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Adultery Ammi aur uncle
Bahut badhiya,bahut bahut shandar aur ekdum kamaal ka update.
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Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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What a lovely and beautiful story it's! Just awesome and exciting writing.
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It's really a high quality and very much exciting writing!
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Dashing,thrilling and exciting writing.
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Hot and spicy update
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Very nice update
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Bahut badhiya update. Bahut hi shandar aur behad hi exciting writing. agla update ki liye intezar
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Mind blowing and sizzling writing. Impatiently waiting for the next update.
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Update please
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Ekdum fataka aur faadu update diya aapne yaar! Please agla update dal do
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Yaar,agla update ki liye besabree se intezar
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Next update tonight
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(23-10-2025, 03:56 PM)lucky222 Wrote: Next update tonight

Eagerly waiting
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(17-10-2025, 11:44 PM)lucky222 Wrote: "Aisha Bhabhi, yeh mera sabse achha dost hai, Vishal," Akram ne muskurate hue taarruf karaya.

Maine dekha, Vishal ki woh tez nigaahein seedhe meri ammi par aakar ruk gayin. Ek pal ke liye uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak aayi, ek tareef aur ek chahat ka mila-jula sa ehsaas.

"Aap se milkar khushi hui," ammi ne kaha, unki awaaz hamesha se kuch zyada hi meethi aur thodi kaanpti hui lag rahi thi.

"Akram aapki bohot tareef kar raha tha," Vishal ne jawab diya, uski bhaari aur gehri awaaz jaise kaanon mein ghul gayi. "Par usne yeh nahi bataya ki aap itni khoobsurat hain. Ab samajh aa raha hai woh Delhi lautne ke liye itna betaab kyun rehta hai."

Usne haath milane ke liye aage badhaya. Jab ammi ne apna haath uske haath mein diya, toh usne unka haath bas milaya nahi, use kuch palon ke liye narmi se apni garmahat mein lapete rakha. Ek second... do second... shayad teen. Maine dekha, ammi ne jhatke se apni aankhein uthayin aur use dekha, jaise is anjaan sparsh ne unke andar koi taar chhed diya ho.

Ek halki si laali unke gaalon par daud gayi. Unhone foran apna haath kheench liya. Us ek pal mein, unke chehre ka poora rang badal gaya tha. Woh ab Sahil ki ammi ya Fahad ki biwi nahi lag rahi theen. Woh bas ek aurat lag rahi theen, jise ek mard ki taraf se mil rahi tawajjo se farq pad raha tha.

Thodi der baad, jab stage par ek purana romantic gaana baja, toh ammi ki cousins unhein zidd karke kheench le gayin. Pehle toh woh mana karti rahin, sharma rahi theen, par phir unhone khud ko music ke hawaale kar diya. Aur phir jaise jaadu ho gaya.

Unki sharabi rang ki saree unke jism ke gird naachne lagi. Jab woh ghoomti, toh unki saree ka gehra ek poora daayra banata, hawa mein ek leher ki tarah tairta hua. Saree ka pallu unke kandhe se sarak kar unki baanhon par aa gaya, aur har thumke ke saath, ek pal ke liye unki patli kamar ki gori skin ki jhalak dikh jaati, jo roshni mein chamak uthti. Unke chehre par ab woh banavati muskaan nahi thi; ek khushi thi, ek azaadi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise woh barson baad khul kar saans le rahi hon.

Aur Vishal... woh bheed mein khada bas unhein hi dekh raha tha. Uski aankhein sthir theen, jaise woh unke har movement ko apni yaaddasht mein qaid kar raha ho.

Jab gaana khatm hua aur ammi hansti hui, saans leti hui paas ke ek table par paani peene aayin, Vishal unke paas pahunch gaya.

"Stage par aag laga di aapne," usne dheemi, sarghoshi wali awaaz mein kaha.

Ammi ne sharma kar palke jhuka lin. "Arre nahi, bas aise hi... bachpan se shauk hai."

"Yeh shauk nahi, hunar hai," Vishal ne unki aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha. "Aisa hunar jo logon ki neendein uda sakta hai." Woh ek pal ruka, phir bola, "Aap zyada thak toh nahi gayin?"

"Thodi si," ammi ne saans lete hue kaha.

"Achha hai," Vishal ne ek shararti muskaan ke saath kaha. "Warna yahan kaafi logon ke dil thak jaate aapko dekhte-dekhte."

Yeh sunkar ammi ki hansi chhoot gayi.

