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Adultery Ammi aur uncle
#61
Extraordinary writing skills
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#62
Just superb and absolutely mind blowing writing. Please post the next update soon. And please apply slow and steady seduction method by Vishal.
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#63
Ekdum mast aur kamaal ka update. Bahut bahut achi writing ✍️
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#64
(18-10-2025, 12:34 PM)Lalu Mastan Wrote: Absolutely wonderful and stunning writing. Just superb and blockbuster update. Very nice build up. Great going buddy. Please let there be extreme slow and steady seduction and double meaning naughty conversations. Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Let ammijan have great resistance while Vishal will be seducing her. Please let the son watch his pakiza ammijan's illicit and forbidden affairs with another man of opposite majab secretly and let him enjoy unexpected, unwanted, illicit and forbidden sexual excitement and eroticism by observing his pakiza and majabi ammijan's infidelity and cheating on her loving husband. Please don't let Vishal and ammijan to know it that the son is aware of their illicit and forbidden affairs. Let Vishal compel this pakiza ammijan to give him her WhatsApp number and let the son to install spy software in his loving Ammijan's smartphone so that he can read and watch the texts massages and video calls of his ammijan's and Vishal when they will secretly having illicit and forbidden affairs and the son will also be able to track his loving Ammijan's location when she will go out home to meet her illicit lover secretly.

Yes, agree with you
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#65
Bahut badhiya kahaani hai yah! Bahut bahut mast writing.
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#66
Good story,just keep it up
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#67
Wonderful and brilliant writing
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#68
Very good writing ✍️
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#69
Lalu MastanAbsolutely wonderful and stunning writing. Just superb and blockbuster update. Very nice build up. Great going buddy. Please let there be extreme slow and steady seduction and double meaning naughty conversations. Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Let ammijan have great resistance while Vishal will be seducing her. Please let the son watch his pakiza ammijan's illicit and forbidden affairs with another man of opposite majab secretly and let him enjoy unexpected, unwanted, illicit and forbidden sexual excitement and eroticism by observing his pakiza and majabi ammijan's infidelity and cheating on her loving husband. Please don't let Vishal and ammijan to know it that the son is aware of their illicit and forbidden affairs. Let Vishal compel this pakiza ammijan to give him her WhatsApp number and let the son to install spy software in his loving Ammijan's smartphone so that he can read and watch the texts massages and video calls of his ammijan's and Vishal when they will secretly having illicit and forbidden affairs and the son will also be able to track his loving Ammijan's location when she will go out home to meet her illicit lover secretly.    




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#70
Terrific and interesting writing ✍️
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#71
Wonderful and lovely update
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#72
Outstanding and absolutely outclass writing ✍️
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#73
Awesome update. Really wonderful and beautiful writing.
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#74
Absolutely high quality writing skills. Please post the next update.
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#75
Great start. Amazing and mesmerising writing.
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#76
Raat ka nasha subah ki thaki hui roshni mein ghul chuka tha. Main shayad soya hi nahi tha. Kamre mein subah ki pehli kiran jab parda cheer kar andar aayi, toh maine aankhein kholi.
Ammi mere bagal wale bed par nahi theen. Woh kamre mein aaine ke saamne khadi theen, unki peeth meri taraf thi. Aaine mein unka chehra saaf dikh raha tha, aur unka poora dhyaan apne hothon par tha. Woh ek chote se brush se apne hothon par chamakta hua lip gloss laga rahi theen. Unhone apne hothon ko thoda sa 'O' shape mein banakar gloss lagaya aur phir unhe aapas mein dabakar phailaya.

Woh haldi ke liye taiyaar theen. Unhone ek khoobsurat, basanti peele rang ka georgette ka suit pehna hua tha. Kameez halki thi, jispar safed chikankari ka kaam tha. Kameez unki kamar par kasi hui thi aur neeche unke hips ke gird ek nazakat se phail jaati thi.
Unka georgette ka dupatta unke kandhon par laaparwahi se tika hua tha. Uski na to koi pin lagi thi, na hi koi teh jami hui thi; bas woh unke jism ki harqat ke saath lehra raha tha. Dupatte ka ek chhor unki peeth par neeche tak jaa raha tha, aur doosra unke seene ke upar se hota hua unke haath tak. Jab woh lip gloss lagane ke liye thoda aage jhukin, to dupatta kandhe se halka sa sarka, unki gori, mulayam collarbone aur kandhe ki golai ko be-parda kar gaya.
