[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[Salma Khan]

Hopefully it will be updated on Friday.

[Sriya2]

Update 94

Iqbal ka chhehra jaise hi Supriya ke chhehre ke paas pahucha, uski halki si siski nikal gayi. Iqbal ka sakht shareer ka bhaar uske nazuk se badan ko daba jo raha tha.

Iqbal ki naak theek uske honthon ke paas aakar ruki.



Dono ek doosre ke behad kareeb aa gaye they aur ek doosre ki saanson ko apne chehre par mehsoos kar paa rahe they. Supriya ki saansein bhaari hoti jaa rahi thi. Supriya ne fir se apna haath Iqbal ke baalon mein halke se ghumaya, jisse Iqbal ne apna chehra Supriya ke chehre se sata liya.

Iqbal ki ek taang Supriya ke taangon ke beech mein thi, aur doosri thodi bahar. Dono ki taang ka upar ka hissa apas mein ragad raha tha. Saari ka pallu toh palang par girte hi neeche ho chuka tha.

Iqbal ne apne dono haath Supriya ki baahon par rakhe aur uske komal mulayam haathon ko ache se mehsoos karte hue uski hatheliyon par aa ruke. Usne uski hatheliyon ko kas ke thaam liya aur uske haathon ko thoda upar ki aur kar diya. Supriya ki chhaati tezi se upar neeche ho rahi thi. Use darr lag raha tha, par ek ajeeb sa ehsaas bhi ho raha tha.

Iqbal ne apni naak Supriya ki gardan se ragdi aur fir uski gardan aur uske thoda neeche ke hisse ko choomna shuru kar diya. Itno dino baad use koi aadmi aise chhoo raha tha, Supriya ka mann buri tarah machalne laga tha aur usne apni aankhen band kar li.



Supriya halke se aawaz nikaalne lagi - Mmmm.... mmm... Iqbal ji... uhhh....

Iqbal uski meethi madhosh karne wali aawaz sunkar aur bhi uttezit hota jaa raha tha aur woh uski gardan ko choosne laga. Supriya apne honth daba kar reh gayi, sab kuch itni jaldi jaldi shuru ho chala tha. Abhi kuch pal pehle toh Iqbal usse door khada tha, aur abhi jaise usne ek saand ko apne upar chadne ka khula nimantran de diya ho.




Iqbal ka muh Supriya ki gardan se neeche jaate hue uske blouse ke paas pahuch gaya, aur fir wapis gardan par. Uske haath Supriya ki patli si kamar ko pakde hue they aur Supriya ke chikne se shareer par woh bina rok tok ke fisal rahe they. Use yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki uski madamji aakhir aaj uski hone wali thi.

Usne apne dono haathon se Supriya ki kamar ko halke se dabaya. Uske aisa karte hi Supriya ne apni kamar thodi si upar uthi li aur zor ki siski li.



Supriya ke pyaare se chehre par uski bhavnaye saaf dikh rahi thi. Iqbal ne apne ek haath Supriya ke kamar se hatate hue Supriya ke chhehra par rakha aur apna muh uski gardan se lagate hue uske blouse ke upar ragad diya. Supriya ke sensitive boobs par jaise hi Iqbal ka muh laga woh buri tarah kaanp uthi.



Supriya - Ahhh....mmmm.... Iqbal ji....

Iqbal ki himmat tohab badti jaa rahi thi. Dono ke upar rajai nahi thi par ab shayad thand bhi mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi. Iqbal ki daadi use chubh si rahi thi, par is chubhan mein ek alag maza aa raha tha.


Iqbal apna muh Supriya ke upar ragdate hue kho sa gaya - Mmmm.... ahhh... mmm... ahh.... madamji....

Iqbal ne apna muh Supriya ke blouse ke theek neeche Supriya ke pet par laga diya aur wahan halke halke choosne laga. Supriya ka ang ang buri tarah kaanp raha tha aur usne apna haath Iqbal ke haath par rakh diya, jaise use rokne ki koshish kar rahi ho, par shayad na bhi.



Supriya uttezit hote hue zor zor se siskiyaan lene lagi - Ahhh... uff... aahh... mmmm....mmmm.. ahhh.... 

