Romance Dildariyan by entertainerjatt ( completed )

[sarit11]

Update 51

Raj: has lo par main mota nahi hone wala…

Fir kus der aise hi baat karne ke baad Priya wahan se chali gayi…wo kafi khus thi Raj se batein karke…aur Raj ko bhi ab Priya se batein karna acha lagne laga tha…wo ab dil se use apna dost manne laga tha…par Priya toh Raj se dilo jaan se pyar karti thi…

Ab age…

Toh us din uske baad kus khas nahi huya…agle din bhi usi tarah sabhi college gaye Raj ko chod kar…

Karib 1:00 pm Raj ke phone ki ring baji…dekha toh Sandy ka call tha…Raj ne call pick ki…

Raj: hlo bhai kaisa hai…

Sandy: thik hun bhai tu bata…

Raj: ab kus better hun pehle se…

Sandy: achi baat hai…wo Nikhil ka kus pata chala…

Raj: nahi Bhai abhi tak toh nahi mila...tujhe kus pata chala…

Sandy: abhi nahi par jaldi hi chal jayega…main uske kisi dost ka pata lagata hun ho sakta hai usi se kus pata chal jaye…

Raj: thik hai aur apna dhyan rakhna…

Sandy: thik hai bhai ab main phone rakhta hun fir karunga…

Raj: OK bhai…bye…

Fir Sandy ne phone kaat diya…Raj aise hi apne kamre mein baitha bore hota raha..Fir 4:30 pm ke karib Raj ke kamre par knock huya…

Raj: are bhai khula hi hai…a jao…

Fir door khula aur Priya room mein enter ki aur uske sath ek aur ladki thi…ji han Sonia…par wo yahan kya kar rahi thi…aur sayad yahi baat Raj bhi soch raha tha…khair Sonia aur Priya dono Raj ke paas aye aur Raj ne unhe baithne ko kaha…

Raj: hii girls…

Priya: hii kaise ho ab…

Raj: thik hun…tum batao..

Priya: thik hun…wo main aj wale notes dene ayi thi…

Raj: thanks Priya wahan table par rakh do…

Priya ne wo notes table par rakh diye…aur wapis a kar Raj ke paas baith gayi…Sonia wahan thoda nervous feel kar rahi thi…wo Raj se baat karne ayi thi par kar nahi pa rahi thi…toh Priya ne hi baat age badayi…

Priya: Raj wo asal mein Sonia tumse baat karna chahti thi par kar nahi pa rahi hai…plz Raj tum ise bhi maaf kardo…jo kus bhi Maine tumhare sath kiya ismein iski koi galti nahi hai…isne toh mujhe roka bhi tha…

Raj: acha Toh yeh baat hai main bhi sochun k Aj yeh hamare kamre mein kaise ayi…are yaar koi baat nahi biti baat hai…mitti pao…

Sonia: sach thanks Raj…ab kya tum mere sath bhi dosti karoge…

Raj: are tum toh jyada hi fast nikli but koi baat nahi…Tum Priya ki dost ho toh meri bhi dost…

Sonia: thanks…

Raj: dosti toh karli ab thanks kis baat ka…friendship mein no sorry aur no thanks…

Sonia: sorry yaar galti se nikal gaya…

Raj: Fir se galti se nikal gaya…

Raj ki baat sunte hi teeno hasne lage…

Fir thodi der aise hi batein karne ke baad wo dono chali gayi…Uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya…agle din Sunday tha toh college band…aur Priya subah subah hi Raj ke ghar a tapki…Sunidhi Kitchen mein nashta tyar kar rahi thi…usne Priya ko ander ate dekha toh wahin se awaj di…

Sunidhi: Priya beta yahan a…

Priya kitchen mein chali gayi…

Sunidhi: are aj itni subah subah…abhi toh sirf 7 baje hain…

Priya: wo aunty wo main…

Sunidhi: wo wo karne ki jarurat nahi mujhe pata hai tu kis liye ayi hai…

Priya: nahi aunty aj chuti hai toh maine socha apke paas chali jaun…

Sunidhi: jhuth mat bol mujhe pata hai mera toh sirf bahana hai..tu yahan Raj se Milne ayi hai…par beta sorry wo toh so raha hai…tum baad mein ana…

Priya ka chehra latak gaya aur wo chup chap wahan se Jane lagi….tabhi Sunidhi ki hansi chut gayi aur hasne ki awaj sun kar Priya jhat se piche palti…

Priya: aunty ap aise Hans kion rahi ho…

Sunidhi: Teri halat pe…jab ayi thi toh bol rahi thi mere se Milne ayi ho…par Jaise hi pata chala k Raj so raha hai tumhara munh aise latak gaya…

Priya: aunty sorry age se jhuth nahi bolungi…

Sunidhi: ab ayi na line pe…aur ja mille abhi jag gaya hai aur yeh uska juice bhi leti Jana…

Priya: ji aunty…

Fir Priya juice ka gilas lekar Raj ke kamre ki taraf chal padi…yeh koi khas baat nahi thi par Raj ke liye kus karke Priya ko boht acha lag raha tha…wo Jaise Jaise Raj ke kamre ke karib a rahi thi waise waise uski sanse tez hoti ja rahi thi…wo Sharma toh aise rahi thi mano juice nahi suhagraat ke liye dhudh leke ja rahi ho…fir usne Raj ke kamre ke door par knock kiya…Raj ne kholne ko bola Toh wo door open karke ander chali gayi…Raj laita huya tha par jag raha tha…Raj ko ajeeb laga k itni subah Priya jahan aur uske liye juice la rahi hai…

Raj: are tum aj itni subah subah…

Priya: wo aj college band tha toh aunty ke sath batein karne chali ayi…unhone bola k Raj ko juice de ao…

Raj: acha thik hai…mujhe baithne mein help karo…main pi leta hun…

Priya ne Juice ka gilas ek taraf rakha aur Raj ko sahara dekar baitha diya…par usne Raj ko choda nahi aur aise hi use pakad kar pata nahi konsi duniya mein kho gayi…Jab Raj ko laga k thoda jyada hi time lag raha hai toh usne khud hi puchna behtar samjha…

Raj: are kya hua ab chodo mujhe juice bhi pina hai…

Priya(hosh mein ate huye jhat se alag ho gayi): wo main wo kya hai na mera bracelet pillow cover mein fas gaya tha toh use hi nikal rahi thi…

Priya ne saaf jhuth bol diya…usne bhale hi yeh bola ho k uska bracelet atak gaya asal mein uski jaan atki thi Raj ke liye…par Raj ne jyada dhyan na diya aur juice liya aur pi kar gilas Priya ko de diya…Priya khali gilas side mein rakh kar wahin Raj ke paas baith gayi…wo Raj se batein karna chahti thi…

Priya: Raj ab tum kaise ho…

Raj: thik hun pehle se…baki aj doctor ane wala hai wo batayega k kya improvement huyi hai…

Priya: thik hai ache se rest karo …jaldi hi thik ho jaoge…

Raj: han yeh toh hai…

Priya: Raj main agar tumse kus puchun toh tum bura toh nahi manoge na…

Raj: are nahi…pucho kya puchna hai…

Priya: tumhari koi girlfriend hai kya?

