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(Yesterday, 11:59 PM)ashuezy2 Wrote: Scene 11
Samrat’s hands roamed her body, his lips on her shoulder, while Kabir’s hands gripped her waist, pulling her down fucking her harder with each of her movements. The pleasure was cresting, becoming an unbearable, exquisite wave. Ananya threw her head back, her eyes wild.
Ananya: "Fuck me, Kabir. Fuck me harder! Samrat… take our photos." Chodo mujhe, Kabir. Aur zor se chodo! Samrat… hamari photos lo.
For a heartbeat, the rhythm stuttered. Kabir’s eyes widened, and he let out a guttural groan, obeying instantly as his hips drove up to meet hers with renewed, savage force. Samrat pulled back, his face a mask of utter shock that quickly melted into a wide, exhilarated grin.
Samrat: "My god, yes. Fucking brilliant." Hey bhagwan, haan. Fucking kamaal hai.
He scrambled off the sofa, his movements urgent. He snatched Kabir’s camera from the table where it lay forgotten, his hands surprisingly steady as he lifted it to his eye. The lens focused, framing his wife as she rode another man.
CLICK.
The sound was a gunshot in the room, electrifying all of them.
Kabir: "Like this? Is this hard enough for you?" Aise? Yeh kaafi zor se hai tumhare liye?
Ananya: "Yes! Oh god, yes! Don't stop!" Haan! Oh bhagwan, haan! Rukna mat!
Samrat moved around them, his voice taking on the commanding tone of a director.
Samrat: "Ananya, look at me! Let me see your face! Kabir, grab her ass. Harder!" Ananya, mujhe dekho! Mujhe apna chehra dekhne do! Kabir, uski gaand pakdo. Aur zor se!
CLICK. CLICK-CLICK.
Kabir’s hands clamped down on her buttocks, his fingers digging into her flesh as he hammered into her. Ananya cried out, her eyes locking with the camera lens, with her husband behind it. The sight, the sound, the feeling—it was all blurring into one overwhelming sensory explosion.
Ananya: "I'm close, I'm so close!" Main kareeb hoon, main bahut kareeb hoon!
Kabir: "Me too… fuck…" Main bhi… fuck…
Samrat: "Hold it… hold that expression, Ananya! Yes! Climax for me now! Show me everything!" Roko… wahi expression rakho, Ananya! Haan! Ab mere liye climax karo! Mujhe sab kuch dikhao! Please keep posting. Too hot
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Scene 12 (Bi Scene)
The final, shuddering cries of climax faded, leaving a thick, panting silence in their wake. Ananya collapsed against Kabir, her body slick with sweat, her head resting on his shoulder. Samrat lowered the camera, a look of awe on his face as he stared at the intertwined couple. The raw, beautiful image of their release was still burned into his mind.
Slowly, Ananya stirred. She pushed herself up, sliding off Kabir's lap and onto the sofa cushion beside him. She looked from Kabir's spent, dazed face to her husband's exhilarated one. A slow, predatory smile touched her lips. She wasn't finished yet.
Ananya: "Your turn now, Samrat. Fuck him." Ab tumhari baari, Samrat. Chodo use.
The air went still. Samrat, who had been about to set the camera down, froze. Kabir, still catching his breath, turned his head to look at her, his expression a mixture of exhaustion and utter disbelief.
Samrat: "Ananya… what?" Ananya… kya?
Ananya: "You heard me. The deal was that everyone gets what they want. I want to see you fuck him. I want to watch." Tumne suna mujhe. Deal yeh thi ki sabko woh milega jo woh chahte hain. Main tumhein use chodte hue dekhna chahti hoon. Main dekhna chahti hoon.
Samrat’s initial shock melted away, replaced by a dark, simmering excitement. He looked at Kabir, a silent question in his eyes. Kabir, still recovering, simply stared at Ananya, mesmerized by her audacity.
Kabir: "You… you are something else entirely." Tum… tum bilkul hi alag cheez ho.
Ananya: "Is that a no?" Toh kya yeh na hai?
Kabir let out a rough, breathless laugh. He pushed himself into a sitting position on the edge of the sofa, looking first at Ananya, then turning his challenging gaze to Samrat.
Kabir: "I'm the canvas, remember? Do what you want." Main canvas hoon, yaad hai? Jo karna hai karo.
Samrat: "I don't want to hurt you." Main tumhein chot nahi pahunchana chahta.
Kabir: "Don't worry about me. Worry about keeping up." Meri chinta mat karo. Saath dene ki chinta karo.
Ananya’s voice cut in, sharp and directorial, taking control once more.
