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bai end aa story jehi te update vv bas veer assi ek group aa ohfe naam toh hi eh account aa
samrock (sagar abhi mehak ragini chetan kashish)
bas bai aasi saare hi agge kafi frdz te relatives nu links send aa vdia story de te ohna vich tuhadi story v aa
oh gal vakh aa ke kafi bahute jaane aa jehde oh silent reader aa
bas sidhu bai next story da das kk vv sira la ta
assi tah tuhade naal ha hi bakki kafi silent readers v ne
rabb tuhanu vdhiya umra bakshe te navve te ghait ideas v deve new story lai
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Quote:Originally Posted by kkkikahani
Mast update boss...
Ek bat hai ap frndship sahi se dikha rahe ho....
Sonoiya ka reactuon aur bad me khud jo fell hona achha laga...
Ab bro movie ka nam liya hai to theater me bhejna jarur.! ..
Ab riya soniya convo main kyu guess karu aphi likhdena.....
Mujhe to sirf raj priya ki dildedariya guess karni hai...
Sorf ek hi syjav dena chahuga as a reader... Update thoda bada do....
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Bhai thanks....ap fikar mat kijiye main sab kus likhunga...aur update ke liye kayi logon ne kaha hai toh thoda aur bada likhne ki kosish karunga
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Bhai Aaj hi sare update padhe kuch din se hospital mein busy ho gaya tha....
Priya Raj ko Pyar karti hai....Par kya Raj bhi Pyar kar payega....
Mere hisab se Nikhil ne hi Raj pe humla kiya hoga....
Waiting for More Update..
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Please post update sir
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Sarit garu updates post cheyyandi please
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i am doing all one by one sir.
waiting for helping hands.
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Update 45
Sonia bed par lait kar so gayi…par Priya ki ankhon mein neend ka koi ata pata nahi tha…uske liye yeh raat badi lambi hone wali thi…akhir uska pyar uska Raj Jindagi Aur Maut Ke Beech Lad Raha Tha…uski Kaise Ankh Lag Jati…usne Toh Yeh Raat Jag Kar Hi Beetani Thi…wo Bas Sonia Ke Bagal Mein Laiti Raj Ki Lambi Umar Ki Dua Mangti Rahi…
Ab age….
Agle din subah 4:00 baje Priya ke washroom ka gate khulne ki awaj ayi…is awaj se Sonia uth gayi…usne ankhein maslte huye dekha toh Priya apne Baal pochte huye washroom se bahar a rahi thi…Sonia ne gadi dekhi toh sirf 4 baje the…
Sonia: tu itni subah subah kya kar rahi hai….
Priya: bathroom mein kya karte hain Naha kar ayi hai…
Sonia: tu pagal hai itni subah tujhe konsi Ramayana padhni hai…
Priya: tune hi bola tha subah Raj ke paas jayenge…
Priya ki baat sun kar Sonia ne apne mathe par hath Mara…aur thoda muskura kar boli…
Sonia: yaar tu na Raj ke peeche pagal ho gayi hai…tera ilaj karna padega…ab mujhe sone de…
Priya: nahi yaar Sona mat mere sath chal…
Sonia: oye mandbudhi wahan hospital mein uncle ko kya bologi k main itni subah apne Raj se Milne ayi hun…
Priya: han yaar yeh toh Maine socha hi nahi wahan toh papa aur uncle bhi hai…
Sonia: wahi toh par agar tera dimag chale tab na…
Priya: par kya karun mera dil nahi maan raha…mujhe Raj ko dekhna hai wo kaisa hai…
Sonia: main samjti hun…but abhi possible nahi hai…hum thodi der baad chalenge…
Priya: chal thik hai 6 baje uthaungi tujhe…
Sonia: OK meri maa mujhe utha dena par abhi toh sone de…
Fir Sonia fir se so gayi par Priya ko neend kahan ani thi…puri raat nahi soyi toh ab kya soti wo toh bas idhar udhar ghum rahi thi…aj uske chehre par wo rangat wo chamak najar nahi a rahi thi…agar thi toh sirf udaasi aur Raj ko dekhne ki tadap...
Khair dhire dhire 6 baj hi gaye…Priya ne Sonia ko utha diya fir Sonia naha li…aur bahar chal pade…wahan uski mom baithi thi…
Priya: gud mrng mom…
Sonia: gud mrng aunty…
Geeta: gud mrng beta uth gayi tum dono…chalo ab breakfast kar lo…
Priya aur Sonia dono table par baith gayi…Priya ko nashta toh nahi karna tha par wo apni mom ko nahi bol sakti thi…
Priya: mom hum hospital Jane wale hai…papa aur uncle ke liye kus leke nahi Jana…
Geeta: are han beta main in logon ka khana pack kar deti hun…
Fir Geeta kitchen mein chali gayi…Priya aur Sonia ne apna khana apni plate mein dala…Sonia toh khane lagi…par Priya ne wapis khana usi bartan mein daal diya…jisse nikala tha…
Sonia: yeh tu kya kar rahi hai…
Priya: dikhayi nahi deta khana kha rahi hun…
Sonia: par kha kahan rahi hai…acha Toh tum raat mein seriously bol rahi thi k jab tak Raj thik nahi hota tu pani bhi nahi piyegi…
Priya: han toh ismein majak wali konsi baat hai…
Sonia: tu pagal toh nahi ho gayi…marna hai kya tujhe…
Priya: nahi…par apne Raj ko bachana hai…aur bhagban ko meri baat manni padegi…
Sonia: yaar tu sach mein pagal hai…
Priya: ab chup chap khana khatam kar agar mom ne sun liya Toh bakheda khada ho jayega…
Sonia kus na bol payi par Priya ki halt dekh kar usne bhi jyada na khaya…jab tak Geeta ayi dono table se uth chuki thi…
Geeta: tum dono ne nashta kar bhi liya…
Priya: han mom boht acha tha…
Priya ki baat se Sonia ko khansi a gayi…Geeta ne jaldi se pani ka gilas uthaya aur use de diya…
Geeta: kya hua beta…
Priya: mom lagta hai khana iske gale mein lag gaya…
Geeta: kya pata…chal ab thik hai..
Sonia: han aunty…
Priya: mom lao khana hum hospital ja rahe hain…
Fir Geeta ne in logon ko khana diya aur wo log gadi lekar hospital ki taraf chal pade…Sonia drive kar rahi thi…hospital pahunchte hi un logon ne gadi park ki aur ander ki taraf chal pade…tabhi unhe Mohit aur Raghuveer ek bench par baithe dikhe…wo unke paas gayi aur ek dusre ko gud mrng wish kiya…
Priya: Raj ab kaisa hai papa…
Mohit: abhi vaisa hi hai…behosh hai…
Priya: koi improvement nahi hai…
Raghuveer: nahi beta…
Priya: kya main usko dekh sakti hun…
Raghuveer: han kion nahi…ab use room mein sift kar diya hai…isi room mein hai( wo dono us room ke bahar hi baithe the)…
Priya: thik hai Sonia ap logon ko nashta karwa degi main use dekh kar ati hun…
Sonia: thik hai tum jao…
Fir Priya us room mein chali gayi…yahan Raj ko rakha gaya tha….Raj ko oxygen mask laga huya tha …wo behosh pada huya tha…uske hospital wale kapde pehnaye huye the…Priya uske bed ke paas gayi…aur wahan rakhi table par baith gayi…wo Raj ko upar se niche tak dekhne lagi…Raj ki aisi halt dekh kar uski ankhon se ansoo behne lage…usne Raj ka hath apne hath mein tham liya….aur behosh pade Raj se batein karne lagi…
Priya: Raj tum uth kion nahi rahe….dekho college ka time ho gaya hai…tum uth jao dekho tumhare chakar mein mera bhi college miss ho jayega…Raj uth jao na meri jaan nikli ja rahi hai…Raj…meri baat kion nahi sun rahe….Raj agar tum aise hi laite rahe toh kaise chalega…
Par Raj ko kya pata k use koi itne pyar se bula raha hai….Priya bolti bolti buri tarah se Rone lagi thi…uski sansein bhari hone lagi thi…wo aur wahan na ruk payi…usne apne ansoo poche aur tez kadmo se bahar ki taraf Jane lagi…
Bahar a kar dekha toh wahan koi nahi tha…wo usi table par baith gayi yahan uske papa baithe the…uska bura haal tha…wo baar baar Raj ke kamre se koi awaj sunne ki kosish kar rahi thi…k kash Raj uthe aur use awaj de par Raj nahi utha…thodi der baad uske papa aur uncle bhi a gaye...sath mein Sonia thi aur uski mom aur Raj ki mom….
