26-10-2025, 12:52 AM
Ammi aur uncle
26-10-2025, 01:07 AM
(26-10-2025, 12:18 AM)Jackey045 Wrote: Bro tum sirf sahil k point of view se hi story likho , agr tum aisha k point of view se
Story likhoge to double energy waste hogi or story same hi rahegi
Tumhe aisha ka point of view bhi sochna padega jisme time bhi jada lagega
Isey acha tum sahil k point of view se hi likho
Is story ko bete k liye maa ka affair jaise hi Bane rhne do
Bilkul sahi
Beta ki hi zubani ye kahani rahegi jaisa chal rahi hai tabhi ye kahani unique aur best rahegi
Bas aise hi rakhiye kahani
26-10-2025, 05:19 AM
26-10-2025, 06:42 AM
26-10-2025, 08:38 AM
Outstanding and extraordinary writing.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
26-10-2025, 08:39 AM
26-10-2025, 10:18 AM
Awesome update
26-10-2025, 10:47 AM
Aap jaisa likh rahe ho abhi usi ko log pasand jar rahe hai
Agar alag tareeke se likhoge to shayad readers pasand na kare
Agar alag tareeke se likhoge to shayad readers pasand na kare
26-10-2025, 11:15 AM
26-10-2025, 02:23 PM
Waiting
26-10-2025, 04:12 PM
Itna acha likhe ho ki mai kho gayi thi puri usi scene me
Mano sab kuch saamne ho raha ho
Bas aise hi likhte rahiye
Ab tak bahot umdah chal rahi hai kahani aur lekhani
Mano sab kuch saamne ho raha ho
Bas aise hi likhte rahiye
Ab tak bahot umdah chal rahi hai kahani aur lekhani
26-10-2025, 04:13 PM
Acha writer wahi hai jo ek update dene ke baad readers ka dil aur update maangne ka ho
Plss jaldi se dusra update bhi de dijiyega
Plss jaldi se dusra update bhi de dijiyega
26-10-2025, 05:31 PM
Just superb and of course mind blowing update. Hats off.
26-10-2025, 05:38 PM
Super duper hit and mesmerising writing.
26-10-2025, 05:42 PM
Bahut badhiya ek mast update diya aapne yaar. Bahut bahut shandar aur jabardast writing
26-10-2025, 05:46 PM
Ekdum super sensational aur bahut bahut majedar update.
26-10-2025, 06:01 PM
Ekdum mast aur lajawab kahaani hai yah! Bahut achha laga padhke
26-10-2025, 06:04 PM
Really appreciated writing skills. Hats off.
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