Ananya: "Good. Kabir, on the floor. Hands and knees. Samrat, get behind him. I want to see this from every angle."
Achha. Kabir, farsh par. Haath aur ghutnon ke bal. Samrat, uske peeche jao. Main yeh har angle se dekhna chahti hoon.
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Scene 13 (Bi scene)
Kabir was on his hands and knees on the plush rug, his back muscles tense. Samrat knelt behind him, his hands gripping Kabir's hips. They both looked towards Ananya, who was curled up on the sofa, watching them like a queen surveying her court.
Ananya: "Don't be shy, Samrat. Take what you want. Show him what you can do." Sharmao mat, Samrat. Le lo jo tumhein chahiye. Dikhao use tum kya kar sakte ho.
With that final permission, Samrat lubricated himself and positioned himself. He pushed forward, entering Kabir with a slow, deliberate pressure. Kabir grunted, his head dropping as his body accepted the intrusion. As Samrat began to move, a slow, powerful rhythm, Ananya's own breathing deepened. Her hand slipped down between her legs, her fingers finding her own wet heat.
Samrat: "How does that feel, Kabir? Am I hurting you?" Kaisa lag raha hai, Kabir? Main tumhein dard toh nahi de raha?
Kabir: "No… fuck… it's… good. Harder." Nahi… fuck… yeh… achha hai. Aur zor se.
Ananya: "Oh, yes… look at you two. So beautiful." Oh, haan… dekho tum dono ko. Kitne sundar lag rahe ho.
Her voice was a throaty whisper as her own fingers began to move, matching the rhythm of her husband's thrusts.
Samrat pounded into Kabir on the floor, the sound of their bodies slapping together filling the studio. Ananya watched, her eyes wide, a low moan escaping her lips.
Samrat: "Ananya… are you watching? Are you enjoying this?" Ananya… dekh rahi ho? Mazaa aa raha hai?
Ananya: "I'm not just watching… I'm feeling everything. Faster, Samrat. Both of you, faster! I'm almost there!" Main sirf dekh nahi rahi… main sab kuch mehsoos kar rahi hoon. Aur tez, Samrat. Tum dono, aur tez! Main bas pahunchne wali hoon!
The pace became frantic, a desperate, driving rhythm. Kabir’s groans grew louder, mingling with Ananya's breathless moans from the sofa. Samrat grunted with the effort, his body slick with sweat as he drove them all towards the edge.
Kabir: "Fuck, I'm going to cum!" Fuck, main jhadne wala hoon!
Samrat: "Me too! Ananya!" Main bhi! Ananya!
Ananya: "Now! Come now! Together!" Abhi! Jhado abhi! Ek saath!
A wave of release crashed through the room. Kabir cried out as Samrat emptied himself inside him, their bodies shuddering together on the floor. On the sofa, Ananya’s body arched, a sharp, piercing cry escaping her lips as she found her own powerful orgasm, triggered by the raw, beautiful sight before her. A final, satisfied sigh escaped her lips.
Ananya: "Perfect. Absolutely perfect." Ekdum sahi. Bilkul perfect.
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Just post the whole thing already! The bi thing is so fucking hot
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Can't post the entire thing, takes too much time. It will be like 2-3 episodes and I need to see comments and views, if people like it or not.
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This might not be everyone's cup of tea, but for some the story is going good. Just don't kill it
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I understand your concern, but for me as a writer I need constant feedback in the form of comments or likes for my own satisfaction.
This is what I want from writing. If people don't like or comment -> I don't update that story.
I can add 5 scenes at a time but for that to happen I need more engagement.
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what started as a beautiful exhibitionist story, moved to a still better a decent cuckold theme. But what killed the story is the "gay" part - that ruined the whole story
At Least write "Gay/Bi" in the Title so that straight people can avoid these type of story
இங்கே என் முதல் முயற்சி
மில்க் ஜான்ஸன் எழுதிய என்னங்க! உங்க அப்பா மோசம்! அவரால நான் 10 மாசம்! கதையில் என் அப்டேட் (Last 09 March 2025 Night)
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(2 hours ago)dubukh Wrote: what started as a beautiful exhibitionist story, moved to a still better a decent cuckold theme. But what killed the story is the "gay" part - that ruined the whole story
At Least write "Gay/Bi" in the Title so that straight people can avoid these type of story
Thanks for your feedback. I will update that scene.
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Are you comfortable with Bisexual ?
If I get 10 votes against Bisexual content, I will update scene 12 - scene 13 and change the whole storyline.
Just write - "NO Bisexual content".
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