Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani

[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[Rohanx40]

Absolutely super duper fantastic update

[sexypreeti]

Absolutely fantastic and erotic update 

[Sreenath626]

Hi sriya ji,
I am big fan your writing skills. I have one request Arthi know about Supriya affairs, so can you write Arthi and Jay episodes for know about Supriya where she is and what happened to her.

[Morbius]

Thanks for the update 
Bohot khoob update with intresting drama and unique sex Iqbal dheere dheere pagal ho raha hai supriya ke liye this will create more drama for the story when she meet other people
I am not sure but it sounds suspicious why Rubina thought of sleeping with her daughter for Rubina it might be protective instinct but for her daughter it might be causal sleep for comforting her

[Rohan0064]

When will Supriya's periods end?

[Missvixen]

Damnn!!!
Amazing as always!!

[thodanaughty]

In my opinion, this village chapter is over extending now and needs to be cut short. We really need that Supriya back who was reckless and ended up in situations where she is making physical contacts with various men due to situations. It is becoming really hard to believe that a girl like Supriya who was searching for fun and novelty in men like Rahul, Vikram before is willingly staying in a village environment with Iqbal. I am sure writer has her reasons, however as a big fan and an avid follower of this story from the beginning, I am really missing Supriya that was seen in the first part of the story before she ended up in the village with Iqbal.

Full credits to Sriya for continuing with this amazing story. I am sure this story has the potential to become the most watched story on this forum. Keep it going Sriya and thank you for entertaining us with this masterpiece.

[sexypreeti]

In my opinion, this village chapter is over extending now and needs to be cut short. We really need that Supriya back who was reckless and ended up in situations where she is making physical contacts with various men due to situations. It is becoming really hard to believe that a girl like Supriya who was searching for fun and novelty in men like Rahul, Vikram before is willingly staying in a village environment with Iqbal. I am sure writer has her reasons, however as a big fan and an avid follower of this story from the beginning, I am really missing Supriya that was seen in the first part of the story before she ended up in the village with Iqbal.

Full credits to Sriya for continuing with this amazing story. I am sure this story has the potential to become the most watched story on this forum. Keep it going Sriya and thank you for entertaining us with this masterpiece.

You have read this story with only sex point of view.... Read this story again before getting drunk and you might understand the REAL story finaly....Just my POV 

[thodanaughty]

There is no need to pass personal comments as all of us are readers here and sharing thoughts which can be done without bashing others like I shared my opinion.

Those who remember story from the start would understand my point above as Surpriya has gotten involved with Atul’s brother, Pratap, Rahul, Vikram and more and suddenly since so long she is content with village life with Iqbal like he is her soulmate. The village part has been great but is just stretching too much as per me.

However, Sriya will decide what comes.

[Sriya2]

Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.

Two things I did want to clarify.

One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.

Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.

But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.

With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.

I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes. 

I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.

[Chunky Pandey01]

@sriya the story is superb. Amazing writing skills.

[Rohan0064]

Sriya, Please don't end this good story so soon, the real fun has just begun. It's not a three hours movie, Actually it's a long serial.

[Rohan0064]

Sriya, I appreciate your work so much and ignore your all mistakes, please accept our request don't end this story so early.

[qazmlp]

@Sriya2....Those side stories you can very well post as separate threads on this platform itself. You have a great fan following here so do start a new thread whenever u get started on those stories. That said, your writing skills have proved to be exemplary in many updates and rightly so, you hav evolved and improved as you went along writing this amazing story. Your honest admission is also noteworthy as that means you are self- aware, confident and willing to improve and take constructive feedback.

[thodanaughty]

@Sriya2 I totally agree that plot wise, this story is at a point where it was supposed to be. The plot is amazing and this is one of the best stories on this forum.

Thanks for your response. You don't need to be apologetic at all as people here (incl me) may express their opinions but you are boss here and this is your story to drive the way you want. One can't please everyone.

Your writing skills are going up and up. Thank you for entertaining us!

