[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[sexypreeti]

Superb narration and awesome twist to the story 

[sexypreeti]

Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.

Two things I did want to clarify.

One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.

Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.

But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.

With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.

I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes. 

I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.

This is your story and you have every right to write it the way you have intended. Yes it is impossible to satisfy everyone...But at the same time there are many other fans who impatiently wait to read what's going to happen next...

From the time you started this story till now, you have surely turned things around BIG time...Kudos to that...Keep it up 

[Redangela]

Amazing story yr

[Redangela]

Lagta ha ab Hina ki shadi m bahut si sexy rasme dekhne ko melange

[Redangela]

Ab aage story or bhi romantic or interesting hoti ja rai ha

[Rohan0064]

Excellent storytelling with great conviction. But why pulled Supriya's periods so long?

[Rohan0064]

Finally Supriya's periods ended relax next update will be super hot full sex, that's the story told in the end.

[Rohan0064]

We can't do anything because we're just crazy sex readers. everything depending on the writer if writer like to enjoy sex scene then they can write so many sex scene, otherwise no hope there.

[qazmlp]

Is the Khan family marriage offer genuine or a smokescreen for something more sinister?
I have my doubts.
This scene is sort of reminiscent of the Gangs of Wasseypur scene where Sardar Khan brings peace offer to Qureshis by asking for his eldest son Danish's marriage with Shama Parveen of Qureshi house. Sultan Qureshi's role is somewhat similar to Iqbal's role here. There was no sinister motive there but things did turn violent due to Sultan's mistrust. Maybe somewhat similar will happen here.
Btw, what's the house surname of Abbas n Iqbal, was it ever revealed previously in the story ??

[Rohan0064]

Overall, the story is excellent, but its average in terms of sex. This story is the reader sex acceptation not. It's reality that's why so many readers not attracted.
This is just my opinion, and I can't force you to agree with me. Readers may have different opinions, and I have no problem with that. If anything I've said has offended anyone, I sincerely apologize.

[Sriya2]

Thanks Rohan. I totally understand that not many people like my story on this site. Like I said yesterday, I feel I am not that good at writing sex scenes and to be honest that is my least enjoyable part of writing. I would rather enjoy making up thrilling emotional human stories in the future.

I will try to finish this story soon (or get to a point where the possibilities are more open for future). And then try to find a different medium of sharing my stories, maybe alongside here. That would mean scaling back the sex write-up even further, which will obviously not be well received here. And rightly so, people come here to read sex stories, not novels.

And rest assured, no, you did not offend me at all, you are just sharing what’s on your mind and I am being transparent and sharing what’s on my mind. This has been going on in my mind for a while and its also draining for me to try to keep writing where I don’t enjoy it and the readers don’t either (I appreciate lots of people who do love reading this as well). I would rather write something that I would enjoy for people that might also enjoy reading it.

As for this story, I have a broad plot outlined in my mind which I will try to get through in the next 10-12 updates or so, and then leave it open ended to come back to later or for others to take it over their imagination. Somethings got a bit messed up in hindsight but we will see how to best address those, and there maybe minor revisions to some past updates.

[pujaa69]

Hello @Sriya2 who say your are not good in writing ✍️ sex but for me I'm enjoying your writing✍️ skills the way you fold the events I'm really excited about it that now what happened next... That's a great indication of a writer....
I read many stories from different platforms but in all those stories only few of them I say that blow my mind and I never boared while reading again and again I'm enjoying the sex scenes also. My reading style is different, I read the story with all feels that I'm the character and all those things going on is also like I'm having all those things with me something like that.....
And plz don't stop ? the writing✍️.....
I imagine the supriya was fucked by many people's one by one wheather she likes it or not at first glance but later she enjoyed? it like I enjoyed and satisfying myself....
❤❤❤❤ love from my side....

[Rohan0064]

Sriya, don't be stress, we will always here to support you, because I like this story so much.

You can still right now make this story more hot and interesting by making some changes, like that, you came Aarti's character again and improve Supriya's and Iqbal's character bold, Hina's entry in sex. Right now you have full chance to make this story to the full on adultery story, because your story's foundation and plot is excellent, everything is build up. I really appreciate your hard working so I don't want to waste your energy. You deserve more better. You are very telented and hard working and consistent for your work.
.ALL THE BEST.

[Redangela]

Thanks Rohan. I totally understand that not many people like my story on this site. Like I said yesterday, I feel I am not that good at writing sex scenes and to be honest that is my least enjoyable part of writing. I would rather enjoy making up thrilling emotional human stories in the future.

I will try to finish this story soon (or get to a point where the possibilities are more open for future). And then try to find a different medium of sharing my stories, maybe alongside here. That would mean scaling back the sex write-up even further, which will obviously not be well received here. And rightly so, people come here to read sex stories, not novels.

And rest assured, no, you did not offend me at all, you are just sharing what’s on your mind and I am being transparent and sharing what’s on my mind. This has been going on in my mind for a while and its also draining for me to try to keep writing where I don’t enjoy it and the readers don’t either (I appreciate lots of people who do love reading this as well). I would rather write something that I would enjoy for people that might also enjoy reading it.

As for this story, I have a broad plot outlined in my mind which I will try to get through in the next 10-12 updates or so, and then leave it open ended to come back to later or for others to take it over their imagination. Somethings got a bit messed up in hindsight but we will see how to best address those, and there maybe minor revisions to some past updates.

Yes thrill emotion romance story plot twist yaaee sb chize maene Rakhti ha sex is a part which is least enjoyable..... nai tao bahut se story ha jisme sex dba kr Hota ha or story line bekar hoti ha yea story emotions tao hote he nai .

[Salma Khan]

Mind blowing, wonderful update

[Salma Khan]

Junaid ka nikah agar Hina se ho gaya to, Junaid Supriya, se apni bezazti ka badla lega and Supriya, jagre ke darr se Iqbal ko kuch bol nahi payegi ab. We never want the best story to end so quickly.

[Rohan0064]

Next updates will be more interesting and exciting.

[Rohan0064]

This story never let us feel bored from the beginning till now. That's called best story

[Rohan0064]

You take your time yet we will forever waiting for the updates