ARJUN vs ZAHEER

[Manju roy]

Lagata hai ab yak dusre ki bhan se shadi hogi yak ka nikah to dusre ki shadi ye kya hai bhai ya to dono ko khus karne wali bat ho gai..

[Anum sheikh]

Nighat ?

[Ayush01111]

Dont say its nikhat and new chapter is to come

[Greenwood]

Update 119




Next Scene – The Sudden Fall

Shaam ka waqt tha. Arjun ke ghar ka drawing room poore doston ke hansi–mazak se goonj raha tha.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek doosre ko chhed rahe the ki kaun zyada heroic pose banata hai jab media ke saamne khada hota hai. Ammu sofa ke kone par baithi muskaan daba rahi thi, aur Shanu unke upar taana maar rahi thi ki tum dono ko ab sirf acting award milna chahiye.

Hawa me halke music ke jaise laughter ghoom raha tha.
Routine ab bilkul waisa hi lag raha tha jaise pehle hota tha.

Shanu uthti hai aur kehti hai
Ruko main sabke liye chai le aati hoon, fir tum dono ke fake heroism pe aur roast karungi.

Wo kitchen ki taraf chali jaati hai.
Sab apne mazaak me lage rehte hain—Arjun aur Zaheer ka friendly–taunt session, Ammu ka hasna.

Lekin agle hi pal… ek zor ka thud ki awaaz aati hai.
Sab chup ho jaate hain.

Ammu pehle react karti hai
Shanu?

Arjun, Zaheer aur Ammu teenon ek saath kitchen ki taraf daudte hain.
Aur dekhte hain—Shanu zameen par padi hoti hai, chai ke cup side me bikhre hue, aur uska chehra safed pad chuka tha.

Arjun turant uske paas jhukta hai
Shanu… Shanu… aankhein kholo!

Zaheer bhi panic me kehta hai
Yeh kya ho raha hai isse?

Ammu rokti hui awaaz me bolti hai
Arjun… hospital le chalo jaldi!

Room ka atmosphere jo abhi thodi der pehle laughter aur normalcy se bhara tha, ek hi pal me shock aur khauf me badal gaya.

Hospital Scene – Hilarious Twist

White–washed hospital ke corridor me ek heavy silence chhaya tha.
Shanu bed pe be-hos padi thi, machines beep kar rahi thi, aur doctor uski reports check kar rahi thi.
Arjun, Ammu aur Zaheer door ke bahar aise khade the jaise kisi ka faisla sunne wale mulzim ho.

Kuch pal baad doctor door khol kar bahar aayi. Uske chehre par ek mystery wali smile thi.

Arjun turant bhaag kar aage aaya
Doctor… Shanu theek toh hai na?

Doctor ne halki si teasing tone me kaha
Pehle mujhe yeh bataiye… inke pati kaha hain?

Bas itna sunnte hi corridor freeze ho gaya.
Arjun ka chehra ekdum chalk–white.
Ammu ki aankhein plate ki tarah badi ho gayi.
Aur Zaheer apne hosh khona laga jaise abhi faint karega.

Arjun ki awaaz phat gayi
Doctor… aap kya keh rahi ho?!

Doctor full smile me bolti hai
Please, unke husband ko inform kar dijiye… she is pregnant.

Yeh keh ke doctor apna file band karti hui aage chali gayi jaise usne abhi koi nuclear bomb drop kar diya ho.

Aur waha…
Arjun wahi ke wahi freeze ho gaya. Jaise statue ban gaya ho. Uske dimaag me sirf ek hi baat ghoom rahi thi – pati?? Pregnant??
Ammu ki aankhein badi ho gayi thi lekin aankhon me confusion bhi utna hi tha.
Zaheer bechaara apna balance hi khokar ekdum peeche bachi hui bench par dhad se gir gaya.

Doctor ja chuki thi, lekin uske lafz abhi bhi hawa me ghoom rahe the — “She is pregnant… inke pati kaha hai?”

Arjun wahi jam gaya tha, phir dheere se uski gardan ghoomi… seedha Zaheer ki taraf.
Uski aankhein full suspicion mode me thi.

Zaheer pehle toh blank face banata hai, phir ekdum awkward si weird smile deta hai jaise ki uski koi chori pakdi gayi ho.
Uske dant chamak rahe the, aankhon me guilt + comedy + bachpana sab ek sath.

Arjun garajh uthta hai
Oyeee Zaheeer… tu… tu hi hai naaa iska zimmedaar?!

Zaheer turant bench se uchhal kar khada ho gaya
Arrey pagle! Main toh bas chai pi raha tha kal raat… main kya jaano pregnancy kya hoti hai!

Arjun gusse me aage badha
Main abhi teri haddiyan tod dunga… bhai behen ka rishta barbaad karke rakha hai tune!

Zaheer turant corridor ke dusre side bhaagne laga
Arjun uske picche full speed se daudta hua…

Arjun chillata hua
Zaheeer! Aaj main tujhe hospital me admit kara ke chhodunga!

Zaheer bhaagte bhaagte ulti galiyan deta hai
Mainu chhod Arjunnn… doctor ne toh bola husband, mujhe sasur bana diya Ammu ne!

Aur Ammu?
Wo toh dono ko rokne unke piche bhagti hai

Nurse aur staff corridor me ek dusre ko dekh ke confused… yeh hospital hai ya comedy show chal raha hai?

Arjun ne Zaheer ko corner me daba rakha tha, dono ka scene WWE vs. Comedy Circus jaisa tha.

Arjun ke mukke baarish ki tarah gir rahe the, beech beech me laate bhi chala raha tha.

Zaheer zor zor se chilla raha tha
Arre maar mat Arjun… meri toh shaadi bhi nahi hui abhi… main toh abhi bachcha hi hoon!

Ammu dono ke beech apni poori jaan laga kar unhe alag karne ki koshish kar rahi thi
Bas karo tum dono, log dekh rahe hain, yeh hospital hai akhada nahi!

Tabhi peeche se halki si awaz aati hai…
Arjunnn?

Sab freeze.

Dheere dheere sabki nazar ek hi taraf ghoomi.
Shanu hospital ke kapdon me, abhi abhi hosh me aayi, apna IV stand sambhalte hue corridor me aa gayi thi.
Uska chehra abhi bhi halka sa behaal tha, lekin aankhon me ek bada sawal.

Shanu hairani se puchti hai
Yeh kya ho raha hai yaha? Tum dono ek dusre ki jaan kyu le rahe ho?

Arjun, Zaheer, Ammu — teeno ek sath uski taraf dekhte hai.
Aur teeno ke chehre pe caught red-handed waali awkward silence.

Ek second ke liye koi kuch nahi bolta.
Arjun ke haath hawa me freeze ho gaye, Zaheer ke muh se bas ek halki si suki hahah… nikalti hai, Ammu ka bas chale toh zameen phat jaye aur wo usme gir jaye.

Shanu phir se puchti hai, is baar zyada teekhe tone me
Bataoge bhi, ya main khud andaza lagau?

Aur sabhi ek dusre ke chehre dekhne lagte hai — jaise cricket ka ball hawa me ghoom raha ho aur koi samajh na pa raha ho ki catch kaun lega.

Hospital Comedy Chase Scene

Doctor corridor se guzarti hai, clipboard haath me, aur Shanu ki taraf dekh kar muskurati hai.

Doctor
Are wah, aap hosh me aa gayi. Mubarak ho, aap maa banne wali hain… aap to lagti bahut young ho, phir bhi congratulations!

Doctor itna bolkar aage nikal jaati hai.
Shanu ek dum freeze. Ek second tak bas aankhen phaad kar Arjun, Zaheer aur Ammu ki taraf dekhti hai.

Agle hi pal Shanu ka chehra laal pad jata hai gusse se.
Wo Zaheer ki taraf ungli dikhati hai.

Shanu
Zaheeer… tuu…!!!

Zaheer ki hawa tight. Wo ek awkward si smile ke sath peeche hatne lagta hai.

Zaheer
Are nahi nahi, tu sun to le Shanu… yeh sab galat fehmi hai, doctor ki galti hai! Main to… main to abhi innocent version hu…

Shanu seedha bhaag kar uske piche padti hai.
Hospital gown hawa me ud raha hai, IV tube latak rahi hai.

Zaheer corridor me bhaagta hai.
Uske piche Shanu, uske piche Arjun, aur sabse last me Ammu.

Sab apne dialogues chillate hue:

Zaheer (bhaagte bhaagte, guilt me)
Main kasam khaata hu, maine kuch nahi kiya! Mujhe bachaoo, doctor ko bulao, main abhi test karata hu!

Shanu (zaheer ke piche galiya barsati hui)
Aye namune! Mujhe apni biwi samjh liya tha kya? Agar mai tujhe pakad gayi na to itna thappad marungi ki tujhe apna naam bhi yaad nahi rahega!

Arjun (ghabrahat me chilla kar)
Shanu ruk ja, tu abhi patient hai! IV tube khul jaayegi, doctor gussa ho jaayenge!

Ammu (Arjun ke piche bhaagte hue)
Arjunnn! Tu bhi dhyaan rakh, tujhe plaster laga hai! Kahin tu bhi na gir jaaye!

Poora hospital ka corridor unke shor se guunj uthta hai.
Nurse aur ward boy raste se hatt kar confused faces ke sath dekhte hai, ek patient to apne drip stand ke sath corner me chipak jata hai.

Aur chase scene freeze hota hai ek hilarious snapshot pe — Zaheer aage panic me bhaagta hua, Shanu uske piche gusse me chilati hui, Arjun shanu ko rokne ke chakkar me aur Ammu Arjun ke piche chillati hui.

Scene – Azhar aur Pratap ka gussa


Frame cut hota hai ek dum tension bhare ghar ke atmosphere par.
Pehle Azhar House.

Zaheer saamne khada hai, sar jhukaye, aankhon me guilt. Ammu corner me khamosh baithi hai.
Azhar ka chehra gusse se laal, uski awaaz darwazon ki deewarein hila deti hai.

Azhar
Meri naak katwa di tune! Pura sheher, pura news channel chillaa raha hai… aur tu? Tu iss ghar ke izzat ko mitti me mila raha hai.

Zaheer kuch kehna chahta hai, par Azhar uske lafz kaat deta hai.

Azhar
Nikal ja mere ghar se! Aaj ke baad main tujhe apna beta kehne layak bhi nahi!

Azhar ek zor ka dhakka deta hai.
Zaheer ladkhadate hue bahar girta hai. Ammu turant daud kar usse sambhalti hai, aankhon me aansu, par kuch keh nahi paati.
Door zor se band ho jaata hai.

