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Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]
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26-12-2025, 08:01 PM
Hello, author just read your story and just one word it's amazing. The Characters, the plot and the twist that you have delivered are just mind blowing. Your writing skills is amazing
However I would like to take a liberty to convey my personal feelings about this amazing story (better to call it a developing masterpiece) As you have already mentioned that it will be a slow, seductive, cuckold, cheating wife story and as of now the story is progressing in that course only. After reading the last update the following conclusion has drawn my attention which is appended below Prem is a caring, loving husband, overprotective husband living peacefully with his beautiful wife Nivi who slowly knowingly entered into an illicit relationship with his business partner Rohan (let's say alpha male in this story). 2. Prem is totally unaware of the fact what has happened behind his back (however xossipians are aware of that part and waiting impatiently what's coming next) 3. Prem is a doubtful husband (totally matches with the title of the story) and always monitors each and every characters behaviour(even his wife as well he sometimes questions his intentions) Now coming back to point:- A) Don' t try to make Prem an alpha character by banging Nivi as an act of revenge or to prove his male supremacy. Always remember there should be only one alpha male in the story and we all know who the hell he is. However Prem can play as a mere protagonist husband but there is a fine line between a bull and cuck. Don't ever make the character of Nivi as a submissive sex slut, keep the love for her husband and lust for her lover ( a dutiful wife of Prem and a lover of Rohan). Try to build up double meaning conversation/ plot or situations in between Nivi and Rohan keeping Prem in doubt and despair. B) We can see that till now in Nivi's life Rohan is the only one who has managed to cross the barrier and reached her deep spot, the feeling of care and affection has appeared then sex happened and at last then there should be a place for love, a true love no lust (Nivi is not a sex hungry slut who need man materials to feed her sex hunger, but just a kiss on forehead to heal her pain and pull her towards a new experience of love) C) The story will be more interesting when the husband plans to win his wife back every time but he fails and ended up being cuck (not because his planning is poor or he is cuck but there is someone along with Rohan holding his hand side by side helping her lover to win over her husband in every situation and enjoying her husband's failure and lover success ) D) Don't make the story full of sex , bang , gangbang, then it will be monotonous and become a porn story instead . You can add punches in the story like:- (I) An outdoor office get together/ party where Rohan and Nivi had to act like newely wed couple and everyone complementing them in front of Prem( Prem gets humiliated) (ii)A planned family tour/ vacation where Prem fails to attend and got stuck with his office meeting while Rohan is busy in mating. (iii) Rohan comparing or joking manly matters with Prem in front of his wife. (iv) Suddenly Prem falls sick (for some reason or maybe Rohan is behind all of this) Nivi taking good care of Prem, keeping all his needs taking care of husband all day (taking leave from the office) and taking care of Rohan behind the curtain at night. Prem knows there is no requirement for Rohan since Nivi is competent enough to care for him but why Rohan is frequently paying visit to them and staying in their flat under the same roof at night in the pretext to care for Prem(or actually taking care of Nivi at night and Prem is just the audience of their romance but still he is unsure because he is sick not able to move) and he is so weak to take any action against them. D) One thing I would strongly advise is that adding too many characters sometimes dilute and divert the story from the origin. As you have mentioned few characters that will be coming in the story as the story progresses further, it should not happen that there are a bunch of dogs fighting for one bone to pick up(you have already understood whom I am referring to) since there was a character Prakash who had well played his role in this story and now there is no point to revive his character in their story because in my POV it will create a unnecessary drama and chaos in Prem as well as Nivi's life (already Rohan is a silent volcano which will erupt in near future that will shattered their pious marriage life), same goes for the character Adhil, Rohan friend is there a requirement for him..???? E) And lastly don't make it a cheap cuckold story. All these points are just from my point of view, I have no intention to dilute your ideas (you are excellent in your field we all know) Waiting for more updates....
26-12-2025, 08:18 PM
(This post was last modified: 26-12-2025, 09:00 PM by heygiwriter. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(26-12-2025, 08:01 PM)Chickfry Wrote: Hello, author just read your story and just one word it's amazing. The Characters, the plot and the twist that you have delivered are just mind blowing. Your writing skills is amazing Thank you for the detailed response.. I wanted the story to keep close to realism.. whenever i open xossipy most of the stories are like he is a husband there is an alpha and instantly he get between her legs.. I'm a person who kind of searching a nice plot.. a plot that makes their decision as choice. So i tried to bring in a proper plot like few of really good stories here. And i believe i done it so far.. To me I'm always with people like Prem. They just don't know how to love properly they know but they stuck somewhere and they have some reasons.. at least in my story i don't want to get him humiliated straight.. may be subtly. but he is trying to win her back will be there graciously.. coming to your questions Answers : A . I'm trying to pen Prem as lover nothing more nothing less. he is not alpha or loser he is jst a lover who wanted to get her back B. I cannot answer it directly as it may spoil your reading experience surprise etc.. C. Some ideas are really good.. let me see if i can get that inside if it can match into existing scenarios i have already writing.. D. Few characters do come.. and they strongly has a purpose.. Yes there is sex.. there is cheating but the characters and the invovlement make it a point for some important decisions the husband and wife will make independently for their better. and the prakash character i saw teh confusion,, the new prakash is Nithin Prakash and not just prakash.. The first prakash was the predator who is colleague of prem. Nithin Prakash is Prems s chool mate. E . Im trying too :)
26-12-2025, 09:45 PM
Heloo writer,
Hope you are doing great i had read your story till now its good and as i read above one reader detail review in story i just want to add one point there is very thin line in love and lust as i read many story every one make a husband so helpless that ki man hi nahi karta padhne ka kyu ki realty me ye nahi hota hai so keep it little realstic. 1) As Nivi is enjoying his friend rohan company let pream also get some one like it he also desearve such experiance not constantly but in middle . 2) Wife should never ignoer husband and never keep lover first becuase in 8 year rohan came back but pream was there when nivi need a most .(becuase in 8 years there is routene was seted where couple are not attractive toward sex with same person ,Higher in case of husband and this is harsh realty which should not happen but its happening ,so if you can keep double cheating where both party are living doual life where pream vet knowledge of nivi and rohan sex so he also do same for him and keeping harmony in home ) 3) and i request this should be cheeting story wbere both husband and wife do cheating dont make it chuck its a worst part in storys. And rest upon you Ap nirmata hai or nirmata ko nirdash dene wale hum kon hote hai so agar kuch bura lage to maff kar dena mera mana or kehna shirf itna hai agar patni husband se boar hogai hai to Husband bhi wife se boar ho skata hai so do as per your wish but dont make chuck .