Can't wait for other stories to get started as well. You are thinking like a big writer to create a universe of connected stories. Hats off! Maybe this story can end on a cliffhanger as well which becomes start of part 2 as well.

[Sriya2]

Update 103

Agli raat bhi Supriya aur Iqbal ke beech aisa hi kuch khel chalta raha. Pehle Supriya Iqbal ka lund apne muh mein dabe hue kaafi der tak use choosti rahi. Uske baad Iqbal ne apna lund Supriya ke chikne talwo par ghiste hue apna saara cum uske gore pairo par nikaal diya. Woh Supriya ke jism ke har hisse par apna nishaan chhodna chahta tha.



Sab karne ke baad dono saath mein lete hue they. Iqbal poora nanga aur Supriya ne kapde pehne hue they. Iqbal ki ungliyaan Supriya ke mammo par halke halke ghoom rahi thi. Supriya ki choochiyan uske chhoone se poori tarah khadi hui uske kapdo ke andar se ubhar rahi thi.

Iqbal ne abhi bhi apna lund Supriya ke haathon mein diya hua tha aur woh use halke halke masal rahi thi.

Iqbal ne uski choochiyon ko sehlate hue kaha - Ab toh tumhare period khatam ho gaye honge…

Supriya - Haan… bas shayad kal se nahi aayenge…

Iqbal ki aankhon mein chamak aa gayi - Fir toh kal raat… tumhe jam ke khush karunga…

Ye sunte hi Supriya ki choot fadfadane si lagi, ek alag hi bijli si daud gayi thi uske jism mein. Iqbal ke lund ko lene ka sochte hi jaane use kya ho jaata tha. Par usne banawati gusse se kaha - Yaani… dard kar doge ache se…

Iqbal ne uske mammo ko mutthi mein bhar liya - Dard nahi… pyaar… pyaar karunga tumhe... ache se…

Supriya ne apni kurti ko zara sa upar karte hue apni kamar par laga nishaan dikhaya - Aisa wala pyaar… jo nishaan daal de…

Uski baahon, chaati aur bagal ke beech ek gehri si line ban gayi thi pichhli raat lund ke ghisne se. Iqbal ne wahan halke se chhua toh Supriya ne dard mein siski bhari.

Supriya - Uuuuuuhhh.... mat chhuo.... dard ho raha hai...

Iqbal ne wahan halke se sehlaya - Ye sab bhi pyaar ka hissa hi hota hai… mujhse pehle kabhi aisa pyaar mehsoos kiya tha.

Supriya ke mann mein khayal sa utha, har mard jaane kyu aisa sochta hai ki usse behtar kisi aur me kabhi kiya hi nahi hoga. Par haan shayad Iqbal ke liye ye baat sach thi. Uske saath rehte rehte use mehsoos ho raha tha ki jaise woh khud badal si gayi ho. Yahan rehte rehte use 6-7 mahine hue they, par ye 6 mahine 6 saal ke barabar lag rahe they. Jaise woh hamesha se yahan rehti aayi ho aur yehi uski jindagi ho.

Iqbal ko bhi shayad Supriya ke saath ab koi jhijhak nahi rahi thi. Usne apni ungli Supriya ke mammo ke beech mein ghusayi aur use andar bahar karne laga, jaise maap raha ho ki usko lund ko kaise lagega. 

Iqbal - Bolo na… mujhe acha lagta hai jab tum bolti ho is sab ke baare mein…

Supriya ne muh banate hue kaha - Mujhe nahi accha lagta jab aap mujhse ye gande shabd bulwate ho toh...

Iqbal ne Supriya ke honthon ko halke se dabaya - Kyun? Achha toh laga tha kitna us din. Tumhare muh se sunte hi mera maal toh ekdam se hi nikal gaya tha. Bas kal raat tak ka intezaar karo... aise aise shabd nikalwayunga tumhare muh se... 

Ye sunte hi Supriya ko apni panty halki si geeli honi mehsoos ho gayi thi aur uska poora jism kaanp utha. Ab toh Iqbal ke muh se aap kam aur tu aur tum jyada aaram se nikal raha tha.

