[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[sushilt20]

Shandaar update and nice story

[sexypreeti]

Fantastic way to turn the story and bring together so many characters too... Superb 

[vishuhrny97]

very very nice story. your are the one who make worth visiting this place.

[भाभी जी]

बहुत सुंदर विवरण...

अपडेट के लिए धन्यवाद । आगे लिखते रहिए...

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Salma Khan]

Atul ka pura ek update ho gaya please ab Atul ke bare me mat puhhna, bahut comments aa rahe the Atul ka kya hua? Atul ko ek nayi Disha mil gayi apni new life start karne ke liye.

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Kamukta]

Hello Sriya Madam, I read your story and I would say it's too good.
But sometime it feels like you are behaving like Tele drama director, who stretches the stroy unnecessarily.
I mean it's an adult story and that's why there should not be place of a college girl admission bcoz it doesn't make any sensee with the story and it's been more than 8 to 10 update Supriya has not been fucked by anyone, I mean it's not a serial drama.
Till Vikram, till mike seduction it was ok but as Isha called Her husband before getting marriage with Supriya from that point story has completely changed which was not much needed in the story.
And Iqbal has not fucked Supriya till today, it's unbelievable bcoz he is the only character who has a impressive cock and Supriya should have been addicted to his fuck but aapne Iqbal ki story ko bilkul innocent dikha diya.
I think story has been little bit offbeat now and you are introducing more nad more character which has not needed now bcoz you have already introduced more than required character.
I hope you won't mind my honest opinion but there should be emotional blackmail and a kind of lust in most of the update.
Rest is Ok and Love you due respect to you and to your art.
Thanks.

[Kamukta]

@Sriya Madam
I would like to give you a suggestion regarding discussion of the story and for providing ideas, please make a telegram channel so that most of your readers get easy access to discuss and share there opinion.
I hope it would be a good initiative for your readers from your side.
Please give your opinion guys.
Thanks

[sexypreeti]

@Sriya Madam
I would like to give you a suggestion regarding discussion of the story and for providing ideas, please make a telegram channel so that most of your readers get easy access to discuss and share there opinion.
I hope it would be a good initiative for your readers from your side.
Please give your opinion guys.
Thanks

Please give the writer freedom to present what he/she has in mind by way of their stories. We have already seen the consequences of "suggestions" being shared in the past 

[Salma Khan]

Lagta hai Supriya ab Hina ke college me job karegi tabhi Hina ke college admission ka update aaya tha foundation ke liye

[Kamukta]

Please give the writer freedom to present what he/she has in mind by way of their stories. We have already seen the consequences of "suggestions" being shared in the past 

I agree with your point brother but I was just sharing my honest thought to our lovely writer, I am not saying to follow my suggestion and all, it's totally upto writer how he/she has to narrate the story brother. 

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[cooldood1723]

Hello Sriya Madam, I read your story and I would say it's too good.
But sometime it feels like you are behaving like Tele drama director, who stretches the stroy unnecessarily.
I mean it's an adult story and that's why there should not be place of a college girl admission bcoz it doesn't make any sensee with the story and it's been more than 8 to 10 update Supriya has not been fucked by anyone, I mean it's not a serial drama.
Till Vikram, till mike seduction it was ok but as Isha called Her husband before getting marriage with Supriya from that point story has completely changed which was not much needed in the story.
And Iqbal has not fucked Supriya till today, it's unbelievable bcoz he is the only character who has a impressive cock and Supriya should have been addicted to his fuck but aapne Iqbal ki story ko bilkul innocent dikha diya.
I think story has been little bit offbeat now and you are introducing more nad more character which has not needed now bcoz you have already introduced more than required character.
I hope you won't mind my honest opinion but there should be emotional blackmail and a kind of lust in most of the update.
Rest is Ok and Love you due respect to you and to your art.
Thanks.

Absolutely right!!, Even I too pointed out earlier since seperation from Vikram the story has a lot of unnecessary characters, it has become more kind of dailyshop instead of an erotic story.. However still it's one of the best story at platform. But at the same time story had no sex episode since long time!! Hope to read sex seen asap

[Mrs_Pooja]

Eagerly Waiting for supriya and iqbal sex

[Salma Khan]

Waiting for next updates

[HBK♡♡]

Finely Atul ko sahi Disha mil gayi means Atul ka chapter closed ab main focus Supriya pe hoga, lagta hai Iqbal ke anadar Supriya ke liye behen waali feelings hai tabhi aaj tak kuch nahi kiya

[HBK♡♡]

Waiting for big hot updates

[Shahid Khan]

Iqbal se bada badnaseeb is duniya me koyi nahi hoga sab kuch haath me hote hue bhi kuch nahi kar raha hai. Rahul and Vikram to bina shaadi kiye hi suhagraat ke maze loot liye Supriya ke sath, Iqbal shaadi ke baad bhi kuch haasil nahi kar saka aaj tak, Iqbal ka Lund and dimag dono gadhe jaise hai. Hina ka kuch hoga kya jayda hi highlighted ho rahi hai? Zabardast story.

[Shahid Khan]

Ummed karte hain next updates garm dogi, Sriya Ji lagta hai sex scene likhne me uncomfortable feel karti ho tabhi sex scene etne kam diye hain.