Adultery Priya Didi
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Ravi was lost in her, lost in the sensation of her taste, her warmth, her response. Her tongue played with his now, moving with a fluidity that matched the rhythm of their kiss, each moment pushing them deeper into something that neither of them was ready to pull back from.
 
In the darkness of the theater, with the world outside forgotten, there was only the connection between them. The kiss was all-consuming, a tender yet frantic exploration of desires that neither had dared to acknowledge before. And as the seconds stretched into eternity, neither of them could imagine a world outside of this moment, of this kiss, of the way their bodies and hearts seemed to collide in this shared space of quiet urgency.
 
Priya’s hand slid to the back of his neck, her fingers threading through his hair, pulling him deeper into the kiss. She was no longer holding back, no longer pretending to resist. In this dark theater, with the flickering light of the screen illuminating their faces, they shared a kiss that was full of everything they had been avoiding, desire, passion, and the heady feeling of crossing a line they could never uncross.
 
Ravi didn’t break the kiss. His lips stayed pressed to hers, soft but insistent, as his hands began to explore more freely, tracing the curves of her body beneath the delicate folds of her saree. One hand slid up along her side, feeling the smooth line of her waist, the subtle dip beneath her ribs, pulling her ever closer against him. Each subtle shift of her body into his touch only deepened the kiss, their tongues tangling as if echoing the silent surrender of their bodies.
 
His other hand moved to her back, fingers threading along the fabric of her blouse, feeling the warmth of her skin beneath the thin cloth. She shivered at his touch, her lips parting in a soft gasp against his mouth.
 
Ravi responded without hesitation, tilting his head to deepen the kiss, tasting the sweet, intoxicating warmth of her mouth as his fingers pressed lightly against the curve of her ribs and up towards her shoulders. Every inch he touched made her pulse race, yet her lips stayed pressed to his, eager, inviting, and tremulously yielding.
 
Slowly, almost reverently, his hands wandered over the lines of her back and shoulders, tracing small, deliberate patterns that made her gasp into his mouth. Each tiny movement of her body, arching slightly, pressing against him, tilting her head, amplified the intensity of the kiss.
 
Ravi’s fingers were bold yet careful, exploring her curves while his lips and tongue continued to claim hers with a mixture of tenderness and raw need.
 
Her breath hitched, her lips parting wider as he traced the soft line of her waist, the subtle hollow beneath her ribs, and the gentle curve of her sides.
 


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Wow
You have beautiful writing skills.. it's soreal. I can feel everything before my eyes
What a wonderful story...
Hoping to read more this kind of narration

Thank you dear
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(02-12-2025, 09:02 PM)tting4tting4 Wrote: Shailu...
There are simply no words to fully capture how much I appreciate your incredible talent and writing style. You are a breath of fresh air in the world of erotic storytelling, and your work has breathed new life into these forums. If there were an equivalent of an Oscar for erotic literature, you would undoubtedly be sweeping every category... Best New Writer, Best Story, Best Direction... you name it, you'd have it all.

While there are many talented and well known writers here, the level of respect and admiration they have for you is undeniable, and I wholeheartedly agree with them. I think what sets you apart is not only your skill, but the unique flair you bring to every scene and interaction. When I first started reading the latest storyline between Priya and Ravi, I’ll admit I was a bit apprehensive. The idea of them having a scene with Priya’s husband in the room felt like it could be a stretch. But you, as the brilliant writer that you are, managed to pull it off with such finesse that it not only felt natural but incredibly sensual. That’s a rare skill... taking something potentially uncomfortable and turning it into something beautiful and arousing.

Your ability to weave together the smallest details... the play of light and shadow, the rich colors, the subtle emotional nuances, the heat in every touch is absolutely unparalleled. Every word you choose, every sentence you craft, immerses me as a reader in a world of vivid sensations. It’s not just eroticism, it’s art!!

As a reader and a fan, I find myself eagerly awaiting each new update, checking in multiple times a day, hoping that the next chapter of this wonderful journey is ready to devour. Your stories captivate, excite, and leave us hungry for more. Thank you, truly, for sharing your remarkable talent with us. Your daily updates are the highlight of my day, and I can’t wait to see where you take us next in this incredible narrative.



