[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Sriya2]

I am sorry for the delay in update. Some urgent work issue happened in my workplace and the last two weeks have been very busy and tiring. I am still writing the next update, but obviously pehle job par focus karna pada. Thank you for your patience, I will look to post soon.

[Paul5]

I am fully agree with you pl constrate your job one suggestion from me pl hold this story now kyooki you are busy in future i asume no update will come near future baar baar ye story saame aaye or pathak har baar disappoint ho you can hold when you will fully free in future you can continue best wish for your job you are good writer tc

[HBK♡♡]

I am sorry for the delay in update. Some urgent work issue happened in my workplace and the last two weeks have been very busy and tiring. I am still writing the next update, but obviously pehle job par focus karna pada. Thank you for your patience, I will look to post soon.

Post hundreds of updates per year, and make it your target

[Salma Khan]

How long do we have to wait for the next update?

[sexypreeti]

I am sorry for the delay in update. Some urgent work issue happened in my workplace and the last two weeks have been very busy and tiring. I am still writing the next update, but obviously pehle job par focus karna pada. Thank you for your patience, I will look to post soon.

Job is always priority, focus on that. Updates can wait  :shy:

[val.coutinho]

Very true saying
First comes family, food, job, and priorites..... then comes the story writing.... Story update can wait.... everyone has a stomach ro feed and a family to take care of.... rest of the things can come later....
Story update can be posted later too..... first concentrate on work and family..... whenever time permits keeps writing snd when yoy think its good enough to be posted.... that time you post it.... we will wait till then

[momass]

Job is always priority, focus on that. Updates can wait  :shy:

expected time

[sexypreeti]

expected time

Before Christmas 

[Sriya2]

Update 83

Doosre din Iqbal shehar jaane ke liye subah tayyar ho raha tha. Supriya uske saath kamre mein hi khadi thi. Uske mann mein bechaini aur pet mein ghabrahat ke maare titliyaan si machal rahi thi. Pata nahi wahan Lucknow mein kya hone wala tha.

Supriya ne dheere se kaha - Aap bilkul savdhaan hokar rehna... aur Vikram ke elawa kisi se baat mat karna...

Iqbal ne Supriya ki aur bina dekha kaha - Jee madamji... 

Supriya ke mann mein jo tha woh apne aap ko bolne se rok nahi paayi - Aap bas apna khayal rakhna, baki kuch ho ya na ho sab theek hai...

Iqbal ke chhehre par halki si muskurahat aa gayi aur usne Supriya ki aur dekha. Supriya ne apna chhehra doosri aur fer liya taaki woh uske chhehre par aa rahe bhav ko na pad paaye.

Iqbal - Aap befikr rahiye... main bas yun gaya aur yun wapas aaya... sab theek ho jayega...

Par uske bolne se Supriya ki fikr kahan kam hone wali thi. Supriya ne Iqbal ko uska bag thamaya, aur woh use apne kandhe par taangte hue bahar ki aur nikal gaya. Supriya kuch pal ke liye kamre mein hi khadi reh gayi. Iqbal tab tak seediyon se neeche aa gaya tha aur usne dekha ki Supriya uske peeche nahi khadi thi.

Usne upar ki aur dekha ki use ek baar Supriya ki shakal dikh jaye, par woh shayad abhi bhi kamre mein hi thi. Itne mein Abbas ne bahar se Iqbal ko aawaz lagayi, woh use apne scooter par bahar tak chhod kar aa raha tha.

Iqbal bahar ki aur nikal gaya, aur Supriya usi pal chhat ki deewar par pahuch kar use bahar jaate dekh rahi thi. Uska dil na jaane kyu baitha sa jaa raha tha, aur bahut saare bure bure khayal mann mein aa rahe they.

Kuch der baad, Supriya neeche aayi aur seedhe rasoi mein ghus gayi. 

Rubina ne uska latka hua chhehra dekha aur kuch der baad dheere se boli - Kya hua... itni udaas kyu ho... kal subah tak aa jayenge tumhare miyan ji...

Supriya ne apne chhehre ke bhav ko theek kiya, aaj tak woh apni feelings ko chhupana nahi seekh paayi thi - Nahi bhabhi... aisa kuch nahi... bas thodi tabiyat kharab hai...

Rubina ne fikr dikhate hue kaha - Kya hua?? Kahin tumhara mahina toh nahi aa gaya... tum jakar baith jayo... Hina ke paas pad hai, main use bolti hoon....

Supriya - Nahi nahi bhabhi... woh toh maine le liye they Hina se... bas thoda mann sa kharab tha aaj...

Rubina - Oh acha? Ye toh aur bhi achi baat hai... Iqbal ne itni jaldi khushkhabri de di... 