Cut to Pratap House.

Living room me Pratap aur Madhu sofa par khade Arjun ke paas Shanu ko ghurte hai.
Shanu sar jhukai hui, aankhon me aansu, abhi bhi hospital gown me.

Madhu (dil par haath rakhte hue)
Yehi din dekhna baaki reh gaya tha! Ek ladki hote hue ghar ki maryada ko tu ne chura diya, Shanu.

Pratap (gusse se table thappad maarte hue)
Hamari parvarish par kalank laga diya tune!

Shanu ro padti hai, bas itna keh paati hai…
Shanu
Papa… main… main…

Arjun beech me aake khada ho jata hai. Uska chehra bandage ke bawajood fierce tha, aankhen protectiveness se bharpur.

Arjun
Bas! Bahut ho gaya, Papa!
Main janta hoon Shanu se galti hui hai… lekin wo akele zimmedar nahi hai. Aapko kya lagta hai? Usne khud apna haal aisa kar liya? Sabke peeche ek kahani hoti hai, par aap log… aap log uski baat sunne ko tayyar hi nahi ho.

Madhu aankhen phaad kar Arjun ko dekhti hai.
Pratap gusse me aur garajta hai, par Arjun ki awaaz uske dil me echo hoti hai.

Arjun (Shanu ke shoulder par haath rakh kar)
Aaj main apni behen ke liye khada hoon. Kyunke wo meri zimmedari hai… aur main usse akela nahi chhodne wala.

Shanu apni aankhen Arjun ki taraf uthati hai — pehli baar usse kuch himmat milti hai.

Scene – Gali ke bahar chai ki tapri

Raat ka waqt tha, gali ke ek kone par chhoti si chai ki tapri abhi bhi khuli hui thi. Ek tube light ki halki si peeli roshni, plastic ki kursiyan, aur thandi hawa me chai ki bhaap.

Zaheer ek kursi par jhuk kar baitha tha, dono haathon se ek chhoti si chai ki glass pakad rakhi thi. Nazar neeche, aankhen sujh kar laal ho gayi thi. Uske dil me ek ajeeb sa khud se ghin aur guilt chal raha tha.

Tabhi peeche se ek awaaz aayi.
Arjun
Ek aur glass chai dena bhaiya… strong wali.

Zaheer ka dil ek pal ko ruk gaya. Dheere se usne sir uthaya — saamne Arjun khada tha. Wahi dosti wali confident body language, lekin aankhon ke andar bhi thakan aur bojh saaf dikh raha tha.

Arjun Zaheer ke saamne aake kursi kheench kar baith gaya. Dono kuch pal chup rahe. Sirf tapri ka chammach ke steel glass se takraane ki awaz aa rahi thi.

Aakhir Zaheer ne halki si awaaz me poocha.
Zaheer
Shanu… kaisi hai?

Arjun ne uski taraf dekha. Uski aankhon me protectiveness aur ek bhai ka dard tha.
Arjun
Thik hai… zinda hai. Lekin ro ro ke apna bura haal kar liya hai.

Zaheer ne apne chai ka glass table par rakh diya. Uske chehre par guilt aur sharm dono mil gaye the.
Dono ke beech phir ek gehri khamoshi chha gayi. Hawa thodi tez chal rahi thi, aur ek kuta door se bhonk raha tha.

Dono doston ke beech wo silence sirf silence nahi tha, balki dosti, guilt, aur unka apna apna dard sab kuch keh raha tha.

Thodi der tak dono bas chup baithe rahe. Zaheer apni chai ke glass ke andar ghurta raha jaise usi mein saare jawab milein, aur Arjun apne haath ke joints daba raha tha jaise andar ke pressure ko control kar raha ho.


Aakhir Arjun ne khamoshi todhi.
Arjun
Zaheer… tujhse ek baat sach sach kehni hai.
Main Ammu se mohabbat karta hoon. Bahut pehle se. Lekin is darr me jeeta raha ki shayad tu mere khilaaf ho jayega.
Aur jab maine dekha tu uski shaadi ki baat kar raha hai kisi aur se… lagta tha sab khatam ho gaya.

Zaheer ki aankhon me aansu bhar aaye. Usne ek thandi saans li, aur Arjun ki taraf dekha.
Zaheer
Arjun… mujhe bhi tujhse ek baat kehni thi kab se.
Meri mohabbat… Shanu hai. Teri behen.
Lekin main khud ko rokta raha, kyunki sochta tha ki tu kabhi accept nahi karega.
Aur sach kahoon… main bhi darr gaya tha society, family… sabse.

Arjun ne uski taraf ek lambi nazar dali, phir ek ajeeb sa smile aaya uske chehre par.
Arjun
Pagal… tu samajhta kya hai mujhe?
Main apni behen ke aansuon ko dekh kar mar raha hoon. Agar uski khushi tere saath hai… to main ab tum dono ke bich nahi aaunga,
Jo bhi hua humare bich wo ek nightmare tha hum dono ke liye... Agar humare bich wo sab nahi hua hota to shayd hum apne dil ki baat ek dusre ko batane se darte nahi

Fir ek khamoshi 

Aur rahi baat Ammu ki… tu samajhta hai main tujhe uske beech aane dunga?

Zaheer thoda hansa, phir aankh pochne laga.
Zaheer
Tu na… ek number ka pagal hai.
Dushman ban ke bhi dost lagta hai.

Dono ki baatein sun ke chai wala bhi muskuraya. Ek garam chai ke glass dono ke saamne rakhte hue bola,
Chaiwala
Bhai, lagta hai aaj dosti ki chai pi jaayegi.

Arjun aur Zaheer ne ek dusre ki taraf dekha, dono ne ek saath apne chai ke glass uthaye. Dono ke chehre par pehli baar ek sacchi wali sukoon ki muskaan thi.

Scene – Azhar ka Monologue (Late Night)

Ghar ka andhera shaant tha. Sirf ek purana pendulum clock tick-tick karta hua sunayi de raha tha. Drawing room ki light bujhi hui thi, bas ek chhoti si lamp ki roshni table par rakhi Samia ki photo par gir rahi thi. Azhar ne ek thandi saans li, ek glass paani uthaya, par pee nahi paaya. Uske pair wapas usi photo ke paas le aaye.

Azhar dheere se kursi par baith gaya, dono haath photo frame par rakhe jaise Samia ka haath pakad raha ho. Uski awaaz bhari hui thi.

Azhar
Samia… tu hoti na, to shayad aaj yeh sab na hota.
Main sochta hoon, kya galti meri thi?
Main apne kaam, apne ideals mein itna ulajh gaya ki apne bachchon ke dil ke jazbaat samajh hi nahi paaya.

(Thoda ruk kar, aankh band karke)
Aaj mera Zaheer… jis par main fakhr karta tha… jisne apni behen aur bhai ke liye jaan daav par laga di… usne jo kiya usko main kisi se dohra bhu nahi sakta. 

(Uski awaaz hilti hai, aansu rukte nahi)
Samia… agar tu hoti na, to shayad tu mujhe samjhati.
Tera ek narm lafz, ek muskaan, meri zidd tod deti.
Main sochta hoon… agar tune dekha hota aaj ka din… jab maine apne bete ko ghar se dhakke dekar nikala… tu mujhe rok leti.

(Aankhon me paani bhar aata hai)
Main kaisa baap hoon Samia?
Apne hi khoon ko dard diya, aur fir akela yahan baith kar tujhe dhoond raha hoon. Lekin maine koi kami nahi chhodi inki parvarish me, lekin fir bhi shayd maine hi koi chook kardi.
Shayad main abhi bhi seekh raha hoon… par tu to nahi hai na mujhe sambhalne ke liye.

(Aakhir me ek thoda halka sa muskaan laane ki koshish karta hai)
Bas ek dua hai Samia… jahan bhi tu hai, apni duaon mein Zaheer aur Ammu ko hamesha rakhiyo.
Main jitna bhi sakht ho jaaun, tu jaanti hai andar se main apne bachchon ke bina jee nahi sakta.

Azhar photo ko apni aankh se lagata hai, phir dheere se kursi par peeche gir jaata hai. Kamre ki lamp ki roshni dheere dheere kam hoti hai… aur clock ki tick-tick aur tez sunayi dene lagti hai.

Scene – Shanu’s Bedroom (Late Night)


Kamra andhere mein tha, sirf ek corner lamp ki mildi hui roshni bikhri hui thi. Shanu apne bed par guthmuthiyaan bana kar baithi thi, uska kajal beh kar gaal par nishaan chhod gaya tha. Aankhein lal, bilkul soojh gayi thi. Uski saanson ka bojh bhi mehsoos ho raha tha.

Darwaza dheere se khulta hai. Pratap andar aata hai. Subah jo uske chehre par gussa tha, wo ab pighal chuka tha. Aaj sirf ek baap tha jo apni beti ke dard ko seh nahi pa raha tha.

Pratap bed ke paas khada hota hai, lekin Shanu us taraf dekhti bhi nahi.

Pratap
Shanaya…
(Tone narm hai, ruk kar phir bolta hai)
Subah main gusse mein tha. Bahut kuch keh diya jo shayad mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha.

Shanu aankh pochhne ki koshish karti hai, lekin uski awaaz behad halki niklti hai.

Shanu
Papa… main aapki beti hoke bhi aapko sharminda kar rahi hoon.
Main ne hi sab bigaad diya… Arjun, Ammu, Zaheer… sab mere wajah se pareshaan hain.

Pratap uski baat sun kar uske bed par baith jaata hai. Dheere se uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai.

Pratap
Pagal ladki… tujhe lagta hai tu ne mujhe sharminda kiya hai?
Nahi, Shanu. Main bas dara hua tha… duniya ke liye, log kya kahenge uske liye.
Lekin teri aankhon ke aansu dekh kar samajh gaya hoon… mujhe sirf apni beti ki khushi ki fikr honi chahiye, na ki duniya ki.

Shanu us taraf dekhna chahti hai lekin guilt rok leta hai.

Shanu
Par papa… maine sabko takleef di hai. Mera naam, mera faisla… sab ne problem create kiya.

Pratap uske aansu pochta hai.

Pratap
Beta, insaan galti se seekhta hai. Aur sabse badi baat… tu akeli nahi hai.
Main aur teri maa… hamesha tere saath hain.
Aur haan, Arjun… usne bhi sab kuch tere liye saha.
Kya tu sochti hai tera bhai tujhe kabhi akela chhod dega?

Shanu ki aankh phir bhar aati hai. Aakhir wo apne papa ke kandhe par sir rakh deti hai, jaise chhoti si bacchi ho.

