[Ayush01111]

Why every one want one man should become loser and why thease women never understand husband love

[RCF]

Its not about she is weak/strong, its about how Rohan is smarter.. than anyone.. its just his calculations worked enough.. he sensed Nivi can be manipulated.. he accessed predicted everything.. and his biggest blessing is her husbands doubt and her dilemma he made use of both.. Yes Prem will flight back no man is a wimp they at least try.. Prem who all these days have been seen as a protector or overprotective nature will surrender that soon.. but the couple is not perfect right.. they still need to be spoken , change something for better.. even this second scenario if prem did informed her about bangalore project she would have waited.. but he didnt give a chance.. and that chance is key for Rohan because the chance was a orchestrated setup by Rohan and prem buyed it:) 

But thanks for feedback

Lol if she is not weak she wouldn't change her mind like dress every now and then, once you made a decision to give her husband a second chance, she went back on it the moment he is late to a date. That is pathetic excuse. She just doesn't love her husband anymore...its clear. Rohan could be smarter and could manipulate situations around but he cannot manipulate what a person wants unless they really want it. Its a fact that she missed Rohan since last Bangalore trip, Its her guilt that kept her away from him for some time combined with Prem's sweet words. The moment that is broken she is back to him, this time its more of what she needs vs Rohan's manipulation. She even agreed to make her husband cuckold, she agreed to take child from Rohan...that's a classic sign of weak women who doesn't dictate her own life, all these days her husband controlled her on the name of love, now Rohan controlling her on the name of friendship and loneliness. 

Also Prem not informing about his Bangalore project has nothing to do with her falling for Rohan. Poor guy is stuck and not able to communicate, if you start spreading your legs for every excuse around then there is nothing wrong in him protecting her all these yrs, she just proved his point that Prem doubting men around her despite not her fault is right choice. As men can manipulate her and can easily control her. 

She will always be controlled by some one unless she realizes her own dreams and controls her emotions and takes a stand. 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

Lol if she is not weak she wouldn't change her mind like dress every now and then, once you made a decision to give her husband a second chance, she went back on it the moment he is late to a date. That is pathetic excuse. She just doesn't love her husband anymore...its clear. Rohan could be smarter and could manipulate situations around but he cannot manipulate what a person wants unless they really want it. Its a fact that she missed Rohan since last Bangalore trip, Its her guilt that kept her away from him for some time combined with Prem's sweet words. The moment that is broken she is back to him, this time its more of what she needs vs Rohan's manipulation. She even agreed to make her husband cuckold, she agreed to take child from Rohan...that's a classic sign of weak women who doesn't dictate her own life, all these days her husband controlled her on the name of love, now Rohan controlling her on the name of friendship and loneliness. 

Also Prem not informing about his Bangalore project has nothing to do with her falling for Rohan. Poor guy is stuck and not able to communicate, if you start spreading your legs for every excuse around then there is nothing wrong in him protecting her all these yrs, she just proved his point that Prem doubting men around her despite not her fault is right choice. As men can manipulate her and can easily control her. 

She will always be controlled by some one unless she realizes her own dreams and controls her emotions and takes a stand. 

~RCF

Sometimes the story cannot move forward if we think too much.. For the story which i have envisioned.. i need some justifications to keep their characters fall from disgrace so that i the story can give them a better chances.. if i consider this point seriously i have to withdrew some plot points that i have envisioned. so i just appeal you to spare my story characters for sometime :)

[heygiwriter]

yes, I expected this. Once a partner cheats, there's almost no chance that they will try to make it work and it will work. They will find rationale and excuses to cheat again. That's what Nivi did. It was just a few hours and anything could have happened but that was the excuse she was looking for. Though Prem's insecurity is at fault too.

She was not looking for excuses. It just happened the way Rohan wanted.. Originally i have few more chapters before their second sex. that involved other characters too which slowed down the manipulation stuff eventually their second sex.  But i saw some of readers in chat and in personal inbox asked me to not to delay the intercourse stuff after all xossip readers expect taht in regular interval.. Hence i cut short the flow. Never knew it could paint Nivi character this bad, like she was waiting for excuses . In new setup i just rushed the proceeding unlike earlier chapters.

[heygiwriter]

You are writing great boss!!! Keep up the good work!!! Keep rocking!!!

thanks a lot

[heygiwriter]

Nice story so hot.......