Mere pet mein ek ajeeb si ainthan uthi. Yeh kis tarah ki baatein theen?
Poori shaam main un par nazar rakhe hue tha. Unki nazrein baar-baar ek doosre se takraatin aur phir jhat se hatt jaatin. Kuch der baad, woh dono kebab counter par aamne-saamne aa gaye.

"Aapki pasand bohot achhi hai," Vishal ne ammi ki plate mein seekh kebab ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha, par uski nazrein saaf taur par unke chhati par theen. "Har cheez mein."

"Delhi aaye aur yeh nahi khaaye, toh kya khaak Delhi aaye," ammi ne haste hue jawab diya, ab unki awaaz mein ek आत्मविश्वास tha.

"Suna hai Dilli ka khana logon ko apna deewana bana deta hai," Vishal ne kaha, uski awaaz mein ek gehra ishara tha.

Ammi ne ek pal uski aankhon mein dekha aur phir ek halki muskaan ke saath boli, "Khana hi? Ya kuch aur bhi?"

Vishal thoda aur qareeb jhuka, unki awaazein ab fasaane jaisi lag rahi theen. "Kuch cheezein toh pehli nazar mein hi qaatil ho jaati hain, Aisha ji. Unke liye khaane ka bahana nahi karna padta."

Pehli baar kisi anjaan mard ke munh se apna naam sunkar ammi kaanp gayin.

Unki hansi achanak ruk gayi. Unke chehre par ek ajeeb si ghabrahat aur ek anjaani si khushi ka mel tha. Woh bina kuch kahe, bas apni plate lekar wahan se hatt gayin, par jaate-jaate unhone ek baar mud kar use zaroor dekha.

Raat gehri ho rahi thi, aur function ab apne aakhri daur mein tha. Main bechaini se idhar-udhar ghoom raha tha, meri nazrein anjaane mein bas ammi ko hi talaash rahi theen. Aur phir maine unhein dekha.

Woh aangan ke us kone mein the, jahan gende ke phoolon ki ladiyon ke peeche purani deewar par bas ek chota sa, narm roshni wala bulb jal raha tha. Is dhundhli roshni mein woh duniya se kate hue lag rahe the. Woh log bohot qareeb khade the, itne qareeb ki unke beech koi faasla nahi tha. Main sun nahi sakta tha ki woh kya baat kar rahe hain, par unki khamoshi bhi ek guftgoo thi. Maine dekha ki hawa se ammi ke baalon ki ek lat unke gaal par aa giri. Aur phir, Vishal ne aahista se apna haath uthaya aur apni ungliyon se us lat ko hatakar unke kaan ke peeche kar diya.

Aur ammi ne use roka nahi. Woh bas use dekhti rahin, unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si kashmakash aur ek gehri khumaari thi.

Yeh dekh kar mere andar khoon khaul utha. Yeh kya ho raha tha? Sabke saamne? Ek anjaan gusse aur ek ajeeb si himmat ke saath, main unki taraf chal pada. Mere qadmon ki aahat se woh dono chaunke.

"Ammi," meri awaaz jitni shaant main rakhna chahta tha, usse kahin zyada sakht nikli.

Ammi ne mujhe dekha toh unke chehre ka rang ud gaya. Unhone foran Vishal se ek qadam ki doori bana li. Unki aankhon mein ek pal ke liye ghabrahat aayi, par unhone use foran sambhal liya.

"Sahil! Beta, yahan kya kar rahe ho?" Phir woh Vishal ki taraf mudin. "Vishal ji, yeh mera beta hai, Sahil."

Vishal ne mujhe dekha, uski aankhon mein na koi hairaani thi, na koi sharmindagi. Balki ek ajeeb si parakhne wali nazar thi, jaise woh mere wajood ko tol raha ho.

Usne apna haath meri taraf badhaya. "Sahil. Milkar khushi hui." Uska haath milana mazboot tha, ek tarah se haavi hone wala. Main bas "Same here" keh kar apna haath kheench saka.

Ek ajeeb si khamoshi chha gayi, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Ammi ne socha shayad meri maujoodgi se unki yeh mulaqat khatm ho jayegi, par Vishal ke iraade kuch aur the.
Usne apni nazrein mujhse hatakar waapis ammi par tika din, jaise main wahan tha hi nahi.

"Toh jaisa main keh raha tha, Aisha ji," usne apni usi gehri awaaz mein baat jaari rakhi. "Yeh shehar bohot khatarnaak hai. Pata hi nahi chalta kab anjaan logon ko apna bana leta hai."

