[shailu4ever]

Hi Shailu,

I just found your exciting thread and it is easily one of the best on this forum.
PLEASE do not stop. Do continue 

Hi fanofallnature

Thank you so much for your compliments. I’m really glad you enjoyed the thread. The story has been stopped a while back due to low response in this thread, 

I received very good response in the beginning of this story and after that the response got reduced. Maybe due to the way I wrote the first few chapters.  I might have given something alluring to the readers.  But I was doing the world building.  Which might have hurt readers interesting.  Being the nature of this site, The Swamiji story, the way I planned might not be interested to most of the readers.

But that being said, I’ll be more than happy to continue it if there’s some engagement here. Your encouragement means a lot and truly motivates me to keep going.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[aaran88]

The Savakis
 
 
The Ek Vastra

...

 The Savakis only ware Saree, nothing else underneath. 

.

Wow, very sensuous concept. Great idea. I like this type of stories

[shailu4ever]

Wow, very sensuous concept. Great idea. I like this type of stories

Hi Aaran88 


Thank you so much for the compliment! I’m glad you found the story concept sensuous, it’s always a delicate balance to weave in that kind of emotion. 

There’s definitely more of that vibe coming in the story, so I hope you continue to enjoy the ride! 

Your feedback always makes the effort worth it.

I appreciate your continued support

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[aaran88]

Introduction to Swamiji's hidden empire is awesome. This story has a huge potential 

[aaran88]

Hi, please give updated to this story.

Waiting for updates.

[rajesh93]

This is a great story, please continue

[shailu4ever]

Introduction to Swamiji's hidden empire is awesome. This story has a huge potential 

Hi Aaran


Thank you so much for your compliments. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts with me.

Your feedback means a lot, it helps me understand how readers connect with this story and inspires me to keep growing as a writer.

I’m really grateful for your support.

With warm regards

-- Shaili

[shailu4ever]

Hi, please give updated to this story.

Waiting for updates.

Hi Aaran

Sorry for the delay in responding. Currently I am working on stories: Priya Didi and Nine Nights. 

I stopped giving updates for this story due to lack of proper engagement. 

Once I get proper engagement, I will resume and give updates for this story. 

Thank you for your support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Dear  Coffe Lover 

Over the years I’ve seen many writers begin with passion and lose it halfway through.
Life pulls, interest fades, and stories remain unfinished.
But when I wrote my first note on the old site, I made a promise to myself:
I will finish what I start.

Some stories stopped, yes  but they were collaborations,and sometimes the voices at the other end fall silent.

So what am I really saying?

Write without expectations.
Write for the joy, the burning, the calm it gives you.
When someone appreciates you, smile and move on.
Human hearts bruise when they expect too much.
Do your work, let go of the rest.
If love comes, good.
If applause comes, good.
If nothing comes you still have your words, and that is enough.
This is true not only for writing, but for life, for relationships, for the tender, fragile dance we do with people.

I read your Swamiji story.
It is beautiful — deep, brave, and different.
Yes, the readers are fewer, because this genre walks a quieter path.
But let me ask you:

Do you write for your heart, or for the echo of comments?

Remember — most readers in places like this read silently.
If you stop writing, what happens to them?

I read all three of your stories each a different world, each proof of your skill in suspense and thrill.

Value the readers who are with you now.

And do not abandon the stories already born from your imagination.

A small note — the word is Sevika,
unless you choose another meaning.(SAVIKA).

Keep the suspense tight.
Add a touch of romance, a whisper of warmth,
just enough to make hearts quicken for this is what your readers expect,what keeps them close.

I will stop here.

You have a gift your grip on language,your attention to detail, the way you paint a moment until readers feel it on their skin.
Hold on to that.

And keep writing, my dear Coffee Lover.
Keep rocking.



Advertise your  stories   for this  add  signature to your profile so when ever you update some thing  it will display all links to your stories.

I dont know you have this  story called Swamiji ( you requested so i know ). so many readers may not know its your story until they go in to the story. 

Add  all your  stories  in to your signatures ( with links to stories page ). 

My dear Siva Reddy Sir,
 
I want to begin with a confession.
I didn’t read your message once.
I didn’t read it twice.
I read it several times, slowly, carefully, with the kind of attention one gives to something precious.
 
Every time I read it, a new emotion opened inside me, a new understanding lit up, a new warmth settled into place.
Your words have that rare power: they stay, they echo, they teach, they comfort.
 