26-12-2025, 11:16 PM
(26-12-2025, 08:18 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Thank you for the detailed response.. I wanted the story to keep close to realism.. whenever i open xossipy most of the stories are like he is a husband there is an alpha and instantly he get between her legs.. I'm a person who kind of searching a nice plot.. a plot that makes their decision as choice. So i tried to bring in a proper plot like few of really good stories here. And i believe i done it so far.. To me I'm always with people like Prem. They just don't know how to love properly they know but they stuck somewhere and they have some reasons.. at least in my story i don't want to get him humiliated straight.. may be subtly. but he is trying to win her back will be there graciously.. coming to your questions Answers : A . I'm trying to pen Prem as lover nothing more nothing less. he is not alpha or loser he is jst a lover who wanted to get her back B. I cannot answer it directly as it may spoil your reading experience surprise etc.. C. Some ideas are really good.. let me see if i can get that inside if it can match into existing scenarios i have already writing.. D. Few characters do come.. and they strongly has a purpose.. Yes there is sex.. there is cheating but the characters and the invovlement make it a point for some important decisions the husband and wife will make independently for their better. and the prakash character i saw teh confusion,, the new prakash is Nithin Prakash and not just prakash.. The first prakash was the predator who is colleague of prem. Nithin Prakash is Prems s chool mate. E . Im trying too :) I like that you are one of the few writers who are very engaging with the readers , and actually acknowledging the suggestion given by them , and trying to or added it into your story , and then publishing the update in just a day . Also the summary part and characters list you posted was good thing . I hope you do that after every 10 updates . Makes easier to recall the story . I wanna say you are going great , Every chapter holds the same standard and consistency is too good . Even though the suggestion were great , I dont want you to deviate from the original IDEA/PLOT . Also Like How you Pen the PREM's CHARACTER . A lover . which is very APT . A man who is trying to change . Too bad the story is cuckold story , PREM IS GONNA BE CUCKOLD . . I hope he willingly become cuck and not Co hearse into it . His whole life His instinct kept him and His family safe but also created lots of problem , and Now When he ignored his instinct, They got him . Also Guy traded his wife for KIA SELTOS ( Rohan drives Mercedes but told her mistress to get KIA for her HUSBAND , was it intentional ) , She did him dirty , TWICE , By fucking His business partner and then buying him a car which is KIA . At least get him some LUXURY SEDAN or something Just Kidding . NIVI's character action is justified , but I hope you dont use that usual trope of cheating wife . I LOVE MY HUSBAND AND FUCK MY LOVER. Her character has shown her own struggle and dilemma so I think it should not be undone just because in future PREM's became a GOOD husband at the end and she went back to being GOOD LOYAL HOUSEWIFE . Yes , about the characters , Too Many characters which is fine no problem , It is just Their motives are not so different , Maybe it is too soon , In future we may get to know . But over all . THIS IS A GREAT STORY . Excited for the Next UPDATE . I wonder how do you write so fast without compromising the quality of the updates . And I might be in the Minority , But the EROTIC portion is just fine , No need for the exaggeration . But of course it would not hurt to get some more .Waiting for Next UPDATES !!!!!!!! ( Comment is just for fun )
26-12-2025, 11:49 PM
wow the story is rocking and everyone is loving the flow
not just loving, i could see more people responding and suggesting the flow ad character arcs etc rocking bro
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27-12-2025, 12:40 PM
Update please
28-12-2025, 09:35 PM
Chapter 39 – The Gift and the Pull
Prem didn’t question it. Not really. When Nivi said Rohan had helped get the Kia Seltos delivered so fast — he just smiled. Grateful. Trusted. No flicker of suspicion. Just pure joy, Nivi telling him all truths. He took her on a ride immediately — out of the office parking, onto the open roads, windows down, evening breeze rushing in. The new car — sleek, powerful, air-conditioned cool against the Chennai heat. Nivi beside him, watching his face light up. They discussed how different it was from the old Swift. Smooth acceleration — no jerk. Quiet engine — no rattle. Space — comfortable seats. Features — touchscreen glowing. Prem admitted, voice soft, eyes on the road but glancing at her often. “I was torn. Felt you didn’t return love… maybe irritated with me. Because of all these years..” He paused, hand tightening on wheel. “Let me tell you honestly — I’m paranoid that you may get hurt by leechers, predators. So I wanted to protect you. But never knew it could feel like a cage for you.” Nivi looked at him — surprised he admitted it. “How did you find out then?” Prem smiled small. “Realised somehow.. Better never than late, right…” “But this present — assures me you value me so much. Our love is still there.” Nivi's heart twisted — guilt and warmth. “I never stopped loving you.” “I had disappointments… but never wanted to make an issue.” “I just chose now what I wanted — a bit of freedom for my goal. Hope you understand.” Prem nodded — hand reaching for hers, squeezing gently. "You go out, do what you want.. Chase your dreams..." They had lunch out — small seaside restaurant, family favorite. Picked Aara from college — surprise new car. Kid squealed — "Appa's big car! Shiny!" Climbed in back, touching everything. Family moment — light, happy. Night at Rohan’s luxury apartment. They