Supriya ke gaal sharam se laal ho gaye hai - Aap galat samajh rahi hai... aisa kuch nahi...  

Rubina - Tum dono ke beech sab ho raha hai na? Ab tak mujhe ya Ammi ji ko aawaz ko kuch aayi nahi...

Supriya sochne lagi ufff pata nahi ye sab kaise taak lagaye baithe they uske aur Iqbal ke beech sab hone ka. Woh pata nahi kab tak jhooth bolti rahegi - Jee... woh...

Rubina - Koi dikkat ho rahi hai kya? Tumhe ya use?

Supriya sir jhuka kar neeche ki aur dekhne lagi.

Rubina - Tumne uska lund dekha hai ab tak? Kitna bada aur mota hai?

Supriya Rubina ke muh se ye sunte hi chhaunk si gayi - Aapko kaise pata?

Rubina ke chhehre par ek muskurahat si aa gayi - Iska matlab dekha toh hai tumne... ghabra rahi ho kya? Main samajh sakti hoon, itna bada dekh kar koi bhi ghabra jaye... Shuru mein thoda dard hoga, par fir ek baar woh andar chala jayega na toh itna maza aayega, tum soch bhi nahi sakti... meri maano toh apne aap ko aur usko itna mat intezaar karwayo...

Ekdam se Hina rasoi mein ghusi aur bholepan se poochi - Kisko intezaar karwa rahi hai chachi....

Rubina fir se apne kaam mein lagte hue boli - Kuch nahi... tu kyu bade logo ki baaton mein ghusti hai...

Hina - Aap pata nahi mujhe kab tak bacchi samajhte rahoge... mujhe bhi sab pata hai...

Rubina - Acha ji... itni badi ho gayi hai tu... fir toh teri shaadi ki baat aage badani hi padegi...

Hina ka muh ban gaya- Ammi!!! Shaadi ka toh naam hi na lo... main toh bas ye poochne aayi thi ki main Naaz ke saath bazar tak ho aayu?

Rubina - Nahi... itni badi ghodi ho gayi hai... aur poore gaanv mein nange sir ghoomti firti hai apni us dost ke saath... kisi din naak katwayegi meri...

Hina - Ammi please... jaane do na... Chachi aap hi kuch boliye na...

Rubina - Chachi ko isme na ghasito... jayo unke saath baith kar pado...

Hina gusse mein pair patakte hue rasoi se bahar gayi aur Rubina ne Supriya ko uske saath jaane ka ishaara kiya. Supriya Hina ke kamre mein uske saath baith gayi. Hina ka mann padai mein toh lag nahi raha tha, par Supriya kisi tarah se use padane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par uske mann mein kafi bechaini chal rahi thi. Woh yehi soch rahi thi ki Iqbal kahan tak pahucha hoga, kya uski baat Vikram se ho gayi hogi.

Raat hote hote usne jaise har ek minute ka hisaab laga liya tha, Iqbal Lucknow pahuch gaya hoga aur uski Vikram se baat bhi kabki ho gayi hogi. Ab toh wapis aane ki bus mein chhadne wala hi hoga.

Use khayalo mein khoya hua dekh Rubina ne kaha - Supriya... tum aisa karo, upar apne kamre mein chali jayo... aur ache se kundi laga ke so jaana. Theek hai?

Supriya - Jee Bhabhi...

Rubina - Aur subah tak kisi ke liye bhi darwaza mat kholna... samajh gayi na... chahe koi bhi tumhara darwaza khatkhata raha ho...

Supriya ne masoomiyat se poocha - Par koi darwaza kyu khatkhatayega...

Rubina - Tsskkk... tum bhi na... Hina ke saath baithte baithte uske jaisi baate karne lagi ho... bas jaisa maine kaha waisa karna... ab jayo...

Supriya upar apne kamre pahuch gayi aur usne kundi laga li. Aaj ki raat woh is kamre mein akele bitane wali thi. Jabse woh yahan aayi thi ye uski pehli raat hone wali thi jab woh akele sone wali thi. Use darr sa lag raha tha, aur jaane kyu mann mein khayal sa aa raha tha ki kaash Iqbal yahan hota. Ufff, pata nahi woh uske baare mein itna kyu soch rahi thi.

Neeche, Abbas khane ke liye baitha aur Rubina use khana parosne lagi. Woh khana paros kar wahin uske paas baith gayi aur uski aur pankhe se hawa karne lagi. 

Abbas khana khate khate beech mein bola - Aaj Supriya nahi dikh rahi...

Rubina - Woh apne kamre mein gayi hai...

Abbas - Itni Jaldi? Sab khariyat toh hai...

Rubina - Jee woh... haan bas uski tabiyat thodi theek nahi hai...