Ammi ne ek pal ke liye mujhe dekha, unke chehre par ek kashmakash thi. Par phir unki nazrein waapis Vishal par chali gayin, jaise kisi chumbak se khinch rahi hon.
"Shehar nahi, Vishal ji," unhone ek halki si shararti muskaan ke saath jawab diya. "Yahan ke log anjaan musafiron ka dil churana jaante hain."

Main wahin khada tha, ek anchaaha gawaah. Woh dono apni hi duniya mein khoye hue the, apni shabdon ki is ladaai mein.

"Chori ka ilzaam galat hai," Vishal thoda aur qareeb jhuka, uski awaaz ab ek sarghoshi jaisi lag rahi thi. "Dil toh khud hi apni marzi se qaid ho jaate hain."

Yeh sunkar ammi ki palke jhuk gayin, aur unke honthon par ek aisi muskaan aayi jise main pehchaan nahi paaya. Us muskaan mein razamandi thi, ek haar thi, aur ek jeet bhi.

Mujhe laga jaise mera dum ghut raha hai. Main wahan aur ek pal nahi ruk sakta tha. "Mujhe... mujhe Nani bula rahi hain," main jhooth bol kar wahan se palat gaya.

Jaate-jaate maine ek aakhri baar mud kar dekha. Woh dono ab dheere-dheere hans rahe the, jaise mere jaane se unhein koi farq hi na pada ho. Unka woh niji, khufiya lamha phir se shuru ho chuka tha. Aur main, us lamhe se bahar, andhere mein jaa raha tha.

Us raat jab hum kamre mein laute, toh darwaza band hote hi bahar ka Sangeeet ka shor ek dum se kat gaya. Andar ek ajeeb si bhaari khamoshi chha gayi. Is khamoshi mein sirf do awaazein theen-meri tez chalti saansein, aur ammi ki saree ki sarsarahat jo unke jism se lipat kar halka shor kar rahi thi.

Unke chehre par thakan ka koi nishaan nahi tha. Uski jagah ek ajeeb si chamak thi, ek khumaari, jaise unhone koi mehanga nasha kar liya ho aur uska asar abhi tak unki ragon mein daud raha ho.

"Uff, kitni garmi hai," unhone ek gehri saans lete hue kaha. Woh kamre ke beech mein khadi theen.Unhone apni peeth ko halka sa kheencha, ek aaraam talash karti hui angdai li, aur phir unki ungliyan apne kandhe par lagi safety pin par chali gayin.

Ek choti si 'click' ki awaaz ke saath pin khuli aur unka pallu aazaad ho gaya.
Woh unke kandhe se ek resham ke sharabi jharne ki tarah sarakna shuru hua. Uska narm kapda unki gori, narm baanhon ko sehlata hua neeche aaya, ek pal ke liye unki kamar se ragad khata hua, aur phir usne apna safar neeche ki taraf jaari rakh aur neeche gir gaya.

Ab saree ka sirf woh hissa unke jism par bacha tha jo unki pleats se juda tha. Unka pallu, jo ab tak unke jism ke upri hisse ko dhak raha tha, ab unke pairon ke paas ek reshami samundar ki tarah phaila hua tha. Unka blouse gehre, sharabi rang ke makhmal ka tha jiska gala aage se gehra U-shape ka tha par uski asli khoobsurti uski peeth mein thi. Uski peeth poori tarah se khuli hui nahi thi. Balki, makhmal ke kapde ke beech mein, usi rang ki baareek net ka ek bada panel laga hua tha. Yeh net unke kandhon se shuru hokar unki kamar tak jaati thi, unki poori peeth ko ek naazuk parde mein dhakte hue. Makhmal ka kapda net ke chaaron taraf ek frame ki tarah tha, aur peeth ke beech mein makhmal ke hi chote-chote button ki ek katari thi jo neeche tak jaati thi.

Dance aur garmi ki wajah se unki skin par paseene ki jo halki, chamakti hui parat thi, woh uss baareek net ke neeche se saaf jhalak rahi thi. Net ka kapda kai jagahon se unki skin se chipak gaya tha, unki reedh ki haddi ke curve ko aur bhi gehra aur aakarshak bana raha tha. Unki peeth ek saaf, be-daag canvas ki tarah thi, jis par ab net ka ek dhundhla sa parda pada hua tha, jo sab kuch chhipa kar bhi, sab kuch dikha raha tha.

Unka yeh andaaz ek befikr aazaadi se bhara tha. Unke liye main abhi bhi wohi masoom beta tha, jiske saamne parde ki zaroorat nahi thi.