Hi tting4tting4

I just noticed that you not only left such wonderful compliments for my story but also took the time to give rating to it. That truly means a lot to me. Your thoughtful feedback really shows how much you enjoyed the story, and it gives me a great deal of motivation to keep writing.

Thank you so much for both your kind words and generous ratings. Your continued support is something I deeply appreciate and it truly inspires me.

With heartfelt gratitude and warm regards

-- Shailu
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(Yesterday, 11:49 AM)Chandulovesu Wrote: Wow
You have beautiful writing skills.. it's soreal. I can feel everything before my eyes
What a wonderful story...
Hoping to read more this kind of narration

Thank you dear


Hi Chandulovesu

Thank you so much for your incredible feedback and compliments.  I'm truly humbled by your kind words. It means the world to me that the story resonated with you so deeply, and that you could feel everything unfold before your eyes.

Your encouragement motivates me more than you can imagine, and I’m excited to know you're looking forward to more of this kind of narration. I’ll definitely keep working hard to bring you stories that continue to inspire that same connection.

Thank you once again for your thoughtful praise. It really warms my heart. 

With gratitude and warm regards

-- Shailu
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new reader here, beautiful writing skills u have brother.
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(Yesterday, 12:13 PM)snehasis Wrote: new reader here, beautiful writing skills u have brother.


Hi Snehasis

Welcome to my stories. I’m so glad you stopped by. Thank you for your compliments. It really means a lot. 

Just to clarify, I’m actually a female author, not male. But I’m thrilled that you enjoyed the writing. 

I hope you’ll continue following the story, I’d love to hear your thoughts as it unfolds.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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I truly like the words you used in today episode. Making more grace to the scene. I am eagerly waiting for the next one ..

All these are happening in the movie theatre .. his hands on the belly button and he kissing her.. loving priya didi... Beautiful naration..
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(Yesterday, 01:47 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: Hi Snehasis

Welcome to my stories. I’m so glad you stopped by. Thank you for your compliments. It really means a lot. 

Just to clarify, I’m actually a female author, not male. But I’m thrilled that you enjoyed the writing. 

I hope you’ll continue following the story, I’d love to hear your thoughts as it unfolds.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

definitely will continue .
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(12-08-2025, 07:11 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: He leaned in slightly, the scent of her skin filling his senses.

Every inch of her exposed skin felt like an invitation,

“Bhayyaa…” Her voice was a whisper, breathy and teasing. “I can feel you watching me.”

His heart raced, and he swallowed thickly, a smile tugging at the corner of his lips. “Because I am.”

“Dangerous,” she whispered, her voice a mix of challenge and invitation.

“I know.”

He paused, his fingers brushing the skin beneath her ear,

Lingering just for a heartbeat longer than necessary.

The heat from her body radiated through him,

His senses overwhelmed by the softness of her skin, the way she felt beneath his touch.


Wow Shailu. Your erotic narration is next level. 
Love the way you write every single scene.

Keep rocking.
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Wow...
Just wow..


Shailu garu...Meeru super anthe ..
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(Yesterday, 02:06 PM)Chandulovesu Wrote: I truly like the words you used in today episode. Making more grace to the scene. I am eagerly waiting for the next one ..

All these are happening in the movie theatre .. his hands on the belly button and he kissing her.. loving priya didi... Beautiful naration..


Hi Chandulovesu

Thank you so much for your compliments. I’m really glad the narration and the small, intimate details resonated with you. I love that you could feel the grace and tension in the scene, it’s exactly the atmosphere I was hoping to convey.

Your excitement motivates me to make the next episode even more immersive and detailed, so stay tuned! I promise to continue exploring Ravi and Priya Didi’s moments with the same tenderness and intensity
you enjoyed. 

Appreciate your support

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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(Yesterday, 03:58 PM)snehasis Wrote: definitely will continue .


Hi Snehasis

That is very nice of you.  Thank you for reading the story. 

Please let me know how you feel about the story as you continue to read. Your feedback really helps me get motivated and continue the story.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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(Yesterday, 04:52 PM)rajesh93 Wrote: Wow Shailu. Your erotic narration is next level. 
Love the way you write every single scene.

Keep rocking.


Hi Rajesh

Thank you so much! I’m really glad the scenes and the details connected with you. Your encouragement means a lot, and it motivates me to keep exploring the story with the same intensity and care. I’ll definitely keep rocking and bringing these moments to life!