Abbas - Acha, kya hua?

Rubina - Haan bas aise hi... aaj pehli baar Iqbal se alag hai na... shayad isliye...

Abbas ek dam chhup sa ho gaya aur fir dheere se bola - Usne kuch bataya? Iqbal aur uske beech sab ho gaya?

Rubina thoda hichkichate hue boli - Jee...... shayad abhi toh nahi...

Ye sunte hi Abbas ke chhehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi - Mujhe laga hi tha... ab booda ho chala hai Iqbal bhi... itni jawaan gori biwi le toh aaya, par usse sambhal nahi rahi hai... kaam karte hue bhi ab buri tarah haanf jaata hai...

Rubina - Abhi toh shaadi hui, kuch waqt toh dijiye dono ko...

Abbas - Aur kitna waqt de use? Poore gaanv bhar mein charcha hoti rehti hai uski biwi ke baare mein...

Rubina - Kaisi charcha... aur kyu charcha karte hai? Woh toh ghar se nikalti bhi nahi hai...

Abbas - Ghar se nahi nikalti hai toh kya... logo ko sab dikhta nahi hai kya... jitne muh utni baatein... koi kam nahi hai... Junaid toh haramiyo ki tarah uske baare mein baat karta hai... aur Rafeeq chacha bhi kam nahi hai...

Rubina ke chhehre par pareshaani badti jaa rahi thi - Aap chhodiye na ye sab baatein... duniya toh bolti hi hai...

Abbas kuch sochte hue - Main jakar usse baat karta hoon aaj, pata karta hoon mazra kya hai...

Rubina ek dam chhaunk si gayi - Kisse? Supriya se?

Abbas - Haan aur kisse? Mujhe kuch toh gadbad lag rahi hai... 

Rubina - Par.... Iqbal ko toh aa jane dijiye... uski gair mazoodgi mein usse baat karna theek nahi hoga...

Abbas - Kyu theek nahi hoga? Hamare ghar mein reh rahi hai...

Rubina - Par... aap sochiye zara... aap uske liye na mehram hai... uske kamre mein aise jaana...

Abbas ka gussa badta jaa raha tha aur usne Rubina ko ghoor kar dekha. Woh apne haath ka niwala plate par fainka aur khada hokar wahan se chala gaya. Rubina ko pata tha Abbas ka mann buri tarah machal raha tha aaj raat, par use kisi bhi tarah aaj raat Supriya ko surakshit rakhna tha.

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Der raat ho chali thi, aur Supriya apne kamre mein akele bistar par leti thi. Uske pairo se khud se aawaz hoti toh woh thoda ghabra sa jaati. Aaj kitne dino baad usne apne aap ko bilkul akele paaya tha. Do raat pehle is kamre mein jo kuch hua tha use sochte hi uske andar garmahat si paida hone lag gayi thi.

Supriya ne dheere dheere apni pyjami ke upar se apne aap ko chhoona shuru kiya. Uska doosra haath uske mammo par ghoom raha tha. Apne aap ko chhute hi uske andar jaisi koi chingaari si jaag gayi thi.

Supriya halki halki aahein lete hue apne jism ko chhoone lagi - Ummm... mmm... mhhhh....

Kurti ke upar se hi Supriya apni sakht choochiyan ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kapdo ko cheer kar bahar aa jayengi. Supriya unhe halke halke apni ungliyon se dabane lagi, par woh chhoti hone ki jagah aur badi hoti jaa rahi thi. Supriya ki bhaari saansein uske mammo ko aur bada kar rahi thi, aisa lag raha tha ki uski tang kurti kisi bhi pal fatt jayegi.

Supriya apne aap ko kaabu mein nahi rakh paa rahi thi, usne kuch pal aur aise hi apne aap se khelne ke baad apni kurti ko upar kheecha aur utaar feka. Usne andar ek ping bra pehni hui thi, jisme uske bade bade mamme kisi tarah se kaid they. 

Supriya ne neeche geela pan hona shuru ho gaya tha aur usne apne kaanpte hue haath bra ke upar se apne mammo par rakhe, aur unhe dabane lagi. Pehle aaram aaram se fir aur zor se. Baari baari dono mammo ko. Uski patli ungliyaan uske komal se gore mammo ko noch si rahi thi. Jaise woh chahti ho koi uske saath ye sab kare.



Supriya ki garmi badti jaa rahi thi, usne apne bra ka strap side kiya aur uski ek choochi bahar aa gayi. Supriya use halke halke masalne lagi, aur dheere dheere kheechne lagi. Kaash woh apne mammo ko apne muh mein daal paati, ya fir koi aur uske saath ye kar paata.