And I think that is why your message reminded me of that divine slokam from the Bhagavad Gita:
“karmanye vadhikaraste ma phaleshu kadachana
ma karma-phala-hetur bhur
ma te sango’stvakarmani.”
 
You distilled its essence so simply and beautifully into writing.
 
Do your work with sincerity, don’t tie your heart to applause, and don’t stop creating just because there is silence.
 
The way you explained it, without even quoting it, held the same depth as the Sloka.
Your guidance carried that same clarity, that same stillness.

But I am still in my infancy as a writer.
Still wobbling, still learning how to walk, still unsure of my footing.

Praise lifts me, silence scares me, comments make me smile, and lack of them makes me doubt myself.

I am very emotional and very sensitive, I know this.
My heart bruises easily, and I take longer than most to heal.
 
That is why your message touched me the way it did.
 
You didn’t just advise me.
You held my unsteady hands and taught me how to walk.
You reminded me that writing is not about applause,
it is about the fire inside,
the joy of creation,
the truth in expression,
and the devotion to finishing what we begin.
 
Your question,
“Do you write for your heart, or for the echo of comments?”
keeps echoing inside me.
 
Maybe I don’t have your strength yet.
Maybe I still look back too often, checking who’s following.
But I want to change.
And your words gave me the direction.
 
I don’t have your wisdom yet, but I want to grow into it.
 
You reminded me that silent readers exist.
That unfinished stories leave behind unfulfilled hearts.
That writing is not about applause, it is about truth.
 
Thank you for reading my stories, three of them.
Thank you for seeing something in them, something worth encouraging.

And thank you for correcting “Sevika” with such kindness, small details like that make me feel guided, not criticized.
 
I promise I will keep my suspense tight.
I will weave a little warmth, a little romance, the kind that makes readers lean closer.
I will finish the stories I started, even if the path is slow.
 
And above all, I will remember what you told me:
Write without expectations.
[b]Let the words be enough.[/b]
 
Your message is not something I will read once.
It is something I will return to, like a lantern on days when doubt feels heavier than ink.
 
Thank you for your kindness, your honesty, your inspiration.
Thank you for being the writer I look up to.
Thank you for building a place where someone like me could discover a new part of myself.
 
I will keep writing,
I will keep growing,
and I will keep rocking, just as you told me.
 
With deep respect, warmth, and admiration,
 
-- Shailu


PS: I have updated my signature as you suggested. Thank you for pointing me that. I totally agree, it is really helpful for readers to know about my other stories. 

[shailu4ever]

Six Months of Storytelling: Thank You From the Bottom of My Heart
 
Dear Friends,
 
Six months ago, when I was in India, a small thought flashed in my mind: why not try writing a story? At that time, I had been reading some stories on this site, but not extensively. When that idea struck, I simply signed into the site and began writing Abhi’s Journey. That was the turning point of my life. Before that, none of you knew me, and now, I’m fortunate to have all of you by my side.
 
Today marks six months since I embarked on this incredible journey of storytelling, and I can’t believe how quickly the time has flown by. From that very first idea, to putting pen to paper, to now, having six stories that I’m so proud of, I’ve learned more than I ever imagined.
 
There are so many people I want to thank for their encouragement, support, and belief in me. Without you, none of this would have been possible. Every word written, every plot twist crafted, every character developed is, in part, because of the faith and energy you’ve shared with me.

1. First Fire in Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1
   The first story I wrote was a true leap of faith. I want to thank everyone who gave me feedback and helped me see the potential in it. Your encouragement made it all feel worth it. I will always remember the excitement and nerves I felt finishing this one. I introduced too many characters in that story and could not justify them, so I wrapped it up and moved on to Part 2.
   
   
2. Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire
   Writing my second story was an entirely different experience. I continued from where I left off in the first story. It picks up momentum with Madhavi, Meghana, and her sister Varnika. I paused this story when Varnika proposed Abhi. They are yet to get close and enjoy the romantic journey. I was amazed by how many of you were there to cheer me on, share your thoughts, and keep me going when it felt like the story was taking unexpected turns. Thank you to each of you for your unwavering support.
   
   
3. Priya Didi
   The third story was an emotional rollercoaster. I’ve received the most feedback on this one, some good, some bad, and some harsh. I was feeling very down and could not write for a few days. I want to thank those of you who reached out with messages of encouragement and helped me heal. Your kindness meant the world to me. I can never forget your help. I want to thank those of you who shared thoughtful feedback, offering constructive suggestions and just being there to listen when I needed to talk things through. This story has been an emotional ride for you and for me as well.
   
