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Eagerly Waiting for the next updates
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08-01-2026, 07:48 AM
Absolutely super duper fantastic update
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Hi sriya ji,
I am big fan your writing skills. I have one request Arthi know about Supriya affairs, so can you write Arthi and Jay episodes for know about Supriya where she is and what happened to her.
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Thanks for the update
Bohot khoob update with intresting drama and unique sex Iqbal dheere dheere pagal ho raha hai supriya ke liye this will create more drama for the story when she meet other people
I am not sure but it sounds suspicious why Rubina thought of sleeping with her daughter for Rubina it might be protective instinct but for her daughter it might be causal sleep for comforting her
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When will Supriya's periods end?
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Damnn!!!
Amazing as always!!
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In my opinion, this village chapter is over extending now and needs to be cut short. We really need that Supriya back who was reckless and ended up in situations where she is making physical contacts with various men due to situations. It is becoming really hard to believe that a girl like Supriya who was searching for fun and novelty in men like Rahul, Vikram before is willingly staying in a village environment with Iqbal. I am sure writer has her reasons, however as a big fan and an avid follower of this story from the beginning, I am really missing Supriya that was seen in the first part of the story before she ended up in the village with Iqbal.
Full credits to Sriya for continuing with this amazing story. I am sure this story has the potential to become the most watched story on this forum. Keep it going Sriya and thank you for entertaining us with this masterpiece.
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There is no need to pass personal comments as all of us are readers here and sharing thoughts which can be done without bashing others like I shared my opinion.
Those who remember story from the start would understand my point above as Surpriya has gotten involved with Atul’s brother, Pratap, Rahul, Vikram and more and suddenly since so long she is content with village life with Iqbal like he is her soulmate. The village part has been great but is just stretching too much as per me.
However, Sriya will decide what comes.
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Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.
Two things I did want to clarify.
One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.
Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.
But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.
With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.
I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes.
I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.
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@sriya the story is superb. Amazing writing skills.
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Sriya, Please don't end this good story so soon, the real fun has just begun. It's not a three hours movie, Actually it's a long serial.
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Sriya, I appreciate your work so much and ignore your all mistakes, please accept our request don't end this story so early.
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@Sriya2....Those side stories you can very well post as separate threads on this platform itself. You have a great fan following here so do start a new thread whenever u get started on those stories. That said, your writing skills have proved to be exemplary in many updates and rightly so, you hav evolved and improved as you went along writing this amazing story. Your honest admission is also noteworthy as that means you are self- aware, confident and willing to improve and take constructive feedback.
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@Sriya2 I totally agree that plot wise, this story is at a point where it was supposed to be. The plot is amazing and this is one of the best stories on this forum.
Thanks for your response. You don't need to be apologetic at all as people here (incl me) may express their opinions but you are boss here and this is your story to drive the way you want. One can't please everyone.
Your writing skills are going up and up. Thank you for entertaining us!
Can't wait for other stories to get started as well. You are thinking like a big writer to create a universe of connected stories. Hats off! Maybe this story can end on a cliffhanger as well which becomes start of part 2 as well.
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Truly amazing, the way you carry the story is an art. Bhtt badiya!!
More power to you!! XO
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You are very talented writer that's amazing quality update
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#Sriya, We don't want to see the end of this story. Actually we want to read this story always like this, because we are truly enjoying a lot.