Thanks

[RCF]

Sometimes the story cannot move forward if we think too much.. For the story which i have envisioned.. i need some justifications to keep their characters fall from disgrace so that i the story can give them a better chances.. if i consider this point seriously i have to withdrew some plot points that i have envisioned. so i just appeal you to spare my story characters for sometime :)

I understand, I am not criticizing your writing or story, I am only saying for a character like Nivi who has fallen for an extramarital affair once, the onus if not to be heavy on her as her fault there need to be more circumstances than simple late to a date from her husband as a reason for her heart break to fall into the pit again. I am sure now since Rohan got her well into his control second time, he openly made her agree to be his pet from now on, so there won't be second chance for her to love her husband, here and out she will do lot of things under his nose with Rohan...the plot to be falling into such a pit felt short for me, thats all. 

Anyways, another great story in this site to engage us more. I appreciate the efforts and giving us your valuable time and ink. Only request is not to make this a cuckold story, there are just far too many here that is causing lot of distaste recently. 

~RCF

[heygiwriter]

I understand, I am not criticizing your writing or story, I am only saying for a character like Nivi who has fallen for an extramarital affair once, the onus if not to be heavy on her as her fault there need to be more circumstances than simple late to a date from her husband as a reason for her heart break to fall into the pit again. I am sure now since Rohan got her well into his control second time, he openly made her agree to be his pet from now on, so there won't be second chance for her to love her husband, here and out she will do lot of things under his nose with Rohan...the plot to be falling into such a pit felt short for me, thats all. 

Anyways, another great story in this site to engage us more. I appreciate the efforts and giving us your valuable time and ink. Only request is not to make this a cuckold story, there are just far too many here that is causing lot of distaste recently. 

~RCF

I understand, and i know you are not criticizing me. :) it is intended to travels same path.. but i wish i make it different from other stories.

[Deepak.kapoor]

nice update. heygiwriter

I have also started one story, both in Hindi/Hinglish versions.

please read that and give me your thought

 --अनीता सिंह -- किरदार निभाना (Role Play)

[heygiwriter]

nice update. heygiwriter

I have also started one story, both in Hindi/Hinglish versions.

please read that and give me your thought

 --अनीता सिंह -- किरदार निभाना (Role Play)

Sure brother i will give a read

[readersp]

kindly update.. sort of addicted to your story!!!

[Anju angel]

This is a wonderful description, it feels very much alive to me. Please expand on this.

[sarit11]

My dear Readers

Don't Quote the full story update in your Replys.

we will delete those posts.

[Muralimm]

Superb writing man
The character of Rohan he is playing with her mind and body

What is the next move he can get her again?

[heygiwriter]

Hey guys.. A GENERAL DISCLAIMER

I wanted to recall this.. The very first post on this thread.. i have made a disclaimer that this story will be travelling in cuckold, cheating path and if you are not comfortable with it please skip it..

I have to repeat this again.. because some comments and some inbox messages from almost a 5 plus users.. have been messaging me why Nivi needs to cheat  ,why prem is poor. Guys I'm happy you all connected with the story/character. But its just a fiction, its not real :)

[Ayush01111]

Hey guys.. A GENERAL DISCLAIMER

I wanted to recall this.. The very first post on this thread.. i have made a disclaimer that this story will be travelling in cuckold, cheating path and if you are not comfortable with it please skip it..

I have to repeat this again.. because some comments and some inbox messages from almost a 5 plus users.. have been messaging me why Nivi needs to cheat  ,why prem is poor. Guys I'm happy you all connected with the story/character. But its just a fiction, its not real :)

Ha padha tumhara msg or point of view pati ko chutiya bana maze le kar baad me usi ko doshi bana ke guilt court me khada kar ke maze lene ka

[Paul5]

I cnt understand those readers thaught ki they want only husband wife love story clearly mentioned this is an adultery section story its pure adultery story and hole beauty and qwality this story how author explain the adultery in such a beautiful way i think author got 100 percent success on this point

[heygiwriter]

Chapter 43 – The Return Home and Doctor Visit 

Nivi was putting on her bra and panty — hands hurried, body still flushed and trembling from the aftershocks.

She struggled to hook the bra — fingers fumbling, back turned to the mirror.

Rohan helped her — stepped close, breath warm on her neck, fingers deft and gentle as he fastened the clasp.

His touch lingered a second — thumb brushing skin.
She collected her saree — silk crumpled on floor.

Feared she had no time to change fully and go to Prem's room.
Rohan got into Prem's suite first with the spare key — quick, silent.

Picked a fresh towel.
Came back — handed it as rooms opposite.
She quickly wrapped towel — tight around body.
Got in her suite.