Sunidhi: abhi mera beta kaisa hai…
Raghuveer: abhi use hosh nahi aya….doctor ne bola hai k agar aj sham tak hosh na aya toh Raj ki jaan ko khatra hai…
Sunidhi: aisa mat boliye…bhagban aisa nahi kar sakta hamare Raj ke sath…
Geeta: kus nahi hoga use…sab thik ho jayega…
Thode time baad Sandy Riya Monty aur Diksha bhi a gaye…koi bhi aj college nahi gaya tha…
Sandy: uncle Raj ko hosh a gaya…
Mohit: nahi beta abhi nahi aya…
Riya: upar wala sab thik karega…
Sabhi log aise hi bahar baithe Raj ke hosh mein ane ka intzar karte rahe aur batein karte rahe…Priya sab se najar bacha kar wahan se chali gayi…wo hospital mein bane mandir mein chali gayi…aur hath jor kar bhagban ki murti ke age baith gayi…
Priya(man mein): bhagban ji plz Raj ko hosh la dijiye use kus nahi hona chahiye ….chahe toh uski jagah mujhe bula lo apne paas….main uske bina nahi reh sakti…sab use kitna pyar karte hain…sab ke dil boht dukhi hain…plz use thik kar dijiye….
Priya abhi wahin baithi thi k kisi ne uske kandhe par hath rakha…Priya ne palat kar dekha toh wo Sunidhi thi…
Sunidhi: beta tum yahan ho…maine socha pata nahi kahan chali gayi…Raj ke liye maang rahi ho…
Priya: ji aunty…wo kitna acha hai…bhagban uske sath aisa nahi kar sakta…
Sunidhi: beta bhagban aisa nahi kar sakta…tum sahi keh rahi ho…
Fir Sunidhi bhi Priya ke paas hi baith gayi…
Priya: aunty Raj ko kab tak hosh ayega…
Sunidhi: beta pata nahi par ek maa ka dil yeh jarur manta hai k Raj jaldi hi thik ho jayega…use kus nahi hoga…
Priya: han aunty…
Sunidhi: aur tum bhi uske liye bhagban se pray kar rahi ho….
Priya: han aunty…
Sunidhi: beta kab se chal raha hai yeh sab…
Sunidhi ke swaal se Priya chonk gayi…use samaj nahi aya k Sunidhi kiski baat kar rahi hai…Sunidhi uski aur dekh rahi thi Jaise uske jawab ke intzar mein ho….
Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…ab Raj ko kab hosh ayega…ayega yah nahi…aur Sunidhi kiski baat kar rahi hai…yeh toh waqt hi batayega…Dildariyan aur apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahein…
To be continued….
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Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
Wow aaj ka update to or bhi mast tha. Mujhe laga tha Sandy Raj ko aise dekh iska blame Priya pe dalega wahi hua bhi kuy ke wo Raj ko dost nhi bhai manta h so uska reaction sahi tha or Soniya ne kya handle kiya situation ko yaha pe aise blame ke bad bhi Priya ka reaction na dena uske pyar ko dikha rahi thi. Jo Priya kabhi mandir nhi jati wovRaj ke liye mandir gayi or Raj ke liye prey bhi ke so nice or pujari jee se uska ye bolana ke uske pati ke deaha aise h uske pyar ke intaha dikahti h. Ab Priya ne to bilkul clear kar diya Raj uske liye kya h ab bs Raj ka wait h wo kab tak tik hota h or uska kya reaction hota h. Or Priya or sandy kya karti h uska jisne Raj pe hamla kiya h uska kyu ke dono ke jaan Raj h or usne uspe hamla kiya h. Yarr tussi chaa gaye kya likh rahe ho i love it. I'm so exited for next update pls aaj to ek extra update ager possible ho to. Keep it up Siddhu. U just rock.
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Update 46
Sunidhi: beta kab se chal raha hai yeh sab…
Sunidhi ke swaal se Priya chonk gayi…use samaj nahi aya k Sunidhi kiski baat kar rahi hai…Sunidhi uski aur dekh rahi thi Jaise uske jawab ke intzar mein ho….
Ab age….
Priya: aunty kya kab se chal raha hai…
Sunidhi: beta dekh maine tujh se jyada duniya dekhi hai…aur Jo tu Raj ki fikar kar rahi hai main ache se samjti hun…
Priya: wo wo toh aunty main apke liye kar rahi hun…
Sunidhi: beta pyar kabhi chipaye nahi chupta…
Sunidhi ki seedhi baat se Priya ke tote udh gaye…use kus samaj nahi a raha tha k wo kya bole...wo bas sharmaye ja rahi thi…
Sunidhi: dekh aise Sharma mat…mujhe khusi huyi k tu mere Raj ki itni fikar karti hai…main toh kal hi samaj gayi thi jab tu mere gale lag kar ro rahi thi…
Priya (sharmate huye): wo aunty ap kisi ko batana mat…
Sunidhi: kion tumne konsi koi chori ki hai…
Priya: aunty sirf meri taraf se hi hai…Raj nahi karta…
Sunidhi: kion…
Priya: aunty apko ek baat ka pata nahi…main apko bataun toh ap mujhse naraj mat hona…
Sunidhi: nahi houngi….tu bata…
Fir Priya ne darte darte Raj aur Priya ki pehli mulakat se lekar uske prati uske pyar tak sab bata diya…jaise jaise baat age badti gayi…vaise vaise Sunidhi ka munh hairani se khulta gaya…
Priya: aunty mujhse galti ho gayi thi…plz maaf kar dijiye…
Sunidhi ( Priya ke sir par hath ferte huye): beta tune apni galti mani wahi badi baat hai…aur mere Raj ki yahi achi baat hai k us par chahye jitne bhi dukh ayein par kisi aur ko takleef nahi pahunchne deta…
Sunidhi ne Priya ko apne gale se laga liya…
Sunidhi: beta ab mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai k mere Raj ko kus nahi hoga…jab tujh jaisi pyar karne wali uske sath hai use kya takleef ho sakti hai…
Priya: thanks aunty…
Sunidhi: mom kehne ki adat daal le ab…
Priya Sharma gayi…par thodi der baad hi fir serious ho gayi…
Priya: aunty Raj par kisne attack karwaya hoga…
Sunidhi: pata nahi beta …abhi Toh bas yahi kafi hai k mere Raj ko hosh a jaye…
Priya: Aunty main toh nahi hilne wali yahan se jab tak use hosh na a jaye…
Sunidhi: beta main bhi tere sath hun…dekhte hain bhagwan kaise theek nahi karta use…
Fir dono wahin baithi rahi…aur Raj ki jindagi ke liye dua mangti rahin…
Udhar baki ke sabhi log wahin baithe the…
Sandy: yaar Raj ko toh hosh a hi nahi raha doctor ko kus pucho…