Iqbal ne apne haath Supriya ne neeche ghusaye aur use ghumate hue apne upar le aaya. Uske haath Supriya ki kamar aur peeth par ghoom rahe they. Uska dudhiya safed jism bohot hi nazuk aur soft tha. Us par chalte hue uske khurdure haath uske jism par halke halke nishaan chhode jaa rahe they.

Supriya ne Iqbal ke upar aate hue uski gardan ko chooma, shayad ye uska mauka tha apna pyaar jatane ka. Woh dono hi ye karna chahta they.

Iqbal ne peeche se Supriya ki blouse ki doori ko kheechte hue use thoda sa dheela kiya.




Supriya kaanpte hue Iqbal se bilkul chipak si gayi - Ssssiiii.. aahhh... mmmm...

Iqbal ne apne dono haath Supriya ki peeth par rakhte hue use kas ke bheench liya. Jaise hi Iqbal ne use dabaya, Supriya ne dard ke maare apna muh aur taange upar ki utha li. Woh kisi gudiya ki tarah Iqbal ke upar leti us mein samayi hui thi.

Iqbal ne dheere se kaha - Madamji... main aapka blouse khol du...

Supriya ne Iqbal ke kaano ke paas apna muh laate hue halke se kaha - Haan... aap jo chahe kar sakte hai...

Ye sunte hi Iqbal ka lund toh aur bhi tight ho gaya aur usne jaldi se apni moti ungliyaan Supriya ki blouse ke hook ki aur badayi. Use shayad blouse kholne ka koi khaas tazurba nahi tha, aur woh unhe kheech kar kholne ki koshish karne laga. Waise bhi is samay blouse Supriya ke jism se bilkul chipak sa gaya tha, shayad unke beech ki garmahat se uske mamme aur bhi fool gaye they.

Is beech Supriya Iqbal ke upar leti hui uske kaano ke paas choom rahi thi. Uski chhaati ki goliyaan Iqbal ki chhaati par dabi hui thi, aur woh apne aap ko us se satate hue unhe aur bhi daba rahi thi. Uski siskiyaan ab kamre mein goonj si rahi thi.

Aakhir kaar blouse ka ek hook khula, jisse woh tight sa blouse thoda sa dheela hua. Iqbal ne besabar hote hue uske baaki hooks ko bhi jaldi se khol diya, aur blouse khulte hi dono side se neeche ho gaya. Iqbal ke haath ab Supriya ki nangi peeth par they. Aur kya kamal ki gori mulayam peeth thi woh.



Iqbal ek dam paglo ki tarah Supriya ki peeth ko masalne laga - Ahhh.... Mmmm.... ahhh... Seema....

Jaise hi Iqbal ke muh se ye naam nikla Supriya ki band aankhein ek dam se khul gayi aur usne Iqbal par se apni pakad thodi dheeli kar di. Iqbal ko bhi shayad iska ehsaas ho gaya aur woh ekdam se uth khada baitha aur Supriya se alag ho gaya.

Supriya apne khule blouse ko pehne bed par palti aur peeth ke bal let gayi - Iqbal ji... kya hua?

Iqbal Supriya se muh fer kar bistar se pair neeche karke baith gaya - Maaf kijiyega madamji... pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha... mujhe apne aap par kaabu rakhna chahiye tha...

Supriya ki saansein abhi bhi tez hi thi, par usne apne aapko sambhalte hue kaha - Seema... woh aapki... pehli biwi thi na... 

Iqbal palang se fir se khada ho gaya tha - Madamji... bohot badi galti ho gayi mujhse... mujhe aapke saath ye sab nahi karna chahiye tha... aap Vikram saab ki amanat ho mere paas...

Iqbal ye keh kar kamre se bahar ki aur nikal gaya. 

Supriya darwaze ki aur dekh rahi thi, use samajh nahi aa raha tha woh kya soche ya bole. Abhi toh unke beech sab kuch jaise hone hi wala tha aur abhi sab kuch beech mein adhoora sa reh gaya tha. Shayad Iqbal ke mann mein kuch aur hi chal raha tha.

Kuch pal uska intezaar karne ke baad Supriya apne blouse ke hook lagane lagi. Kamre ki thand fir se bad gayi thi, aur uske andar jo andhoora sa reh gaya tha usse woh aur bhi kampan mehsoos kar rahi thi. Supriya ne rajai ko apne upar kheecha aur pet ke bal lette hue apne pairo ko apni chhaati ke paas daba liya.