Supriya ne apni ungliyaan apne muh mein daal di aur apne aankhein band karke unhe choosne lagi. Uske muh ka thook uski ungliyon ko ache se geela kar chuki thi. Supriya apne mammo ko apni mutthi mein baar baar bheech kar ache se daba rahi thi.

Supriya - Ufff... mmmmm..... aaahhhh....

Supriya ne apne pyajami ka naada dheela kiya aur apni pajami ko neeche sarka diya. Usne neeche ek laal chaddi pehne hui thi, jo uski gori jaanghon ka rang aur bhi nikhaar rahi thi.

Supriya ne apna haath apne underwear mein ghusa diya aur apni choot ke bahar ungli rakhte hue wahan aaram se masalne lagi. Thoda paani pehle hi bahar beh chuka tha, par abhi uski garmi shaant nahi hui thi. Supriya ka haath apne aap hi zor zor se uski choot ko masalne laga. Abhi bhi bas bahar bahar se. 



Supriya ke muh se thodi aur zor se aawaz nikal rahi thi aur usne apna muh apne haath se dhak liya. Uska poora shareer paseene mein tarr hone laga tha aur bistar ki chaddar har jagah se bheeg rahi thi.

Supriya ne apni bra ko kheechte hue utaar feka aur saath hi apni panty ko bhi. Ab woh poori tarah se nangi ho kar bed par apne aap ko har jagah masal rahi thi. Usne apni do ungliyaan apni choot mein ghusa di, par woh bhi use shaant nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Usne apne choot masalte hue apni kamar ko thoda upar uthaya, jaise kisi adrashay se lund ko apne choot mein ghusne ka nimantran de rahi ho. Aur fir tezi se apni gaand ko upar neeche karte hue apni choot masalne lagi. Uska doosra haath abhi bhi uske mammo ko noch raha tha.



Supriya - Ahhh... ufff.... mmmm.....

Use bahut mushkil ho rahi thi apni aawaz kaabu mein rakhne mein. Tabhi use aisa laga ki bahar darwaze par halki si aawaz hui ho. Woh apne charam par pahuch hi gayi thi aur utsah aur darr ke maare ek tez fuwware ki tarah uska saara paani bahar nikal gaya. Chaddar ab achi tarah bheeg chuki thi.

Bahar fir ek halki si aawaz hui. Supriya darr ke maare apni aawaz ko band karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Kya woh itni tez aawaz kar rahi thi ki bahar koi aa gaya tha? Usne jaldi se raat ke andhere mein bistar ko tatolte hue apne kapde dhoodne shuru kiye. 

Uske haath mein sirf uski pajami aayi, panty nahi, aur uske use jaldi se pehen liya. Aur fir apni bra aur kurti ko bhi. Jhadne ke baad use ek ajeeb sa ehsaas ho raha tha. Woh is kamre mein, is bed par yahan jhad gayi thi, jahan Iqbal uske saath sota tha. Uffff.... woh itni garam kaise ho gayi thi aaj, use apne aap par kaabu rakhna chahiye tha.

Abhi raat ko light jalana theek nahi hoga, usne tay kiya ki woh subah hote hi chaddar badal degi. Par pata nahi woh isko ab dhoyegi kaise. Supriya apni aur se hatt kar palang ke doosri aur let gayi, jahan Iqbal sota tha.

Bahar se aawaz aani band ho gayi thi aur Supriya chup chap aankhein band karke let gayi. Uske neecha ka hissa abhi bhi geela tha, aur pajami bhi thodi bahut geeli ho chuki thi. Par jo kuch hua usse ek ajeeb se sukh ki anubhooti ho rahi thi.

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Subah uthte hi Supriya ne bistar se gandi chaddar ko hataya aur ek nayi chaddar bichha li. Woh jaldi se neeche nahane ghus gayi, shayad aaj sabse pehle. Aur fir subah hi chauk mein kapde dhone mein lag gayi.

Rubina use kapde dhote dekh uski taraf daudi aayi - Aree Supriya... ye kya kar rahi ho... chhodo ye sab... main kar dungi...

Supriya - Nahi Bhabhi... main kar lungi...

Rubina - Itni badi chaddar dhone mein kyu lagi ho subah subah... ye toh hum dhoban ko de dete na....

Supriya - Koi baat nahi Bhabhi... aaj mujhe karne de... agli baar use de denge...

Rubina chaddar ko gaur se dekhne lagi - Kuch gir gaya tha kya is par?

Supriya - Nahi... bas thodi gandi ho gayi thi...

Rubina - Raat neend theek se toh aayi na? Darr toh nahi laga Iqbal ke bina?

Supriya halke se muskurayi aur neeche dekhne lagi - Bas thoda sa.... par neend theek aayi...

Rubina - Acha... ye jaldi se kar lo.... fir mere paas aa kar baithna... theek hai?

