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Kamal’s mind shredded. ‘What would they tell her? What would they convince her to do?’
“You can’t do this,” Kamal told Gupta, “This is...it’s....”then Gupta
replied
“What? bang? No it isn’t. She’s going to do everything willingly—all we’re doing is giving her permission to
unleash her inner self.” Gupta leaned towards the camera. “See, the funny thing here, Kamal, is this: if Athidi’s
really a good girl, if she doesn’t want other men...well, then you have nothing to worry about. Even if her
loving husband suggests that she do something, she’ll tell him ‘No’ and that’ll be that.” He grinned. “But...if
she’s been harbouring(having inner) secret desires...if she’s been longing for something bigger than that pathetic thing you
call a cuck....yours so tiny so ..well, we’re going to set her free.” we will make her very
free hungry cock woman. "
Kamal felt sick in his stomach. He knew Gupta watched him while he jacked off. He’d never thought his cock
was small—Athidi had never said it was small—but now he wasn’t so sure.
“Well,” said Gupta, “I think that just about covers it. I think this is going to be fun, Kamal. Fun for us and Athidi,
anyway. Maybe not so much for you.”
Kamal shook his head. “But—Gupta, wait—Think about this! What happens when Athidi gets back? I can tell her
everything that’s happened! She’ll hate you! She’ll sue you, or have you arrested, or—”
Gupta looked kamal dead in the eye. “If she gets back and you tell her, what do you think is going to happen
then? How do you think she’s going to feel?”
Kamal felt like he was dying inside. He imagined her horror at discovering that, instead of living their shared
fantasies as she’d thought, she’d actually cheated on him, even unwittingly. She’d be wrecked with guilt. It
wouldn’t be her fault, but she’d blame herself.
Kamal knew he couldn’t do that to her. He could not tell her.
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Gupta asked again " will you tell to her all story when she return to your home."
Gupta: I know Kamal you can't do anything
"What you’re going to do,” he told kamal, Tell her like this
“Is sit back and watch like a good, cuckolded husband. And when
your wife comes home, you’re going to tell her how much you enjoyed it.”
Kamal pushed his face close to the screen, raw terror tearing at his brain.
“Please, Gupta ! Please don’t do this!”
Gupta looked bemused. “But Kamal—what would we do for entertainment for the next few weeks? Think of
the poor crew. Athidi ’s already so popular.”
Kamal saw the mouse pointer move again and Gupta opened up the web browser. “Here,” he said. “Look at
this. Your account can read, but not post. Knock yourself out.”
And Gupta told OK I will end the call. Then again Kamal requested" please Gupta sir please stop it"
Gupta: May be may not be... Sure you will enjoy her sex... Tell me have you ever fuck her in Anus....?
Kamal: No.... No... I didn't still.? She can't take pain....
Gupta : OK then I will open it.... With my 10 inch long thick cock...
Gupta: tell me how many times you are fucking Athidi in week?
Kamal: Pls leave us.... Please...
Gupta : shut up.... Tell me just answer.
Kamal: weekly once..
Gupta: with your pathetic tiny cock you never satisfies your beautiful wife.... Sure I will give her surprize
she can't forget in her life....
And Gupta ended call.
Kamal sat there slumped in his chair in shock. His life had completely changed in the space of just a few
minutes. He thought of the days and weeks to come. His wife’s loyalty, being tested again and again..
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Great going bro.... but write longer updates. Can't wait.........
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13-01-2026, 02:58 PM
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I’m writing this quietly, not as criticism, but as someone who has become emotionally invested in your story and especially in Adithi.
I truly believe that what happens between a husband and wife private conversations, fantasies, vulnerable thoughts belongs only to them. Those moments don’t define morality,they define trust. Kamal and Adithi’s bond felt real to me because it wasn’t perfect, but human. That’s why it hurts to see Adithi carrying the weight of consequences for things that were never meant to leave the privacy of their relationship.
If Kamal’s desires or choices are questioned, I struggle to understand why Adithi must suffer for them. She feels less like a character and more like a person I’ve come to care about. I don’t see her as someone who deserves humiliation or punishment she deserves empathy, protection, and emotional fairness.
What makes your writing powerful is its realism and emotional tension. That slow, thoughtful build is what pulled me in. If events escalate too fast or become extreme in a short span, I fear the story may lose the emotional truth that makes it special. Not because darkness shouldn’t exist but because Adithi’s pain deserves meaning, not shock value.
I know villains may gain temporary control, and I trust your vision. I just hope that Adithi is handled with the same sensitivity and depth with which she was written. I’ve grown attached to her far quicker than I expected, and that’s a credit to your talent.
You are a gifted writer, and the teasing, the emotional layers, the tension of it works beautifully. I only wanted to share this because the story matters to me, and so does Adithi.
Thank you for reading this, even if it doesn’t change your path.
I wanted to speak from the heart.
But as a honest reader, Please consider my thoughts.
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(13-01-2026, 02:58 PM)me.you Wrote: I’m writing this quietly, not as criticism, but as someone who has become emotionally invested in your story and especially in Adithi.
I truly believe that what happens between a husband and wife private conversations, fantasies, vulnerable thoughts belongs only to them. Those moments don’t define morality,they define trust. Kamal and Adithi’s bond felt real to me because it wasn’t perfect, but human. That’s why it hurts to see Adithi carrying the weight of consequences for things that were never meant to leave the privacy of their relationship.