Mohit: beta main samjhta hun…tumhari feelings par kus chijein upar wale ke hath mein hi hoti hain…
Riya: han uncle sahi bola yahan dawa kaam nahi ati wahan dua kaam ati hai…
Fir sabhi ne wahin khade khade upar wale se Raj ki jindagi ki dua mangi…
Geeta: yeh Priya aur Sunidhi kahan chale gaye…kafi der se dikh nahi rahin…
Riya: aunty main dekh kar ati hun…
Riya in dono ko dhundhne lagi…usne un dono ko mandir mein baithe dekha…un dono ki ankhein band thi…aur unke chehre se saaf pata chal raha tha k dono k Raj ke prati pyar mein kitni sachahyi hai…
Riya( man mein): mujhe lagta hai Sonia di sach bol rahi thi Priya sach mein badal gayi hai…wo Raj ki kitni fikar kar rahi hai…par ab Sandy ko kon samjaye k Priya is baar sahi hai…wo toh us par yakeen hi nahi kar raha…
Dosto hum thoda past mein chalte hain…kal hospital se wapis Jane ke baad Riya Sandy ke room mein gayi…
Riya: bhai apne aj hospital mein sahi nahi kiya…
Sandy: Maine bilkul sahi kiya…
Riya: bhai ho sakta hai…Sonia di sahi keh rahi ho…mujhe bhi lagta hai…Priya dil ki buri nahi hai…aj bhi usi ne Raj ki jaan bachayi…
Sandy: tum pagal ho chuki ho…Tumhe kus samaj nahi a raha wo sirf Natak kar rahi hai taki us par kisi ka shak na jaye…
Riya: bhai jaruri nahi k ap sahi ho…
Sandy: agar kisi ko meri baat manni hai toh mane nahi mujhe kisi ki jarurat nahi…par ek baat hai agar Raj ko kus huya main use nahi chodne wala…
Riya: Raj ko kus nahi hoga…
Sandy: fir bhi main use nahi chodunga…main Raj ko sab bata dunga k mujhe uske aur Priya ke bare mein sab pata hai…Fir hum dono mil kar use saja denge…
Riya: bhai wo Raj se pyar karti hai…
Sandy: sab Natak hai…aj tak toh wo Raj ke paas bhi nahi ati thi…aj ek dum se uska pyar kahan se jaag utha…
Riya: Bhai apki Marji par plz koi tamasha mat khada kar dena…pehle Raj ko thik hone do…
Fir Riya wahan se chali gayi…
Toh dosto ab hum present mein laut te hain
Riya un dono ko khadi dekh rahi thi…usne bhi hath jode aur bhagban se prathna ki…
Riya(man mein): bhagban in dono ki icha puri kar dena Raj ko thik kar dena…
Fir Riya wahan se wapis sabhi logon ke paas chali gayi…
Geeta: mili wo dono…
Riya: han wo mandir mein hain…
Geeta: chalo main bhi wahin jati hun…Raj ko hosh a jaye toh bata dena…
Geeta bhi un logon ke paas chali gayi…baki sabhi wahin baithe Raj ke hosh mein ane ka intzar karte rahe…
Karib sham 5:00 baje ek nurse Raj ke room se bahar ayi…aur Raghuveer ke paas ja kar boli…
Nurse: ji apke bete ko hosh a gaya…
Nurse ki baat sun kar sabhi ko boht khusi huyi…Sonia Priya Geeta aur Sunidhi ko bulane chali gayi…wo sabhi daudti huyi wahan a gayi…akhir kab se apne pyare Raj ke liye matha ragad rahi thi…un logon ki toh khusi ka thikana hi nahi tha…Priya ke chehre se kal se gayab chamak fir se laut ayi thi aur wo boht pyari aur sundar lag rahi thi…
Sunidhi: kya ab hum apne bete ko mil sakte hain…
Nurse: ji par kya ap pehle Isha ko bula sakte hain...patient baar baar usi ka naam le raha hai…
Yeh baat sun kar Priya ke dil mein tees uthi par use Raj ke hosh mein ane ki jyada khusi thi…
Raghuveer: Isha kon hai…
Sandy: uncle wo hamari dost hai aur pune mein Raj ki trainer thi…
Nurse: toh fir ap use bula lijiye…
Sandy: main nahi bula sakta…main kal se uska phone try kar raha hun par lag nahi raha…
Riya: kion uska koi address hoga…
Sandy: nahi mere paas nahi hai…wo abhi nayi ayi hai Mumbai mein…
Nurse: thik hai pehle uske parents usse mil lein…
Fir Raghuveer aur Sunidhi ander chale Gaye…Sunidhi ki ankhon se ansoo beh rahe the wo dono Raj ke bed ke paas chale gaye…
Sunidhi: kaisa hai beta…
Raj: thik hun mom…
Raj uthne laga…
Raghuveer: beta tu laita reh abhi puri tarah se thik nahi hai…
Raj : papa ap Sandy ko ander bulado…
Fir Sandy ko ander bula liya gaya…
Sandy: bhai kaisa hai ab tu…aur yeh sab kisne kiya…
Raj: thik hun…aur sab batata hun…tu ek kaam kar Isha ko kahin se bhi dhundh kar leke a…
Raj ki baat se kisi ko kus samaj nahi aya k wo Isha ko kion bula raha hai…Sandy ko bhi kus pata nahi chal raha tha…
Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…Isha ka is baat se kya Lena dena kahin yeh sab usi ne toh nahi kiya..yah Raj ka koi bharam yah koi aur baat…aur kya Raj kabhi Priya ke pyar ko samaj payega yah nahi…yeh Sab janne ke liye Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein…aur apna dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahein…
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Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
Nice but Chota Update. Or Jab aapke Pyar zindgi or maut se lar raha ho to nind kaha aati h yahi haal h Priya ka. Priya ka Pyar to Raj ke liye badhta he ja raha h jis karan se usne ye sankalp liya h ke jab tak wo hose mai nhi aayega wo pani tak nhi piyegi. Wow yar itna pyar. Sach classical romantic story. Jo ladki bhagwan ko manti nhi wo aaj mandir ja rahi wo bhi Raj ke liye ye pyar he karwa sakta h. Raj ke mom ne Priya ko raj se baat karte may be suna h or wo bhi jaan gayi h ke priya bhi raj se pyar karti h. Ab dekhna h Raj kab tak tik hoga kyu ke jisko itne log pyar karte h uska luch ho nhi sakta. Sobwaiting for next. Siddhu tu to chha gaya guru.
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Update 47
Raj: thik hun…aur sab batata hun…tu ek kaam kar Isha ko kahin se bhi dhundh kar leke a…
Raj ki baat se kisi ko kus samaj nahi aya k wo Isha ko kion bula raha hai…Sandy ko bhi kus pata nahi chal raha tha…
Ab age….