Locked door — telling him, "I'll take bath and come.."
Rohan: "We going back Chennai next flight..."
She: "Okay" — voice muffled through door.

Went in — shower on full.
3 minutes later Prem arrived — footsteps in hall.
Before that Rohan quickly altered room — no sign of sex.
Wrapped bedsheet tight.

Poured water from bottle on one spot — cap open, make look like spill.
Scents masked — window cracked.
Prem knocked door — no response.
She bathing.

He called — mobile rang in Rohan's room.
Panicked — entered to see Rohan on phone with someone.
As he turned Rohan said hi casual.
"Where she? Why her phone here?"


Rohan: "Quickly she gave it to me — went for bath. She said you may call her and as she is going for a bath she gave her phone to me. Logical, right?"

His tone casual, smile easy — phone handed back as if nothing unusual.

Prem could not avoid doubt — mind racing, images flashing unbidden.
Why her phone with him? Why separate rooms story?

But decided to trust Nivi no matter what — squeezed eyes shut a second, pushed thoughts down.

Waited in his room 20 mins — TV on, volume low, news anchor droning about traffic and weather.

Mind elsewhere — replaying day, VapsoftNue excitement mixing with unease.

When she came out — fresh dress, simple cotton salwar, hair damp and loose, makeup light, scent of hotel soap.
Looked composed — but eyes avoiding direct.

Rohan voluntarily gave phone — from pocket.
"Your hubby back - idon't need attend his call anymore. Take."
Smile polite.

Nivi understood whatever happened — quick thinking, cover perfect.
She took phone — fingers brushing his briefly.

Rohan: "Okay Prem — take bath or freshen up, we move to Chennai."
Prem: "What? So early?"
"Yes — meeting ended smoothly, but you were busy with other plans."
Tone neutral — no judgment.

Nivi went to her room — without commotion, door soft click.
Prem tried to cool her — followed, voice soft.

"Sorry... really."
But she stubborn, angry mode — silent treatment, back turned, packing slow.

In flight — boarding, seats assigned.
She changed seat quietly — moved near Rohan to avoid him.

Prem noticed — hurt flicker, but said nothing.

Rohan assured Prem — low voice in aisle.

"Not worry.. women mood. Long day."

But didn't take liberty before him — acted maintaining distance like gentleman.

No touch, no whisper.
Professional.

On way home — Mercedes smooth.

Prem opened in car — voice soft from passanger seat
"I'm sorry... shouldn't hide. Company person — new client, big. Wanted surprise... but never thought drag like this."

Nivi realised — anger, cheating in name revenge — all misunderstanding.
Misplaced.

Her heart twisted — sharp guilt.

She looked at Rohan in mirror — driving, eyes forward.
He shook head subtle — assurance.
You did nothing wrong.




That night in bed

She knew deep inside it was beyond repair.
She had consumed an affair — fully, willingly.
Puzzled why she turned this way.



Is Prem's love not enough? Or Rohan's new found relationship overwhelms me? Or is it... his sex?



Maybe...Sex.... that's the only truth. But I don't want to believe it.



She said to herself — lying in bed, staring ceiling.



She was just happy Rohan was not pushy — not that monster type men she saw in movies, series, books.



Demanding, possessive, threatening.

No.

He gave space.

Understood.

Waited.



But she also said to herself — his comfort, love, calmness, and sex — all gave reason to be with him.



But he has fantasy making my husband cuck... no, I should not.

What harm does he do other than loving me?

I should speak with him... clarify this.



She resoluted herself — in bed, could not sleep.



Her stomach ached — dull throb.

Hip caused severe pain — soreness deep, reminder of intensity.



Thinking after effect of sex — does this...?



Didn't alarm Prem — sleeping beside, peaceful.

Just closed eyes.

Tried sleep.



Morning — condition fine, but wanted check.



Got ready office — routine mask.

Waited bathroom till Prem left

Came out.



Dialed Rohan.



"I visiting gynecologist."

He: "Fine... everything okay?"

"Yes... just check."



Rohan already office — thought she is in anger for tricking her into sex with comfort words. he could not see her in the morning.. Even prem said she is still in bathroom. He came to company straight without disturbing her.. 




But thanked her — because the company had a visitor: Aadhil.

Aadhil was disappointed — he had come all the way from Kerala a short trip plan on way to his other schedule just to see Nivi in person.

"You didn't get your luck enough — she has issues with husband, so your 'sister-in-law' didn't arrive,"

 Rohan teased, leaning back in his office chair with a knowing grin.



