05-11-2025, 08:51 PM
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Sorry.
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Adultery Field of Forbidden Touch
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05-11-2025, 08:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-11-2025, 08:19 PM by Rishaan. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Sorry.
06-11-2025, 06:28 AM
Hey folks!
This is my first time writing a story, so I know the first chapter might feel a bit slow since it’s mostly setting things up. But trust me — from the second chapter onward, things will definitely get more exciting! The beginning may take its time, but if you stick around for a few chapters, you’ll start to see everything fall into place. Also, this chapter is a mix of some real-life experiences and a bit of creativity. And one more thing — let me know what you think about the Hinglish dialogues. Do they make the story feel more natural, or should I skip them in future chapters?
06-11-2025, 08:59 AM
Nice start. Waiting for the adventures to begin.
06-11-2025, 11:15 AM
Super verynice bto continue
06-11-2025, 01:32 PM
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Sorry
06-11-2025, 04:51 PM
Twist.
06-11-2025, 10:07 PM
where is the story
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