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Subah kamre mein halki si aawaz ne Supriya ko jagaya. Supriya hadbadate hue uth baithi. Uska poora badan paseene mein tarr tha. Shayad woh koi bura sapna dekh rahi thi.

Supriya uthte hi boli - Iqbal ji....

Iqbal - Madamji... maine aapko jaga diya kya... maaf kijiye...

Supriya - Nahi nahi... koi nahi... aap kahan they raat bhar...

Raat ki baad yaat karte hi Supriya ko sharam si aane lagi thi. Kaise Iqbal ne pehli baar uske jism ko chhuaa tha. Uska muh aur haath kaise uske shareer ke alag alag hisso par ghoom rahe they. Ufff... woh aur Iqbal dono un palo mein kaise pagal se ho gaye they.

Iqbal - Main... bas... yahi toh tha...

Supriya - Aap jhooth toh na bole... main kafi der tak jagi hui thi aur aap kamre mein toh wapas nahi aaye they...

Iqbal - Madamji... 

Supriya - Bahar kitni thand thi... aap beemar pad sakte they na...

Iqbal - Mujhe chalna chahiye madamji... bhai jaan ne thoda jaldi jaane ke liye kaha hai...

Supriya bistar se jaldi se khadi hui - Bas 2 minute rukiye...

Supriya ki nazar Iqbal ke haath par bandha ek rumaal par padi. Rumaal par khoon ka ek halka sa dhabba tha. Usne Iqbal ke paas aate hue uska haath pakad liya - Ye kya hua? Kal raat tak toh nahi thi ye chot...

Iqbal - Kuch nahi hai madamji... aise hi bas... adhere mein thoda...

Supriya pareshaan hote hue boli - Aapko andhere mein kamre mein se jaana hi nahi chahiye tha...

Iqbal chhup khada raha.

Supriya - Seema... woh aapki biwi thi na... aap bohot pyaar karte they na usse...

Iqbal ne sir jhuka liya.

Supriya ne jaldi se almari kholte hue kal mile photo ko nikala aur Iqbal ke saamne kiya - Yehi hai na woh....

Iqbal ne photo ki aur dekhte hue kaha - Ye aapko kahan mili?

Supriya - Almari mein.... kuch kapdo ke beech mein thi... bohot pyaari lag rahi Seema is photo mein... aap dono hi ache lag rahe ho...

Iqbal gehri soch mein dooba hua tha - Haan... hamari bas abhi shaadi hi hui thi... (woh ekdam apni soch se bahar aaya) Maaf kijiye kal raat maine aapko Seema bula diya...

Supriya - Toh kya hua? Main Seema jaise hi lag rahi thi na kal... aur uski tarah main bhi aapki biwi hi hoon na...

Iqbal uski baat sun kar pareshaan ho gaya - Madamji... kahan aap aur kahan main... woh shaadi toh bas aapki majboori thi... main aapki barabari kaise kar sakta hoon... aap itni padi likhi hai... itni jawan hai... matlab umar mein bohot chhoti hai aap mujhse... aap toh bas yahan fas gayi ho mere saath...

Supriya - Shuru mein mujhe bhi aisa lagta tha... par ab nahi... ab ye jagah jaane kyu apni si lagne lagi hai... Heena, Rubina Bhabhi, Ammi... aur aap....

Iqbal ne chhaunkte hue kaha - Main??

Supriya - Haan aap... aap itne ache insaan ho... jab bhi main kahin fasi hui thi... aapne hi toh meri madad ki thi... itni izzat di mujhe... mera khayal rakha... mujhe has musibat se door rakha...

Iqbal - Woh toh mera farz tha madamji...

Supriya - Aapne jo kuch mere liye kiya woh bas aapka farz tha? Aapke mann mein mere liye kuch bhi aur nahi hai? Kya main us layak bhi nahi hu?

Iqbal - Madamji... aap ye kya keh rahi hai... aapko toh duniya ka koi bhi aadmi mil sakta hai... aap itni haseen hai... itni pyaari... 

Supriya ki aankh mein paani aa gaya tha - Sabne toh chhod diya hai mujhe... Vikram yahan aane wala nahi hai... aap bhi jaante hai ye baat... main bas uske liye ek khilona thi... Atul ko bhi koi aur mil gaya hai... main kahin ki nahi rahi hu... main wapis nahi jaa sakti ab... par shayad aapke liye bhi main ek bojh hi hu... aur hoon bhi kyu na... sab kuch toh jaante hai aap mere baare mein... aap sochte honge kaisi besharam ladki hu na main...