Raj: han hai na tum ho…

Priya ke chehre par ek dum se chamak ka gayi…wo bas khusi se nachne hi wali thi k tabhi Raj ne apni baat age badhayi…

Raj: tum ho Riya hai , Isha, Diksha aur ab toh Sonia bhi…meri kitni sari friends girl hain…

Priya: kya yaar aise nahi mera matlab hai tum kisi se pyar karte ho…

Raj: han sabhi se karta hun…

Priya: yaar tumse kus puchna hi bekar hai…main jati hun baithe raho tum yahan akele…

Fir Priya khali gilas utha kar Jane lagi…Raj ne use awaj di…Priya ki sanse ek baar fir tham gayin…use laga k Raj abhi use bol dega k wo tum hi ho jise main pyar karta hun…isi umeed mein Priya Raj ki taraf palti…

Raj: yaar jate jate gate band karke jana…

Raj ki baat sun kar Priya chid si gayi…aur gusse mein Raj ka gate band karke bahar chali gayi...wo seedha kitchen mein gayi aur wahan Sunidhi khadi thi Priya ka mood dekh kar wo samajh gayi k kus toh huya hai…

Sunidhi: kya hua itni ukhdi ukhdi kion ho…

Priya: kus nahi aunty Raj Sara din mujhe tang karta hai kisi bhi baat ka seedha jawab nahi deta…

Sunidhi: toh kya huya…aur aisa kya puchna tha tumne jo jawab na Milne par itna tadap rahi ho…

Priya: aunty Maine sirf itna pucha tha k tumhari koi girlfriend hai par usne baat hi ghuma di…

Sunidhi: acha toh yeh baat hai thoda sabar rakho…aisi baton mein jadlbazi nahi dikhate…

Priya: aunty mujhe Sara din yahi fikar lagi rehti hai k Raj kahin Isha se pyar na karta ho…

Sunidhi: beta tum daro mat pyar ki hamesha jeet hoti hai…tumhari bhi hogi…

Fir dono aise hi kus time batein karti rahi…aur fir Priya wahan se chali gayi aur Sunidhi breakfast tyar karne mein busy ho gayi…

Toh dosto abhi ke liye itna hi…age dekhna hai k Raj aur Priya ki yeh Dildariyan kya naya mod leti hain…apne dost SIDHU ke sath bane rahiye…

To be continued…

[Eswar P]

Thank you very much sarit sir

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Ashish120
Superb Update.... Maza Aagya Padhke... Mujhe To Lagta He Ki Nikhil Ne Hi Isha Ka Kidnap Karwaya Hoga.... ya Sayad Me Galt Bhi Ho Sakta Hu..... Ab Pata Nhi Raj Kya Karega.... Ese Hi Likhte Raho..... Keep Update Posting.....

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai...aur jyada sochiye mat sab pata chal jayega...keep supporting...

[sarit11]

Update 52

Sunidhi: beta tum daro mat pyar ki hamesha jeet hoti hai…tumhari bhi hogi…

Fir dono aise hi kus time batein karti rahi…aur fir Priya wahan se chali gayi aur Sunidhi breakfast tyar karne mein busy ho gayi…

Ab age…

Karib 11:30 am ko Raj ke phone par Sandy ka call aya…Raj ne call pick kiya…

Sandy: hlo bhai kaisa hai…

Raj: thik hun bhai tu bata…

Sandy: bhai main toh thik hun…aur sun mujhe Nikhil ke ek dost ka pata chal gaya hai…

Raj: yaar kya khabar sunayi hai…

Sandy: bhai ab age kya karna hai…phod dun sale ko?

Raj: abe Sara din todne phodne ki baat karta rehta hai…tu usse sirf yeh pata laga k wo Nikhil kahan hai…

Sandy: OK bhai dekhta hun…par agar na mana toh laga dunga do…

Raj: OK yaar kus bhi kar…par pata laga…

Sandy: OK bhai kaam ho gaya samjho…

Raj: OK bhai fir baad mein batana…

Sandy: OK bye…

Fir Sandy ne phone kaat diya…Toh dosto Mumbai mein toh kus khas chal nahi raha…hum aisa karte hain…pune mein chalte hain aur dekhte hain Sandy kya kar raha hai…

Sandy Raj se baat karne ke baad ek address dekh raha tha…fir wo apni bike nikal kar Kisi taraf chal pada…wo ek basti mein pahuncha…wahan sab gareeb log the…Sandy ne ek tute phute se makan ke age bike roki aur fir wo door ka kunda khadkane laga…ek aurat ne darwaja khola…wo kafi dubli patli si thi…aur Sandy ki maa ki umar ki lag rahi thi…

Sandy: namaste aunty…

Lady: namaste beta par Maine tumhe pehchana nahi…

Sandy: aunty darasal main Raghu se Milne aya tha…

Lady: beta wo toh ghar mein nahi hai…

Sandy: kahan milega wo aunty…

Lady: beta yahan se age ja kar ek khula maidan hoga…wahan baitha hoga…vehla kahin ka…

Sandy: ji aunty shukriya…

Fir Sandy ne apni bike uthayi aur us lady ke batayi huyi jagah pahunch gaya…wahan ek khula maidan tha aur ek choti si deewar par 7-8 ladke baithe the…sab Mawali type ke lag rahe the…Sandy un ke paas chala gaya…

Sandy: bhai tum logon mein se Raghu kon hai…

Raghu: main hun Raghu kya kaam hai…

Sandy: bhai ek kaam hai…

Raghu: sale bhade ka tatu samjha hai…ek ghuma kar dunga sari hainkdi nikal jayegi…

Sandy ko gussa toh a raha tha…par Raj ne roka tha…

Sandy: Bhai dekh munh mangi keemat milegi…

Paison ka naam sun kar Raghu ki sari gunda gardi nikal gayi…

Raghu: are bhai pehle bolna tha na batao kya kaam hai…

Sandy: nahi yahan nahi…kaam thoda secret hai…

Raghu: are ap yahan chaho bol do wahan a jaunga…

Sandy: thik hai is address par a Jana kal dopehar 12:00 baje…par akele…

Sandy ne Raghu ko ek slip di jis par Raj ke pune wale ghar ka address tha…Aur Fir wahan se chala gaya…

Asal mein Sandy ko pata chala tha…k Raghu ek kiraye ka gunda hai…aur Nikhil ke liye kaam karta tha…isliye usne plan banaya tha k wo Raghu ko paison ka lalch dega…

Usne ghar ate hi apne kamre mein jakar Raj ko phone kiya…Raj ne bhi jaldi hi utha liya…

Raj: hlo bhai kaise phone kiya…

Fir Sandy ne Raghu ke bare mein Raj ko puri baat bata di…aur yeh bhi k wo kal ko Raj ke pune wale ghar mein ayega…

Raj: are wah yaar Sandy tu toh jugadi ho gaya hai…

Sandy: bhai ismein kya jugad sala paison ke naam se hi behak gaya…

Raj: han par age kya karne wala hai…

Sandy: wo toh hone ke baad hi pata chalega…

Raj: sala suspense rakh raha hai…jaisa tera dil kare kar but apna khyal rakhna…

Sandy: OK bhai…mujhe kus nahi hoga…

Raj: thik hai…kaam hone ke baad batana…

Sandy: OK bhai…bye…

Fir Sandy ne phone kaat diya aur Uske baad Raj aram karne laga…Sham ko doctor aya aur Raj ka check up kiya...check up ke baad Raj doctor se puchne laga…

Raj: doctor kya ab main chal fir sakta hun…

Doctor: han kion nahi…par jyada nahi…abhi bhi thodi weakness hai…but jaldi hi theek ho jaoge…

Sunidhi: ap ne ise thoda chalne ko kaha hai…but yeh tik kar nahi baithne wala…

Doctor: Raj aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh problem hogi…tum sirf subah ke time garden mein thodi boht walk kar liya karo…din mein bahar mat niklna…

Raj: OK…dhyan rakhunga…

Fir doctor wahan se chala gaya…uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya…agle din Monday tha toh sabhi college gaye…Raj ne subah thodi walk ki aur fir bahar sabhi ke sath baith kar nashta bhi kiya…thodi boht toh boriyar dur huyi par fir bhi use pura din bed pe hi pade rehna tha…

Toh dopehar 12:30 Raj ke pune wale ghar mein Sandy Raghu ka wait kar raha tha...