Sandy: bhai usko kahan dhundhu…na uska phone lag raha hai…na uske ghar ka pata hai…
Raj: wo xxx company mein job karti hai…unke office se pata kar kahan hai…
Sandy: bhai usse kya kaam hai tujhe…
Raj: yaar ja na tu kitne sawal puchta hai…
Sandy: OK bhai jata hun…
Raj: aur sun agar wo na batayein Toh papa se baat karwa dena…
Sandy: OK bhai…
Fir Sandy wahan se chala gaya…aur Sunidhi Raj ke bed ke paas jaker baith gayi…
Sunidhi: beta tu jyada tension mat le aur aram kar…
Raj: ji mom…
Sunidhi: beta wo toh acha huya Jo Priya ne tujhe bacha liya…
Sunidhi jaan bhuj kar Priya ki baat kar rahi thi taki Raj ke man mein Jo Priya ke liye kadwahat hai wo khatam ho jaye…
Raj: han mom kya ap Priya ko bula dengi…
Sunidhi: kion nahi beta main use bhejti hun…suniye ap bhi chaliye sab bari bari mil lenge…
Sunidhi Priya ko Raj ke sath akela chodna chahti thi…
Raghuveer: han chalo aur main inspector ko bhi phone kar dunga…
Fir wo dono bahar chale gaye aur Priya ko ander bhej diya….Priya ki toh mano barson ki tamana puri ho gayi…wo khusi khusi ander Raj ke paas chali gayi aur Raj ke bed ke paas pade table par baith gayi…
Priya: Raj ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho…
Raj : thik hun…tum batao…
Priya: main bhi thik hun…
Raj: wo main tumse kus bolna chahta hun…
Priya: han bolo kya bolna hai…
Priya ki sansein tez chalne lagi thi…use boht utsukta ho rahi thi k Raj kya bolega…
Raj(ek lambi saans chodte huye): dekho Priya us din tumne jab mujhse maafi mangi thi toh Maine tumhe maaf toh kar diya tha…par main pure dil se tumhe maaf nahi kar paya tha…par aj main khud tumse ek request karna chahta hun…
Priya: dekho tumhe mujhse request karne ki jarurat nahi Jo chahiye maang lo…
Raj: Priya tumne meri jaan bacha kar yeh sabit kar diya k tum dil ki kitni achi ho…5saal pehle Jo kus huya wo ek bhul thi jise tumne ache se sudhar liya…dekho main tumhari tarah ghutne par khada nahi ho sakta kionk abhi toh main seedha khada nahi Jo sakta…par main tumse dosti karna chahta hun…kya tum meri dost banogi…
Raj ne apna hath Priya ki taraf badha diya….Priya ko toh mano bin mange sab kus mil gaya…wo kehte hain na k jab insan dil ka acha ho toh bhagban uski achahyi ka fal jarur deta hai…Priya ki ankhein bhar ayi par usne apne ap par kabu kiya…
Priya: tum sach bol rahe ho na…mere sath majak toh nahi kar rahe…
Raj: yaar bilkul sach bol raha hun…maa kasam…
Priya ne jhat se Raj ka hath pakad liya…aur uski ankhon se ansoo girne lage…
Raj: ab tum ro kion rahi ho…
Priya: Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha k tum mujhe maaf karke mere sath dosti karoge…yeh toh bas khusi ke ansoo hain…
Raj: dekho yeh sab tumhare saaf dil ki wajah se huya hai…ab mera hath chodo sath hi le jaogi kya…
Priya: itni jaldi hath chudwa liya…abhi toh dosti huyi hi hai…
Raj: Raj Sinha naam hai mera Jo hath ek baar pakad liya use kabhi nahi chodta…han par abhi toh tumhe bahar Jana hoga…baki logon ko bhi Toh milna hai…
Fir Priya bahar chali gayi aur uske bahar ate hi sabhi bari bari Raj se Milne lage…Sunidhi Priya ke paas gayi aur halke se boli…
Sunidhi: kya bola wo…
Priya: usne mujhe dil se maaf kiya aur Mujhse dosti bhi ki…
Sunidhi: ab bas is dosti ke pyar mein badlne ka intzar rahega…
Priya: Han par ab yeh Isha kon hai…jiska naam Raj ne sabse pehle liya…
Sunidhi: kya pata dekh kar hi pata chalega…Sandy gaya hai use dhundne…
Sabhi Raj se mil liye…itne mein security officer bhi agayi…fir Mohit aur Raghuveer security officer ke sath Raj ke paas chale gaye…
Inspector: kaise ho Mr.sinha ab…
Raj (baithte huye): thik hun ab Toh…
Inspector: are laite rahiye hum toh apka byan lene aye hain…kisne hamla kiya ap par kya ap jante hain use…
Raj: han Maine dekha toh nahi par kisi par shak hai mujhe…
Inspector: kon hai wo…
Raj: Nikhil Gupta naam hai uska…pune ka hai…
Raj ki baat sun kar Raghuveer aur Mohit dono shocked ho gaye…
Raghuveer: beta kon hai yeh…aur kya dushmani hai tujhse uski…
Raj: papa lambi kahani hai…
Inspector: koi baat nahi ap batao humein isse case mein madad milegi…
Raj: baat kus is tarah hai k jab main pune gaya Toh Maine gym join karne ka socha aur Maine ek personal trainer rakhna tha toh Sandy ke papa ne mujhe Isha se milwaya….wo mujhe train karne lagi…aur dhire dhire wo meri achi dost ban gayi…Sandy main aur wo teeno ek dusre ke sath acha time spend karte…sab kus acha chal raha tha…k ek din jab Isha sham ke waqt ghar ayi toh uske sath ek ladka tha…maine isha se pucha k kon hai…
Ab kahani mein past se hi sunaunga…
Raj: hlo isha….aur yeh tumhare sath kon hai…
Isha: yeh hai Nikhil mera bachpan ka dost hai…maine tumhare bare mein ise bataya toh isne tumse milane ko bola…
Raj: oh hlo Nikhil…ao baitho…
Fir Raj ne in dono ko sofe par bithaya..
Nikhil: hlo bhai…wo asal mein Maine socha k akhir aisa kya khas hai apmein Jo Isha sara din tumhari hi batein karti rehti hai...
Nikhil ki baton mein kus bayang sa tha…par kisi ne us par dhyan nahi diya…
Raj: are bhai khas toh kus nahi bas dosti ho gayi…
Fir teeno aise hi batein karte rahe…Raj ko Nikhil kus ajeeb laga…uski batein sun kar wo kus ajeeb lagta tha…jaise wo apni baton se Raj ko koi ishara karna chahta ho….khair us din wo wahan se chale gaye….kayi dino baad Raj bajar mein ja raha tha k Nikhil ne use dekha aur uske paas chala gaya….
Nikhil: are bhai Raj kaisa hai…
Raj: thik hun bhai tu bata…
Nikhil: thik hun…bhai mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai…
Raj: han bol bhai…
Nikhil: chal thoda side mein chalte hain…
Fir dono bheed bhad wale ilake se bahar a gaye…
Nikhil: bhai dekh ghuma fira kar baat nahi karunga...main Isha se pyar karta hun…
Raj: are wah yeh toh achi baat hai…
Nikhil: par jabse tu aya hai wo Teri hi batein karti rehti hai…main chahta hun k tu usse dosti khatam kar de…
Raj: oye tu pagal Toh nahi…main kion dosti todun…
Nikhil: dekh mujhe pata hai tu mere se nahi darta par ek baat sun le k agar Isha meri na huyi Toh kisi ki nahi hogi….maar dalunga use…
Raj: tu pagal hai kya sale…dhamki de raha hai…abhi security officer ke hawale kar dunga…
Nikhil: ise dhamaki mat samjhna…agar aj ke baad isha ke aas paas bhi najar aya toh tujhe kus nahi karunga…par use nahi chodunga…
Yeh bol kar Nikhil toh wahan se chala gaya…par Raj aise hi wahan khada raha…Raj nahi chahta tha k uski wajah se Isha ko koi khatra ho…par wo Isha ko Nikhil Jaise ghatiya insan ke paas akele nahi chod sakta tha…isliye usne Isha se Nafrat ka Natak kiya…par usi din Isha ka transfer ho gaya Raj ko pata tha k wo konsi company mein job karti hai par usne kabhi usse Milne ki kosish nahi ki aur na hi use kabhi phone kiya …balki uska number bhi reject list mein daal diya….
Ab present mein…
Inspector: toh yeh baat hai…par apko aisa kion lagta hai k usne hi ap par attack kiya….
