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(22-12-2025, 07:44 PM)seansean007 Wrote: UPDATE 118
Anita ek washroom mein jaa kar apna kapda change karke dusra salwar kameez pehen li, .....
Anita itni badi besharm aur behaya aurat thi ki ......magar Bhima ke saamne aese haalat mein ya phir Raj ke chacha chachi ke ghar aese haalat mein jaana use theek nahin laga. Use sharm to nahin aa rahi thi magar ek "sanskaar" aur "maryaada" jaanti thi ki kab kaise rehna hai. Badan dikhau kapde pehenna apni jagah thi magar aese chunchi aur gaand ke paas ke kapdo ka aesa sikuda hona alag baat thi.
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Anita Ankit ko beech mein tokti huyi thodi sakhti se boli,"Ankit this is ridiculous. Yeh kya baat huyi ki main kya kar rahi hoon kyun kar rahi hoon yeh sab par dhyaan do?"
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....... Isliye main washroom ke peeche akele mein gayi taaki jaane se pehle woh meri le sake. Jab unhone humara itna madad kiya hai to lena to banta hi hai na. Unko dene ke baad main udhar se washroom chali gayi aur wahan se aa rahi hoon. Ab sunn liya ya aur bhi kuchh jaan na chahte ho Mr. Jasoos?"
Ankit yeh naya naam sunnkar sharminda ho gaya. Woh sharmindgi se bola,"I am sorry bhabhi. Mera iraada.."
Anita use tokti huyi boli,"Iraada jo bhi ho Ankit, this is not acceptable. Ab sabko sunate mat phirna har baat. Mujhe baat ka batangar pasand nahin hai"
......,"Nahin bhabhi I swear main kisi ko kuchh nahin bolunga. Aese bhi yeh bus ka safar koi baatein karne ki cheez hai. Safar khatam baat khatam"
Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi pyaar se boli,"Exactly. Good boy. You finally understood"
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Some cribbing from my side....
Anita besharam aur behaya hai, lekin family ke saamne uski andarooni chhipi hui slut kisi ko na dikhe iska khayal hai usko... Bus me ya market me bhi usko iss baat ki chinta rehti hai ki chahe jo bhi ho uske aur Hariya ke beech wo kisi aur ko na pata chale...chaar diwaron ke beech ek garam aurat aur dumdaar mard jo bhi kare koi kharabi nahi hai lekin kisi ko kaano kaan bhanak nahi honi chahiye aisa Anita ka sochna raha hai... To iss hisaab se wo besharam behaya bebaak hai lekin badchalan nahi hai... Lekin update 120 me you have said twice or thrice ki wo badchalan hai... It doesn't seem consistent.. and badchalan ko paane me wo maza nahi jo ek chhipi hui raand me hai...
Plus Anita ka ek mard ke saath ya aneko mardon ke saath lekin akele akele me duniya se chhupkar milna mazaa deta hai aur mahaul ko kaamuk banata hai ... Lekin ek saath hariya aur Ramu ke sath ye behaviour kahani ko padhne ke maze ko thoda kam kar raha hai kyoki ye Anita ke character se thoda inconsistent hai even considering ki hariya ne continuous efforts se Anita ka behaviour and thinking ko jitna change Kiya hai..wo aurat ko ek taraf apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi tak nahi shaadi ke pehle bhi to ab wo ek saath do mardon ke saamne aise hote thoda ajeeb lagta hai...
Isme kuch ajeeb nahi hoga ki Hariya ke garam kiye chulhe par koi aur roti sek jaye , shayad ramu ya bheema ya bus wala aadmi lekin chulhe par ek baar me ek hi roti sik sakti hai...kamse kam Anita naamak garam chulhe/tawe me jispar aaj tak Raj ne hi rotiya sek kar apne safed paani se chulhe ko bujhaya hai...
Cribbing over
Other things I noticed here which are intriguing and I am interested in knowing ki aage kya hoga
Jaise...