Supriya - Jee...

Rubina wahan se chali gayi aur Supriya ek chauki par baith kar chaddar aur apne aur Iqbal ke baaki kapdo ko dhone lagi. Usne kabhi is tarah se kapde dhoye nahi they, par haan apni mummy aur fir yahan Rubina bhabhi ko ye karte jaroor dekha tha.

Kapde dhote dhote woh buri tarah thak gayi thi aur usne kisi tarah se saare kapde sukhaye. Uske mann mein abhi bhi Iqbal ka hi khayal chal raha tha. Use ab tak ghar pahuch jaana chahiye tha.



Woh kapde sukha hi rahi thi ki Abbas bahar ki aur jaa raha tha, aur usne Supriya ko ghoor kar dekha. Supriya ne jaise hi dekha ki Iqbal use ghoor raha hai, usne jaldi se apna sir apne dupatte se dhak liya aur andar ki aur chali gayi.

Rubina rasoi mein nahi thi, aur Supriya use dhoondte dhoondte upar uske kamre mein pahuchi. Ab tak woh unke kamre mein jyada baar nahi aayi thi. Unke kamre mein palang aur baaki samaan uske kamre se kahin acha tha. Rubina wahin kamre ki safai karne mein lagi thi.

Rubina ne jaise hi use aate dekha woh apna kaam chhod kar uske paas aa gayi - Supriya... aayo... baitho yahan...

Rubina ne Supriya ka haath pakadte hue use palang par bithaya - Main toh ye poochna bhool hi jaati hoon - kaisi ho tum? Kaisa lag raha hai yahan sab?

Supriya - Jee.. sab theek hai... acha hi hai...

Rubina - Tum ek bade shehar mein rehti thi na... toh yahan thodi dikkat toh mehsoos hoti hogi...

Supriya - Jee... woh...

Rubina - Tum mujhse khul kar baat kar sakti ho... ghabrayo nahi...

Supriya - Haan... ek bade shehar mein hi rehti thi... par yahan bhi sab theek hi hai...

Rubina - Aur wahan tum Iqbal se kaisi mili?

Supriya ko samajh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kahe, woh Rubina ko sach toh bilkul nahi bata sakti thi - Bas woh... hum log... aas paas hi rehte they...

Rubina - Toh tumne kaise tay kiya ki tumhe Iqbal ke saath rehna hai... uske saath ghar se bhaag jaana hai... tum ache ghar se lagti ho... tumhare gharwale toh kafi pareshaan honge na tumhare liye...

Supriya ki aankhein neeche jhuki hui thi - Bas sab ho gaya... pata nahi kaise... aur main yahan aa gayi...

Rubina uski asahajta ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi - Acha theek hai... pareshaan mat ho... tum jaanti thi Iqbal ke baare mein yahan aane se pehle?

Supriya - Ummm... nahi... jyada toh kuch nahi...

Rubina ko thodi si hasi aa gayi - Fir bhi aa gayi uske saath... lagta hai kafi pyaar hai tum dono mein...

Supriya bilkul chup rahi, use samajh nahi aaya ki woh kya bole.

Rubina - Par ab kya ho raha hai? Tum dono ek kyu nahi ho paa rahe ho... tum samajh rahi ho na main kya pooch rahi hu?

Supriya ke gale se aawaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi - Jee...

Rubina - Aaj subah us chaddar par daag dekh kar main sab samajh gayi thi... tumhare bhi mann toh bahut kar raha hai... kya Iqbal ki taraf se koi dikkat? Dekho khul ke baat nahi karogi toh kaise kaam chalega... agar aise hi sab chalta raha toh tum dono ke liye hi acha nahi hoga...

Supriya ne chhaunkte hue poocha - Acha nahi hoga matlab?

Rubina - Tumhare nikaah ko faskh kiya jaa sakta hai... matlab ki khatam...

Supriya - Acha....

Rubina - Tumne kaha tha ki tumne pehle ye sab nahi kiya hai?

Supriya sharam se paani paani ho rahi thi, par use kuch toh bolna hi tha - Nahi... bas shayad isiliye ghabrahat si hai... aur fir unka kafi bada bhi hai...

Rubina - Acha.. toh tumne dekha toh hai kam se kam...

Supriya ne aankhein fir se jhuka li aur is baat toh uthane ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi.

Rubina - Dekho... tumhari Ammi toh hai nahi yahan... toh main tumhe sab samjhati hoon... apni betiyon ko bhi maine sab samjhaya tha... tum bhi unke jaisi hi ho...

Rubina - Tumhe main ek tel ki sheeshi dungi.... pehle tum uske lund par ache se masal dena... usse andar jaane mein thodi aasani hogi... theek hai...