Raj: mujhe pata tha k wo Isha ka itni jaldi peecha nahi chodega…jab use pata chala hoga k Isha Mumbai mein hai aur main bhi wahin hun toh usne aisa kiya hoga…aur jis ne mujh oar hamla kiya uske hath par bhi vaisa hi tattoo tha jaisa Maine Nikhil ke hath par dekha tha…
Inspector: apki baat mein dum toh hai…par hamein kisi thos saboot ki jarurat padegi…
Itne mein Sandy a gaya…wo seedha Raj ke room mein gaya…
Sandy ( ghabraya huya): bhai Maine uske office se pata kiya par wo wahan bhi nahi ayi aur uska address le kar uske ghar par bhi check kiya…wahan bhi koi nahi tha…
Raj(serious hote huye): main jo soch raha tha wo sahi hai…Nikhil ne Isha ko kidnap kiya hai…use bachana hoga…wo uske sath kus galat na karde…
Raj ki baat sun kar Sandy puri tarah se confuse ho gaya…use Toh yahi lagta tha k Raj Isha se nafrat karta hai…
Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…yeh toh pata chal gaya k Raj Isha se nafrat nahi karta hai par kya Raj ka shak sahi hai aur agar sahi hai toh kya wo Isha ko bacha payega…aur kya is chakar mein Priya ka pyar Dosti tak hi simat kar reh jayega yeh toh ane wala waqt hi batayega...toj dosto Dildariyan ke sath bane rahein…apka apna SIDHU…
To be continued….
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Ab ye kya naya drama khada ho gaya....
Raj isha ko kyo bula raha hai, lagta hai jo ladka isha se pyaar karta tha, ye sab usne hi kiya hai ... Or raj ko ab isha ki fikar ho rahi hai....ya wo us se kuch puchna chahta hai...
Aakhir kar sunidhi ko priya ke pyaar ka pata chal hi gaya...chalo accha hai kam se kam ab sandy ka bhram to dur ho jayega
Accha ja raha hai bhai....keep rocking...
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Update 48
Raj(serious hote huye): main jo soch raha tha wo sahi hai…Nikhil ne Isha ko kidnap kiya hai…use bachana hoga…wo uske sath kus galat na karde…
Raj ki baat sun kar Sandy puri tarah se confuse ho gaya…use Toh yahi lagta tha k Raj Isha se nafrat karta hai…
Ab age….
Sabhi confuse the k kya ho raha hai…par Inspector ne apni baat age badayi….
Inspector: toh thik hai hum uski talash karte hain…hum pune mein security officer se contact karte hain aur uske bare mein aur jyada jankari hasil karte hain…
Raj: ji aur yaad rakhiye Isha ko sahi slamat bachana hai…
Fir inspector wahan se chala gaya sath mein Raghuveer aur Mohit bhi aur Sandy abhi bhi confuse khada tha k yeh sala ho kya raha hai…Raj ne uski halt dekh kar andaza laga liya k Sandy ko Isha ne uski nafrat wali baat bata di hogi…
Raj: mujhe pata hai tere man mein kayi swaal honge…tu puch le…
Sandy: bhai mujhe tere past ke bare mein sab pata hai…Priya ke bare mein bhi par mujhe yeh nahi pata k tu Isha se nafrat kion karta hai aur ab uski fikar kion kar raha hai…
Raj ke liye Priya wali baat thodi shocking thi…par usne pehle Isha ki wahi sari kahani jo kus der pehle baki logon ko sunayi thi Sandy ko bhi suna di…
Sandy: toh bhai yeh locha hai…Isha ko bhi Is Nikhil par shak tha k iski wajah se hi tum usse naraz ho…par yeh nahi pata tha k yeh sab Natak hai…
Raj: han par tujhe yeh Priya ke bare mein kahan se pata chala…
Sandy: bhai asal mein Maine Tumhari aur Monty ki batein sunli thi…aur Maine Monty se sab kus pata kar liya tha…
Raj: acha toh sale meri jasoosi kar raha tha…
Sandy: nahi bhai…par main ek baat bolun…
Raj: Han bol…
Sandy: Bhai mujhe Priya par bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai…mujhe lagta hai k wo tumhe fir se bhagana chahti hai…
Raj: yaar dekh admi ki sachayi uski ankhon se jhalkti hai…aur Mujhe lagta hai k wo sach mein badal gayi hai…usne hi meri jaan bachayi…aur han ab wo hamari dost hai…so uske sath ladna mat…
Sandy: bhai main toh hamesha Teri baat manta hun…tu bolta hai toh usse dosti bhi kar lenge…
Sandy ko Raj par pura bharosa tha…isliye ab usne Priya ke bare mein dimag lagana chod diya…par wo Raj ko jyada stress nahi dena chahta tha isliye usne Raj ko Priya ke pyar wali baat nahi batayi…
Raj: ab bas Isha ki fikar ho rahi hai…kahin uske sath kus galat na ho…
Sandy: bhai tu jyada tension mat le sab thik ho jayega…aur ab main bahar jata hun tu aram kar…
Raj: OK bhai….
Fir Sandy wahan se chala gaya…wo bahar a kar baki sab ke paas baith gaya…Monty aur Diksha dono ghar ke liye nikal gaye…Unke Jane ke baad Sonia Riya aur Sandy abhi Jane hi lage the k…Priya ek dum se khadi khadi jameen par gir padi…jaise hi uspar sabki najar padi sab uske paas pahunche…Sab boht ghabra gaye...Geeta ne uska sir apni god mein rakha…
Geeta: Priya kya hua beta…
Fir Sunidhi Sonia aur Riya uske hath pair maslne lage par use hosh nahi aya toh…Sandy ko doctor ko bulane bhej diya gaya…
Doctor ne ate hi un sab ko side kiya aur Sandy ki madad se use bench par laita diya…doctor ne uska BP pulse wagerha check kiya…
Mohit: kya hua hai ise ek dum se kaise Fir gayi…
Dr. Ji ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai...sab normal hai par lagta hai k inhone kus khaya piya nahi hai…sayad isi wajah se chakar a gaya hoga…thodi weakness hai…jaldi hi hosh a jayega….
Fir doctor ne use injection diya…aur ghar lejane ko bola…Geeta Sunidhi aur Sonia use ghar le gayi…Sandy aur Riya apne ghar chale gaye…aur Raghuveer aur Mohit doctor ke paas…
Raghuveer: Raj ko kab tak discharge kiya jayega…
Dr. : ji kal subah hi discharge kiya jayega…
Mohit: toh thik hai…aj bhi hum dono yahin ruk jate hain…
Fir Mohit aur Raghuveer wahin ruk gaye aur ghar mein phone karke bata diya….Raj ko neend ka injection de kar sula diya gaya…toh ab hum seedha chalte hain Priya ke ghar yahan Priya ko hosh a chuka hai aur... Geeta us par sawalon ki bochar kar rahi hai…
Geeta: tumne kus khaya piya kion nahi…dekh ab chakar a gaya na apna bilkul bhi dhyan nahi rakhti…pehle Raj ki fikar kya kam thi Jo ab tujhe bhi bimar hona tha...
Sunidhi aur Sonia paas mein hi baithi thi…
Sunidhi: are chod na dekh toh us bechari ki kya halt hai…tu abhi toh use khana khila de…
Geeta: thik hai par baad mein iski jam kar class lungi…pata nahi kya ho gaya hamare ghar ko Raj ko abhi hosh aya hi tha k yeh behosh ho gayi…
Fir Geeta badbadati huyi wahan se bahar chali gayi…aur uske jate hi Priya Sunidhi ki minantein kar lagi…
Priya: aunty plz mom se bacha lo mujhe…
Sunidhi: han par tune khana kion nahi khaya yeh galat baat hai na…
Sonia (Priya ko bachane ke liye): aunty isne khana khaya tha…wo bas aise hi ho gaya hoga…
Sunidhi: tu ise bacha mat mujhe sab pata hai…wo bhi Jo tum dono chipane ki kosish kar rahi ho…Raj ke bare mein…
Yeh baat sunte hi Sonia ne Priya ki taraf dekha toh Priya ne han mein sir hila diya yeh batane k liye k aunty sach bol rahi hain…Sunidhi ne apni baat jari rakhi…
Sunidhi: dekho beta main janti hun k tum Raj se boht pyar karti ho…par iska yeh matlab nahi k tum apne ap ko takleef do…agar bhagban na kare tum dono ko kus ho jata toh hamara kya banta…
Priya: sorry aunty…
Sunidhi: chal koi baat nahi ab chup ho jao…Geeta ati hi hogi…
Fir sabhi chup chap baith gaye….Sonia hairan thi k Priya ne aunty ko bata diya yah unko khud pata chal gaya par kaise …itne mein Geeta khana lekar a gayi…
Fir Priya ko khana khilaya…baki teeno ne dinning table par baith kar khana khaya aur Kal ki tarah Geeta Sunidhi ke sath uske ghar chali gayi aur Sonia aur Priya wahin rahi….Sonia ne room mein jate hi Priya se apne man ke sare swaal puchne shuru kar diye…
Sonia: yaar aunty ko sab kaise pata chala…
Priya ne use puri baat batayi…
Sonia: are wah yaar aunty toh badi jaldi samaj gayi par Raj pata nahi kab samjhega…
Priya: are koi baat nahi sab apne time par hona hota hai….Jaise aj Raj ne mujhe dosti karli…
Sonia: kya baat kar rahi hai…aur tune kab pucha usse dosti ke liye…
Priya: Maine nahi usne khud pucha tha…jab usne mujhe bulaya tha tab…
Sonia: are yeh toh kamaal ho gaya…ache se bata na kya bola wo tere se…
Priya: are kya bolna tha usne bola k tumne meri jaan bacha kar apni sachayi ka saboot de diya hai….aur mujhse dosti ke liye pucha…aur mujhe maaf bhi kar diya….