showed him the car — parked gleaming in garage. Rohan, Nivi, Prem, Aara — went for a night trip. City lights twinkling. Ice cream stops. Aara asleep in back with Nivi. Rohan driving the new Kia — Prem passenger, grinning. Laughter easy. Next day — routine. Rohan took Nivi in his Mercedes to office. Prem in the new Kia — still grinning ear to ear. On the way — traffic slow, giving space. Rohan started conversation, casual. See, it's that simple. look how happy prem was yesterday and today with his grin... Returning love is an Art Nivi giggled Rohan said.. :It's like how girls expect love via little things.. Men expect too. But never know what they expect.. Instead they seek in verbal." Nivi realised what he said. The car she gifted had been the love symbol now. She knows after her one night with Rohan it's not easy to get back to Prem. She is confused, not able to process her surrender. Prem turning good to her at this point had really been hard on her. It pushed her further into guilt. If this continued she feared she might slip out truth which she wanted to forget or at least hide from him. Even until this point she was not sure of what she want.. To continue affair or consider that as one time or break her friendship with Rohan.. But before she herself decide Prem’s sudden change caused her panic. Rohan saw the silence in Nivi. He slowly asked her. Rohan: "Nivi, what happened to you?" Nivi: "Nothing, I was thinking.. I want to be just his wife and be loyal to him… I don't think we should continue.." Rohan: "Continue what?" Nivi: "Continue whatever." Rohan: "You mean friendship, business, and new found friendship with secrets?" Nivi said she could not process things.. "I'm glad that you gave me time to heal, process, and get an answer to Prem through some idea like buying car, but I really don't know how to take this forward.. I feel myself some low…" Rohan: "Okay, let's quit.. Quit all — friendship, business, and lust/sex. But can you answer me following things?" Nivi: She looked at his face and asked, "What?" Rohan: "Say you are quitting business — what will you tell your husband?" "The truth?" Nivi: "No." Rohan: "Then a lie? like business not suited for you or not able to manage? Will he get convinced when our business is going very good?" Nivi looked puzzled. Rohan: "He will just get more doubt and push you for truth.." Second question — let's assume you quit my friendship and not business. This work is not possible without communication and understanding… won't Prem find suspicious with my uninvolvement or we not speaking to each other?" Nivi: "He will, given his nature.." Rohan: "He would find the truth or pin a suspect of even greater side." Nivi now realised she cannot quit the business or friendship. Third question let's assume you quit business and friendship because you are done with it and going to look after Aara or Prem.. A solid reason which Prem will buy instantly… Are you okay with shutting your long pending dream to run a business?" Nivi: "No." Fourth question — let's assume you still quit and convince Prem you will start after a year or so? Will you be able to pull these many clients because it all came through me? You need to earn your name for some more time. Practically, is that not right? Nivi realised it's not easy to break everything with him except sex with Rohan.. Rohan continued.. "Now you may know the answer for it. It's easy to quit but the aftermath you have to face is large. My suggestion would be — just focus on your growth.. Friendship, love, lust can be part of you if you want it for you.. That's all I can say." Nivi wanted to thank him but she didn't open her mouth — but she got clarity. No need to worry about the past — just go ahead and seal her future for better. And Rohan is never pushy.. He respects me, adores me and waits for my words, he will understand.... Maybe other thoughts — it can wait. Once her mind realized the burden had gone — a deep breath and wide smile came through her. She was ready to continue everything except sex — she was also happy that even after all happenings Rohan never seemed to demand bodily pleasure again from her.. Rohan didn't miss to see her widened smile… Rohan: "Your face glows so much these days.. I have never seen this side of yours. It actually gives me an impression that you are a fun and jovial person and very talkative." Nivi: "Is it? My friends back in college used to say I was that bright, glowy, jovial.. I'm hearing those words again now." Rohan: "Then it means you are finding yourself back.. You got yourself back.. The glow I have not seen ever since I met you can be seen in these two weeks especially after our last Bangalore visit." Nivi looked at him — silent for a moment, smile fading slightly. The truth unspoken. But Rohan knew the value of silence and the weight of her inner thoughts. He clearly knew she wanted to break up with him.. It should be just a one night stand.. For her… He knew how to twist it.. His mind pinned a calculation on a new game.. Evolved.. He continued. Rohan: "In 3 days we have to go to Bangalore again…" Nivi was lost in thought — she wanted to say no.. she feared if things reappeared again? The night repeats again.. Before she could process, Rohan opened his mouth again. Rohan: "Call Prem this time.. Let him come with us, know how we work.. This time I will make it a point to discuss it there in the client's place instead of by phone so that he will know we are really working .. and you are pulling him into your world.. He may consider that as a continuous way of yours attempting to prove his love.. This can push his bed needs for a few more days.. He will wait until you recover completely." Nivi looked at his face — she could not read his thoughts but felt very warm of his support. She reached out her hand and caught his left hand and said thanks.. Nivi bought it.. Unknowing what new chapters he had for her in Bangalore..