If Kamal’s desires or choices are questioned, I struggle to understand why Adithi must suffer for them. She feels less like a character and more like a person I’ve come to care about. I don’t see her as someone who deserves humiliation or punishment she deserves empathy, protection, and emotional fairness.
What makes your writing powerful is its realism and emotional tension. That slow, thoughtful build is what pulled me in. If events escalate too fast or become extreme in a short span, I fear the story may lose the emotional truth that makes it special. Not because darkness shouldn’t exist but because Adithi’s pain deserves meaning, not shock value.
I know villains may gain temporary control, and I trust your vision. I just hope that Adithi is handled with the same sensitivity and depth with which she was written. I’ve grown attached to her far quicker than I expected, and that’s a credit to your talent.
You are a gifted writer, and the teasing, the emotional layers, the tension of it works beautifully. I only wanted to share this because the story matters to me, and so does Adithi.
Thank you for reading this, even if it doesn’t change your path.
I wanted to speak from the heart.
But as a honest reader, Please consider my thoughts. Thank you... But I can't under stand your point. So pls send msg pvt.... to me.... also enable in settings to your private msg...
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i dont know how to activet chat in settings brother. I send u private msg
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(13-01-2026, 04:17 PM)me.you Wrote: i dont know how to activet chat in settings brother. I send u private msg I sent upvt msg but you are not able to receive.... Just in settings enable....
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13-01-2026, 04:23 PM
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(13-01-2026, 04:17 PM)me.you Wrote: i dont know how to activet chat in settings brother. I send u private OK leave it....
I will modify story...
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13-01-2026, 04:27 PM
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After a long time i am responding to a story. I love your writing skills bro.. i love how the wife is slowly evolving with the involuntary encouragement of her husband. i dont know if you intended this story to be dark. But it will be amazing if they both naturally get corrupted just like how it went so far without someone else interpreting and controlling their journey. I would have loved Gupta having access to the computer and seeing everything and even chatting to the hubby later but i wish the gupta controlling the computer and blocking Kamal out.. will it not be more hot that Gupta merely brings out the cuck in Kamal and the need in Aditi and take full advantage of them both rather than controlling or coercing anyone. Kamal is not really a cuck if he is forced into this right???. Speaking being an actual Cucks perspective. and i believe there is more meaning and soul in the story if aditi is connected to Kamal throughout the story even though losing herself in the moment as the character Aditi seems to have a soul in your writing.
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This is my first reply and might be first first in this forum. I liked the concept very much. I believe the element of surprise and curiousity is well described which is spice of this story. I won't suggest how it should end as I don't want it to end. Some suggestions which I would like to provide is submissive approach and mix of fear and lust when Athidi surrenders to Gupta, Aggresive and dominating approach of Gupta and a very mild touch of bdsm can be added to make story interesting. You can add different situations where Athidi encounters with different males in different situations can also be useful. Such as she visits local doctor after hangover, local priest of no religion performs erotic rituals can be aspects to look for. Last but not the least and my favourite is force turn consensual. Athidi gradually succumbs to trap laid for him and Kamal. This aspects needs to be handled carefully as it should not hurt any feelings.
You are the best and I am sure you will keep us aroused with your writings
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Awesome update the setup for further updates is to good
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(14-01-2026, 02:30 AM)seducemywifey Wrote: After a long time i am responding to a story. I love your writing skills bro.. i love how the wife is slowly evolving with the involuntary encouragement of her husband. i dont know if you intended this story to be dark. But it will be amazing if they both naturally get corrupted just like how it went so far without someone else interpreting and controlling their journey. I would have loved Gupta having access to the computer and seeing everything and even chatting to the hubby later but i wish the gupta controlling the computer and blocking Kamal out.. will it not be more hot that Gupta merely brings out the cuck in Kamal and the need in Aditi and take full advantage of them both rather than controlling or coercing anyone. Kamal is not really a cuck if he is forced into this right???. Speaking being an actual Cucks perspective. and i believe there is more meaning and soul in the story if aditi is connected to Kamal throughout the story even though losing herself in the moment as the character Aditi seems to have a soul in your writing.
This is what i also saying. Atleast in this story let villains sufffer. Who does not have inner sex desires. Every one have. Atleast adithi should not loose her dignity. She is well educated and helping minded and trust worthy wife. Yes end of the day its sex story. Why every one thinking if it is sex story women need to be degrade? And most biggest myth, Big tool gives big pleasure.. Never. Pleasure is for women is about after sex care and comfort. sleeping with her loved one after the sex.Not some one calling her as slut or bitch or whore.
At least we can respect women not call them as those words by other charactors.
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Good story, but try to narrate in slow teasing way as aditi is a modern loyal wife, you can't make her a w*ore in simple way and also plan some good dark things for husband
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(14-01-2026, 09:06 AM)Muralimm Wrote: Awesome update the setup for further updates is to good
Thank you very much bro...
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Thank you all readers.....
Actually I prepared for the remaining story as Gupta will pretend as Kamal in Laptap writing....as I liked to
watch you by fuck with Rahul.....
will fuck her..... Later so many adventures.....
But unfortunately,
I am thinking to stop this story. Because some of the members are requested
not liked this story as follows wife's bang.... Or they requesting change plot or theme...
So at present I am thinking to stop this story.....
With regards.......... writer..... Thank you to all....... If I continues then I will let you know...
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Brother u continue how ever u want brother. Dont listen others.
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