For Woh seedhe dressing table ke saamne jaakar khadi ho gayin. Sheeshe mein woh khud ko nahi, shayad us aurat ko dekh rahi theen jo woh aaj raat theen-Aisha. Unke geele, surkh honthon par ek ajeeb, dheemi si muskaan phaili hui thi, ek raaz jise woh baar-baar apne zehen mein dohra rahi theen.

Unki ungliyan apne kaan tak gayin aur unhone heere ke tops ko aahista se nikala. Phir unke haath unki gardan par gaye. Unhone apni aankhein band kar lin, ek gehri saans li, aur apne sone ke haar ka pech khola. Jab haar unki gori skin se alag hua, toh ek pal ke liye uski jagah par ek halki si laal lakeer reh gayi.

"Ammi," maine aawaz ko normal rakhne ki koshish karte hue kaha. "Aap thaki nahi?"

Woh chaunki nahi. Sheeshe se hi mujhe dekhte hue unhone muskurakar jawab diya, "Thakan? Aaj toh bilkul nahi. Bohot din baad itna achha laga."

Unhone apni choodiyan utaarna shuru keen. Ek ek karke, sone ki choodiyan unki narm kalai se sarak rahi theen, aur unki 'khan-khan' ki awaaz kamre ki khamoshi mein ek sangeet ki tarah goonj rahi thi.

"Akram ke dost kaafi achhe the na?" unhone achanak kaha, unki awaaz mein ek bachchon jaisi utsukta thi.

Mera dil zor se dhadka. Main bas "Hmm" keh saka.

"Khaas kar woh... Vishal," unhone uska naam aise liya jaise woh koi meetha lafz ho. Woh meri taraf palteen, unki aankhein abhi bhi chamak rahi theen. "Kitna suljha hua aadmi hai. Aur baatein... aisi gehri baatein karta hai ki waqt ka pata hi nahi chalta."

Woh bata rahi theen, aur main sun raha tha. Par main sirf unke lafz nahi sun raha tha. Main unki badalti awaaz sun raha tha. Main unke chehre par aati laali dekh raha tha. Main unki aankhon mein woh khumaari dekh raha tha jo kisi ki yaadon se paida hoti hai.

"Keh raha tha Dilli ka shehar logon ko apna bana leta hai," unhone haste hue kaha, us flirty line ko ek masoom si, falsafey wali baat ki tarah pesh karte hue. "Bohot ajeeb hai na?"

Main kuch nahi bola. Main bas us aurat ko dekh raha tha jise main apni 'ammi' kehta tha. Woh aaj ek nayi aurat lag rahi thi. Ek aisi aurat jiske andar ek raaz tha, ek aisi khushi thi jiska hissa main nahi tha, mere abbu nahi the.

"Bada shareef aur tameezdaar laga mujhe," woh kehti chali gayin, apni hi dhun mein, yeh samjhe bina ki unka har lafz mere seene mein ek khanjar ki tarah utar raha tha. "Sahil? Sun rahe ho?"

"Haan, Ammi," maine aakhirkar kaha.

"Achha hai."

"Achha hi toh hai," unhone khush hokar kaha, jaise mere is chote se jawab ne unki har baat par mohar laga di ho. "Chalo, ab so jao. Kal Haldi hai, bohot kaam hoga."

Woh waapis dressing table ki taraf mud gayin, apne khayalon mein muskurate hue. Par main jaanta tha. Unki muskurahat Haldi ki taiyaariyon ke liye nahi thi. Woh us aadmi ke liye thi, jisne ek hi shaam mein meri maa ko phir se Aisha bana diya tha. Aur us raat, kamre ki us khamoshi mein, mujhe neend nahi aayi.

Bahot hi furshat se likhi hui story lag rahi hai
Aur ye update bahot achi thi
Magar mujhe ye samajh me nahi aayi ye sharabi rang kya hoti hai?
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(18-10-2025, 05:38 PM)Kacchi Kali Wrote: Ekdum sahi bat

Achi storyline batayi aapne
Aap khud hi ek story aisi likhiye mai zarur padhungi 
Jab likhoge to zaroor batana
Ummid hai ki aap shandar likhoge
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Itna bahetareen story bahot dino baad padhne lo mil rahi hai
Aaj hi start ki aur aaj hi padh kar khatam kar di
Jaise mai bhi is story se jud gayi hun
Ab ek pareshani hai ki mujhse intizar nahi hoti
Plsss jaldi jalid update dete rahena
Kahani jitni jaldi jaldi aage badhegi
Garmi bhi badti jayegi
Aur haan... Jaise likh rahe ho reality ke sath waisa hi likhte rahe to ye khanai sabse best kahani ban sakti hai
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Saima Khala ke lafz mere kaano mein ek teer ki tarah lage. "Abbu se baat karne gate ke pass gayi hai... network nahi aa raha tha." Yeh jhoot tha. Bilkul saaf, chikna jhoot. Ammi ne yeh bahana banaya hoga taake koi shaq na kare. Lekin main jaanta tha. Main sab jaanta tha.