Sandy (apne man mein): yaar yeh sala abhi tak aya kion nahi…sala wait Toh aise kara raha hai…jaise cm ka beta ho…ek baar sale se sab kus ugalwa lun…fir ise batata hun ate daal ka Bhao….

Itne mein door bell baji…Sandy ne door open kar diya…samne Raghu khada tha…

Raghu: hlo bhai kaise ho ap…

Sandy: are acha hun ao ander ao kab se tumhara wait kar raha tha…

Raghu: Bhai apka ghar toh boht shandar hai…

Sandy: thanks bhai…tum baitho yahan sofe par main kus khane pine ko lata hun…

Raghu: are bhai iski kya jarurat hai…

Sandy: are koi baat nahi…main cold drinks lata hun…

Raghu: ji bhai…

Fir Sandy kitchen mein gaya aur do glass mein cold drink daal kar le aya…aur ek glass Raghu ki taraf badha diya…wo dono ek ek sip pine lage…aur batein bhi karne lage…

Raghu: bhai ab ap jaldi se kaam batao fir main keemat batata hun…

Sandy: han jarur Kaam thoda muskil hai par paise munh mange milenge…

Raghu: bhai ap batao kya kaam hai…

Sandy: yeh photo dekho ise dhundhna hai…

Raghu ne photo dekhi par use jhatka laga…yeh photo Nikhil ki thi…

Raghu: bhai main ise nahi dhundh sakta…

Sandy: par kion munh mangi keemat dunga…

Raghu: bhai chahe kus bhi ho jaye…par main nahi batane wala…chahe tu apni sari jameen jayedad bhi kion na dede…

Sandy: yaar ab toh sauda karna padega…tune meri cold drink bhi pi hai…

Raghu: Maine kaha na nahi ka matlab nahi…ab jyada mat uchal warna kaat kar faink dunga…

Sandy: sala kab se Teri bakwas sun raha hun…ab toh tu gaya…mujhe pata tha tu aise nahi manne wala isliye pehle se intzam kiya hai…

Raghu: kya kiya hai…

Sandy: jaldi hi pata chal jayega…

Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi ab dekhna yeh hai k Sandy ne kya karne ka socha hai…apne dost SIDHU aur meri story Dildariyan ke sath bane rahiye…

To be continued….

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by spxossip
Shaandar update as always bhai.........ab dekhna hai ki nikhil ne hi kuch locha kiya hai ya nhi.........aur isha aur priya me to jung to nhi shuru hogi raj ko lekar.....priya to abhi se jalas feel kr rhi hai..........maja aayega yaar ye jalasi wali ladayi me priya aur isha ke bich .........

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai...aur Raj Isha aur Priya ka kus bhi ho par maja ayega... Keep supporting bhai...

[sarit11]

Update 53

Sandy: sala kab se Teri bakwas sun raha hun…ab toh tu gaya…mujhe pata tha tu aise nahi manne wala isliye pehle se intzam kiya hai…

Raghu: kya kiya hai…

Sandy: jaldi hi pata chal jayega…

Ab age…

Raghu: sale sidha sidha bol kya sajish rach raha hai…

Sandy: yaar bada besabra banda hai tu...thoda sabar kar…

Tabhi Raghu ko chakar ane shuru ho gaye…aur usne Sofe ka Sahara liya hath se…

Raghu: sale tune kya kar…

Abhi uski baat puri bhi nahi huyi thi k Raghu wahin sofe par gir gaya…

Sandy: sale pata chal gaya na k kis baap se panga pada tha…abhi Raj ko khuskhabri deta hun…

Sandy ne turant Raj ko phone kiya Raj ne phone pick kiya…

Sandy: bhai khuskhabri hai…

Raj: sale tere ladka huya hai kya…

Sandy: oye bhai Maine us Raghu ko pakad liya hai…

Raj: acha tune use daboch liya…par kaise…

Sandy: bhai uske juice mein behoshi ki dwayi mila di thi…ab behosh pada hai sofe par…kam se kam 8-9 ghante tak hosh nahi ayega…

Raj: sale tu toh kamal nikla…ab dekh khud kus mat karna…security officer ko bula wo khud puchtach kar lenge…

Sandy: bhai kahin koi lafda na ho jaye…

Raj: are nahi hoga main inspector se baat kar leta hun…wo sab sambhal lega…

Sandy: thik hai par unhein jaldi bhejna kahin sala hosh mein na a jaye…bhai saand hai pura agar mar bhi raha hoga toh 2-3 ko sath leke marega...

Raj: OK bhai main abhi baat jar leta hun…

Raj ne us inspector se baat ki jisne Raj ka byan liya tha…

Inspector: toh apka matlab hai Raghu abhi apke ghar mein hai…

Raj: han ap use arrest kar lijiye aur puchtach kijiye…par Sandy par baat nahi ani chahiye aur na hi ghar par pata lagna chahiye k use hamne pakda hai…aur han Nikhil jaldi se jaldi pakda Jana chahiye…

Inspector: ji Sinha sahab…main pune mein security officer se baat karta hun...

Fir Raj ne phone kaat diya…aur sandy ko phone par bata diya k wo log jaldi hi Raghu ko pakad kar le jayenge…uske jate hi tu wapis Mumbai a Jana…

Toh security officer jaldi hi Raghu ko pakad kar le gayi…aur Sandy Mumbai ke liye nikal gaya…udhar Priya bhi ghar a chuki thi…wo bas jaldi se Raj ke paas Jana chahti thi…wo apne kamre se nikal kar bahar ja hi rahi thi k uski mom hall mein baithi thi unhone use rok liya…

Geeta: beta jara mere paas a tujhse kus baat karni hai…

Priya( beman se): kya hai mom…

Geeta: are yahan baith na…

Priya: lo baith gayi ab batao kya baat hai…

Geeta: beta wo kya hai na meri ek saheli ki beti ki Shadi hai…

Priya: wow kab hai…

Geeta: next Wednesday ko…

Priya: acha toh ap ja rahi hain kya…

Geeta: han main aur tere papa dono jayenge…aur tu bhi sath chalna…

Priya: main wahan kya karungi…ap hi jaiye…

Geeta: beta aise nahi bolte…tumhe bhi chalna chahiye…

Priya: mom main bore ho jaungi….ab ap jyada force mat kijiye…

Geeta: thik hai beta jaisi tumhari marji…

Priya: thanks mom…aur ab main Sunidhi aunty ke paas ja rahi hun…

Geeta: thik hai ja aur Raj se bhi thodi batein kar ana…bechara laita laita bore ho jata hoga…

Priya: ji mom…

Par Geeta ko kya pata k wo Raj se thodi nahi boht sari batein karne ja rahi hai…khair Priya jaldi se Raj ke ghar chali gayi…Sunidhi hall mein hi baithi thi toh Priya pehle uske paas ja kar baith gayi…

Priya: hlo aunty…

Sunidhi: hlo beta…aj fir mujhse Milne ayi ho…

Sunidhi ne yeh vayang kiya tha aur Priya ise ache se samaj gayi thi…

Priya (Sharmate huye): kya aunty ap bhi na…

Sunidhi hasne lagi…aur Priya aise hi sharmati rahi…

Sunidhi: ab yahan baithi kya sharma rahi hai ja mil a use wo bhi ander baitha bore ho raha hoga…