Supriya gehri saans lete hue sab sun rahi thi.

Rubina - Agar woh lund choosne ke liye kahe toh mana mat karna... mardo ko bahut acha lagta hai... dekho pehli baat toh dard hoga hi, meri maano toh dheere dheere karne ki jagah usse kehna ki ek baar mein hi seedhe andar daal de... ek baar ke liye toh cheekhogi par fir sab acha lagne lagega...

Supriya - Jee... par unka itna bada andar kaise jayega...

Supriya ko is baare mein sochte hi darr sa lagne laga tha, aur pata nahi woh is baare mein pooch bhi kyu rahi thi.

Rubina - Haan... thodi dikkat hogi... par sach maano ek baar sab ho jayega na... tumhe bahut acha lagega... main dard ki dawa de dungi... par tum log jald hi is kaam ko poora karo... wohi acha hoga sabke liye...

Supriya ne ek gehri saans li, aur uske naakhun chaddar par gadd gaye they sab kuch sochte hue hi - Jee... woh aaye nahi abhi tak... aap unhe call karke pooch lengi kya...

Rubina - Tumhare paas phone nahi hai na... toh tum mera phone istemaal kar sakti ho... tumhi call karlo use...

Rubina ne apna purana sa mobile phone Supriya ke saamne kiya aur use kamre mein akela chhod kar bahar nikal aayi. Supriya ne ghabrate hue Iqbal ke number par call lagaya par woh out of reach aa raha tha. Shayad woh abhi bhi bus mein tha.

Bas woh ab ghar aa jaye aur use yahan se nikalne ka raasta mil jaye.

[भाभी जी]

Waiting for long update...

[Sriya2]

Update 84

Shaam hone ko aayi thi aur Iqbal ab tak ghar nahi pahucha tha. Supriya ki bechaini har minute ke saath badti jaa rahi thi aur uske mann mein bure bure khayal chal rahe they. Kahin Lucknow mein Iqbal pakda toh nahi gaya tha. Ya kahin woh use yahan chhod kar bhaag toh nahi gaya tha? Woh koshish karti ke dimaag mein se is khayalo ko nikaal de, par woh reh reh kar use sata rahe they.

Woh rasoi ghar mein raat ke khane mein Rubina ka haath bata rahi thi ki kaam karte karte uske aankhon se ek aasu beh kar neeche tapka.

Rubina ko uski halat kharab hoti dikh rahi thi - Kya hua... itni pareshaan kyu ho rahi ho... woh aa jayega... kahin fas gaya hoga...

Supriya ne halke se rote rote kaha - Aur woh nahi aaye toh?

Tabhi ghar ke darwaze ke aangan mein ek aawaz si hui, aur Supriya jaldi se bahar ki aur bhaagi. Uska dil buri tarah halchal kar raha tha, aur use wahan saamne Iqbal dikhayi diya. Use dekh kar uski jaan mein jaan wapas aayi, par saath hi aisa lag raha tha ki jaise woh abhi behosh ho kar gir na jaye. Uske theek peeche Rubina use thaame hue khadi thi.

Iqbal Hina se baat kar raha tha, Hina shayad usse pooch rahi thi ki chachu uske liye shehar se kya lekar aaye they. Aur Iqbal use chhida raha tha.

Tabhi Rubina ne unki aur zor se aawaz lagayi - Iqbal.... kahan reh gaye they... na koi call na khabar... dekh zara is ladki ka kya haal ho rakha hai...

Iqbal aur Hina ek dam chhup se gaye, aur Iqbal Supriya ke murjhaye hue chhehre ki aur dekhne laga. Supriya ki aankhein laal thi, aur aisa lag raha tha ki jaise woh abhi foot foot kar rone lagegi.

Rubina ne halke se Supriya ki peeth par haath fera - Jaa tu upar chali jaa... aur Iqbal tum bhi...

Supriya jaldi se seediyan chadd kar apne kamre mein pahuch gayi, taaki koi use rote na dekh sake. Andar pahuch kar uske aansu bahe jaa rahe they. Kuch der baad Iqbal bhi wahan pahucha aur bina khatkhataye andar aa gaya. Uske haath mein do bade bade kapde ke thaile they. Use andar aate dekh Supriya ne apna muh fer liya taaki woh use rote na dekh paaye.

Iqbal ne halke se kaha - Aap theek toh hai...

Supriya ne subakte hue kaha - Haan... main theek hoon...

Iqbal - Lag toh nahi raha...

Supriya - Aap kahan reh gaye they... mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha... bas bure bure khayal aa rahe they...

Iqbal - Oh acha... haan woh main shehar mein thodi kharidaari kar raha tha... aapke liye...