Anita bechare Ankit ko daant de rahi hai ab.. bechare ki koi galti bhi nahi.. galti kya wo to apni samajh se sahi hi kar raha tha...apni bhabhi ko uss gunde se bachane wali hi soch thi uski...but usko kya pata uski bhabhi ke andar kya chal raha hai.. Ankit ko isse bura nahi laga? Kya uske andar thodi bhi jigyasa nahi jaagi apne sawalon ka asli jawaab jaan ne ki? Kaash aisa bhi koi angle ho .. ki Ankit ko shak sahi disha me jaaye lekin sabut na hone ki wajah se wo zaada kuch kar nahi paye lekin ye baat uske andar ghar kar jaate aur wo iska faaydatab uthaye jab 10-12 saal baad wo ek tagda mard ban gaya ho aur Anita maybe ek MILF!! Aakhirkar Anita ne usko kuchh chhupane ko bola hai.. jo wo abhi to maan gaya hai lekin reh reh kar usko ye baat yaad aati rahegi shayad ek sawaliya nishan ke sath.
Sabse badi cheez... Anita ye boli ki wo peechhe isliye gayi taaki wo aadmi uski " le sake "... Maze me wo itni beh gayi ya itni bold ho gayi ki wo Ankit ke saamne clearly double meaning baat bol rahi hai...jo Ankit abhi to nahi samjha hai shayad lekin hopefully baad me samjhe...kya Anita Ankit ke muh par Ankit ke anjaane hi uska mazaak uda Rahi hai aise shabd bol kar? Apne khayalon me wo usko kind of humiliate kar rahi hai? Wo uss anjaan aadmi ki dabangai aur mardangi se iss had tak vashh me aa gayi ki wo apne pati ke pariwar ke ek kam umra ke mard ko aise bol rahi hai...Anita ka apna bhai hota to shayad Anita aise nahi bolti na hu use daant lagati... Anita ko bhi shayad Ankit ke saamne aisa bolne me ek ajeeb sa thrill mil raha hai...
Anita us aadmi ko kuch de kar aayi... Paise ke alawa.. wo kya de kar aayi hai?????
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(02-01-2026, 09:50 AM)creamydelight Wrote: Some cribbing from my side....
Anita besharam aur behaya hai, lekin family ke saamne uski andarooni chhipi hui slut kisi ko na dikhe iska khayal hai usko... Bus me ya market me bhi usko iss baat ki chinta rehti hai ki chahe jo bhi ho uske aur Hariya ke beech wo kisi aur ko na pata chale...chaar diwaron ke beech ek garam aurat aur dumdaar mard jo bhi kare koi kharabi nahi hai lekin kisi ko kaano kaan bhanak nahi honi chahiye aisa Anita ka sochna raha hai... To iss hisaab se wo besharam behaya bebaak hai lekin badchalan nahi hai... Lekin update 120 me you have said twice or thrice ki wo badchalan hai... It doesn't seem consistent.. and badchalan ko paane me wo maza nahi jo ek chhipi hui raand me hai...
Plus Anita ka ek mard ke saath ya aneko mardon ke saath lekin akele akele me duniya se chhupkar milna mazaa deta hai aur mahaul ko kaamuk banata hai ... Lekin ek saath hariya aur Ramu ke sath ye behaviour kahani ko padhne ke maze ko thoda kam kar raha hai kyoki ye Anita ke character se thoda inconsistent hai even considering ki hariya ne continuous efforts se Anita ka behaviour and thinking ko jitna change Kiya hai..wo aurat ko ek taraf apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi tak nahi shaadi ke pehle bhi to ab wo ek saath do mardon ke saamne aise hote thoda ajeeb lagta hai...
Isme kuch ajeeb nahi hoga ki Hariya ke garam kiye chulhe par koi aur roti sek jaye , shayad ramu ya bheema ya bus wala aadmi lekin chulhe par ek baar me ek hi roti sik sakti hai...kamse kam Anita naamak garam chulhe/tawe me jispar aaj tak Raj ne hi rotiya sek kar apne safed paani se chulhe ko bujhaya hai...
Cribbing over
Other things I noticed here which are intriguing and I am interested in knowing ki aage kya hoga
Jaise...