Fir Priya Raj ke kamre mein chali gayi…

Raj: are Priya kaisi ho…

Priya: thik hun tum batao…

Raj: main toh ab thik hun…plz Pani la do pyas lagi hai bottle mein khatam hai…

Priya: han abhi lati hun…

Priya thodi der baad pani le ayi…aur side mein rakh kar Raj ko uthane ke liye sahara dene lagi…

Raj: are ab main khud baith sakta hun…thanks…

Fir Raj baith gaya aur pani pine laga…

Raj: Priya tumse ek baat kahun…

Priya: han kaho…


Raj: tum kitni badal gayi ho…

Priya: sab tumhare liye…

Raj: kya matlab…

Priya: wo wo kus nahi mera matlab tha k tumse dosti karne ke liye…

Raj: acha par tum hamesha aisi hi rehna kabhi badal mat Jana chahe kus bhi ho jaye…

Priya: promise nahi badlungi…

Raj: chalo aur batao kya chal raha hai…college mein…

Priya: oh Teri ki college se yaad aya aj ke notes mein ghar bhul ayi…

Aisa bolte hi Priya ne apna munh sad sa bana liya…wo boht cute lag rahi thi…Raj ko uspar hansi bhi ayi aur pyar( normal pyar vaise wala nahi) bhi...
Raj: are koi baat nahi kal ko de dena…

Priya: thik hai…Raj tumse ek baat puchun…par seedha jawab dena ghumana mat…

Raj: han pucho kya baat hai…

Priya: kya tumhari life mein koi ladki thi…

Raj: nahi…

Priya: sach mein yah jhuth bol rahe ho…

Raj: sach yaar aj tak koi nahi…

Priya: tumhe koi pasand hai…

Raj: Isha...

Raj iske age bolta Usse pehle uske phone ki ring baji….par Priya ka dil tutne ke liye itna hi kafi tha…Priya khud ko rok na payi aur wahan se teji se bhag gayi…wo seedha apne kamre mein jakar bed par lait kar buri tarah se Rone lagi…Udhar Raj ko kus samaj na aya k Priya kion is tarah se chali gayi par usne Phone Pick kiya yeh call Sandy ka tha usne Raj ko bata diya tha k wo Mumbai a gaya hai aur kal ko Raj se milega….

Udhar Priya ka ro ro kar bura haal tha…uska dil tut chuka tha…akhir use jis baat ka dar tha wahi huya…wo sach mein Raj ke liye boht jyada sensitive thi…wo boht pyar karti thi usse…par sayad uska pyar Raj ki najar mein nahi aya…

Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…ab dekhna hai k kya Priya ki Dildariyan yahin khatam ho jayengi yah Kahani koi aur hi mod legi…toh dosto apne dost SIDHU ke sath bane rahiye…

To be continued…

[sarit11]

   Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
   Nice update but kal ke baat he alag thi. security officer ab Nikhil ke piche lag gayi h abbdekhna wo kab pakgra jayega or kya Isha uske pass h ya koi or bhi h. Raj ne Sandy ke sari misunderstanding mita di Isha ke bare mai bhibor Priya ke bare mai bhi. Ab dekhna h Sandy ne jo baat chupai h wo kab Raj ko batega. Or ye kya Raj tik to Priya bimar. Abhi to Priya j feel kar rahi h or dekhna h Priya kya karti h jab Isha samne aayegi. Or Priya Raj ke frndship kab Soniya se karwati h. Waiting for all of that. Ab ek jaberdast wali upadate ka wait h so Siddhu Rock the floor yar. Waiting for majedar wala update.

entertainerjatt
Thanks yaar...aur sab pata chalega but haule haule...keep supporting... Agla update kal ko ayega...

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Update 54

Raj ko kus samaj na aya k Priya kion is tarah se chali gayi par usne Phone Pick kiya yeh call Sandy ka tha usne Raj ko bata diya tha k wo Mumbai a gaya hai aur kal ko Raj se milega….

Udhar Priya ka ro ro kar bura haal tha…uska dil tut chuka tha…akhir use jis baat ka dar tha wahi huya…wo sach mein Raj ke liye boht jyada sensitive thi…wo boht pyar karti thi usse…par sayad uska pyar Raj ki najar mein nahi aya…

Ab age…

Priya ke Jane ke baad Raj apne kamre mein leta Raghu ke bare mein soch raha tha tabhi Sunidhi room mein ayi…

Sunidhi: Raj wo Priya kahan chali gayi…

Raj: pata nahi mom use kya huya ekdum se yahan se bhag gayi…sayad kus yaad a gaya ho…

Sunidhi: han sayad…chal koi baat nahi tu aram kar dinner ke time bahar a Jana…

Raj: nahi mom abhi chalta hun…

Sunidhi: beta takleef hogi tu jyada der nahi baith payega…chup chap leta reh…

Raj: OK mom…

Fir Sunidhi wahan se chali gayi aur Raj Priya ke bare mein sochne laga use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k Priya is tarah se kion bhagi…

Raj(man mein): yaar Priya ko achanak kya ho gaya…chalo par ek baat toh hai ab wo kitni badal gayi hai…main jaisa uske bare mein India ane se pehle socha karta tha ab wo bilkul vaisi ho gayi hai…pata nahi kion par usse batein karna acha lagta hai…par main uske bare mein itna kion soch raha hun…

Raj ne Priya ke bichar apne dimag se jhatke aur kahin aur dimag lagane laga Isha ki taraf…Par baar baar Raj ke dimag mein Priya ka is tarah wahan se bhag Jana a raha tha…khair isi tarah dinner ka time huya Raj dinner karne ke baad dwayi lekar so gaya…

Par Priya ne na toh dinner kiya aur na hi use neend a rahi thi…

Priya( apne man mein): yeh kya ho gaya…Raj Isha ko chahta hai…matlab wo mera kabhi nahi ho sakta…ab main kya karun…par main kus galat nahi karungi…maine Raj se promise kiya hai k main kabhi nahi badlungi…main Raj ki khusi ke liye apna pyar dawa lungi…main Raj ko yeh show nahi hone dungi k main usse pyar karti hun…main Raj ko hamesha ek dost hi manungi….

Priya ne soch toh liya but kya yeh itna asan tha k Raj ko wo sirf apna dost mane…wo thodi der roti rahi but fir use neend a gayi…toh akhir yeh din toh kus khusi aur kus dukh ke sath nikal gaya…

Agle din Tuesday subah 7:00 baje Raj ke ghar ki door bell baji…Sunidhi hall mein baithi thi aur naukron ko aj ke breakfast ke bare mein bata rahi thi…

Sunidhi: ab itni subah subah yeh kon a gaya…

Naukar: mam main dekhta hun…

Sunidhi: koi baat nahi tum khana tyar karo main dekhti hun…

Sunidhi uth kar door ki taraf gayi aur door kholte hi dekha toh Sandy khada tha…

Sandy: namaste aunty…

Sunidhi: namaste beta…do teen din baad aye ho kahan the itne din…

Sandy: wo main pune chala gaya tha…

Sunidhi: acha ao ander ao…vaise sab thik toh hai na pune mein…

Sandy( ander ate huye): han sab thik hai…aur sunaiye yahan sab kaise hai…

Sunidhi: thik hai sab…vaise itni subah aye ho sab thik Toh hai na…

Sandy: han aunty wo Raj se mile itne din ho gaye the toh aj subah hi chala aya...