Iqbal ne Supriya ke haath ko halke se pakda - Aap mere liye bojh kaise ho sakti hain... mujhe bas darr lagta hai... darr lagta hai ki aap mujhe chhod kar chali gayi toh? Main aapke jyada nazdeek aa gaya toh aapse door jaana bohot mushkil hoga... 

Supriya ekdam se Iqbal ke gale lag gayi - Mujhe duniya ka koi bhi aadmi nahi, bas aap chahiye... main ab aapke bina nahi reh paayungi... maine keh diya bas jo mere mann mein tha... ab bhi aap nahi samjhe toh...



Supriya apne haath Iqbal ki par lapete usse poori tarah chipak gayi thi. Iqbal ne apna haath dheere se laate hue Supriya ki peeth par rakha. Kitna haseen pal tha ye uske liye. Woh toh shayad sapne mein bhi nahi soch sakta tha ki Supriya kabhi uski ho sakti thi. Aaj uski jindagi ke saare khwaab poore ho gaye they.  

[Abhi T]

Bahut hi achcha update hai great build up for something erotic best of luck for the next update

[qazmlp]

Superb sexual tension in the air during the night. But the Seema angle was quite a KLPD.
Anyways am sure you will compensate for it subsequently, probably this morning itself, or the next night that both are together.
Also a very prim n well-worded exchange in the morning helping to confirm the mutual love and respect.
Any other angle you want to bring like for e.g. that college Admin guy trying something, or the LaPatha Ad falling in some known person's hands or any of the horny villagers making some mischief Plz Plz Plz do that after one memorable steamy Fuck session.

[Rizzi1198]

Fantastic update so much true feelings

[Sriya2]

Superb sexual tension in the air during the night. But the Seema angle was quite a KLPD.
Anyways am sure you will compensate for it subsequently, probably this morning itself, or the next night that both are together.
Also a very prim n well-worded exchange in the morning helping to confirm the mutual love and respect.
Any other angle you want to bring like for e.g. that college Admin guy trying something, or the LaPatha Ad falling in some known person's hands or any of the horny villagers making some mischief Plz Plz Plz do that after one memorable steamy Fuck session.

Yes, it would not have worked for me if they had sex straight away as they still have a lot of awkward nervous energy between the two of them. They needed that conversation. It’s not a KLPD in my view, they are bonding and closer than before. Now they have confessed its easier for me to write as well.

I cant tell you how many times I wrote something and deleted it. It was hard to get over this piece.

[भाभी जी]

Very nice update...


Waiting for next update...

[sexypreeti]

Brilliantly worded and very carefully crafted story...Keep it up 

Even the little bit of sex was perfectly described...I totally disagree with the people who call this KLPD...

Keep it up...Write at your own pace keeping your priorities in mind... 

[qazmlp]

Yes, it would not have worked for me if they had sex straight away as they still have a lot of awkward nervous energy between the two of them. They needed that conversation. It’s not a KLPD in my view, they are bonding and closer than before. Now they have confessed its easier for me to write as well.

I cant tell you how many times I wrote something and deleted it. It was hard to get over this piece.

Yes, all that is correct and probably me calling it KLPD is a bit overboard as I went with my immediate feelings at that point in time. But I anticipate that the deep hurt felt by Iqbal over his ex-wife/lover must mean a flashback/backstory, and without assuaging this hurt, it may not be possible for him to move on happily with Supriya. Am I correct in assuming this? And if yes, it just feels to me like the grand fuck will get delayed.
Oh,yes, I do acknowledge how hard writing all this must have been for you and fully appreciate it. You continue to delight  us. I just felt like giving my constructive feedback and I kmow you will take it in your stride positively.

[qazmlp]

Brilliantly worded and very carefully crafted story...Keep it up 

Even the little bit of sex was perfectly described...I totally disagree with the people who call this KLPD...

Keep it up...Write at your own pace keeping your priorities in mind... 

You totally Disagree with Me (or) Just my KLPD view.
Hope it is the latter.

[Rohan0064]

Your writing skills reveal the depth of what you naturally want to convey. Only an intelligent person can understand this.