Supriya - Aap bhabhi ko ek call ya message hi kar dete ki aap kab tak aayoge... kharidaari jaroori thi ya wapas aana... pata nahi aapko ki aap kahan gaye they...

Iqbal - Jee.. haan shayad message toh daal hi dena chahiye tha....

Supriya ne apne aansu poche aur apne aap ko normal karne ki koshish kari. Aur fir woh sawaal pooch daala jo subah se poochne ko betaab thi - Aap wahan Vikram se mil paaye they kya...

Iqbal - Jee woh... main kya bolu... samajh hi nahi aa raha...

Supriya - Bataiye na... wahan kya hua? Aap unse nahi mil paaye?

Iqbal - Main din se unke office ke bahar hi khada tha, aur jaise hi woh bahar nikle main unse bas kuch palo ke liye baat kar paaya...

Supriya ke andar thodi si umeed jagi aur uski aankhon mein fir se ek chamak aa gayi - Kya kaha unhone... mere baare mein baat hui kya?

Iqbal - Jee... unhone mujhe pehchanne se mana kar diya... aur bola ki...

Supriya ke chhehre ka rang fir se badal gaya - Aur kya bola?

Iqbal chup ho gaya aur neeche ki aur dekhne laga.

Supriya - Please jaldi bataiye na... main kab se intezaar kar rahi hoon...

Iqbal - Unhone kaha.... ki woh kisi Supriya ko nahi jaante... aur shayad mujhe koi galat fehmi hui hai...

Supriya buri tarah chhaunkte hue boli - Kya!!!! Aisa kaise keh sakte ho woh!!

Iqbal - Shhh.... thoda dheere... kahin bahar koi sun na le...

Supriya ki saans ukhad rahi thi, aur aisa lag raha tha ki poora kamra ghoom raha ho - Par Vikram.... Vikram aisa kaise bol sakte hai...

Iqbal - Woh sab toh mujhe nahi pata... bas jo kaha woh bata raha hoon aapko...

Supriya bistar par baith gayi, uski aankhein saamne dekh rahi thi par nahi bhi dekh rahi thi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Vikram aisa kaisa bol sakte they. Woh toh usse beinteha pyaar karte they. Kahin koi galatfehmi toh nahi hui?

Supriya ne Iqbal ki aur dekha - Unke saath koi aur bhi tha kya wahan...

Iqbal - Aap ye pooch rahi hai...

Supriya - Nahi kya pata woh bas kisi ke darr se ye bol rahe ho...

Iqbal - Jee... unke saath ek ladki thi wahan...

Supriya ne socha ki kya pata us samay Isha Vikram ke saath khadi ho - Ladki ya ek aurat? Koi 35-40 saal ki, thodi moti par bahut jyada nahi...

Iqbal - Jee nahi... aisi toh nahi thi woh... patli si jawaan ladki thi koi, aur woh Vikram ki gaadi mein peeche unke saath baith gayi thi... par pata nahi kaun thi woh...

Supriya ka dil buri tarah baith chuka tha, Vikram shayad use bhula kar ek nayi ladki ko apne jaal mein fasa chuka tha. Is baar uski aankhon se aasu nahi bas ek nafrat ki jwala si jal rahi thi. Woh kitni badi bewakoof thi jo Vikram ke pyaar mein pad kar usne apni poori jindagi tabah kar di. Yahan woh kitni besabri se Vikram ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur Vikram ne kitni aasani se use bhula diya.

Supriya ke shareer palang par jam sa gaya tha, uski aankhon ke saamne andhera sa chhaane laga tha. Supriya ko pata bhi nahi chala par woh palang par peeche gir gayi thi. Iqbal hadbadate hue uski aur bhaaga par woh shayad behosh ho chuki thi.

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Jab Supriya ki aankh khuli toh uske maathe par ek geeli patti thi aur uske barabar mein Hina baithi hui thi.

Supriya ko aankh kholte dekh, Hina ne zor se aawaz lagayi - Chachi ko hosh aa gaya....

Rubina shayad kamre ke bahar hi khadi thi aur woh turant andar aa gayi aur Hina ki aur ghoor kar dekha, jaise use dheere bolne ke liye ishaara kar rahi ho.

Iqbal bhi kamre ke darwaze par hi khada tha aur Supriya ki aur dekh raha tha.

Rubina aakar Supriya ke paas baith gayi - Ye lo... paani piyo... 

Rubina ne Supriya ko thoda sa sahara diya aur use bistar par tek laga kar bitha diya. Woh use apne haath se paani pilane lagi.

Supriya ka sir abhi chakra sa raha tha - Pata nahi kya hua... ek dam se sab andhera sa ho gaya tha...

Rubina - Ab kaisa mehsoos kar rahi ho....