28-12-2025, 10:08 PM
(26-12-2025, 11:16 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: I like that you are one of the few writers who are very engaging with the readers , and actually acknowledging the suggestion given by them , and trying to or added it into your story , and then publishing the update in just a day . Thanks :)
28-12-2025, 10:09 PM
28-12-2025, 11:03 PM
Interesting mind games
Manipulate her thoughts on what he wants brilliant man Regular story line but you treat well in unpredictable twist
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28-12-2025, 11:12 PM
Chapter 40 – The Bangalore Surprise
Rohan continued “Nivi… the client meeting — we can sign fast. Then you and Prem tour Bangalore. Return next immediate flight. Don’t want to leave Aara alone long.” Nivi turned, surprised — warmth spreading. “Yes… she has quarterly exams coming.” Rohan nodded. “Good. Family first.” Nivi smiled — warm, grateful, eyes softening. "Thanks for understanding." They entered their cabins for work — routine, focused. Rohan, alone in his office, called Aadhil. Voice low, direct. Rohan, alone in his office — door closed, blinds half-drawn, the hum of the air conditioner the only sound — picked up his phone. Dialed from memory. Voice low, direct — no pleasantries. "Aadhil… need help." Aadhil on the other end — background noise of a busy evening, perhaps a restaurant or home with family. "Say, brother. Always." Rohan leaned back in chair, eyes on ceiling. "Your Bangalore IT company — VapsoftNue Solutions. Shed some project outsourcing to Prem Infinity." Aadhil paused — processing. "Client locked tight, da. Contract signed, NDAs, penalties. Can't shift without burning bridges." Rohan: "Don't shift. Just open door. Ask for demo. Quote request. Make it look competitive." Aadhil hesitated — voice cautious, weighing risk. "Risky… client sensitive. If they smell shopping around, trust gone. But for you, I'll push. Quietly." Rohan: "Good. Make it convincing. Big enough to excite." Aadhil: "Scale?" Rohan: "Enough for him to bite. Not too big to scare." Aadhil chuckled low. "You playing long game again?" Rohan: "Always." Call ended. That evening. Aadhil's company — VapsoftNue Solutions, renowned big player in South Indian tech circles, logos on billboards, awards on walls — sent the mail. Formal. Professional. Subject: Request for Quotation — Outsourcing Partnership Opportunity Body: Interest in Prem Infinity Solutions' capabilities. Demo invitation. Quote for mid-scale project — significant revenue potential. Prem at home — checking mail on phone during dinner break. Saw sender. Eyes widened. Heart racing — sudden thrill. New big client. Major. From Bangalore. He reread twice — confirming. Grinned wide — couldn't hide. Just thrilled. Major opportunity. The game — shifting again. Unseen hands moving pieces. He wanted to share it with Nivi but he wanted to tell her only when it get signed officially.. To keep this as surprise he spend more time in office. He reached late that night Night. Nivi informed about Bangalore visit in 3 days. Prem: "Go ahead. Nivi… You don't need to aske for my permissions" She caught his hand — soft, fingers intertwining.I not asking permission im asking something else "Can you come with me?" Prem surprised — eyes widening. "What happened? His overthinking mind suddenly suspected something any Issue with Rohan? Do you fear something " Nivi recalled Rohan's warnings about doubts. "No… just want to spend day outside with you. Place we never went." Prem: "What about Aara?" "She has exams. We returned immediately in night or early morning... I will ask Rohan to handle business after I sign." Prem mind twisted the moment he get invite from his wife to Bangalore… may be we can visit the client directly when she is at business… plus time with wife. One stone two mango he overjoyed but he decided to keep about the new opportunity hidden from Nivi. if he cracked this it could be his first big client not taken with help of Nivi or Rohan. Next day. Nivi informed Rohan — Prem agreed. She asked, voice light. "Can you manage when I go out with Prem?" She wanted a reassurance so her plan with her hubby her love can go smoother Rohan: "Yes. Pretty sure." Two days passed — no iota of tension. Everything smooth. Normal. Life at the penthouse flowed like a well-rehearsed routine — mornings with Aara's chatter, evenings with shared dinners, nights quiet. Her glow returning — subtle, but there, a soft radiance in her skin, a lightness in her step that hadn't been present in weeks. His cool talks — easy, guiding, always with that knowing undertone, but never pushing. Prem's love seemed to decrease slightly — not dramatically, but noticeably. Busy negotiating with VapsoftNue — emails late into night, phone calls during dinner, eyes distant even when beside her. Nivi felt Prem off after the car gift. Saw her love — the grand gesture — and went back to old self? Focused on work, distant evenings — laptop glow on his face, calls muttered in the study. She quizzed herself in quiet moments — work pressure? Or he lost the he heat after knowing my love didnt fade? Couldn't speak after dinner — he lost in thoughts, screen reflecting in his eyes, responses short. At mirror one night — after Aara asleep, Prem already in bed scrolling — she saw herself dull. Cheeks lacking color. Eyes tired. Remembered Rohan: "You glow." Imitated smile — forced curve of lips. Saw change — brighter eyes, color in cheeks, the woman from college days peeking back. Disappointed — the smile faded. Went to bed — back to Prem, mind elsewhere. Bangalore day arrived. Nivi ready early — alarm quiet, movements careful not to wake Aara. Packed daughter's things — college bag, exam notes, favorite snack. Left with nanny — instructions careful, hugs lingering. Rohan drove the Mercedes — smooth, silent. Prem and Nivi held hands — like newlyweds, fingers laced across console, occasional squeeze, small smiles shared. Boarded flight. Rohan adjacent seat — one row over, laptop open on tray table, business focus sharp. Earphones in — faint music audible only to him. Typing steadily — emails, spreadsheets, deals. Not disturbing — giving space deliberately. Head down, occasional glance at boarding screen. Professional mask perfect. Nivi glanced at him — more than once. Felt sorry — quiet pang. Isolating when Prem around — pushing him aside, chatting only family/business with husband. Like Rohan outsider. But she said to herself this is how it should be she no need to feel sorry for him — just friendship, business. Nothing more. She told herself. However, Felt Rohan sacrificing for her happiness — space, no push, letting her "fix" with Prem. Thanked silently — eyes meeting his once across seat, soft nod, small smile. He nodded back — knowing. Reached Bangalore — checked regular luxury hotel. Rohan penthouse — top floor, city view. They suite — adjacent, connected door. Direct to company — no delay. Prem lobby — mobile out immediately, emailing VapsoftNue updates, pacing slightly with excitement. He was surprised to see the HR asked him to call him right away sending him a number