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(12-11-2025, 01:09 PM)PELURI Wrote: very contemporary plot...interesting as scope exists for lots of carnal action....while the heroine is educated from Delhi and is a journalist...but why is she merely 5ft with thick thighs and fat gaand...like a chapri ghavar .....such a huge disappointment...
It's wrong to stereotype women with certain physical attributes as 'chapri ghavar'. I am a strong believer that 'chapri ghavar' is a mental thing rather than a physical one. Only the people who lack civic sense should be called 'chapri ghavar'.
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It's very disheartening to see a lack of response from the readers. Being a first-time writer, I will feel highly motivated after reading readers' comments.
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(Today, 09:03 AM)Professor69 Wrote: ‘Am I getting ready especially for Abhishek’ a thought came in Rubika’s mind when she was applying cream over her pubic hair.
‘It’s nothing like that, I am just following a basic hygiene routine. It has nothing to do with the fact that I am meeting with Abhishek’ she said to herself, and she turned on the shower again.
It is an excellent excuse, because it’s the classic kind of excuse people give themselves when they don’t want to admit the true reason behind their actions.
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(Today, 09:03 AM)Professor69 Wrote: It's very disheartening to see a lack of response from the readers. Being a first-time writer, I will feel highly motivated after reading readers' comments.
DON'T feel disheartened, it takes time, every writer grows with time. your readers will find you.
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my dear P69...written just one episode...plz continue....as you keep writing and write better and better, the story will draw more readers and their appreciations...as I said before, the plot is excellent with enormous scope for lots of carnal activity and the required characters are put in place....go ahead. with full enthusiasm...a good erotica story draws the readers in hordes just like bees to honey or moths to light....all the gest
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Chapter-5
Rubika quickly went to the door and asked, “Who is it?”
“Room Service, mam” a voice came from outside.
Rubika remembered she ordered some breakfast, before going in for a shower, to be delivered to her room right at 12 PM. She thought that she would be ready by then, but she took her time in the bathroom, and now she was standing in just a towel while the room service guy was standing right at her door.
She thought it would be rude to ask him to wait outside, so she opened the door slightly, peered outside, and said, “I was getting ready for please be quick”.
The room service guy took a quick glance at Rubika, from her naked shoulders and arms, he could guess that maybe she was just in a towel or even naked, who knows. He was working at this hotel for quite some time, and he had seen people doing very strange things. “Maybe she is one of those voyeristic women,” he thought as he entered the room.
Rubika felt very shy standing in a towel while a young room service boy was placing breakfast at the table. She was standing behind the door and was just waiting for the room service to leave.
The room service guy took a quick glance at her beautiful, half-exposed body, and then he left. Rubika exhaled a breath, even though she didn’t remember how long she had been holding. The feeling of shame soon converted into excitement. She has just exposed her body to a poor room service boy, who was younger than her.
She then quickly started dressing up. Since she was going to be in her room all day, she took out a white tank top and pink shorts to wear. She then applied some light makeup, some light color lipstick, some kajal in her eyes, and finally she applied a perfume which had a very faint and alluring smell.
By the time she heard Abhishek knock on her door, she was fully ready, and she looked stunningly attractive. For the first time in many days, she felt positive about herself.
Rubika greeted Abhishek with a smile.
“Hi,” Abhishek said as they got in for a quick side hug. Abhishek didn’t fail to notice that Rubika looked slightly different from their last meeting, and also she was wearing much shorter clothes than she was wearing last time.
Rubika led him to the two chairs, which were placed in front of a full-length glass window which has a beautiful view of Patna city. Abhishek couldn’t help but look at the seductively moving ass of Rubika and her thick thighs.
“So what is your plan?” Rubika asked as she picked up the breakfast from the side table and started placing it on the table in front of the chairs.
“I have some info that the Editor and some of the top and famous anchors of your TV channel are in a cahoot with the top leadership of the ruling party, and they have been asked to run their agenda on the TV rather than show real issues of common people.” Abhishek smelled the faint fragrance coming from her. Her short clothes, which show her beautiful, sexy figure well, seductive fragrance, and solitude were making her uncomfortable.
It had been a couple of years since he broke up with her Bengali girlfriend, Richa, and he has been single since then. He was a very passionate guy and never believed in casual hookups. Breaking up with Richa had hurt him hugely; for months, he was not able to get out of his apartment. Richa was his girlfriend for 7 years, and he had very memorable memories with her, which kept hurting him mentally.
After months of suffering, he decided to change his life and do something that he loved as much as he loved Richa. That’s when he started his YouTube channel. Initially, he exposed many corrupt block-level government officers by doing a sting operation, and now he has decided to catch the big fish and go after top leaders.
“So….how are you going to expose them?” Rubika asked when she saw Abhishek lost in his thoughts.
Abhishek took out a spy camera from his bag and placed it on the table.
“We will install these cameras in the Editors' and anchors' room, so that to know what they are up to,” Abhishek explained.
Rubika took a minute to understand what Abhishek just said. He was planning to spy on her senior at the channel.
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