Supriya Iqbal ke nange badan se chipak kar uske gale lag gayi, aur shikayat bhari aawaz mein kaha - Kyun mujhe bigaadna chahte ho...

Iqbal ne use - Tumhe toh tabse bigaadne ka mann tha jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha... 

Supriya - Aap kayi baar keh chuke ho - jab pehli baar dekha tha... kab dekha tha mujhe pehli baar... mujhe toh yaad bhi nahi...

Iqbal ne sochte hue Supriya ke gaal par pyaar se haath fera - Pehli baar... ache se yaad hai mujhe... us din ek gaadi building mein andar ghus rahi thi aur uska sheesha neecha tha. Usme ek behad haseen... duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki bahar ki aur dekh rahi thi... gora masoom chehra... badi badi aankhen... gulab jaise honth... chehre par aate hue baal. Woh aap thi... bahar meri taraf dekhti hui... hamari nazre mili thi.



Supriya halke se hasi - Ufff... aap toh bilkul shayaro ki tarah baat kar rahe hai...

Iqbal - Madamji... aap ye toh nahi sochti ki main anpad zaahil hu? Main bataya tha aapko... maine padai ki hai...

Supriya - Nahi nahi maine aisa nahi socha... aur fir se madamji?

Iqbal - Bas uss din ki yaad aa gayi... shayad aap pehli baar wahan aayi thi kahin bahar se... 

Supriya - Mujhe toh ab woh din yaad bhi nahi... par haan shayad... 

Iqbal ne daant bheechte hue kaha - Tumhare saath woh haramzaada ladka aur aapka pehla shauhar bhi tha...

Supriya samajh gayi woh Rahul ki baat kar raha tha... haan shayad woh hi toh use aur Atul ko ghar le gaya tha station se us din. Uska dil zor se dhadakne laga, kya tab pehli baar se hi Iqbal ki nazrein us par thi.

Supriya ne hichkichate hue poocha - Tohhhh.... tab... jab main wahan reh rahi thi... tab bhi aap mere saath ye sab karna chahte they? Mujhe kabhi aisa laga nahi...

Iqbal - Main aise kaise tere saath bina teri marzi ke kuch bhi karne ka soch leta... maine kabhi tujhe koi aisi waisi ladki nahi samjha tha... ki uske shauhar ke hote hue uske saath woh sab kar lu...

Supriya ki aankhen sharam se jhuk gayi. Iqbal jaanta tha ki woh apne pati ke elawa aur mardo ke saath bhi sex kiya tha. Uske muh se kisi tarah nikla - Aur baaki saari aurate... aapne us raat kaha tha na... ki aapne us building mein aur aurato ke saath bhi ye sab kiya tha...

Iqbal - Aap un lund ki bhooki randiyaan ki baat kar rahe ho madamji?? Woh mujhe apne ghar bulwati thi chudne ke liye... unhe mere mote lund se chudna jo pasand tha. Aapke barabar wale ghar mein rehti thi na woh chhinaal madamji...

Supriya kuch pal sochte hue uska naam hi dhoondti reh gayi thi - Kaun, Meghna!??

Iqbal - Haan shayad yehi naam tha uska... use apni gaand chudwane mein bada maza aata tha...

Supriya ek paal ke liye kaanp si gayi aur use shuru mein us flat mein rehte hue barabar wale flat se aati hui sex ki aawazein yaad aane lagi. Kya jab woh aawazein aati thi, tab Meghna aur Iqbal sex kar rahe hote they? Agar Iqbal us sab ko randiyaan keh raha tha, toh usne uske muh se bhi toh ye shabd nikalwaya tha. Aur sach mein kya woh bhi uski nazar mein randi hi thi jo itne mardo ke saath. 

Ye sochte hi Supriya ki saansein tez ho gayi aur uski aankhen aur gala bhar aaya.