Shanu (ruk ruk kar)
Papa… aap mujhse gussa nahi ho?

Pratap uske baalon par haath pherta hai.

Pratap
Nahi, beta. Gussa kaise ho sakta hoon?
Mujhe sirf yeh wada kar… jo bhi raasta choose karegi, khud ke liye karegi… kisi ke darr ya guilt mein aakar nahi.

Shanu dheere se sir hila deti hai. Room mein ek shaant si silence chha jaati hai.

Scene – Next Morning (Pratap’s House)

Subah ka waqt tha. Drawing room me sirf ek lamp jal raha tha. Pratap sofa par baitha hua tha, ab bhi raat ki baatein uske dimaag me ghoom rahi thi. Tabhi darwaza khula aur andar aaye Azhar.

Dono ki nazar milti hai. Dono ke chehre par ek hi bhaav – sharm, guilt aur dard. Ek pal ke liye dono chup rahe.

Azhar dheere se bolta hai.

Azhar
Pratap bhai… main maanta hoon, Zaheer ne jo kuch kiya… wo galat tha. Usne aapke ghar, aapki beti ko dukh diya.
Mujhe maaf karna… main ek baap hoke apne bete ko samjha nahi paya.

Pratap ki aankh bhar aati hai. Wo khud ki aankhon ke aansu daba nahi pata. Dheere se khada hota hai aur Azhar ke paas aakar uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai.

Pratap
Azhar… tu bhi baap hai, main bhi baap hoon.
Bachon ki galtiyon ka bojh hum pe aata hai… par iska matlab yeh nahi ki hum ek dusre ke dushman ban jaayein.

Azhar ki aankh se aansu nikal padte hain. Wo jhuk kar Pratap ke haath pakadta hai, jaise maafi maang raha ho.

Azhar
Main sharminda hoon, Pratap. Bahut sharminda.

Pratap uske haath ko pakad kar khud hi usse gale laga leta hai. Dono baap ek dusre ke kandhe par rone lagte hain. Room me ek gehra sannata cha jaata hai.

Aur tabhi piche se kadmon ki aahat hoti hai. Arjun enter karta hai. Uske chehre par chot ke nishaan abhi bhi dikh rahe hote hain. Uski aankhon me ek ajeeb sa jazba tha.

Arjun un dono ko dekh kar rukta hai. Uski awaaz mazboot thi.

Arjun
Papa… Chacha… jo kuch hua, usko badalne ka koi tareeka nahi.
Par ek rasta hai usse sahi karne ka.

Room me phir se khamoshi chha jaati hai. 
Azhar dheere se Pratap ki taraf dekhta hai, uske chehre par ek narmi aati hai. Wo dono haath jod leta hai.
Pratap uske haath ko chhod kar apne dono haath Azhar ke kandhon par rakhta hai. Uski awaaz bharayi hui thi.

Pratap
Pehle hume apne dil ke bojh ko maaf karna hoga… fir milkar apne bacho ko samjhana hoga

[Manju roy]

Ab jab sab man hi gaye hai to writer shanu ka nikah karana kuki jab story itna sahi hai dono parivar sath hai to phir dar ki bat ka khani ko interfath bana hi diaa hai to acha se bano thaki kuch ko jada maza aaye or kuch ko jalan please update jaldi do nikah wala

[Harman cheema]

Very nice update ?

[Greenwood]

Update 120




Scene – Azhar’s Living Room

Shaam ka waqt tha. Drawing room me ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi, lekin hawa me ummed aur darr dono ghoome rahe the.
Ek taraf sofa par Azhar, Pratap aur Madhu baithe the, wajah-e-haqeeqat unke chehre par likhi thi.
Samne kursi par shanu aur zaheer baithe the, dono ki nazrein zameen me gaddi hui thi, jaise poore duniya se kat gaye ho.

Unke piche khade the Arjun, Asma aur Ammu – taaki shanu aur zaheer ko yeh mehsoos na ho ki wo akelay hain is waqt.

Room me kuch pal ke liye sirf ghadi ki tick-tick bajti hai. Phir Pratap ne bohot sambhal ke baat shuru ki.

Pratap
Zaheer beta… jo hua, wo galat tha. Aisi baatein zindagi ko andhere me dhakel deti hain.
Lekin isme shanu ki bhi galti hai. Maa baap ka farz hota hai ki apne bachon ki galtiyan sudhaarein… unhe samjhaayein.

Zaheer ki ungliyan apne ghutne par kaanp rahi thi, aur Ammu uski taraf dekhti rahi – jaise wo khud bhi samajh nahi paa rahi ho ki ab aage kya hoga.

Azhar ne apni awaaz me narmi laakar shanu ki taraf dekha.

Azhar
Shanu… tum ek bohot achi ladki ho. Tum sirf Pratap bhai ki beti nahi, ek pyari beti ki misaal ho.
Lekin tumhe iss nalayak ke chakkar me apni zindagi barbaad nahi karni chahiye thi.

Shanu ki aankh bhar aayi. Usne pehli baar nazar uthakar Azhar ki taraf dekha.
Room me ek lamha bhar ka sannata chha gaya.

Aur fir Azhar ke alfaaz ne sabko hila diya.

Azhar
Tum jitni achi beti ho… mujhe ummed hai tum utni hi pyari bahu bhi banogi.

Yeh sunte hi shanu aur zaheer dono ek dum se sakt reh gaye.
Ab tak jhuki nazrein pehli baar apne apne baap ke chehre par gayi.
Aur phir… dheere se ek dusre ki taraf.

Pratap ne apne aansu rok kar ek narmi se bola.

Pratap
Zaheer… shaadi ki tayyari kar lo, beta.

Room ka mahaul pal bhar me badal gaya.
Peeche Asma khushi se uchhal padi, uske chehre par woh masoom muskaan thi jo shayad sabko chahiye thi.
Arjun aur Ammu bhi saalon baad jaise khul kar muskuraaye… dono ne ek dusre ko ek glance diya, jo unke dil ki baat kehta tha.

Zaheer aur shanu ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar halka sa muskuraye – guilt se bhare hone ke bawajood ek nayi shuruaat ka asar tha.
Aur samne baithe Azhar aur Pratap ne ek saath gehri saans li… jaise dono ne apne dil ka ek bohot

Agle din se hi tayari shuru ho gayi. Pure ghar me ek naya excitement tha.

Madhu aur Asma Shanu aur Ammu ko lekar ek bade boutique me gaye. Camera unhe lehenga aur jewellery try karte dikhata hai, beech-beech me Arjun door se Ammu ko dekhta hai aur uske chehre pe muskaan aati hai.

Zaheer ko Azhar apne saath sherwani shop le gaye, jahan usne pehli baar apne liye shaadi ka dress try kiya aur mirror me khud ko dekh kar thoda emotional ho gaya.

Shanu trial room me nikli toh Arjun pal bhar ke liye blank ho gaya – uski chhoti behen ab ek dulhan banne wali thi.

Shopping ke waqt sabke chehre pe halka sa shock bhi tha, jaise kal tak jo bachche ladayi aur uljhan me the, aaj unke liye shaadi ke kapde taiyaar ho rahe the.

College Vibes
Do din baad hi khabar college campus tak pahunch gayi. Election aur chaos ke dinon ke baad ye news students ke liye ek nayi gossip ban gayi thi.

Canteen me ladke-ladkiya guftagu kar rahe the.
Arre suna kya? Zaheer aur Shanu ki shaadi hone wali hai!
Aur suna hai Arjun ki behen aur Zaheer ek hi mandap me…

Arjun aur Zaheer jab canteen se guzre toh sabki nazrein unpar tik gayi. Kayi students ne smile karke mubarak di, lekin kuch ki nazron me ab bhi wahi purana darr aur respect ka mix tha – jaise unhe yaad tha ki kis tarah in dono ne unki jaan bachayi thi.

Faculty staff ne bhi staff room me is news par discussion kiya. Principal ne ek baar Arjun aur Zaheer ko bulaya aur kaha.

Principal
Tum dono ne chahe kitni bhi musibat khadi ki ho… lekin jo kuch tumne college aur students ke liye kiya, uske baad tumhe is nayi zindagi ka haq hai. Mubarak ho.

Scene – Shaadi ki Taiyaari (Sirf Zaheer & Shanu ke liye)


Card Distribution aur College ka Reaction

Zaheer aur Arjun ek saath college jaate hain invitation cards baantne.
Canteen me doston ka crowd ikattha ho jaata hai.

Sab students hairan ho jaate hain – kal tak jo poster, debate aur election ke dushman the, aaj ek dusre ke saath khade hain.

Ek dost mazaak me bolta hai – Arjun, tu best man banega ki dulha ka bhai?
Sab hansi me phoot padte hain, aur Arjun awkwardly smile karta hai.

Girls hostel ki ladkiyan jinke liye Arjun aur Zaheer ne fight ki thi, woh bhi aakar blessings deti hain.


College me pehli baar ek positive buzz tha – dosti, khushi aur ek naye chapter ka.


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Ghar ka Environment aur Sajawat

Zaheer ke ghar aur Pratap ke ghar dono taraf full-on festive mood.

Zaheer ke ghar: Husna Khala ki entry hoti hai, woh pehle gussa dikhati hai ki Azhar ne uski marzi ke bagair faisla kiya. Lekin jab usne Shanu ko sharmati hui corner me khada dekha, toh uske chehre pe pighal aata hai.
Uska typical nakhre-wala dialogue:
“Chalo, mujhe na sahi, lekin meri beti ko khush dekh kar hi maan jaati hoon… lekin Azhar, tumse abhi bhi gila rahega!”
Sab ke chehre pe smile aa jaati hai.

Pratap ke ghar: Shanu ki doston ka aana-jana shuru ho jaata hai. Ghar rangoli, phoolon aur fairy lights se jagmaga raha hai. Madhu kitchen me mithai bana rahi hoti hai, aur beech beech me Shanu ko mazaak udata hai – “Dulhan banti ho toh zyada roti kam hansi zyada karni chahiye.”



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Zaheer–Shanu ki Preparations

Zaheer apne doston ke saath shopping par jata hai – sherwani try karte waqt ek chhoti si comedy hoti hai jab uski fitting galat nikal jaati hai aur sab hansi udata hai.

Shanu apne cousins ke saath bridal lehenga try karti hai – mirror ke saamne sharmati hai, aur Madhu peeche se dekh kar emotional ho jaati hai.



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Shaadi ka Mahol

Ab ghar ekdum shaadi ka ghar ban gaya tha –

Drawing room me dholak ki practice, ladkiyan folk songs ga rahi hain.

