17-12-2025, 07:33 PM
Big Fan of your work @kk007007
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Adultery The Cheating Wife ?
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17-12-2025, 07:33 PM
Big Fan of your work @kk007007
18-12-2025, 10:08 PM
Waiting eagerly for the next update KK!
Yesterday, 05:21 PM
Great storywriting kk.. finally you are back with a stunning twist. But yeah I also don't believe Sundari's story and going to her was a big mistake he made, anyways appreciate your dedication into this marvelous story thankyou.
10 hours ago
After reading the last chapter, I came to the conclusion that the discussions between Yin and Yang unfortunately do not help the protagonist Srinu. On the contrary, they confuse him and make him indecisive.
He has really good and goal-oriented essays that he writes with a lot of passion. Unfortunately, he sometimes loses sight of his goal in the maze of pointless and lengthy discussions between Yin and Yang. For example: If he hadn't been influenced by these pointless discussions, he would certainly have asked Ganga how it was that she was able to make a phone call again shortly after getting off the bus (only 10 minutes after her statement!). He would have asked where and when she charged her phone in such a short time, even though she was still on her way to the wedding hall. I would be very happy if Yin and Yang were less present in the story and Srinu could instead make his own decisions and carry out his own research to achieve his goal. The story is so exciting, so good and filled with so many intrigues and mysteries that (as a reader) you don't want to put it down... ----------- Demeter
10 hours ago
(10 hours ago)Demeter Wrote: After reading the last chapter, I came to the conclusion that the discussions between Yin and Yang unfortunately do not help the protagonist Srinu. On the contrary, they confuse him and make him indecisive. I believe the yin and yang are Srinu's internal conflict.. same as any man would face in such a situation where he knows a few things and suspects way more.. but has no proof. The yin yang discussions are integral to this story!
7 hours ago
Wonderful. Thanks for restarting, kk007007
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