[Rohanx40]

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[sexypreeti]

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[Amit Sir]

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[Sriya2]

Update 107

Lucknow ke ek hotel ke cafe mein akele baithi hui ek ladki kahin khoyi hui si thi. Uske saamne ek coffee ka cup rakha tha jiski usne ek bhi sip nahi li thi. Uske dimaag mein pichhle kayi mahino ki baatein chal rahi thi. Kitna kuch badal gaya tha, balki sab kuch hi toh badal gaya tha.



Tabhi ek aawaz ne uska dhyaan apni aur kheecha - Kritiiii... welcome back to India... mere NRI dost...

Kriti ne apne chehre par ek muskurahat laate hue saamne ki taraf dekha jahan Akash khada tha.

Kriti ne usko casual ho kar bola - Aa gaya tu... itna time laga diya...

Akash ne baithte hue apna bag side mein rakha - Tere hi kaam se busy tha. Aur bata kitne dino ke liye aayi hai ghoomne? Do hafte ho gaye na aaye hue?

Kriti - Hmmm... haan. Ye bata... hua kya kaam?

Akash - Na toh haal chaal pucha... na kuch aur... bas seedhe mudde par... selfish!

Kriti halke se hasi - Acha bata de... kaisa hai?

Akash - Theek hi hoon... ab jakar doosri job lagi hai kahin...

Kriti - Hmmm... toh... band kar thi woh company...

Akash - Haan... bataya toh tha... tere jaane ke 1-2 hafte baad hi band ho gayi thi.

Kriti - Sabko job mil gayi...

Akash ne apne kandhe ucha diye - Mostly I think... jinse meri baat hoti thi... I think Sahil sir kahin job nahi kar rahe...

Kriti - Hmmm...

Akash - Waise jo mujhse kaam bola... woh toh tu khud bhi kar sakti thi... tujhe bas jakar apne bhaiya se baat karli hoti.

Kriti - Hmmm... 

Akash - Ab ye hmmm wale responses hi karti rahegi kya. Don't tell me tune unse abhi tak baat nahi ki.

Kriti ne kahin aur dekhte hue kaha - It's complicated yaar... I can't explain. Khair... dikha na tujhe kya mila.

Akash ne apna bag kholte hue kaha - Lagta hai main galat line mein ghus gaya. Mujhe toh private investigator ban jaana chahiye! Pata hai kitna mushkil tha office ke storage se ye papers laana... mujhe Sahil sir banne ki acting karni padi thi. Ek nakli id card bhi banwaya uske liye.

Kriti ne uski baatein ansuni kar jaldi se uske haath se woh kagaz le liye. Kriti ki nazre un kagazo par tezi se upar se neeche aur wapis upar daud rahi thi.

Kriti ne asmanjas mein Akash ki taraf dekhte hue kaha - Ye kaise possible hai... mujhe laga... mmmm....

Akash - Lag toh aisa hi raha hai ki kaafi saara money move hua tha us din... company ke bank account se...

Kriti - Par uske paas toh access bhi nahi tha! Aur bola gaya tha ki transfer ek raat pehle hua hai... fir....

Akash - Mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki why are you so bothered about all this. Woh bhaag gayi toh bhaag gayi na... tum kyu use dhoondna chahti ho.

Kriti ke chehre par pareshaani saaf jhalak rahi thi par usne Akash ka jawab nahi diya.

Akash - By the way... do you know... Rahul...

Kriti ne ekdam se uski baat kaat di - Mujhe uske baare mein nahi sunna kuch.

Akash - Aree suno toh... maybe it will cheer you up... if you are sadistic. Uska kafi bada accident ho gaya tha... uski car mein ek truck jakar laga.

Kriti ne dheere se kaha - So... woh....

Par woh apna sentence poora nahi kar paayi.

Akash - Nahi nahi... bach gaya... thank god. Bas... acche se chal nahi paata ab.

Kriti ke maathe ki tyoriyaan chaddhi hui thi - Hmmm... aur woh Supriya ka husband... uska kuch pata chala?

Akash - Woh wahan ab nahi rehta.

Kriti bhadakte hue boli - Woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai idiot! Par ab kahan rehta hai...

Akash - Nahi pata...

Kriti - Pata kya hai fir!

Akash - Itna kuch toh pata kiya... tujhe kya pata chala?

Kriti - Hmmm... do hafto se har doosre din thaane ka chakkar kaat rahi hoon... aisa lag raha hai jaise un logo ne file band kar di hai... koi use dhoond nahi raha. Main jaati hoon toh woh log ab annoy ho kar fusfusate hai - fir aayi behen ki lodi...

Akash ek dam shocked hote hue par haste hue bola - Tu sach mein America hi gayi thi na??! Kabhi tere muh se hindi gaaliyan nahi suni.

