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Eagerly Waiting for the next updates
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Sorry thoda sa edit kiya end ka part. It went a bit further than I wanted to write. I always try to read after posting and edit if I dont like it. Maybe I should try reading before posting.
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Its brilliantly written and exquisitely narrated and the feelings and emotions brought out so vividly.
You know sometimes even movies fail to live upto the tension and emotions in a particular scene, but only
writers do it in masterful novels.Your story is worthy of an expert novel writer.
But have to concede to wolverine's point though, this does feel like a klpd.
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Outstanding and brilliant writing...
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Matlab ab story ka ant hai kya par atul ne is aurat ko thapad nahi mara hai abhi tak
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are update nahi mangenge to writere ko lagega ki uske update aur story main readers ko maja nahi aa raha hai....if we are asking for updates it means till know the story is good....
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Very nice update... waiting for next update....
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What a seductive update...
Can't wait for next seductive fucking session
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Sriy please reply update kb tk ayga
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Please give the next update soon
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Fabulous and Fantastic Update