Anita bechare Ankit ko daant de rahi hai ab.. bechare ki koi galti bhi nahi.. galti kya wo to apni samajh se sahi hi kar raha tha...apni bhabhi ko uss gunde se bachane wali hi soch thi uski...but usko kya pata uski bhabhi ke andar kya chal raha hai.. Ankit ko isse bura nahi laga? Kya uske andar thodi bhi jigyasa nahi jaagi apne sawalon ka asli jawaab jaan ne ki? Kaash aisa bhi koi angle ho .. ki Ankit ko shak sahi disha me jaaye lekin sabut na hone ki wajah se wo zaada kuch kar nahi paye lekin ye baat uske andar ghar kar jaate aur wo iska faaydatab uthaye jab 10-12 saal baad wo ek tagda mard ban gaya ho aur Anita maybe ek MILF!! Aakhirkar Anita ne usko kuchh chhupane ko bola hai.. jo wo abhi to maan gaya hai lekin reh reh kar usko ye baat yaad aati rahegi shayad ek sawaliya nishan ke sath.
Sabse badi cheez... Anita ye boli ki wo peechhe isliye gayi taaki wo aadmi uski " le sake "... Maze me wo itni beh gayi ya itni bold ho gayi ki wo Ankit ke saamne clearly double meaning baat bol rahi hai...jo Ankit abhi to nahi samjha hai shayad lekin hopefully baad me samjhe...kya Anita Ankit ke muh par Ankit ke anjaane hi uska mazaak uda Rahi hai aise shabd bol kar? Apne khayalon me wo usko kind of humiliate kar rahi hai? Wo uss anjaan aadmi ki dabangai aur mardangi se iss had tak vashh me aa gayi ki wo apne pati ke pariwar ke ek kam umra ke mard ko aise bol rahi hai...Anita ka apna bhai hota to shayad Anita aise nahi bolti na hu use daant lagati... Anita ko bhi shayad Ankit ke saamne aisa bolne me ek ajeeb sa thrill mil raha hai...
Anita us aadmi ko kuch de kar aayi... Paise ke alawa.. wo kya de kar aayi hai?????
Thanks for the detailed analysis and feedback. The badchalan thing is from a third person's perspective. Her family knows that how she dresses is just her fashion sense and inspite of dressing the way she does, she is a sanskaari beti, biwi and bahu who respects everyone and have never had a boyfriend. This is the reason her parents or husband or the in laws have no issue with her dressing. But for a third person, the only thing that they know about her is the way she dresses and that kind of dressing will definitely make her like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others from poor or conservative background. Hell even the man who rode with her might have considered her a badchalan aurat that's why he became so bold so soon. I have used this word for her earlier as well that sometimes in the heat of the moment she also behaves in a way which makes her seem like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others but in reality it's just the combination of her shameless and kind nature which makes her be open sometimes even in presence of two men like Hariya and Ramu. Also note that Ramu has already sucked her boobs over the blouse. Also, if she was a complete slut, she would have let Hariya suck her breast in front of Ramu only because Ramu in a way have had some intimate moments with her. My phrasing of sentence in this last update might not have been the best to explain what I wanted to. This is the reason I always ask the readers to provide their thoughts on the update because that makes me aware and I can keep that in mind. Remember, I am not a professional writer.
About the bus ride, Ankit is kind of a timid and not so smart boy. He speaks whatever comes to his mind without understanding the consequences but gets scared when that man bullies him. This is the reason he talks to that man in a rude way because he isn't smart enough to know the consequences. Anita on the other hand is a smart woman grown up amongst educated people. I didn't explain what has happened behind the washroom what has happened but if readers pay attention, they would know that a if a smart woman like Anita wanted to fuck that man, the auto ride was the best opportunity but she didn't. So you guys really think she would have let him fuck her in the morning light behind the washroom? May be she went for some other purpose? Also, Anita knows that Ankit is not very smart and is kind of timid. She also knows that he respects her because even though she is her cousins wife, she is a city girl and highly educated. She might have been testing Ankit to get his reaction by deliberately twisting the words.
I appreciate you for taking up the time to provide the feedback.