   
4. The Swamiji
   This one was a real turning point for me. I started this story thinking I wanted to write a novel. It wasn’t just another erotic story, it was something more. However, I didn’t get much engagement despite the time I spent on it. Each scene in this story took a lot of my time, but I haven’t written much beyond what’s already posted. I’ve put it on pause for now, but I hope to pick it up soon. I got some great initial feedback, but the momentum quickly faded.
   
   
5. The Nine Nights
   The concept was simple: two people stranded on a remote island in Kerala after a tsunami wave. They spend nine days waiting for rescue. This story is about how they survived and how they grew closer to each other emotionally, and then physically. This story touches on every tiny bit of emotion. Thank you to everyone who kept believing in me, whether it was a quick message, a thoughtful comment, or simply asking me how the story was coming along. You made all the difference. This story is nearing its conclusion, and I hope to complete it very soon.
   
   
6. Shhh... by Shailu
   And now, we arrive at my sixth story. I had this beautiful concept one night, and I put the plot together. But I need to spend more time to truly expand it into a complete story. I hope you’ll all enjoy it. I feel like this story is a culmination of all the growth I’ve experienced over these past six months. I want to make it exciting and naughty, and I can’t wait to share more with you.
   

 
 
 
Throughout this entire journey, one thing has remained constant: the support I’ve received from all of you. Whether you’ve offered a kind word, a helpful suggestion, or simply been a sounding board when I needed to bounce ideas around, I am endlessly grateful for your encouragement.
 
As I reflect on these past six months, I realize that my writing isn’t just about me, it’s about all of you who’ve helped me get here. You've given me the confidence to keep pushing forward, to take risks, and to explore new ideas. Every single person who has been part of this journey, in whatever way, holds a special place in my heart.
 
Thank you for believing in me, for being a part of my story, and for helping me bring these stories to life. I can't wait to see what the next six months hold, and I’m thrilled to continue sharing this journey with you all.
 
With deep gratitude and excitement for what’s next,
 
-- Shailu
 
 

[masti.bhai]

You are a great female erotica writer.
If you read the story of O, you know how erotica can be moulded.

[shailu4ever]

You are a great female erotica writer.
If you read the story of O, you know how erotica can be moulded.

Hi Masti. Bhai


Thank you for reading and for such kind, generous words. I’m glad the emotional shaping of the erotica came through, and I appreciate the reference.

It’s always nice to read such nice feedback. 

May I ask which story you’re referring to and it's link?

And also thank you very much for your extended support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[masti.bhai]

Hi Masti. Bhai


Thank you for reading and for such kind, generous words. I’m glad the emotional shaping of the erotica came through, and I appreciate the reference.

It’s always nice to read such nice feedback. 

May I ask which story you’re referring to and it's link?

And also thank you very much for your extended support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

The "Story of O" is a BDSM classic originally written in French, happily translated into French. Read it in my early twenties. Then there's the Victorian erotica like The Pearl, the young turk. Justine by Marcus deSade after which the word sadism is coined.

Anyway, I do enjoy your writing. My honest feedback is it's a bit slow, which is okay, as long as the sex scenes are explosive.

[masti.bhai]

Hi Masti. Bhai


Thank you for reading and for such kind, generous words. I’m glad the emotional shaping of the erotica came through, and I appreciate the reference.

It’s always nice to read such nice feedback. 

May I ask which story you’re referring to and it's link?

And also thank you very much for your extended support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

The "Story of O" is a BDSM classic originally written in French, happily translated into English. Read it in my early twenties. Then there's the Victorian erotica like The Pearl, the young turk. Justine by Marcus deSade after which the word sadism is coined.

Anyway, I do enjoy your writing. My honest feedback is it's a bit slow, which is okay, as long as the sex scenes are explosive.

The "Story of O" is a BDSM classic originally written in French, happily translated into French. Read it in my early twenties. Then there's the Victorian erotica like The Pearl, the young turk. Justine by Marcus deSade after which the word sadism is coined.

Anyway, I do enjoy your writing. My honest feedback is it's a bit slow, which is okay, as long as the sex scenes are explosive.