Sonia: yaar tu toh badi fast nikli…ab meri bhi dosti karwa de usse…
Priya: main kion karwaun tera kya pata mere Raj ko cheen le mujhse…
Sonia: are wah kya baat hai tera Raj…
Priya: aur nahi toh kya…aj nahi toh kal Raj mera hokar hi rahega…
Sonia: han meri bano Raj tera hi hoga…koi Raj ko tere se alag nahi kar payega…
Priya(ek dum se serious hote huye): Isha…
Sonia: kya huya ab Isha kahan se a gayi…Raj bhi aj isko bula raha tha…
Priya: mujhe dar lag raha hai…kahin yeh Isha mere Raj ko mujhse dur na karde…
Sonia: yaar kus nahi hoga…sirf dost hogi wo uski…
Priya: I hope so…
Sonia: chal chod yaar so ja ab…abhi abhi toh thik huyi hai…
Priya: OK…gud night…
Fir Sonia aur Priya so gayi…Priya ka vaise toh man nahi kar raha tha sone ka…par sayad weakness ki wajah se use jaldi hi neend a gayi…
Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…Toh ab yeh dekhna dilchasap rahega k kya Priya ka dar sahi sabit hoga yah kus aur hoga…aur kya Raj ke shak ke mutabik Nikhil ne hi Raj par hamla kiya aur Isha ka kidnap bhi kiya….sala boht confusion hai dekhte hain kya hota hai…toh bane rahiye Dildariyan ke sath aur apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahein….
To be continued…
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Quote:Originally Posted by Aryan sahu
Superb update....
Finally Priya aur Raj ki dosti ho gaya.....
Jab koi aap ko sachhe dil se pyar karta ho to Koi kaise dur reh sakta hai...
Ye Nikhi to bohot dangerous nikla...very nice.......
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Update 49
Sonia: chal chod yaar so ja ab…abhi abhi toh thik huyi hai…
Priya: OK…gud night…
Fir Sonia aur Priya so gayi…Priya ka vaise toh man nahi kar raha tha sone ka…par sayad weakness ki wajah se use jaldi hi neend a gayi…
Ab age…
Next day Thursday 10:00 am…
Mohit aur Raghuveer doctor ke cabin mein baithe the…
Doctor: ji ab ap Raj ko ghar leja sakte hain…formalities puri kar dijiye…aur ghar par apko uska ache se dhyan rakhna hoga…uska check up karne ghar pe hi a jaya karenge…
Raghuveer: OK…toh doctor ab hum chalte hain…
Doctor: ji sure…
Fir wo dono bahar aye...discharge ki formalities puri ki…aur fir Raj ko lekar ghar ko chale gaye…Raj se chala nahi ja raha tha toh use sahara dekar le jaya gaya…wo log Jaise hi ghar pahunche toh ghar par toh Jaise kisi ki shaadi ho aise log aye huye the…Sandy ke mom dad uske mama Mami…Monty ki mom…baki Raj aur Priya ke dost jinhein hum jante hain…Priya Geeta aur Sunidhi sab log the…Raj Jaise hi ghar pahuncha Toh uski aarti utari gayi aur use sahara dekar uske kamre mein le jaya gaya…kionk abhi uske liye seedian chadna muskil tha toh use niche hi ek kamre mein shift kiya gaya…
Uske kamre mein sabhi log use ghere khade the…Sunidhi Geeta aur Priya Raj ke bed par baki bade kursion par baithe the….baki dost khade the…fir shuru huya sab ke haal chal puchne ka daur…hamein pata hai k kya batein huyi hongi toh likhne ki jarurat nahi…khair fir sabhi chale gaye…Sandy Sonia aur Riya bhi…Raghuveer aur Mohit ki toh pichle do dino mein band baj gayi thi toh dono so gaye the…ab kamre mein bache the sirf Raj Priya Sunidhi aur Geeta…
Sunidhi: beta ab tu aram kar…
Raj: kya mom itni muskil se toh thik ho kar hospital se ghar aya hun aur ap hain k aram karne ko bol rahi hain…
Sunidhi: toh aur kya karna hai…cricket khelega…
Raj: khelna toh chahta hun par khel nahi paunga…isse acha hai k ap batein hi sunao…
Sunidhi: hum kya batein sunaein..
Raj: are kus bhi suna do…
Geeta: Toh sun machli jal ki rani hai jeewan uska pani hai…
Geeta ki poem sun kar sab Hans pade par jab Raj hasne laga toh uski Peeth mein huye jakhmon mein dard hone laga aur Raj ke munh se ek aah nikal gayi…Priya ne jhat se Raj ka hath pakad liya…
Priya: thik ho? Jyada dard toh nahi?
Raj: nahi theek hun…
Sunidhi ko Priya ka is tarah Raj ki care karna acha lag raha tha…
Sunidhi: beta kya hua…humne pehle hi bola tha k tu aram kar…
Raj: yaar mom kus nahi hua…aur vaise bhi akela laita laita bore ho gaya hun…
Sunidhi: chalo thik hai tum dono batein karo main aur Geeta lunch ka kus karte hain…
Geeta: han chalo aur Priya tum Raj ka dhyan rakhna…
Priya: thik hai mom…
Fir wo dono wahan se chali gayi…Raj aur Priya dono hi bache the us kamre mein…Raj toh normal tha but ek band kamre mein Raj ke sath khud ko akela pa kar Priya thoda nervous feel kar rahi thi…use koi baat nahi sujh rahi thi…par Raj ko toh time paas karna tha toh usne baat shuru ki…
Raj: tum dance boht acha karti ho…
Priya: thanks…but tumhari singing se badiya nahi…
Raj: acha mujhe toh nahi pata tha…
Priya: tum mein toh aur bhi kayi qualities hain…jaise tumhari body kitni achi hai…
Raj: Han but yeh sab Isha ki wajah se ho paya…nahi toh main wahi rehta Jaise tumne kaha tha English kaddu…
Priya ko Raj ki baat dil par lagi…uska Isha ka tareef karna aur upar se purani baat chedna…
Priya: Raj mujhse galti ho gayi…ab purani baton ko bhul jao plz…
Raj: are nahi main toh aise hi bol raha tha…
Priya: Han par main tab bilkul pagal thi…jab tum aye the toh mujhe laga k tum meri mom ko mujhse cheen loge…isiliye Maine yeh sab kiya…
Raj(Halka sa muskurata huya): dekho kisi se pyar karna achi baat hai…uski fikar karna aur bhi achi baat hai but agar hum yeh kahein k wo sirf mere se hi pyar kare Toh yeh galat hai…over possessive nahi hona chahiye…
Priya: han tumne sahi kaha…but ab main kabhi aisa nahi karungi…
Raj: achi baat hai…aur sunao…
Priya: aur toh kus nahi…but tujhe pata hai tujh par kisne hamla kiya…
Raj: han Isha ka koi friend tha Nikhil wo bhi Teri tarah jyada possessive tha…usi ne kiya aur Mujhe lagta hai Isha ka kidnap bhi kar liya…pata nahi bechari kaisi hogi…man toh chahta hai abhi jakar use bacha lun par kus kar nahi sakta…
Priya: yaar yeh Isha kya lagti hai tumhari Sara din usi ki baat karte rehte ho…itni fikar bhi karte ho...