Sunidhi: thik hai wo apne kamre mein hai…chale jao main thoda kaam nipta lun…

Sandy: thik hai aunty…

Fir sandy Raj ke kamre mein chala gaya…Raj Bed par baitha laptop par kus kar raha tha…

Sandy: oye kya kar raha hai laptop par…

Raj: bhai kus nahi bas aise hi kus files sahi jagah rakh raha tha…aur toh kus hai nahi karne ko…tu suna kaisa hai…

Sandy: bhai main toh ek dum acha hun…

Raj: a baith yahan…aur suna…

Sandy( bed par baith kar): bhai aur toh kus nahi…bas ab toh wo Raghu apna munh khol de…aur wo kamina Nikhil mil jaye…

Raj: han yaar pata nahi Isha kis haal mein hogi…

Sandy: thik kaha yaar…uska toh koi apna bhi nahi hai...

Raj: han Uske mom dad ki toh pehle hi death ho chuki hai…aur koi hai nahi…( friends Isha ka koi apna nahi hai…isliye wo trainer ban kar apna gujara karti thi pune mein uska apna ghar tha but ab wo jis company mein job karti thi unke hi flat mein rehti thi)

Sandy: chal ab toh wo jaldi hi mil jayegi…

Raj: han sahi kaha…aur ab main use sach sach bata dunga k maine sirf uski bhalayi ke liye usse nafrat karne ka Natak kiya tha…

Sandy: Han yaar wo bechari tere is Natak ki wajah se boht pareshan thi…hamne toh iske bare mein pata lagane ke liye plan bhi banaya tha…par isse pehle hi yeh sab ho gaya…

Raj: sale aj kal tu kus jyada hi jasoosi kar raha hai…

Sandy: are nahi Bhai aisi baat nahi hai…

Raj: chal koi na…aur sun tu aj college ja raha hai na…

Sandy: han bhai…

Raj: achi baat hai aur pichle sabhi dino ke notes mere paas hain tu aj se bana Lena aur baki mere se copy kar Lena…

Sandy: par bhai tere paas kahan se aye…

Raj: Priya ne hi banaye the ek mere liye ek apne liye…

Sandy kus bolna toh chahta tha par wo kus bola nahi…

Sandy: chal thik hai bhai ab main chalta hun…

Raj: OK …

Fir Sandy wahan se chal pada usne apni bike uthayi aur college ke liye nikal gaya…wo raste mein Priya ke bare mein hi soch raha tha…

Sandy( man mein): yaar kya Priya sach bol rahi thi….kya wo sach mein Raj se pyar karti hai…ab yeh toh nahi pata par mujhe usse maafi mangni chahiye maine us din use hospital mein boht bura bhala bola tha…yaar wo Raj ke liye kitna kar rahi hai…

Inhi sab sochon mein khoya Sandy kab college pahunch gaya use pata hi nahi chala…usne Bike park ki aur ander ki taraf chal pada…use Priya Sonia Riya aur Diksha garden mein khadi huyi dikhi...wo unke paas chala gaya…

Sandy: hlo girls…

Riya: are bhaiya aj idhar ka rasta kaise bhul gaye…

Sandy: wo asal mein mujhe Priya se baat karni hai…

Priya: mujhse par kion….sab thik toh hai na…

Sandy: han wo main tumse maafi mangna chahta hun…Maine us din hospital mein tumhe bura bhala bola tha…

Priya: are koi baat nahi…gusse mein insan galti kar deta hai…aur Maine bhi 5 saal pehle ki thi aur aj tak uski saja bhugat rahi hun...

Yeh bolte hi Priya ki ankhon mein ansoo a gaye…aur wo wahan se chali gayi…sab hairan the Riya ne use rokne ki kosish ki par Sonia ne use aisa karne se mana kar diya…

Sandy: ab ise kya ho gaya…

Riya: han di aur apne mujhe Priya di ko rokne kion nahi diya…

Sonia: Yaar wo boht pareshan hai…kal Raj ne use kaha k wo Isha se pyar karta hai…

Sab hairan toh huye par sabse pehle Diksha boli…

Diksha: kya Isha se Raj pyar karta hai…aisa kaise ho sakta hai…

Riya: kion ho kion nahi sakta…dekha nahi wo isha ki kitni fikar karta hai…

Diksha ko pata chal gaya k wo over react kar gayi…

Diksha: main toh aise hi puch rahi thi…mujhe toh kya pata un dono k bare mein…

Sandy: yaar main nahi manta Raj mera bhai hai wo mujhse kion chipayega…

Sonia: kya pata but Priya jyada hi sensitive hai…jab Raj behosh tha toh usne kus nahi khaya piya tha…wo boht pyar karti hai Raj se…ab Toh wo boht dukhi hai…

Riya: dekho ab yeh toh Isha ke ane ke baad hi pata chalega…abhi sab class mein chalo…aur hamein Priya ko sambhalna hoga…

Fir sabhi apni apni class mein chale gaye…toh hum chalte hain Raj ke ghar…Raj aur Sunidhi abhi nashta kar hi rahe the aur Raghuveer office ke kiye nikalne laga tha…usne door khola k tabhi inspector a gaya…Raghuveer use dekh kar ruk gaya...

Raghuveer: are ap yahan…

Inspector: namaste Sinha Saab wo asal mein Nikhil ke bare mein kus batana hai…

Raghuveer: acha toh aiye ander baith kar baat karte hain…

Fir wo ander a gaye…aur Sofe par baith Gaye….

Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…dekhte hain ab Nikhil ka kus pata chalta hai yah nahi…aur kya Isha ke ane ke baad story koi aur mod legi…toh dosto Dildariyan mein abhi boht kus baki hai…apne dost SIDHU ka sath aise hi dete rahiye…

To be continued…

[sarit11]

   Originally Posted by nain11ster
   Priya.... Raj .... Isha.... Koi na ab kitna sympaithy e pyar jagega, islIye thoda jelous jelous jaisa mohal bhi hai ... Mujhe kyon aisa lag raha hai ki ... Isha aur Priya ka izhar ek he din hoga aur bich me raaj phasega ...

entertainerjatt
Bhai pata nahi kya hoga....par apki baat mein dum toh hai k Raj ne toh fasna hi hai...is tarah nahi toh kisi aur tarah...uski toh kismat hi aisi hai...keep reading bhai...

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
Ohhh kitna ganda h Raj itni pyari Priya ko Rula diya. Ganda kahi ka. Good news Raj ghar aa gaya or Raj or Priya ek kamre mai akle or kitni pyare tarike se Raj ne Priya ke over possessive ke bare mai batlaya. But Priya ke jalan ab khul ke sammne aane lagi h usko lag rha h sayad Isha Raj ko us se chiln legi or yahi dar Raj ke mom ko bhi ho raha h kyu ke Raj bhi to bs Isha ke bare mai baate kar raha h jo ke in conditions mai sahi bhi h kyu ke wo uske frnd h or missing h ab dekhna h aage kya hot h Priya or Raj ke mom ke sanka unko kaha le jati ho or Isha ka kya hota h. Or Siddhu Paji ke Dailog ke liye liye wah wah wah wah wah. Very cute update Siddhu. Keep it up. Keep going.

entertainerjatt
Yaar Raj ne konsa jaan bhuj kar rulaya hai...galti se ho gaya...aur Priya ki buri batein kabhi toh uske samne ani thi... Aur baki sab age chal kar pata chalega... Thanks and keep supporting...

[sarit11]

Update 55

Inspector: namaste Sinha Saab wo asal mein Nikhil ke bare mein kus batana hai…

Raghuveer: acha toh aiye ander baith kar baat karte hain…

Fir wo ander a gaye…aur Sofe par baith Gaye….

