[Abhijeet-2442]

Update bhai

[Abhijeet-2442]

Diwali dhamaka de do

[TheGirl]

My wife how is she??

Her boobies are bigger compared to me ?...
M jealous.... ,?

[DarkLordLover2]

Yar please guys writer ko support karo. Bas padke nikla jate ho. Like karo. Comment karo. Aise writer ko demotivate mat karo. Aise toh story band honi hi hai. Main khud Apni story isliye nahi likhta kyuki log padte hai aur nikal jate hai. Na like na comments na appreciation. Aise me kisi bhi writer ka likhne ka maan nahi karta. Har writer se puccho usne story Kyu band ki.. please guys support this wonderful story. Agar Ravi bhai ka   Motivation gira aur unhone story likhna band kardi. Toh you all will regret.  I can't say anything more than this. As a writer myself it's really sad.. is tariqe se agar ye story band bhi ho jati hai. Toh mujhe koi surprising nahi lagega.. so now it's all on you. Agar aise hi Nina like aur comments . Bina appreciation pata nahi writer kab Tak is story ko agge Bada payega.. that's all from my side..


Dusri site pe toh Ravi bahi ki har update ke likes 100 ya 150 paar pohoch jate the.. and yaha 50 nahi pohoch paa rahe. Really disappointed from u guys..

[Mis Khan]

waho hot hot update hai yar

[Kore shivkant]

When will be the next update???? Story is really great don't stop.....continue with the story....

[Milfloverravii(Sid kidoo)]

Guy's main is story se thoda break le Raha hun. Waisebhi ispe koi khas response nahi mil Raha. Jabtak ispe much positive response nahi milta tab Tak main baki ki dono story pe focus Karunga.. tohh milte hai dusri stories pee. Till than Byeeee..

[Rocksanna999]

Story is awesome. Going in nice track bro. Taking break at this time will be wrong step for this story because after some time you may lose current readers also. I personally feel you should continue your updates. And take pause during her daughter seen.

[devil_9584]

Are full chudai wala to update de do or late karoge to jitne reader hai wo bhi chalegi jayege update dete jao likes automatically badhte jayege

[red_devil_98]

Aise hi register accounts wale user jo padh kar comments karte hai kam hai bina accounts wale readers ke jisse likes aur comment nai aa rahe hai story par aur upar se tum break le rahe ho writer bhai jisse readers ka aur interest kam ho jayega, isiliye please request karta hu ki story ko continue karo nai toh baad mein shayad tum hi na boldo ki ab interest nai aa raha hai story likhne mein isiliye ab story closed ho rahi hai

Aur agar jyada busy ho toh kamse kam ek clean break dedo story ko part 1 bol kar ki story next part kuch time ke baad shuru hoga...pls itna kardo warna itni acchi story ke updates ka intezar rahta hai roj....

[Scared Cat]

Sir ji eagerly waiting for suhagraat special programme as Asma should get rewarded after completing brat

[devil_9584]

Sir ji eagerly waiting for suhagraat special programme as Asma should get rewarded after completing brat

Are iska yahi natak hai kabhi isne koi story complete nahi ki  khud hi late update deta hai public bol bol kar thak gyi update do but time par update nhi dega to likes to kam aayege hi jitne bache reader wo bhi chale jayege agr or late update diye

[devil_9584]

Are iska yahi natak hai kabhi isne koi story complete nahi ki  khud hi late update deta hai public bol bol kar thak gyi update do but time par update nhi dega to likes to kam aayege hi jitne bache reader wo bhi chale jayege agr or late update diye

Likhkar le lo 100% ye story complete nahi karega. Itna late update doge jo bache reader hai wo bhi chale jayege baaki story me isly likes jada aate hai kyuki wo time par update dete rahte hai ek yahi bus hai jisko update ke liye bolna padta hai fir bhi update nhi deta hai

[thesubhunk]

Guy's main is story se thoda break le Raha hun. Waisebhi ispe koi khas response nahi mil Raha. Jabtak ispe much positive response nahi milta tab Tak main baki ki dono story pe focus Karunga.. tohh milte hai dusri stories pee. Till than Byeeee..

[spa_jack]

Are iska yahi natak hai kabhi isne koi story complete nahi ki  khud hi late update deta hai public bol bol kar thak gyi update do but time par update nhi dega to likes to kam aayege hi jitne bache reader wo bhi chale jayege agr or late update diye

Sadly, looks like you are correct.

[thesubhunk]

You are a brilliant writer

[Vnice]

Jyada bhav mat kha

[Mis Khan]

waiting new update

[Abhijeet-2442]

Ye shuru se hi bahut bada backchod hai aur ek user ne pehle hi bol diya tha to saale ko bahut mirchi lagi thi

[Batni123]

My most wonderful writer… No doubt you are excellent writer… i think because of lack of comments but after each update of yours there is 1.5 pages or sometimes 2 pages of comments I hardly see this it clearly shows how much people like ur writing please keep updating this story otherwise you will give wrong impression to your supporters and fans plus its wrong for ur image also… plz don’t stop this post… I have send you private messages also which u don’t reply if you get time respond to them I will let you down its a promise