Kriti kahin aur focused thi - Kuch toh galat hai is sab mein... mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Akash - You know where you can find the answers... Vikram sir...

Kriti - Aur bhi kisi ko toh kuch pata hoga.... Sahil Sir! Unke approval ke bina bank se money nahi ho sakta tha... mujhe unse jakar milna hoga.

Akash ke chehre se hasi gayab ho gayi - Ummm... agar unse milne jayegi... toh main bhi chalta hoon tere saath...

Kriti - Kyun? Tu kya karega jakar? Woh mujhe akele mein shayad kuch bata de... par tere saath... I doubt it.

Akash hichkichate hue bola - Yaar... I don't think... you should go there alone...

Kriti ne hairaan hote hue uski aur dekha - Kyun?

Akash - Ummm... 

Kriti - Bol na!

Akash - Yaar... jab main ye papers wahan dhoond raha tha toh Sahil sir ke samaan mein kuch aur documents mile.

Kriti - Kaise documents? Dikha!

Akash ne reluctantly kagaz nikaalte hue Kriti ki aur kiya - Tujhe pata tha ki some years back... unhe jail hui thi - for outraging the modesty of a women... attempt to... you know what...

Kriti un parane kagazo ko dekh toh rahi thi, par use apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi aa raha tha. Woh dheere se apna sar na mein hilate hue boli - NO! No... this is not possible... Sahil sir is like the nicest person ever...

Akash ne kagaz par ek jagah ishaara kiya - Bail wale document par guarantor ka naam dekh.

Kriti ne wahan likhe naam ko pada - Vikram Singh...

Akash - Kafi weird hai na... Vikram sir ne hi unki bail karwayi thi... I didn't even know they were that close.

Kriti sochte hue boli - Haan... shayad woh log college ke time se ek doosre ko jaante they. Par fir bhi... main ye nahi maan sakti. Maine unke saath 3 saal kafi closely work kiya hai. Woh kabhi aisa kar hi nahi sakte.

Akash - Hmmm... you never know... par I think tujhe wahan akele nahi jaana chahiye.

Kriti ne uski aur ghoor kar dekha - You don't worry about me! I can handle myself... even if something goes wrong.

Pichhle kuch mahino ne shayad use itna strong bana diya tha ki use ab kisi cheez se darr nahi lagta tha.

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Kriti Akash se milne ke baad ek baar fir thaane ki aur badh chali. Use pata tha use kuch nahi milne wala par pata nahi kyun ye ab uska routine sa ban gaya tha.

Station mein ghuste hue Kriti ne apne aakhon se sunglasses utaarte aur apne haath mein pakad liye.

Usko aate dekh officer bhi dheere se budbudaya, woh bilkul khush nahi lag raha tha.

Kriti apne chehre par ek nakli muskaan laayi - Sir... main fir se aa gayi...

Officer - Madam aap kyun mere peeche padi hain?

Kriti - Sir aap itne busy rehte ho... toh kisi ko toh aapko yaad dilana hoga na ki aapke paas kaunse case open hai.

Officer ne haath jodte hue kaha - Madam aap acche ghar ki lagti ho... aap please mat aaya karo yahan.

Kriti - Par fir investigation kaise badegi...

Officer ne gehri saas bhari - Madam... suniye...



Woh Kriti ke thoda paas aa gaya, kuch jyada hi paas, aur dheere se bola - Mujhe nahi pata ki jo ladki gayab hui aapki kaun thi... shayad aapki behen ya dost...

Kriti ne dheere se haan mein sar hilaya aur kaha - Dostttt.....

Officer - Upar se kafi pressure hai is case mein kuch na karne ke liye. Aap samajhiye... na kuch hua hai aur na kuch hone wala hai.

Kriti ko laga ab kuch nikal kar bahar aa raha tha - Kiska pressure hai?

Officer - Aapki dost... kuch bade logo ke chakkar mein fas gayi thi... kuch toh lafda hua tha. Jab uske gharwale nahi pooch rahe toh aap kyun dosti ke chakkaro mein padi hain.

Kriti - Kaun bade log? Vikram Singh...

Officer ne usko dheere bolne ka ishaara kiya - Shhhhh.... dheere boliye na... Aap jaanti hai use? Bohot danger aadmi hai woh. Usko pata chala ki koi is case ke baare mein pooch raha hai, toh kahin aapko bhi na uthwa le.

Vikram ke baare mein aisa sunkar Kriti ko andar se accha nahi laga, par shayad sachhai yehi thi - Hmmm... theek hai... aur kuch is case ke baare mein jo aap bata sakte ho?