Mera dil zoron se dhadak raha tha. Main Saima Khala ko sirf ek muskurahat de kar palat gaya, lekin andar se main toot raha tha. Main tezi se bheed ko cheerta hua gate ki taraf badha. Raat ki hawa thandi thi, lekin mere jism mein ek jalta hua bukhaar tha. Har qadam ke saath, mere dimaag mein woh chat ke lafz goonj rahe the: "Terrace par aa jao... sirf 5 minute... main aapke bahut kareeb hun."

Gate ke pass pahuncha to wahan Ammi nahi theen. Sirf ek-do watchman khade the, cigarette peete hue baatein kar rahe the. Unhone mujhe dekha aur muskuraye, lekin main unse kuch nahi poocha. Mujhe pata tha Ammi yahan nahi hongi. Yeh sirf bahana tha. Asli jagah to terrace theen.

Main ghar ki taraf dauda. Saima Khala ka ghar bada tha, do manzila, aur terrace oopar tha. Seedhiyan andheri theen, sirf ek chhoti si bulb ki roshni thi. Main ahista se oopar chadha, apne saans ko rok kar. Dil ki dhadkan itni tez thi ki lag raha tha jaise koi sun lega.

Terrace ka darwaza khula tha. Main ruk gaya, chhup kar dekha. Raat ka andhera tha, lekin shehar ki door ki lights se thodi roshni aa rahi thi. Wahan Ammi theen. Akeli. Apne phone ko haath mein pakde, idhar-udhar dekh rahi theen. Unka chehra... usmein ek ajeeb si bechaini thi, jaise kisi intezaar mein ho. Kaala suit ab raat ke andhere mein aur bhi gehra lag raha tha.

Phir, Peeche se ek awaaz aayi- "Aisha..."

Main sakht ho gaya. Yeh awaaz... wohi thi. Vishal ki.

Ammi palti. Unke chehre par ek muskurahat phail gayi.

"Vishal….."

Vishal saaye se nikal kar Ammi ke samne aake khada ho gaya. Usne Brown Tshirt aur blue jeans pahni hui thi. Tshirt uske chaude seene aur baazuon (arms) par bilkul kassi hui thi.Uska chehra... saaf tha, bilkul clean-shaved, lekin rangat gehri, saanwli thi. Uske sar par ghane kaale baal the, jo raat ki hawa mein thode bikhre hue the.Uske seedhe haath (right hand) ki kalaai par ek laal rang ka dhaaga bandha hua tha.

“Pagal ho gaye ho? Koi dekh leta to?” Ammi idhar-udhar dekhte huse boli.

“Koi nahi dekhega, don't worry” Vishal ne kaha.

“Itna confidence?” Ammi ne muskurate hue kaha.

“Sab log khaane mein busy hai…aur lawn ke upar to Mandap bhi bandha hua hai…” Usne kaha.

“Bahut smart ho tum….” Ammi boli.

"Aaj pata chala?..." Vishal ne muskurakar ek qadam aur aage badhaya.

Donon ke beech ka faasla ab bilkul khatam ho gaya tha. Chhat ki thandi, mand mand hawa... ab unke beech se guzarna band ho gayi thi.
Unke jismon ki garmi ne unke gird ek chota sa, garm, besabr dayra bana liya tha. Vishal itna qareeb tha ke Ammi uske jism ki mehak ... uske saanson ki garmi... apne chehre par mehsoos kar sakti theen.
Usne apna laal dhaage wala haath uthaaya aur Ammi ke chehre ki aur badhaya.Usne Ammi ke gaal ko chhoone ki koshish ki jahaan veil ka kapda khatm ho raha tha.
Lekin Ammi ekdum peechhe hat gayin. Jaise unhein achanak hosh aa gaya ho.

"Vishal... nahi," unhone kaanpti hui awaaz mein kaha. Main unki awaaz saaf sun sakta tha. "Yeh... yeh galat hai. Hum... humein aisa nahi karna chahiye."

Vishal ki muskurahat... ruk gayi. Uske chehre par ek pal ke liye sakhti aayi.