[shailu4ever]

The "Story of O" is a BDSM classic originally written in French, happily translated into French. Read it in my early twenties. Then there's the Victorian erotica like The Pearl, the young turk. Justine by Marcus deSade after which the word sadism is coined.

Anyway, I do enjoy your writing. My honest feedback is it's a bit slow, which is okay, as long as the sex scenes are explosive.

Hi Masti.bhai

Thank you for sharing those references, I must admit I haven’t read any of those stories yet, but I’ll see if I can get my hands on them, though I’m not sure how soon. I really appreciate your honest feedback about the pace. Yes, the story does move a bit slowly initially, but I promise the momentum will build, and the romantic scenes will become more intense as the story progresses. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far, and your perspective means a lot.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Dear Amazing Friends,

 
The wait is over… and I’m back! After a long break, I’ve decided it’s time to bring this story back to life, and I couldn’t do it without all of you.
 
Your messages and encouragement were the spark I needed to reignite the creative fire. So, here I am, ready to dive back in and take this story to places you won't expect.
 
Now, I know the first couple of chapters were a slow burn, but trust me, the pace is about to shift into high gear. From Chapter 3 onwards, you’ll feel the intensity building, and the story will pick up speed faster than ever. Buckle up, because things are about to get thrilling!
 
You’ve met a few characters already, and don’t worry if it felt like a lot, they’ll all come into play at just the right moment.
 
As the story unfolds, you’ll meet even more characters, and I know it can feel like a lot of names being introduced. But don’t stress about remembering them all; But trust me, we need to give a name to every person the main characters interact with, more than once. After all, we can’t just call them ‘the person’ all the time. So, I give them names as we go along. But don’t stress, not every character with a name will be crucial to remember. Focus on the main characters, and the rest will come and go as the story demands. You’ll know exactly who’s important when the time is right, and everything will fall into place as we move forward.
 
This is fiction, pure and simple, no rules, no logic. Just pure storytelling that will sweep you off your feet. So leave your expectations at the door and dive into the excitement! Get ready for twists, turns, and moments that will make your heart race.
 
I can’t wait for you to read the 3rd Chapter that is about to begin. The journey is just getting started, and I promise it’s going to be worth every second.
 
Let me know what you think and get ready for an unforgettable ride!
 
With all my excitement,
 
-- Shailu
 
 

[aaran88]

Dear Amazing Friends,

 
The wait is over… and I’m back! After a long break, I’ve decided it’s time to bring this story back to life, and I couldn’t do it without all of you.
 
Your messages and encouragement were the spark I needed to reignite the creative fire. So, here I am, ready to dive back in and take this story to places you won't expect.
 
Now, I know the first couple of chapters were a slow burn, but trust me, the pace is about to shift into high gear. From Chapter 3 onwards, you’ll feel the intensity building, and the story will pick up speed faster than ever. Buckle up, because things are about to get thrilling!
 
You’ve met a few characters already, and don’t worry if it felt like a lot, they’ll all come into play at just the right moment.
 
As the story unfolds, you’ll meet even more characters, and I know it can feel like a lot of names being introduced. But don’t stress about remembering them all; But trust me, we need to give a name to every person the main characters interact with, more than once. After all, we can’t just call them ‘the person’ all the time. So, I give them names as we go along. But don’t stress, not every character with a name will be crucial to remember. Focus on the main characters, and the rest will come and go as the story demands. You’ll know exactly who’s important when the time is right, and everything will fall into place as we move forward.
 
This is fiction, pure and simple, no rules, no logic. Just pure storytelling that will sweep you off your feet. So leave your expectations at the door and dive into the excitement! Get ready for twists, turns, and moments that will make your heart race.
 
I can’t wait for you to read the 3rd Chapter that is about to begin. The journey is just getting started, and I promise it’s going to be worth every second.
 
Let me know what you think and get ready for an unforgettable ride!
 
With all my excitement,
 
-- Shailu
 
 

Dear Shailu

That's a great news. I have been waiting for updates in this story.

Please start soon. Can't wait for the story to unfold.

I am very excited.

With love for this story 
Aaran

[prasannas2001]

That's a great idea Shailu. Please continue this story. 

I am really glad to see you are starting this again.

[shailu4ever]

Happy New Year, My Dear, Mischievous Friends!
 
As the calendar flips and the clock does its dramatic “3…2…1…”, it’s time to dump the old year, flirt shamelessly with the new one, and welcome it with hope, laughter, sparkle, and a healthy dose of mischief. ;)  After all, behaving too well is so last year.
 