Terrace pe boys fairy lights laga rahe hain.

Azhar aur Pratap pehli baar ek hi sofa pe baith kar chai pee rahe hain – dono ke chehre pe santosh aur relief hai.

Husna Khala list banati hui sab pe chillati hai – “Arey mithai kam ho gayi toh tum sab dekh lena!”


Camera ek ek chehre par zoom karta hai – Shanu ka sharmaana, Zaheer ka excitement, Azhar–Pratap ka proud expression, aur Madhu ki aankhon me beti ki shaadi ki chamak

.Scene – Ladies Sangeet ki Shaam


Zaheer ke ghar ke andar terrace aur drawing room dono taraf rang–birangi lights, dupatte aur gubbare latak rahe hain. Dholak ki thaap ke saath poore ghar me ek alag hi roshni hai.

Husna Khala mehfil ki jaan bani hoti hai – ek taraf dholak bajwati hain, dusri taraf gaane wale group ko taaliyan dekar aur zyada zor se gaane ke liye keh rahi hoti hain.

Shanu doston aur cousins ke beech bethi hai. Uske haath pe mehndi lag rahi hai. Chehre par sharmaahat aur chhupke chhupke smile.

Zaheer corner me khada hai. Ladkiyon ki mehfil me formally allowed nahi hota, lekin uske dost usse kheench kar le aate hain – aur sab uska mazaak banate hain ki “Dulhe ko bhi thoda dance karna hi padega!”


Madhu aur Asma milkar ek chhoti si performance karte hain, aur sab hansi–mazaak me nikal jaata hai.
Is beech Arjun bhi hota hai, lekin wo mostly background me – uski aankhen kabhi kabhi Ammu ki taraf chori–chori chali jaati hain. Ammu bhi mehndi ke designs me busy hokar usse avoid karti hai, lekin nazar churaana mushkil ho jaata hai.


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Scene – Haldi ki Subah

Agle din ghar me purey yellow theme ka atmosphere hai – haldi ke thaal, phoolon ki petiyan, aur sab log yellow kapdon me.

Shanu ko uski cousins aur friends haldi lagati hain, phir mazaak me uske gaalon aur haathon pe aur zyada haldi daal deti hain. Sab zor–zor se haste hain.

Zaheer ko uske dost gher lete hain. Ek ne toh itna haldi lagaya ki Zaheer pura golden statue ban gaya – sab hansi se lot–pot.


Aur phir ek subtle moment:
Haldi lagate waqt Arjun bhi present hota hai, lekin Ammu ki taraf ek baar bhi properly nahi dekhta. Sirf apne dost ke saath busy dikhata hai.
Ammu bhi bas ek nazar uthakar Arjun ki taraf dekhti hai – aur turant apni aankhen jhuka leti hai.

Ye chhoti si khamoshi sirf do log notice karte hain –

Shanu, jo apni haldi ke beech apne bhai aur dost ki bechaini samajh jaati hai.

Zaheer, jo sabko hasata rehta hai lekin andar hi andar sochta hai ki Arjun aur Ammu ke beech kuch baat hai jo unhone chupayi hai.

Scene – Haldi ke Baad, Shaam ka Waqt

Haldi ke dhamal ke baad ghar ke andar phoolon ki safai ho rahi hai. Sab cousins, khala–khalu hansi–mazaak me busy hai. Terrace pe fairy lights lagayi ja rahi hain raat ki mehfil (mehndi) ke liye.

Arjun ek kone me khamoshi se baitha hai, mobile screen ko bina wajah scroll karta ja raha hai. Uske andar ka dard chehre par clearly likha hua hai – aankhon me thodi thakan, thoda guilt.

Tabhi Ammu aati hai, haathon me thoda sa haldi laga rehta hai aur chehre pe ek halka sa muskaan.
Woh Arjun ke saamne baith jaati hai.

Ammu
Arjun… tum aise chup kyun ho? Sab enjoy kar rahe hain, aur tum bas side me baithe ho.

Arjun bas ek chhoti si fake smile deta hai.
Ammu uske haath se phone kheench leti hai aur kehti hai…

Ammu
Mujhe tumse baat karni hai… bas normal baat. Jaise pehle karte the. Agar tum aise door door rahoge na, to sabko lagega hum dono ke beech kuch gadbad hai.

Arjun ki aankhen uski baat sunkar thodi nam ho jaati hain. Dil ke andar wo chillana chahta hai ki haan, gadbad hai… main tumse dur nahi rehna chahta, par circumstances mujhe majboor kar rahe hain. Lekin zubaan pe kuch nahi aata.

Arjun sirf itna bolta hai…
Arjun
Tum normal rehna chahti ho na, Ammu… to theek hai, main bhi try karunga.

Ammu halki si muskura kar kehti hai…
Ammu
Bas wahi chahiye mujhe. Tumhare sath thoda waqt… jaise pehle hota tha. Mehndi ki raat… tum dance karoge na mere sath?

Arjun ek pal ke liye uski aankhon me dekhta hai… phir aankhen jhuka leta hai. Uske dil me to chaah hai, lekin honton pe sirf ek bohot faint sa jawab nikalta hai.

Arjun
Dekhte hain…

Ammu uski baat ko ignore kar deti hai, jaise wo already samajh gayi ho ki Arjun ka “dekhte hain” matlab haan hai. Aur wo khushi se uth jaati hai.

Arjun usse jaate dekhte hue apne dil me aur zyada uljhan mehsoos karta hai –
Main usse door bhi nahi reh paata… aur paas bhi nahi ja paata

Scene – Vicky ki Entry


Shaam ka waqt hai. Railway station ki hustle-bustle – hawkers ki awaazein, train ka shor, logon ki bheed.

Arjun apni bike ek kone me lagakar platform par chadha. Uski aankhen bheed me ek hi chehra dhoondh rahi thi – uska chhota bhai, Vicky.

Aur tabhi Arjun ki nazar padti hai – ek lamba sa ladka, simple jeans aur sweatshirt me, kandhe par bag, chehre par wahi purani mischievous si muskaan. Arjun ke kadam apne aap tez ho jaate hain.

Dono ek doosre ke saamne aate hain. Ek second ka gap, phir ek tight hug.

Arjun
Saale… tu kitna yaad aaya mujhe.

Vicky hasti hui, thoda naughty tone me
Aur main kya, main to roz tere bare me sochta tha ki mera bhai yaha akela sab manage kar raha hoga… lekin lagta hai tu ab bhi wahi ka wahi hai.

Arjun (halki hansi ke sath)
Wahi ka wahi… bas thoda zyada thak gaya hoon.

Dono bike par nikal padte hain. Thandi hawa, raste ki lights aur dono ki baatein. Arjun apni struggles, Zaheer ke conflict aur ghar ke drama ke baare me thoda share karta hai. Vicky dhyaan se sunti hai, kabhi uska kandha thapthapata hai.

Vicky
Tu tension mat le bhai… main aa gaya na, ab thoda main sambhaal lunga. Waise bhi, shaadi ke ghar ka asli maza to main hi launga.

Arjun sirf muskara deta hai – uske chehre par sukoon hai ki ab ghar me ek aur apna sa hai.


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Scene – Ghar ka Atmosphere

Ghar me entry karte hi Vicky sabke liye ek chhoti si surprise ban jaata hai.

Shanu apne chhote bhai ko dekhte hi emotional ho jaati hai, use gale laga leti hai.
Madhu ke chehre par maa wali muskaan.
Zaheer bhi usse milta hai, thoda formal but pyar se.

Sab milkar purani yaadein taaza karte hain – bachpan ke din, ghar ke masti wale pal. Ghar ka environment aur light ho jaata hai, jaise ek missing puzzle piece wapas aa gaya ho.


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Scene – Vicky aur Asma ka Pehla Interaction

Raat ka waqt, shaadi ki tayariyon me ghar saj raha hai. Drawing room me Asma phoolon ki mala arrange kar rahi hoti hai. Uski nazar niche zameen par bikhre petals par hoti hai, jab ek haath jhuk kar wo utha leta hai – Vicky ka.

Dono ki aankhen ek pal ke liye takraati hain. Na introduction, na formal baat – sirf ek chhoti si awkward si smile.

Asma halka sa dhanyawaad kehti hai, aur Vicky bas sar hila deta hai.
Asma ka dupatta ek kursi me ulajh jata hai, Vicky bina soche samjhe usse nikal deta hai. Ek pal ki khamoshi, ek halki awkwardness… phir Asma seedhi ho kar chal deti hai.

Camera focus karta hai – Vicky use jaate dekh raha hai, uske chehre par curiosity hai. Asma ke chehre par bhi ek chhoti si soch ki lakeer.

Dono ke beech na pyaar hai, na dosti… bas ek naye rishtay ka pehla imtihaan – ek mulaqat.

Scene – Next Day Morning, Shaadi ke Ghar ka Mahaul


Ghar me poora din halki-halki masti chal rahi hai. Mehendi ki tayari kal ki hai, lekin aaj se hi relatives aur doston ka aana–jaana badh gaya hai. Drawing room me rangoli ban rahi hai, terrace par lights lag rahi hain, aur kitchen me bartan ki khanak sunai deti hai.

Vicky apne free style me har corner me ghusta hai – kabhi decoration check karta, kabhi music system ki wiring sambhalta. Har jagah uske chhote-chhote pranks chal rahe hote hain.

Wahi ek kone me Asma phoolon ke gajre banane me madad kar rahi hoti hai. Vicky door se usse dekhta hai. Uski aankhon me curiosity hai, but vo openly baat karne ki himmat nahi karta. Sirf ek chhoti si awkward smile. Asma bhi ek second ke liye uski taraf dekh kar thoda blush kar jaati hai, phir turant apna dhyaan phoolon par laga leti hai.

Camera thoda zoom karta hai – un dono ke beech koi word exchange nahi hota, bas ek first crush wali chhupi-chhupi si vibe.


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Scene – Arjun aur Ammu ki Khamoshi

Isi hustle-bustle ke beech Arjun apne kaam me ghula hua hai. Kabhi decoration ke doston ko instructions deta hai, kabhi relatives ko adjust karata hai. Lekin ek cheez constant hai – wo Ammu se nazar bachata rehta hai.

Ammu, jo kal raat tak normal thi, aaj bhi casually baatein karne ki koshish karti hai – lekin Arjun ek formal sa smile dekar turant busy hone ka excuse bana leta hai.

Ammu ke chehre par confusion hai, use samajh nahi aa raha kyun Arjun itna distance bana raha hai.

Aur ye sab door se Zaheer observe kar raha hota hai.