Raj: kion tum aise kion puch rahi ho…dost hai meri vaise main apne har dost ki fikar karta hun…aur abhi toh tum bol rahi thi k main ab pehle ki tarah possessive nahi hun…aur itni jaldi mere doston ki into. Lene lagi…yaar abhi toh dosti huye ek din hi huya hai…
Priya: nahi wo main kion hone lagi possessive…friend ho boyfriend thode hi ho mere…ok tum aram karo ab main chalti hun…
Priya yeh bol kar wahan se jaldi se nikal gayi…aur uski ankhon mein ansoo the…Aj Raj ke baton se Priya ko boht thes pahunchi thi par use yeh ehsas bhi ho gaya k agar Raj ki anjane mein kahi baton se usko itna bura laga hai toh Jab usne Raj ko apne pure hosh mein itne kadwe bol kahe the toh Raj ko kaisa laga hoga…wo wahan aur na ruki aur seedha apne ghar ki taraf chali gayi…Sunidhi ne use jate dekha par roka nahi kionk usne andaza laga liya tha k jarur uske aur Raj ke beech koi aisi baat huyi hai Jo Priya ko buri lagi hogi…
Khair Sunidhi wahan se Raj ke room mein chali gayi kionk koi toh uske paas chahiye tha…thodi der baad Geeta bhi agayi…
Geeta: are yeh Priya kahan chali gayi…
Sunidhi: wo ghar chali gayi hai…
Geeta: are aise kaise chali gayi Raj ko akela chod kar…
Sunidhi: koi baat nahi vaise bhi Mujhe bata kar gayi hai…
Raj: are ap dono itni bhi fikar mat karo meri…aur agar ap logon ko bhi koi kaam hai toh karlo main theek hun…
Sunidhi: hamein toh koi kaam nahi hai aur vaise bhi tum itni Bahaduri na hi dikhao…tumse abhi seedha toh khada nahi ja raha….batein badi badi karte ho…
Raj: are manjil par wahi pahunchte hain jinke sapno mein jaan hoti hai….pankhon se kus nahi hota hauslon se udaan hoti hai…
Sunidhi: ek toh aj kal ke bache SIDHU ki commentary sun kar badi badi batein banane lage…aur tu chup chap yahin pada reh jab tak theek nahi hota…
Raj: are mummy kal se subah thodi walking karunga nahi toh mota ho jaunga…
Sunidhi: tu chup karja warna tujhe bed par bandh kar door lock kar dungi…
Raj(Geeta ko taraf dekh kar): aunty ap toh meri side lo na…
Geeta: no…aj main Sunidhi ke sath hu…
Raj: chalo koi baat nahi mera bhi din ayega tum sab se badle lunga…
Sunidhi: le Lena pehle thik toh hoja…
Raj: han sach Isha ke Bare mein kus pata chala…
Sunidhi: nahi tere papa ne pucha tha inspector se…but na toh Nikhil kahin mila aur na hi Isha…
Raj: kya yaar nikami security officer…main khud bhi kus nahi kar sakta…
Sunidhi: chalo koi baat nahi beta mil jayenge…aur bas sahi salamat ho wo bechari….uska toh koi kasur bhi nahi hai…
Raj: agar use kus huya toh main us kamine ko chodne wala nahi…
Sunidhi: chal kus nahi hoga…ab tu apni dawayi le aur soja doctor ne bola hai k proper rest karna hoga…
Raj: OK mom…
Fir Raj ko uski dawayi de di gayi…aur wo jaldi hi so gaya…Sunidhi uske paas hi baithi rahi aur Raj aur Priya ke ane wale waqt ke bare mein sochne lagi…wo bas yahi soch rahi thi k kahin Priya ka dar sahi na nikle aur Raj Isha se pyar na karta ho…kitni care karta hai wo uski….par bechari Priya toh Raj ko apna sab kus mane baithi hai…Bhagban sab thik kare…
Toh dosto aj ke liye itna hi…aur kya Ab Priya Raj aur Isha ke beech koi naya sanghars shuru hoga...aur kya Isha milegi yah nahi…yah fir koi aur twist ane wala hai…yeh sab janne ke liye Dildariyan ke sath bane rahiye aur apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahiye….
To be continued….
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Pahle update 46 ke baat. Wow Raj tik ho gaya.Priya ne apni galti maan le wo bhi Raj ke mummy ke samne or unho ne uskoaaf kar diya or Apne Raj ke liye pasand bhi kar lee. Maja aaya ye padh kar. Sath mai Raj ka isha ka naam lene se Priya ko thoda jalan hua ye majedar tha. Sandy ke galtfahmi bhi Raj dur kar dega. Kuyke wo kisi or se manane wala to h nhi. Raj ke tik hone pe Priya ka reaction expected tha. Wo sandy ka Priya ke liye nafrat bhi bt ye isha ka metter yaha kaise aaya ye nhi smjh aaya. Bt awesome updates. Raj ke tik hone ke liye
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Update 50
Fir Raj ko uski dawayi de di gayi…aur wo jaldi hi so gaya…Sunidhi uske paas hi baithi rahi aur Raj aur Priya ke ane wale waqt ke bare mein sochne lagi…wo bas yahi soch rahi thi k kahin Priya ka dar sahi na nikle aur Raj Isha se pyar na karta ho…kitni care karta hai wo uski….par bechari Priya toh Raj ko apna sab kus mane baithi hai…Bhagban sab thik kare…
Ab age….
Sunidhi aise hi Raj ke paas baithi rahi aur Raj sota raha…us din sham ko karib 5:00 baje Sandy aya…
Sandy: namaste aunty…
Sunidhi: namaste beta aur batao kaise ho…
Sandy: thik hun aunty Raj kaisa hai ab…
Sunidhi: wo bhi ab kus thik hai…
Sandy: yeh toh so raha hai…main toh isse milne aya tha…
Sunidhi: are koi baat nahi main chalti hun tum ise jaga lo ab toh kafi time ho gaya hai ise soye huye…
Fir Sunidhi wahan se chali gayi…Sandy Raj ke paas jakar baith gaya…aur Raj ko uthane laga…
Sandy: Raj…oye Raj uthja ab…
Sandy ne halka sa Raj ke kandhe ko hilaya toh Raj uth gaya…usne Sandy ki taraf dekha…aur waise hi laite laite…
Raj: are bhai tu kab aya…
Sandy: abhi aya hun thodi der pehle…aur bata ab kaisa hai…
Raj: ab pehle se kus acha hun…par yaar laite laite bore ho gaya hun…
Sandy: are toh koi baat nahi…ab main a gaya hun…sari boriyat dur kar dunga…
Raj: chal pehle mujhe sahara dekar baitha de…
Sandy ne Raj ko sahara diya aur pillow laga kar Raj ko baitha diya…
Raj: han ab thik hai ab bata kya chal raha hai…
Sandy: chalna karna kya hai…ab toh college bhi nahi jaya jata…
Raj: kion jata kion nahi hai…
Sandy: bhai kamal hai tu yahan pada hai aur main college chala jaun aisa kaise ho sakta hai…
Raj: toh ab toh main thik hun…kal se chale Jana…
Sandy: han bhai aur tu bhi jaldi se fit ho ja fir ek sath college mein masti karenge…
Raj: han sahi kaha…aur suna koi nayi taji…
Sandy: kus nahi aur toh…han sach us Nikhil ka kus pata chala…
Raj: na bhai abhi tak toh nahi…
Sandy: sala kamina ek baar mil jaye uski aisi halt karunga k khud ki shakal nahi pehchan payega…
Raj: yaar shant hoja…security officer use saja de degi…
Sandy: khak saja degi…pakda toh unse wo jata nahi hai…
Raj: han yaar baat Toh Teri bhi sahi hai…par main toh abhi kus kar nahi sakta…
Sandy: bhai tu nahi kar sakta par main toh kar sakta hun na…tu bol kya karna hai…agar us kamine ko dhundhne ke liye mujhe jameen asmaan bhi ek karna pade toh bhi piche nahi hatunga…
Raj: yaar Mujhe tujh par pura bharosa hai…par main tujhe kisi khatre mein nahi dal sakta…aur tere college ka bhi nuksaan hoga…
Sandy: yaar tu bol toh sahi kus nahi hoga…aur rahi college ki baat toh tu konsa ja raha hai…main bhi nahi jaunga...
