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Eagerly Waiting for the next updates
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Sriya2, All the best for 100th update!
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Waiting for the next updates
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Really extraordinary and extremely seductive writing
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Yeah, I am really glad with how Atul's story has neatly been taken to it's conclusion with Disha.But just one observation there which I feel you can cover in the future scene or two that you plan for Atul.
You managed to show how a deeply emotional, shy n timid person like Atul needed a lady like Disha to really come out with his basest feelings n open his heart out.But I feel it was not quite clear why Disha needed a guy like Atul,what was her predicament or mental scars that found solace when she met a guy of Atul's sweet,shy,under confident and unexpressive nature.
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Also, I am glad you chose not to add any college stuff of Kriti's as that may have unnecessarily added characters or situations to the story that were not needed. Your 2-3 days of non-stop writing has really come out very well, especially this latest update on the backstory/flashback as I feel this is your forte.
But the previous update on the mindless gangbang of Kriti, while very relevant to the story, as also Steamy and hott, did not really bring out much of your skills in it. Don't take it in a wrong way, but your two consecutive nights of Supriya-Iqbal passion were much more erotic and I had to read them so slowly to savor every moment of the passion unfolding. So that really sets the ceiling so high in terms of what you are capable of and this gangbang really did not stand any comparison to that one. It's your ability to write the heck out of such emotional and dramatic situations that really sets you apart.
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Gorgeous update and awesome story
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Sriya2 madamji, Mere ko nahi lagta kabhi koyi Supriya ki chudai se bore hoga balki Supriya ki to jitni chudai hogi story more better, interesting and hottest hoti jayegi and Aarti bhabhi ki chudai special effect dalti hai story me. Supriya and Aarti ki more chudai se yeh story behtar se behtreen ho jayegi
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Sriya2 madamji, Iqbal ke apne asli rang me aane ke baad story refresh ho jayegi, Iqbal ko dhire-dhire pura khool do jisse naya zosh aaye story padne me, ab sex me pura jangali jaanwar bana do Iqbal ko
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Yeah that's what I said ki chalo Atul and Disha ka relationship acha hua uski zindagi mein aur jab mai bol raha ki I feel bad for him I meant your writing style is close to real life so you actually feel for characters
And I agree with qazmlp that what made Disha fell for Atul wo clear nahi hua first I thought it was his boss Vikram's order to distract atul so vikram can run away with Supriya but ab lagta hai she really likes him or pity him so if you write on these to pls add a little of this thing to clear things up
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I understand I enjoy romantic sex too but I think writer was trying to tell state of mind of kriti.
Kriti ko lagta tha ki Supriya ek slut hai jisne uski zindagi barbad kardi and she is after her brother so she hated her and usse sayad smjh nahi aa raha tha ki Supriya ne aisa kyu kiya that's why from first encounter of the racist guy to black guys gangbang she couldn't judge kept falling to feel how she thought Supriya was feeling but usko regret bhi hota hai ki wo kaha aagyi hai uski jagah abhi Supriya ko hona chahiye tha in kale mustando ke beech
Sex part was fine for me and I think pretty descriptive how a gang bang is usually is
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Iqbal is very dominant. I love it. I'm sure he'll be even more excited and desperate for Supriya now. I want to see him have a lot of sex with Supriya. And how much Supriya will enjoy her new sex partner.
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#Shriya, thank you so much for all your hard work and congratulations on your 100th update. You let us share this joy.
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Waiting for Supriya's next special sex encounter updates
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I am very excited to read about Supriya's sexual experience.
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Behad dhamakedar shaandar sexy updates Supriya jitna chudegi story utni hi behtareen hoti jayegi because Supriya is the lead actress of the story