Unka dupatta unke seene par aise ikattha tha ki unki dono chhaatiyan uss kapde ke neeche se aur bhi bhari hui aur gol lag rahi theen.Georgette ki kameez unki bra ki cup-line ko halke se highlight kar rahi thi.
Unhone apne geele baalon ka jooda banaya hua tha, jisse paani ki kuch boondein unki gardan par phisal rahi theen. Jude mein laga taaza mogre ka gajra, unke badan se aa rahi sabun aur ittr ki mehek mein milkar ek nasheela khushboo bana raha tha. Kaano mein sone ki jhumkiyan, gale mein ek patli si chain aur haathon mein kaanch ki peeli-hari choodiyan. Woh behad taaza ,bheegi hui aur qatil lag rahi theen.
Unhe is tarah dekh kar, kal raat ka saara shak dhuaan ban kar ud gaya. Yeh meri Ammi nahi theen; yeh ek aurat thi, poori ki poori, jise main aaj pehli baar dekh raha tha. Vishal kya, koi bhi unhe dekhta toh deewaana ho jaata. Yeh soch mere seene se bojh bankar nahi, balki ek ajeeb si garmahat bankar uthi, jo mere poore badan mein phail gayi.
Woh aaine mein mera aks dekh kar palteen, unke hothon par ek gehri muskaan thi. "Uth gaya, Sahil? Aise kya ghoor raha hai?"
Main hadbada kar uth baitha. "Sorry, Ammi… woh… aap..." Alfaaz mere gale mein hi phans gaye.
"Main kya?" unhone apni ek eyebrow uthaate hue poocha. Unki awaaz mein wahi roz ki mamta thi, lekin aaj usmein ek alag si khanak thi, ek shararat. "Bahut achi lag rahi hoon?"
"Aap... qayamat lag rahi hain," lafz mere munh se phisal gaye.
Yeh sunkar unke gaal laal ho gaye. Woh sach mein sharma gayin. "Badmaash. Chal, maska mat laga. Sab mehmaan neeche intezaar kar rahe hain. Jaldi se naha le."
Main bas haan mein sar hila saka.
"Aur sun," woh mere bed ke paas aakar, thoda jhuki. Unke gajre aur unke jism ki mehek ne mujhe ghair liya. "Tu bhi woh peele rang ka kurta pahan lena." woh kehti hui kamre se bahar nikal gayin.
Main taiyaar hokar neeche, aangan ki taraf badha. Dholak ki thaap aur auraton ke gaane ki awaaz tez ho rahi thi. Aangan ko gende ke phoolon se sajaya gaya tha. Har taraf peela rang bikhra hua tha. Par meri nigaahein bas ek hi chehre ko dhoondh rahi theen.
Aur phir woh mujhe dikheen.
Woh dulhan ke paas baithi theen, unke haath mein haldi ki katori thi. Woh hans rahi theen, kisi baat par unhone dulhan ki naak par shararat se haldi laga di. Unka chehra khushi se tamtama raha tha. Is bheed mein woh sabse alag, sabse haseen lag rahi theen.
Wahin par meri Nani khadi theen, naukar ko kuch samjha rahi theen. Unhone mujhe dekhte hi apne paas bulaya.
"Sahil! Idhar aa. Subah se dekh rahi hoon, kuch khaya hai ya bas hawa mein hi ud raha hai?" unki awaaz mein wahi hamesha wali fikr thi.
"Nahi Nani, bas abhi..."
"Bas bas, rehne de," unhone meri baat kaat di. "Chal baith yahan." Unhone khud ek plate mein garma-garam poori aur aloo ki sabzi rakhi. "Yeh le, chup chaap khatam kar."
Main unki baat taal nahi saka aur ek kursi par baith gaya. Main nashta kar hi raha tha ki ek saaya mere upar jhuka.
"Kya baat hai, Sahil ! Bade handsome lag rahe ho peele kurte mein," ek jaani pechani awaaz aayi.
Maine palat kar dekha. Vishal. Woh bhi ek peela kurta pehne hue tha. Lekin woh akela nahi tha. Uske saath do auratein theen jinke haath mein khoobsurat sajayi hui thaaliyan theen, jinpar peele resham ke kapde dhake the.
"Aap yahan?" main thoda hairat se poocha.
