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(25-10-2025, 11:14 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Please suggest - should I continue writing in Sahil's point of view or change it to Aisha's point of view or a third person pov?
Plz continue with sahil's point of view
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(26-10-2025, 12:18 AM)Jackey045 Wrote: Bro tum sirf sahil k point of view se hi story likho , agr tum aisha k point of view se
Story likhoge to double energy waste hogi or story same hi rahegi
Tumhe aisha ka point of view bhi sochna padega jisme time bhi jada lagega
Isey acha tum sahil k point of view se hi likho
Is story ko bete k liye maa ka affair jaise hi Bane rhne do
Bilkul sahi
Beta ki hi zubani ye kahani rahegi jaisa chal rahi hai tabhi ye kahani unique aur best rahegi
Bas aise hi rakhiye kahani
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(25-10-2025, 11:14 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Please suggest - should I continue writing in Sahil's point of view or change it to Aisha's point of view or a third person pov?
Please write Sahil's point of view.
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(25-10-2025, 11:14 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Please suggest - should I continue writing in Sahil's point of view or change it to Aisha's point of view or a third person pov?
Sahil's point of view
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Outstanding and extraordinary writing.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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(25-10-2025, 11:14 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Please suggest - should I continue writing in Sahil's point of view or change it to Aisha's point of view or a third person pov?
Yes, you should continue writing in the son's point of view.
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Aap jaisa likh rahe ho abhi usi ko log pasand jar rahe hai
Agar alag tareeke se likhoge to shayad readers pasand na kare
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(25-10-2025, 11:14 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Please suggest - should I continue writing in Sahil's point of view or change it to Aisha's point of view or a third person pov?
Larks apnj Maa ki extra marital relationship ki kahani Bayan Jar Rana hai. Sail ko hi Bayan karne do...Zara erotic rahdga.
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Itna acha likhe ho ki mai kho gayi thi puri usi scene me
Mano sab kuch saamne ho raha ho
Bas aise hi likhte rahiye
Ab tak bahot umdah chal rahi hai kahani aur lekhani
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Acha writer wahi hai jo ek update dene ke baad readers ka dil aur update maangne ka ho
Plss jaldi se dusra update bhi de dijiyega
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Just superb and of course mind blowing update. Hats off.
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Super duper hit and mesmerising writing.
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Bahut badhiya ek mast update diya aapne yaar. Bahut bahut shandar aur jabardast writing
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Ekdum super sensational aur bahut bahut majedar update.
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Ekdum mast aur lajawab kahaani hai yah! Bahut achha laga padhke
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Really appreciated writing skills. Hats off.
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