[redarc]

wah wah yeh to bahot hi badhiya mast update hai... mujhe to lagta hai ye iqbal vikram se sauda kar aya hai ki mujhe mahine ke lakh 2 lakh dete rahna aur supriya ko main sambhaal loonga

[sexypreeti]

Preeti - yes I acknowledge your feedback. If I had more time I would have done it slightly differently. But I was running out of time and people were getting impatient as well. I was constantly asked ki 10-15 update ho gaye hai without sex, lets get it done. With festival season time will be very short and I didnt want people to lose interest in the story with an update every 1-2 weeks. It was a bit sudden but I will try to fix some of it in future updates, but what is done is done.

I am ok with it being a dream sequence as well and we get back to the old slow pace once again. I want to also write about other characters in this story so please dont lose interest.

Edit - Actually yes, I will mark it as a dream sequence as the last 2 updates do not align with how I was writing the story. Apologies if this change will upset someone, but hopefully also gave some erotic scenes without disrupting the story. They will also make Supriya think about things she hasnt thought about so far.

Thanks for your reply Sriya, Yes the festival season is round the corner so we are all aware that taking time out to write will be a big challenge... Dont worry we will patiently wait...

And for those few who constantly keep asking for updates, just ignore them as they are trying to increase their own scores of posts on this forum...

It is a known fact that writing something quality takes time, so we will all patiently wait. We all trust your writing skills and we will not loose any interest in this story

[val.coutinho]

Good update..... Just let this be a dream about forced sex.... Where Supriya gets up and finds Iqbal sleeping next to her..... And she takes a breath of relief.... But whenever the actual sex happens it should be purely love and passion between Supriya and Iqbal.

[qazmlp]

OK, so Preeti and Sriya have settled it.What should we MEN do now but rather follow the women !!!
Sriya has moved from "Featival Season Quick Finish" to "Done is Done,will fix it in future updates" to "OK, it's a Dream ".
Kudos to Preeti, sorry, sexypreeti, u seem close friends with Sriya.
OK, but if its a Dream Sequence, you could have waited and revealed it in the next update.Anyways, it was erotic as well.

[Salma Khan]

Story and sex lovers readers ke liye best dream sex scene hai, is sex scene se story per bhi koi farq nahi pada hai and sex lover readers bhi happy ho gaye great job @Sriya double Impact

[Salma Khan]

Pehle toh sex bahut jaldi ho gaya jo ki expected nahin tha... phir yeh forced sex se mazaa aur bhi kir kirra ho gaya hai...

Iqbal pichle do episodes tak Supriya ke saath bilkul sharafat aur pyaar se pesh aaraha tha...abh achanak haiwaan ban gaya hai... 

Abh tak iss kahani ko padne mein jo mazaa aaraha tha abh nahi hai...

Sorry Sriya but this is my honest opinion...

I completely agree with you.
We can hope it's a dream.

[Salma Khan]

If it's a dream, it'll be interesting, but if not, we'll undoubtedly lose interest in this story. Sorry, that's obvious.

[Salma Khan]

By the way, waiting for next Wednesday, only after the next update will we know where the story is going next.

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[shdas]

its your story ..pls write it in manner you want ... i love the changes done ..Iqbal now being a bit dominant is natural and that is the character arch i always thought he had ...given what he has seen he is now changing... Personally dream sequence of a prolonged sex scene does not make sense .. I have no credentials to advice you as i have not written any story but one thing i can vouch for a lot of ppl who give gyaan here for slow seduction / lets get all of it - have just made stories incomplete - pls read - "Anita ... " ..200 plus pages , discontinued and same slow seduction for nothing.

I am super interested in the chnages you did .. nevertheless will read/appreciate if you revert it but ofcourse will have trust issues :-) :-).... take a chill..you dont own anyone anything here including their interest in the story ..

[Salma Khan]

very eager for the next update

[momass]

cant wait for next update

[abhishek.kumar]

Waiting eagerly for the next update

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Sriya2]

its your story ..pls write it in manner you want ... i love the changes done ..Iqbal now being a bit dominant is natural and that is the character arch i always thought he had ...given what he has seen he is now changing... Personally dream sequence of a prolonged sex scene does not make sense .. I have no credentials to advice you as i have not written any story but one thing i can vouch for a lot of ppl who give gyaan here for slow seduction / lets get all of it - have just made stories incomplete - pls read - "Anita ... " ..200 plus pages , discontinued and same slow seduction for nothing.

I am super interested in the chnages you did .. nevertheless will read/appreciate if you revert it but ofcourse will have trust issues :-) :-).... take a chill..you dont own anyone anything here including their interest in the story ..

Thanks, it was not about what people said, it was about how I was feeling too. But understand your concerns.

[Shahid Khan]

Kya baat hai @Sriya Ji kamaal kar diya bahut hi shaandar update dil khush kar diya

[HBK♡♡]

Very hot superb, wonderful update

[HBK♡♡]

Iqbal ne ab gaali dena start kar diya gaali se story me alag hi jaan aa gayi hai ab to

[Amit Sir]

Amazing Super Fantastic Fabulous Update

[Rohanx40]

Awesome so hot update. The elegance of your writing never fades.