"Main toh dulhe ka dost hoon. Akram ki taraf se shagun ki haldi lekar aaya hoon," usne muskuraate hue kaha.
"Waise, teri Ammi kahan hain?"
Uske munh se 'Teri Ammi' sunna mujhe ajeeb sa laga. Jaise yeh uske liye bas ek naam tha,jabki mere liye woh meri poori duniya theen, aur ab... ek uljhan bhi.
"Woh... wahin hain, dulhan ke paas," maine door ishara karte hue kaha.
Vishal ki nazar mere ishare ke saath uss taraf ghoomi, aur Ammi ko dekhte hi uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak aa gayi. "Accha... toh Aisha ji wahan hain," usne dheere se kaha, jaise khud se baat kar raha ho.
"Main bas Aisha ji ko haldi dekar aata hoon," woh yeh kehta hua Ammi ki taraf chal diya. Aur main wahin kursi par baitha, apne haath mein poori ka niwala liye, use dekhta raha. Ek anjaan aadmi, jo ab anjaan nahi lag raha tha, meri Ammi ki taraf jaa raha tha, ek barabari ke haq se.
Plate mein rakha poori ka niwala wahin chhod kar ek jhatke se main khada hua, Nani ki awaaz 'Arre kya hua?' peeche kahin dab kar reh gayi. Main tezi se uske peeche chal pada.
Mera har kadam dholak ki badhti hui thaap ke saath uth raha tha. Log, gaane, phoolon ki mehek, kuch bhi mujhe mehsoos nahi ho raha tha. Meri aankhein bas do logon par tiki theen - Vishal ki chaudi peeth, aur uske aage, bheed mein chaand ki tarah chamakti meri Ammi.
Vishal Ammi ke paas seedha nahi gaya. Woh jaakar unse thodi door khada ho gaya, jabki uske saath aayi do auratein aage badhin. Main bhi unke peeche khada ho gaya, jahan se main sab saaf saaf dekh sakta tha.
Ek adhed umr ki aurat, jo shaayad dulhe ki chachi ya tai theen, aage badhin. "Aisha beti, hum Akram ki taraf se shagun ki haldi laaye hain."
Ammi, jo dulhan se hans kar kuch keh rahi theen, unki awaaz sunkar palteen. Unke chehre par ek mehmaan-nawaz muskaan aa gayi. "Aaiye, aaiye, Chachi-ji. Hum aapka hi intezaar kar rahe the," unhone uthte hue kaha. Unki nigahein ek pal ke liye peeche khade Vishal par gayin aur phir foran hatt gayin.
Vishal wahin khada raha, uske haath uske kurte ki jeb mein the, aur uski nigahein Ammi par gadi hui theen. Woh unhe is tarah dekh raha tha jaise bheed mein aur koi ho hi na. Besharmi se. Haq se.
Auratein rasam poori kar rahi theen. Haldi ki katori ek haath se doosre haath mein di jaa rahi thi. Dholak baj rahi thi. Geet gaaye ja rahe the. Lekin uss shor mein, ek khamosh khel chal raha tha.
Ammi aise anjaan ban rahi theen jaise unhe Vishal ki nazron ka ehsaas hi na ho. Woh chachi-ji se hans hans kar baatein kar rahi theen, lekin main dekh sakta tha ki unke saans lene ki raftaar thodi tez ho gayi thi. Unke gaalon par ek halki si laali daud gayi thi, jise woh apne bikhre hue baalon ki laton ke peeche chupaane ki koshish kar rahi theen.
Rasam ke taur par, Ammi ne katori se thodi si haldi apni ungliyon par li. Dulhan ne sharma kar apni baahein aage keen. Haldi lagane ke liye Ammi ko thoda aage jhukna pada. Auratein unke gird ghera banaye khadi theen, lekin Vishal theek saamne, uss ghere ke peeche khada tha.
Jaise hi Ammi aage jhukeen, unke seene par saleeqe se rakha dupatta apni jagah se phisal gaya. Shayad jhukne ka angle theek nahi tha, ya shayad yeh bhi ussi khel ka hissa tha. Dupatta sarak kar unke seene ke beech mein aa gaya, unki georgette ki kameez ke gale ko poori tarah benaqaab karte hue.