"Galat?" usne dheere se, awaaz mein ek coldness liye kaha. "Toh phir tum yahaan aayi hi kyun, Aisha?"
Isse pehle ke Ammi jawaab de paateen, usne furti se aage badh kar woh aakhiri, bacha-kucha faasla bhi mita diya. Aur fauran Usne apna mazbut hath ammi ki kamar par lohe ke phande ki tarah lapet kar unko apni aur ek jhatke se kheench liya. Uski garam hatheli ne unke kaale, chiffon ke kameez ke thande kapde par theen... aur kapde ke neeche... Aisha ke narm, garm jism ko mehsus kar rahi theen.
Ammi ki ek dabi hui "oof" ki awaaz nikli, jab unka seena uske sakht, kasrati jism se kuchal  gaya.



Aur phir, bina ek pal zaaya kiye, bina unhein saans lene ka mauqa diye, usne apna munh unke munh par daba diya.

Main wahin, darwaaze ki oatt (cover) mein, ek zinda laash ki tarah khada tha.Yeh ek hamla tha. Usne Ammi ke honthon ko... qabze mein le liya tha.

Ammi ne shayad yeh expect nahi kiya tha ki Vishal aisa karne ki Jurrat karega. Ammi ki aankhein phail gayin jaise unko koi shock laga ho. Unka poora jism, ek pal ke liye, uss achaanak hamle se akadd gaya tha.

Unhone apne mehndi-rache haath uthaaye aur unhein Vishal ke seene par, uss kassi hui brown T-shirt par rakha aur usse peeche dhakelne ki koshish karne lagi.

"Mmmph... nahi... ruko..." unki awaaz uss kiss mein hi dab kar, ek bebas gungunahat  ban kar reh gayi.

Lekin unka dhakelna bohot kamzor tha. Unki koshish mein zor nahi tha. Unki ungliyaan uske sakht seene par be-jaan si phisal rahi theen. Woh aadmi ek patthar ki tarah….hila tak nahi.

Vishal ne kiss nahi toda. Woh aur sakhti se, aur gehrai se Ammi ko choomne laga. Usne unke honthon ka poora zaayqa lete hue, unke nichle honth ko apne daanton mein halka sa... dabaaya.

