21-10-2025, 08:59 PM
We want chapter 4 krish brother
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Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)
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21-10-2025, 08:59 PM
We want chapter 4 krish brother
21-10-2025, 11:59 PM
Chapter 4 mai character change hona chahiye koi new younger guy ... college guy... will be sexy
25-10-2025, 12:40 AM
Mising this year diwali witch kriss boss
Kam se kam ek bar to online see karte
26-10-2025, 12:02 AM
Waiting 4 chapter new year boss
28-10-2025, 09:55 PM
Wish I could read whatever happened the rest of the 20 minutes inside the train washroom between meera and jai even as if untold confession...but in detail. She only told krish about how he licked for 10 minutes and left while she was inside restroom for 30 mins with jai. Later it was revealed that he fucked her but there was no detailed narraction or reveal about it. I know it doesnot add to the story but it just makes me curious to read it in detail as a reader.
Yesterday, 12:13 AM
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My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades.
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best. However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique. Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’ containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters. The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned. There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment. Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans. My appeal to the author Krish_999 is: Take this story to its zenith and crown it! Smell it, but don't tear it off Demeter
Yesterday, 01:41 AM
(Yesterday, 12:13 AM)Demeter Wrote: My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades.Yes this story is very erotic
Yesterday, 10:22 AM
(Yesterday, 12:13 AM)Demeter Wrote: My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades. Aptly described the story and its greatness, only caveat with another chapter is when an author think about the plot of writing the story and extend it in a series they tend to come up with surprises or weird different endings than previous chapters which would have potential to ruin the whole series big time. I am not a fan of extension of a series for the sake of it if it doesn't hold true story to take the life of characters forward, We have seen everything in their life - Their unconditional love towards each other - Their madness together for adventures - Each individual mistakes and lapses in judgements - Realizations and redemption - Woman who understand and see the uniqueness in Krish - Men who crave for the beauty of Meera - Also Desai who is different and could become an alternate love for Meera Yet in all this chaos couple are meant for each other and they stuck together so what would new chapter bring to the table? Other than a sad ending, Hence I do not want another chapter. Just my opinion. I would rather read a new long series with new twists and new euphoria. ~RCF
Yesterday, 11:19 PM
No brother we would love to read 4th part and their seperation it will excite many readers and gave the story a massive response,
Yesterday, 11:34 PM
Separation between Krish and Meera will excite few readers who love to read low grade road side cheap sex stories and will get almost no response because luckily this forum has few brainless readers.
Today, 12:51 AM
(Yesterday, 11:19 PM)Sagar s Wrote: No brother we would love to read 4th part and their seperation it will excite many readers and gave the story a massive response, Yes bro Story complete But not complete The ending point World most erotic story this one and. One Wo child Krish ka nahi he Desai apartment me 5 din bahle hi meera ke sath sex karta he Tabhi to meera is pregnant And 3 part 3 chrachter not complete this story era frend ananya
Today, 01:45 AM
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(Yesterday, 11:19 PM)Sagar s Wrote: No brother we would love to read 4th part and their seperation it will excite many readers and gave the story a massive response, Sogar s: ,, ... we ... and their seperation ...!" ◊ ◊ ◊ With all due respect for your comment, I would like to suggest that you speak for yourself and not try to present your wishes and thoughts as the general and prevailing opinion of readers and fans. Having read almost all of the discussions and comments from readers, I have come to the conclusion that the vast majority of readers, myself included, do not want Meera and Krish to separate. The fourth part (if it ever happens?!) should be a summary of the three previous parts, i.e. a comprehensive explanation and presentation of the events of the previous parts, which then leads to the present and future of the two. The beginning could perhaps coincide with the birth of their child or a visit to one of the weddings, either Tejas's or Nidhi's. I believe that both Meera and Krish want to continue living out their fantasy, but this time with more control and structure. Both have grown, gained experience and are now closer than ever before. Smell it, but don't tear it off Demeter |
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