Kameez ka gala zyada gehra nahi tha, lekin unke jhukne se unki thodi si cleavage saaf nazar aane lagi. Woh gori, narm twacha ki lakeer kameez ke andar jaakar kahin kho rahi thi. Aur uss lakeer ke theek upar, unke safed, lace wale bra ka kinara halka sa jhaank raha tha. Ek mamooli si jhalak, lekin uss bheed aur shor mein, woh ek raaz ki tarah thi jo sirf dekhne wale ke liye khuli thi.
Maine dekha ki Vishal ne apne honth danton tale daba liye. Uski aankhein uss jhalak par jam si gayin theen. Uske chehre par ek aisi muskurahat phail gayi jo keh rahi thi ki use wahi mil gaya hai jiska woh intezaar kar raha tha.
Ammi ne dulhan ki baanhon par haldi mal di, aur phir, bahut dheere se, jaise unhe koi jaldi na ho, woh seedhi hueen. Unhone dupatte ko ek jhatka nahi diya. Badi nazakat se, ek-ek karke uski silwatein theek keen, aur use wapas apne seene par is tarah set kiya ki sab kuch dhak gaya.
Unhone ek baar bhi Vishal ki taraf nahi dekha. Lekin unhe dekhne ki zaroorat hi nahi thi. Unhe pata tha ki woh dekh raha hai.
Ammi ne apni peeli ungliyon ko dekha aur muskurakar peeche hatt gayin, Chachiji ko aage aane ka ishara karte hue. Ab dulhe ki Chachiji aur doosri auratein aage badh aayin aur bari-bari se dulhan ko haldi lagane lageen. Rasam jaari thi, dholak aur gaano ka shor aur badh gaya tha.
Ammi ab rasam ke ghere se bahar aakar, kinaare par khadi auraton ke jhund mein shaamil ho gayin. Woh ek rishtedaar se hans kar baat kar rahi theen. Unka rukh abhi bhi ussi taraf tha jahan Vishal khada tha. Aur Vishal abhi bhi wahin tha, jaise zameen se jud gaya ho. Uski nigahein Ammi par ek shikari ki tarah tiki theen.
Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Aur aakhirkaar, Ammi ne uski taraf dekha.
Is baar unhone nazrein nahi churayin. Bheed aur shor ke beech, un dono ne ek khamosh angaan bana liya tha. Maine dekha, Vishal ne dheere se apni ek eyebrow uthayi. Ek khamosh sawaal. 'Yeh jo abhi dupatta gira... yeh mere liye tha, na?'
Ammi ki aankhein ek pal ke liye hairat se phailin. Unhone ek chota sa, na manne wala ishara kiya, lekin unke hothon ke kone par dabi hui muskurahat unka jhoot pakad rahi thi.
Ussi muskurahat ko dekh kar Vishal ke chehre par jeet ki chamak aa gayi. Uske honth hile. Bina awaaz ke, usne har lafz ko aahista se tarasha.
"Mast"
Ammi ne ek tez saans andar kheenchi, jo unki saheli se ki ja rahi baat ke beech mein hi atak gayi. Unki ek haath ki mutthi kas gayi, aur doosra haath anjaane mein unke dil par chala gaya, jaise uski dhadkan ko kaboo karne ki koshish kar rahi hon. Laali ki ek gehri lehar unke gaalon se hoti hui unki gardan tak utar aayi. Unhone foran apni nazrein Vishal se hata lin, jaise uss lafz ki aag unhe jhulsa degi.
Lekin isse pehle ki woh poori tarah palat teen, unhone apne angoothe se apne neeche wale honth ko bahut dheere se, ek lambe, soch samajh kar kiye gaye andaaz mein chhua. Yeh ek halka ishara tha, lekin isme ek poori kahani thi. Ek iqraar tha.
Uss doori se, Vishal ne isse zaroor dekha hoga. Woh uske lafz ka jawab tha. Uske chehre par ek muskurahat phaili.
Mera mann kiya ki main cheekh padun, jaakar Vishal ka girebaan pakad loon. Lekin main bas wahan khada, apni hi bebasi par jal raha tha.
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#77
This story is boring, there is no description of how her breasts or her big ass looks like. Because of this, the story lacks enthusiasm.
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#78
Awesome ❤❤❤❤❤
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#79
Terrific and thrilling update
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#80
Bahut bahut shandar aur jabardast update. eisa hi ishara inghit mein double meaning batcheets jari rakiya yaar.
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