Main wahin, darwaaze ki oatt (cover) mein, ek zinda laash ki tarah khada tha.
Dheere-dheere Ammi ke haathon ne usko dhakelna band kar diya tha jaise ke unhone haar maan li ho.Unka jism, jo ab tak uss hamle ke khilaaf akda hua tha, woh dheere dheere narm padne laga. Aur fir Jaise unke andar ki saari taaqat nikal gayi ho, Ammi uss aadmi ki baahon mein poori tarah pighal gayin.
Fir unka ek haath Vishal ke seene se dheere se oopar utha... aur uss aadmi ke kandhe ko sakhti se pakad liya. Unki mehndi-rachi ungliyaan uski brown T-shirt ke kapde ko jakad raheen theen.
Aur doosra haath uski gardan se hota hua uske ghane, kaale baalon mein ghus gaya.Unhone uske sar ko pakda aur usey apni taraf aur kheencha aur unki aankhein band ho gayi.
Fir woh, uss gair mard ke kiss ka response dene lagi ussi passion ke saath.Yeh ab ek hamla nahi tha. Yeh ek muqabla tha.Unke honth, jo ab tak uske neeche dabe hue the, ab... uske honthon ke khilaaf... jawaabi harkat karne lage. Unhone apna munh... thoda aur... khol diya.
Jaise hi Vishal ne unka yeh badlaav mehsoos kiya, uske halaq se ek halki, ghurraati hui awaaz nikli.
“Mmmmmph…..”
Usne kiss todne ke bajaaye, use aur gehra, aur geela kar diya.Unke honth ab ek doosre par be qaaboo ho kar phisal rahe the.
Woh gehra, maheen (muted berry) rang... woh lipstick jise Ammi ne aaine ke saamne itne ehtiyaat (care) se lagaya tha... ab poori tarah tabaah ho chuki thi.Rang... unke dono ke honthon se phisal kar, unke chehron par, unki thodi (chin) par... phail raha tha.
Main uss kiss ki awaazein sun sakta tha-ek narm, chap-chapaati  'smack' jab woh angle badalte. Vishal unhein pee  raha tha, uss lipstick ke meethay, waxy zaayqe ko mehsoos kar raha tha.
Vishal ne apne donon haath Ammi ki kamar par bandh liye aur unko apne jism se aur mazbuti se beench liya.
Ammi ke munh se ek halki si siskaari nikli -aahhh….jo kiss mein hi gum ho gayi.
Yeh ek daava tha. Ek nishaan tha.Ammi ne... uss dabao  ko mehsoos kiya. Unka jism ek pal ke liye kaanp gaya.
Main wahin khada raha. Main unki dabi hui 'aah' ki awaazein, unke jismon ke milne ki halki sarsaraahat... unke honthon ki chap-chapaahat... sab sun sakta tha.
Mera dimaag phatne waala tha. Woh Biryani, woh kebab, jo main washroom mein ugal (vomit) chuka tha, uska tezaabi (acidic) zaayqa mere munh mein waapis aa gaya.
Vishal aur Ammi ek dusre ko bahut hi shiddat ke sath kiss kar rahe the.Meri pakiza aur ba parda ma ab bilkul hi besharm ho gayi theen. Ammi ka yeh roop maine kabhi sapnon mein bhi nahi socha tha.
Phir... achaanak... Vishal ruk gaya.Usne kiss ko toda. Dono... haanp rahe the. Unke maathe ab bhi ek doosre se jude hue the. Unki bhaari, garm saansein uss thandi hawa mein mil rahi theen.
Ammi ki aankhein ab bhi band theen, unka jism abhi tak uss passion se kaanp raha tha.
"Tum..." Vishal ne ek khurduri, haanpti hui awaaz mein kaha. Uska angutha Ammi ke soojay hue, lipstick se sane honthon ke kone par phira. "...Tumhara taste..."
Ammi ne dheere se apni aankhein kholeen. Unki nigaahon mein ab bhi ek... nasha tha. "Tumhare liye hi tha..." unhone siskaari lete hue kaha.
"Tumhein andaaza hai," Vishal ne unke kaan ke paas sarsaraate hue kaha, uska haath ab bhi unki kamar ko sakhti se pakde hue tha, "tum mere saath kya kar rahi ho?"
Ammi ke honthon par ek halki si, muskurahat aayi. "Wahi... jo tum mere saath kar rahe ho..."
Vishal ke halaq se ek halki ghurraahat nikli. "Nahi. Tumhein nahi pata."
Usne apne haath se Ammi ki thodi (chin) ko pakad liya. Uski ungliyaan uss kaale veil ke kapde par phireen, jo unke chehre aur uske beech... aakhiri parda tha.
"Yeh..." usne dheemi, gusse waali awaaz mein kaha. "Yeh ab bardaasht nahi ho raha."
Ammi ke chehre se woh nasha... ekdum... gaayab ho gaya. Unhein hosh aa gaya. "Vishal... nahi... please..." unhone kaanpte hue kaha. "Hum chhat par hain..."
"Shhh," usne kaha.
Usne unki thodi (chin) ko sakhti se pakde rakha... aur apni doosri ungliyon se... uss kapde ke neeche... uss choti si, metal ki... pin ko... dhoondh liya.
"Nahi!" Ammi ne ab saaf awaaz mein inkaar kiya.
Lekin Vishal ne unki ek nahi suni. Usne pin ko... ek jhatke se... kheench kar nikaal diya.
Pin... 'tikk' ki halki si awaaz ke saath, chhat ke andhere farsh par gir gayi.
"Vishal!"
Isse pehle ke Ammi aur kuch keh paateen, Vishal ne Ammi ke veil ka khula hua sira pakda use kheenchne ki koshish ki. Woh uss kaale parde ko... unke chehre se... unke baalon se... noch dena chahta tha.