Iqbal ne turant uska badalta hua chehra padd liya - Kya hua... ekdam se pareshaan kyu ho gayi? Main tujhe yakeen dilata hoon... bas tu hi mere liye ab sab kuch hai... main kisi aur ke baare mein kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta. 

Supriya ne halki si siski li. Woh samajh nahi paa rahi thi woh kaise bole ki woh kya soch rahi thi.

Iqbal - Boliye na... kya hua...

Supriya bhare hue gale se boli - Aapne.... aapne kal raat... mujhe randi bulaya tha... kya aap mere baare bhi mein... aisa sochte hain...

Iqbal ne Supriya ko kas ke jakad liya use shaant karne liye - Nahi nahi... kabhi bhi nahi... woh toh bas hamare beech ki pyaar ki baat hai... ek doosre ke saath poori tarah khul jaane ke liye... aur waise bhi maine tujhse bas yehi toh kehne ko kaha tha ki tu meri randi hai... sirf meri... aur kisi ki nahi...

Supriya - Par bhi bhi... mujhe ajeeb sa lagta hai sunn kar... aisa lagta hai jaise aap mujhe galat samajh rahe ho…

Iqbal ne uski mann ko padte hue kaha - Purani baaton ke baare mein mat socho... aur us jis din se tum meri biwi bani ho... bas ye jaan lo ki hum dono ek doosre ke liye bane they... aur jo kuch hua woh hame yahan tak le aaya...

Supriya Iqbal se chipki rahi, usne dheere se pucha - Seema... aapki pehli biwi... usse bhi ye sab bulwate they kya?

Iqbal haste hue bola - Woh... use bulwane ki zaroorat hi nahi padti thi... woh khud hi apne aap mujhe gaaliyan dene lag jaati thi ye sab karte hue... main tere muh se bhi wohi sab sunna chahta hoon...

Iqbal ne apne honth Supriya ke honthon par laga diye aur unhe zor se choosne laga. Supriya bhi apne honth kholte hue use choom rahi thi.



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Agli subah itwaar tha, aur Hina ko bhi college nahi jaana tha, so sab log thoda aaram se hi saare kaam karte they. Iqbal aur Abbas ke beech abhi bhi bol chaal band thi, aur Abbas neeche baitha khana kha raha tha aur Iqbal seediyon ke paas baitha apne joote theek karne mein laga tha.

Tabhi darwaze par ek zor ki khat khat ki aawaz hui. Rubina darwaze ke paas khadi thi, aur woh darwaza kholne lagi. Rubina ne dekha ki bahar teen aadmi khade they, unme se ek to Junaid hi tha. Doosra uska bada bhai, aur teesre un dono ke Abbu. Unhe dekhte hi Rubina ke chehre par pareshaani saaf jhalakne lagi. Pata nahi ye log yahan kya karne aaye they?

Rubina soch hi rahi thi ki Abbu ne muskura ke kaha - Aadab Rubina beti... Abbas miyaan ghar par hai?

Rubina darwaza pakde khadi rahi - Ji... hain... 

Abbu - Andar aane ke liye nahi kahogi Rubina beti...

Rubina thoda side hui aur andar aane ka ishaara kiya - Aaiye... andar aaiye...

Rubina kuch kadam andar aayi aur un teeno ke dekh kar Iqbal jhat se khada ho gaya aur uski mutthiyan band ho gayi. Agar woh yahan badla lene aaye they toh woh unke liye poori tarah tayyar tha. Usne Junaid ki aankhon mein dekhte hue use ghoora.

Par Abbu Iqbal ko nazar andaaz karte hue andar baithak ki taraf chal diye. Abbas unhe dekh kar khane ki plate ko side mein sarkane laga.

Abbu - Abbas miyaan... aree... hamari wajah se apna khana beech mein mat chhodo... mere liye gunaah ka sabab na ban jaye...

Abbas - Khan saab... aap aisa kyu bol rahe hai... aaiye baitheye...

Khan saab - Baithne se pehle aapse ek shikayat hai...

