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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
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Sriya2, All the best for 100th update!
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Waiting for the next updates
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Really extraordinary and extremely seductive writing
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Last 5-6 updates were continues steamy sex 
You listened to viewers demand and yeah my dick is still paining reading all these couldn't keep my hands off ufffff

Drama is on par too mujhe Sabse bura Atul ke liye lagta 
Bichara real victim tha yeah he had his shortcomings and he was working on them too but kya kare koi usse 2 kaudi ka smjhta koi not enough ya useless atleast now he got some peace with other girl

Kriti ke andar jo gussa tha wo saaf saaf jhalak raha tha in posts mai I guess now she knows what betrayals feels like she knew when Supriya was betraying Atul and she was fine but jab uspe khud pe beeti tab usse smjh aaya ki Supriya kitna galat kar rahi

Rahul ka to khair kya hi kahe I feel like he is MVP got to enjoy with both the girls and drama mai kuch loss nahi hua (other than taking iqbals dick  Sick )


In this update that white guy was very racist and you came up with some very correct dialogues for him lol Job takers smelly Indians brown body

Also is long text replies bothering or fine I am new so I don't know I can't tell I like to express what I feel in details 

Thanks for the update will be waiting for next  Heart
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(10-12-2025, 02:33 AM)Morbius Wrote: Last 5-6 updates were continues steamy sex 
You listened to viewers demand and yeah my dick is still paining reading all these couldn't keep my hands off ufffff

Drama is on par too mujhe Sabse bura Atul ke liye lagta 
Bichara real victim tha yeah he had his shortcomings and he was working on them too but kya kare koi usse 2 kaudi ka smjhta koi not enough ya useless atleast now he got some peace with other girl

Kriti ke andar jo gussa tha wo saaf saaf jhalak raha tha in posts mai I guess now she knows what betrayals feels like she knew when Supriya was betraying Atul and she was fine but jab uspe khud pe beeti tab usse smjh aaya ki Supriya kitna galat kar rahi

Rahul ka to khair kya hi kahe I feel like he is MVP got to enjoy with both the girls and drama mai kuch loss nahi hua (other than taking iqbals dick  Sick )


In this update that white guy was very racist and you came up with some very correct dialogues for him lol Job takers smelly Indians brown body

Also is long text replies bothering or fine I am new so I don't know I can't tell I like to express what I feel in details 

Thanks for the update will be waiting for next  Heart

Thanks, I am good with any replies.. long or short.. not bothering me at all… I read all comments very keenly…

Don’t feel bad about Atul, people will always have an opinion about you… good or bad… anyway he got something good in his life… I dont intend to add too much more to his story… maybe he will show in a scene or two…

I got the chance and used it to write pretty much non-stop over the last 2-3 days. I felt I could keep going on and on. I am very happy that it came out really well and tied up a lot of the story from the past. In my humble view, this was the best update of the story so far.

The update was very long, I wanted to split it into two to put more gifs / images and some more college stuff, but then it wouldnt have added to Kriti’s story and would have taken away Update 100 from Supriya, which I didnt want to do.
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Yeah, I am really glad with how Atul's story has neatly been taken to it's conclusion with Disha.But just one observation there which I feel you can cover in the future scene or two that you plan for Atul.
You managed to show how a deeply emotional, shy n timid person like Atul needed a lady like Disha to really come out with his basest feelings n open his heart out.But I feel it was not quite clear why Disha needed a guy like Atul,what was her predicament or mental scars that found solace when she met a guy of Atul's sweet,shy,under confident and unexpressive nature.
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Thanks for taking the time out and giving us all such quick, long and erotic updates  thanks

Your story writing is just out of this world...I am learning a lot from you  thanks

Keep it up and congrats in Advance for hitting a century with one of the best stories on this site  congrats
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Also, I am glad you chose not to add any college stuff of Kriti's as that may have unnecessarily added characters or situations to the story that were not needed. Your 2-3 days of non-stop writing has really come out very well, especially this latest update on the backstory/flashback as I feel this is your forte.
But the previous update on the mindless gangbang of Kriti, while very relevant to the story, as also Steamy and hott, did not really bring out much of your skills in it. Don't take it in a wrong way, but your two consecutive nights of Supriya-Iqbal passion were much more erotic and I had to read them so slowly to savor every moment of the passion unfolding. So that really sets the ceiling so high in terms of what you are capable of and this gangbang really did not stand any comparison to that one. It's your ability to write the heck out of such emotional and dramatic situations that really sets you apart.
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Nice...
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Gorgeous update and awesome story
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Sriya2 madamji, Mere ko nahi lagta kabhi koyi Supriya ki chudai se bore hoga balki Supriya ki to jitni chudai hogi story more better, interesting and hottest hoti jayegi and Aarti bhabhi ki chudai special effect dalti hai story me. Supriya and Aarti ki more chudai se yeh story behtar se behtreen ho jayegi
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Sriya2 madamji, Iqbal ke apne asli rang me aane ke baad story refresh ho jayegi, Iqbal ko dhire-dhire pura khool do jisse naya zosh aaye story padne me, ab sex me pura jangali jaanwar bana do Iqbal ko
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Yeah that's what I said ki chalo Atul and Disha ka relationship acha hua uski zindagi mein aur jab mai bol raha ki I feel bad for him I meant your writing style is close to real life so you actually feel for characters 

And I agree with qazmlp that what made Disha fell for Atul wo clear nahi hua first I thought it was his boss Vikram's order to distract atul so vikram can run away with Supriya but ab lagta hai she really likes him or pity him so if you write on these to pls add a little of this thing to clear things up
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I understand I enjoy romantic sex too but I think writer was trying to tell state of mind of kriti.
Kriti ko lagta tha ki Supriya ek slut hai jisne uski zindagi barbad kardi and she is after her brother so she hated her and usse sayad smjh nahi aa raha tha ki Supriya ne aisa kyu kiya that's why from first encounter of the racist guy to black guys gangbang she couldn't judge kept falling to feel how she thought Supriya was feeling but usko regret bhi hota hai ki wo kaha aagyi hai uski jagah abhi Supriya ko hona chahiye tha in kale mustando ke beech
Sex part was fine for me and I think pretty descriptive how a gang bang is usually is
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Iqbal is very dominant. I love it. I'm sure he'll be even more excited and desperate for Supriya now. I want to see him have a lot of sex with Supriya. And how much Supriya will enjoy her new sex partner.
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#Shriya, thank you so much for all your hard work and congratulations on your 100th update. You let us share this joy.
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Waiting for Supriya's next special sex encounter updates
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I am very excited to read about Supriya's sexual experience.
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Behad dhamakedar shaandar sexy updates Supriya jitna chudegi story utni hi behtareen hoti jayegi because Supriya is the lead actress of the story
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