Uski aankhon me ek soch hai – ki kuch to hai jo Arjun aur Ammu ke beech adhoora reh gaya hai.


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Scene – Raat ko, Chhat par

Shaadi ke ghar ki ek sham, Chhat par hawa chal rahi hai, aasman me chand nikal aaya hai.

Azhar aur Pratap dono chhat ki deewar par baith kar purani yaadein taaza kar rahe hote hain. Dono ke haath me chai ke pyale hain, chehre pe shaadi ke stress aur relief ka mix.

Tabhi dheere-dheere Zaheer chhat par aata hai. Uska chehra serious hai, aankhon me ek decision ki bhari si lakeer.

Wo dono apne baap–chacha ke saamne aakar rukta hai. Do second ki khamoshi.

Fir sirf itna kehta hai –

Zaheer
Baba… mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai.

Camera zoom in karta hai Azhar ke chehre par – wo pehle thoda surprised hota hai, phir Pratap ki taraf dekhta hai jaise ki usse andaza ho raha ho ki yeh baat chhoti nahi hone wali.

Scene yahi freeze.

Scene – Same Day, Shaadi ke Ghar ka Kone

Ghar me relatives ki hustle-bustle chal rahi hai.kitchen me khana ban raha hai. Har taraf mehfil ka rang hai.

Is bheed-bhaad ke beech Asma ek kone me bartan rakhne ja rahi hoti hai. Hath me ek tray hai jisme chai ke khali pyale pade hain. Tabhi uske saamne se Vicky aa jata hai – uske haath me thoda decoration ka samaan hota hai. Dono ek dusre se takra jaate hain aur tray ke do pyale hil kar girne lagte hain, Vicky turant haath badha kar sambhal leta hai.

Ek awkward si khamoshi.

Asma uski taraf dekh kar halki si muskaan deti hai –
Asma
Shukriya… warna phir ghar me sabke saamne daant padti.

Vicky ek halka sa grin ke saath –
Vicky
Haan, tumhare Baba ki daant ka mujhe bhi experience hai bachpan se… bachao operation zaruri tha.

Dono ek pal ke liye hans padte hain. Aur wahi se ek ajeeb si comfort aa jaata hai.

Asma tray rakh deti hai, lekin jaane se pehle ek baar Vicky ki taraf dekh kar ruk jaati hai. Vicky bhi usi waqt uski taraf dekh raha hota hai. Ek second ke liye dono ki nazrein mil jaati hain – bina kisi baat ke, bina kisi rishtedar ke pressure ke.

Camera close-up – dono ke chehre pe wohi teenage wali awkward smile. Na jaane kyu, dono ko ek dusre ko dekhna achha lagta hai.

Us moment me door se Arjun ki awaaz aati hai –
Arjun
Vicky! Oye decoration ka kaam reh gaya hai, aa idhar!

Vicky thoda jhijhak ke peechhe mudta hai aur phir Asma ko ek chhoti si friendly nod karke chale jaata hai.

Asma uske jaane ke baad apne hothon par ek chhupi si muskaan le aati hai – aur camera dheere-dheere zoom out karta hai, jahan shaadi ke ghar ki roshni, shor-sharaba aur beech me ek naya anjaana connection khilne lagta hai.

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Scene – Mehendi ki Subah

Subah ghar ke andar ek nayi roshni si chhayi hui hai. Sab log tayyariyon me lage hue hain.
Drawing room me aunties cushion par baith kar mehendi cone banwa rahi hain, kitchen me mithaiyon ki khushboo aa rahi hai, aur terrace par lights aur flowers ki decoration ho rahi hai.

Shanu ko cousins ne ghair rakha hai, use halke halke nakhre kara rahe hain – kabhi dupatta set karna, kabhi lipstick ka shade check karna. Shanu sharma kar muskaan deti hai, lekin andar se nervous hai.

Dusri taraf Zaheer bhi drawing room me bethe mehmaanon ki baatein sun raha hai. Lekin uski aankhein baar-baar Baba Azhar aur Pratap ki taraf ja rahi hoti hain. Dono ek side baith kar abhi bhi shaam ki us baat par gaur kar rahe hain jo Zaheer ne terrace par ki thi.

Camera close-up – Azhar ki aankhon me soch, Pratap ke chehre par ek fikrmand khamoshi. Dono ek dusre se kuch keh nahi pa rahe, lekin clearly unke mann me Zaheer ki baat ghoom rahi hai.


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Scene – Mehendi ki Shaam

Shaam hoti hai. Ghar chandni aur rang-birangi lights se saja hai. Courtyard me stage banaya gaya hai jahan Shanu ki mehendi shuru hone wali hai. Dholki ki thaap, auratien gana ga rahi hain, cousins dance kar rahe hain.

Shanu ko beech me kursi par bithaya jata hai. Uske haath me mehendi lagne lagti hai, aur sab uska naam lekar gaane gunguna rahe hote hain. Shanu sharma kar nazrein jhuka leti hai.

Zaheer side me khada hai, aankhon se sab observe kar raha hai. Uski nazar ek pal ke liye Arjun par jaati hai – Arjun mehmaanon ko sambhalne me busy hai, lekin uska chehra abhi bhi thoda udaas hai. Saaf lagta hai ki dil me kuch dabaya hua hai. Ammu paas hi khadi sabko chai serve kar rahi hoti hai, aur baar-baar Arjun ki taraf chhupke dekh leti hai.

Camera shift – Pratap aur Azhar, dono side me baith kar mehfil dekh rahe hain. Ek dusre ke nazar milate hi dono ke mann me wahi raat wali baat ghoom jaati hai. Abhi unhone faisla nahi liya hai, lekin clearly tension chal rahi hai.

Background me shor-sharaba, gaane, dance… aur is shaam ki mehfil ke beech ek an-jaane faisle ka bojh dono baap ke dil par.

Scene – Mehendi ki Sham: Asma ka Performance

Shaam ka waqt hai, courtyard aur stage rang-birangi lights, fairy lights aur fresh flowers se sajaye gaye hain. Dholki ki thaap puri mehfil me gunj rahi hai.

Asma, apni saheliyon ke saath stage par aati hai. Uska outfit bright yellow aur pink lehenga, jisme zari aur mirror work chamak rahi hai. Hair loosely braid me hai, aur aankhon me kajal aur highlighter se sparkle hai.

Song start hota hai – ek upbeat Punjabi track. Asma ki body language confident aur playful, steps perfectly synchronized. Uski grace aur lachak sabki nazar khinch leti hai. Stage ke dono side mehfil ke log applaud karte hain, aur cousins hansi-masti me dance karte hain.

Vicky, thodi door khada, ladko ki bhid se usko dekh raha hai. Uski aankhen Asma par tiki hui hain, heartbeats tez ho gayi, aur thoda nervous sa ho gaya. Uske liye yeh pehla pal hai jab Asma ka full energy performance uske saamne ho raha hai.

Camera close-up – Asma ki aankhon me joy aur excitement, smile me confidence, aur hands ki movements aur footwork itni natural ki audience mesmerized ho jati hai.

Asma ke dance ke beech, crowd cheering aur applause, aur Vicky ka stunned expression, jo ye samajh nahi pa raha ki kaise ek pal me sab kuch feel kar raha hai.

Performance ke end me Asma pose le kar smile deti hai, aur stage se utarti hai. Crowd standing ovation deta hai, aur Vicky apni excitement control nahi kar pa raha – heart thoda tez dhadak raha hai, aur uske mann me ek crush ki feeling slowly jag rahi hai.

Scene – Ammu ka Dance Performance


Shaam ka mahaul aur bhi lively ho gaya hai, fairy lights aur rangoli ke saath stage aur courtyard fully decorated hain. Background me soft dholki aur folk instrumental mix chal rahi hai.

Ammu, apne green-golden lehenga me stage par aati hai. Lehenga ki soft flow aur mirror work stage lights me chamak rahi hai. Hair loose waves me, aur makeup simple but glowing.

Jaise hi music start hota hai, Ammu ki body language confident aur graceful, par saath me subtle shy glances Arjun ki taraf bhi.

Arjun, stage ke side me khada, nazre thodi der se neeche karta hai, apni emotions control karne ki koshish me. Zaheer, Arjun ke pas, sab observe kar raha hai – Ammu ke har smile aur graceful move pe uska expression slightly confused aur impressed lag raha hai.

Pratap aur Azhar, side me, Zaheer ko observe karte hue ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain – dono ko lag raha hai ki Zaheer ke emotions clearly visible hain.

Ammu ka performance mesmerizing hai – stage ke har angle se crowd ka attention sirf us par. Uski aankhein, smile aur subtle hand gestures sabka dil jeet lete hain.

Dance ke end me, Ammu final pose le kar smile deti hai, aur poora auditorium cheer karta hai. Arjun ek moment ke liye aankhen band karke sigh karta hai, phir nazre neeche kar leta hai. Zaheer, uski reactions dekh kar, slightly amused aur curious lagta hai.

Scene – Shanu ka Dance Performance (Husband ke liye)

Shaam ka mahaul ab aur bhi festive ho chuka hai. Stage aur courtyard lights se chamak rahe hain, aur soft floral decorations ke beech dholki aur harmonium ki melodious beats chal rahi hain.

Shanu stage par aati hai, pastel pink lehenga me, jisme delicate embroidery aur soft dupatta gracefully flow kar raha hai. Hair braided with flowers, aur minimalistic makeup – simplicity aur elegance ka perfect mix.

Uski body language confident aur poise se bhari, lekin uski aankhon me slight nervousness aur excitement hai – ye zaheer ke liye hai.

Jaise hi music start hota hai, Shanu apne movements me soft elegance aur playful charm mix karti hai, har step me zaheer ko notice karne ki choti choti cues – glances aur subtle smile.

Zaheer, stage ke side me khada, pehle thoda hesitant hai, phir gradually uski aankhon me spark aata hai, jaise ki uske liye hi ye performance hai. Uska chest thoda tight feel hota hai, aur heartbeats tez ho jati hai.

Arjun aur Ammu, side me observe karte hue, ek dusre ki taraf muskurate hain, jaise ki ye moment zaheer aur shanu ke liye perfect ho.

Audience: staff, dost aur relatives, sab mesmerized – shor sharaba, cheers aur claps har step ke saath.

Shanu ka performance emotional yet elegant, aur final pose me wo zaheer ki taraf subtle wink aur smile deti hai. Zaheer ek moment ke liye speechless ho jata hai, phir applause me include ho jata hai, apni excitement aur pride control karne ki koshish karte hue.