Officer - Nahi madam... bas ek aap hi aaye ho itne mahino mein is case ke baare mein poochne ke liye. Aur haan... ek woh... uska husband. Usko har mahine hazri dene aana hota hai yahan...

Kriti ki aankhon mein ek chamak si aa gayi - Supriya ka husband aata hai yahan? Aapke paas uska address hai kya?

Officer - Haan... register mein likha hoga...

Kriti - Aap mujhe woh address de sakte ho kya?

Office - Madam... aise kaise... rules hote hai na...

Kriti - Rules toh waise bhi follow nahi ho rahe na? Aap mujhe address de do... please... meri kafi help ho jayegi. Main aapko aur pareshaan nahi karungi...

Officer ne thodi der socha, fir register ki taraf dekha - Theek hai... ek baar... par fir aap please yahan aana band karna...

Kriti - Promise. Main nahi aayungi jaldi se.

Officer ne bhaari saans bharte hue register ke panne palte aur Atul ka address nikaala. Kriti ki aankhon mein jaise fir se ek chamak si aa gayi.


Kriti gaadi mein baithi, Atul ka address uske haath mein tha. Par abhi nahi. Pehle use ek aur jagah jaana tha. Ek aur sawaal poochna tha. Wahan jahan Akash ne use akele jaane se mana kiya tha. 

Kriti Sahil sir ke ghar ke bahar tak ek do baar pehle gayi thi, unhe drop karne. Kriti ko bohot acche se toh yaad nahi thi woh jagah, par woh fir bhi kisi tarah se wahan pahuch hi gayi.

Ghar se thoda door usne apni gaadi rok di aur fir chalte hue ghar ke bahar pahuch gayi. Uske mann mein ek ajeeb si ghabrahat ho rahi thi. Aaj se pehle usne kabhi Sahil sir ke baare mein aisa nahi socha tha. Par aisa lag raha tha ki ek-ek karke saare raj khulte jaa rahe they. Koi bhi waisa nahi tha jaisa dikhta tha. Khair... woh toh bas yahan information ke liye aayi thi.

Kriti ne ghar ki bell bajayi. Kuch der tak koi aawaz nahi hui. Kriti ko ek pal ke liye laga shayad koi ghar par nahi hai... ya fir woh galat address par pahuch gayi hai.

Par fir darwaza halka sa khula, andar se Sahil sir ne jhaankte hue Kriti ki taraf dekha. Unki daadi normal se jyada badi hui thi aur baal bikhre hue they, jaise woh abhi so kar uthe ho.

Sahil ne chasma lagate hue Kriti ki aur dekha - Kriti... US se kab aayi?

Unki aawaz mein zara bhi hairaani nahi thi use wahan dekh kar, itne casual jaise Kriti ko wahan expect hi kar rahe ho.

Sahil ne darwaza poora khola - Aayo na... andar aayo...

Kriti dheere se andar aa gayi aur woh idhar udhar dekh rahi thi. Kafi simple sa normal sa ghar tha.

Sahil - Kuch logi... chai... coffee... waise main itni acchi banata nahi...

Kriti deewaron par lagi kuch photos ki taraf dekh rahi thi, jo shayad saalo pehle ki thi. Un mein Sahil ka chehra bilkul alag sa lag raha tha, behad khush, koi daadi much nahi, ek handsome young man. Kuch photos mein unke saath ek sundar jawan aurat bhi thi, shayad unki wife hogi, aur ek chhoti bacchi ki alag se photos.

Kriti - Nahi... it's fine... kuch nahi chahiye.

Sahil - Baitho...

Kriti ko kafi uncomfortable sa lag raha tha, jaisa kabhi na laga ho. Woh shayad yahan jyada der nahi rukna chahti thi.

Sahil - Aur batayo... tumhari studies kaisi chal rahi hai wahan?

Kriti - Uhmmm... Sir... main is sab ke baare mein baat karne nahi aayi hoon.

Sahil - Oh... achha. I am sorry... batayo fir?

Kriti hichkichate hue boli - Sir... main bas... ye janna chahti hoon ki aakhir hua kya tha? Mujhe nahi lagta Supriya ne koi fraud kiya hoga... 

Sahil ne kuch kaha nahi, woh bas Kriti ki aur dekh raha tha.

Kriti - Samajh nahi aa raha hai ki sach kya hai... aur Supriya gayi kahan. Mujhe lagta hai aapko zaroor kuch pata hoga.

Sahil - Tumne Vikram se baat ki?

Har insaan usse shayad yehi sawaal kar raha tha aaj, Kriti - Nahi...

Sahil - Hmmm... 

Kriti ne intezaar kiya ki shayad woh kuch aur kahenge, par Sahil bas chup raha.