Raj: toh thik hai tu aisa kar Pune chala ja aur wahan ja kar uske bare mein pata laga…par han sirf puchtach karna koi ladayi jhagda nahi…baki main sab sambhal lunga…
Sandy: toh thik hai yaar main kal ko hi chala jaunga…
Raj: yaar aj mujhe tujh par proud feel ho raha hai…yaar man karta hai tujhe ek jor ki jhapi de dun par kya karun jyada hil nahi sakta…
Sandy: are kya baat kar raha hai tu nahi hil sakta par main toh hil sakta hun…aur dildar bande hain…Dildariyan marte dum tak nibhayenge…
Fir Sandy ne Raj ko gale laga liya par jyada jor se nahi…aur jaldi hi alag ho gaya…
Raj: chal yaar jyada emotional ho gaye…aur suna koi baat…
Sandy: yaar koi baar nahi bas tu jaldi theek ho ja…akela bore ho raha hun…
Raj: are koi baat nahi…aisi choti moti chotein toh lagti rehti hain…yun thik ho jayegi…
Sandy: bhai yaar kahan se lata hai aisa dil k itni takleef sehta hai par kisi aur ko mehsus nahi hone deta…
Raj: bhai apna simple funda hai….khud ki chahe jaan chali jaye par kisi apne ki ankhon mein ansoo kam se kam meri wajah se na ayein…
Sandy: yaar main toh bata deta hun Jo takleef ho…humse nahi yuh ghut ghut kar jiya jata…
Raj: apna apna tareeka hota hai…
Fir aise hi dono batein karte rahe Sandy kareeb 7:00 baje wahan se chala gaya…uske baad us din kus khas nahi huya…agle din(Friday) Raj aur Sandy ko chod kar sabhi college gaye…Raj toh abhi theek nahi tha aur Sandy kus din ghar Jane ka bahana bana kar pune chala gaya tha…
Sunidhi Raj ke liye nashta lekar ayi…usne Khana ek side rakha aur Raj ko Sahara dekar bithaya…
Sunidhi: chal ab khana kha le main apne hath se khilaungi tujhe…
Raj: chalo kafi din ho gaye apke hath se khana khaye huye…
Fir Sunidhi Raj ko khana khilane lagi…aur sath sath batein karne lagi…
Sunidhi: jab Teri shadi ho jayegi tab bhi apni maa ko aise hi pyar karega…
Raj: are main konsa shadi karne wala hun…aise hi theek hun…
Sunidhi: aise thodi hota hai…kabhi na kabhi shaadi toh karega hi na…
Raj: kya yaar mom mujhe nahi karni shaadi…
Sunidhi: agar koi ladki pasand ho toh bata de Teri pasand ki ladki se hi shaadi karwa denge Teri…
Raj: mom agar apne ek baar aur shaadi ka naam liya toh main khana nahi khaunga…
Sunidhi: OK theek hai baba gussa kion karte ho…nahi bolti…
Fir Sunidhi Raj ko chup chap khana khilane lagi…Khana khilane ke baad Sunidhi bartan lekar chali gayi…aur Raj aise hi baitha raha….
4:00 pm Raj ke kamre ke gate par knock huya…
Raj: come in…
Fir gate khula Aur Priya ander ayi…Raj abhi bhi baitha hi tha…
Raj: are tum ao baitho…
Fir Priya Raj ke paas a kar baith gayi…
Priya: kaise ho ab…
Raj: thik hun tum batao aj ka din kaisa gaya…
Priya: acha hi tha…
Raj: kaise ana hua…
Priya: kion main a nahi sakti…
Raj: nahi aisi baat nahi hai aise hi puch liya…
Priya: main tumhe notes dene ayi thi…
Raj: konse notes…
Priya: Maine college mein aj ke aur pichle do din ke notes bana liye hain…aur tere liye bhi bana diya hai dene ayi thi…
Raj: thanks yaar…but iski kya jarurat thi main theek hote hi khud bana leta…
Priya: kion ismein kya hai…likhna hi toh hai…aur dosti ki hai toh nibhani toh padegi…
Raj: han sahi kaha…
Priya: aur ab dard toh nahi hai na…
Raj: nahi theek hun ab pehle se kam hai…
Priya: han kus din mein theek ho jayega…
Raj: pata nahi itne dino mein pait na nikal aye…
Priya: itni jaldi nahi niklega aur baad mein thodi jyada exercise kar Lena…vaise bhi cute lagoge mote hokar…
Priya itna bol kar hasne lagi…
Raj: has lo par main mota nahi hone wala…
Fir kus der aise hi baat karne ke baad Priya wahan se chali gayi…wo kafi khus thi Raj se batein karke…aur Raj ko bhi ab Priya se batein karna acha lagne laga tha…wo ab dil se use apna dost manne laga tha…par Priya toh Raj se dilo jaan se pyar karti thi…
Toh dosto kya Priya ka pyar Raj ko najar ayega yah yeh sirf dosti tak hi reh jayega…aur yah fir in dono ki kahani koi aur twist legi…yeh sab janne ke liye Dildariyan ke sath bane rahiye aur apne dost SIDHU ko aise hi pyar dete rahiye…
To be continued…
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Quote:Originally Posted by Shalvi1992
Ab update 47 kya twist aaya story mai Raj ne Priya ko dil se mafi mangi or apna dost banya tab Priya ke aakhol mai aashu aa gaye yani apne pyar ke liye ek kadam aage badhte houe ye feeling to aani he thi jabe usko lagta tha ke raj kabhi us se baat nhi karega yar Siddhu kya expression honge waha pe kya sama bandha tune is ko likh ke padhte hue laga jaise Raj or Priya samne ho awesome. Raj ke mom ka Raj ko sab kuch batana ke kaise teri jaan Priya ne bachai tab Raj ka react karna or wo dailog yMai to abhi ghotno ke bal baith kar mafi nhi maang sakta kyuke mai to abhi sidha khara bhi nhi ho sakta ye bada shandar tha or ye dialog bhi Mai Raj sinha ho jiska hath pakdta ho jaldi nhi chorta ye bol ke Raj ne apni chahat he Priya ko batai jo Sayad Priya smjh nhi pai. Mujhe lagta h Ab Raj bhi Priya ko pyar karya hwow or ab clear hua Raj ne isha se baat karna kyu chor diya tha yar ye Nikhil to bada kamina nikla or ab ye kya isha apne ghar mai bhi nhi mili ab kya hoga Kahi Nikhil ne to usko kidnap nhi kar liya ab dekhna h Raj kya karta h Apni dost ko bachane ke liye. Wow Siddhu tussi cha gaye. Keep rocking.
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Thanks yaar...aur sab tum logon ne sikhaya hai...isi baat pe THOKO TAALI...
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