Ab age…

Raj: are Inspector sahab ap yahan…

Raghuveer: han beta Nikhil ke bare mein kus pata chala hai…

Raj: acha…

Inspector: asal mein hamne kal Nikhil ke dost Raghu ko arrest kiya tha…usse kafi der ki puchtash ke baad yeh pata chala k Nikhil ne hi Raj par hamla kiya hai…par Isha Uske paas hai yah nahi yeh use bhi nahi pata…

Raj: toh hai kahan wo nikhil iske bare mein kus pata chala…

Inspector: han usne bataya k wo pune mein hi hai…uska ek adda hai wahin par hai…abhi abhi hi pata chala hai toh seedha apko batane chala aya…

Raj: thanks…ab ap plz Isha ko kisi bhi halat mein dhundhiye…

Inspector: han pune se security officer gayi hai Raid Marne…dekhte hain kya milta hai…

Raj: ji thik hai hamein phone karke bata dena…

Inspector: ji…ab main chalta hun…

Raghuveer: are nashta karke jaiye…

Inspector: nahi ji…shukriya…but main ghar se karke aya hun aur vaise bhi main duty ke liye late ho raha hun…

Raghuveer: jaisi apki marji…

Fir Inspector chala gaya aur Raghuveer bhi office ke liye nikal gaya…ghar mein sirf Raj aur Sunidhi hi bache the…

Sunidhi: kitna acha hai na yeh inspector…nahi toh aj kal koi bhi apni duty ache se nahi karta…

Raj: han mom apne sahi kaha…

Sunidhi: beta tum ab Dwayi lekar aram karo…

Raj: kya yaar mom…jata hun…

Raj apne room mein chala gaya…aur laptop par movie dekhne laga…usne movie dekhne ke baad laptop side mein rakha aur Isha ke bare mein sochne laga…

Raj( man mein): yaar kafi time ho gaya par isha ke bare mein kus pata nahi chala…kya main inspector se phone par puchun…par acha nahi lagta k aise hi kisi ko pareshan karte raho…pata nahi kab Ishu sahi salamat wapis ayegi…ek yeh chot jiski wajah se main khud kus nahi kar pa raha hun...

Raj aise hi Isha ki fikar karta raha…udhar college mein sabhi lecture attend karne ke baad sabhi canteen mein baithe the…Monty aur Sandy bhi ladkion ke sath hi baithe the…sabhi Priya ko hausla dene mein lage huye the…

Sonia: yaar tum fikar mat karo sab thik ho jayega…

Sandy: han yaar mujhe bhi nahi lagta k Raj Isha se pyar karta hai nahi toh wo mujhe batata…

Riya: di ap fikar mat kijiye ho sakta hai koi galtfehmi huyi ho…

Priya: yaar tum sab bas bhi karo…Raj mera dost hai uski khusi jis chij mein hogi main bhi usi mein khus hun…agar wo Isha ke sath khus hai toh main bhi khus hun…agar wo mujhe pyar nahi karta toh kya hua main toh karti hun na…main apna pyar marte dum tak nibhaungi…ab chalo sab fatafat khana khatam karo…mujhe Raj se bhi milna hai ghar ja kar…

Priya ki baat sun kar sab ko boht khusi huyi k wo Raj se sach mein boht pyar karti hai…wo Raj ki khusi k liye kus bhi kar sakti hai…khair sabhi ne khana khatam kiya aur apne apne ghar ke liye nikal pade…ghar pahunch kar Priya apne room mein gayi…fresh hone ke baad change kiya…aur bed par baith kar Raj ke bare mein sochne lagi…

Priya( man mein): Kya mujhe Raj ke paas Jana chahiye…Main kaise uska samna karungi…par agar nahi gayi toh wo kya sochega k main kion use avoid kar rahi hun…mujhe Jana chahiye…par main kosish karungi k apni feelings par kabu pa sakun…

Yeh soch kar Priya ne notes uthaye aur Raj ke ghar chal padi…Wahan pahunch kar wo seedha Raj ke room mein chali gayi…par wo apne khyalon mein khoyi huyi thi aur knock karna bhul gayi…Raj apni shirt utar kar mirror ke samne khada tha…aur Priya ko aise achanak dekh kar wo ek dum se sakpaka gaya…Priya kam Sharma rahi thi aur Raj jyada…Priya wapis mud kar bahar Jane lagi…par Raj ne jaldi se shirt pehni aur...Priya ko awaj di…

Raj: Priya a jao…and sorry mujhe door lock karna chahiye tha…

Priya(palat kar): sorry toh mujhe kehna chahiye Maine knock nahi kiya…vaise tumhari Peeth ka jakham ab bhar gaya hai…

Priya yeh bol kar hans padi…Raj ne apni garden niche karli…Par Raj ki najar na chahte huye bhi Priya ke khubsurat chehre ki taraf ja rahi thi…wo Hasti huyi boht cute lag rahi thi…Priya aur Raj ki najar ek pal ke liye mili…par Raj ne apni najrein niche kar li…Priya ne bhi baat badal di…

Priya: Isha ka kus pata chala…

Raj: han aj security officer Raid Marne gayi thi Nikhil ke adde par…but abhi tak kus pata nahi chala...unhone kaha tha k wo phone kar ke bata denge…

Priya: chal koi baat nahi…sab thik ho jayega…

Raj: han…ao baitho…

Priya bed par baith gayi…

Raj: Priya kal tum ek dum se kion bhag gayi..kya hua mujhe laga mujhse kisi baat se naraz toh nahi ho na…

Priya: agar naraz hoti toh aj yahan kion ati…mujhe kal Sonia ko phone karna tha…par main bhul gayi isiliye jab yaad aya toh jaldi mein chali gayi…(Priya yeh jhuth pehle se soch kar ayi thi)

Raj: OK…aur sunao…

Priya: kus nahi...yeh lo apne notes...

Fir thodi der aise hi batein karne ke baad Priya wahan se chali gayi…usne apne ap par pura kabu rakha k kahin Raj ko shak na ho jaye k wo usse pyar karti hai…aur uske aur Isha ke bare mein pata lagne se dukhi hai…wo normal rehne ki kosish kar rahi thi…

Priya ke Jane ke baad Raj ke paas inspector ka phone aya…Raj ne number dekhte hi jaldi se phone pick kiya…

Raj: hlo…Isha mil gayi kya…

Inspector: are thodi sans lijiye…sab batata hun…humne Nikhil ke adde par raid mari par kisi ne hamare pahunchne se pehle hi Nikhil ko maar dala…Isha ka koi pata nahi hai…wo nahi mili…wahan par sirf Nikhil ki lash mili hai…

Raj: aisa kaise ho sakta hai…Nikhil ko kisne maar diya…

Inspector: ho sakta hai k Isha ne maar diya ho aur Khud wahan se bhag gayi ho…

Raj: Isha aisa nahi kar sakti…mujhe lagta hai Isha jarur kisi musibat mein hai…

Inspector: abhi kus keh nahi sakte…hum janch kar rahe hain…dekhte hain kya hota hai…

Fir Raj ne phone kaat diya wo boht bade sadme mein tha…kionk use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k wo kya kare…Use nahi pata tha k Isha kahan hogi…kiske paas hogi…Nikhil ke Milne se Jo umeed jagi thi wo bhi khatam ho gayi thi…Ab kus nahi pata tha is sab ke piche kon tha…Raj ne Sandy ko phone kiya…Sandy ne jaldi hi phone pick kar liya…

