte hi bola - Itni der kaise lag gayi! 

Hamesha ki tarah Iqbal ki jabaan ladkhada rahi thi - Bas woh... dawai leni thi... raaste mein...

Abbas - Raat mein do jawan ladkiyon ke saath kuch ho jaata toh... tujhe toh koi jimmedaari ka ehsaas hai nahi. Maine suna Hina bhi aspatal se gayab ho gayi thi.

Rubina beech mein aate hue boli - Nahi... aisa kuch nahi... woh bas galatfehmi thi...


Abbas - Galatfehmi kaisi? Baat ko chhupane ki koshish mat karo tum dono... main acche se jaanta hu ki tujhse kuch nahi sambhalta. 

Iqbal apne andar himmat laate hue bola - Bhai jaan... mujhe aapse kuch akele mein baat karni hai...

Abbas - Kya baat karni hai...

Iqbal - Yahan nahi... upar chalte hai?

Abbas - Kyun? Sabke saamne bolne se darr lagta hai... yahin kar le jo baat karni hai...

Iqbal ne Rubina ki aur dekha, Rubina ki aankhen keh rahi thi ki woh aage kuch na bole par Iqbal ruka nahi - Bhai jaan... maine Hina ko sab bata diya hai.

Abbas abhi bhi aaram se baitha hua tha, jaise use koi farak nahi padta tha - Kya bata diya hai?

Iqbal - Yehi... ki woh meri beti hai...

Abbas - Teri beti... teri beti kahan se hai woh?

Hina aur Supriya abhi Hina ke darwaze par hi khade they, poori tarah andar bhi nahi gaye they. Woh wahin ruk gaye aur un dono ki baatein sunne lage. Ammi bhi apne kamre se chup chaap sab kuch sun rahi thi, par unki himmat nahi thi aaj is ladayi ke beech mein aane ki.



Iqbal - Meri aur Seema ki beti...

Abbas - Teri aur us bhaagi hui ladki ki beti... jise tu yahan chhod kar bhaag gaya tha? Aur ab fir ek aur ladki ko bhaga laaya apne saath. Bhaagne aur bhagane ke elawa aata kya hai tujhe?

Rubina - Abhi bahar se aaya hai... ise aaram karne do... kal baat kar lenge ye sab.

Abbas ne Rubina ko nazar andaaz kar diya - Itne saal baad ghar aaya... aur fir se wohi sab harkatein shuru kar di hai... Hina ko bhi galat raah par le jaa raha hai...

Iqbal - Bhai jaan... aap meri baat sune... Hina... us ladke se shaadi nahi karna chahti... aur na main ye chahta hoon...

Abbas ne Rubina ko ghoor kar dekha - Dekh rahi ho ise... Itne saal iski beti ko apna bana kar paala aur aaj ye hame apna faisla suna raha hai.

Iqbal - Main aapka bohot shukr guzaar hoon... par ab main use sambhaal sakta hoon...

Abbas ne haste hue bola - Pehle khud ko sambhaalna toh seekh le... kahan shehro mein chowkidaar ki naukri karta fir raha tha. Aur ab do do jawan ladkiyon ko sambhalage.

Iqbal ne Abbas ko ghoor kar dekha - Main unhe acche se sambhaal lunga... woh meri beti aur biwi hain...

Abbas achanak gusse mein khada ho gaya aur uski aawaz thodi tez ho gayi thi - Teri Beti? Baar baar kyun dohra raha hai... itne saalo se use kisne paala hai?

Abbas fir se dahada - Tu chahe koi na ho... par ye ghar abhi bhi mera hai... aur yahan wahi hoga jo main chahta hoon... Hina ki shaadi wahin hogi...

Rubina beech mein boli - Jab Hina aur uske Abbu nahi chahte ki uska nikaah wahan ho... toh aap kyun is zidd par ade hain.

Abbas - Kyunki ye mera ghar hai... aur yahan woh hoga jo main chahunga...