Supriya - Ummm... thoda theek....

Rubina - Hina.... ja zara Chachi ke liye neeche se fal le aa...

Hina fauraan khadi ho kar neeche ki aur bhaag padi. Uske jaate hi Iqbal ne do teen kadam aur andar ki aur le liye they.

Rubina - Maine kaha tha na subah ki itna kaam mat karo.... ab dekho tumhare miyan ji bol rahe hai ki mere jaate hi meri fool se biwi se itna kaam karwa diya ki woh behosh ho gayi... kuch khane ko bhi nahi diya...

Iqbal bolne ko hua tha ki Rubina ne use haath se ishaara karke chup kar diya.

Supriya apne chhehre par ek jhoothi si muskurahat laayi - Aisa kuch nahi... bas pata nahi kaise chakkar sa aa gaya...

Rubina - Ammi ji ko toh laga ki unhe khushkhabri sunne ko milegi... par unhe samjhana pada ki bas tumhe thoda bukhaar hai...

Rubina ne Iqbal aur Supriya dono ki aur dekha - Ab bas jaldi se unhe khushkhabri de hi do.... woh apne pote ka muh dekhna chahti hai...

Supriya kuch bolti isse pehle Hina neeche se ek seb kaat kar le aayi thi. Woh Supriya ke paas baith kar use seb khilane lagi. Supriya ka mann toh kafi toota hua sa tha, par woh Hina ko mana nahi kar paayi. Kuch der baad Hina aur Rubina, wahan se neeche chale gaye aur kamre mein bas Iqbal aur Supriya reh gaye.

Iqbal ne darwaze par kundi lagayi - Aap ab kaisa mehsoos kar rahi hai...

Supriya ne mari hui si aawaz mein kaha - Theek hu...

Iqbal - Maaf kijiye aapko ye sab mere muh se sunni padi...

Supriya - Isme aapki kya galti hai...

Iqbal - Aap so jaiye... hum log kal baat karte hai... main aapke liye jo samaan laaya tha woh bhi toh aapko dikhana hai...

Supriya ne halke se sir hilaya aur Iqbal ne kamre ki light off kar di. Woh bistar par aakar let gaya. Supriya bhi fir se thoda neeche sarak gayi aur usne apne aap ko chaddar se dhak liya. Uska dimaag toh jaise kaam karna hi band ho gaya tha. Kuch bhi sochne ki shakti hi chali gayi ho jaise. Aur jaise hi purane khayal mann mein aane lage, uski halki halki subkiyan nikalne lagi. Woh cheekhna chahti par uski aawaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi.



Kuch der aise hi woh halki halki aawaz mein roti rahi, tabhi uske kandhe par Iqbal ka haath pada jisse woh ek dam se chhaunk gayi.

Iqbal - Aap jyada mat sochiye... so jaiye... sab theek ho jayega...

Supriya palang par lete hue Iqbal ki aur mudi, andhere mein uska chhehra saaf toh nazar nahi aa raha tha par woh use dekh paa rahi thi. Woh usse bahut door nahi leta tha aaj.

Supriya ne halke se kaha - Kya theek ho jayega? Main toh kahin ki nahi rahi....

Uska rona ab fir se halka sa tez ho gaya tha.

Iqbal ne uske haath ko halke se pakadte hue kaha - Aap fiqr mat kijiye... main hoon na aapke liye... 

Supriya ko is samay rone ke liye ek kanda chahiye tha, aur woh sarak kar Iqbal ki aur nazdeek ho gayi. Aur fir apna muh uske seene mein chhupa liya. Woh uske seene par muh lagaye rone lagi thi, aur Iqbal ke haath uski baahon ko pakde hue uske apne paas kheech rahe they.

Iqbal ne us par poora haq jatate hue uski taango par apni taange rakh di aur woh poori tarah se Iqbal ke neeche sama gayi. Iqbal ka bhaar uske bhaari dukhi mann ko halka sa kar raha tha, aur kafi der Supriya aise hi Iqbal mein samaye roti rahi, aur use pata hi nahi chala ki kab uski aankh lag gayi thi.

[Rohan1198]

Wow what an emotional update parh k bura laga real man bichari supriya ka liye so sad over all fantastic update bilkul natural story

[qazmlp]

Beautifully written. So natural and with a lot of depth and details thrown in, the dialogues too are so apt and high quality Level of screenplay !!! Even many Bollywood Screeplay writers would fall short of your level.

[Abhi T]

Fantastic update agla update jaldi Dene ki koshish kariyega

[Imaamitrai]

Awesome update.....

[भाभी जी]

Very nice update...

[sexypreeti]

Superb!!! Mind blowing narration  clp); clp); clp);

[Rohanx40]

Both updates are very interesting and great.