Sandy: hlo bhai kaisa hai…

Raj: bhai theek hun…tu bata …

Sandy: Bhai main toh thik hun…par wo kamina nikhil kahin mila kya…

Raj: bhai kisi ne use maar diya…

Sandy( wo ek dum se hairan tha): bhai kya bol raha hai…

Raj ne Sandy ko puri baat batayi…Sandy ka bhi Raj jaisa hi haal tha…

Sandy: bhai ab kya hoga…Isha kahan hogi…bhai mujhe uski boht fikar ho rahi hai…

Raj: bhai kus keh nahi sakte…fikar toh mujhe bhi ho rahi hai…par ab kya pata k iske piche kiska hath hai…

Sandy: han bhai agar Nikhil mar gaya toh aur kon ho sakta hai…

Raj: wahi Toh meri bhi samaj mein nahi a raha…

Sandy: chal bhai kus sochte hain kya pata kisi ka naam yaad a jaye…

Raj: thik hai bhai par kya pata k kon ho sakta hai…chal baad mein baat karta hun…

Fir Raj ne phone kaat diya Sandy bhi boht hairan aur pareshan tha…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k kon ho sakta hai…kahin Priya toh nahi…par use kya pata k Nikhil kahan tha…toh kon ho sakta hai…

Tabhi Raj ke phone par kisi unknown number se call ayi…Raj ne thoda sochne ke baad call pick ki…

Raj: hlo kon bol raha hai…

Samne se jo jawab aya wo sun kar Raj ek dum se hairan reh gaya...Raj ko umeed nahi thi k samne se aisa jawab ayega…

Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…ab yeh kon hai jisne Raj ko phone kiya aur phone par kya bola…yeh toh agle update mein hi pata chalega…toh Dildariyan ke sath aise hi bane rahiye…SIDHU

To be continued….

[sarit11]

   Originally Posted by Ashish120
   Superb Update.. Maza Aagya Padhke... Maine Bahut Shi Romantic Story Padhi he... par aaj Tak Kisi Pe Regular Update Nhi Aaye He.... Or Maine Pehla Esa Writer Dekha He Jo Roj Update Deta he.... Bhai Mujhe Aapse Yehi Winti He Ki... Is Story Ke Update Roj Dena Or Ye Story Ko Bich Me Chod Ke Mat Jana... Jese Dusre Writer Hote He... Well Update Shandar He... Or Ese Hi Likhte Raho... Keep Update Posting....

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai... Aur yeh mera farz hai k main regular update dun...aur main story band nahi karunga...kionk isse acha hai k ap shuru hi na karo...ap logon ne bhi boht pyar diya hai isiliye main age badh paya hun...keep supporting bhai...

[sarit11]

 Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
   Nice update. Chalo Raj or Soniya ke bhi dosti ho gayi. Maja to tab aaya jab Priya Raj milne subh subh aayi or jhoot bola to acha sabak sikhaya Raj ke mom ne. Or Raj ka jasos Sandy apne mission ko anjam dene ke liye pahuch gaya h ab dekhna h kab tak wo nikhil ka pata laga pata h or kab isha recover hogi. Priya ke insecurity badhti ja rahi h Rajbko lekar. Nice
   Waiting for next.

entertainerjatt
Thanks dear...aur abhi toh aur bhi boht kus baki hai...sab kus pata chal jayega...bas tum aise hi padti raho...keep supporting...

[sarit11]

Update 56

Tabhi Raj ke phone par kisi unknown number se call ayi…Raj ne thoda sochne ke baad call pick ki…

Raj: hlo kon bol raha hai…

Samne se jo jawab aya wo sun kar Raj ek dum se hairan reh gaya...Raj ko umeed nahi thi k samne se aisa jawab ayega…

Ab age…

Toh dosto Jo phone par Raj ke sath baat kar raha tha wo Isha hi thi…

Isha(hamfte huye): Raj…mujhe bacha lo Raj…

Raj: Isha?

Isha: Han Raj mujhe bacha lo yeh log mujhe maar dalenge…

Raj: kon mar dalega tumhe…aur ho kahan tum…

Isha: Raj pata nahi kon hai…un logon ne Nikhil ko bhi mar dala…par main kisi tarah se Bach nikli…maine Nikhil ka phone utha liya tha…yeh usi ka number hai…

Raj: OK tum batao is waqt kahan ho…

Isha: main mumbai mein hun xxx street mein chupi huyi hun…

Raj: tum mumbai mein kaise ayi...

Isha: wo Sab baad mein bataungi…abhi tum mujhe bacha lo plz…

Raj: OK main abhi aya…

Raj ne phone kata aur bahar ki taraf chal pada…Sunidhi ne use jate huye dekha…

Sunidhi: Raj kahan ja rahe ho…

Raj ne koi jawab nahi diya aur wo aise hi bahar ki taraf chalta raha…Sunidhi bhi uske piche chal padi…

Sunidhi: Raj ruko tumhe doctor ne ghar par rehne ko kaha hai…kahan ja rahe ho…

Par Raj ne koi baat nahi suni aur apni car nikal kar chal pada…Sunidhi ko boht fikar hone lagi…Raj boht ajeeb behavior kar raha tha…Sunidhi seedha Priya ke ghar ki taraf daudi…wahan hall mein Priya aur Geeta baithi thin…Sunidhi ko is tarah gabraya huya dekh kar Geeta ne pucha…

Geeta: kya huya Sunidhi sab thik toh hai na…

Sunidhi: kus thik nahi hai…Raj pata nahi gadi lekar kahan chala gaya hai…wo boht ajeeb lag raha tha…mujhe boht fikar ho rahi hai…

Priya Sunidhi ki baat sunte hi ghabra gayi use kus samaj nahi aya aur wo bina kus soche samjhe garage ki taraf daudi Geeta Aur Sunidhi bhi use awaj lagate huye Uske piche daudi but tab tak Priya car lekar nikal chuki thi…

Sunidhi: ab yeh kahan chali gayi…

Geeta: pata nahi…hume Mohit aur bhaisahab ko phone kar dena chahiye…

Sunidhi: han sahi kaha tumne…

Udhar Priya ko ab kus samaj nahi a raha tha k wo kahan jaye…usne apna earphone kaan mein lagaya aur Raj ko call kiya Raj ne bhi phone pick kiya…

Raj: hlo han bolo Priya…

Priya: tum kahan ja rahe ho…pata hai ghar mein sab kitne pareshan hain…

Raj: yaar dekho kisi ko batana mat main xxxx street ja raha hun…wahan khatra hai koi bhi mere piche mat ana…

Raj ne age koi baat nahi ki aur phone kaat diya…

Priya ne bhi gadi usi address ki taraf dauda di…

Raj jaldi hi us jagah pahunch gaya…Raj ko boht tez dard hone laga tha but use abhi isha ko bachana tha…Raj ne Isha ko usi number par phone kiya…Isha ne jaldi hi phone pick kar liya…

Raj: hlo Isha kahan ho tum main pahunch gaya hun…

Isha: main yahan ek sweets shop mein chupi huyi hun…

Raj ne as paas dekha toh use ek sweet shop najar ayi…

Raj: yeh purani si shop…

Isha: han…

Raj: toh tum bahar a jao…main bahar hi khada hun…

Fir us shop ka darwaja khula aur Isha bahar a gayi…Isha ka boht bura haal tha…uske Baal bikhare huye…chehre par dhul mitti ke nishan aur Sukh chuke ansoo ke nishan the…use dekh kar Raj ka dil fat sa gaya…ek hamesha khus rehne wali khubsurat ladki ki itni maadi halat dekh kar Raj kus pal ke liye apna dard bhi bhul gaya…

Udhar Isha ne Jaise hi Raj ko dekha toh usne Raj ki taraf daud laga di aur seedha ja kar Raj ko apni bahon mein bhar liya…aur phut phut kar rone lagi…Raj uske Sir ko sehlane laga aur use hausla dene laga…