Aadhil grinned wide — eyes lighting up with mischief.



"From when is she my sister-in-law?" he shot back, voice playful but curious.



Rohan leaned forward, tone firm but light. "For now... and ever.. 

Bro, don't trick me — you hide her somewhere?"

Friendly banter continued — easy, brotherly, the kind built over years of shared secrets and deals.





Aadhil laughed. "Flight in 1 hour... thought visit you, use that as a excuse to see Nivi in person."

But couldn't — hissed at schedule, checking watch.



"Damn... next time."




At the same time — gynecologist hospital.






Nivi had taken the appointment but reached the clinic early.



She parked in a hurry and stepped inside, adjusting her bag.
The waiting area was quiet.

//Just then, another woman hurried out from the side corridor, clearly anxious.


“Please, can you hold my baby for a minute?” she asked the woman in green.

“I have to give a urine sample.”

The woman in green nodded immediately.
“Of course.”

The baby was placed in her arms, and the woman rushed away.//


Only the soft hum of the AC, magazines stacked neatly on the table, and the faint smell of antiseptic in the air.
No nurse near the cabin.

A young woman—around 26—sat alone on one of the chairs.

She wore a pastel green chudidar, simple and elegant.

A thin nuptial thread rested against her collarbone. No heavy jewellery. Freshly married, Nivi guessed.

She was holding a baby—round cheeks, big eyes, tiny fingers waving as it made soft gurgling sounds.

Nivi walked closer and smiled.
“Doctor irukaara?”
(Is the doctor in?)

The woman looked up.
“Yes.”

Her voice was gentle, a tired smile on her face.

Nivi looked at the baby and smiled wider.
“She’s very cute.”

The woman smiled back warmly.
“Yes… she is.”

A few moments later, the nurse stepped out with a clipboard.
“Vani Nitin—next.”

The woman in green—Vani—stood up, now juggling files and medical reports.

The nurse said, “Keep the baby with the lady nearby. Take your files first.”
Vani turned to Nivi, slightly apologetic.

“Vachurunga… please hold her. I’ll come back.”

Before Nivi could respond, the baby was gently placed in her arms.
Warm. Soft. Trusting.

The doctor’s door closed quietly behind Vani.
Minutes passed.

Then the earlier woman rushed back in, panic written across her face as she could not find the women in green.

“Where is my baby?” she asked quickly.
and that the moment she spotted the baby in Nivi's Hand.
The women came near and asked to hand over the baby.

Nivi’s expression changed instantly.

“The baby’s mother is inside,” she said firmly.

The woman frowned.
“No, that’s my baby.”

Nivi stepped back slightly, tightening her hold.

“Baby's mother gave it to me to take care.. do you think im fool.. dont try to trick me?”

The woman’s voice rose.

“Because I asked her to hold my baby!”
The baby started fussing.

Just then, the doctor’s door opened.
Vani stepped out—and stopped short when she saw the scene.

“What happened?” she asked, confused.

The anxious woman spoke first.
“She’s not giving me my baby.”
Nivi turned to Vani.

“She suddenly came and asked for the baby.  she is trying to trick me.”

For a second, Vani stared—then she laughed softly, realization dawning.
“Oh my God… I’m so sorry,” she said quickly.
“This is actually her baby, not mine.”
Everyone froze.

Vani reached for the child and gently handed the baby to the original mother.

“I should have told you. I’m really sorry—I was called in suddenly.”

The woman hugged her baby close, relief flooding her face.
Vani turned back to Nivi, still apologetic.

“You did the right thing. Anyone would’ve been careful.”
Nivi exhaled.
“Thanks for understanding... I’m sorry too.”

“It’s okay,” the other woman said. You caused me a panic

Vani stood in for Nivi and said you should be thankful for being careful.. 

Awkward smiles replaced the tension.

Nivi extended her hand.

“I’m Nivi.”

The woman in green smiled.

“Vani. Vani Nitin Prakash.”

[RCF]

Hey guys.. A GENERAL DISCLAIMER

I wanted to recall this.. The very first post on this thread.. i have made a disclaimer that this story will be travelling in cuckold, cheating path and if you are not comfortable with it please skip it..

I have to repeat this again.. because some comments and some inbox messages from almost a 5 plus users.. have been messaging me why Nivi needs to cheat  ,why prem is poor. Guys I'm happy you all connected with the story/character. But its just a fiction, its not real :)

Ah, I missed your disclaimer, I understand the intent of this story now. 

I am out for this story, I wish you good luck bro. 

~RCF

[Anju angel]

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