on email.. This was the same time Nivi went inside with Rohan. She waved him bye but he glued to mobile. Nivi inside with Rohan — meeting room ready. Meeting progressing — smooth, numbers good. The conference room was air-conditioned cool, glass walls overlooking Bangalore's skyline, the client team nodding approvingly at projected figures, revenue forecasts glowing on the screen. Rohan presented flawlessly — voice steady, charm effortless. But he felt her diverted — Nivi beside him, mind elsewhere. Glances at phone — subtle, quick checks for messages. Smile distracted — lips curving but eyes distant, thoughts clearly with Prem waiting in lobby. Her leg brushed his under table once — accidental, but lingering heat. He excused politely — "Need quick word with partner." Stood, gestured Nivi follow. Client smiled understanding — "Of course." Empty conference room next door — door closed with soft click, privacy glass frosting automatically. Alone. "Nivi… I know you want spend time with Prem. Don’t you know business important?" His voice low, teasing edge, eyes locking hers. Nivi flushed slightly — caught. "Sorry… let's finish quick." Rohan stepped closer — not touching, but near enough she felt his warmth, his cologne faint but intoxicating. "No. Trust me — I handle meeting?" She blinked. "What?" "I’ll handle. You go enjoy day with him. Take him spots — UB City shopping, Lalbagh gardens, Cubbon Park walk, night MG Road lights, food street." Nivi's face transformed — smile breaking wide, genuine, eyes lighting up like sparks, cheeks flushing soft pink. Really !!!? A giggle escaped — light, surprised, free, the sound bubbling like champagne. Rohan phone out quick — captured it — smiling, blushing face, multiple shots in burst, her lips parted in laugh, hair falling slightly over one eye. Showed screen immediately — close, intimate. "See how you look — gold, glowing." Her breath caught — seeing herself through his lens, radiant, alive. "Thanks… I have good friend." Voice soft, eyes meeting his — warmth, gratitude, something deeper flickering. He: "I wanted to badly hug you... when you say this im a good friend after all happenings... but i fear you would take it wrong." Tone playful, but eyes dark — desire clear, restrained. She didn't wait — stepped forward instantly. Hugged tight — arms around his neck, pulling him down slightly. Body pressed full — breasts against his chest, hips aligning, heat immediate. Warmth shared — skin through thin fabric, heartbeats syncing fast. Her scent — jasmine shampoo, faint sweat from tension — filling his senses. He inhaled deep. Arms tightened around her waist — possessive a second longer, hands splaying low on back, almost brushing curve. She felt it — hardness stirring against her lower belly, unmistakable. But no pull away. "Thanks… thanks." Whispered into his shoulder, breath hot on neck. He: "Thanks to you too" — mischievous grin, eyes twinkling with heat. She slapped shoulder playfully — light smack, knowing exactly the meaning, laugh bubbling again — free, flirtatious. He enjoyed the crush hug — more than wanted. Arms tightening fraction longer, one hand sliding up spine, fingers threading hair briefly. But released — slow, reluctant. "Okay, take care. I'll take Prem out..." Voice breathless, eyes bright. He watched her go — door opening, her hips sway unconscious. The pull — electric. Stronger. The moment is his gift. But the other things — his plan.
29-12-2025, 12:44 AM
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Chapter 41 – The Waiting Game
Nivi stepped out of the conference room — she no longer needed to be there, thanks to Rohan's smooth handling of the client. The meeting had wrapped early, signatures inked faster than expected. She had a million imaginings about her day out with Prem — lazy walks, shared meals, rediscovering the lightness they once had. She wanted to surprise him by leaving early with him at noon. But Rohan's plan had given her even earlier access — a gift she hadn't anticipated. She got a message from Rohan just before stepping out: Check your mail after 2 PM. I have scheduled a surprise mail to arrive at 2 PM. She left with a smile — curious, warm. Scanned the lobby — bright, modern, leather sofas and coffee machines humming softly. No Prem. She thought he might be in the restroom or on a call. Sat on a sofa — checked phone, scrolled idly. Waited 15 minutes. Called his phone — ringing, no answer. Texted: Where are you? Meeting done early. No reply. She waited longer — 30 minutes now. Called again. Prem answered — background noise, muffled voices, excitement in his tone. "Hey... I met a business friend. Will be back by evening. Finish your meeting, I'll pick you." Before she could speak — cut the call. Nivi: "Meeting done. Where are you?" Call cut — beep. She wanted to surprise him — early access morning gift from Rohan. Now — plan flipped. She felt awkward to go back… felt if she went back in — feel like a joker, waiting alone. Decided to wait in lobby until Rohan's meeting ends. Rohan knew — it was deliberate move from him. He made her wait — watching via CCTV in the manager room, screen split, her figure small on sofa. Fidgeting — legs crossed then uncrossed, fingers drumming armrest. Checking phone — screen lighting face repeatedly. Sighing — soft exhales, shoulders slumping. Glancing at elevator, reception, clock. He did nothing for 2 hours. Watched. Let her feel his absence. Value his companionship. She left him for husband — chose Prem's company. Let her sit there. Alone. Feel the slow drag of time — lobby emptying, afternoon light shifting. Her isolation growing. No distraction. Just thoughts. Guilt. Longing. The wait stretching — until she understood, without words, what it felt like to be second. After 2 hours — he came out. Acted surprised seeing her. "Nivi? Still here?" She disappointed — voice flat, eyes tired. "Prem left... business friend. Said evening." Rohan feigned concern — brow furrow. "Oh... okay." Asked her text him — lunch plan. She did. Reply late: Had lunch at friend's place. Pick you 4 PM at spot. She felt little good — at least plan. Rohan took her good lunch spot — quiet cafe, city view. It's almost 2 PM. They ate — conversation light, but her mind elsewhere. She missed to see the mail.. Rohan didn't push her back. They went back to room. She got back her mojo… leave out early disappointments. Changed into better clothes for outing — simple dress, hair loose, makeup touch. Ready. Called Prem — unreachable. Rohan seeing her go out: "I'll accompany until he comes." Sharply 4 PM — stand at spot. 10 mins gone. 20 mins. No calls, messages. 1 hour. 2 hours now — sun dipping, crowd thinning. She felt defeated — by own men. Miserable. Tears came out — hot, silent. What's more important than taking his woman out? He promised... leaving me like this? Rohan played the right game. Consoled — arm around shoulder. "Maybe mobile issue. Let's back room. He pick from there." "It's 6:10 PM... where we go now?" Anger mixed cry tone. He grabbed — hugged tight. "It's okay. Let's go back. I'll word with him." Its an orchestrated setup by Rohan.
