Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)

[Sagar s]

We want chapter 4 krish brother

[redarc]

Chapter 4 mai character change hona chahiye koi new younger guy ... college guy... will be sexy

[Aladdin_Aur_Jadui_Chirag]

Mising this year diwali witch kriss boss

Kam se kam ek bar to online see karte

[Aladdin_Aur_Jadui_Chirag]

Waiting 4 chapter new year boss

[Vineeth412]

Wish I could read whatever happened the rest of the 20 minutes inside the train washroom between meera and jai even as if untold confession...but in detail. She only told krish about how he licked for 10 minutes and left while she was inside restroom for 30 mins with jai. Later it was revealed that he fucked her but there was no detailed narraction or reveal about it. I know it doesnot add to the story but it just makes me curious to read it in detail as a reader.

[Demeter]

My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades. 
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best.

However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique.

Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’
containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters. 
The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's 
first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned.

There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment.

Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans.

My appeal to the author Krish_999 is:
Take this story to its zenith and crown it!


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

[Aladdin_Aur_Jadui_Chirag]

My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades. 
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best.

However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique.

Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’
containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters. 
The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's 
first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned.

There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment.

Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans.

My appeal to the author Krish_999 is:
Take this story to its zenith and crown it!


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

Yes this story is very erotic

[RCF]

My passion for the world of erotic literature and short stories has existed for decades. 
I have discovered works that deserve the rating ‘excellent’, while others I have read can be described as mediocre to poor at best.

However, this story deserves the rating ‘excellent’ in all categories and is unique.

Needless to say, I would have taken note of it with goodwill and welcomed it with pleasure if the author had been willing to write a ‘fourth chapter’
containing a summary of the experiencess and detailed explanations of the events described incompletely or not at all in the previous chapters. 
The following scenes are examples: the scene in the train's washroom, Meera's first encounter with Ashish, and a detailed description of Meera's 
first anal experience with Mr. Das. The development of the child of Krish and Nikita (Mr. Das' sister-in-law) should also be mentioned.

There are a number of other events that, in my opinion, are mentioned but lack in-depth treatment.

Therefore, it would be highly desirable to write a ‘fourth chapter’ of the story, which would most certainly delight the thousands of fans.

My appeal to the author Krish_999 is:
Take this story to its zenith and crown it!


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

Aptly described the story and its greatness, only caveat with another chapter is when an author think about the plot of writing the story and extend it in a series they tend to come up with surprises or weird different endings than previous chapters which would have potential to ruin the whole series big time. I am not a fan of extension of a series for the sake of it if it doesn't hold true story to take the life of characters forward, We have seen everything in their life
- Their unconditional love towards each other
- Their madness together for adventures
- Each individual mistakes and lapses in judgements
- Realizations and redemption
- Woman who understand and see the uniqueness in Krish
- Men who crave for the beauty of Meera
- Also Desai who is different and could become an alternate love for Meera

Yet in all this chaos couple are meant for each other and they stuck together so what would new chapter bring to the table? Other than a sad ending, Hence I do not want another chapter. Just my opinion. I would rather read a new long series with new twists and new euphoria. 

~RCF