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(02-01-2026, 02:12 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Thanks for the detailed analysis and feedback. The badchalan thing is from a third person's perspective. Her family knows that how she dresses is just her fashion sense and inspite of dressing the way she does, she is a sanskaari beti, biwi and bahu who respects everyone and have never had a boyfriend. This is the reason her parents or husband or the in laws have no issue with her dressing. But for a third person, the only thing that they know about her is the way she dresses and that kind of dressing will definitely make her like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others from poor or conservative background. Hell even the man who rode with her might have considered her a badchalan aurat that's why he became so bold so soon. I have used this word for her earlier as well that sometimes in the heat of the moment she also behaves in a way which makes her seem like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others but in reality it's just the combination of her shameless and kind nature which makes her be open sometimes even in presence of two men like Hariya and Ramu. Also note that Ramu has already sucked her boobs over the blouse. Also, if she was a complete slut, she would have let Hariya suck her breast in front of Ramu only because Ramu in a way have had some intimate moments with her. My phrasing of sentence in this last update might not have been the best to explain what I wanted to. This is the reason I always ask the readers to provide their thoughts on the update because that makes me aware and I can keep that in mind. Remember, I am not a professional writer.
About the bus ride, Ankit is kind of a timid and not so smart boy. He speaks whatever comes to his mind without understanding the consequences but gets scared when that man bullies him. This is the reason he talks to that man in a rude way because he isn't smart enough to know the consequences. Anita on the other hand is a smart woman grown up amongst educated people. I didn't explain what has happened behind the washroom what has happened but if readers pay attention, they would know that a if a smart woman like Anita wanted to fuck that man, the auto ride was the best opportunity but she didn't. So you guys really think she would have let him fuck her in the morning light behind the washroom? May be she went for some other purpose? Also, Anita knows that Ankit is not very smart and is kind of timid. She also knows that he respects her because even though she is her cousins wife, she is a city girl and highly educated. She might have been testing Ankit to get his reaction by deliberately twisting the words.
I appreciate you for taking up the time to provide the feedback.
Not fucking... But what!!! That's the intrigue
And yes, third person perspective is understandable.. even in the earlier updates when an old lady sees her in the sabzi market she takes Anita for a badchalan aurat because of her dressing. Even those who initially approach her to grope or touch are most likely drawn in by her beauty plus the way she dresses which for them is the mark of a slut and open invitation, as if asking for it
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(02-01-2026, 02:12 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Thanks for the detailed analysis and feedback. The badchalan thing is from a third person's perspective. Her family knows that how she dresses is just her fashion sense and inspite of dressing the way she does, she is a sanskaari beti, biwi and bahu who respects everyone and have never had a boyfriend. This is the reason her parents or husband or the in laws have no issue with her dressing. But for a third person, the only thing that they know about her is the way she dresses and that kind of dressing will definitely make her like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others from poor or conservative background. Hell even the man who rode with her might have considered her a badchalan aurat that's why he became so bold so soon. I have used this word for her earlier as well that sometimes in the heat of the moment she also behaves in a way which makes her seem like a badchalan aurat in the eyes of others but in reality it's just the combination of her shameless and kind nature which makes her be open sometimes even in presence of two men like Hariya and Ramu. Also note that Ramu has already sucked her boobs over the blouse. Also, if she was a complete slut, she would have let Hariya suck her breast in front of Ramu only because Ramu in a way have had some intimate moments with her. My phrasing of sentence in this last update might not have been the best to explain what I wanted to. This is the reason I always ask the readers to provide their thoughts on the update because that makes me aware and I can keep that in mind. Remember, I am not a professional writer.
About the bus ride, Ankit is kind of a timid and not so smart boy. He speaks whatever comes to his mind without understanding the consequences but gets scared when that man bullies him. This is the reason he talks to that man in a rude way because he isn't smart enough to know the consequences. Anita on the other hand is a smart woman grown up amongst educated people. I didn't explain what has happened behind the washroom what has happened but if readers pay attention, they would know that a if a smart woman like Anita wanted to fuck that man, the auto ride was the best opportunity but she didn't. So you guys really think she would have let him fuck her in the morning light behind the washroom? May be she went for some other purpose? Also, Anita knows that Ankit is not very smart and is kind of timid. She also knows that he respects her because even though she is her cousins wife, she is a city girl and highly educated. She might have been testing Ankit to get his reaction by deliberately twisting the words.