(Orchestrated — Aadhil’s men kept Prem occupied.
Jammers no network — important block Aadhil IT company.
Two foreign nations demo — Prem explaining.
Promised — convince, two new projects.
Prem immersed.
No idea time, wife waiting.)
Back hotel. Nivi felt miserable. She felt like she lost her own purpose. Sat same pool side penthouse — place where first kiss took place. He was calm — looking at sky, first stars pricking deepening blue, arm resting lightly on shoulder, thumb tracing slow, soothing circles on upper arm. Consoled side by side, letting her vent — words tumbling raw, anger hurt mixing voice. She: "For past few weeks I was in deep dilemma... burden cheating him." "But once he got my love — car, effort — he knows I won’t go away, so leaving me alone, miserable, unwanted..." "Thought Bangalore moment cherish, enjoy... but other important stuff." "Takes granted..." "I don’t know why I’m here..." Voice cracking, tears spilling — hot, frustrated. He consoled — "It's okay." Voice steady, low. Deep breath — chest rising against side. "Can i tell something?" She looked eyes — red-rimmed tears, his steady, dark, pulling. He took his mobile out — opened email draft, scheduled. Showed screen. "This email sent noon — remember, surprise?" Two movie tickets — evening show. "I wanted give this... thought you two go." Then showed another photo — older screenshot. Two tickets — similar, year back. "For my wife... long time back. I got them to impress her, spend time when she made me feel she was with me. But she had other priorities." "Wanted to show this to you and say — see how neglected I am... but how you’re lucky with Prem." "But fate... Prem ignores again. And we’re at the same place again..." She looked — tears slowing, absorbing. "But that's not what i wanted to say..." "Don't shed tears for people who don't value us, and take us for granted..." She stopped crying — deep thoughts, breath hitching. He: "Same place once we felt ignored by our partners... we sat here for comfort.. kissed... which led for more." "Irony — same place, similar situation." "Even after that day i never wanted to be in physical relation even though i had urge — i never pushed far...i just wanted to be happy with you.. and make you happy by letting you get loved by your partner.. but he behaved same way like my wife did to me years back" "But today I firmly tell you — consider your home as place where you can be taken for granted, cry there, struggle with Prem — I don't care. Because that's the one you chose." But Bangalore —you should shed tears only for overjoy, happiness. It's a place for us.. This is a place we find comfort in each other.. The comfort we both loved, we are not going to leave our respective partners.. But we wanted to be valued.. I value you and you are doing it for me.. That's what matters.. If not for life time at least when shall do it as long as we are together in bangalore "I have made the decision..." Take whatever meaning you want, comfort , love , care.. Illicit affair i dont care .. I just want to tell you I'm there for you.. I will make you happy whenever I'm with you. I will show you a new world, a world of only joy, happiness and pleasure.. Eyes looked each other — locked, intense, city lights reflecting wet lashes. He didn't delay this time. Leaned. Kissed lip to lip — soft first, tasting salt tears. Nivi closed eyes — tears still, slower. Body trembling. Slowly resoluted — no restrict unworthiness. No denying felt. Kissed back — fiercely, happily, madly. Lips parting, tongues meeting urgent. Hands pulling closer — hers hair, his waist, gripping. Breath shared. Heat rising fast. Tears mixed kiss — joy now. Rohan given missed call Aadhil while kissing her…. Its a Signal for something Rohan planned for darker…
29-12-2025, 01:28 AM
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Chapter 42 – The Dark Fantasy
Aadhil got the missed call from Rohan — a single ring, deliberate and unmistakable. He glanced at his phone, then nodded to his men in the VapsoftNue conference room. "Turn off the jammers." The tech flipped the switch — the invisible network block vanished instantly, signals flooding back. The foreign clients — two sharp-suited executives from European firms, ties crisp, accents thick — wrapped up the demo. Impressed with Prem's ideas, his pitch sharp and confident, diagrams on the screen making perfect sense. "We have another meeting now," one said, standing with a briefcase snap. "But good work. We'll call back soon." Prem beamed — handshake firm, adrenaline still pumping through his veins. The manager who had called him that morning — Aadhil's trusted aide, suit tailored, smile professional — offered a drop. "Sir, let me take you back to your hotel." Prem glanced at the clock — past 8 PM, the room now dim with evening shadows. Heart sank like a stone. Nivi... so many plans. Disappointed her again. How could I lose track of time? Called her — urgent, thumb shaky on the screen. In the hotel, Rohan lifted Nivi in his arms — strong, effortless, her legs wrapping instinctively around his waist as they stayed locked in the deep kiss, bodies pressed tight, her softness yielding to his hardness. Dropped her on the bed — bounce soft, sheets rumpling under her weight, her hair fanning out like a halo. Pulled her saree pallu — silk sliding away slowly, whispering against skin, exposing the blouse that hugged her curves, nipples hardening under the fabric from the cool air and his gaze. Nivi's phone rang — Prem. Rohan looked at her — eyes dark, mid-kiss pause, lips swollen and glistening. He asked, voice rough with desire, "Going to leave me again for him?" Nivi shook her head — breath fast, chest heaving. "No.. but let me pick this... we need to give chance for him..." She picked the call — voice steady as she could manage, hand trembling slightly. Nivi: "Hello." Prem: "Sorry... met business person. Took long. I'm