Rubina ki aawaz tez ho gayi - Aap agar apni zidd par ade rahe toh ye sab aapko chhod kar chale jayenge... itne dino baad jab sab theek hone laga hai toh aap ise fir se kyun jaane dena chahte ho.

Abbas - Tu toh yehi chahegi na ki ye yahan rahe... taaki tum log fir se wohi sab...

Rubina ki aawaz kaanpte hue boli - Aur mat boliye... Hina yahin khadi hai...

Abbas ne gusse mein apni mutthi beech li jaise koi purana zakhm fir se khul gaya ho. Shayad woh bhi himmat nahi kar paa raha tha aur aage kehne ki - Ye dono jaaye toh jaaye... par ye ladki kahin nahi jayegi... iski shaadi main jahan kahunga wahin hogi...

Achanak se Hina ki palti si aawaz tezi se bahar nikli - Aap kaun hai mere liye ye faisla lene wale. Aapne mujhe kabhi apni beti maana hi nahi.

Abbas ne use gusse se ghoora - Kya kaha tune!

Hina ki aawaz mein ab darr nahi tha - Jo aapne suna!

Abbas ekdam se Hina ki taraf badha, us par haath uthane ke liye. Iqbal ne beech mein aate hue uska haath pakda. Abbas ne jhatka diya. Dono ek doosre ko ghoor rahe the. Abbas apna haath chhudane ki koshish kar raha tha, tabhi Iqbal ne use ek zor ka dhakka de kar zameen par gira diya.

Abbas kuch der zameen par baitha hua Iqbal ko ghoorta raha. Fir dheere se khada hua, aur bina kisi se nazre milaye wahan se tezi se nikal gaya. Aaj kuch aisa ho gaya tha jo pehle nahi hua tha, uske ghar mein hi uski bezzati.

Raat shayad sabki hi jaagte hue nikli. Supriya, Hina aur Rubina teeno neeche ke kamre mein ek doosre ko gale lagaye hue leti thi. Kaun kitna royi, kaun kitni der jaagi, kisi ko pata nahi chala.

Unhe nahi pata tha ki Iqbal aur Abbas kahan they poori raat.
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Subah ke waqt ghar mein khamoshi thi. Abbas subah hi ghar se nikal gaya tha aur Hina aur Supriya abhi bhi neeche ke kamre mein rajai mein leti hui thi. Rubina upar ke kamre se ek chhota sa baksa le aayi. Dhool se dhaka hua, shayad saalon se khola nahi gaya tha. 

Use kholte hi usme se kuch gehne aur kagaz nikle. 

Rubina ne unhe Hina ko pakdate hue kaha - Ye teri Ammi ki cheeze thi...

Hina ne kaanpte haathon se woh cheezein li. Ek chhota sa mangalsutra bhi tha usmein. Kuch choodiyan aur ek fold liya hua kagaz.

Jaise hi Hina ne us kagaz ko uthaya Rubina ne kaha - Aur ye teri janam patri hai... teri Ammi ne banwayi thi...

Hina us kagaz ke tukde ko padne lagi, upar ek naam likha tha - Himani... Ye...

Rubina - Ye... teri Ammi ne tera naam rakha tha... tu bol rahi paati thi bachpan mein toh tu apne aap ko Hina bolti thi, aur fir wohi tera naam pad gaya.

Hina ki aankhon se aansu behne lage. Usne woh mangalsutra apni hatheliyon mein pakda, use ye dekh kar ajeeb sa lag raha tha - Woh ye pehenti thi?

Rubina - Haan... kabhi kabhi...

Hina - Aur kya accha lagta tha unhe... kaisi thi woh...

Rubina halke se muskurayi - Bohot... bohot achi thi... bas bilkul teri tarah pagal...

Hina ki aankhon mein paani sa aa gaya, aur usne fir se apna naam "Himani" halke se budbudaya.

Hina Rubina se dher saare aur sawaal karne lagi, aur Rubina uska jawab deti gayi.