Scene – Zaheer ka Emotional Performance (Final Version)


Shaam ka mahaul mehandi function ka aur bhi festive aur emotional ho chuka hai. Stage lights me softly glow kar rahi hain, courtyard me sab log apne seats par baithe, aur har taraf anticipation ka mahaul hai.

Sab performances chal rahi hain, par Zaheer thoda sharma aur hesitant lag raha hai. Shanu apni saheliyon ke saath stage ke side me khadi hai aur softly haath pakad kar Zaheer ko khinch kar stage ke center tak le aati hai.

Zaheer ek steady look Shanu ki taraf dalta hai – jisme thodi hesitation, thodi emotion aur thodi determination hai.

Fir wo microphone uthata hai, sabki taraf nazar dalta hai. Audience me hush ho jata hai, sab wait kar rahe hain ki Zaheer kya pesh karne wala hai.

Zaheer emotional speech shuru karta hai:
"Main apne yaar, apne dost, apne bachpan ke sathi Arjun ke liye bol raha hoon… Humare bich jo bhi hua, wo sab galatfahmi thi. Par mere dil me kabhi bhi uske liye pyaar kam nahi hua… aur main chahta hoon ki sab samjhein, kitna pyaar aur respect maine hamesha rakha hai…"

Sabki aankhon me aansu aa jate hain, kuch staff aur relatives bhi emotional ho jate hain. Shanu ki aankhen bhi blink kar rahi hoti hain, Zaheer ki taraf focused aur proud.

Fir Zaheer apna gana shuru karta hai – Arijit Singh wala “Tera Yaar Hoon Main”.

Camera Zooms:

Shanu – aankhon me aansu, smile ke saath emotional

Ammu – proud aur emotional glance towards Arjun

Arjun – surprise, guilt aur pride mix expression

Asma – eyes glistening, emotional

Vicky – shy smile, heart thoda faster

Azhar & Pratap – proud, emotional, subtle nods

Madhu – wiping tears softly


Jaise hi gana khatm hota hai, Zaheer ek confident step Arjun ke paas badhata hai, stage ke center se side me aata hai, aur Arjun ko ek glance dekar smile karta hai, jisme sab kuch – respect, emotion, aur friendship ka acknowledgement hai.

Scene – Emotional Closure & Baraat Announcement


Location: Mehandi function ka courtyard, fairy lights aur soft music ka backdrop, raat ke pehle halka chandni ka glow

Zaheer ka gana khatam hota hai. Stage par halki si khamoshi chhati hai. Zaheer ek deep breath leta hai aur apni nazar Azhar aur Pratap par dalta hai.

Azhar aur Pratap ek dusre ko dekhte hain. Unki aankhon me garv aur samajh ki chamak hai. Ab wo ready hain apna faisla express karne ke liye.

Azhar dheere se Arjun ke paas aata hai aur bolta hai:
Arjun… tu hum sab ke liye apni feelings chhupa raha tha. Are pagal… humein sab pata hai ki tu Ammu ko kitna chahta hai.

Arjun aankhen bhari, par expression me guilt aur relief mix hai.

Pratap aage badhta hai aur gently Arjun ka haath pakadta hai:
… tu apni dosti ko aur daag nahi dena chahta tha, isliye apni feelings chupayi… hum samajh gaye hain, beta.

Shanu stage ke side se apni aankhen bhari, arjun ko dekhti hai:
Arjun… tu hamesha mere liye tha, har baar har jagah... Meri protection meri khushiya sabke liye... Pagal mere liye tu apni khushiyo ko kurbaan kar raha tha.

Zaheer halki si smile ke saath Shanu ki taraf dekhta hai, aankhen uski aankhon me milti hain:
Aur main hamesha… hamesha tere saath hoon… meri dost aur ab… mera zindagi ki  partner.

Arjun Ammu ki taraf dekhta hai, aankhen thodi laal aur emotion se bhari. Ammu bhi Arjun ko ek soft smile ke saath dekhti hai:
Arjun… bas yehi chahti hoon ki tu khush rahe… aur hum dono saath ho…

Asma peeche se:
Arjun bhaiya Zaheer bhai… aaj hum sirf witnesses nahi, hum family hain… aur yeh moments hamesha yaad rahenge.

Madhu muskurate hue:
Beta… aaj tum dono ne sabke liye sabse badi proof di ki sachai aur pyaar kabhi haar nahi sakta.

Pratap stage ke center par aata hai, dramatic pause leta hai:
Aur ab… kal sirf ek… nahi… do baarat ayegi!

Audience me cheer aur hooting fail jati hai. Fairy lights aur decorations me aur sparkle aata hai.

Zaheer apni Shanu ka haath pakad kar khada hota hai, aankhen khushi se chamak rahi hoti hain.
Arjun Ammu ke paas jaakar uske haath le leta hai, aankhen unki aankhon se milti hain, dono ke chehre par relief aur happiness ka expression.

Shanu, Ammu, Arjun, Zaheer, Asma, Madhu, Azhar, Pratap – sab ek saath emotional closure feel karte hain.

Scene end hota hai, courtyard me hooting aur clapping ke saath, fairy lights aur rasm ka poora magic reflect karta hai, jaise ek perfect happy ending ka prelude ho.

Shadi ka din tha, pura ghar sajawat aur rangon se jagmaga raha tha. Har kone me tayyari ka shor, log ek dusre ke saath baatein kar rahe the, hans rahe the, aur khushi ka mahaul tha.

Ammu aur Shanu apne room me tayar ho chuki thi, dono ke chehre par halki si muskaan, aankhon me utsukta. Woh parlour ke liye nikalne hi wale the, jaise hi dono darwaze ki taraf mudte hai, unki aankhon ke samne ek ajeeb tasveer khadi ho gayi.

Darwaze ke bahar Nikhat khadi thi. Khamoshi, ek thodi si ajeeb si muskaan, aur aankhon me kuch samajh na aane wali chamak. Ammu aur Shanu ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar thoda hairan ho gayi, dono ki saansen dheemi ho gayi, aur room ke mahaul me ek ajib si tenseness chha gayi.

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Update 122




Shadi ki subah ka mahaul abhi bhi lively tha, lekin Ammu aur Shanu ki nazrein Nikhat par thodi tense ho gayi.

Ammu
Hello, Nikhat…

Shanu
Hi…

Nikhat bas halka sa smile karti hai, koi jawab nahi deti, aur fir Shanu ko ek nazar dekar room se nikal jaati hai.

Ammu thodi hairan hoti hai, par Nikhat apne ek kadam aur aage badhkar Ammu ka haath gently pakad leti hai.

Nikhat
Ammu… tum bahut pyari lag rahi ho aaj.

Ammu thodi awkward hoti hai, par Nikhat ka serious expression use dekh kar chup ho jaati hai.

Nikhat ka tone halka emotional ho jata hai.
Nikhat
Mujhe tumse kuch share karna hai… main aur Arjun… humare beech kuch aise pal aaye jahan humne ek dusre ko samjha, waqt bitaya, aur maine realize kiya ki Arjun ne kuch galat kiya hai. Tum deserve karti ho ki tumhe sirf respect aur pyaar mile…

Ammu sun kar hairan aur thoda shock feel karti hai.

Ammu apni nazrein neeche kar leti hai, phir dhire se utha kar Nikhat ki taraf dekhti hai—aur dekhti hai ki Arjun abhi darwaze par khada hai, uski aankhen puri tarah shocked aur confused.

Ammu ka dil tez dhadakne lagta hai, aur poore room me ek ajeeb si tension chha jaati hai—sab ready hone ki khushi ke beech, ab ek aur emotional twist aa gaya tha.

Nikhat ne Ammu ka haath zor se pakda hua tha, uski aankhon se aansu beh rahe the.
Nikhat ki awaaz tooti hui thi.

Nikhat
Ammu… ye aadmi tumhare kabil nahi hai… isse kabhi pyaar mat karna…

Ammu ki aankhon me bhi aansu aa gaye. Usne apna haath chhuda kar aankhen uthaayi—aur usi pal uski nazar darwaze par khade Arjun par pad gayi.

Arjun bilkul blank tha. Na koi gussa, na koi shabd. Bas ek khali, samajh-na-aane wali khamoshi.

Ammu dheere-dheere uske paas badhne lagi. Har kadam ke sath Nikhat ka rona tez hota gaya.

Nikhat
Ammu, main keh rahi hoon… wo tumhe dard dega… wo tumhe kabhi khush nahi rakh paayega…

Ammu ruki nahi. Usne apni bheegi palkon ke saath seedha Arjun ki aankhon me dekha. Uske dil me itna bhar gaya tha ki ab shabdon ki zarurat hi nahi thi.

Aur phir, sab logon ki tasveer dimaag se mita kar, Ammu ne ek kadam aur aage badhkar Arjun ko apni taraf khinch liya… uski khamoshi todte hue… uske honthon par apna pyaar rakh diya.

Kisi ne kuch nahi kaha. Nikhat ki saansen tez ho gayi, uska rona ekdam se band ho gaya, jaise ki mano yeh kya ho gaya hai...
Aur Arjun—jo ab tak blank tha—uske andar ek toofan chal pada, lekin usne Ammu ko roka nahi or wo bhi use kiss karne lagta hai...

Room me ek cinematic silence chhayi thi. Jaise waqt ruk gaya ho.

Arjun aur Ammu ke beech ka wo lamha dheere-dheere todta hai. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hain—ek halki si muskaan, ek aisi tasalli jaise saari shak aur shor khatam ho gaya ho.

Phir dono ek sath apni nazar Nikhat ki taraf ghumate hain.
Nikhat ekdum jam gayi thi. Uske aansu ruk gaye, uske hont khule ke khule reh gaye.
Jaise usse yakeen hi na ho ki Ammu jaisi hamesha darpoak, sharmili ladki aaj uske saamne itna bold kadam le legi.

Uske dil me bas ek hi ehsaas ghoom raha tha—uska khel, uski chal… sab ulta pad gaya tha.

Arjun ne Ammu ka haath kas ke pakad liya, Ammu ne ek pal ke liye uski taraf dekha aur phir dono bina ek shabd kahe darwaze ki taraf badh gaye.

Unhone na koi explanation di, na koi justification.
Bas ek sath, ek dusre ka hath thaame, dono us kamre se bahar nikal gaye.

Darwaza dheere se bandh hota hai…
Aur camera wapas mudta hai Nikhat ke chehre par—jo ab khali ho chuka tha. Uski aankhen phat gayi thi, aansu jam gaye the. Uske hont hile par awaaz na nikli.