Now, a little heart-to-heart confession (don’t tell anyone ): )
I started writing in June 2025, and what began as a harmless affair with words quickly turned into a full-blown emotional entanglement—with all of you. And oh, what a beautiful mess that has been!
 
This journey gifted me so many wonderful friends, unexpected connections, and late-night smiles. For that, I am deeply, dangerously thankful to each and every one of you. Truly, meeting you all has been one of the best plot twists of my year.
 
May this New Year bring you fresh beginnings, unexpected thrills, good health, and plenty of reasons to smile… and blush. ;)
 
May your days be lighter, your nights calmer (or exciting, your choice  ), and your coffee or chai always strong enough to handle life’s drama and my story twists.
 
Thank you for reading, supporting, encouraging, nudging, waiting, and occasionally staring at your screen wondering, “Where is the update?”
 
Here’s to new stories, bolder emotions, deeper connections, and many deliciously memorable moments we’ll share in the coming year.
 
Now for the naughty truth…
Yes, when I was in the USA, updates were frequent and enthusiastic, and after coming back to India, the pace slowed down. Not because the fire died… oh no… but because business pressures, the holiday season, and massive families on both sides have completely invaded my personal space.
 
And as you know very well, I cannot open my browser and write these stories when curious eyes are hovering around me. I need privacy, silence, and a little solitude to let my imagination misbehave properly, and right now, that privacy is playing very hard to get.
Still, I promise to sneak in updates whenever I can. So please be patient, stay naughty, and don’t give up on me yet. I’ll make it worth the wait.
 
So now, raise a glass, make a wish, flirt with the universe, and step boldly into the New Year with confidence, curiosity, and a wickedly playful heart.
Let’s make this year bold, beautiful, slightly scandalous, and totally unforgettable.
 
Wishing you all a very Happy New Year filled with happiness, success, laughter, and delicious surprises!
 
With gratitude, warmth, and a mischief…
 
-- Shailu
 

 

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[rajesh93]

Happy New Year, My Dear, Mischievous Friends!
 
As the calendar flips and the clock does its dramatic “3…2…1…”, it’s time to dump the old year, flirt shamelessly with the new one, and welcome it with hope, laughter, sparkle, and a healthy dose of mischief. ;)  After all, behaving too well is so last year.
 
Now, a little heart-to-heart confession (don’t tell anyone ): )
I started writing in June 2025, and what began as a harmless affair with words quickly turned into a full-blown emotional entanglement—with all of you. And oh, what a beautiful mess that has been!
 
This journey gifted me so many wonderful friends, unexpected connections, and late-night smiles. For that, I am deeply, dangerously thankful to each and every one of you. Truly, meeting you all has been one of the best plot twists of my year.
 
May this New Year bring you fresh beginnings, unexpected thrills, good health, and plenty of reasons to smile… and blush. ;)
 
May your days be lighter, your nights calmer (or exciting, your choice  ), and your coffee or chai always strong enough to handle life’s drama and my story twists.
 
Thank you for reading, supporting, encouraging, nudging, waiting, and occasionally staring at your screen wondering, “Where is the update?”
 
Here’s to new stories, bolder emotions, deeper connections, and many deliciously memorable moments we’ll share in the coming year.
 
Now for the naughty truth…
Yes, when I was in the USA, updates were frequent and enthusiastic, and after coming back to India, the pace slowed down. Not because the fire died… oh no… but because business pressures, the holiday season, and massive families on both sides have completely invaded my personal space.
 
And as you know very well, I cannot open my browser and write these stories when curious eyes are hovering around me. I need privacy, silence, and a little solitude to let my imagination misbehave properly, and right now, that privacy is playing very hard to get.
Still, I promise to sneak in updates whenever I can. So please be patient, stay naughty, and don’t give up on me yet. I’ll make it worth the wait.
 
So now, raise a glass, make a wish, flirt with the universe, and step boldly into the New Year with confidence, curiosity, and a wickedly playful heart.
Let’s make this year bold, beautiful, slightly scandalous, and totally unforgettable.
 
Wishing you all a very Happy New Year filled with happiness, success, laughter, and delicious surprises!
 
With gratitude, warmth, and a mischief…
 
-- Shailu
 

 

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Happy New Year Shailu. I wish you bring many new stories during this year.

I am glad to see you are restarting this story. I am really happy to hear that.