[Sriya2]

Hello, there was a complaint against me as below and quoting it below as provided to me by the admin team. Admin asked me to post to clarify my intentions.

You can also message me directly if you have any concerns on the story. I think I have already tried to explain everything in the story. Story is told from Supriya's perspective. I also tried to add other perspectives in some updates. No one is purely good or purely bad and that was never my intention. But anyway, if you feel offended by the story, I apologize.

Other: All close characters of supriya are portrayed bad and iqbal and his family are depicted awesome, all ways closed for supriya even she can't stay with her parents or sasural, the marriage of supriya and iqbal described in such way like writter know

[shdas]

In all honesty , from your perspective that may not be intentional but that is how the story turned out to be...from her devar , to husband , to friend , to client , to manager - are bad but the eternal bliss with one character who at one point was longing for her , fcking her maid in her house , actually put his dick in her attacker ( lol ) ...and now has "aap kisi aur ki amanat hain " on... am I saying were you intentional ..NO...am i saying that how story is right now Yes ...
Leave hndu / mus angle here ....story itself seems to be more romance now than adultery ...
Also i am not even comfortable writing this as i know some ( read 2) followers or readers of yours will come and start pushing back on any opinion - one reader said something that this village thing does not look correct ..was told to read the story again.. your previous version of story also changed drastically ...why this thread is so defensive about any perspective and why there are ppl to defend ... dont get me wrong but write your story way you wanted ...and let this thread be yours..
PS : I am not the one who complained ..but saw a pattern here and in all honesty calling out ... giving my perspective if there is appetite to take one

[Sriya2]

Yes, I dont want anyone to get upset over feedback. I am happy to listen to it myself.

Yes, the story moved away from Adultery, but maybe it will get back to it. I intend to connect it to some other stories which I can write within this story or as separate stories. I probably would have got to that point if it wasnt for my personal circumstances.

There is a duality to humans, they can be two different things to two different set of people. So I respectfully disagree with some of your points on Iqbal. Also Supriya was sexually naive, and therefore somethings that happened.

If I could rewrite it all over again, I would probably write it slightly differently and cut out a few things but probably still want to end up here at this point.

As some or many of you may know its really hard to find time to write a story. I feel I have given most of my available time over the last year writing this. At times, I felt I didnt want to go on, but then decided to continue. Having invested so much of my personal time now, I feel like if I rush things than it would not give a satisfactory result. Thank you for reading the story.

[qazmlp]

I agree with Sriya2's PoV that all characters are portrayed in Grey I.e. Good n Bad. To simply say that  one set of characters are shown bad and other good is being blind to the details presented in the story.
A lot of bad character shades have also been portrayed to the so-called 'awesome' characters.Yes, now suddenly it all seems acceptable to the protagonist because she needs to rebuild her life and it's her circumstances that are pushing her to accept it.
But if you recall,  there was a time in her early first marriage life also where all things  seemed fine and dandy. And then her husband took her for granted. Few envious people played her innocence against her. And that is how cruel the world can be to a naive innocent girl. Now that's not to say that the protagonist was a saintly character, she too was to blame for the ruckus in her own life.
I think in today's day and age we ought to value what we have, that everyone with an opinion can voice it freely and without fear of repercusssions. But beyond that, to go and attempt to stifle someone's  creative freedom by complaining to the Admin is not done. Fictionalized portrayals must not be given too much credence. Be a mature adult and move on, there is no law or moral code being violated here, so comment your views, whatever they are, and be done with it.

[shdas]

I appreciate your response — there’s a maturity in it . Like I’ve said before, it’s your story, your world, and I’m just a visitor… a reader who’s been invested for a year now. You spend an hour writing and I spend two minutes reading — that’s why you’re the writer and I’m the follower. Slow seduction, a more human, romantic angle — all of that is welcome. All I really want is for you to stay true to the authentic one who started this. Do your thing, follow your own rhythm… and if this is already you, then  — you’re already on

[Ayush01111]

Only one caracter is not get justis is for me is atul every one had taken advantage of his good humam being but writer had not done justice with him i will wait for the day when supriya beg for mercy to atul and he give him clean break way

[Salma Khan]

Great update again @Sriya you are written awesome

[Salma Khan]

Keep writing this story without caring about anyone, we are all with you.