Adultery I Orchestrated my Wife's Cheating, but Why? [Completed - 27 Chapters]

[heygiwriter]

I luv this heygi....your take on women and their sexuality vibes....now I sincerely wish you take up this subject for your next project....with your easy narration and excellent grip over language, sure you'll create a master piece and develop a large base of followers...not in recent past did I see so many responses  / comments to a story in just less than a day....all the best ....however remember we all visit this forum for some good stuff...

Thank you. I would love to. Writing stories is my passion, no matter what subject they deal with. Let’s see—right now I have some personal commitments, and this is just a newly found hobby. If time permits, I’ll share stories on a regular basis. Let’s see.

[heygiwriter]

Thanks every one for the feedback

[PELURI]

Thanks every one for the feedback

dear heygi bhai ! eagerly waiting for your next story....

[saka1981]

It's one of the best romantic story in Xossipy. Character writing and storytelling are too good. Waiting for more story from the writer. Thank you for a wonderful story.

[heygiwriter]

It's one of the best romantic story in Xossipy.  Character writing and storytelling are too good. Waiting for more story from the writer. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Thanks a lot for the feedback.

[DeanWinchester00007]

What happens when Pooja, got to know Vikram hide a crucial thing, Arjun saw them twice in rooftop, revealing that to Pooja could have saved Arjun, like he doesn't had a need to break his marital life, he doesn't need to undergo all these sufferings... Vikram is a silent orchestrator that will be the impact if t his goes out, but Vikram hide it for his own selfish  game, a fun, a brutal manipulation. Once the truth is out She felt betrayed decided to torment Vikram, a lovers punishment. Will she give the same medicine once Vikram gave to Arjun.

I have an idea// can this work...? feedback please..  

I mean the idea is great and has a great potential for a sequel but I think them having kids changes the whole equation . I mean there is no going back kind of thing . They are happy and He is also happy , so it is a perfect end . 

Not a criticism .

Also , The story could have been long , I mean few extra chapters instead of sequel . The Set up was perfect but execution felt a bit off . I mean the reaction of POOJA was like Meh , I  mean I was expecting a little more reaction from her but it is okay , Since She is in love with VIKRAM more than her husband , Yeah I know her husband pushed her but still Her chemistry with VIKRAM was better , She deliberately get closed to him , VIKRAM no matter what he did at the end He truly loves her . I would say Cancer or not She would have eventually seduced by VIKRAM . 
His cancer should not have revealed to VIKRAM , added to VIKRAM manipulation , Her realizing what a grave mistake she made , and then final act of her confronting both of them ..........  But leave it . I am kind of fan of good ending , So i was expecting of them making their to each other . But Vikram turning out to be a good guy , marriage and then kid , changes the whole thing . 

and I like how you treat the eroticism in the story . I mean little sexual stuff made the story more engaging like I was more interesting in the drama ..... hahahaha 

But It is good story , The length was perfect . The way you sums up the plot in 1 page deserves a praise   


But any ways why not post a draft or give a try because the idea has the potential , I would love to read more . 

Please write the Sequel if possible , Turn it into series , Why ? because The characters were great . 


Kudos to you , I love the story . Looking forward to read more of your work . 

[heygiwriter]

I mean the idea is great and has a great potential for a sequel but I think them having kids changes the whole equation . I mean there is no going back kind of thing . They are happy and He is also happy , so it is a perfect end . 

Not a criticism .

Also , The story could have been long , I mean few extra chapters instead of sequel . The Set up was perfect but execution felt a bit off . I mean the reaction of POOJA was like Meh , I  mean I was expecting a little more reaction from her but it is okay , Since She is in love with VIKRAM more than her husband , Yeah I know her husband pushed her but still Her chemistry with VIKRAM was better , She deliberately get closed to him , VIKRAM no matter what he did at the end He truly loves her . I would say Cancer or not She would have eventually seduced by VIKRAM . 
His cancer should not have revealed to VIKRAM , added to VIKRAM manipulation , Her realizing what a grave mistake she made , and then final act of her confronting both of them ..........  But leave it . I am kind of fan of good ending , So i was expecting of them making their to each other . But Vikram turning out to be a good guy , marriage and then kid , changes the whole thing . 

and I like how you treat the eroticism in the story . I mean little sexual stuff made the story more engaging like I was more interesting in the drama ..... hahahaha 

But It is good story , The length was perfect . The way you sums up the plot in 1 page deserves a praise   


But any ways why not post a draft or give a try because the idea has the potential , I would love to read more . 

Please write the Sequel if possible , Turn it into series , Why ? because The characters were great . 


Kudos to you , I love the story . Looking forward to read more of your work . 

Thanks a lot...  for the feedback yes.. i do have a draft or idea like... Vikram and Pooja settled now in UK.. Vikram was still bugged by memories of Arjun and his sacrifices.. he decided to turn this into a book/story.. he works for a company which is into publications as well.. He approaches his immediate boss James who happens to like the story.. he himself involved in turning this into book.. He was more interested in Pooja than the story itself.. The one thing James had seen as bait is.. Vikram's not revealing he had watched Arjun in the rooftop hideout.. that's a crucial thing if he had revaled it things would not have came this far.. James starts his own manipulations gets pooja involved in it.. Pooja has to take revenge for what vikram did back.. root giving back same medicine Vikram knowing gave to Arjun.. .. this is just vague in my mind lets see... 

currently im working on a new story.. already posted here..  

THE HUSBAND's Doubt -- Story Link --> The Husband's Doubt

once the story is wrapped i may revisit.. now currently im into this story