sorry." Im on the way now Nivi: "How long it will take for you to reach here?" Prem: You are in same spot ? or back to hotel Nivi: Do you think i will stand for hours there? I came back to hotel She controlled her irritation. Prem sorry i'm really sorry let me explain you in person Prem asked the nearby person — "How long, sir?" Person: "Just 20 KM... but Bangalore traffic — gonna be 2 hours." Rohan typed something quick on his phone — showed her the screen. Ask share Google Maps live location. She did — voice casual, but heart racing. "Send me live location.." Prem: "Sure, darling. dont be mad at me... i have reasons" Cuts call. Nivi murmurs him and his reasons.. Rohan smirked.. looking at her.. she knew the meaning.. her face turned even more naughty expecting the heat... she said 2 hours... Rohan threw his shirt off — chest bare, muscles taut, skin glistening with light sweat from the heat between them. Removed his pants — boxer brief V-cut, hardness outlined prominently, straining the fabric. Came on top of her — weight pinning her down, heat immediate, bodies aligning perfectly. Hungrily unhooked her blouse buttons — one by one, fingers deft but trembling with urgency, fabric parting to reveal lace bra, breasts heaving with each breath. He kissed her — deep, urgent, tongue invading, tasting her fully. In no time her saree thrown from bed — silk pooling on the floor in a heap. Also her blouse — discarded carelessly, landing beside. Now she in bra and petticoat — fair skin flushed pink, nipples visible through lace, body arching slightly under his gaze. Rohans arms nerves running through when he is in mood — veins bulging like thick cords under his taut skin, forearms flexing as he hovered over her, every muscle defined in the low light, power and control radiating from his body. She missed noticing last time — too lost in darkness and haze, but now, eyes wide, she drank him in: the way his biceps tensed, shoulders broad and shadowed, chest rising with heavy breaths, a light sheen of sweat making his skin gleam. Their lips sealed again in hungry and passion — mouths crashing, tongues battling wet and desperate, moans vibrating between them, her hands clutching his back, nails digging into muscle. He quickly decided to take her in full control — flipped her gently but firmly onto her back, pinning wrists above head with one hand, the other roaming. Pushed on her weak spot — the neck — lips latching, tongue licking slow, deliberate trails along the sensitive curve. Causing tinglings — electric shivers racing down her spine, straight to her core. She moaned in pleasure — low, throaty, "Ahhh..." head falling back, exposing more. He ripped her bra apart, her breast bouncing.. she smiled at his action.. Rohan declared your body is mine.. mmm the only word Nivi mouth uttered Rohan started playing with her breast properly, pressing it circling her nipple with his tounge, biting the nipple.. he tries to fit entire breast left side into his mouth.. Nivi hands carres his hair in the attempt.. he started sucking each breast and playing it then he moved up for a lip to lip kisss. his bare chest crushes her breast it was hot feeling for him The mobile showing GMap — notification ping, screen lighting: He is 12km away. He took her petticoat away — fingers hooking waist string, pulling down slow, fabric sliding over hips, thighs, revealing lace panty already soaked. Now she was just in panty — body flushed, breasts heaving, nipples hard. While he was in inner — boxer brief tented obscenely. He broke the kiss — breath hot, eyes locked. He moved near her making his hip face her face... "Asked Nivi undress me." She saw his eyes — dark, commanding, desire burning. Pulled his boxer brief — hands trembling excitement. The thick hard long penis struck on her face — springing free, heavy slap against cheek, hot skin, vein-ridged length throbbing, tip glistening pre-cum. She gasped — surprise, arousal. He came down hugged her again — pulling close, making his penis touch her spot above panties — grinding slow, fabric barrier teasing clit. He teases her entry — rubbing head along wet lace, pressing but not entering, until it soaked through, her arousal dripping. And he removed it in a go — fingers hooking sides, yanking down, panty tossed aside. Now they are completely naked — skin on skin, heat merging. when his thick dick touches her entry spot... Nivi sensed a heat she just moaned could not contain.. her body shivered with heat leaks of contact They were kissing again — frantic, tongues swirling, moans louder. And he now inserted his penis — pushed slowly inside — thick head parting folds, stretching her inch by inch. She moaned — loud, drawn out "Ohhh god..." as he filled her completely, walls clenching around length. He started making movements — slow at first, deep thrusts, wet sounds filling room. While the map says 6 kms away.. she saw it — glance at phone, heart racing irony. After almost an hour teases, kisses, making her heat now playing on her spot — fingers on clit, circling, pinching, her body writhing, sweat-slick, breasts bouncing with rhythm. Slaps — his hand coming down on ass cheek sharp, stinging pleasure, red mark blooming, her cry sharp "Ah!" Rohan said let me show who properly take care of your needs Nivi closed her eyes and said show me.. Visual — bodies glistening sweat, her fair skin flushed deep rose, his darker tone contrasting, muscles flexing with every thrust. He suddenly stopped — pulled away, leaving her empty, aching. She panicked — "What why you stopped. What happen." Body trembling edge. Rohan came near her — face close, eyes intense. "Nivi.. I don't want you to be in dilemma again if I enter now.. I want you to fully embrace our sexual relationship.. are you okay with it..." Nivi looking at him — breath ragged, body screaming need, internal conflict raging "Tell me you want me in you...want to feel me in