Darwaza band hone ke aakhri jhatke ke sath screen par sirf Nikhat ka bechain aur shattered chehra reh jata hai.

Room se bahar nikalne ke baad Arjun ne Ammu ka haath chhoda nahi, usse seedha car tak le aaya. Shanu already andar wait kar rahi thi, uske chehre par ek muskaan aur aankhon me excitement thi apni mehendi ke baad ke din ke liye.


Arjun ne Ammu ko pehle car me bithaya, phir khud peechhe mud kar ek aur car me baith gaya jahan Zaheer uska intezaar kar raha tha. Dono ke chehre par ek alag si shanti thi, jaise bohot saari baaton ke bawajood ab unka safar sahi raah par chal pada ho.

Gadiyan engine ki awaaz ke sath ek sath nikalti hain—ek car ladies parlour ki taraf, dusri gents salon ki taraf.

Camera dheere se Ammu par zoom karta hai.
Wo car ki khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi, uska chehra halka sa muskurata hua lekin aankhon me ab bhi ek chamak thi—ek ehsaas ki ab usne apna rasta khud chun liya hai.

Uske gusse, uske shak, uske darr—sab peeche chhoot gaye the.
Khidki ke bahar dikhte hue sheher ke shor me uski aankhon ka sukoon ek nayi kahani ki tasveer banata hai.

Car ke shishe se bahar dekhte huye Ammu ke chehre par jo sukoon tha, wo dheere se ek aur rang le aata hai—ek yaad ka rang.

Uske dimag me kal raat ka flashback ghoomne lagta hai.

Function khatm hone ke baad sab log apni-apni baaton me masroof the. Dheere-dheere sab corner clear ho gaya, bas ek pal aisa aaya jahan Arjun uske paas aaya tha. Uske kadam sambhal kar, dheere dheere.

Arjun
Ammu… I want to confess something.

Ammu uski taraf dekh rahi thi, aankhen seedhi uski aankhon me. Koi muskaan nahi, koi gussa nahi, bas ek intezar.

Arjun ne saari baat keh di—apne aur Nikhat ke bare me. Wo pal, wo raatein, wo ek galti jise wo dobara kabhi repeat nahi karna chahta. Har lafz bina atke, bina kisi jhijhak, bina kisi darr ke nikalta gaya.

Ammu chup-chap uski aankho me jhankti rahi. Arjun ne uska haath pakda aur bola—

Arjun
Tum mujhe jo saza dena chahti ho, jo bhi karna chahti ho… main taiyaar hoon.

Arjun ki awaaz me na guilt tha, na excuse. Bas ek imaandari thi.

Ammu ne dheere se apne dono haath uthaye aur Arjun ka chehra pakad liya. Uske mathe se apna matha mila kar, usne aankhein band kar li.

Us pal me koi shabd nahi tha—sirf saansein, sirf dil ki dhadkan.

Aur car ke shishe ke us paar wapas aayi Ammu ki aankhon me ek naya sukoon chamak raha tha.

Montage shuru hota hai…


Background me shaadiyon ki shahnai aur dholki ki halki dhun chal rahi hai. Camera ek taraf Arjun aur Zaheer ki tayyariyon par zoom karta hai, dusri taraf Shanu aur Ammu ke parlour moments par.

Saloon me Arjun aur Zaheer
Arjun ka chehra mirror me reflect hota hai, stylist uske baal set kar rahi hai, Arjun thoda nervous lagta hai par aankhon me ek soft si muskaan hai.
Zaheer dusri chair par, shervani pehne hue, apne cufflinks sahi karte hue mirror me apne reflection ko dekhta hai aur ek gehri saans leta hai.

Parlour me Shanu aur Ammu
Shanu ki aankhon me kajal lagaya ja raha hai, uski smile chhup nahi rahi. Uske dupatte ke sitare light me chamak rahe hain.
Ammu, red aur golden joda pehne, apni aankhon me surma lagwati hai. Mirror me apni reflection ko dekhti hai aur halki si blush karti hai, jaise apne dil ke khud se koi baat keh rahi ho.

Montage me shots fast cut hote hain:
– Arjun apni pagdi sahi karte hue.
– Zaheer apne sherwani ka dupatta adjust karte hue.
– Shanu apne haathon ki mehndi ko dekh kar muskurati hai.
– Ammu apne jhumke pehnati hai aur aankhon se khud ko ek confident look deti hai.

Shaam hoti hai – Baarat ki entry:
Ghar ke bahar band baaja aur lights ka dhoom. Ek taraf Zaheer apni baarat ke saath, ghode ke bagal me chalte hue, sab ke saath mil kar stage ki taraf aage badhta hai.
Dusri taraf Arjun, royal sherwani aur pagdi me, confident kadam rakhta hua, seedha mandap ki taraf chal padta hai.

Camera split frame dikhata hai –
Ek taraf nikah ka stage sajha hua hai, dusri taraf mandap decorated phoolon aur diyoon se jagmagata hai.

Zaheer apne nikah ke stage ki taraf chalta hai, aankhon me shanu ki tasveer liye.
Arjun dusri taraf mandap ki roshni me kadam rakhta hai, jahan Ammu ka intezar hai.

Music ekdum high hota hai… aur montage slow motion me freeze hota hai.

Montage slow motion me shuru hota hai…

Ek taraf – Zaheer aur Shanu ka Nikah:
Qazi sahib ki awaaz gungunati hai, mehfil me gehra sukoon hai.
Qazi – Kya aapko ye nikah qubool hai?
Shanu ke honto par ek sharmili si muskaan, halki si aansuon se bhari aankhen.
Shanu – Qubool hai.
Sab mehfil mubarak ho Mubarak ho! keh kar gungunati hai.

Dusri taraf Zaheer ki awaaz dikhayi jaati hai, uska chehra roshan hai.
Zaheer – Qubool hai.
Sab taraf se taaliyan aur duaaon ki goonj.
Teesri baar dono ke qubool hai kehne par khushi ki lehr poori mehfil ko bhar deti hai.

Dusri taraf – Arjun aur Ammu ka Mandap:
Havan kund ki aag ke chingarein upar uthti hain.
Purohit – Saat phere ke liye haath pakad kar agni ke saamne chalna hoga.
Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ka haath thamte hain, aankhon me pyaar, dil me sukoon.
Dono ke kadam dhire dhire aag ke chakkar lagate hain.

Montage fast cuts:
– Shanu apne papa pratap ke haath ko chhuti si muskaan ke sath choomti hai.
– Zaheer Qazi ke samne shukriya kehte hue apni aankhon me Arjun ko yaad karta hai.
– Arjun Ammu ka dupatta pakad kar saatva phere pura karta hai.
– Ammu ki palkon me aansu, par chehre pe sukoon.

Climax moment:
– Qazi dono ko dua deta hai, Aap dono ka nikah mubarak ho.
Zaheer aur Shanu ke chehre ek doosre ke liye chamak uthte hain.

– Dusri taraf Arjun sindoor uthata hai… slow motion me Ammu ki maang me bhar deta hai.
Ammu aankhen band karke aansuon ko rok nahi pati.
Purohit mangalsutra Arjun ke haath me dete hain. Arjun Ammu ke gale me mangalsutra pehnata hai, dono ki aankhen ek dusre se bandhi rehti hain.

Montage end shot:
Split screen –
Zaheer aur Shanu ek dusre ke samne muskura rahe hain, duaon ke beech.
Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ko dekhe ja rahe hain, mandap ki aarti ke beech.

Background me ek hi line echo hoti hai:
Do alag rishte, do alag rasmein… par ek hi khushi, ek hi pyaar.

Zaheer–Shanu ka corner:

Shadi ke baad dono naye jodey Azhar aur Pratap ke samne khade hain.
Zaheer pehle apne Baba Azhar ke haath choom kar unka aashirwad leta hai, Shanu sharmate hue jhukti hai aur Azhar uske sar par haath rakh deta hai.
Azhar ki aankhon me aansu, awaaz me dua – Khush raho, aap dono hamesha hifazat raho
Pratap bhi dono ko gale lagata hai, unke liye ashirwaad deta hai, aur Madhu ki aankhon se khushi ke aansu tapak padte hain.

Dusri taraf – Arjun–Ammu ka moment:
Arjun Ammu ka haath pakad kar Pratap ke charanon me jhukta hai. Ammu bhi sharmate hue uske sath jhukti hai.
Pratap dono ke sir par haath rakhta hai – Tum dono ko khud se bhi zyada sambhalna mere bacho.
Arjun ki aankhen bhar aati hain, lekin wo apni behen aur apne dost ki khushi dekh kar muskurata hai.

Next shot:
Arjun aur Ammu Azhar ke samne aate hain. Ek pal ke liye Azhar ki aankhon me dard aur sukoon dono ek sath ubharte hain.
Azhar apne dono haath phaila kar Arjun ko gale laga leta hai. Arjun ki aankhon se aansu nikal padte hain.
Phir Ammu bhi Azhar ke gale lagti hai. Us waqt Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ki taraf muskurate hue dekhte hain, aankhon me gehra sukoon.

Montage end shot:
Split frame – ek taraf Zaheer aur Shanu apne parents ke aashirwad me khade hain, doosri taraf Arjun aur Ammu Azhar ke gale lagte hue ek dusre ko muskurahat dete hain.
Background line softly fade hoti hai:
Do ghar, do rishton ka sangam… ek hi dua ke saath – khushi hamesha tumhare saath ho.

Shaadi ke shor-sharabe aur rasmon ke beech ek emotional pal aa jata hai.

Scene shuru hota hai:
Mandap aur nikah ke stage ke thoda side me ek jagah, sab hostel ke bache, ladkiyan, handicapped students aur wo financially weak students jinki madad Arjun aur Zaheer ne pehle ki thi, khade hote hain. Sabke chehre par sacchi khushi aur apnapan tha.

Wo ek sath aage badhte hain aur dono naye jodo ke samne haath jod kar dua dete hain. Unki awaazon me masoomiyat thi –
 aap log ko hamesha khush rahe, aapke rishte me kabhi daraar na aaye.

Phir ek ek student apne haath me ek chhota envelope lekar Arjun aur Zaheer ke haath me dete hai.

Arjun thoda confuse hoke muskurata hai aur puchta hai
Arjun
Yeh sab kya hai?

Zaheer bhi halki si hansi ke sath unki taraf dekhta hai.

Bachon me se ek aage badhta hai aur kehta hai
Bhaiya, bas ek chhota sa tohfa hum sabki taraf se… please mana mat kijiyega.

Arjun aur Zaheer ek dusre ko dekhte hain aur phir envelopes kholte hain. Jese hi andar ke papers nikalte hain, dono ki aankhen ruk jaati hain.