Kapda unke gaalon se aur unke maathe se... peeche sarakne laga... Ammi ka jooda ab aadha khul chuka tha...
Tabhi...Neeche ek tez, saaf awaaz aayi.
"AISSHHHAAAA!"
Yeh Saima Khala ki awaaz thi.Ek pal ke liye, chhat par sab kuch... jam gaya.
Ammi ki aankhein... dahshat (terror) mein phail gayeen. Unhone Vishal ko poori taaqat se... dhakka dete hue kaha -”Hato….”
Is baar, Vishal, jo is hamle ke liye taiyaar nahi tha, woh... peechhe hat gaya. "Fuck," usne dheere se kaha.
"Shit! Shit!" Ammi ki awaaz ab kaanp rahi thi.
"AISHA! Fahadbhai ka phone khatam hua ke nahi? Kahaan reh gayi tum?" Saima Khala ki awaaz ab qareeb lag rahi thi, jaise woh ghar ke andar lobby mein aa gayi hon.
"Main... main aa rahi hoon!" Ammi ne oopar se hi, kaanpti hui awaaz mein chilla kar jawaab diya. Unhone jaldbaazi mein apne veil ko dhoondha. Woh unke kandhon par ek be-tarteeb (messy) dher ki tarah latak raha tha. Unke baal... unke jooday se nikal kar... unke chehre par aa gaye the.
Unhone apne honthon ko... apni aasteen se... be-dardi jaldi jaldi ragda.
"Pin... meri pin..." woh andhere farsh par tatolne lageen.
"Chhodo pin ko!" Vishal ne gusse se, andhere se, sarsaraate hue kaha. "Bas lapet lo! Jao!"
"AISHA!" Saima Khala ki awaaz ab seedhiyon ke paas se aa rahi thi. Woh oopar aa rahi theen.
Ab koi waqt nahi tha.
"Main jaa raha hoon," Vishal ne tezi se kaha. "Peechhe se." Woh paani ki tankiyon ke peechhe, uss taraf bhaaga jahaan se woh aaya tha... aur saayon mein gayab ho gaya.
Ammi ne veil ko jaldbaazi mein uthaaya... usey apne khule hue baalon par... apne chehre aur gardan ke gird... buri tarah lapeta... Aur ek haath se... uss kapde ko... apni thodi (chin) ke neeche... sakhti se... pakad liya.
Woh tezi se chhat ke darwaaze ki taraf lapkeen. Ussi darwaaze ki taraf, jahaan main chhupa hua tha.
Mere paas hilne ka waqt nahi tha.Darwaaza ek jhatke se poora khula.Main andhere mein, deewar se bilkul chipak gaya.
Luckily,Ammi ne mujhe nahi dekha. Unki aankhein dahshat mein phaili hui theen. Woh haanp rahi theen. Unke honth... soojay  hue aur rangeen the. Aur unke jism se... ...Vishal ke mehnge cologne... aur unke apne perfume ki... mili-juli... ek ghinoni, jismaani mehak... aa rahi thi.
Woh mere saamne se... mere jism se bas ek inch ke faasle se... guzarti hui seedhiyon mein utar gayin.
"Aayi Saima! Aayi!" unki kaanpti hui, jhooti awaaz neeche jaate hue doob gayi. "Woh... signal... signal bohot kharaab tha!"
Main wahin khada reh gaya. Us anjaan mard ke jism ki mehak... ab meri Ammi ki mehak thi.
Chhat par ab main akela tha.Aur uss andhere farsh par, street light ki halki si roshni mein... ek choti si, kaali cheez chamak rahi thi.
Ammi ka veil pin.
Mera haath kaanp raha tha. Main jhuka aur usey utha liya. Dhaat (metal) thandi thi. Lekin meri ungliyon ko aisa laga jaise maine ek jalte hue koyle ko chhoo liya ho.
Yeh pin. Jise subah unhone apni thodi (chin) ke neeche lagaaya tha. Ek taale ki tarah. Ek 'click' ki awaaz.
Sab jhoot tha.
Maine pin ko apni mutthi mein sakhti se band kar liya. Uska tez, nukeela sira meri hatheli mein chubh gaya. Ek tez dard utha.Aur uss dard ne mujhe hosh mein laaya.
Main ab aur ek second bhi wahaan nahi ruk sakta tha. Main uss jagah par khada tha jahaan meri Ammi...
Main palta aur tezi se uss darwaaze ki taraf badha jisse Ammi bhaagi theen. Maine darwaaza khola.
Seedhiyon mein ab bhi wahi mehak phansi hui thi. Vishal ka cologne aur Ammi ka perfume. Wahi ghinoni mehak.
Mera pait phir se ubal pada, lekin ab ugalne (vomit) ke liye kuch bacha nahi tha. Maine apne munh par haath rakha aur neeche utarne laga. Main bhaag raha tha.
Har qadam ek azaab tha.
Jaise-jaise main neeche utar raha tha, party ka shor tez hota jaa raha tha. Music... logon ki hansi... chamchon ki awaaz...
Main aakhiri seedhi par pahuncha aur ghar ki lobby mein qadam rakha. Roshni meri aankhon mein chubhi. Main bheed mein waapis nahi jaa sakta tha. Nahi. Abhi nahi.
Maine lawn ki taraf nahi dekha. Maine apni Nani ko nahi dhoondha. Main lobby se hota hua, seedha apne kamre ki taraf bhaaga. Mujhe yahaan se nikalna tha. Mujhe iss jhooti, ghinoni party se... iss aurat se... door jaana tha.
Main apne kamre mein ghusa aur darwaaza band kar diya.
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Nice update
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