Kriti thodi frustrate hote hue boli - Sir... please. Mujhe jaanna hai ki company se woh paise kisne transfer kiye... Supriya ke paas toh access hi nahi tha. Aapki approval ke bina toh...

Sahil ne uski baat kaat di - Kriti... tum kyun dhoond rahi ho use?

Kriti - Kyunki... kyunki main...

Woh ruk gayi. Kya bolti woh? Ki maine hi sab barbaad kiya? Ki meri wajah se...

Sahil uski feelings ko padhte hue bola - It's ok... tumhe answer karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... hum sabki life complicated hoti hai.

Sahil ki baat ne Kriti ka gussa aur badha diya - Sir please... I need to know! Aapne help kari thi na Vikram ki.

Kriti ki aawaz mein narmi nahi rahi thi.

Kriti - Sir! Bataiye na? Aap kyun chup hain? Kya kiya aap logo ne? Supriya zinda bhi hai ya...

Sahil ne Kriti ko ghoor kar dekha jaise woh Kriti ke is question se kafi shocked ho gaya ho. 

Kriti ki kaapti hui aawaz nikli - Aap aur Vikram acche dost ho na?! Woh case... Vikram ne aapki bail karwayi thi... aap aur woh mil kar bholi bhaali ladkiyon ko fasate ho... aur fir unke saath.... Supriya ke saath bhi aap dono ne...

Sahil shaant par sakht aawaz mein bola - Bas karo... na tum samjhogi... aur na main samjha payunga.

Kriti apna bag uthaate hue khadi ho gayi, uski aankhen gili ho chuki thi - Samjhane ke liye kuch nahi bacha hai... main sab samajh gayi hoon. Vikram aur aap mere idols they... ab samajh mein aaya main kitni galat thi.



Sahil ne apna composure rakhte hue kaha - Kriti... na main utna accha hoon jitna tumne kabhi socha tha, aur na utna bura jitna tum ab soch rahi ho.

Kriti frustrated ho kar darwaze ki taraf badhi. Jaate jaate usne fir se un photos ki aur dekha, aur peeche mud kar pucha - Ye aapki family hai?

Sahil ne halke se haan mein sar hila diya, par uska dhyaan ab Kriti par nahi tha, woh kuch sochte sochte kho gaya tha.

Kriti kuch aur bolne ko hi hui thi - “Agar inke saath….” ki use realize hua ki shayad woh fir se ek line cross kar degi. Woh gusse mein darwaza kholte hue bahar nikal gayi.

Peeche se bas darwaza dheere se band karne ki aawaz aayi.

Kriti bahar khadi rahi kuch der. Hairan, frustrated, gusse mein.Woh chahe jitne bhi haath pair maar rahi thi, har raasta band hi dikhayi de raha tha. Shayad ek hi aakhri raasta bacha tha, jahan woh bilkul nahi jaana chahti thi.

[Ayush01111]

Ye naya tha sab ko supriya ke sath jo hua uski chinta hai atul ke sath jo hua vo kya tha

[saya]

shandar.......................

[Rohan0064]

It's so wonderful update now opened some secret.

[Rohan0064]

Now the story you have created has created tremendous suspense. That's great.

[Rohan0064]

Mainly Rahul was make ruined Supriya's life so now he punished. But who is the real culprit? Perhaps Vikram???

[Rohan0064]

We are expecting Kriti's another sex encounter here to hot sex scene

[Sriya2]

Sorry to disappoint, but its hard to put in another sex scene as I am looking to close out the story in the next 3 updates and reveal a bunch of emotional secrets. I would have added sex scenes if it made sense, but not going to do it as it doesnt.

After these 3 updates are done… it will open up the story nicely for a lot of different and exciting possibilities for sexual adventures for different characters. I will hopefully come back to it at some point, but not anytime soon.

So final warning, please do not expect any sexual stuff in the next few updates. If you were in it for the story… then yeah hopefully you will like it.

[Rohan0064]

Please take your time, but write continue with this story. please don't end this story with next three updates.

[Rohan0064]

What happened? why you want to finish this story with only three updates? It's not fair. Please understand to our feelings too. We are involved with this story too since beginning. We want more enjoyment.

[Rohanx40]

Why do you want to end this story with just three updates so early? What's wrong with you?

[Rohanx40]

Who hurt your feelings? Please ignore everything and keep writing. Don't worry we will give you full support.

[Rohanx40]

I request to you please don't stop this story so early, yet you take a break then continue again.

[Salma Khan]

#Sriya, what happened? You can't stop in between this story when we're having the most fun.

[Salma Khan]

After all this is our best story I was connected with to the beginning. And don't want to unexpected end.

[Salma Khan]

#Sriya, you can take another long break readers have no problem. but don't stop the story so soon.