you" Nivi — lost, surrendered. "I want you in me..please" she almost begged - The complete surrender that cannot be undone... He pushed one big push — full length slamming deep, bottoming out. Making her make a loud noise — scream-moan "Ahhh fuck!" He didn't look back — pounded intense, hips snapping, wet slaps echoing, bed creaking. As every km reduced — thrusts harder, faster, hand slapping ass again, red prints. She begged in heat — "More... deeper... please..." He flipped her — Thrusts brutal pleasure. Then — breath ragged. Nivi — lost, "Yes... take me... all..." 20 minutes into as he keep thrusting her slaps sounds heavy .... "Nivi... I have big fantasy.... my dark one.. will you make me accomplish, baby?" "Sure, baby... what it is..." Her voice breathless, hands clutching his back, nails digging lightly. "I want to fuck you when Prem around... make him invisible cuckold for neglecting you.." Nivi lost in heat — body arching up, mind hazy from pleasure, internal conflict flashing, words spilling without thought. "Ahhhh mmmmm yessss lets do it.. yeah baby..." He growled in ear, "Fill you everywhere... put my baby in you... mark you mine..." She — "Yes... fill me... baby..." Rohan hearing all these he increased his force.. the app shows 1M away, Prem nearing them gives his ultimate high.. Thud thud thud thud Thud thud thud thud Thud thud thud thud Nivi feared he is turning like a beast but she loved,, it was something very new for her.. he is taking her to different pleasure... she realisd she is getting an orgasm...but Rohan seemed still heavy unshaken.. she closed her eyes in ecstasy Climax built — bodies slapping, moans loud, sweat dripping. Orgasm crashed — her screaming, clenching, him flooding deep. Collapsed. Breathless. Nivi looked at him, prem might arrive anytime now Rohan said yes.. Its time for you to go to his room. Dont forget the words you agreed with me and this is just the start.. going forward you will see a new world of happiness, love, joy and pleasure.. remember this too baby Nivi breathing asked what ?. she collects every words... as she was about to process.. Prem reached the hotel... The app showed 0KM...
29-12-2025, 08:22 AM
Sorry for too many mistakes grammatically, in flow.. fixed it now. Posted late night didnt check twice
29-12-2025, 10:37 AM
You are writing great boss!!! Keep up the good work!!! Keep rocking!!!
29-12-2025, 10:50 AM
Great writing! This level of manipulation happens only for weak mind women who cannot think for themselves...Having realized the change of ways in her husband, she couldn't show any kind of restraint. This shows her weak personality and lack of clarity in thoughts. Husband and wife both trust Rohan for different reasons and he is having a field day with them professionally and personally that too with out much motive other than to steal Nivi for himself, he doesn't love her clearly he is willing to share her to Aadhil so why so much efforts in interfering into their lives?
No clarity in Rohan's motives so far. Hope this routine breaks soon and one of these two understand the game of manipulation here and play against Rohan and take control. As far as we can see, Nivi is not capable anymore that she spread her legs already and soon looks like will open her heart as well so we have to see if Prem can start playing the game and beat Rohan at his game or he becomes a loser and gives up his wife or become a cuckold and settle as a wimp. Expecting one of these to be the outcomes...hopefully the first one. ~RCF
29-12-2025, 11:09 AM
(29-12-2025, 10:50 AM)RCF Wrote: Great writing! This level of manipulation happens only for weak mind women who cannot think for themselves...Having realized the change of ways in her husband, she couldn't show any kind of restraint. This shows her weak personality and lack of clarity in thoughts. Husband and wife both trust Rohan for different reasons and he is having a field day with them professionally and personally that too with out much motive other than to steal Nivi for himself, he doesn't love her clearly he is willing to share her to Aadhil so why so much efforts in interfering into their lives? Its not about she is weak/strong, its about how Rohan is smarter.. than anyone.. its just his calculations worked enough.. he sensed Nivi can be manipulated.. he accessed predicted everything.. and his biggest blessing is her husbands doubt and her dilemma he made use of both.. Yes Prem will flight back no man is a wimp they at least try.. Prem who all these days have been seen as a protector or overprotective nature will surrender that soon.. but the couple is not perfect right.. they still need to be spoken , change something for better.. even this second scenario if prem did informed her about bangalore project she would have waited.. but he didnt give a chance.. and that chance is key for Rohan because the chance was a orchestrated setup by Rohan and prem buyed it:) But thanks for feedback
29-12-2025, 11:26 AM
yes, I expected this. Once a partner cheats, there's almost no chance that they will try to make it work and it will work. They will find rationale and excuses to cheat again. That's what Nivi did. It was just a few hours and anything could have happened but that was the excuse she was looking for. Though Prem's insecurity is at fault too.
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. I hope he willingly become cuck and not Co hearse into it . His whole life His instinct kept him and His family safe but also created lots of problem , and Now When he ignored his instinct, They got him . Also Guy traded his wife for KIA SELTOS ( Rohan drives Mercedes but told her mistress to get KIA for her HUSBAND , was it intentional
) , She did him dirty , TWICE , By fucking His business partner and then buying him a car which is KIA . At least get him some LUXURY SEDAN or something
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