I appreciate you for taking up the time to provide the feedback.
I don't fully agree with the highlighted part... Having done same thing with two people separately is not necessarily the same as letting one do it on front of the other. The knowledge that it's a secret is part of the fun/thrill
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(02-01-2026, 04:09 PM)creamydelight Wrote: I don't fully agree with the highlighted part... Having done same thing with two people separately is not necessarily the same as letting one do it on front of the other. The knowledge that it's a secret is part of the fun/thrill
That is what I said that looking at how lustful Hariya is right now, she would have let Hariya suck her breast in front of Ramu if she wanted to because she already had some moments with him, but she is not doing it. It's just her natural shamelessness that is making her comfortable in sitting without pallu in front of both. It's not like she is deliberately doing something, it is just happening naturally because of the situation. Also, she is a little comfortable with both Hariya and Ramu and since she is shameless, she doesn't mind the situation. She has already felt Ramu's strong dick on her skin and is kind of impressed by his manhood, but again since she is not an outright slut she hasn't done anything completely sexual with him.
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Ok. Looking forward to the remainder of the three week flashback and nain matakka with Bheema and perhaps more
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Bhai log ye story zindagi bhar chalti rahegi kya
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(02-01-2026, 10:54 PM)ShadowRising321 Wrote: Bhai log ye story zindagi bhar chalti rahegi kya
Brother, there is one story which is getting updated though it is late, everything else remains incomplete, please motivate the person who is writing the story, please brother, do not make such comments.
Sean bro pls continue we are waiting for hot updates
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(02-01-2026, 10:54 PM)ShadowRising321 Wrote: Bhai log ye story zindagi bhar chalti rahegi kya
Brother, there is one story which is getting updated though it is late, everything else remains incomplete, please motivate the person who is writing the story, please brother, do not make such comments.
Sean bro pls continue we are waiting for hot updates
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(02-01-2026, 10:54 PM)ShadowRising321 Wrote: Bhai log ye story zindagi bhar chalti rahegi kya
Brother, there is one story which is getting updated though it is late, everything else remains incomplete, please motivate the person who is writing the story, please brother, do not make such comments.
Sean bro pls continue we are waiting for hot updates
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Bhai aap abhi ek admi se focus karo ek sath do log abhi se maza nahi aa raha hai aur anita abhi tak sabse jyada hariya se khuli hai to un dono ke beeech ki development continue rakho aur story baar baar idhar udhar ho rahi hai pehle thik tha lekin ab irritating lag raha hai ...
Best of luck
And
Happy new year ✨️
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(03-01-2026, 09:58 PM)opendoor Wrote: Anitha
![[Image: Screenshot-2026-01-01-17-02-52-37-b86672...773d05.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/SwM0nXnb/Screenshot-2026-01-01-17-02-52-37-b86672daa061159f52c1a3195c773d05.jpg)
I am sure you can do better than this...This is no where close to the Anita described in this story...
I am sure others will also agree with me on this
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This is how Anita Singh resembles in point of view
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I think she is similar to this
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Sean bhai update bada air regural dalo please baki story acche ja rahi hai
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(05-01-2026, 10:56 AM)scepter7 Wrote: I think she is similar to this
![[Image: 41f53bdb-5b8a-43fc-ae66-6490b0bb7fd7.png]](https://i.ibb.co/QvSHJvHM/41f53bdb-5b8a-43fc-ae66-6490b0bb7fd7.png)
yes this is the best till now
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I think this is the perfect match for Anita Singh
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(Yesterday, 03:15 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: ![[Image: 00d75943-1452-4b95-aafe-140baeeb770b.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/Pzm6tzzD/00d75943-1452-4b95-aafe-140baeeb770b.jpg)
I think this is the perfect match for Anita Singh
which website are you using for this image? nice body i think the face is a bit different try using shruti hassan's face
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(Yesterday, 11:11 AM)scepter7 Wrote: which website are you using for this image? nice body i think the face is a bit different try using shruti hassan's face
it's just google search.... Which ever woman suits my imagination of Anita Singh.... I have posted the same pic previously on this story.....
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