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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
Eagerly Waiting for the next updates
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Sorry thoda sa edit kiya end ka part. It went a bit further than I wanted to write. I always try to read after posting and edit if I dont like it. Maybe I should try reading before posting.
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Its brilliantly written and exquisitely narrated and the feelings and emotions brought out so vividly.
You know sometimes even movies fail to live upto the tension and emotions in a particular scene, but only
writers do it in masterful novels.Your story is worthy of an expert novel writer.

But have to concede to wolverine's point though, this does feel like a klpd.
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Brilliant...Outstanding narration...Just superb  banana

Despite your personal challenges, you still managed to post an update  thanks
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UPDATE PLEASE
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(Yesterday, 04:00 AM)Sriya2 Wrote: Sorry thoda sa edit kiya end ka part. It went a bit further than I wanted to write. I always try to read after posting and edit if I dont like it. Maybe I should try reading before posting.

It's okay, you're doing great
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(Yesterday, 12:06 AM)sexypreeti Wrote: Tum sabh log jo update maang rahe ho, kam se kam itni sharam toh karo ki writer ko personal problems hain...job related problems hain... Insaniyat ke naame pe kuch toh patience rakho aur writer ko thoda time do... Namaskar

Preeti ji,
Point well taken but reader's ki haisiyat se agle update ki aasha karna kya galat hai?? 

Isse to author ki success jhalakti hai ki reader's agle update ke liye itni besabri se intezar kar rahe hain.
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Outstanding and brilliant writing...
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Matlab ab story ka ant hai kya par atul ne is aurat ko thapad nahi mara hai abhi tak
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are update nahi mangenge to writere ko lagega ki uske update aur story main readers ko maja nahi aa raha hai....if we are asking for updates it means till know the story is good....
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Update please
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Outstanding as always
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Very nice update... waiting for next update....
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