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Kuch der baad Supriya un dono ko akela chhod kar chhat par, jahan Iqbal akela khada tha. Kitna kuch bola gaya tha kal raat, use toh sab yaad bhi nahi tha. Samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki woh kaise Iqbal se baat shuru kare.

Iqbal ne jaise hi mehsoos kiya ki Supriya uske peeche khadi hai usne uski aur dekha - Madamji... aap kyun upar aa gayi... mujhe bata diya hota agar kuch chahiye tha toh...

Iqbal ke muh se kayi dino baad fir se madamji sunkar Supriya ko ajeeb sa laga.

Iqbal - Aapne dawai khaa li na?

Supriya ne dheere se haan mein sar hilaya.

Iqbal - Main aapse maafi maangna chahta tha...

Supriya - Kis cheez ke liye?

Iqbal - Sab cheezo ke liye... aapki ye bimari... kal jo kuch hua... jo kuch aapne suna... us sabke liye...

Supriya - Haan... kafi kuch ho gaya kal raat... 

Unke beech kuch der ki chuppi rahi.

Supriya ne dheere se himmat karke pucha - Woh jo Abbas bhai jaan ne kaha... woh sach hai kya? Aap... aur... Rubina?

Iqbal ka chehra sakht ho gaya, Supriya ne kal raat sab kuch toh sun liya tha - Bahut purani baat hai ab...

Supriya - Par hua tha?

Iqbal ne kuch der lagate hue kaha - Jee... mujhse galti ho gayi thi...

Shayad Supriya kal raat hi ye sach samajh gayi thi, par aaj Iqbal ke muh se ye sunna alag baat thi. Kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha tha andar.

Supriya - Aur Seema... use bhi pata chal gaya tha?

Iqbal - Mujhe nahi pata... shayad... woh kamzor si padne lagi thi... kuch bolti nahi thi... bas chup si rehti thi... aur fir aisi bimaar padi...

Iqbal ko aage bolne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Supriya - Aur isiliye aap... yahan se bhaag gaye they... yahan wapas nahi aana chahte they...

Iqbal ko Supriya ke muh se woh 'bhaag' shabd bohot ganda sa lag raha tha - Socha toh tha yahan kabhi nahi aayunga... par...

Supriya ne uski baat poori kari - Mere liye... aapko yahan aana pada...

Iqbal nazrein churate hue bola - Woh jo maine kiya... Seema ke saath... uske baad jo hua... main kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga khud ko. Par aapko is sab mein ghaseetna galat tha. Bas aap thoda theek ho jayo... fir main aapko aur Hina ko yahan se nikaal kar le jayunga. Aur aapko aapke ghar pahucha dunga... shayad wohi aapke liye bhi accha hoga.


Supriya - Aur Hina?

Iqbal - Hina ko main sambhaal lunga... kahin fir se naukri dhoond lunga. Use padai karwayunga.

Supriya - Aap sambhaal payenge use akele? Unnis saal ki ladki hai woh. Aap use jaanti bhi kitna hain?

Iqbal ne Supriya ki aur dekha - Madamji main...

Supriya ko realize hua use shayad ye sawaal nahi puchna chahiye tha.

Supriya - Main... main neeche jaati hoon... Hina shayad akeli hogi. Hum baad mein baat karte hain is baare mein.

Iqbal ne halke se sar hilaya aur Supriya neeche ki aur chal di. Iqbal wahin khada reh gaya, akela.

[qazmlp]

Super Melodrama and you manage to keep the script tight with good dialogues.

[Sriya2]

Super Melodrama and you manage to keep the script tight with good dialogues.

Thanks I tried a different ways to write it to reduce melodrama but this seemed like the cleanest way, with the story heading towards the 3 of them leaving the village. I might just continue writing a bit more, time permitting.

[Rizzi1198]

Zabardast interesting and emotional update too good

[Rohan0064]

Superb story with excellent twists and turns because writing level so high.

[Rohan0064]

Definitely It will be a super duper story every. You will read again and again.

[Rohanx40]

Absolutely so wonderful update again.