Adultery Undercover Desires

[Astroboy11]

I want them to suffer for hurting an innocent person. I can see that Rahul had shortcomings as a husband but as a person he comes across honest and decent. Maybe naive but not deserving of what happened to him. While I dont want to see Danish and Kavya suffering forever, they seem to have gotten away with what they did scot free. The divorce was quick - no mudslinging as written by the author. K & D can move on - after being through hell. And what has happened in their life so far is no where close to the pain I want to have inflicted on them.

[PELURI]

howz justice for Rahul to be served....? will it be ok if he chances to meet another innocuous girl, falls in love and gets married and lives happily everafter within the realms of their meaning of marriage....OR justice would be deemed served only if KD are punished...if so, plz also suggest what the punishment should be....

incidentally, your invention of 'KD'for Kavya & Danish is cute.....

[Astroboy11]

Lol, its a pain to type out the names all the time. Moving on and revenge/getting even are different.

As for what the punishment should be, I don't want it to be the typical kind. And if I were creative enough to come up with it, then I would have suggested it already. Something twisted that would shock me and perhaps even switch to team KD would be very interesting. After all that's why I'm here - I'm chasing a twisted fantasy. Just like everyone else.

[PELURI]

dear astro....as punishment, we'll have Kavya fucked by multiple men, including Father-in-Law and dry up for Danish....

[Astroboy11]

Not quite. Getting her fucked by others won't satisfy my itch. There are many of those stories are floating around on this website. I want something truly fucked up that would make everyone flinch.

[Ayush01111]

Why not kayvya got fucked in hospital by first husband once again and his current husband see him but not say and rahul share video to husband father it will be more dark maza aeyga please bro rahul ko thoda to relief do

[Chennaiboy]

Dear John, Eagerly waiting

[Astroboy11]

Why not kayvya got fucked in hospital by first husband once again and his current husband see him but not say and rahul share video to husband father it will be more dark maza aeyga please bro rahul ko thoda to relief do

There is no reason for that to happen. This story is built up on feelings and desires. Kavya has expressed regret (it seemed hollow to me) and the author has progressed it further from the first marriage. Having Rahul show up just to fuck her would be a shallow revenge. I get the feeling that the author has no intension to (or perhaps it was never the intension to) have a revenge arc for the ex-husband. 

I am talking about what I want. How the story continues is up to the author. There is no compulsion for the author to listen to me. I'm okay with that.

[PELURI]

Rahul fucking Kavya just to take revenge will not happen as such acts are not in Rahuls' persona...Since Rahul & Kavya are in Software, they might bump into each other at a conference or something and there Kavya may fall on his feet and beg forgiveness...and to further satisfy our readers here  Kavya can add that because of her wrong done to Rahul..her father is hospitalised and their entire family has paid a big price....beyond this nothing seems probable at this stage...

[Astroboy11]

Rahul fucking Kavya just to take revenge will not happen as such acts are not in Rahuls' persona...Since Rahul & Kavya are in Software, they might bump into each other at a conference or something and there Kavya may fall on his feet and beg forgiveness...and to further satisfy our readers here  Kavya can add that because of her wrong done to Rahul..her father is hospitalised and their entire family has paid a big price....beyond this nothing seems probable at this stage...

I don’t think the author wants to write a revenge story. This story started as being narrated by the ex-husband and then he was removed from it. When I started reading it I thought that his role would be more prominent. But the way he was written out didn’t sit right with me and that’s what started the whole conversation from my end. I understand that the story is a work in process and it was fleshed out over time by the author. Perspectives change and story evolves. I get it. Complements to the author for their effort and dedication.

What I don’t want is a karmic revenge or them moving on with life without any consequences. I want a brutal physiological response from the ex-husband that’s driven by cold rage. It’s not like K & D were innocent. D often made fun of R and K knew that she was doing R wrong. Acceptance and forgiveness seems pathetic to me. That’s just my perspective.

[PELURI]

Yes right Astro Bro...the story began as narration by R.....soon converted to third person narration and remains so even now....you are again correct that D ridiculed R....yes he did pass few snide remarks while fucking K for the first time...yes it was not in good taste and very much unlike D, for he's been a solid guy throughout, with warm and accommodating attitude....remember him helping K land a job, even after been insulted by her....only bcoz she's is his friend's wife....moreover, such insulting remarks were not needed during that scene...especially becoz K has always had high regard for R as a husband..as a human...as such unlikely R will resort to any brutal act of revenge...think he's moved on leaving this muck behind....(much as I hate to say this)....

[Astroboy11]

The way the story is progressing, yes it seems like R has moved on. That does not sit right with me and that’s my whole gripe with the current direction of the story. I’m raising this issue so that the author may consider that opinion and develops the story accordingly, if they choose to do so.

If D is such an amazing guy then he and K can put together their lives post-revenge.

[momass]

innocent people can also take revenge in brutal way

im highly connected to this story and specially with rahul

we cant left rahul behind,he need to comeback for revenge

#justice_for_rahul

[chellaporukki]

Like daughter like mother ha ha

[Chennaiboy]

Dear John,
Follow your instinct and write the story. Let it be a lengthy and erotic

[PELURI]

an update is much overdue...only hope it's mind blowing and ecstatically erotic just as is always from our dear author John....waiting with abated breath....

[PELURI]

innocent people can also take revenge in brutal way

im highly connected to this story and specially with rahul

we cant left rahul behind,he need to comeback for revenge

#justice_for_rahul

dear momass...much as I like your comments, sorry to say I beg to completely differ with you as there's no case of Justice for Rahul...anything if any, Rahul must be greatful and thankful to KD for easing him out of the marriage before further complicating other's lives....fir him, marriage is suffocating and he's like a fish out of water...

[John446]

kavya's mother

[John446]

Kavya's Mother

[John446]

Tell me how do you like this does this pciture goes with the character, please comment and let me know coz im gonna write according to it
Thank you