Raj: chup ho jao Ishu…main a gaya hun na sab thik ho jayega…

Isha: Raj tum kahan the…tumhe pata hai Maine tujhe kitna yaad kiya…mujhe pata chala k us kamine nikhil ne tum par attack kiya…main chah kar bhi tumhare paas nahi a sakti thi…

Raj: Maine bhi tumhe boht miss kiya…but abhi batein karne ka time nahi hai…chalo phata phat gadi mein baitho…

Raj ne Isha ko apne se alag kiya aur gadi ki taraf Jane laga…but tabhi peeche se kisi ki awaj ayi…

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai…jara humse toh milte jao…

Raj aur isha ne palat kar dekha toh samne 6 ladke yah kahein gunde khade the…unhe dekh Kar Isha toh dar ke mare Raj ke peeche chup gayi…

Raj: dekho hamein Jane do…

Gunda1: Maine tumhe kab roka Jana hai toh jao par ladki ko hamare hawale karte jao…

Raj: main Ise apne sath lekar jaunga…

Gunda2 : hum Jane denge tab na dekho hum tumhe kus nahi karna chahte humein bas yeh ladki chahiye…chup chap dedo warna acha nahi hoga…

Raj: kya karloge tum log…

Isha (dar ke mare): Raj chalo yahan se…

Par tabhi un logon ne Raj par attack kar diya…Raj ne bhi na ao dekha na tao sabse age wale ke pait mein aisa ghusa mara k wo 4 feet dur jakar gira…uski aisi halat dekh kar baki ke wahin ruk gaye…Raj ne isha ko gadi ki chabi di aur ander baithne ko kaha…

Isha: nahi tum bhi chalo…

Raj: Maine kaha na tum car mein jakar baitho…sunayi nahi deta kya…

Raj ne yeh chilate huye kaha aur Isha chup chap Gadi mein jakar baith gayi…Tabhi un mein se ek gunde ne Raj par chaku se waar kiya…Raj toh Bach gaya par uski t- shirt fat gayi…Raj ne T-shirt ko faad kar fenk diya…Raj ki muscular body aur six pack dekh kar gundon ki pant geeli ho gayi…par bechare adat se majbur hain…hero se maar khaye bina mante nahi toh ek sath do chale aye Raj ki taraf…

Raj ne ek ko hath se pakda aur ghuma kar dusre se de Mara…dono ek hi baar mein dher…tabhi ek aur aya aur Raj ko laat Marne laga…Raj ne uski wahi laat pakdi aur use utha kar munh ke bal patak diya…abhi bhi do Baki the…Raj ko un dono ne dono taraf se ghair liya…unmein se ek Jaise hi Raj ke munh par ghunsa Marne laga Raj ne apne ghutno ke bal baith kar seedha uske pait mein de mara usne apna pait pakad liya aur Raj ne uski Peeth par kohni se aisa waar kiya k wo wahin munh ke bal pasat ho gaya…ab bacha akhiri wala…yeh toh bechara aise hi dar ke mare kaamp raha tha…

Par fir se wahi purani adat k maar khaye bina toh akal ati nahi…Usne Raj ke pait mein jordar ghunsa jaad diya…par Raj ne uske jabde par jump le kar aisa ghunsa Mara ke pheli hi baar mein uske munh se khun ki ek dhar nikli aur wo munh ke bal jameen par ja gira…

Sabhi ko thikane laga kar Raj gadi ki taraf chal pada aur Isha bhi gadi se nikal kar ayi…aur bhag kar Raj ko gale laga liya…Raj ki Peeth ke jakham bhar toh chuke the par itni takat lagane ki wajah se unmein dard hone laga tha…Raj ke munh se ek aah nikal gayi…

Abhi Raj aur Isha ek dusre ke gale lage hi the k tabhi unmein se ek gunda utha aur chaku utha kar Raj ki taraf dauda…Isha ne use dekh kiya par Raj ki Peeth uski taraf thi toh wo nahi dekh paya…isha ke munh se cheekh nikal gayi but isse pehle ke wo Raj ko koi nuksaan pahuncha pata usse pehle ek mota danda Uske Sir mein laga aur wo behosh hokar gir gaya…

Raj ne palat kar dekha toh Priya hath mein danda liye khadi thi…

Raj: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho…maine mana kiya tha na…

Par Priya ne koi jawab nahi diya aur ek jhanatedar thapad Raj ki gaal par jad diya Raj ke sath sath Isha ki bhi halat patli ho gayi…par agle hi pal Priya ne Raj ko apni bahon mein bhar liya aur rone lagi…

Priya: pagal ho Gaye ho kya tum… agar kus ho jata toh hamara kya hota pata hai ghar mein mom aur aunty kitne pareshan hain...

Raj ne Priya ko khud se alag kiya…

Raj: dekho Priya yahan Isha ki jaan khatre mein thi…

Priya: kam se kam kisi ko bata toh dete…agar kus uch nich ho jati toh hum tumhe kahan dhundte…

Raj ko apni galti ka ehsas ho chuka tha usne Priya ke ansoo poche…

Raj: sorry yaar mujhe kus samaj nahi aya k kya karun…aur mara mujhe aur tu ro khud rahi hai…ab chup ho ja ghar chalte hain…

Priya: thik hai ghar mein hum sab Milkar tumhari khabar lete hain…

Raj: OK baba par abhi toh ghar chalo…

Fir raj aur isha Raj ki gadi mein aur Priya apni gadi mein ghar ki taraf chal pade…

Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi umeed hai ap logon ko pasand aya ho…ab age story kya kya twist leti hai aur ghar jane ke baad kya hota hai…yeh janne ke liye bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath…apka apna SIDHU…

To be continued…

[sarit11]

 

 Originally Posted by samrock19797
   Namste Sidhu ji
   mai aapki story bhut pehle se padh rhi hu mai issi group ki ek members mai se ek hu mujhe aapki story or concept bhi accha lga par kabgi reply nhi kiya kyoki hmare sarre group ki ek jaisi hi soch hai toh sagar kare ya mai hamre group mai koi bhi reply karta ho toh yeh ek reply hum sab sabki tarf se hota hai.

   Sidhu ji aapki story mai jo twist tha that was awesome abb or kya likhy samjh mai nhi aa rha kyoki mai ek silent reader hu par sagar aaj kal thoda buzy hai toh mai reply kar rhi hu or aapki story hai hi itni khobsurat bas sach mai reply ke liye pehli baar online hui hu so koi galti ho gayi ho reply mai aapni ek naddan Friend samjh kar maaf kar dena

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   Originally Posted by spxossip
   Ab bhai itni mast jaa rhi hai story.....to isme kya kamiyan nikale..........bahut khub likh rhe ho.......views dekhke to samaj jao yaar.....story already hit ho chuki hai....rhi baat regular readers ke cmnts ki to kabhi kabhi aapne bhailog busy hote hai personal kamo me .....to reh jata hoga.....jaise mai 3-4 dino se naa ke barabar hi aaya hu....due to exams....wo bhi engg. Ke dimag kharab ho jata hai yaar..chalo thik hai....bas ye mat sichna ki kisi ko pasand nhi aa rhi story....itni mehnat story ke liye bahut kam writers lete hai.......aapne to 1st day se lagbhag daily update diya hai .......jisme aap ki lagan bhi dikhti hai....
   So please keep it up....ur rocking bro......rhi baat sujhav ki to aap xp ke senior writers se jaroor salah le sakte hai........jaise ki nain11ster bhai....pritan da ......harshit bhai..aur bhi kai saare......to aap unse puch sakte hai......agr jaroorat pade toh....

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