Wo dono dekhte hain – ek honeymoon trip northeast India ka package voucher.

Arjun ke haath kaagaz thoda kanpta hai, uski aankhon me aansu ubhar aate hain. Zaheer bhi ekdum chup ho jata hai, aankhen nam ho jaati hain.

Dono ek sath un sab ki taraf dekhte hain, aankhon me shukriya aur dil me ek gehra jazba.
Arjun bas itna hi keh pata hai, halki si awaz me
Arjun
Tum sabne… humare liye itna socha…

Zaheer uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai, aur dono bhai ek sath students ki taraf dekh kar muskurate hain, aansuon ke beech bhi.

Camera sabke chehron par zoom hota hai – masoom khushi, sacchi dua aur ek naya parivaar jesa ehsaas.

Scene:

Shaadi ke shor sharabe ke baad ghar ekdum shaant hai. Camera dheere se zoom karta hai – ek taraf Arjun–Ammu ka decorated room, dusri taraf Shanu–Zaheer ka.

? Arjun & Ammu’s room
Arjun halki muskaan ke saath Ammu ko dekhta hai. Ammu sharmate hue palang ke kinare bethi hoti hai. Arjun thoda paas aakar masti bhare lehje me kehta hai

Arjun
Yeh jo tumhare gehne hain na… lagta hai inka bhi mujhse zyada haq ban gaya tumpe. Chalo, madad karu inhe utarne me?

Ammu aankhon me shararat aur sharm dono liye use dekhti hai. Arjun jaise hi haar aur bangles nikalne lagta hai, uske hothon pe halka flirt chhalk jata hai

Arjun
Waise… tumhari undergarments ki choice dekhne ka mauka kab milega?

Ammu jhat se uske kandhe pe thoda mar kar nazrein chura leti hai, uske gaalon pe laalima aa jaati hai.


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? Shanu & Zaheer’s room
Zaheer shanu ko seedhe seedhe dekh kar kehta hai

Zaheer
Tumhari body… tum… aaj to aur bhi khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Shanu uski taraf nakhre se muskurati hai aur haath se uske hoth silne ka ishara karti hai

Shanu
Bas bas… kuch nahi milega. Andar pahle se hi bahut kuch jama hai… ab 9 mahine baad aana.

Zaheer uski baat sun kar pehle hairan, phir zor se hans padta hai. Us hansi me ek comfort aur pyaar tha.


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? Cross-cutting shots:
• Arjun Ammu ke gehne nikal raha hai, Ammu usse sharma kar aankhein chura rahi hai.
• Zaheer Shanu ki outfit me help kar raha hai, Shanu usse halki si thapki de rahi hai.
• Arjun Ammu ka dupatta hata kar uski aankhon me dekhta hai – unka gehra eye contact.
• Zaheer aur Shanu ek dusre ke kareeb aakar muskurate hain – dono ke beech ek naya rishte ka ehsaas.

Camera slow zoom karta hai:
Arjun–Ammu aur Zaheer–Shanu ke chehre dhire dhire kareeb aate hain…
Room ki light dheere dheere fade out ho jaati hai.

Bas baaki reh jaata hai ek shant romantic background score… aur screen ka andhera.

Scene:

Subah ki narmi, shaadi ke agle din ka tazgi bhara mahaul.

Arjun aur Zaheer suitcases uthaye car ke paas aate hain. Ammu aur Shanu dulhanon jaisi saj-dhaj me nahi, balki simple aur elegant travel outfits me hoti hain – thodi tired, par aankhon me naye safar ki chamak.

Chaaro ek saath car me baithne lagte hain. Bahar porch me Pratap, Madhu, Azhar, Asma, Vicky aur gharwale khade hote hain, sabke chehre pe pyar aur alwida ki halki nami.

Shanu apni maa Madhu ko gale lagati hai, Ammu Asma ke kandhe se lag jaati hai. Arjun aur Zaheer dono apne pitaon Pratap aur Azhar ke pair chhoote hain. Vicky hasi mazak me unhe thoda chhedta hai – jaise chhoti behan aur dost ja rahe ho honeymoon pe aur uska dil khali ho gaya ho.

Camera dheere se move karta hai – car ka darwaza band hota hai, sab bahar se haath hila kar bye karte hain.

Phir camera low angle shot me neeche car ke silencer par focus karta hai. Engine start hota hai, silencer se dhua nikalta hai aur dheere dheere hawa me ghoom jata hai.

Car dheere se drive way se nikalti hai… sab ke chehre pe ek saath khushi aur udaasi ka rang.

Aur background me soft music chalu hota hai… car raste pe aage badh jaati hai

Ghar ka angan shaant ho jata hai, sirf shaadi ke decorations ki halki jhilmil lights ab bhi chamak rahi hoti hain.

Asma ek chhoti si thaali lekar andar aati hai, lekin uska dupatta railing me atak jata hai. Vo ruk kar sambhalti hai. Tabhi saamne se Vicky aata hai, casual t-shirt aur jeans me, ekdum relaxed mood me.

Vicky ek halki muskaan ke saath aage badh kar dupatta chhudata hai.

Vicky
Tum hamesha aisi hi ho… phas jaati ho choti choti cheezon me.

Asma thoda sa sharma kar uski taraf dekhti hai, fir nazar jhuka deti hai.

Asma
Aur tum hamesha bachaane aa jaate ho…

Dono ek pal ke liye chup ho jaate hain. Nazar milti hai, par dono samajh nahi paate ki kya kehna hai. Bas ek ajeeb sa comfort aur halka sa flutter dono ke dil me.

Asma halki muskaan ke saath andar ki taraf chal padti hai, aur Vicky uske peeche dekhte rehta hai. Camera Vicky ke chehre par zoom karta hai – jahan pehli baar ek nayi kahani ka shuru hone ka ehsaas dikhai deta hai.

Background me shaadi ki khatam hoti roshni aur soft music… aur scene fade out

Asma darwaza khol kar andar aati hai. Uske chehre pe muskaan hai, aankhon mein ek nayi chamak. Uska dil ab bohot arse baad halka aur khush tha. Shayad woh khud bhi samajh rahi thi ke uski zindagi me nayi shuruat ho rahi hai… aur shayad woh kisike liye attract bhi ho rahi thi.


Uski nazar padti hai drawing room ke TV pe jo on tha. Screen pe ek news channel chal raha tha, volume medium, lekin koi dekh nahi raha tha. Shayad kisi ne chala kar chhod diya tha aur phir kaam mein lag gaya tha.

Asma halki si muskaan ke saath aage badhti hai. Woh TV ke saamne sofa tak aati hai, remote uthati hai aur button press karne hi wali hoti hai ki peeche se koi usse bulata hai.

Aasmaa…

Asma ruk jaati hai. Woh remote wapas sofa par rakh deti hai aur awaaz ki taraf palat kar chal padti hai.

Camera uske peeche se chal kar TV par zoom karta hai.

Screen par ek fast-track news anchor headlines machine-gun ki tarah padh rahi hoti hai.

Reporter (voice fast, background dramatic beat)
Aaj session court me ek kaidi ki peshi hone se pehle hi… woh court ke bahar se bhag gaya. security officer ka kehna hai ki ye aadmi ek psycho criminal ho sakta hai. Talaash jaari hai…

Camera TV ke screen pe freeze hota hai. Background mein news anchor ki awaaz aur tez ho jaati hai, jaise darawni gunj ho.

Reporter (fast voice)

…bhagte waqt CCTV me ek shakhs ka dhundhla footage saamne aaya hai…

CUT TO – TV SCREEN
Ek grainy, low-quality CCTV footage dikhayi deta hai. Baarish mein bheega hua ek aadmi security officer barricade ke beech se nikal kar bhaag raha hai. Uska chehra poori tarah clear nahi hai, lekin uski aankhon ka junoon aur chalte hue andaaz pehchana ja sakta hai.

Camera ek pal ke liye footage pe zoom karta hai. Screen blur ke beech bhi uski shakal jaise..... 

Reporter
security officer ka kehna hai ki yeh aadmi bohot khatarnak hai, aur ek psycho criminal ke roop me jaana jaata hai…

TV mute hone se pehle ek last line sunayi deti hai:
Reporter
…agar aapne ise kahin dekha ho, turant security officer ko suchit karein.

CUT – DRAWING ROOM
Remote ab bhi sofa pe padha hai. Screen ab bhi chal rahi hai. Lekin ghar ke andar shanti bani hui hai, kisi ko khabar bhi nahi ke TV kya khatarnaak raaz chilla raha hai.

CAMERA MOVEMENT s
Slow motion me sab ke last frame aate huye...
Slowly drawing room se zoom out hota hai, ghar ke andar ke shaant nazare dikhata hai — log apne kaam mein lage hue, Asma hansi ke saath kitchen ki taraf ja rahi hai, Azhar apni dawai le raha hai, madhu or pratap apne ghar me apne kamre ki taraf ja rahe hai, vicky chhat par jata hai patang udane, airport par scene me arjun ammu zaheer or shanu ek dusre ke sath Hansi mazak kar rahe hain sab normal lag raha hai, sabki zindagi normal chal rahi hai

Aur phir ek last shot…
Ek shakhs ke hath me chhuri hai....

FADE OUT.

[Greenwood]

[Manju roy]

Chalo yak bat to Manle shanu ka nikah karwa ke ab khani khatam ya sharu ab dekhna hai tum writer bhut sahi ho or khani likho kuch yese full romance or sex se bharat with interfath xxx

[KK001]

what a story , I rather say a journey  and  what a journey it was . we go through ups and down , emotions , rage . thanks greenwood for a great story.

[Anum sheikh]

Finally mandop Saj he gea. Nice end but hope season tow more excitement se bhra hoga

[Manju roy]

Writer ab ye bata hi do ki next story kab aayega

[Greenwood]

Finally mandop Saj he gea. Nice end but hope season tow more excitement se bhra hoga

Bilkul
I also hope ki ek or blockbuster story ka idea aa jaye
This wouldn't be possible without you,
Thank you for you support
Special mention for special reader  yr):

[Greenwood]

what a story , I rather say a journey  and  what a journey it was . we go through ups and down , emotions , rage . thanks greenwood for a great story.

Only you are the real critics of this saga
Thank you bro for your feedback...

I hope to come soon again

[Greenwood]

Writer ab ye bata hi do ki next story kab aayega

Bahut bahut shukriya apka
Apki jo bhi demands is baar puri nahi huyi
Ummeed karta hu ki agle story me Puri ho...
Jo bhi shikayat rahi uske liye maafi