Junaid ke Abbu ne Iqbal ki aur dekha, aur Abbas ko shayad samajh aa gaya woh yahan kyu aaye they.

Abbas - Maaf kijiye Khan saab... Iqbal ne jo kiya...

Khan saab ne uski baat kaat-te hue kaha - Bilkul sahi kiya Iqbal ne... apni izzat sabko pyaari hoti hai... aur honi bhi chahiye...

Unke aisa kehte hai wahan ka saara mahaul hi ek dam se halka ho gaya. Iqbal ki band mutthiya thodi dheeli ho gayi.

Khan - Is nalayak ne jo kiya... mujhe sab pata chala... Tum mujhe aakar batate agar tumhari bahu ko kuch accha nahi laga tha toh. Main khud ise chowk par le jaa kar nanga karke iski khaal udhed deta... 

Abbas ne haath se ishaara kiya - Nahi nahi... ladka hai... galti ho jaati hai... jawani mein toh josh mein ladke pata nahi kya kya kar lete hai... isne toh aisa kuch nahi kiya... hamara Iqbal toh... khair... Rubina... zara sharbat ya chai bana lo...

Rubina jaldi se rasoi ghar mein ghus gayi. Supriya is waqt andar ke kamre mein Hina ke saath baithi thi. Unka darwaza khula tha toh woh bahar se aa rahi aawazein saaf sun paa rahe they, bas unhe dekh nahi paa rahe they.

Kuch hi der mein halat thode theek se ho gaye they. Woh teeno aur Abbas baith kar baat kar rahe they aur Iqbal wahin paas mein khada tha. Uske chehre par abhi bhi thoda sa gussa jhalak raha tha, jaise woh khush na ho unhe yahan dekh kar.

Khan saab - Abbas beta... tumne baat rafa dafa kar di... main bohot khush hoon...

Abbas - Aap bade ho kar yahan aaye hamare yahan... wohi kafi hai... maafi ki toh baat hi nahi hai... Iqbal ki bhi galti thi is sab mein...

Khan saab - Par log toh kaisi kaisi baatein bana rahe hai na... jaise pata nahi kya hi kar diya ho isne...

Abbas - Hmmm.... haan ye toh hai... badnaami toh kafi hui hai...

Khan saab - Main chahta hai ki saari baat dab jaye aur gaanv mein dikh jaye ki hum log sab saath hai... koi ladayi marayi ki baat na hai...

Abbas - Haan bilkul... jaise aap kahe...

Khan saab - Uske liye... main chahta hoon... ki Junaid ka rishta tumhari Hina se ho jaye...

Rubina aur Iqbal ne turant ek doosre ki aur dekha, aur andar baithi Hina buri tarah gusse mein aate hue Supriya se chipak gayi.

Abbas - Jee... ye toh badi achhi baat hai...

Rubina ne peeche se bola - Hina toh abhi chhoti hai... padai kar rahi hai college mein... 

Ammi bhi kam nahi rahi bolne mein - Padai likhai toh hoti rahegi... gaanv ki gaanv mein rishta ho jaye toh isse kya badiya hoga...

Rubina ne bolne ki koshish ki - Par Ammi ji...

Khan saab - Dekh lijiye aap log... koi zabardasti nahi hai... Junaid abhi 27 ka hi hua hai... akele dukaan sambhalta hai... koi kami nahi hai... Hina ke liye bilkul sahi rahega...

Iqbal beech mein bola - Hina abhi sirf 19 ki hui hai... umar mein bohot faasla hai...

Khan saab ne muskurate hue Iqbal ki aur dekha - Faasla toh hai... par jo maine suna hai... teri biwi aur teri umar ke faasle se toh kam hi hai...

Iqbal ko uska ye kehna bilkul bhi achha nahi laga par woh Abbas ko dekhte hue kuch bol nahi paaya.

Khan saab ne Abbas ki aur dekhte hue kaha - Par haan bhai... Iqbal miyaan ko bhi toh rishta qabool hona chahiye... ab woh wapas aa gaya hai toh, uski haan ke bina kaisi baat pakki hogi...