I have seen you have been giving me ratings as well.  That really means a lot to me. 

Your support and your ratings really help me continue this journey.

I really appreciate your continued support.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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(Yesterday, 05:54 PM)Strangerstf Wrote: Wow...
Just wow..


Shailu garu...Meeru super anthe ..


Hi Strangerstf

Thank you so much for your kind words and compliments. I’m thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. Your feedback truly made my day.

I’ll continue to pour my heart into these scenes and bring even more of the magic to life. Stay tuned for more...

I really appreciate your continued support.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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Ravi let his hand wander over her body with a slow, teasing rhythm, each movement synchronized with the pulse of the kiss. Priya trembled in response, pressing her chest into his, her lips melting against his as if they were the only thing in the world.
 
Every flick of his tongue, every soft graze of his lips, sent shivers down her spine, while the tips of his fingers explored the contours of her body with a careful, intoxicating urgency.
 
Even as he roamed over her, Ravi never left her lips. Their mouths moved together in a fluid, endless rhythm, soft, wet, urgent, tender. Every exploration of her body was mirrored in the kiss, each gasp, each shiver, each tiny moan muffled against his mouth.
 
The theater, the movie, the world outside their row, all of it disappeared. There was only them. Only the heat, the trembling, the exquisite tension of being so impossibly close, and yet suspended in the forbidden thrill of this stolen intimacy.
 
And for those few moments, nothing else existed. The world outside, the people in the theater, the movie on the screen, none of it mattered.
 
All that mattered was the electric pull between them, the overwhelming connection, the need they had for each other, and the fact that, for the first time, they were both too lost in the kiss to care about anything else.
 
The movie continued, but the world around them seemed to fade away. The darkness enveloped them, the screen flickering with light, but their reality was in the charged space between their bodies.
 
Time stretched, and nothing mattered except the sensation of their shared breath, their intertwined desire.
 
When Priya found Amit entering from the corner of her eye, the spell of the moment broke.
 
Ravi’s hand quickly withdrew, but it wasn’t enough to erase what had passed between them. He sat back, trying to act natural, pretending that everything was fine, though his body was still trembling with the intensity of what had just happened.
 
Priya adjusted, her fingers shaking slightly as she took a handful of popcorn, but she was aware. Too aware. Her heart raced, and the quiet tension between them hung in the air, unresolved.
 
The normality of the world outside their row felt distant, almost foreign. The movie resumed, but Ravi could feel it.
 
The electricity between them wasn’t gone. It was still there, hanging in the space, just beneath the surface. Neither spoke, neither moved.
 
They both sat quietly, but inside, they were lost in the stillness of that moment, the intimacy of what had been shared, and what was still left unsaid.



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Wow so beautiful carved.. I like that way express there thoughts after the break. It's so lovely written.

Shailu you truly a killer wth your words
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(Yesterday, 07:59 PM)Chandulovesu Wrote: Wow so beautiful carved.. I like that way express there thoughts after the break. It's so lovely written.

Shailu you truly a killer wth your words


Hi Chandulovesu

Thank you so much for the amazing feedback and lovely compliments.


I’m so glad you enjoyed the way the thoughts were expressed after the break, those little moments of introspection are always my favorite to write. Your words mean a lot to me, and I’m thrilled to know that my writing resonates with you.

You’ve made my day with your kindness, and I’ll keep doing my best to craft stories that make you feel something special. 

Thanks again for your support and for sharing your thoughts, it’s truly appreciated.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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(12-08-2025, 07:28 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: A small gasp escaped her lips,

“Careful, Bhayyashe said, her tone low, laden with an edge of warning,
 “Keep saying things like that…”

He tilted his head, his gaze unwavering, mirroring her energy with a quiet, unspoken challenge. “What happens if I do?”

Her smile deepened, her lips curling with something darker, more daring. “You might win more than a girl’s heart.”
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Beautifully said... Lovely conversation.
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(Yesterday, 08:27 PM)rajesh93 Wrote: Beautifully said... Lovely conversation.


Hi Rajesh

Thank you so much for your compliments. I'm really glad you enjoyed the conversation in the story. Writing those moments is always special, and it means a lot to know that they resonated with you. Your feedback motivates me to keep writing and creating more moments like these. 

Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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A Heartfelt Thank You for Over 200,000 Views!

 
Dear Wonderful Readers,
 
I can hardly believe that we’ve reached this incredible milestone, over 200,000 views on Priya Didi’s story. Words honestly can’t express how deeply humbled and grateful I am for the outpouring of love, support, and engagement you’ve all shown. This journey has been nothing short of amazing, and I truly feel like I’ve grown alongside these characters as I’ve written their story.
 
When I first started writing, just a little less than six months ago, on June 10th, I never imagined that this would become such a powerful and meaningful experience. I didn’t know where this journey would take me or how it would be received. I simply had a passion to create something real, heartfelt, and connecting. And what a ride it’s been! Every time I’ve seen a comment, a reaction, or even just a silent read from you all, it has motivated me to keep writing, to delve deeper into the emotions, the tension, and the beautiful complexities between Priya and Ravi. To see so many of you connect with their story, your words, your thoughts, your interpretations, has been more rewarding than I could have ever imagined.
 
But there’s more to this story than just reaching this milestone. At one point, there was a moment when I almost stopped writing on this site due to a lack of proper engagement and encouragement. It was a challenging time for me as a writer, and I wasn’t sure if my stories were resonating with anyone. But two amazing people, Venkygeethu and Prasanna, played a pivotal role in turning things around for me. They pursued me, reached out, and encouraged me to continue. They reminded me of why I started writing in the first place, to create something real, to share a piece of myself and my imagination with all of you. Without their unwavering support and belief in this story, I might have walked away from it long ago.
 
I would also like to give a special thanks to Siva Reddy Sir, who has been an incredible source of inspiration and support. As one of the best erotic writers I’ve ever encountered, his feedback and guidance have been invaluable to me. His encouragement not only improved my writing but also gave me the confidence to keep pushing myself. Thank you, Sir, for your generosity, wisdom, and for believing in me. Your support has meant the world to me, and I’m truly grateful.
 
So, I want to specially thank Venkygeethu and Prasanna for their persistence, their kindness, and their encouragement. If not for them, this story might have ended long before it ever reached this point. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for giving me the strength to continue. You both played an essential role in this milestone, and I will always be grateful for that.
 
A huge thank you to all of you, the readers, the supporters, the silent admirers, and the active participants, for making this possible. Your trust in me as a writer and your ability to see the heart of the story, to feel the connection between Priya Didi and Ravi, has truly made me believe in the power of storytelling in a new way. Your engagement has been magical, and I am incredibly touched by the support you've shown.
 
I am especially grateful for the more than 4800 likes and 225+ ratings you’ve given. Your encouragement, dedication, and belief in this story have been overwhelming, and they mean the world to me. Without your ongoing support, this journey wouldn’t have been as meaningful or rewarding. Thank you, from the depths of my heart, for making this experience so special.
 
As a writer, one of the most profound feelings is knowing that your words have touched someone, that your characters have come to life in someone else’s heart. When you all tell me that Priya and Ravi’s journey has made you feel something real, whether it’s passion, longing, excitement, or even nostalgia, it gives me the most profound sense of accomplishment. I write for the love of it, but knowing that you connect to what I’ve created makes it all the more special.
 
This milestone isn’t just about the number of views. It’s about the connection we’ve built together, the shared experience of stepping into this story world. It’s about the memories, the emotions, and the stories we tell each other through words.
 
200,000 views might not seem like a big deal for many, but for someone like me, who's still learning the ropes of writing, it is a [b]great achievement[/b]. Every view, every like, every comment is a stepping stone. And it’s a validation that what I’m doing matters. This is my first step in a long journey of growth, and I can’t thank you enough for being part of it.
 
I want you to know that every single one of you has made a lasting impact on me, as a writer and as a person. Every moment I spend creating the next chapter is done with the thought of you in mind, your reactions, your thoughts, your connections. And as we continue, I hope you’ll keep walking this journey with me. There’s so much more to explore with Priya, Ravi, and the beautiful world they live in.
 
Thank you for being part of this incredible milestone, 200,000 views. It still feels surreal, especially considering I started writing just less than six months ago. It’s all thanks to you. So here’s to more stories, more moments, and more of the passion that binds us as readers and writers. Let’s continue this journey together.
 
With all my love and gratitude

-- Shailu
 

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