Abbas ne gusse mein Iqbal ko ghoora, aur fir Khan saab ki aur dekhte hue kaha - Hina meri beti hai... toh main hi tay karunga ki uski shaadi kahan hogi. Aap baat pakki samajhiye... mujhe ek baar Maulvi saab se baat karne dijiye... hamare yahan Ramzan ke baad hi nikaah hota hai...

Khan saab - Bohot achhe Abbas miyaan... Hina badi pyaari bacchi hai... bohot ache se rahegi hamare ghar mein...

Abbas - Ji...

Khan saab - Ab jab saara maamla sulat hi gaya hai... toh ek aakhri farmayish thi aapse... 

Abbas - Ji Kahiye na...

Khan saab - Zara apni bahu... Iqbal ki gharwali ko aap bulwa dijiye... Junaid abhi ki abhi maafi maangega unse...

Iqbal ke haath fir se tann gaye they, shayad woh nahi chahta tha ki Supriya un logo ke saamne aaye. Par woh chah kar bhi kuch nahi bol paaya. Abbas ne Rubina ko ishaara kiya ki woh Supriya ko andar se lekar aaye.

Rubina kamre mein aayi. Supriya thodi ghabrayi hui baithi thi, woh bahar nahi jaana chahti thi. Hina bhi usse chipak kar baithi thi. Rubina ne paas aate hue uska sar uske dupatte se dhaka, aur uska haath pakad kar use bistar se utha diya. Na uski aawaz nikal rahi thi na Hina ki.

Rubina Supriya ko pakde hue bahar le aayi aur use darwaze ke paas hi khada karke side ho gayi.

Khan saab ki tez aawaz aayi - Masha… Bohot hi pyaari ladki hai... laakhon mein ek… kismat hai Iqbal miyaan ki.

Supriya ne aakhein uthate hue unki aur dekha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise teeno mard use hi ghoor rahe ho.



Khan saab ne Junaid ko ishaara kiya - Chal neeche zameen par baith kar maafi maang inse... teri chachi saas hongi ye... aur tu inse hi badtameezi kar raha tha.

Junaid zameen par utarta hua Supriya ke kadmo ke paas apne ghutno par baith gaya. Supriya ne jaldi se 2-3 kadam peeche liye.

Junaid - Ji maaf kijiyega... agar us din aapko mera majak bura laga ho toh... chhota samajh kar maaf kar dijiyega... 

Abbas - Aree nahi... rehne do... is sab ki kya zaroorat hai...

Junaid - Nahi inki maafi sune bina main nahi uthunga...

Abbas ne Supriya ki aur dekhte hue kaha - Chalo ab maaf kar do ise...

Supriya ne halke se sar hilaya aur dheere se bola - Koi nahi... theek hai... aap khade ho jayo...

Junaid dheere se Supriya ke saamne khada ho gaya aur fir aankhen jhukata hua jaa kar fir se baith gaya.

Khan saab - Chalo ab ye masla bhi hal hua... Abbas miyaan ab hum log chalte hain... ab toh bas Junaid aur Hina ka nikaah ho jaye jaldi se... tabhi tassali milegi...

Abbas - Ji Khan saab...

Woh teeno mard khade hue jaane ke liye. Supriya abhi bhi wahin khadi thi. Uski nazar Iqbal ke chhehre par gayi toh saaf pata chal raha tha ki woh is waqt behad gusse mein tha. Jaise hi un dono ki nazrein mili, Supriya ki saansein thodi bhaari ho gayi. Raat ko shayad woh jis tarah se apna gussa zahir kar sakta tha, ye soch kar hi uske poore shareer mein ek sansani si hone lagi thi.

[Missvixen]

Truly amazing, the way you carry the story is an art. Bhtt badiya!!
More power to you!! XO

[Rohanx40]

You are very talented writer that's amazing quality update

[Rohanx40]

#Sriya, We don't want to see the end of this story. Actually we want to read this story always like this, because we are truly enjoying a lot.